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From Dream Adventures / Kirby Adventure Crossover
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 1
Ulti's Notes:
Out of all chapters in this Kirby Adventure reupload, this is one of three that absolutely needs the most context provided for annotations. This is From Dream Adventures, a crossover segment between my own comic Kirby Adventure, and its inspiration from back on Smack Jeeves, Kirby's Dream Adventure by BattleStarX.
I don't remember who approached who (probably me approaching him, tbh) but back in 2011, BattleStarX and I got into talks and wound up agreeing to doing a crossover between our two Kirby comics. The basic idea would be that his own group of Kirbies would get into trouble, and my Adventure Squad would cross dimensions into his comic to help them out. Then, some of his other Kirbies would wind up in my comic to compensate, until at the end of the chapter, our characters would re-swap and return to their original comics/worlds.
This approach made it so that both comics would actively update daily, providing a bit of back-and-forth adventuring that fans of both comics could enjoy. And... well, there's the catch: it kinda required you to be fans of both comics to actually enjoy.
This becomes even more of an issue for this particular reupload, because you guys reading this now can at least have the context for my own comic. Kirby's Dream Adventure, meanwhile, has been nowhere to be seen, so I'm going to have to spend a lot of time providing context for that comic in order to explain how things work and get y'all up to speed.
Luckily, I do have all of the pages OF said crossover, so there won't be any context missing from the crossovers themselves. Case in point? This page right here is BSX's work, not mine. That's a genuine Kirby's Dream Adventure page right there.
SO! The way this is all gonna work is that KDA and KA pages will alternate here, to simulate the vibe of having both comics update originally. On BSX's pages, my commentary here will still be under Ulti's Notes, but the Original Author Comment will belong to BattleStarX himself, and the SJ comments will be whatever I can dig up off of the Internet Archive for his original site pages.
Since this is getting a bit long, I'll provide some more context for KDA itself in the next KDA page.
I don't remember who approached who (probably me approaching him, tbh) but back in 2011, BattleStarX and I got into talks and wound up agreeing to doing a crossover between our two Kirby comics. The basic idea would be that his own group of Kirbies would get into trouble, and my Adventure Squad would cross dimensions into his comic to help them out. Then, some of his other Kirbies would wind up in my comic to compensate, until at the end of the chapter, our characters would re-swap and return to their original comics/worlds.
This approach made it so that both comics would actively update daily, providing a bit of back-and-forth adventuring that fans of both comics could enjoy. And... well, there's the catch: it kinda required you to be fans of both comics to actually enjoy.
This becomes even more of an issue for this particular reupload, because you guys reading this now can at least have the context for my own comic. Kirby's Dream Adventure, meanwhile, has been nowhere to be seen, so I'm going to have to spend a lot of time providing context for that comic in order to explain how things work and get y'all up to speed.
Luckily, I do have all of the pages OF said crossover, so there won't be any context missing from the crossovers themselves. Case in point? This page right here is BSX's work, not mine. That's a genuine Kirby's Dream Adventure page right there.
SO! The way this is all gonna work is that KDA and KA pages will alternate here, to simulate the vibe of having both comics update originally. On BSX's pages, my commentary here will still be under Ulti's Notes, but the Original Author Comment will belong to BattleStarX himself, and the SJ comments will be whatever I can dig up off of the Internet Archive for his original site pages.
Since this is getting a bit long, I'll provide some more context for KDA itself in the next KDA page.
Original Author's Comment:
06/30/11
We're on our way now, with the cross-over, though you don't see anyone, starting now. To get the full gist of what's happening, you will have to pop back and forth between UY's Kirby Adventure and my comic. It should last at least a month.
As I'm going to be hosting some K.A.S. characters, my comic is going to get a bit more serial than it has been. Gag-a-day is currently on hold (though there will be at least ONE exception.)
We're on our way now, with the cross-over, though you don't see anyone, starting now. To get the full gist of what's happening, you will have to pop back and forth between UY's Kirby Adventure and my comic. It should last at least a month.
As I'm going to be hosting some K.A.S. characters, my comic is going to get a bit more serial than it has been. Gag-a-day is currently on hold (though there will be at least ONE exception.)
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Dlee
06/30/11
Cool…probation…? Oh when they stormed casle dedede that one time… got beat up by the mega hammer
Ultimate Yoshi
06/30/11
This seems to have updated at an odd time. Why are we able to see it?
Also, YOU STOLE THAT SEGMENT NAME FROM ME *RAGES* *smacked*
Edit: Ooh, I see the mistake. You set this to update on JUNE 1st instead of JULY 1st. That makes everything make sense now.
BattleStarX
06/30/11
Ah well. So you got a "sneak peak." I really need to pay attention. Time for a quicky fix.
blazikendude
09/04/11
this is so awesome!i can't wait to see your newest workings!
MarioKong
10/23/11
This was the first segment I read of this comic.
castleofwarriors
11/11/11
@MarioKong: Me too!
Calebgames
01/30/16
@Ultimate Yoshi: Ulti, Calm Down
BattleStarX
08/21/19
We're starting up the remakes for the first Kirby Adventure crossover. These remakes are gonna be a bit different, pretty much just an aesthetic touch-up rather than rescripting, since the Author Union Rules do not allow me to mess with the fabric of another comic's timeline.
That said, there may be SOME changes to the dialogue, this page in particular has some good expansion to what it was, but it'll still be within the same bounds of what the originals were.
Ultizeta
08/22/19
Thank goodness for the Author Union
06/30/11
Cool…probation…? Oh when they stormed casle dedede that one time… got beat up by the mega hammer
Ultimate Yoshi
06/30/11
This seems to have updated at an odd time. Why are we able to see it?
Also, YOU STOLE THAT SEGMENT NAME FROM ME *RAGES* *smacked*
Edit: Ooh, I see the mistake. You set this to update on JUNE 1st instead of JULY 1st. That makes everything make sense now.
BattleStarX
06/30/11
Ah well. So you got a "sneak peak." I really need to pay attention. Time for a quicky fix.
blazikendude
09/04/11
this is so awesome!i can't wait to see your newest workings!
MarioKong
10/23/11
This was the first segment I read of this comic.
castleofwarriors
11/11/11
@MarioKong: Me too!
Calebgames
01/30/16
@Ultimate Yoshi: Ulti, Calm Down
BattleStarX
08/21/19
We're starting up the remakes for the first Kirby Adventure crossover. These remakes are gonna be a bit different, pretty much just an aesthetic touch-up rather than rescripting, since the Author Union Rules do not allow me to mess with the fabric of another comic's timeline.
That said, there may be SOME changes to the dialogue, this page in particular has some good expansion to what it was, but it'll still be within the same bounds of what the originals were.
Ultizeta
08/22/19
Thank goodness for the Author Union
From Dream Adventures - Part 1
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 2
Ulti's Notes:
So, what exactly IS going on here for these KDA pages, anyway? Like usual, I'll provide greater-world and character context for when it becomes necessary. For now, this group of Kirby characters is what's known as the P.S.S.S.: The Puffball Super Secret Society.
The boss there, she's olive green. The other Kirbies are her agents and subordinates, brown, orange (off-screen) and pink. What are their names? Kuxxel, Kubby, and Kublie. I don't remember the pink one's name, and based on the other three, you can probably surmise the reason why it's slipped my mind.
Yeah, this is gonna be the most awkward thing about annotating this comic. If you thought some of my old names could be tough to differentiate amongst the Kirby recolors, you didn't know how well you had it before now. Since the two main characters of Kirby's Dream Adventure were Kirby and Keeby (who we've already discussed thanks to The Beginning), every single other Kirby character in KDA also follows this similar naming convention. I'll do my best to help out any confusion via this commentary, but considering all you can really use to differentiate the characters are their names and colors, well, that's gonna lead to some difficulties for sure, especially if you're colorblind.
Fun fact: BattleStarX himself is also colorblind, so search me for why he himself went down this naming route with his Kirbies, lol
So anyways, the boss is grumpy, the brown gal and the orange gal are partners where orange is chaotic and brown tries to reign her in, and pink is a weak push-over. They're the majority of members of the PSSS. What's the PSSS? Honestly, I don't recall the exact specifics, I just think they're a bit of a spy/info-gathering organization.
One other important thing to mention, before it becomes irrelevant: You may have noticed these KDA pages have original and revised versions themselves, like some of my own pages have. BSX didn't used to be as good with Photoshop when he started out, but after a few years, got much better at his visuals, so similar to me, he started going back through his old pages to remake them and touch them up. It just so happened that a few pages into this crossover was as far as he got before his remake project went on hold, and then Smack Jeeves exploded and the rest of the chapter never got updated. So instead of defaulting to revised 2019 pages for these KDA pages, the default is the original 2011 versions to retain consistency with the rest of the KDA pages here.
The boss there, she's olive green. The other Kirbies are her agents and subordinates, brown, orange (off-screen) and pink. What are their names? Kuxxel, Kubby, and Kublie. I don't remember the pink one's name, and based on the other three, you can probably surmise the reason why it's slipped my mind.
Yeah, this is gonna be the most awkward thing about annotating this comic. If you thought some of my old names could be tough to differentiate amongst the Kirby recolors, you didn't know how well you had it before now. Since the two main characters of Kirby's Dream Adventure were Kirby and Keeby (who we've already discussed thanks to The Beginning), every single other Kirby character in KDA also follows this similar naming convention. I'll do my best to help out any confusion via this commentary, but considering all you can really use to differentiate the characters are their names and colors, well, that's gonna lead to some difficulties for sure, especially if you're colorblind.
Fun fact: BattleStarX himself is also colorblind, so search me for why he himself went down this naming route with his Kirbies, lol
So anyways, the boss is grumpy, the brown gal and the orange gal are partners where orange is chaotic and brown tries to reign her in, and pink is a weak push-over. They're the majority of members of the PSSS. What's the PSSS? Honestly, I don't recall the exact specifics, I just think they're a bit of a spy/info-gathering organization.
One other important thing to mention, before it becomes irrelevant: You may have noticed these KDA pages have original and revised versions themselves, like some of my own pages have. BSX didn't used to be as good with Photoshop when he started out, but after a few years, got much better at his visuals, so similar to me, he started going back through his old pages to remake them and touch them up. It just so happened that a few pages into this crossover was as far as he got before his remake project went on hold, and then Smack Jeeves exploded and the rest of the chapter never got updated. So instead of defaulting to revised 2019 pages for these KDA pages, the default is the original 2011 versions to retain consistency with the rest of the KDA pages here.
Original Author's Comment:
07/01/11
Just preempting some questions as to why the P.S.S.S. would need help. Don't worry, we'll get to the actual melding shortly.
Just preempting some questions as to why the P.S.S.S. would need help. Don't worry, we'll get to the actual melding shortly.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Dlee
07/01/11
How did that happen?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/02/11
Now that's unlucky.
foxpuff
07/02/11
Looks like someone was thrown.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/02/11
Although that must've REALLY hurt, but it still ended up being really funny. ^_^
guestuser
05/30/12
Not the best graphics.
07/01/11
How did that happen?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/02/11
Now that's unlucky.
foxpuff
07/02/11
Looks like someone was thrown.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/02/11
Although that must've REALLY hurt, but it still ended up being really funny. ^_^
guestuser
05/30/12
Not the best graphics.
From Dream Adventures - Part 2
Ulti's Notes:
The whole idea of our two comics taking place in separate dimensions was probably the best way to avoid complications with handling the crossover. I didn't want to do a crossover segment that was just blatantly non-canon, I wanted it to have some semblance of importance and relevancy. It tends to grind my gears when things do crossovers and they're just completely pointless and don't impact anything.
My general stance on crossovers is a bit iffy nowadays, but the main jist of doing one tends to be fanservice in a few key ways. The biggest thing with any crossover like this is just getting to see characters interact with each other, and it was up to us in order to figure out an efficient way of doing that, that didn't also step on our own toes when doing so. Since both of our comics took place in our own versions of Dream Land with an entirely different set of Kirby recolors to work with, it didn't feel right to try to retcon any sort of way for these two Kirby worlds to coexist within the same exact world, you know? Splitting them up into different dimensions was just simply the easiest way to handle the discrepancies between how we handled our Kirby worlds.
My general stance on crossovers is a bit iffy nowadays, but the main jist of doing one tends to be fanservice in a few key ways. The biggest thing with any crossover like this is just getting to see characters interact with each other, and it was up to us in order to figure out an efficient way of doing that, that didn't also step on our own toes when doing so. Since both of our comics took place in our own versions of Dream Land with an entirely different set of Kirby recolors to work with, it didn't feel right to try to retcon any sort of way for these two Kirby worlds to coexist within the same exact world, you know? Splitting them up into different dimensions was just simply the easiest way to handle the discrepancies between how we handled our Kirby worlds.
Original Author's Comment:
07/02/11
Well, we've introduced Satomi (finally!), Story Teller, Astralle's character she got for winning that art contest. I'm six months late, sue me.
We also got Ryka out of play. She's not participating very much in this crossover.
I say 'oh joy' a lot. So I made Kirby say it.
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure! To get the full story, head to Kirby's Dream Adventure's main page, or just start at the crossover pages: http://kirbyda.smackjeeves.com/ - Main Page
http://kirbyda.smackjeeves.com/comics/1233414/meet-the-k-a-s-pt-1/ - Crossover Start
Edit: Now that Satomi finally gets some speaking lines, she's been placed on the Characters page. Also, the concept drawing Astralle gave me for Satomi's design is now on the Fan Art page, with lack of a better place to put it. I had to edit out some text, though.
Well, we've introduced Satomi (finally!), Story Teller, Astralle's character she got for winning that art contest. I'm six months late, sue me.
We also got Ryka out of play. She's not participating very much in this crossover.
I say 'oh joy' a lot. So I made Kirby say it.
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure! To get the full story, head to Kirby's Dream Adventure's main page, or just start at the crossover pages: http://kirbyda.smackjeeves.com/ - Main Page
http://kirbyda.smackjeeves.com/comics/1233414/meet-the-k-a-s-pt-1/ - Crossover Start
Edit: Now that Satomi finally gets some speaking lines, she's been placed on the Characters page. Also, the concept drawing Astralle gave me for Satomi's design is now on the Fan Art page, with lack of a better place to put it. I had to edit out some text, though.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
1ce_k1d
07/02/11
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
guestuser
07/02/11
Oh boy! I love alternate dimensions!
Dlee
07/03/11
Dose keeby have a grave and i saw that blue kirby in the beginning…
DarkMario1000
07/03/11
you don't rip a dimensional time hole in space.
BattleStarX
07/03/11
Don't worry, if all else fails, I'll bring the Blue Box back.
guestuser
07/03/11
UY, weren't u said, the winner of art contest will get their kirby in division A?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/03/11
What? Did you READ that author comment? I specifically said, and I quote, "Whoever I feel has the best entry gets to have their own character be a member of the Kirby Adventure Squad!" Nowhere did I specifically say Division A. It's a guest appearance, it was never going to be a main character, and no future ones are ever gonna be main characters, only supporting but reoccuring and possibly-getting-their-own-segments-focused-around-them characters.
DarkMario1000
07/03/11
Alright, Yoshi-down dude. -(xP)
guestuser
07/03/11
whoops fool me XD
well im sorry. I got a little accident and i got amnesia, just a little. I forget lots of things until now (include that, maybe). and if I don't post anything at ur comic maybe now I don't believe that my name is Daryl... sorry again.
guestuser
07/05/11
does Keeby like the undead or is still alive but evil IN THIS OTHER DIMENSION SIMILAR TO DREAMLAND!?!?!?!
Story teller, Astralle
07/12/11
HURRAY!!!!!!!! you did an awesome job with Satomi!!! yay!! X3
mastersmasher
07/12/11
I love keeby, he only apeared in like 1 or 2 games but I like him. :(
guestuser
08/05/13
mastersmasher:1 game for Keeby.
Ultizeta
07/15/17
All that changed here was fixing Satomi's text in the first panel to not have a white border.
07/02/11
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
guestuser
07/02/11
Oh boy! I love alternate dimensions!
Dlee
07/03/11
Dose keeby have a grave and i saw that blue kirby in the beginning…
DarkMario1000
07/03/11
you don't rip a dimensional time hole in space.
BattleStarX
07/03/11
Don't worry, if all else fails, I'll bring the Blue Box back.
guestuser
07/03/11
UY, weren't u said, the winner of art contest will get their kirby in division A?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/03/11
What? Did you READ that author comment? I specifically said, and I quote, "Whoever I feel has the best entry gets to have their own character be a member of the Kirby Adventure Squad!" Nowhere did I specifically say Division A. It's a guest appearance, it was never going to be a main character, and no future ones are ever gonna be main characters, only supporting but reoccuring and possibly-getting-their-own-segments-focused-around-them characters.
DarkMario1000
07/03/11
Alright, Yoshi-down dude. -(xP)
guestuser
07/03/11
whoops fool me XD
well im sorry. I got a little accident and i got amnesia, just a little. I forget lots of things until now (include that, maybe). and if I don't post anything at ur comic maybe now I don't believe that my name is Daryl... sorry again.
guestuser
07/05/11
does Keeby like the undead or is still alive but evil IN THIS OTHER DIMENSION SIMILAR TO DREAMLAND!?!?!?!
Story teller, Astralle
07/12/11
HURRAY!!!!!!!! you did an awesome job with Satomi!!! yay!! X3
mastersmasher
07/12/11
I love keeby, he only apeared in like 1 or 2 games but I like him. :(
guestuser
08/05/13
mastersmasher:1 game for Keeby.
Ultizeta
07/15/17
All that changed here was fixing Satomi's text in the first panel to not have a white border.
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
What's worth noting is that Kirby's Dream Adventure was a much sillier, gag-a-day type of comic. BSX doing a bit more of an involved story, even ever-so-slightly, was a step up from his usual content. Or, I guess, step aside? I don't want to imply that there's an inherent lower quality to a simpler comedy style or anything.
Original Author's Comment:
07/02/11
The Boss's "Kirby Sense" is tingling. Makes you wonder how many characters have that "Kirby Sense," now doesn't it?
Oh, a little treat for you all. During the crossover, you'll finally learn The Boss's name. Isn't that so nice of me?
By the way, I LOVE how grumpy looking she turned out in the first panel.
The Boss's "Kirby Sense" is tingling. Makes you wonder how many characters have that "Kirby Sense," now doesn't it?
Oh, a little treat for you all. During the crossover, you'll finally learn The Boss's name. Isn't that so nice of me?
By the way, I LOVE how grumpy looking she turned out in the first panel.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/02/11
maybe since she's so grumpy, her name with be Kurabby?
...no?
Dlee
07/02/11
Name learning kirby sencing crossover grumpyness fun time :)
guestuser
07/03/11
Crossovers aren't canon, so why bother?
Andromeda Lazuli
07/03/11
@ Guest: Okay, that was rude to say about the comic. They worked hard on this so it's best to give the artist respect! >w<
Finding out the name to the boss will be interesting. ^_^
Poyo
07/03/11
That Red Kirby who was wary of Kirby? She has a Kirby sense?
BattleStarX
07/03/11
While crossovers usually AREN'T canon, I have this to ask. Since when did I have a plot?
DarkNut255
07/03/11
Is it Kuuuu?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/03/11
@BattleStarX:
Since you started working on this crossover with me?
guestuser
07/03/11
Let me explain:
Crossovers aren't canon because it's a form of fanservice. Which means that if we will know the name of this Kirby soon, the author will always find a way to retcon it back before.
Long story short: Once the crossover is over, the name of the Boss will change back into being nameless.
nyan cat
09/10/11
@DarkNut255:O...w....w...i...e
07/02/11
maybe since she's so grumpy, her name with be Kurabby?
...no?
Dlee
07/02/11
Name learning kirby sencing crossover grumpyness fun time :)
guestuser
07/03/11
Crossovers aren't canon, so why bother?
Andromeda Lazuli
07/03/11
@ Guest: Okay, that was rude to say about the comic. They worked hard on this so it's best to give the artist respect! >w<
Finding out the name to the boss will be interesting. ^_^
Poyo
07/03/11
That Red Kirby who was wary of Kirby? She has a Kirby sense?
BattleStarX
07/03/11
While crossovers usually AREN'T canon, I have this to ask. Since when did I have a plot?
DarkNut255
07/03/11
Is it Kuuuu?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/03/11
@BattleStarX:
Since you started working on this crossover with me?
guestuser
07/03/11
Let me explain:
Crossovers aren't canon because it's a form of fanservice. Which means that if we will know the name of this Kirby soon, the author will always find a way to retcon it back before.
Long story short: Once the crossover is over, the name of the Boss will change back into being nameless.
nyan cat
09/10/11
@DarkNut255:O...w....w...i...e
From Dream Adventures - Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
Due to a lack of reasonability in terms of possible "how to get characters from one comic to another" methods in BSX's comic, I laid the footwork on my own end. I reasoned that Shadik and Shat'l's shadow and psychic powers respectively were vague enough that I could get away with simply saying their powers combined would be able to open a portal between dimensions. It's incredibly hand-wavey, but it works well enough as a justification, I suppose.
One of the only bits of pre-planning that BSX and I had when working out the crossover was which characters we'd be sending to the other. I do believe that BSX requested Kaxo and Caiya specifically, but other than that, it was fair game for both of us.
And yes, you read that right about how much planning there was for this crossover. I'll get into it more in a bit, but suffice it to say, there wasn't a ton of pre-communication between us when writing this, on either end.
One of the only bits of pre-planning that BSX and I had when working out the crossover was which characters we'd be sending to the other. I do believe that BSX requested Kaxo and Caiya specifically, but other than that, it was fair game for both of us.
And yes, you read that right about how much planning there was for this crossover. I'll get into it more in a bit, but suffice it to say, there wasn't a ton of pre-communication between us when writing this, on either end.
Original Author's Comment:
07/03/11
So now we're all set, and the merging has begun!
So now we're all set, and the merging has begun!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
foxpuff
07/03/11
Why do I have a feeling something very funny will happen next comic?
guestuser
07/03/11
Caiya, who's random enough, and Kaxo and Vezo?
...This is a recipe for disaster/entertainment.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/03/11
PORTAL!!! XD
contradiction123
07/03/11
What might happen is that Kirby meets the other Keeby, get's all happy , then keeby starts screaming "hide the food! It's kirby!" or something like that, and then kirby takes back what he said earlier about liking the other dimension. Unlikely to happen, but i thought i might post my thoughts.
EDIT: This isn't canon, right?
Raging Ghost
07/03/11
Obviously. Even if this comic have a plot.
DarkMario1000
07/04/11
At least it isn't Caiya and Raize. They're the duo for disaster. That is when Caiya is being random.
guestuser
07/04/11
So... are we going to find out Vezo's backstory?
And... is Talzo going to be in this crossover?
guestuser
07/04/11
why only caiya that do multiple fly, the other just do single fly, as what I remember in Kirby superstar ultra
Dlee
07/04/11
Crossovers! So many kirbys
07/03/11
Why do I have a feeling something very funny will happen next comic?
guestuser
07/03/11
Caiya, who's random enough, and Kaxo and Vezo?
...This is a recipe for disaster/entertainment.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/03/11
PORTAL!!! XD
contradiction123
07/03/11
What might happen is that Kirby meets the other Keeby, get's all happy , then keeby starts screaming "hide the food! It's kirby!" or something like that, and then kirby takes back what he said earlier about liking the other dimension. Unlikely to happen, but i thought i might post my thoughts.
EDIT: This isn't canon, right?
Raging Ghost
07/03/11
Obviously. Even if this comic have a plot.
DarkMario1000
07/04/11
At least it isn't Caiya and Raize. They're the duo for disaster. That is when Caiya is being random.
guestuser
07/04/11
So... are we going to find out Vezo's backstory?
And... is Talzo going to be in this crossover?
guestuser
07/04/11
why only caiya that do multiple fly, the other just do single fly, as what I remember in Kirby superstar ultra
Dlee
07/04/11
Crossovers! So many kirbys
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
This is one instance where BSX's colorblindness and visual issues come back to bite the crossover. Kirby calling Caiya 'off-colored' was a cheeky admittance of BSX's in that he was basically saying "yeah, sorry, I'm gonna have trouble getting the characters' colors to look right". It's unfortunate, but he had yet to learn all of the tools at his disposal, and I believe he was recoloring everything manually, individually, and by eye. It was a bit rough, and the results here is that character colors are rather inconsistent.
You can see that he at least got the hang of it eventually by looking at the revised comic, but those revised comics don't last very much longer, alas.
You can see that he at least got the hang of it eventually by looking at the revised comic, but those revised comics don't last very much longer, alas.
Original Author's Comment:
07/03/11
If you remember, Kirby was hit in the head during his bad day. Not that this is the same Kirby, mind. Of course, The Boss doesn't know that... yet.
A couple notices, make sure you head over to UY's Kirby's Adventure to keep track of what's going on. While this may be a "cross-over" segment, we're still pretty much doing our own thing.
Notice two, Kirby's Dream Land, the GameBoy game that started it all, is now for download on the 3DS's Shop. I'm assuming that you DSI users may have access to it as well, since it's a Virtual Console game.
If you remember, Kirby was hit in the head during his bad day. Not that this is the same Kirby, mind. Of course, The Boss doesn't know that... yet.
A couple notices, make sure you head over to UY's Kirby's Adventure to keep track of what's going on. While this may be a "cross-over" segment, we're still pretty much doing our own thing.
Notice two, Kirby's Dream Land, the GameBoy game that started it all, is now for download on the 3DS's Shop. I'm assuming that you DSI users may have access to it as well, since it's a Virtual Console game.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Dlee
07/03/11
Cool
And the crossovering begin ps. Only 3DS'S have vurtual concle.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/03/11
I think Vezo's currently more off-colored than Caiya. Lol.
Aside from the 'rawr', I think you've got Kaxo down perfectly. Caiya too seems good so far. Let's see how the rest of this plays out! :D
Andromeda Lazuli
07/04/11
And so it begins! XD
Gigi19972010
07/04/11
This is starting to get good. XD
link1566
07/04/11
Yay!Kirby adventure squad meets kirby's dream adventure!
SecretAgent000
07/04/11
Now, for the TRUE beginnings of (95%) PURE MADNESS!
foxpuff
07/04/11
Let the craziness begin!
BlackHeart the Unbelievable
07/04/11
Him, I wonder how Kaxo shows "ow!"
Poyo
07/04/11
Alright... Who's going to get mixed up with who? XD
epicness
07/05/11
this is why i love crossovers,they dont know who they are or what they're like
Pwahhh
08/02/13
YEAH! MY TWO FAVORITE KIRBY SERIES COMBINE!
07/03/11
Cool
And the crossovering begin ps. Only 3DS'S have vurtual concle.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/03/11
I think Vezo's currently more off-colored than Caiya. Lol.
Aside from the 'rawr', I think you've got Kaxo down perfectly. Caiya too seems good so far. Let's see how the rest of this plays out! :D
Andromeda Lazuli
07/04/11
And so it begins! XD
Gigi19972010
07/04/11
This is starting to get good. XD
link1566
07/04/11
Yay!Kirby adventure squad meets kirby's dream adventure!
SecretAgent000
07/04/11
Now, for the TRUE beginnings of (95%) PURE MADNESS!
foxpuff
07/04/11
Let the craziness begin!
BlackHeart the Unbelievable
07/04/11
Him, I wonder how Kaxo shows "ow!"
Poyo
07/04/11
Alright... Who's going to get mixed up with who? XD
epicness
07/05/11
this is why i love crossovers,they dont know who they are or what they're like
Pwahhh
08/02/13
YEAH! MY TWO FAVORITE KIRBY SERIES COMBINE!
From Dream Adventures - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
Updates were still daily, and BSX's comic was constrained to 4 panels at a time. Thus, there wasn't a ton I could do while waiting for BSX's characters to come through the portal on his end. It just so happened to lineup with a minor milestone number though, so, I decided that since this was already a bit meta of a segment, it wouldn't be TOO remiss to throw my author sona in for a pair of panels.
Original Author's Comment:
07/02/11
Why are you looking at me like that? :D
People have been saying that this is not canon towards either Kirby's Dream Adventure or Kirby Adventure. While I can't speak for KDA, I have to say: Why would you ever think that? This isn't one of those cartoons, where, say, the whole world could explode, then next episode everything's fine. This comic has continuity, and so does KDA. This crossover segment is being written in a way that it CAN be perfectly canon with the whole series. End of discussion.
Why are you looking at me like that? :D
People have been saying that this is not canon towards either Kirby's Dream Adventure or Kirby Adventure. While I can't speak for KDA, I have to say: Why would you ever think that? This isn't one of those cartoons, where, say, the whole world could explode, then next episode everything's fine. This comic has continuity, and so does KDA. This crossover segment is being written in a way that it CAN be perfectly canon with the whole series. End of discussion.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
foxpuff
07/04/11
Wow, that came from nowhere.
Gigi19972010
07/04/11
I really don't understand why some people thought this wouldn't be canon.
And for me this didn't come from nowhere. :P
guestuser
07/04/11
XD That last panel was awesome.
DarkMario1000
07/04/11
Breaking the fourth wall, eh? Mr. UY, you're evil! =D
guestuser
07/04/11
Usually, crossovers are not canon. Take, for example, the team-ups between Power Rangers teams that used to be pretty common. I suspect that the only one that is actually canon is the first one that was ever done, the Lost Galaxy and In Space team-up, "To The Tenth Power," and its follow-up, "The Power of Pink." The others are harder to say that they are canon, since they don't actually affect the status quo of the current series. Heck, "The Power of Pink" actually KILLED OFF one of the Rangers! She got better at the end of the series, but... yeah...
...Does anyone here have any idea what I'm talking about?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/04/11
Nope.
guestuser
07/04/11
I just noticed something!
It's the Fourth of July, and it's the fourth comic of this chapter/mini-series/thing.
guestuser
07/04/11
I just noticed that my character isn't in the minor characters/cameos section of your character page...
MentalKnight64
07/04/11
Poyo it's the 4th comic of the 7th part of the series.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/04/11
The reason for that is I don't have any Biospark models ready, so I'm going to have to make one for your cameo. Same thing for the Plasma Wisps, Izzy and Jazzy. They're going to be more difficult to make drawings for, so I held off on making them for now. Don't worry, they're coming. I haven't forgotten the first living bowling ball ever. :P
Dlee
07/04/11
Cool
Raging Ghost
07/04/11
UY: Why would you ever think that?
Simple. Crossovers aren't canon because it's a form of fanservice.
BattleStarX
07/05/11
Plot? What's a plot? Can I eat it?
Seriously, though, remember all those ol' Super Hero comics that had World A's heroes mixing up with World B's, and they always talked about it later? This is along those lines. Same multi-verse, just two different selections of it.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/05/11
Fanservice? If you put it that way, the whole COMIC is a fanservice.
Like I said in The Beginning... when Keeby died, I don't make this comic for the fans, I make it because I want to. And I wanted to do this crossover, not because it would be entertaining to the fans (well, not JUST because), but because I thought it would be fun for me and BattleStarX to do.
Some crossovers may not be canon, mostly because the universe they take place in doesn't really follow laws of continuity either. You can't just assume every single crossover in the history of forever is fanservice.
guestuser
07/05/11
Congrats on 150 comics. next time try not to scare the feet off of anyone. C:
Andromeda Lazuli
07/05/11
OH GOD! CAN'T STOP LAUGHING AT THAT!!! XD
guestuser
07/05/11
Ultimate Yoshi
Yes I can, actually.
Doesn't make me right, but I can.
guestuser
09/13/11
Relly that green kirby relly... I cant remember their names.
Knightkirby
12/05/12
LOL
07/04/11
Wow, that came from nowhere.
Gigi19972010
07/04/11
I really don't understand why some people thought this wouldn't be canon.
And for me this didn't come from nowhere. :P
guestuser
07/04/11
XD That last panel was awesome.
DarkMario1000
07/04/11
Breaking the fourth wall, eh? Mr. UY, you're evil! =D
guestuser
07/04/11
Usually, crossovers are not canon. Take, for example, the team-ups between Power Rangers teams that used to be pretty common. I suspect that the only one that is actually canon is the first one that was ever done, the Lost Galaxy and In Space team-up, "To The Tenth Power," and its follow-up, "The Power of Pink." The others are harder to say that they are canon, since they don't actually affect the status quo of the current series. Heck, "The Power of Pink" actually KILLED OFF one of the Rangers! She got better at the end of the series, but... yeah...
...Does anyone here have any idea what I'm talking about?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/04/11
Nope.
guestuser
07/04/11
I just noticed something!
It's the Fourth of July, and it's the fourth comic of this chapter/mini-series/thing.
guestuser
07/04/11
I just noticed that my character isn't in the minor characters/cameos section of your character page...
MentalKnight64
07/04/11
Poyo it's the 4th comic of the 7th part of the series.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/04/11
The reason for that is I don't have any Biospark models ready, so I'm going to have to make one for your cameo. Same thing for the Plasma Wisps, Izzy and Jazzy. They're going to be more difficult to make drawings for, so I held off on making them for now. Don't worry, they're coming. I haven't forgotten the first living bowling ball ever. :P
Dlee
07/04/11
Cool
Raging Ghost
07/04/11
UY: Why would you ever think that?
Simple. Crossovers aren't canon because it's a form of fanservice.
BattleStarX
07/05/11
Plot? What's a plot? Can I eat it?
Seriously, though, remember all those ol' Super Hero comics that had World A's heroes mixing up with World B's, and they always talked about it later? This is along those lines. Same multi-verse, just two different selections of it.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/05/11
Fanservice? If you put it that way, the whole COMIC is a fanservice.
Like I said in The Beginning... when Keeby died, I don't make this comic for the fans, I make it because I want to. And I wanted to do this crossover, not because it would be entertaining to the fans (well, not JUST because), but because I thought it would be fun for me and BattleStarX to do.
Some crossovers may not be canon, mostly because the universe they take place in doesn't really follow laws of continuity either. You can't just assume every single crossover in the history of forever is fanservice.
guestuser
07/05/11
Congrats on 150 comics. next time try not to scare the feet off of anyone. C:
Andromeda Lazuli
07/05/11
OH GOD! CAN'T STOP LAUGHING AT THAT!!! XD
guestuser
07/05/11
Ultimate Yoshi
Yes I can, actually.
Doesn't make me right, but I can.
guestuser
09/13/11
Relly that green kirby relly... I cant remember their names.
Knightkirby
12/05/12
LOL
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 5
Ulti's Notes:
And thus, this is how BSX got some of his own cast into my comic: by chasing a Tomato-hungry Kirby. I'll get into the specifics of all of BSX's characters as they come up in future pages of mine, but for now, here's the basic jist. The group of characters who jump into the portal here are members of Keeby's Gang, a small group of friends who just kinda hang out together. It's led by Keeby, who is not Kirby's friend in Kirby's Dream Adventure (not that the KDA Kirby would agree with that, though).
Kirby's favorite food in the games is the tomato. Not only do regular tomatoes heal the most out of typical food items, but there exists a special item known as the Maxim Tomato (a giant version of which is seen here) that fully heals the player. In BSX's comic, Kirby's love for tomatoes rivals that of Caiya's love of donuts.
Kirby's favorite food in the games is the tomato. Not only do regular tomatoes heal the most out of typical food items, but there exists a special item known as the Maxim Tomato (a giant version of which is seen here) that fully heals the player. In BSX's comic, Kirby's love for tomatoes rivals that of Caiya's love of donuts.
Original Author's Comment:
07/04/11
And there goes Kaaby, Kibby, Kooby, Korby, Karby and Klooshy chasing after Kirby who's got a REALLY huge tomato. Don't worry, they'll be back, at the end of the cross-over.
Wait, why didn't Keeby follow suit? I have a use for Keeby, so I'm keeping him.
An interesting tid-bit, there's twelve kirbies in that final frame. What a crowd.
And there goes Kaaby, Kibby, Kooby, Korby, Karby and Klooshy chasing after Kirby who's got a REALLY huge tomato. Don't worry, they'll be back, at the end of the cross-over.
Wait, why didn't Keeby follow suit? I have a use for Keeby, so I'm keeping him.
An interesting tid-bit, there's twelve kirbies in that final frame. What a crowd.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Dlee
07/04/11
Yay! Chase sene!
locoroco1
07/04/11
I can just tell this is going to get confusing.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/05/11
Oh, NOW you've got no choice BUT to believe him! ^_^ Sucks to be you!!! XD
SecretAgent000
07/05/11
@locoroco1
...it isn't there already?
Poyo
07/05/11
AGH SO MANY KIRBIES!
Ultimate Yoshi
07/05/11
So... Klooshy's coming too? Wasn't expecting him, but I can roll with that.
foxpuff
07/05/11
Yay, many Kirbys!
BattleStarX
07/05/11
Yeah, sorry 'bout that. He's kinda stuck going wherever Kooby goes. Problem with bein' a trainee and all.
Gigi19972010
07/05/11
Now it's getting REALLY good. XD
epicness
07/05/11
this is why i love crossovers,they dont know who they are or what they're like
Erygirl
07/08/11
Isn't the other kirby saying "poyo" has the foot or feet cropped off?
TheTC
10/25/13
Is that why they call it a crossover?
I recongize Caiya from Kirby Adventure Squad... this is truly a crossover.
Guest
07/03/14
Vazo color is like Keeby color in Kirby Adventure
07/04/11
Yay! Chase sene!
locoroco1
07/04/11
I can just tell this is going to get confusing.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/05/11
Oh, NOW you've got no choice BUT to believe him! ^_^ Sucks to be you!!! XD
SecretAgent000
07/05/11
@locoroco1
...it isn't there already?
Poyo
07/05/11
AGH SO MANY KIRBIES!
Ultimate Yoshi
07/05/11
So... Klooshy's coming too? Wasn't expecting him, but I can roll with that.
foxpuff
07/05/11
Yay, many Kirbys!
BattleStarX
07/05/11
Yeah, sorry 'bout that. He's kinda stuck going wherever Kooby goes. Problem with bein' a trainee and all.
Gigi19972010
07/05/11
Now it's getting REALLY good. XD
epicness
07/05/11
this is why i love crossovers,they dont know who they are or what they're like
Erygirl
07/08/11
Isn't the other kirby saying "poyo" has the foot or feet cropped off?
TheTC
10/25/13
Is that why they call it a crossover?
I recongize Caiya from Kirby Adventure Squad... this is truly a crossover.
Guest
07/03/14
Vazo color is like Keeby color in Kirby Adventure
From Dream Adventures - Part 5
Ulti's Notes:
So, here's the KDA cast that I was working with, and hoo boy, get a load of those names, eh? Again, I'll do my best to help mitigate the damage and confusion via these commentaries.
Nearly every page of this crossover on my end has a remade version of it. The main reason for which was recoloring the characters. Originally in 2011, I utilized the eyedropper tool to pull colors directly from the most-recent KDA pages, and made sprite sheets for the characters I'd be using. These were taken from BSX's early pages, though, ones where I already said he had had troubles with even his own character color consistencies due to manually and individually recoloring all of the time.
This meant that, eventually BSX finally got around to fixing up his comic creation methodologies and got himself consistent visuals and colorations later in the years, suddenly now my own comics were inconsistent with his visuals.
Since the expectation at the time was that BSX would finish his updates (and, y'know, that Smack Jeeves wasn't gonna explode), I went back to my comics with the assumption that his would be updated as well, and we'd both have his modern-day colors for his characters. This didn't turn out to be the case, since his V2 pages stopped a few pages ago, but all of my KA pages with his KDA characters were fixed up to match his later colors of the characters, rather than the early ones. The differences are most notable with the green and blue Kirbies of his.
Nearly every page of this crossover on my end has a remade version of it. The main reason for which was recoloring the characters. Originally in 2011, I utilized the eyedropper tool to pull colors directly from the most-recent KDA pages, and made sprite sheets for the characters I'd be using. These were taken from BSX's early pages, though, ones where I already said he had had troubles with even his own character color consistencies due to manually and individually recoloring all of the time.
This meant that, eventually BSX finally got around to fixing up his comic creation methodologies and got himself consistent visuals and colorations later in the years, suddenly now my own comics were inconsistent with his visuals.
Since the expectation at the time was that BSX would finish his updates (and, y'know, that Smack Jeeves wasn't gonna explode), I went back to my comics with the assumption that his would be updated as well, and we'd both have his modern-day colors for his characters. This didn't turn out to be the case, since his V2 pages stopped a few pages ago, but all of my KA pages with his KDA characters were fixed up to match his later colors of the characters, rather than the early ones. The differences are most notable with the green and blue Kirbies of his.
Original Author's Comment:
07/05/11
Aaaaaand now the fun begins!
Keito's not really having some good luck there.
Aaaaaand now the fun begins!
Keito's not really having some good luck there.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
TouhouShake
07/05/11
Ketio your such a yellow punching bag.XD
epicness
07/05/11
this is why i love crossovers,they dont know who they are or what they're like
BattleStarX
07/05/11
Oh... I still love the sheer size of that tomato...
Gigi19972010
07/05/11
Oh boy... XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
foxpuff
07/05/11
So...many...Kirbys...
DarkMario1000
07/05/11
I don't remember those names!! T_T
epicness
07/05/11
*brain dies from all of names*
Oh come on!thats the third time this week!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/05/11
MY TOMATO!!!
guestuser
07/05/11
Spoiler Alert:
They get back.
Striffen Cloud
07/05/11
I just want to see what happens when KAS Kirby meets KA Keeby......
guestuser
07/05/11
So.. Battle star X will be overing the Dream Adventure dimenion and you'll be covering this one? Okay.
guestuser
07/05/11
Agreed. Ah-greed.
_____________________________
In other news, thats one big tomato.
link1566
07/06/11
Hey,now that they're in the comic, can you put them in the cast?
guestuser
07/06/11
Cool new avatar! What is it? A robot?
blazikendude
09/04/11
the crossover very cool!
guestuser
02/20/14
XD!poor Kaito
Ultizeta
07/15/17
And lo, it begins. Viewing the original page, you can see just exactly how much these characters all changed colors from 2011 to 2017.
guestuser
04/26/19
Lolololol I love it ❤️ Kirby is so SILLY in this page he usuallyisnt so silly. And I feel bad for keito only a little
. I also agree with foxpuff. TOO MANY KIRBYS
07/05/11
Ketio your such a yellow punching bag.XD
epicness
07/05/11
this is why i love crossovers,they dont know who they are or what they're like
BattleStarX
07/05/11
Oh... I still love the sheer size of that tomato...
Gigi19972010
07/05/11
Oh boy... XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
foxpuff
07/05/11
So...many...Kirbys...
DarkMario1000
07/05/11
I don't remember those names!! T_T
epicness
07/05/11
*brain dies from all of names*
Oh come on!thats the third time this week!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/05/11
MY TOMATO!!!
guestuser
07/05/11
Spoiler Alert:
They get back.
Striffen Cloud
07/05/11
I just want to see what happens when KAS Kirby meets KA Keeby......
guestuser
07/05/11
So.. Battle star X will be overing the Dream Adventure dimenion and you'll be covering this one? Okay.
guestuser
07/05/11
Agreed. Ah-greed.
_____________________________
In other news, thats one big tomato.
link1566
07/06/11
Hey,now that they're in the comic, can you put them in the cast?
guestuser
07/06/11
Cool new avatar! What is it? A robot?
blazikendude
09/04/11
the crossover very cool!
guestuser
02/20/14
XD!poor Kaito
Ultizeta
07/15/17
And lo, it begins. Viewing the original page, you can see just exactly how much these characters all changed colors from 2011 to 2017.
guestuser
04/26/19
Lolololol I love it ❤️ Kirby is so SILLY in this page he usuallyisnt so silly. And I feel bad for keito only a little
. I also agree with foxpuff. TOO MANY KIRBYS
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
Keeby in KDA is a rude jerk with a veeeery subtle heart-of-gold, buried deep down. He means well, but he's super rough around the edges and very to-the-point, which is in such contrast to the happy-go-lucky characters surrounding him that he often got considered evil or mean.
He's also very golden, similar to that of Keito's color scheme. The real Keeby (or 2P Yellow Kirby) colors from the games were used for my own Keeby in The Beginning, so this more-gold palette was an invention of BSX's, even if the character's name is the same.
Similar to me, BSX used the Green Greens hut as a home base in his comic, this time for Keeby and his gang.
The characters Keeby is listing off in the first few panels are his friends who wound up in my own comic. Kuxxel is the PSSS boss currently meeting the Adventure Squad.
He's also very golden, similar to that of Keito's color scheme. The real Keeby (or 2P Yellow Kirby) colors from the games were used for my own Keeby in The Beginning, so this more-gold palette was an invention of BSX's, even if the character's name is the same.
Similar to me, BSX used the Green Greens hut as a home base in his comic, this time for Keeby and his gang.
The characters Keeby is listing off in the first few panels are his friends who wound up in my own comic. Kuxxel is the PSSS boss currently meeting the Adventure Squad.
Original Author's Comment:
07/05/11
This is more of a "transition" comic as the K.A.S. head to the P.S.S.S. Base. I don't like doing "walking comics," unless there's a good joke to be had. Why are they heading there? You know how much of a pain it is to keep making things on such an un-level surface?
This is more of a "transition" comic as the K.A.S. head to the P.S.S.S. Base. I don't like doing "walking comics," unless there's a good joke to be had. Why are they heading there? You know how much of a pain it is to keep making things on such an un-level surface?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/05/11
Kuxxel? Oooooh... mysterious!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/05/11
Who's this new kirby, named Kuxxel, that's been mentioned?
link1566
07/06/11
You REALLY need a cast section to know
pinktlrb
07/06/11
Oh... Kuxxel is the name of the boss isn't it?
Poyo
07/06/11
There is a Cast section. Click on Credits in the top right.
07/05/11
Kuxxel? Oooooh... mysterious!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/05/11
Who's this new kirby, named Kuxxel, that's been mentioned?
link1566
07/06/11
You REALLY need a cast section to know
pinktlrb
07/06/11
Oh... Kuxxel is the name of the boss isn't it?
Poyo
07/06/11
There is a Cast section. Click on Credits in the top right.
From Dream Adventures - Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
A key thing with crossovers is to try to let every character, on some level, get to do "their thing", in a sense. A moment to shine, as well as potentially interact with the characters/setting of the other end of the crossover. It depends on what type of crossover it is, really. But the point being, going forward, my plan for the crossover was to just pair characters up and just wing it, doing whatever goofy stuff would come into my mind.
On that note, Kaaby, the blue one of BSX's, is a very dedicated clean-freak, who also doesn't speak English. BSX instead had her speak "Poyoese", a language comprised of the noises Kirby would make in the Kirby anime, Kirby: Right Back At Ya. Essentially, variations of the word "poyo". If you're familiar with Final Fantasy Moogles, it's not dissimilar to their Kupo speak, except it's also similar to anime Pokémon where it's all they can say (but it doesn't stop them from understanding English).
On that note, Kaaby, the blue one of BSX's, is a very dedicated clean-freak, who also doesn't speak English. BSX instead had her speak "Poyoese", a language comprised of the noises Kirby would make in the Kirby anime, Kirby: Right Back At Ya. Essentially, variations of the word "poyo". If you're familiar with Final Fantasy Moogles, it's not dissimilar to their Kupo speak, except it's also similar to anime Pokémon where it's all they can say (but it doesn't stop them from understanding English).
Original Author's Comment:
07/06/11
Already, the madness begins!
YAY, I FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY GET TO GIVE AIKA SOME SCREEN TIME! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Already, the madness begins!
YAY, I FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY GET TO GIVE AIKA SOME SCREEN TIME! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
TouhouShake
07/06/11
Crossovers are fun especially with so many kirbes, randomness, and a hell of a a lot of confusion and trouble. XD
foxpuff
07/06/11
Looks like someone still wants to clean despite being in an unknown place.
DarkMario1000
07/06/11
And really REALLY horrible…xD
Like your previous profile pic more than this one (opinion-ized). Just exactly: What is it?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/06/11
http://megaman-sprite-expo.smackjeeves.com/comics/1156044/fan-man-sprite-sheet/
Striffen Cloud
07/06/11
This crossover had already promised to be confusing, but to take place in BOTH dimensions? FFFFFFFFFFFFFFffffffff....
guestuser
07/06/11
What's your new avatar, anyway?
EDIT: Never mind, I saw the link.
BattleStarX
07/06/11
I love Kaaby putting Klooshy on top of her just to clean the spot he was standing at. Wish I thought of that.
I can't wait 'till you get to Shat'l and Klooshy, that is gonna cause a riot.
DarkMario1000
07/07/11
Ah, Fan Man.
guestuser
07/07/11
I didn't even know that you had a Fan Man spritesheet here on SJ, I knew him from somewhere else. Can anyone guess from where I knew Fan Man from? Hint: It's a site.
Oh, and why does Fan Man have a little bit of other design? From the place I know him from he had no red spheres as elbows and his upper arm was blue, instead of green. It seems the arms of the other design weren't that good, were they?
And another thing: why are my comments always that long?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/07/11
The only other place Fan Man was placed was the Brawl in the Family forums. I made a Custom Robot Master thread. Fan Man was my eighth robot. Then I gave him a sleeker design. The first eight robots were then sprited and put on the Mega Man Sprite Expo.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/07/11
You and BattleStarX are gonna kill me with laughter! XD
guestuser
07/08/11
...Very good. But then again, you made Fan Man, so you know all about him, of course... And yes, this design is indeed better. It's too bad almost nobody looks at your, Hobbez and Captain Yoshi's Custom Robot Master threads (the three of you apart, of course). You three are the Custom Robot Master Masters (hehheh...), after all, or at least from what i've seen.
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Unless explicitly noted, from here on out the only changes made to these pages will be the same: fixing the KDA cast's colors.
07/06/11
Crossovers are fun especially with so many kirbes, randomness, and a hell of a a lot of confusion and trouble. XD
foxpuff
07/06/11
Looks like someone still wants to clean despite being in an unknown place.
DarkMario1000
07/06/11
And really REALLY horrible…xD
Like your previous profile pic more than this one (opinion-ized). Just exactly: What is it?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/06/11
http://megaman-sprite-expo.smackjeeves.com/comics/1156044/fan-man-sprite-sheet/
Striffen Cloud
07/06/11
This crossover had already promised to be confusing, but to take place in BOTH dimensions? FFFFFFFFFFFFFFffffffff....
guestuser
07/06/11
What's your new avatar, anyway?
EDIT: Never mind, I saw the link.
BattleStarX
07/06/11
I love Kaaby putting Klooshy on top of her just to clean the spot he was standing at. Wish I thought of that.
I can't wait 'till you get to Shat'l and Klooshy, that is gonna cause a riot.
DarkMario1000
07/07/11
Ah, Fan Man.
guestuser
07/07/11
I didn't even know that you had a Fan Man spritesheet here on SJ, I knew him from somewhere else. Can anyone guess from where I knew Fan Man from? Hint: It's a site.
Oh, and why does Fan Man have a little bit of other design? From the place I know him from he had no red spheres as elbows and his upper arm was blue, instead of green. It seems the arms of the other design weren't that good, were they?
And another thing: why are my comments always that long?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/07/11
The only other place Fan Man was placed was the Brawl in the Family forums. I made a Custom Robot Master thread. Fan Man was my eighth robot. Then I gave him a sleeker design. The first eight robots were then sprited and put on the Mega Man Sprite Expo.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/07/11
You and BattleStarX are gonna kill me with laughter! XD
guestuser
07/08/11
...Very good. But then again, you made Fan Man, so you know all about him, of course... And yes, this design is indeed better. It's too bad almost nobody looks at your, Hobbez and Captain Yoshi's Custom Robot Master threads (the three of you apart, of course). You three are the Custom Robot Master Masters (hehheh...), after all, or at least from what i've seen.
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Unless explicitly noted, from here on out the only changes made to these pages will be the same: fixing the KDA cast's colors.
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
Kaxo started picking a fight with Kublie, the orange Kirby of the PSSS. She's a firebrand and vigilante, and known to get into trouble (hence why she was the reason her brown Kirby partner is on probation, and why she also threw Kuzzie the pink Kirby against a wall in the earlier pages). BSX having her and Kaxo get into a scuffle was, really, only natural.
Original Author's Comment:
07/06/11
N/A
N/A
From Dream Adventures - Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
Kooby, the green one, was the resident doctor of Keeby's Gang. There was a bit of semi-organized nature to that gang when BSX was making it, even if I don't really recall it having much of a purpose beyond being a bunch of Keeby's friends. Thus, there was an open role for a medic, which the green Kooby got.
All of the characters I got to work with on my end were characters introduced early on, for the most part. They're akin to the Division A squadmembers, in terms of character introductions and importance to KDA. The exception to this is Klooshy, the black and yellow one here. He was a very recent introduction at the time of this crossover, a brand new apprentice character BSX made. I wasn't even expecting to get him, he just kinda came along for the ride when the others did.
Klooshy had one main gag at the time of the crossover: saying something mundane when thinking something snarky or violent to himself. It was a fairly simple gag, all things considered, but it was a running gag with him, so it wouldn't have felt right if I chose to ignore it when using him.
All of the characters I got to work with on my end were characters introduced early on, for the most part. They're akin to the Division A squadmembers, in terms of character introductions and importance to KDA. The exception to this is Klooshy, the black and yellow one here. He was a very recent introduction at the time of this crossover, a brand new apprentice character BSX made. I wasn't even expecting to get him, he just kinda came along for the ride when the others did.
Klooshy had one main gag at the time of the crossover: saying something mundane when thinking something snarky or violent to himself. It was a fairly simple gag, all things considered, but it was a running gag with him, so it wouldn't have felt right if I chose to ignore it when using him.
Original Author's Comment:
07/07/11
Klooshy speaks!
...and I hope I pulled off his thinky stuff correctly.
Klooshy speaks!
...and I hope I pulled off his thinky stuff correctly.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
07/07/11
Klooshy, I like him. =P
BattleStarX
07/07/11
Klooshy's thoughts are easy, pretty much the exact opposite of what he's saying, he's thinking. The only time it wouldn't be is if someone is asking him what's on his mind. That's opening the flood gates. Of course, Shat'l on the other hand...
Andromeda Lazuli
07/08/11
Hope he doesn't say it out loud!
DarkMario1000
07/08/11
LIES!!!!
guestuser
07/08/11
If Shat'l was there...that wouldn't be good.
07/07/11
Klooshy, I like him. =P
BattleStarX
07/07/11
Klooshy's thoughts are easy, pretty much the exact opposite of what he's saying, he's thinking. The only time it wouldn't be is if someone is asking him what's on his mind. That's opening the flood gates. Of course, Shat'l on the other hand...
Andromeda Lazuli
07/08/11
Hope he doesn't say it out loud!
DarkMario1000
07/08/11
LIES!!!!
guestuser
07/08/11
If Shat'l was there...that wouldn't be good.
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
The PSSS Boss here is using an invisibility device to spy on Caiya here, and then uncloak herself in panel 2. It was a device used by the brown/orange duo in their initial introduction in KDA, so it wasn't unreasonable for the boss to also have her own cloaking device shown here.
The text box that's a bit tricky to read in panel 4, brown and pink, belongs to the PSSS medic character. It says "Please don't give me any more work..."
The text box that's a bit tricky to read in panel 4, brown and pink, belongs to the PSSS medic character. It says "Please don't give me any more work..."
Original Author's Comment:
07/07/11
In case you were wondering where Caiya went. Don't worry, no serious injuries. Why is this here? Well, look at panel two and tell me you don't see a donut.
In case you were wondering where Caiya went. Don't worry, no serious injuries. Why is this here? Well, look at panel two and tell me you don't see a donut.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/07/11
The Boss shall pay dearly for preventing Caiya from getting her donut.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/08/11
@ Ultimate Yoshi: Agreed. Caiya deserves her donuts. ^_^
epicness
07/08/11
he will be pwned by caiya
Jarkes
07/08/11
Shouldn't this be part 8?
foxpuff
07/08/11
Jarkes is right. This says part 7 even though this is part 8.
Raging Ghost
07/08/11
Although, in a sense, she deserves it.
SecretAgent000
07/08/11
...Whose dark-pink text box is that?
BattleStarX
07/08/11
Fixed the number. Also that Dark Pink/Light Brown chat box is Kurmly off frame. I never get the chat boxes right unless the kirby in question is on screen. I use the color drop tool thingy to make the text the way it is, with a couple of exceptions.
MentalKnight64
07/09/11
The bosses demise will be painful and pai- *gulp*
07/07/11
The Boss shall pay dearly for preventing Caiya from getting her donut.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/08/11
@ Ultimate Yoshi: Agreed. Caiya deserves her donuts. ^_^
epicness
07/08/11
he will be pwned by caiya
Jarkes
07/08/11
Shouldn't this be part 8?
foxpuff
07/08/11
Jarkes is right. This says part 7 even though this is part 8.
Raging Ghost
07/08/11
Although, in a sense, she deserves it.
SecretAgent000
07/08/11
...Whose dark-pink text box is that?
BattleStarX
07/08/11
Fixed the number. Also that Dark Pink/Light Brown chat box is Kurmly off frame. I never get the chat boxes right unless the kirby in question is on screen. I use the color drop tool thingy to make the text the way it is, with a couple of exceptions.
MentalKnight64
07/09/11
The bosses demise will be painful and pai- *gulp*
From Dream Adventures - Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
Like I mentioned earlier, I've never been huge on crossovers that feel largely irrelevant or unimportant. Thus, even back in 2011, I wanted to do something with the plot that would do something useful on my end. To that extent, I chose to involve a bit of Division C more here, and get a few of their personalities a bit out into the open. They had been mentioned a few times before now, but it wasn't really ever front-and-center in any capacity.
On paper, it's a bit questionable why I'd showcase relatively unknown characters in a crossover event, but I get why I wanted to involve them. It could've been done better, certainly, but the intent was solid. Involving my own cast in new ways allows the world to feel a bit more realistic and fleshed out, plus it's not an unreasonable usage to have Aika's Division C handle things while the other Division A members babysit the KDA cast.
This was also when I retconned Wake's shout of "NEON!" in Escape to be calling out Neona's name, by naming her Neona here on-screen for the first time. I also assigned the brown Division C Kirby the name of Nameless. Long before there was To-Be-Named-Later, there was Nameless the brown Kirby. I am, apparently, a bit of a one-trick pony in a few areas, eh?
On paper, it's a bit questionable why I'd showcase relatively unknown characters in a crossover event, but I get why I wanted to involve them. It could've been done better, certainly, but the intent was solid. Involving my own cast in new ways allows the world to feel a bit more realistic and fleshed out, plus it's not an unreasonable usage to have Aika's Division C handle things while the other Division A members babysit the KDA cast.
This was also when I retconned Wake's shout of "NEON!" in Escape to be calling out Neona's name, by naming her Neona here on-screen for the first time. I also assigned the brown Division C Kirby the name of Nameless. Long before there was To-Be-Named-Later, there was Nameless the brown Kirby. I am, apparently, a bit of a one-trick pony in a few areas, eh?
Original Author's Comment:
07/09/11
Since I failed to update yesterday, I'm gonna try and double update today.
Looks like someone doesn't really trust Shat'l.
Since I failed to update yesterday, I'm gonna try and double update today.
Looks like someone doesn't really trust Shat'l.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
foxpuff
07/09/11
Nameless? Is that the name of a Kirby?
DarkMario1000
07/09/11
That was what I was thinking.
TouhouShake
07/09/11
Nameless: the best name ever XD
guestuser
07/09/11
C division is back for revenge after they were terribly pwned by Talzo back in Escape!. Let the pandemonium begin.
Raging Ghost
07/09/11
Lesson: Never trust psychics.
1ce_k1d
07/09/11
Nameless.
guestuser
07/09/11
Finally, Division C gets some actual screen time... Also, Nameless, lol.
So... is Talzo gonna show up?
guestuser
09/13/11
Nameless....LOL Why nameless?
Ultizeta
07/15/17
This page brightens Aika's text bubbles. That change will also occur in every subsequent page she's in in this chapter, which doesn't happen too much.
07/09/11
Nameless? Is that the name of a Kirby?
DarkMario1000
07/09/11
That was what I was thinking.
TouhouShake
07/09/11
Nameless: the best name ever XD
guestuser
07/09/11
C division is back for revenge after they were terribly pwned by Talzo back in Escape!. Let the pandemonium begin.
Raging Ghost
07/09/11
Lesson: Never trust psychics.
1ce_k1d
07/09/11
Nameless.
guestuser
07/09/11
Finally, Division C gets some actual screen time... Also, Nameless, lol.
So... is Talzo gonna show up?
guestuser
09/13/11
Nameless....LOL Why nameless?
Ultizeta
07/15/17
This page brightens Aika's text bubbles. That change will also occur in every subsequent page she's in in this chapter, which doesn't happen too much.
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 9
Ulti's Notes:
BattleStarX used a different visual effect for Kirby's activation of his Sword Stored Ability. The large green Sword circle that appears atop Kirby here is the ability icon used in-game in the UI of Kirby Super Star Ultra.
Original Author's Comment:
07/08/11
Mostly just having fun with the P.S.S.S. as I use them so little. Also, I did have to stop that fight quickly, I need to make sure Kaxo goes back in decent health, and as only Kurie's around to do major medical stuff...
I do need to work her in though, she's only been in one comic.
Oh, by the way, click here. It's almost too good to be true.
Mostly just having fun with the P.S.S.S. as I use them so little. Also, I did have to stop that fight quickly, I need to make sure Kaxo goes back in decent health, and as only Kurie's around to do major medical stuff...
I do need to work her in though, she's only been in one comic.
Oh, by the way, click here. It's almost too good to be true.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
07/09/11
My money is on Kaxo turning on Kirby.
lord_aizen66
07/09/11
yay new kirby game *ish happy* and they should have let them just have there fun lol^^
Andromeda Lazuli
07/09/11
Yes, that's a very good reason to be on probation.
SecretAgent000
07/09/11
...well, at least we know they don't like each other.
Because if they worked together...
...suffering, really. Just suffering.
Jarkes
07/09/11
Y'know, the Kirby Wii game WAS shown at E3... it was only a logo and a video, but still, it was there...
I'm just saying, I'm surprised it took you this long to learn about it.
BattleStarX
07/09/11
I actually didn't pay any attention to E3 this year. Wasn't expecting anything big out of it. Guess that's what I get, ne?
07/09/11
My money is on Kaxo turning on Kirby.
lord_aizen66
07/09/11
yay new kirby game *ish happy* and they should have let them just have there fun lol^^
Andromeda Lazuli
07/09/11
Yes, that's a very good reason to be on probation.
SecretAgent000
07/09/11
...well, at least we know they don't like each other.
Because if they worked together...
...suffering, really. Just suffering.
Jarkes
07/09/11
Y'know, the Kirby Wii game WAS shown at E3... it was only a logo and a video, but still, it was there...
I'm just saying, I'm surprised it took you this long to learn about it.
BattleStarX
07/09/11
I actually didn't pay any attention to E3 this year. Wasn't expecting anything big out of it. Guess that's what I get, ne?
From Dream Adventures - Part 9
Ulti's Notes:
Here's an example of the blue Kaaby's Poyoese in action, as well as her neat-freak tendencies. She's seen here cleaning up the Division A base, something that, true to Kaaby fashion according to KDA, is about to go massively overboard.
Original Author's Comment:
07/09/11
Looks like Shat'l forgot to explain to Aika about the new arrivals.
Though knowing Aika, she probably would'nt've listened anyway.
Actually, none of you really know Aika.
...well then.
Kaaby's translations: "I'm Kaaby and I'm from a different dimension." I counted each word and made it Poyoese. I shall add translations to each comic she speaks in from now on.
Looks like Shat'l forgot to explain to Aika about the new arrivals.
Though knowing Aika, she probably would'nt've listened anyway.
Actually, none of you really know Aika.
...well then.
Kaaby's translations: "I'm Kaaby and I'm from a different dimension." I counted each word and made it Poyoese. I shall add translations to each comic she speaks in from now on.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
TouhouShake
07/10/11
i wonder if we need translation sheets?
Raging Ghost
07/10/11
Aika doesn't have a icon in the ''Cast'' section.
DarkMario1000
07/10/11
They might listen…but then respond with poyo, with the occasional english words.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/10/11
Well, looks like I get to place one of my replies early for once! ^_^ OH!!! And she does speak a language, you just don't speak it. :P
lord_aizen66
07/10/11
whats with nameless's sprite in the first panel looks odd
BattleStarX
07/10/11
I was wondering how the "natives" would react to Poyoese.
guestuser
07/10/11
Oh, god... it would be so funny if Talzo attacked KDA Kirby, not knowing it was an altenrate dimension Kirby, and rant about how he'll "get his revenge" and whatnot... only for KDA Kirby to have no clue what he's talking about.
plasma_knight303
06/24/12
lord_aizen66: That's Wake, not Nameless.
07/10/11
i wonder if we need translation sheets?
Raging Ghost
07/10/11
Aika doesn't have a icon in the ''Cast'' section.
DarkMario1000
07/10/11
They might listen…but then respond with poyo, with the occasional english words.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/10/11
Well, looks like I get to place one of my replies early for once! ^_^ OH!!! And she does speak a language, you just don't speak it. :P
lord_aizen66
07/10/11
whats with nameless's sprite in the first panel looks odd
BattleStarX
07/10/11
I was wondering how the "natives" would react to Poyoese.
guestuser
07/10/11
Oh, god... it would be so funny if Talzo attacked KDA Kirby, not knowing it was an altenrate dimension Kirby, and rant about how he'll "get his revenge" and whatnot... only for KDA Kirby to have no clue what he's talking about.
plasma_knight303
06/24/12
lord_aizen66: That's Wake, not Nameless.
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 10
Ulti's Notes:
I'll be frank. I don't remember who this character is. They don't show up again for the rest of the crossover, though, so I don't think it matters particularly much.
If my memory serves me right, Kurmly is the name of the off-screen PSSS medic character with the brown and pink text-bubble from a few pages back where Caiya got whacked with a hammer.
If my memory serves me right, Kurmly is the name of the off-screen PSSS medic character with the brown and pink text-bubble from a few pages back where Caiya got whacked with a hammer.
Original Author's Comment:
07/09/11
Yeah, I know, I'm jumping around a bit, but remember in the last comic, Shadik and Vezo weren't there. They were looking for someone to stop the fight, actually. They could've waited a bit, but...
Oh, and in case you forgot, that's Kurie, head healing kirby. Guess she's not the best with directions. If you wonder why she's there, just look back a few comics. Answer's there.
By the way, I'm on a massive Mass Effect 2 binge. So if I sound a little out of it, blame it on my Xbox 360.
Yeah, I know, I'm jumping around a bit, but remember in the last comic, Shadik and Vezo weren't there. They were looking for someone to stop the fight, actually. They could've waited a bit, but...
Oh, and in case you forgot, that's Kurie, head healing kirby. Guess she's not the best with directions. If you wonder why she's there, just look back a few comics. Answer's there.
By the way, I'm on a massive Mass Effect 2 binge. So if I sound a little out of it, blame it on my Xbox 360.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Andromeda Lazuli
07/10/11
Omg, another person who can understand Shadik!!! XD
Ultimate Yoshi
07/10/11
Lol.
Air Man1 21
07/10/11
Is that sign language?
SecretAgent000
07/10/11
Invisible Sign Language.
Gigi19972010
07/17/11
LOL!
SomebodyRandom
02/03/14
Deja......vu?
07/10/11
Omg, another person who can understand Shadik!!! XD
Ultimate Yoshi
07/10/11
Lol.
Air Man1 21
07/10/11
Is that sign language?
SecretAgent000
07/10/11
Invisible Sign Language.
Gigi19972010
07/17/11
LOL!
SomebodyRandom
02/03/14
Deja......vu?
From Dream Adventures - Part 10
Ulti's Notes:
The purple Kibby, as Keeby put it in an earlier page here, is a "lazy bum". His main character trait was laziness, so when utilizing him (and pairing him up with Keito), it was a reasonable approach to just have them relax together.
Using Aika's progress from the KAS base to Whispy Woods to check in on the various pairings of KA/KDA characters I went with wasn't too bad of a way to go from place-to-place here. I don't dislike it, past Ulti, I don't dislike it.
Using Aika's progress from the KAS base to Whispy Woods to check in on the various pairings of KA/KDA characters I went with wasn't too bad of a way to go from place-to-place here. I don't dislike it, past Ulti, I don't dislike it.
Original Author's Comment:
07/10/11
Keito and Kibby's dialogue is almost directly taken from this little thingy I made back in December, 2010. December 8th, to be exact:
Back when Kibby was neon pink instead of purplish.
Aika doesn't understand the awesomeness of not doing anything. Philistine.
Keito and Kibby's dialogue is almost directly taken from this little thingy I made back in December, 2010. December 8th, to be exact:
Back when Kibby was neon pink instead of purplish.
Aika doesn't understand the awesomeness of not doing anything. Philistine.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
07/10/11
I'm not sure if it was just user-error that change him to a proper purple, or if CS4 has something to do with it, but yeah, he has changed. One of these days, I may go back and update the old stuff with how it is now.
...If I ever keep consistent enough.
DarkMario1000
07/11/11
And no other comments? What the hex?
Oh poor Aika. If she wants interesting, head over to Kaxo or Caiya…oh wait…THEY AREN'T THERE! BOO HOO, AIKA!!!
guestuser
07/11/11
This is one of my favorite segments so far. But I sadly have nothing more to say right now...
Ultimate Yoshi
07/12/11
Ironically, though barely anyone has commented on this page, this comic earned an all-time high for the highest views of the site. :P
07/10/11
I'm not sure if it was just user-error that change him to a proper purple, or if CS4 has something to do with it, but yeah, he has changed. One of these days, I may go back and update the old stuff with how it is now.
...If I ever keep consistent enough.
DarkMario1000
07/11/11
And no other comments? What the hex?
Oh poor Aika. If she wants interesting, head over to Kaxo or Caiya…oh wait…THEY AREN'T THERE! BOO HOO, AIKA!!!
guestuser
07/11/11
This is one of my favorite segments so far. But I sadly have nothing more to say right now...
Ultimate Yoshi
07/12/11
Ironically, though barely anyone has commented on this page, this comic earned an all-time high for the highest views of the site. :P
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 11
Ulti's Notes:
The natural progression of most dialogue boxes tends to be left-to-right, and then top-to-bottom, at least for English comics. Some inexperienced creators will tend to not follow those rules, though, and have text bubble locations that can be a bit more unclear to read.
In BSX's case, this style of speech bubble for him didn't have much capability for longer text bubble tails. Thus, every text bubble needed to be in close proximity to the character speaking. In the case of panels like panel 1 here, that can lead to a few awkward line-orderings. The correct order to read the panel is to view it like two columns side-by-side. So, first is Kirby's line, then Kaxo's, then the brown Kubby's, and then the orange Kublie's.
In BSX's case, this style of speech bubble for him didn't have much capability for longer text bubble tails. Thus, every text bubble needed to be in close proximity to the character speaking. In the case of panels like panel 1 here, that can lead to a few awkward line-orderings. The correct order to read the panel is to view it like two columns side-by-side. So, first is Kirby's line, then Kaxo's, then the brown Kubby's, and then the orange Kublie's.
Original Author's Comment:
07/10/11
I think this one speaks for itself. Can you imagine the carnage those two could create?
I think this one speaks for itself. Can you imagine the carnage those two could create?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/10/11
I have a feeling Vezo's gonna be burning soon.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/10/11
OMG, COUPLE PAIRING OVER BURNING SOMETHING!!!
Poyo
07/11/11
So much fire.
SecretAgent000
07/10/11
OHSHI- ATTENTION ALL PERSONNEL! ATTENTION ALL PERSONNEL! MANDATORY EVACUATION OF AREA IS IMPERATIVE! REPEAT, MANDATORY EVACUATION OF AREA IS IMPERATIVE! ALL PERSONNEL TO EVACUATE THE SCENE IMMEDIATELY!
foxpuff
07/11/11
What a sudden twist!
BlagH
07/10/11
I'm sensing either a trans-dimesional couple or some burning puffballs soon.
Striffen Cloud
07/11/11
@BlagH:
Both, probably.
MentalKnight64
07/27/11
I just had a gross thought, SLOPPY KIRBY MAKE-OUTS!!
MentalKnight64
06/30/12
@plasma_knight303: I am sorry. I have no cares in the world and thought no one else did either. I apologize to you and all the others I have hurt.
guestuser
04/02/14
I thought kublie is him not her?
MagicalMario
11/12/14
@Andromeda Lazuli: Ladies & gentlemen, this ship has set sail.
07/10/11
I have a feeling Vezo's gonna be burning soon.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/10/11
OMG, COUPLE PAIRING OVER BURNING SOMETHING!!!
Poyo
07/11/11
So much fire.
SecretAgent000
07/10/11
OHSHI- ATTENTION ALL PERSONNEL! ATTENTION ALL PERSONNEL! MANDATORY EVACUATION OF AREA IS IMPERATIVE! REPEAT, MANDATORY EVACUATION OF AREA IS IMPERATIVE! ALL PERSONNEL TO EVACUATE THE SCENE IMMEDIATELY!
foxpuff
07/11/11
What a sudden twist!
BlagH
07/10/11
I'm sensing either a trans-dimesional couple or some burning puffballs soon.
Striffen Cloud
07/11/11
@BlagH:
Both, probably.
MentalKnight64
07/27/11
I just had a gross thought, SLOPPY KIRBY MAKE-OUTS!!
MentalKnight64
06/30/12
@plasma_knight303: I am sorry. I have no cares in the world and thought no one else did either. I apologize to you and all the others I have hurt.
guestuser
04/02/14
I thought kublie is him not her?
MagicalMario
11/12/14
@Andromeda Lazuli: Ladies & gentlemen, this ship has set sail.
From Dream Adventures - Part 11
Ulti's Notes:
BattleStarX's depiction of Kirby was quite different from my own depiction, but his depiction is a lot closer to a game-accurate version. BSX's Kirby is heroic, but rather simple and childish. He's hungry often, he's a bit baby-esque, he'll alternate between English (and sometimes it'll be broken English) and Poyoese, and he loves making friends. He's a very innocent and childlike depiction of Kirby, which contrasts heavily with the version of Kirby anyone in KA would be familiar with.
Unfortunately for me, I never really rolled with the possibilities of misunderstandings that could be caused by having an alternate version of the character present here. Aside from this page, nobody really ever confuses the KDA Kirby here with the KA Kirby. BSX did a much better job of that when he was able to use my own Kirby interacting with his characters.
Unfortunately for me, I never really rolled with the possibilities of misunderstandings that could be caused by having an alternate version of the character present here. Aside from this page, nobody really ever confuses the KDA Kirby here with the KA Kirby. BSX did a much better job of that when he was able to use my own Kirby interacting with his characters.
Original Author's Comment:
07/13/11
I've gotta get better with my updates.
Doesn't help that the end of this week is gonna be incredibly hard for me to get out comics.
I like Neona a lot.
I've gotta get better with my updates.
Doesn't help that the end of this week is gonna be incredibly hard for me to get out comics.
I like Neona a lot.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Richperson
07/13/11
star kirby12 told me about your comics so I came here to read them. Awesome.
Also, YAY I HAVE AN ACCOUNT!!!
epicness
07/13/11
High five?
DarkMario1000
07/13/11
Because the poyoese don't need to have 5 fingers! They can have one nub and still carry things like regular people!! XD
guestuser
07/14/11
Nah, I'm calling her Neon. That's her nickname, and it's the name she was first given, so I'm calling her that.
epicness
07/14/11
I'm talking about richperson though it does really make a difference because penguins dont have fingers.
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Color fix. I also fixed up the last panel's text to not be as blurry.
07/13/11
star kirby12 told me about your comics so I came here to read them. Awesome.
Also, YAY I HAVE AN ACCOUNT!!!
epicness
07/13/11
High five?
DarkMario1000
07/13/11
Because the poyoese don't need to have 5 fingers! They can have one nub and still carry things like regular people!! XD
guestuser
07/14/11
Nah, I'm calling her Neon. That's her nickname, and it's the name she was first given, so I'm calling her that.
epicness
07/14/11
I'm talking about richperson though it does really make a difference because penguins dont have fingers.
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Color fix. I also fixed up the last panel's text to not be as blurry.
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 12
Ulti's Notes:
I find it a bit funny how BSX wrote my Kirby in this way, as if asking permission from the PSSS Boss to help them out. I would imagine that if she said no, Kirby wouldn't have just called it quits and went back home, but instead would've tried to figure out how to help anyway, cause that's just the kind of guy he is.
Original Author's Comment:
07/11/11
The Cross-Over is actually going to have two segments on my end. Why? I'm using the first segment to actually get used to UY's kirbies, work them with mine, and try to get the personality quirks (and technical quirks) worked out. Which may mean, UY, that the Cross-over may drag on a bit longer than we originally thought. Sorry 'bout that in advance. On the other hand, I will promise a good second segment.
The Cross-Over is actually going to have two segments on my end. Why? I'm using the first segment to actually get used to UY's kirbies, work them with mine, and try to get the personality quirks (and technical quirks) worked out. Which may mean, UY, that the Cross-over may drag on a bit longer than we originally thought. Sorry 'bout that in advance. On the other hand, I will promise a good second segment.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
07/11/11
i really like things longer XD
Ultimate Yoshi
07/12/11
Well then.
07/11/11
i really like things longer XD
Ultimate Yoshi
07/12/11
Well then.
From Dream Adventures - Part 12
Ulti's Notes:
Aika, the Division C leader, hadn't really shown up before now that much, and I really wanted her to make an impression for the few pages she'd be showing up here. Thus, I exaggerated her "go it alone" attitude. She's a character who is very capable, very headstrong, and very distrusting. She's a bit meaner here than she'd wind up being later, but ultimately the main point of Aika was gotten across pretty effectively, I'd say. She may not be a major character, but she at least managed to be memorable because of her unreasonable stubbornness on display.
Original Author's Comment:
07/13/11
Double update to make up for yesterday. Let's hope this doesn't happen again.
...I just jinxed myself, didn't I?
Whatever, here's some Aika stuff.
Aika's also been added to cast page now. And she makes things uneven. WHYYYY.
Double update to make up for yesterday. Let's hope this doesn't happen again.
...I just jinxed myself, didn't I?
Whatever, here's some Aika stuff.
Aika's also been added to cast page now. And she makes things uneven. WHYYYY.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
1ce_k1d
07/13/11
Hai.
guestuser
07/13/11
OOhhh snap.
DarkMario1000
07/13/11
You're like Shadow the Hedgehog…in Kirby form and female form
I can see it already. Things aren't gonna go well with Division C-C-C-Cranky-Gal.
DarkNut255
07/13/11
LOGIC!
guestuser
07/14/11
Well, she is. She's just full of herself. I don't really like her.<_< But I like Wake and Neon, and, needless to say, I don't have a strong opinion about Nameless.
07/13/11
Hai.
guestuser
07/13/11
OOhhh snap.
DarkMario1000
07/13/11
You're like Shadow the Hedgehog…in Kirby form and female form
I can see it already. Things aren't gonna go well with Division C-C-C-Cranky-Gal.
DarkNut255
07/13/11
LOGIC!
guestuser
07/14/11
Well, she is. She's just full of herself. I don't really like her.<_< But I like Wake and Neon, and, needless to say, I don't have a strong opinion about Nameless.
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
BSX's Keeby and the PSSS Boss Kuxxel were not on particularly good terms, but similar to how I was using the crossover to establish a few new things about my own comic, so too was BSX doing the same with his. If I'm not mistaken, this was the first instance of the PSSS Boss's name being spoken aloud, as well as the first indication that Keeby and Kuxxel even knew each other, let alone disliked each other like this.
Original Author's Comment:
07/12/11
Now to just work Kirby in there, and we can have some fun...
Now to just work Kirby in there, and we can have some fun...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/12/11
KUXXEL IS THE BOSS, OMG NOBODY SAW THAT COMING!!
epicness
07/12/11
typo in panel one
star kirby12
07/13/11
Now you can start updating the cast page BSX...
DarkNut255
07/13/11
I like Kuuuu, personally.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/13/11
@deletedcomment:
...I know.
Don't you know sarcasm when you see it?
BattleStarX
07/13/11
Yet nobody comments on the coin that was chucked at the back of her head. Was her name really THAT big of a thing?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/13/11
@BSX:
Yes?
Jarkes
07/13/11
@BSX:
I noticed the coin! It's from Great Cave Offensive, right?
(Note: That was a rhetorical question. You do not need to answer.)
Evil Eye
10/05/11
Its odd
I can easily imagine Keeby flicking that coin fast enough to knock Kuxxel of that ledge.
Omega Kirby
04/14/13
Copycat
Some of your characters, you seem to have copied from Kirby Adventure, or perhaps the other way 'round, why is that?
BattleStarX
04/14/13
@Omega Kirby: Pure coincidence. There's only so many different personalities and colors out there in the world, so some things end up matching.
And with my color blindness, some things match on accident, and some things look totally different too.
Omega Kirby
04/14/13
@BattleStarX: I was actually referring to the fact that your comic interlinked with Kirby Adventure, I hadn't read the titles!
Extremmefan
07/26/14
Seeing Keeby being dead in Kirby Adventure, and alive in both Kirby's Dream Adventure and KirbyWare.Inc makes me confused...
07/12/11
KUXXEL IS THE BOSS, OMG NOBODY SAW THAT COMING!!
epicness
07/12/11
typo in panel one
star kirby12
07/13/11
Now you can start updating the cast page BSX...
DarkNut255
07/13/11
I like Kuuuu, personally.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/13/11
@deletedcomment:
...I know.
Don't you know sarcasm when you see it?
BattleStarX
07/13/11
Yet nobody comments on the coin that was chucked at the back of her head. Was her name really THAT big of a thing?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/13/11
@BSX:
Yes?
Jarkes
07/13/11
@BSX:
I noticed the coin! It's from Great Cave Offensive, right?
(Note: That was a rhetorical question. You do not need to answer.)
Evil Eye
10/05/11
Its odd
I can easily imagine Keeby flicking that coin fast enough to knock Kuxxel of that ledge.
Omega Kirby
04/14/13
Copycat
Some of your characters, you seem to have copied from Kirby Adventure, or perhaps the other way 'round, why is that?
BattleStarX
04/14/13
@Omega Kirby: Pure coincidence. There's only so many different personalities and colors out there in the world, so some things end up matching.
And with my color blindness, some things match on accident, and some things look totally different too.
Omega Kirby
04/14/13
@BattleStarX: I was actually referring to the fact that your comic interlinked with Kirby Adventure, I hadn't read the titles!
Extremmefan
07/26/14
Seeing Keeby being dead in Kirby Adventure, and alive in both Kirby's Dream Adventure and KirbyWare.Inc makes me confused...
From Dream Adventures - Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
BSX's Kirby had a habit of this exact kind of greeting whenever he ran into somebody he knew.
Korby, BSX's red Kirby, is probably the character I utilized the least accurately here. She's a bit similar to Kaxo in the sense of being a hotheaded snarker, but I think the particular intricacies that made her different from Kaxo eluded me. Thus, when writing her, she just kinda wound up being a bit of a watered-down, meeker version of Kaxo. It wasn't an immensely great showing.
Korby, BSX's red Kirby, is probably the character I utilized the least accurately here. She's a bit similar to Kaxo in the sense of being a hotheaded snarker, but I think the particular intricacies that made her different from Kaxo eluded me. Thus, when writing her, she just kinda wound up being a bit of a watered-down, meeker version of Kaxo. It wasn't an immensely great showing.
Original Author's Comment:
07/13/11
TOMATO!!!
I'm sorry, what?
The scenery keeps changing. :P
TOMATO!!!
I'm sorry, what?
The scenery keeps changing. :P
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
1ce_k1d
07/13/11
TOMATOOOOOOOOO!
foxpuff
07/13/11
A moving tomato!
contradiction123
07/13/11
I like how none of the characters that are in alternate dimensions aren't surprised at all! They're just, "OK, we are in a another dimension, and we have to wait before we can go back. Oh well," All the characters are 'OK' with all this!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/13/11
YAY! THE TALKING TOMATO IS BACK!!! XD
BattleStarX
07/13/11
You forget who the KDA Kirbies have to suffer with for an author. >:)
Blast the Hunter
07/14/11
May I cameo as a villain? http://cfos.smackjeeves.com/comics/1245722/ignus-he-is-updated-once-again/ Here are my sprites.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/14/11
If you can remake those sprites in the KSSU style, then certainly.
Advance style is not what this comic uses.
Blast the Hunter
07/14/11
I'll see if I can do that.
DarkMario1000
07/14/11
A walking stemless cherry!
Blast the Hunter
07/14/11
Yeah, I can't make those into KSSU. I don't mind, though. :/
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Color fix. Even if it doesn't quite look like it. Trust me, Korby's colors are slightly different. I nitpicked A LOT.
guestuser
05/12/19
you forgot that Kirby from KDA knows everybody's name. regardless of weather he has ever met them. how he knows... its a secret.
07/13/11
TOMATOOOOOOOOO!
foxpuff
07/13/11
A moving tomato!
contradiction123
07/13/11
I like how none of the characters that are in alternate dimensions aren't surprised at all! They're just, "OK, we are in a another dimension, and we have to wait before we can go back. Oh well," All the characters are 'OK' with all this!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/13/11
YAY! THE TALKING TOMATO IS BACK!!! XD
BattleStarX
07/13/11
You forget who the KDA Kirbies have to suffer with for an author. >:)
Blast the Hunter
07/14/11
May I cameo as a villain? http://cfos.smackjeeves.com/comics/1245722/ignus-he-is-updated-once-again/ Here are my sprites.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/14/11
If you can remake those sprites in the KSSU style, then certainly.
Advance style is not what this comic uses.
Blast the Hunter
07/14/11
I'll see if I can do that.
DarkMario1000
07/14/11
A walking stemless cherry!
Blast the Hunter
07/14/11
Yeah, I can't make those into KSSU. I don't mind, though. :/
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Color fix. Even if it doesn't quite look like it. Trust me, Korby's colors are slightly different. I nitpicked A LOT.
guestuser
05/12/19
you forgot that Kirby from KDA knows everybody's name. regardless of weather he has ever met them. how he knows... its a secret.
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 14
Ulti's Notes:
Kuxxel's side of the argument where she brings up kidnapping and possible torture aludes to how the PSSS was first introduced in Kirby's Dream Adventure. The brown agent, Kubby, was shown spying invisibly on Keeby's Gang for unknown purposes, and broke into the gang's base. She got caught, however, and got captured in a cage, so a bit later her partner, the hotheaded orange Kublie, was introduced as she orchestrated a jailbreak.
Thus, Kuxxel here is being defensive of her agents, and angry at Keeby having imprisoned Kubby previously. I believe Keeby's rebuttal is due to the reasoning behind Kubby's initial spying being unclear (and thus, the PSSS is dishonest about their intentions? maybe?)
Either way, the main point at the end of the day is that the two don't like each other nor do they trust each other.
Thus, Kuxxel here is being defensive of her agents, and angry at Keeby having imprisoned Kubby previously. I believe Keeby's rebuttal is due to the reasoning behind Kubby's initial spying being unclear (and thus, the PSSS is dishonest about their intentions? maybe?)
Either way, the main point at the end of the day is that the two don't like each other nor do they trust each other.
Original Author's Comment:
07/13/11
N/A
N/A
From Dream Adventures - Part 14
Ulti's Notes:
The "wrong seeds" that Fanhal grew here are Lovely Roses, tough enemies from Kirby Super Star Ultra that are living plants. Whatever their intentions are for Fanhal, they're clearly anything but innocent if that wink and :3 face are to be believed.
Original Author's Comment:
07/13/11
Hey there, Fanhal! It's been a while!
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Hey there, Fanhal! It's been a while!
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkNut255
07/14/11
Fanhal!
foxpuff
07/14/11
Looks like Fanhal didn't show up for a while, but he already messed up.
RedJac
07/14/11
I FINALLY READ THIS ENTIRE COMIC! FAV+!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/15/11
FANHAL!!! Man, messing up is always awkward when you haven't been seen for a long time... But it sure is FUN!!! ^_^
DarkMario1000
07/15/11
Always a warm welcome when people that haven't gotten spotlight in a while seem to fail. xP
Gigi19972010
07/17/11
Fanhal is in trouble.
guestuser
08/05/11
...What happened to Poyo-ese translations?
07/14/11
Fanhal!
foxpuff
07/14/11
Looks like Fanhal didn't show up for a while, but he already messed up.
RedJac
07/14/11
I FINALLY READ THIS ENTIRE COMIC! FAV+!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/15/11
FANHAL!!! Man, messing up is always awkward when you haven't been seen for a long time... But it sure is FUN!!! ^_^
DarkMario1000
07/15/11
Always a warm welcome when people that haven't gotten spotlight in a while seem to fail. xP
Gigi19972010
07/17/11
Fanhal is in trouble.
guestuser
08/05/11
...What happened to Poyo-ese translations?
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 15
Ulti's Notes:
After The Beginning segment, it would've been a huge missed opportunity if BSX didn't have his Keeby meet my Kirby while he had control of them. Not even a primarily-comedic writer can resist the juicy potential of such a meeting, though since he was a mostly comedic writer, the meeting still wound up being a bit comedic more than anything heartbreaking or tearjerk-y.
The events of 'five years ago' that Keeby was referring to was something that hadn't yet been mentioned in KDA. It would later come up in a flashback segment after the crossover, but for here, the only context necessary is what's already in the comic.
The green Waddle Doo here is the entity known as the Author Doo. This was BSX's authorsona, similar to my own Kirby, except his authorsona was much more involved in the comic than mine was. He'd show up a lot more often as a fairly fallible god entity, enjoying time with his own creations who didn't really quite get who he was but putting up with him nonetheless.
It was a much more meta version of an authorsona than my own take on the concept, which is what I think prompted BSX to throw in his Author Doo here. He wanted to have my own characters interact with something they wouldn't be used to: a representation of the creator of the world they resided in.
The events of 'five years ago' that Keeby was referring to was something that hadn't yet been mentioned in KDA. It would later come up in a flashback segment after the crossover, but for here, the only context necessary is what's already in the comic.
The green Waddle Doo here is the entity known as the Author Doo. This was BSX's authorsona, similar to my own Kirby, except his authorsona was much more involved in the comic than mine was. He'd show up a lot more often as a fairly fallible god entity, enjoying time with his own creations who didn't really quite get who he was but putting up with him nonetheless.
It was a much more meta version of an authorsona than my own take on the concept, which is what I think prompted BSX to throw in his Author Doo here. He wanted to have my own characters interact with something they wouldn't be used to: a representation of the creator of the world they resided in.
Original Author's Comment:
07/14/11
This actually gave me the opportunity to expand on Keeby's back-story a little bit. At least you know why Keeby hates Kirby now, and that it's been a long grudge.
Also, don't forget, the KA Kirbies don't deal with their "author" character as much as the KDA Kirbies do. They're a bit more used to my random appearances. Not that it stops them from dis-liking me or anything. Remember, I may be the God Character, but I pop in for comedic purposes.
...At least I don't freak KA Kirby out. Maybe Vezo.
This actually gave me the opportunity to expand on Keeby's back-story a little bit. At least you know why Keeby hates Kirby now, and that it's been a long grudge.
Also, don't forget, the KA Kirbies don't deal with their "author" character as much as the KDA Kirbies do. They're a bit more used to my random appearances. Not that it stops them from dis-liking me or anything. Remember, I may be the God Character, but I pop in for comedic purposes.
...At least I don't freak KA Kirby out. Maybe Vezo.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
TouhouShake
07/14/11
God like authors always want in in the best parts, even at the wrong time i suppose.
1ce_k1d
07/15/11
Last panle eror: I SHOULD'VE KNOW THIS WAS YOUR FAULT!
Ultimate Yoshi
07/15/11
The characters in KA don't even really know who I am, as evidented with Keito's confusion a few comics ago.
Makes for more fun! :D
Andromeda Lazuli
07/15/11
*laughs* GOD!!! THAT WAS SO FUNNY!!! Who am I kidding... This whole comic is hilarious!!! XD
SecretAgent000
07/15/11
...well, for all Kirby knows, you're just an oddly-colored eyelash-less Waddle Doo.
Which may cause a bit of disbelief when he learns the truth.
link1566
07/15/11
How do you send fan art?
BattleStarX
07/15/11
I don't really have a fan-art page, yet. If you want to send some, though, either send it in a PM or upload it to photobucket or whatever and give me the link. If I get some, I'll gladly make a new page.
Mentalknight64
10/02/11
Holy Crap
I just noticed Kuxxel is never in the same block as Author Doo... So yeah.
guestuser
05/30/12
Guess this proves it.
07/14/11
God like authors always want in in the best parts, even at the wrong time i suppose.
1ce_k1d
07/15/11
Last panle eror: I SHOULD'VE KNOW THIS WAS YOUR FAULT!
Ultimate Yoshi
07/15/11
The characters in KA don't even really know who I am, as evidented with Keito's confusion a few comics ago.
Makes for more fun! :D
Andromeda Lazuli
07/15/11
*laughs* GOD!!! THAT WAS SO FUNNY!!! Who am I kidding... This whole comic is hilarious!!! XD
SecretAgent000
07/15/11
...well, for all Kirby knows, you're just an oddly-colored eyelash-less Waddle Doo.
Which may cause a bit of disbelief when he learns the truth.
link1566
07/15/11
How do you send fan art?
BattleStarX
07/15/11
I don't really have a fan-art page, yet. If you want to send some, though, either send it in a PM or upload it to photobucket or whatever and give me the link. If I get some, I'll gladly make a new page.
Mentalknight64
10/02/11
Holy Crap
I just noticed Kuxxel is never in the same block as Author Doo... So yeah.
guestuser
05/30/12
Guess this proves it.
From Dream Adventures - Part 15
Ulti's Notes:
The blue cleaner Kaaby had garnered a bit of a reputation by this point in KDA. She would probably be one of the toughest characters in all of KDA if she put her mind to it, and until the introduction of a new character in KDA much later on, she would definitely be the most feared character in KDA. Everybody respects her, or at least tolerates her, because they know that if they don't do as she pleases, she WILL ensure she gets her way one way or another.
Original Author's Comment:
07/13/11
Kaaby is like a demoness with severe OCD.
Kaaby is like a demoness with severe OCD.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
foxpuff
07/15/11
Best to not go into a place where Kaaby is cleaning or else.
guestuser
07/15/11
You haven't updated Yoshi and Kirby in a week or so. Could you get to that?
guestuser
07/15/11
The Mokees Haven't been updated either... Although it must be hard to collaborate with BSX for this crossover, so its alright.
DarkMario1000
07/15/11
Hooray
BattleStarX
07/15/11
We're each trying to progress at the same speed, though as we know, I'm the king of delaying, so if UY has some issues, or really wants to work on his other comics, we'll manage.
RedJac
07/16/11
SCREW SANITY!
MentalKnight64
07/16/11
I notice you still don't have a character page for Jarkes's cameo
AriousTheAncient
07/05/12
I thought Kabby was dead!
Ultimate Yoshi
07/05/12
AriousTheAncient
...what?
07/15/11
Best to not go into a place where Kaaby is cleaning or else.
guestuser
07/15/11
You haven't updated Yoshi and Kirby in a week or so. Could you get to that?
guestuser
07/15/11
The Mokees Haven't been updated either... Although it must be hard to collaborate with BSX for this crossover, so its alright.
DarkMario1000
07/15/11
Hooray
BattleStarX
07/15/11
We're each trying to progress at the same speed, though as we know, I'm the king of delaying, so if UY has some issues, or really wants to work on his other comics, we'll manage.
RedJac
07/16/11
SCREW SANITY!
MentalKnight64
07/16/11
I notice you still don't have a character page for Jarkes's cameo
AriousTheAncient
07/05/12
I thought Kabby was dead!
Ultimate Yoshi
07/05/12
AriousTheAncient
...what?
Meet the K.A.S. - Part 16
Ulti's Notes:
BattleStarX may have also had a bit of a masochistic streak when putting his authorsona into contact with my Kirby. Self-deprecating humor sure is a concept, huh.
Since the Waddle Doo enemy is just a giant eyeball creature without a mouth, BSX decided to have his Author Doo sona gain extra emoting capabilities by shifting his color around. The green look is the 'default' look, and the dark purple here is one of sadness/depression.
Since the Waddle Doo enemy is just a giant eyeball creature without a mouth, BSX decided to have his Author Doo sona gain extra emoting capabilities by shifting his color around. The green look is the 'default' look, and the dark purple here is one of sadness/depression.
Original Author's Comment:
07/15/11
Yup. I went there.
By the way, I know he's really not, but I LOVE evil Keeby. Don't you?
Yup. I went there.
By the way, I know he's really not, but I LOVE evil Keeby. Don't you?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Kirbysmith [DJ]
07/15/11
I'm surprised that Kirby wasn't creeped out by your lack of eye-lashes.
SecretAgent000
07/15/11
@Kirbysmith
Maybe he just wasn't paying attention to that.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/15/11
Awe... POOR BATTLESTARX!!! T^T Keeby should've at least felt a LITTLE sorry for you about the smart Kirby being insulting!
locoroco1
07/16/11
You know, you could turn Kirby into a Waddle Dee, and nobody would blame you.
epicness
07/16/11
I eat doos for lunch...literally.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/16/11
...that seems more something Aika or Kaxo or someone else might say, rather than Kirby.
Air Man1 21
07/16/11
@SecretAgent000
I didn't notice the Eyelash thing until somebody pointed it out.
Gigi19972010
07/17/11
'-'
Smashfan56
06/13/12
Wow, I haven't seen that bad of a self-burn since Chuggaaconroy's FireRed LP
Knightkirby
12/03/12
Sounds like a kind of thing keeby would say
Sudux
04/23/19
Got’em!
07/15/11
I'm surprised that Kirby wasn't creeped out by your lack of eye-lashes.
SecretAgent000
07/15/11
@Kirbysmith
Maybe he just wasn't paying attention to that.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/15/11
Awe... POOR BATTLESTARX!!! T^T Keeby should've at least felt a LITTLE sorry for you about the smart Kirby being insulting!
locoroco1
07/16/11
You know, you could turn Kirby into a Waddle Dee, and nobody would blame you.
epicness
07/16/11
I eat doos for lunch...literally.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/16/11
...that seems more something Aika or Kaxo or someone else might say, rather than Kirby.
Air Man1 21
07/16/11
@SecretAgent000
I didn't notice the Eyelash thing until somebody pointed it out.
Gigi19972010
07/17/11
'-'
Smashfan56
06/13/12
Wow, I haven't seen that bad of a self-burn since Chuggaaconroy's FireRed LP
Knightkirby
12/03/12
Sounds like a kind of thing keeby would say
Sudux
04/23/19
Got’em!
From Dream Adventures - Part 16
Ulti's Notes:
Here's more of me using the opportunity of the crossover to flesh out a bit more of the KAS. Unlike with Aika and Division C, though, a character like Meliai here isn't really particularly important in any way beyond the fact that she exists. So other than knowing that the KAS Medical Center is blue and that there is a Kirby who works there, there's not much you really need to retain about this.
Original Author's Comment:
07/14/11
Introducing Meliai, (Pronounced mehl-ee-aye) the head of the Squad's medical center.
Klooshy must have gotten bored.
Introducing Meliai, (Pronounced mehl-ee-aye) the head of the Squad's medical center.
Klooshy must have gotten bored.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
foxpuff
07/16/11
Wandering off is not a good sign.
TouhouShake
07/16/11
never a good sign o.o
RedJac
07/16/11
Damn it Klooshy!
DarkMario1000
07/16/11
Oh wait, Meliai didn't do anything wrong…XD
Andromeda Lazuli
07/16/11
I have a BAD feeling about what is gonna happen because Klooshy wandered off.
BattleStarX
07/16/11
I like your new kirby. Seems medical kirbies don't get enough air-time. I wonder how many "wounded" we'll end up seeing... assuming they find Klooshy.
guestuser
07/16/11
Are you going to add Meliai to the cast page after he/she gets more in-comic time?
epicness
07/17/11
Somebody got brain-medication here?
Gigi19972010
07/17/11
Meliai shading seems a bit... weird...
guestuser
11/20/11
Meliai isn't on the cast page...
castleofwarriors
12/04/11
And then Meliai was never seen again...
07/16/11
Wandering off is not a good sign.
TouhouShake
07/16/11
never a good sign o.o
RedJac
07/16/11
Damn it Klooshy!
DarkMario1000
07/16/11
Oh wait, Meliai didn't do anything wrong…XD
Andromeda Lazuli
07/16/11
I have a BAD feeling about what is gonna happen because Klooshy wandered off.
BattleStarX
07/16/11
I like your new kirby. Seems medical kirbies don't get enough air-time. I wonder how many "wounded" we'll end up seeing... assuming they find Klooshy.
guestuser
07/16/11
Are you going to add Meliai to the cast page after he/she gets more in-comic time?
epicness
07/17/11
Somebody got brain-medication here?
Gigi19972010
07/17/11
Meliai shading seems a bit... weird...
guestuser
11/20/11
Meliai isn't on the cast page...
castleofwarriors
12/04/11
And then Meliai was never seen again...
Rescue Mission - Part 1
Ulti's Notes:
Unlike on my end, BattleStarX told his side of the crossover via three smaller segments that would get grouped up into one large chapter simply titled Kirby Adventure Crossover. Thus, the original segmentation of BSX's chapter will be retained here, as the second of his segments begins with "Rescue Mission".
Original Author's Comment:
07/16/11
So begins Segment Two. I think I've gotten the hang of the KA Kirbies. Yes I know, Volcanic Highlands isn't a real area in the Kirby games, but I can't rely on already existing zones all the time. And yes, the KA Kirbies WILL actually have to tap into their Stored Abilities during this mission. Wouldn't be any fun if they didn't have to.
Yes, Keeby and Kuxxel are really having it at each other. Don't worry, I'll get along to why they hate each other so much, though not 'till after the Cross-Over is done. In fact, I think you'll enjoy that segment, which will probably be the longest segment in this comic's history. Hyped up yet? Don't let it get to you, we still have a ways to go yet, and a lot of fun to be had with the KA Kirbies.
Why the Wall of Text in my Author Comment? Because there's a lot of Kirbies up there that aren't talking at the moment. Had to make up for 'em.
So begins Segment Two. I think I've gotten the hang of the KA Kirbies. Yes I know, Volcanic Highlands isn't a real area in the Kirby games, but I can't rely on already existing zones all the time. And yes, the KA Kirbies WILL actually have to tap into their Stored Abilities during this mission. Wouldn't be any fun if they didn't have to.
Yes, Keeby and Kuxxel are really having it at each other. Don't worry, I'll get along to why they hate each other so much, though not 'till after the Cross-Over is done. In fact, I think you'll enjoy that segment, which will probably be the longest segment in this comic's history. Hyped up yet? Don't let it get to you, we still have a ways to go yet, and a lot of fun to be had with the KA Kirbies.
Why the Wall of Text in my Author Comment? Because there's a lot of Kirbies up there that aren't talking at the moment. Had to make up for 'em.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/16/11
No, they won't. :D
epicness
07/16/11
My brain is blowned...cant talk now...
anyone have questions why?
Andromeda Lazuli
07/17/11
@epicness:
I wanna know why you can't talk now. Can you explain, please? :3
epicness
07/17/11
i just saw the latest comic of We Can Defeat Anyone..
07/16/11
No, they won't. :D
epicness
07/16/11
My brain is blowned...cant talk now...
anyone have questions why?
Andromeda Lazuli
07/17/11
@epicness:
I wanna know why you can't talk now. Can you explain, please? :3
epicness
07/17/11
i just saw the latest comic of We Can Defeat Anyone..
From Dream Adventures - Part 17
Ulti's Notes:
One of the things that happened with this crossover was that both BSX and I were pretty flexible about writing each others' characters. This came about from a communication issue that I'll bring up again in a bit, but for right now, it had one benefit of a lot of lax vibes when it came to me writing BSX's characters.
Since a large part of his own philosophy was doing funny things because they'd be funny, and not worrying too hard about it, I didn't feel super inclined to hold myself strictly to how the characters were presented in KDA at all times. Basically, if I came up with an idea, I didn't worry about if it fit the character, I just did it anyway. Perhaps not the smartest philosophy when handling other peoples' characters, but thankfully BattleStarX was always a good sport when dealing with the younger me, and often enjoyed a lot of what I wound up doing with his characters.
Case in point with the black/yellow Klooshy here, who up to this point in KDA only really had his thoughts-vs-speech gimmick to go off of. But with this one page, I suddenly accidentally applied a permanent new character trait to him that BSX would take later and run with: the idea that he liked explosives. Sure, it was a simple addition, but what I just wrote in as a joke here became a permanent aspect of the character, and that's admittedly pretty neat.
Since a large part of his own philosophy was doing funny things because they'd be funny, and not worrying too hard about it, I didn't feel super inclined to hold myself strictly to how the characters were presented in KDA at all times. Basically, if I came up with an idea, I didn't worry about if it fit the character, I just did it anyway. Perhaps not the smartest philosophy when handling other peoples' characters, but thankfully BattleStarX was always a good sport when dealing with the younger me, and often enjoyed a lot of what I wound up doing with his characters.
Case in point with the black/yellow Klooshy here, who up to this point in KDA only really had his thoughts-vs-speech gimmick to go off of. But with this one page, I suddenly accidentally applied a permanent new character trait to him that BSX would take later and run with: the idea that he liked explosives. Sure, it was a simple addition, but what I just wrote in as a joke here became a permanent aspect of the character, and that's admittedly pretty neat.
Original Author's Comment:
07/14/11
Boom.
Boom.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
contradiction123
07/17/11
How did Kirby run so quickly from the foreground to the background? Anyway, this is really fun to read! HOORAY 4 CROSSOVERS!
TouhouShake
07/17/11
a race that sonic would win is a speed race, kirby a gourmet race. XD
Andromeda Lazuli
07/17/11
Lol, he's screwed about the bombs...! ^_^ And yet he want's to make something go BOOM! XD
guestuser
07/17/11
This is not going to end well...
DarkMario1000
07/17/11
XD
I'm still voting that this won't end awesomely.
guestuser
07/18/11
I just noticed that, for the past five strips, you've been posting them every day, but your author comment is somehow always on July 13th. WHAT'S GOING ON?
guestuser
07/18/11
He's a time traveler!
foxpuff
07/18/11
At first, I didn't see Kirby in the background. How fast IS he going?
guestuser
07/18/11
contradiction123
Warp Pipe.
Those things can allow near-instantaneous warping in-between the foreground and background, assuming they are set up correctly.
07/17/11
How did Kirby run so quickly from the foreground to the background? Anyway, this is really fun to read! HOORAY 4 CROSSOVERS!
TouhouShake
07/17/11
a race that sonic would win is a speed race, kirby a gourmet race. XD
Andromeda Lazuli
07/17/11
Lol, he's screwed about the bombs...! ^_^ And yet he want's to make something go BOOM! XD
guestuser
07/17/11
This is not going to end well...
DarkMario1000
07/17/11
XD
I'm still voting that this won't end awesomely.
guestuser
07/18/11
I just noticed that, for the past five strips, you've been posting them every day, but your author comment is somehow always on July 13th. WHAT'S GOING ON?
guestuser
07/18/11
He's a time traveler!
foxpuff
07/18/11
At first, I didn't see Kirby in the background. How fast IS he going?
guestuser
07/18/11
contradiction123
Warp Pipe.
Those things can allow near-instantaneous warping in-between the foreground and background, assuming they are set up correctly.
Rescue Mission - Part 2
Ulti's Notes:
Kirby here actually conveniently explains any context I'd normally need to provide in an annotation here, so instead I'll just simply say to not worry about that sneaky watermelon-colored Kirby thinking 'Poyo' in the last panel. She's a food thief in KDA, but she doesn't come up again here and so isn't particularly relevant.
Original Author's Comment:
07/17/11
N/A
N/A
From Dream Adventures - Part 18
Original Author's Comment:
07/18/11
Despite the size of that explosion, it must have a huge blast radius if even Saia and Kooby felt it, deep within the KAS base.
Despite the size of that explosion, it must have a huge blast radius if even Saia and Kooby felt it, deep within the KAS base.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
07/18/11
So what are Raize and Klooshy doing?
foxpuff
07/18/11
Another "I think I did something wrong" moment.
TouhouShake
07/18/11
boom! XD
RedJac
07/18/11
He didn't use enough!
DarkMario1000
07/18/11
Wonder what they'd do.
BattleStarX
07/18/11
Boom, enough said.
07/18/11
So what are Raize and Klooshy doing?
foxpuff
07/18/11
Another "I think I did something wrong" moment.
TouhouShake
07/18/11
boom! XD
RedJac
07/18/11
He didn't use enough!
DarkMario1000
07/18/11
Wonder what they'd do.
BattleStarX
07/18/11
Boom, enough said.
Rescue Mission - Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
Whispy Woods is the name of both the larger forest area, but also of this particular talking tree. Whispy is rather-famously the first boss battle of most Kirby games. He's known to be a bit stubborn, and sometimes works for King Dedede, but in general is mostly just a simple obstacle for Kirby to overcome. He's got a love for apples, since he grows them himself.
Original Author's Comment:
07/18/11
I really like Caiya. Maybe cause I really love donuts myself. Though I've never seen a donut shaped apple.
Have you been popping over to UY's Kirby Adventure? Make sure you do, since he's been working on the cross-over too.
Yes, I love that little trick of embedding website links in text. Took me a while to figure out too.
I really like Caiya. Maybe cause I really love donuts myself. Though I've never seen a donut shaped apple.
Have you been popping over to UY's Kirby Adventure? Make sure you do, since he's been working on the cross-over too.
Yes, I love that little trick of embedding website links in text. Took me a while to figure out too.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
star kirby12
07/18/11
Whispy, that's not the Kirby you know.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/19/11
RANDOM CAIYA THOUGHT MOMENT!!!
SecretAgent000
07/19/11
@star kirby12:
It IS Kirby, just a different one.
foxpuff
07/19/11
I wonder what would happen if Caiya thought that every apple were donuts and ate them all.
Raging Ghost
07/19/11
This is not the Kirby you're looking for.
Kirby Stafy Fan l L(=^ .^=)
07/19/11
I like dounuts also
SomebodyRandom
02/03/14
Caiya, those are NOT donuts.
07/18/11
Whispy, that's not the Kirby you know.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/19/11
RANDOM CAIYA THOUGHT MOMENT!!!
SecretAgent000
07/19/11
@star kirby12:
It IS Kirby, just a different one.
foxpuff
07/19/11
I wonder what would happen if Caiya thought that every apple were donuts and ate them all.
Raging Ghost
07/19/11
This is not the Kirby you're looking for.
Kirby Stafy Fan l L(=^ .^=)
07/19/11
I like dounuts also
SomebodyRandom
02/03/14
Caiya, those are NOT donuts.
From Dream Adventures - Part 19
Original Author's Comment:
07/19/11
Kaaby's very serious about her cleaning.
...must... resist... making... bad... sexist... joke...
Kaaby's very serious about her cleaning.
...must... resist... making... bad... sexist... joke...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
foxpuff
07/19/11
Talk about an attitude. However, that's normal for Kaaby.
Gigi19972010
07/19/11
*face...Idunnowhatexactlyputhere!* *shot*
BattleStarX
07/20/11
She's not just good at cleaning. Just hope she doesn't start making additions to the base. The last thing you need is a cannon to be made canon.
I said a punny.
DarkMario1000
07/20/11
Kaaby used "KAABY KICK!!!"
I'm sure she coulda used "KAABY…PAWNCH!!!"
I'm not punny here. I said a memey.
RedJac
07/20/11
It's Super Effective!
guestuser
07/20/11
BattleStarX
Hey, that's MY joke!
guestuser
07/20/11
I'd probably be doin' that same thing to you as Kaaby did to Keito if you made that joke... /- I'MA WATCHIN U!!!
~
guestuser
08/24/11
*punches Kaaby* there problem solved ^^
07/19/11
Talk about an attitude. However, that's normal for Kaaby.
Gigi19972010
07/19/11
*face...Idunnowhatexactlyputhere!* *shot*
BattleStarX
07/20/11
She's not just good at cleaning. Just hope she doesn't start making additions to the base. The last thing you need is a cannon to be made canon.
I said a punny.
DarkMario1000
07/20/11
Kaaby used "KAABY KICK!!!"
I'm sure she coulda used "KAABY…PAWNCH!!!"
I'm not punny here. I said a memey.
RedJac
07/20/11
It's Super Effective!
guestuser
07/20/11
BattleStarX
Hey, that's MY joke!
guestuser
07/20/11
I'd probably be doin' that same thing to you as Kaaby did to Keito if you made that joke... /- I'MA WATCHIN U!!!
~
guestuser
08/24/11
*punches Kaaby* there problem solved ^^
Rescue Mission - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
Here's an example of Keeby not being as truly creepy or evil as some of the other KDA cast might consider him. He could've let Kaxo burn the forest down, but instead instantly douses him to go along with his more nonviolent solution in the next comic. Subtly caring, I tell you.
There have been a few instances of typos and grammatical errors thus far in the KDA pages, but I didn't want to be pedantic and nitpick every single one here, especially since they were 13 years ago. But here, I think it's important to note that Kaxo was meant to be saying "Move or I'll burn ya!" in the second panel here.
There have been a few instances of typos and grammatical errors thus far in the KDA pages, but I didn't want to be pedantic and nitpick every single one here, especially since they were 13 years ago. But here, I think it's important to note that Kaxo was meant to be saying "Move or I'll burn ya!" in the second panel here.
Original Author's Comment:
07/19/11
What're you looking at me like that for? It was a necessary joke.
Pity the Fire Power never did any extra damage to Whispy though...
What're you looking at me like that for? It was a necessary joke.
Pity the Fire Power never did any extra damage to Whispy though...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
07/19/11
cool...i like when the symbol comes,a sprite animation would be cool with that. oh and first comment!
8-bitSilverSnake
07/20/11
And what fire flower?
Andromeda Lazuli
07/20/11
Epic fail for the attempt at making Whispy move. :3
Gigi19972010
07/20/11
Why there isn't anything related to Pokémon in Kirby? Why Whispy couldn't take more damage from Fire since he would be a Grass type? *Remembers about a crazy "project" about Kirby's Copy Abilities like Pokémon, with types, abilities, moves, TMs and move tutors*
Kaxo used Fire Punch! It's super effective! The foe's Whispy fainted! *shot*
GuyORandomness
07/20/11
In KSSU, there were (I think) four or five different bosses who, when you fought them,like Pokémon. (e.g. The magician used an ice spell! Kirby took 28 damage!)
Jarkes
07/20/11
@GuyORandomness:
Not exactly Pokemon. Just a basic RPG parody. And they were in the original KSS as well.
"You got 228 EXP! (Not that it matters.)" ^_^
Fighter Dee
07/20/11
I think Ultimate Yoshi could use this sort of Copy Ability Changing Effects (CACE) in his comic. I think it would be great!
BattleStarX
07/20/11
Kirby's Squishiness increased by X. (I forgot the number.)
I thought that was hilarious.
pinktlrb
07/20/11
I made up some new kirby names koiby (pronounced koy-bee) kierby (pronounced kee-erby) which I made while spelling kirby wrong so ur welcome to use 'em, mmm just sayin' (remember that line from ur comic Ultimate Yoshi? wink wink nudge nudge;) )
Ultimate Yoshi
07/21/11
@Fighter Dee:
...no offense, but there's nothing wrong with my Stored Ability activation effect. So there's absolutely no reason for me to switch to this.
BattleStarX
07/21/11
Different Author, different Special Effects budget and design.
Pure an' simple.
Jarkes
07/31/11
@BattleStarX:
By "budget," you mean, "free Photoshop". XD
guestuser
04/02/14
Where Keeby get the water?
Extremmefan
07/26/14
@Guest: Bucket from Great Cave Offensive (in KSS).... the cheapest item in Great Cave Offensive
07/19/11
cool...i like when the symbol comes,a sprite animation would be cool with that. oh and first comment!
8-bitSilverSnake
07/20/11
And what fire flower?
Andromeda Lazuli
07/20/11
Epic fail for the attempt at making Whispy move. :3
Gigi19972010
07/20/11
Why there isn't anything related to Pokémon in Kirby? Why Whispy couldn't take more damage from Fire since he would be a Grass type? *Remembers about a crazy "project" about Kirby's Copy Abilities like Pokémon, with types, abilities, moves, TMs and move tutors*
Kaxo used Fire Punch! It's super effective! The foe's Whispy fainted! *shot*
GuyORandomness
07/20/11
In KSSU, there were (I think) four or five different bosses who, when you fought them,like Pokémon. (e.g. The magician used an ice spell! Kirby took 28 damage!)
Jarkes
07/20/11
@GuyORandomness:
Not exactly Pokemon. Just a basic RPG parody. And they were in the original KSS as well.
"You got 228 EXP! (Not that it matters.)" ^_^
Fighter Dee
07/20/11
I think Ultimate Yoshi could use this sort of Copy Ability Changing Effects (CACE) in his comic. I think it would be great!
BattleStarX
07/20/11
Kirby's Squishiness increased by X. (I forgot the number.)
I thought that was hilarious.
pinktlrb
07/20/11
I made up some new kirby names koiby (pronounced koy-bee) kierby (pronounced kee-erby) which I made while spelling kirby wrong so ur welcome to use 'em, mmm just sayin' (remember that line from ur comic Ultimate Yoshi? wink wink nudge nudge;) )
Ultimate Yoshi
07/21/11
@Fighter Dee:
...no offense, but there's nothing wrong with my Stored Ability activation effect. So there's absolutely no reason for me to switch to this.
BattleStarX
07/21/11
Different Author, different Special Effects budget and design.
Pure an' simple.
Jarkes
07/31/11
@BattleStarX:
By "budget," you mean, "free Photoshop". XD
guestuser
04/02/14
Where Keeby get the water?
Extremmefan
07/26/14
@Guest: Bucket from Great Cave Offensive (in KSS).... the cheapest item in Great Cave Offensive
From Dream Adventures - Part 20
Ulti's Notes:
Korby is one to talk, questioning names when she's been saddled with one that's like one vowel off from 75% of everybody else's name in her own dimension.
Original Author's Comment:
07/20/11
Only a Dream-Adventurite would notice that 'name'.
Only a Dream-Adventurite would notice that 'name'.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkNut255
07/20/11
Of course.
Neon-J
07/20/11
IT's... ME?!
epicness
07/20/11
Neon?8-BITSILVERSNAKE!
BattleStarX
07/20/11
I think it would be easy to get lost in a place with so little color.
guestuser
07/21/11
Better than an evil hallway of too much color.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/21/11
Lol
guestuser
07/21/11
Glad to know it's just a nickname.
DarkMario1000
07/21/11
I chuckled after I saw the expression Nameless had in the last comic. Pure win!
07/20/11
Of course.
Neon-J
07/20/11
IT's... ME?!
epicness
07/20/11
Neon?8-BITSILVERSNAKE!
BattleStarX
07/20/11
I think it would be easy to get lost in a place with so little color.
guestuser
07/21/11
Better than an evil hallway of too much color.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/21/11
Lol
guestuser
07/21/11
Glad to know it's just a nickname.
DarkMario1000
07/21/11
I chuckled after I saw the expression Nameless had in the last comic. Pure win!
Rescue Mission - Part 5
Ulti's Notes:
Kibby is the purple lazy Kirby who was hanging out with Keito in the KA comics. While lazy, he's got enough hidden talents (such as growth formulas, apparently) that made him worth keeping around, it was just a matter of if Keeby could get him to be bothered to put any of them to use.
Original Author's Comment:
07/20/11
Except in this game. I recommend that you play it. Just plain down right hilarious for absolutely no reason.
Except in this game. I recommend that you play it. Just plain down right hilarious for absolutely no reason.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Kirbysmith [DJ]
07/20/11
Kirbies go down da hole.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/21/11
Oh dear... Where are they going now?
star kirby12
07/21/11
Oh yeah! StD! you know it? I got all the medals!
Wanna See the bribery?
-Bust In
-Ram
-Shield
-Tow Cable
-Stone
-Bubble
-Bribery
Riley
07/21/11
I love that game! If you haven't, then play the first two games of the series. They're also fun.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/21/11
CYCLOPS WHISPYYYYYY
SecretAgent000
07/21/11
@Ultimate Yoshi:
...WHYCLOPS?
07/20/11
Kirbies go down da hole.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/21/11
Oh dear... Where are they going now?
star kirby12
07/21/11
Oh yeah! StD! you know it? I got all the medals!
Wanna See the bribery?
-Bust In
-Ram
-Shield
-Tow Cable
-Stone
-Bubble
-Bribery
Riley
07/21/11
I love that game! If you haven't, then play the first two games of the series. They're also fun.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/21/11
CYCLOPS WHISPYYYYYY
SecretAgent000
07/21/11
@Ultimate Yoshi:
...WHYCLOPS?
From Dream Adventures - Part 21
Original Author's Comment:
07/21/11
Oh, Korby, what ever would make you think that? :P
Oh, Korby, what ever would make you think that? :P
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
RedJac
07/21/11
Hi Brownie! :D
Djoing
07/21/11
Call him Dip.
y'know, like 'chocolate dip'?
epicness
07/21/11
Leon:...this is madnesss...
and dont start a 300 meme.yes and i mean you epicness
Me:Awwwww...
guestuser
07/21/11
Mmmm... brownies. and when are you going to update Y&K?
DarkMario1000
07/21/11
I don't know when I'll make 'em, though.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/21/11
Crap... Now I want something sweet to eat. >_<
DarkNut255
07/22/11
What about Muffin?
ClowCard
07/22/11
I want Brownies
guestuser
07/22/11
I always want something sweet to eat. XD
guestuser
10/16/11
Why not name him "Braun" or "rosolare" or "toste" or "Taman"
guestuser
02/20/14
How about Brown kirby?
Thecommander248
11/14/14
"proceeded"?
Ultimate Yoshi
11/14/14
Thecommander248: Huh. Again, good eye. You don't need to take up that tone in your comments, though. It comes off as condescending.
Thecommander248
11/14/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Yeah, sorry about the tone. I didn't mean to make it sound rude. Right now I'm on a binge with this comic and I found it hard to jump back and forth between this and KDA. For future read throughs (that's not a real word...) of this crossover, I saved every page of BSX's pages and yours in a folder so that the story is in the correct order. It took a while and I was kind of rushing through it and making comments without thinking. I know that comics on Keenspot can be edited and reloaded without causing problems to site or comic navigation, so I figured I would just quickly point out mistakes I saw as I went along in case you able to (and want) to fix them.
Whoo. Okay, sorry. I'm long-winded when I'm not in a rush. XD I'm kind of annoyed that I'm not notified when I receive a reply. I kind of just stumbled on your reply to me when I looked at your profile for your other webcomics. Are we notified when we receive a reply; am I missing a feature that SmackJeeves has installed?
Ultimate Yoshi
11/14/14
Thecommander248: By replying to somebody, that somebody should get a notification in their email.
Thecommander248
11/14/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Ah thanks. Had the wrong email set up with my account then.
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Color fix again.
I also fixed a typo in panel 2 of the word "proceeded".
07/21/11
Hi Brownie! :D
Djoing
07/21/11
Call him Dip.
y'know, like 'chocolate dip'?
epicness
07/21/11
Leon:...this is madnesss...
and dont start a 300 meme.yes and i mean you epicness
Me:Awwwww...
guestuser
07/21/11
Mmmm... brownies. and when are you going to update Y&K?
DarkMario1000
07/21/11
I don't know when I'll make 'em, though.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/21/11
Crap... Now I want something sweet to eat. >_<
DarkNut255
07/22/11
What about Muffin?
ClowCard
07/22/11
I want Brownies
guestuser
07/22/11
I always want something sweet to eat. XD
guestuser
10/16/11
Why not name him "Braun" or "rosolare" or "toste" or "Taman"
guestuser
02/20/14
How about Brown kirby?
Thecommander248
11/14/14
"proceeded"?
Ultimate Yoshi
11/14/14
Thecommander248: Huh. Again, good eye. You don't need to take up that tone in your comments, though. It comes off as condescending.
Thecommander248
11/14/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Yeah, sorry about the tone. I didn't mean to make it sound rude. Right now I'm on a binge with this comic and I found it hard to jump back and forth between this and KDA. For future read throughs (that's not a real word...) of this crossover, I saved every page of BSX's pages and yours in a folder so that the story is in the correct order. It took a while and I was kind of rushing through it and making comments without thinking. I know that comics on Keenspot can be edited and reloaded without causing problems to site or comic navigation, so I figured I would just quickly point out mistakes I saw as I went along in case you able to (and want) to fix them.
Whoo. Okay, sorry. I'm long-winded when I'm not in a rush. XD I'm kind of annoyed that I'm not notified when I receive a reply. I kind of just stumbled on your reply to me when I looked at your profile for your other webcomics. Are we notified when we receive a reply; am I missing a feature that SmackJeeves has installed?
Ultimate Yoshi
11/14/14
Thecommander248: By replying to somebody, that somebody should get a notification in their email.
Thecommander248
11/14/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Ah thanks. Had the wrong email set up with my account then.
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Color fix again.
I also fixed a typo in panel 2 of the word "proceeded".
Rescue Mission - Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
Not all of BSX's early visuals hold up.
Original Author's Comment:
07/21/11
That's one bright little stick. Pity it doesn't seem to go into the area that's just a tiny step up. Yes, I did do that on purpose. Why? I'm weird.
By the way, we're roasting at a nice 100 degrees where I'm at today. Way. To. BLOODY. Hot.
How do you southerners put up with this heat?
That's one bright little stick. Pity it doesn't seem to go into the area that's just a tiny step up. Yes, I did do that on purpose. Why? I'm weird.
By the way, we're roasting at a nice 100 degrees where I'm at today. Way. To. BLOODY. Hot.
How do you southerners put up with this heat?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
07/21/11
Before we got the AC here,it was freaking blood helly hot...
and first comment!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/22/11
It's that hot here in Texas where I live and although I don't like too much heat, I prefer it better then winter weather. ^_^
EDIT: Easy. We either go swimming, have something to cool us down or go to places that are cool... THAT or we have frozen treats and cold stuff to eat/drink to help. ^_^ But eh, I'm one of those that can handle this weather since I'm a Texan. :3 Try walking over the black asphalt roads barefoot while you have your shoes in your hands because you were too lazy to put them on every now and then. Doing that in the heat and you got what I used to do when I was going to see a friend down the street in my hometown.
Gigi19972010
07/22/11
*Is not an American* I'm in winter! YAY! But it's not cold everyday, fall was colder than the winter. Weird. But today is pretty cold... And...I HATE SUMMER. I HATE SWIMMING POOLS. And I live in a tropical country... EXCELENT.
foxpuff
07/22/11
There are heat waves here in Canada too. I was roasting for a few days and days to come.
Striffen Cloud
07/22/11
Yeah, Keebs, that may have been a good idea....
Ultimate Yoshi
07/22/11
Think you may need to work on your lighting effect. That square border looks incredibly unrealistic, and considering the world this comic takes place in, that's saying something.
MentalKnight64
07/23/11
You usually get used to it. If not buy an AC. Hey Andromeda you live I Texas too.
plasma_knight303
09/24/11
I'm in Nebraska...
Gracia warrior
04/02/14
I'm indonesian,atcully with AC too and eat the ice cream :D
That's good and cool with summer
07/21/11
Before we got the AC here,it was freaking blood helly hot...
and first comment!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/22/11
It's that hot here in Texas where I live and although I don't like too much heat, I prefer it better then winter weather. ^_^
EDIT: Easy. We either go swimming, have something to cool us down or go to places that are cool... THAT or we have frozen treats and cold stuff to eat/drink to help. ^_^ But eh, I'm one of those that can handle this weather since I'm a Texan. :3 Try walking over the black asphalt roads barefoot while you have your shoes in your hands because you were too lazy to put them on every now and then. Doing that in the heat and you got what I used to do when I was going to see a friend down the street in my hometown.
Gigi19972010
07/22/11
*Is not an American* I'm in winter! YAY! But it's not cold everyday, fall was colder than the winter. Weird. But today is pretty cold... And...I HATE SUMMER. I HATE SWIMMING POOLS. And I live in a tropical country... EXCELENT.
foxpuff
07/22/11
There are heat waves here in Canada too. I was roasting for a few days and days to come.
Striffen Cloud
07/22/11
Yeah, Keebs, that may have been a good idea....
Ultimate Yoshi
07/22/11
Think you may need to work on your lighting effect. That square border looks incredibly unrealistic, and considering the world this comic takes place in, that's saying something.
MentalKnight64
07/23/11
You usually get used to it. If not buy an AC. Hey Andromeda you live I Texas too.
plasma_knight303
09/24/11
I'm in Nebraska...
Gracia warrior
04/02/14
I'm indonesian,atcully with AC too and eat the ice cream :D
That's good and cool with summer
From Dream Adventures - Part 22
Ulti's Notes:
God, when all the names get listed out like that, it just turns the entire speech bubble into a confounding mess. Let this be an extreme example of why naming variety is important. For a reader's sake, characters need to stand out effectively, which is doubly important when all of the visuals and silhouettes are more-or-less shared between them as is the case with Kirby recolors like this. My methodology was unorthodox and had issues, but man, BSX... No offense, but goddamn was this naming convention really bad lmao
Original Author's Comment:
07/23/11
Duhn duhn DUUUUUUUHN!!!
Duhn duhn DUUUUUUUHN!!!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
07/23/11
I have seen your Many Comics,They are Good,And Funny.Can i know How often did you update the Comic?So i wont Miss it. <(-^v^-)>
Fusion Kirby
07/23/11
He updates whenever he feels like it.
DarkMario1000
07/23/11
Questions just get asked…"What could possibly go wrong?"
BattleStarX
07/23/11
Poor Karby, stuck carryin' Kirby.
guestuser
07/23/11
...You mean Korby?
I mean, you CREATED her...
BattleStarX
07/24/11
Even I forget all the names of my kirbies.
07/23/11
I have seen your Many Comics,They are Good,And Funny.Can i know How often did you update the Comic?So i wont Miss it. <(-^v^-)>
Fusion Kirby
07/23/11
He updates whenever he feels like it.
DarkMario1000
07/23/11
Questions just get asked…"What could possibly go wrong?"
BattleStarX
07/23/11
Poor Karby, stuck carryin' Kirby.
guestuser
07/23/11
...You mean Korby?
I mean, you CREATED her...
BattleStarX
07/24/11
Even I forget all the names of my kirbies.
Rescue Mission - Part 7
Original Author's Comment:
07/22/11
This mission's off to a great start, isn't it?
This mission's off to a great start, isn't it?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
greenpowerstar
07/22/11
Poor Kirby...
Kirbysmith [DJ]
07/22/11
Why didn't Kaxo think of that before?
Striffen Cloud
07/23/11
He was still wet.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/23/11
Weird devil face is weird.
BattleStarX
07/23/11
Normal's over-rated anyways.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/24/11
THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS NORMAL!!!
07/22/11
Poor Kirby...
Kirbysmith [DJ]
07/22/11
Why didn't Kaxo think of that before?
Striffen Cloud
07/23/11
He was still wet.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/23/11
Weird devil face is weird.
BattleStarX
07/23/11
Normal's over-rated anyways.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/24/11
THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS NORMAL!!!
From Dream Adventures - Part 23
Ulti's Notes:
I... think this was a reference to the exact same kind of event happening in an earlier KDA page? I could be mistaken in my memory, though. Either way, Kirby likes tomatoes, and Korby is red, thus Kirby ate Korby (temporarily).
Original Author's Comment:
07/23/11
I couldn't resist.
I couldn't resist.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Fusion Kirby
07/23/11
A DOUBLE POSTING?
This is exactly like cake. IT'S A LIE!!!
RedJac
07/24/11
He ate Korby! :O
link1566
07/24/11
@ Ultimate Yoshi : Will you start updating the mokees comic?
BattleStarX
07/24/11
Well, there goes all her shock therapy progress.
foxpuff
07/24/11
And that's what happens when one is round and red and someone thinking that one is a tomato.
guestuser
07/24/11
Awesome new avatar, Ulti!
DarkMario1000
07/24/11
I didn't expect that to happen.
Ah. You have made a new profile pic, UY. And it's a Yoshi…I choose black whenever I'm doin' 10 HP on Paper Mario 2!!!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/24/11
I thought they had this problem dealt with the last time with the 'tomato' situation.
guestuser
08/01/11
BattleStarX:
Wait, Korby's a girl?
guestuser
06/10/14
Do more of this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D
07/23/11
A DOUBLE POSTING?
This is exactly like cake. IT'S A LIE!!!
RedJac
07/24/11
He ate Korby! :O
link1566
07/24/11
@ Ultimate Yoshi : Will you start updating the mokees comic?
BattleStarX
07/24/11
Well, there goes all her shock therapy progress.
foxpuff
07/24/11
And that's what happens when one is round and red and someone thinking that one is a tomato.
guestuser
07/24/11
Awesome new avatar, Ulti!
DarkMario1000
07/24/11
I didn't expect that to happen.
Ah. You have made a new profile pic, UY. And it's a Yoshi…I choose black whenever I'm doin' 10 HP on Paper Mario 2!!!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/24/11
I thought they had this problem dealt with the last time with the 'tomato' situation.
guestuser
08/01/11
BattleStarX:
Wait, Korby's a girl?
guestuser
06/10/14
Do more of this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D
Rescue Mission - Part 8
Original Author's Comment:
07/23/11
Just what exactly is "that?"
Just what exactly is "that?"
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
1ce_k1d
07/23/11
THE WALL!
Gobbler9
07/24/11
1. "That" is probably a big giant machine thingy. 2. Last comic said Pt. 7, and so does this one. Why?
BattleStarX
07/24/11
Because Google Chrome doesn't show the whole list of comics with the same name and I forget, which is when I see you all tell me, and I fix it.
Frosty Yoshi
07/24/11
Eh, can "that" be: flashy fireworks? Sparkling stars? Or just any kind of, ummmm... light-giving... light? I know, it sounds stupid...
Ultimate Yoshi
07/24/11
Looks like Caiya's in her smarter personality now. Her donut personality would never be able to say that sentence coherently.
07/23/11
THE WALL!
Gobbler9
07/24/11
1. "That" is probably a big giant machine thingy. 2. Last comic said Pt. 7, and so does this one. Why?
BattleStarX
07/24/11
Because Google Chrome doesn't show the whole list of comics with the same name and I forget, which is when I see you all tell me, and I fix it.
Frosty Yoshi
07/24/11
Eh, can "that" be: flashy fireworks? Sparkling stars? Or just any kind of, ummmm... light-giving... light? I know, it sounds stupid...
Ultimate Yoshi
07/24/11
Looks like Caiya's in her smarter personality now. Her donut personality would never be able to say that sentence coherently.
From Dream Adventures - Part 24
Ulti's Notes:
When first discussing Shadik way back in the First Mission, I mentioned some of his inspirations. The gray Karby here was one of those exact inspirations, so when writing him? He basically just got to be the temporary Shadik replacement while Shadik himself was off in KDA-territory.
It did mean he wound up being very underutilized, though. Part of why I had a bit of confusion from the red Korby as to where the gray Karby was was because I had actually forgotten to do anything with Karby until that moment. Every crossover I did wound up having a bit of an underutilized character, though, which is a sign that perhaps smaller cast usages will result in better products when you work with 40-page segments like this.
It did mean he wound up being very underutilized, though. Part of why I had a bit of confusion from the red Korby as to where the gray Karby was was because I had actually forgotten to do anything with Karby until that moment. Every crossover I did wound up having a bit of an underutilized character, though, which is a sign that perhaps smaller cast usages will result in better products when you work with 40-page segments like this.
Original Author's Comment:
07/24/11
That was fast.
That was fast.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
07/24/11
I was just about to comment that he reminded me of Shadik...Curse you Shat'l!
Striffen Cloud
07/24/11
Shat'l read your mind, Tygah. :)
RedJac
07/24/11
Spooky~
DarkNut255
07/24/11
Well, Karby CAN speak. He just doesn't much.
http://kirbyda.smackjeeves.com/comics/805296/the-meeting-pt-7/
Andromeda Lazuli
07/24/11
*laughs so much that can't breathe*
BattleStarX
07/24/11
Yeah, he prefers to be quiet, but will talk if absolutely necessary.
guestuser
07/24/11
Karby can speak different of Shadik, BUT, like Shadik, Karby is awesome.
guestuser
07/25/11
Two comics in Kirby's stomach... it's a new record! (I think...)
Nice new avatar, BTW. Will Ultimate Yoshi (the character)have a role too in one of your comics? Maybe he has the same function as Ultimate Kirby in Y&K 2.0...
And now the unrelated-but-not-so-random-question: have any of you users (not guests) encountered any viruses during or after the making of your account? Free things seem a bit suspicious, don't you think?
guestuser
07/25/11
That's why I don't trust psychics...
MentalKnight64
07/27/11
No more than usual mostly cause my computers older than dirt. but I never join anything so yeah nothing.
SkyyKirby44
07/18/12
Like twins practically :T
guestuser
06/10/14
What does Kirby's stomach look like?
Thecommander248
11/14/14
"I'm not sure..."?
Ultimate Yoshi
11/14/14
Thecommander248: Wow, good eye. Not a single person noticed this typo in three years, including myself.
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Color fix.
I also fixed a sentence in panel two, where I was originally lacking the word "not" in Shat'l's line.
07/24/11
I was just about to comment that he reminded me of Shadik...Curse you Shat'l!
Striffen Cloud
07/24/11
Shat'l read your mind, Tygah. :)
RedJac
07/24/11
Spooky~
DarkNut255
07/24/11
Well, Karby CAN speak. He just doesn't much.
http://kirbyda.smackjeeves.com/comics/805296/the-meeting-pt-7/
Andromeda Lazuli
07/24/11
*laughs so much that can't breathe*
BattleStarX
07/24/11
Yeah, he prefers to be quiet, but will talk if absolutely necessary.
guestuser
07/24/11
Karby can speak different of Shadik, BUT, like Shadik, Karby is awesome.
guestuser
07/25/11
Two comics in Kirby's stomach... it's a new record! (I think...)
Nice new avatar, BTW. Will Ultimate Yoshi (the character)have a role too in one of your comics? Maybe he has the same function as Ultimate Kirby in Y&K 2.0...
And now the unrelated-but-not-so-random-question: have any of you users (not guests) encountered any viruses during or after the making of your account? Free things seem a bit suspicious, don't you think?
guestuser
07/25/11
That's why I don't trust psychics...
MentalKnight64
07/27/11
No more than usual mostly cause my computers older than dirt. but I never join anything so yeah nothing.
SkyyKirby44
07/18/12
Like twins practically :T
guestuser
06/10/14
What does Kirby's stomach look like?
Thecommander248
11/14/14
"I'm not sure..."?
Ultimate Yoshi
11/14/14
Thecommander248: Wow, good eye. Not a single person noticed this typo in three years, including myself.
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Color fix.
I also fixed a sentence in panel two, where I was originally lacking the word "not" in Shat'l's line.
Rescue Mission - Part 9
Ulti's Notes:
The clever spriter's friend, off-screen objects that can simply be explained away through dialogue. It's a bit lazy, visually, perhaps, but it gets the job done, especially if you lack the artistic skills to customize something yourself. I certainly don't blame BSX for this approach, especially considering the lighting effects he was trying to make just a few pages ago.
Original Author's Comment:
07/24/11
Just because Keeby's working for him, doesn't mean he really respects the KA Kirby.
Who's the trap for, you're asking? Don't worry, it won't be a long, dragged out thing.
And yes, I don't show ALL the KA Kirbies at once all that often. Just gets too crowded. Don't worry, Kaxo and Vezo are there... oh wait, maybe you should worry.
Just because Keeby's working for him, doesn't mean he really respects the KA Kirby.
Who's the trap for, you're asking? Don't worry, it won't be a long, dragged out thing.
And yes, I don't show ALL the KA Kirbies at once all that often. Just gets too crowded. Don't worry, Kaxo and Vezo are there... oh wait, maybe you should worry.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
1ce_k1d
07/24/11
Uhhhhhhhh.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/25/11
It's not that she's an idiot, it's just that she has a multi-personality disorder that can't be fixed... THAT or she has really, REALLY bad mood swings! XD
07/24/11
Uhhhhhhhh.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/25/11
It's not that she's an idiot, it's just that she has a multi-personality disorder that can't be fixed... THAT or she has really, REALLY bad mood swings! XD
From Dream Adventures - Part 25
Ulti's Notes:
I never explained how Saia knew that Raize found Klooshy, but I believe I intended it to be Shat'l sending her a telepathic message or something? Because sure, why not give even MORE powers to the lore-breaking character, why not.
At least this time, it wasn't stated on-screen, so I can just pretend it never happened and that Saia found out through some other, indetermined method.
At least this time, it wasn't stated on-screen, so I can just pretend it never happened and that Saia found out through some other, indetermined method.
Original Author's Comment:
07/25/11
Why WOULDN'T he be upside-down? :P
Why WOULDN'T he be upside-down? :P
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
1ce_k1d
07/25/11
Fanhal's a zombie?
TouhouShake
07/25/11
He got thrown... duh... XD
BattleStarX
07/25/11
The PLANTS!
guestuser
07/25/11
Poor Fanhal... Even as leader of Division B, he still gets tormented... just not by Kaxo.
RedJac
07/25/11
They're coming~
DarkNut255
07/26/11
Upside-down... ness...
Andromeda Lazuli
07/26/11
Ouch... Sucks to be him now. <:(
guestuser
07/26/11
Must have been a cactus...they're dangerous
guestuser
07/26/11
Noooo.... don't you remember the part where Fanhal was trying to grow a Mega Tomato?
guestuser
07/26/11
Wait...ZOMBIE?!?
Quick, somebody go get the lawnmowers set up in the yard, while I go get the Pea Shooter, Snow Pea, Repeater, and Wall-Nut seeds!
Those zombies ain't gettin' past THIS yard!
(...I wonder how many people will get the reference...)
guestuser
07/26/11
I see what you did there.
~There's a Zombie on your lawn! There's a Zombie on your lawn.~
guestuser
10/20/11
OMG plants vs zombies refrence.
guestuser
01/02/12
Melima isn't on the cast page.
guestuser
01/12/17
@SecretAgent000:that wasn't exactly hidden.
07/25/11
Fanhal's a zombie?
TouhouShake
07/25/11
He got thrown... duh... XD
BattleStarX
07/25/11
The PLANTS!
guestuser
07/25/11
Poor Fanhal... Even as leader of Division B, he still gets tormented... just not by Kaxo.
RedJac
07/25/11
They're coming~
DarkNut255
07/26/11
Upside-down... ness...
Andromeda Lazuli
07/26/11
Ouch... Sucks to be him now. <:(
guestuser
07/26/11
Must have been a cactus...they're dangerous
guestuser
07/26/11
Noooo.... don't you remember the part where Fanhal was trying to grow a Mega Tomato?
guestuser
07/26/11
Wait...ZOMBIE?!?
Quick, somebody go get the lawnmowers set up in the yard, while I go get the Pea Shooter, Snow Pea, Repeater, and Wall-Nut seeds!
Those zombies ain't gettin' past THIS yard!
(...I wonder how many people will get the reference...)
guestuser
07/26/11
I see what you did there.
~There's a Zombie on your lawn! There's a Zombie on your lawn.~
guestuser
10/20/11
OMG plants vs zombies refrence.
guestuser
01/02/12
Melima isn't on the cast page.
guestuser
01/12/17
@SecretAgent000:that wasn't exactly hidden.
Rescue Mission - Part 10
Original Author's Comment:
07/25/11
Another self-explanatory comic, though I bet you're wondering what Kaxo and Vezo are up to off-camera. If you're a long time reader, you know that I'll never show you. I'm just evil like that.
And yes, that is Mirror Kirby. Remember, he talks with black boxes and pink text.
Another self-explanatory comic, though I bet you're wondering what Kaxo and Vezo are up to off-camera. If you're a long time reader, you know that I'll never show you. I'm just evil like that.
And yes, that is Mirror Kirby. Remember, he talks with black boxes and pink text.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
SecretAgent000
07/26/11
KAXO!
Mirror Kirby was talking to Keeby, not you, and I'm FAILRY certain that he didn't mean it literally.
TouhouShake
07/26/11
Burn it all! Burn it all!!! XD
07/26/11
KAXO!
Mirror Kirby was talking to Keeby, not you, and I'm FAILRY certain that he didn't mean it literally.
TouhouShake
07/26/11
Burn it all! Burn it all!!! XD
From Dream Adventures - Part 26
Ulti's Notes:
You can basically pay these three characters no mind at all. They're the three Division B members who work for Fanhal, but they get so underutilized going forward that they're really, really not worth remembering. They exist, here they are, their names are Pyra, Lycor and Farore, but you really don't need to worry about them. I'll provide a reminder whenever they pop up, because retention of who they are isn't worth the brainpower.
Original Author's Comment:
07/27/11
More new characters! This is a really great time to just place in characters that are necessary to have somewhere. Meet Lycor, Pyra, and Farore, who are members of Division B under Fanhal. Look at that respect Pyra shows him. That's more than can be said for 60% of Division A. And 100% of Division C.
I love how nobody can tell what Kaaby's doing to the base yet. She's got quite the energy.
Don't you just love how much the sound effects change in this comic? Aside from Shadik's Shadow Jump, I don't think that's ever changed before.
Been a while since I've had more than one sentence for actual commentary here. Here's another sentence! And another! And another! They just keep coming! :P
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
More new characters! This is a really great time to just place in characters that are necessary to have somewhere. Meet Lycor, Pyra, and Farore, who are members of Division B under Fanhal. Look at that respect Pyra shows him. That's more than can be said for 60% of Division A. And 100% of Division C.
I love how nobody can tell what Kaaby's doing to the base yet. She's got quite the energy.
Don't you just love how much the sound effects change in this comic? Aside from Shadik's Shadow Jump, I don't think that's ever changed before.
Been a while since I've had more than one sentence for actual commentary here. Here's another sentence! And another! And another! They just keep coming! :P
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkNut255
07/27/11
Now make them a profile for the cast page!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/27/11
CAN'T BREATHE! CAN'T BREATHE!!! XD
BattleStarX
07/27/11
Good ol' Kaaby. Though I'm beginning to wonder what she's doin' to the base.
guestuser
07/27/11
I agree with DarkNut; make them a profile in the "Minor Characters and Cameos" section. And make one for Meliai.
Gigi19972010
07/27/11
When I first saw Pyra, I thought he/she had no shading. Then I found out it's too bright... Anyways, who are male and who are female? I honestly want to know but I can't... =P
Edit: Why are you already asking him for a profile in the cast page? He has just showed them, lol.
star kirby12
07/27/11
I bet it's TALZO
Air Man1 21
07/27/11
1.Is Kaaby adding...
A.Spikes?
B.Lots of cannons?
C.A Third floor?
D.None of the above
Place your guesses!
TouhouShake
07/27/11
I know! I know! A LAVA PIT! *gets shot*
DarkMario1000
07/27/11
She's adding…SOMETHING! =0
guestuser
07/28/11
It's good to know that the crossover is actually affecting the status quo of both comics...
Also, Yoshi and Kirby hasn't been updated in quite some time. But I understand. You're focusing more of your energy on this mega-crossover. I'll continue to be patient in regards to Y&K.
Frosty Yoshi
07/28/11
Very nice!
...Okay, I'm not here just to say that (but it's true).
I'll be gone for a small vacation and I'll be back on saturday evening or sunday morning; it depends if I feel tired on saturday. Oh and saturday evening might be saturday midday for the Americans here. (I'm not sure 'bout the Australians or other people, sorry.) This also means that morning equals night, to you Americans at least.
foxpuff
07/28/11
Just like that. Kicked out. Even though it was teleport.
castleofwarriors
12/04/11
Farore? Does the fictional Divison E have Din and Nayru on it?
Divine Knight
02/26/12
I see what you did there.
guestuser
03/20/12
BlueyKid:
...Really? You seriously mistook a character with a completely different shade of blue for Talzo? And a character who was in the KAS base and not being attacked on sight? AND a character EXPLICITLY INTRODUCED IN THE AUTHOR'S COMMENT? ...You're starting to worry me.
pixlyJolt
08/30/18
Plusle Minun Cameo?
pixlyJolt
08/30/18
You idiot he’s talking about the one that kicked him through the PORTAL. Ugh, guests.
07/27/11
Now make them a profile for the cast page!
Andromeda Lazuli
07/27/11
CAN'T BREATHE! CAN'T BREATHE!!! XD
BattleStarX
07/27/11
Good ol' Kaaby. Though I'm beginning to wonder what she's doin' to the base.
guestuser
07/27/11
I agree with DarkNut; make them a profile in the "Minor Characters and Cameos" section. And make one for Meliai.
Gigi19972010
07/27/11
When I first saw Pyra, I thought he/she had no shading. Then I found out it's too bright... Anyways, who are male and who are female? I honestly want to know but I can't... =P
Edit: Why are you already asking him for a profile in the cast page? He has just showed them, lol.
star kirby12
07/27/11
I bet it's TALZO
Air Man1 21
07/27/11
1.Is Kaaby adding...
A.Spikes?
B.Lots of cannons?
C.A Third floor?
D.None of the above
Place your guesses!
TouhouShake
07/27/11
I know! I know! A LAVA PIT! *gets shot*
DarkMario1000
07/27/11
She's adding…SOMETHING! =0
guestuser
07/28/11
It's good to know that the crossover is actually affecting the status quo of both comics...
Also, Yoshi and Kirby hasn't been updated in quite some time. But I understand. You're focusing more of your energy on this mega-crossover. I'll continue to be patient in regards to Y&K.
Frosty Yoshi
07/28/11
Very nice!
...Okay, I'm not here just to say that (but it's true).
I'll be gone for a small vacation and I'll be back on saturday evening or sunday morning; it depends if I feel tired on saturday. Oh and saturday evening might be saturday midday for the Americans here. (I'm not sure 'bout the Australians or other people, sorry.) This also means that morning equals night, to you Americans at least.
foxpuff
07/28/11
Just like that. Kicked out. Even though it was teleport.
castleofwarriors
12/04/11
Farore? Does the fictional Divison E have Din and Nayru on it?
Divine Knight
02/26/12
I see what you did there.
guestuser
03/20/12
BlueyKid:
...Really? You seriously mistook a character with a completely different shade of blue for Talzo? And a character who was in the KAS base and not being attacked on sight? AND a character EXPLICITLY INTRODUCED IN THE AUTHOR'S COMMENT? ...You're starting to worry me.
pixlyJolt
08/30/18
Plusle Minun Cameo?
pixlyJolt
08/30/18
You idiot he’s talking about the one that kicked him through the PORTAL. Ugh, guests.
Rescue Mission - Part 11
Ulti's Notes:
Remember the annotation where I mentioned how Shadow Kirby was sometimes mistakenly referred to as Mirror Kirby due to a myriad of factors? Well, here's another reason why I had Kirby back there need to be pointed out Shadow Kirby's actual name: because the other popular Kirby comic on Smack Jeeves was calling him Mirror Kirby! See, it makes a bit more sense now.
The use of KA Kirby here, as well as my own small use of Shadow Kirby in The Beginning, allowed BSX to at least explain a bit of the naming discrepancy by having his Mirror Kirby hate the name Shadow Kirby. And hey, here's more proof of KDA characters considering Keeby to be cruel and evil.
This also feels like an important time to mention Kaxo, and the major problems with the way BSX and I wrote the crossover. See, our methodologies were to basically not communicate with each other beyond the initial "hey, wanna make a crossover?" private messages, and comments on each others' new pages as they'd come out. BSX and I didn't coordinate much at all, nor did we provide each other with any details or information that wasn't already present in the visible pages of KA and KDA.
This wound up becoming a problem for Kaxo in particular, because I knew the sort of vibe that I wanted with Kaxo, that being a violent jerk with a bit of a heart of gold deep down... but visibly, to anyone else? Kaxo was mostly just a pyromaniac asshole with a major violent streak. And considering how Kaxo's first real page in KA was him needlessly beating up random Dream Land creatures, I really cannot blame anyone for having this interpretation of Kaxo.
Needless to say, my point is that this behavior here for Kaxo, where he's off-screen apparently severely harming Vezo for no reason, is out-of-character for him. It was easy enough to gloss over and ignore, though, since it was off-screen and mostly a minor joke in the grand scheme of things, so it was very possible to ignore moving forward. This... would come back to bite me severely later, though, but that's a story for another annotation. In the end, just remember that coordination and communication is the key to success, and so the lesson here is that BSX and especially I needed to talk to each other about our characters and expected crossover-plots before we actually did anything.
The use of KA Kirby here, as well as my own small use of Shadow Kirby in The Beginning, allowed BSX to at least explain a bit of the naming discrepancy by having his Mirror Kirby hate the name Shadow Kirby. And hey, here's more proof of KDA characters considering Keeby to be cruel and evil.
This also feels like an important time to mention Kaxo, and the major problems with the way BSX and I wrote the crossover. See, our methodologies were to basically not communicate with each other beyond the initial "hey, wanna make a crossover?" private messages, and comments on each others' new pages as they'd come out. BSX and I didn't coordinate much at all, nor did we provide each other with any details or information that wasn't already present in the visible pages of KA and KDA.
This wound up becoming a problem for Kaxo in particular, because I knew the sort of vibe that I wanted with Kaxo, that being a violent jerk with a bit of a heart of gold deep down... but visibly, to anyone else? Kaxo was mostly just a pyromaniac asshole with a major violent streak. And considering how Kaxo's first real page in KA was him needlessly beating up random Dream Land creatures, I really cannot blame anyone for having this interpretation of Kaxo.
Needless to say, my point is that this behavior here for Kaxo, where he's off-screen apparently severely harming Vezo for no reason, is out-of-character for him. It was easy enough to gloss over and ignore, though, since it was off-screen and mostly a minor joke in the grand scheme of things, so it was very possible to ignore moving forward. This... would come back to bite me severely later, though, but that's a story for another annotation. In the end, just remember that coordination and communication is the key to success, and so the lesson here is that BSX and especially I needed to talk to each other about our characters and expected crossover-plots before we actually did anything.
Original Author's Comment:
07/26/11
You have to admit, "Shadow Kirby" does sound some-what evil.
You have to admit, "Shadow Kirby" does sound some-what evil.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Andromeda Lazuli
07/27/11
OMG! CAN'T STOP LAUGHING NOW!!! XD
Poyo
07/27/11
Last Panel..
Everyone has the same face...
Gigi19972010
07/27/11
I LOVE Shadow Kirby. =D
DarkNut255
07/27/11
Kaxo's one weakness.
TouhouShake
07/27/11
Heh heh... classic. XD
epicness
07/27/11
hey!why you deleted my comment?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/27/11
I actually forgot that your Mirror Kirby is the Shadow Kirby of this world.
BattleStarX
07/27/11
@ epicness: I've been purging number comments from the site. It's what I do, from time to time.
Fighter Dee
07/29/11
I don't think so. Just because it's shadow doesn't have to be evil. Kaxo shouldn't had did nothing.
07/27/11
OMG! CAN'T STOP LAUGHING NOW!!! XD
Poyo
07/27/11
Last Panel..
Everyone has the same face...
Gigi19972010
07/27/11
I LOVE Shadow Kirby. =D
DarkNut255
07/27/11
Kaxo's one weakness.
TouhouShake
07/27/11
Heh heh... classic. XD
epicness
07/27/11
hey!why you deleted my comment?
Ultimate Yoshi
07/27/11
I actually forgot that your Mirror Kirby is the Shadow Kirby of this world.
BattleStarX
07/27/11
@ epicness: I've been purging number comments from the site. It's what I do, from time to time.
Fighter Dee
07/29/11
I don't think so. Just because it's shadow doesn't have to be evil. Kaxo shouldn't had did nothing.
From Dream Adventures - Part 27
Ulti's Notes:
I do think it's fun to work with a character who's all to happy to point out a problem with someone else's idea, but is too lazy to bother coming up with anything on his own. A problem sharer, but not a problem solver OR causer. He just notices them and lets others do the work, it's amusing.
Original Author's Comment:
07/28/11
Kibby has a point.
Kibby has a point.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Alienoid
07/28/11
Jarkes can help!
BattleStarX
07/28/11
Ah, laziness can make for great logic sometimes.
RedJac
07/29/11
Ow...now my head hurts!
07/28/11
Jarkes can help!
BattleStarX
07/28/11
Ah, laziness can make for great logic sometimes.
RedJac
07/29/11
Ow...now my head hurts!
Rescue Mission - Part 12
Ulti's Notes:
In a lot of Kirby games, room transitions tend to be done through large black floating doors with stars hovering above them. It's questionable whether or not these doors are diagetic and actually present within the world of Kirby, or just features for the game design and mere representations of moving through the world condensed for the sake of a video game.
Kirby & The Amazing Mirror, the game that Shadow Kirby (or Mirror Kirby here) is from, is a bit special in that its room transitions aren't done through black doors, but instead doorways that look like mirrors. Since the game takes place in the Mirror World, it's a bit of UI design that makes sense and adds to the theming of the game and its unique world.
BSX, when bringing Shadow Kirby into his comic as Mirror Kirby, decided to take those mirror doorways and confirm (at least for KDA) that they were in-fact present in the world by stating that they were magical teleportation devices, and putting his Mirror Kirby in control of them. Thus, we get Keeby here asking for one such teleportation mirror.
While I'm here, I might as well point out that the name Volcanic Highlands is one BSX made up, it's not a real place from a Kirby game. Not that that's an issue, really, it's just something to point out.
Kirby & The Amazing Mirror, the game that Shadow Kirby (or Mirror Kirby here) is from, is a bit special in that its room transitions aren't done through black doors, but instead doorways that look like mirrors. Since the game takes place in the Mirror World, it's a bit of UI design that makes sense and adds to the theming of the game and its unique world.
BSX, when bringing Shadow Kirby into his comic as Mirror Kirby, decided to take those mirror doorways and confirm (at least for KDA) that they were in-fact present in the world by stating that they were magical teleportation devices, and putting his Mirror Kirby in control of them. Thus, we get Keeby here asking for one such teleportation mirror.
While I'm here, I might as well point out that the name Volcanic Highlands is one BSX made up, it's not a real place from a Kirby game. Not that that's an issue, really, it's just something to point out.
Original Author's Comment:
07/27/11
No, not the mirror that sent them to Mirror Land, but those little quick-teleport mirrors that you ran into all the time.
Handy buggers.
No, not the mirror that sent them to Mirror Land, but those little quick-teleport mirrors that you ran into all the time.
Handy buggers.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Kirbysmith [DJ]
07/27/11
Quiet, she's sleeping. Dawww.
Frosty Yoshi
07/28/11
What a boring conversation, look even Caiya became sleepy.
Just joking, it's a helpful conversation (though maybe a BIT boring... no offense though)
And now the unrelated-but-not-so-random-question-that-I-have-already-posted-on-KA-and-Y-&-K-2.0: have any of you users (not guests) encountered any viruses during or after the making of your account? Free things seem a bit suspicious, don't you think?
Oh and I'm not going to repeat why I'm gone for a few days; you can see that on: Kirby Adventure - From Dream Adventures - Part 26
Final question: why are my comments always that long?
Gobbler9
07/28/11
Caiya is ALWAYS sleeping!
BlagH
07/28/11
Yay i'm finally caught up on this comic! :)
*Blasted by an angry Caiya's freeze laser*
I'll shut up now.
Gigi19972010
07/28/11
@Frosty Yoshi:
I've never encountred any viruses, lol.
TouhouShake
07/28/11
@Frosty Yoshi:
I haven't. :/
Air Man1 21
07/28/11
@Frosty Yoshi:
I shank viruses.
Striffen Cloud
07/28/11
@Frosty: No
@Last Comic: Have I mentioned that I love Shadic?
@This Comic: Caiya's going to wake up as dumb Caiya. I'd bet five imagidollars on it.
BattleStarX
07/28/11
I'm with the others, I've never noticed any virus issues. In fact, I'd go as far as to say that Smackjeeves is one of the cleanest sites I've ever gone to.
Maybe it's because the lack of adds that normal members get. No adds means less chance of those weird flash virus.
MentalKnight64
10/02/11
@Striffen Cloud I'll see your ten Imagidollars and raise it to 50 madeupsos
plasma_knight303
11/14/11
I don't have viruses either.
07/27/11
Quiet, she's sleeping. Dawww.
Frosty Yoshi
07/28/11
What a boring conversation, look even Caiya became sleepy.
Just joking, it's a helpful conversation (though maybe a BIT boring... no offense though)
And now the unrelated-but-not-so-random-question-that-I-have-already-posted-on-KA-and-Y-&-K-2.0: have any of you users (not guests) encountered any viruses during or after the making of your account? Free things seem a bit suspicious, don't you think?
Oh and I'm not going to repeat why I'm gone for a few days; you can see that on: Kirby Adventure - From Dream Adventures - Part 26
Final question: why are my comments always that long?
Gobbler9
07/28/11
Caiya is ALWAYS sleeping!
BlagH
07/28/11
Yay i'm finally caught up on this comic! :)
*Blasted by an angry Caiya's freeze laser*
I'll shut up now.
Gigi19972010
07/28/11
@Frosty Yoshi:
I've never encountred any viruses, lol.
TouhouShake
07/28/11
@Frosty Yoshi:
I haven't. :/
Air Man1 21
07/28/11
@Frosty Yoshi:
I shank viruses.
Striffen Cloud
07/28/11
@Frosty: No
@Last Comic: Have I mentioned that I love Shadic?
@This Comic: Caiya's going to wake up as dumb Caiya. I'd bet five imagidollars on it.
BattleStarX
07/28/11
I'm with the others, I've never noticed any virus issues. In fact, I'd go as far as to say that Smackjeeves is one of the cleanest sites I've ever gone to.
Maybe it's because the lack of adds that normal members get. No adds means less chance of those weird flash virus.
MentalKnight64
10/02/11
@Striffen Cloud I'll see your ten Imagidollars and raise it to 50 madeupsos
plasma_knight303
11/14/11
I don't have viruses either.
From Dream Adventures - Part 28
Ulti's Notes:
This was intended as a context-less, throwaway gag to get out of explaining anything more about bringing the groups together. The crossover would be wrapping up shortly and I needed to wrangle the cast together, and since Keito expressed a desire to visit the infirmary and I already had Saia at the infirmary, it only made sense for these two to be the first two groups to meet up. But after last page, I didn't have an immediate answer to the purple Kibby's question of how to get past the cleaning Kaaby.
So, I just did it off-screen, and let Kibby explain it through this complete bit of nonsense. Kibby was super lazy and never showed any sort of sneakiness in any capacity previously, so the idea was that it'd be completely asinine and a probable lie.
However, the joke took on a new meaning when, after this in future KDA pages, BattleStarX actually showed Kibby as having pretty good ninja skills, hiding near-invisibly from others and being able to cling to walls, so this once again was like the interest-in-explosions thing where I unintentionally majorly impacted a KDA character via a gag. Woo.
So, I just did it off-screen, and let Kibby explain it through this complete bit of nonsense. Kibby was super lazy and never showed any sort of sneakiness in any capacity previously, so the idea was that it'd be completely asinine and a probable lie.
However, the joke took on a new meaning when, after this in future KDA pages, BattleStarX actually showed Kibby as having pretty good ninja skills, hiding near-invisibly from others and being able to cling to walls, so this once again was like the interest-in-explosions thing where I unintentionally majorly impacted a KDA character via a gag. Woo.
Original Author's Comment:
07/28/11
Missed yesterday's update due to illness, so have a double update!
Kibby is so totally a ninja in disguise.
Missed yesterday's update due to illness, so have a double update!
Kibby is so totally a ninja in disguise.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
TouhouShake
07/29/11
NINGA!! XD
BattleStarX
07/29/11
Hmm... possibilities...
1ce_k1d
07/29/11
NINJA
Cocytus
07/29/11
... wow... i did not see that coming... XDDD
Alienoid
07/29/11
At least I was right with the ninja part.
RedJac
07/29/11
OMG! He came out of nowhere, like a...like a...
Andromeda Lazuli
07/29/11
NINJA!!! XD
DarkNut255
07/29/11
My favorite ability! NINJA!
Striffen Cloud
07/29/11
" "How did you-"
"I'm a ninja" "
Has to have been one of the most common exchanges between me and my friends through ALL of high school. Ever.
Air Man1 21
07/30/11
I guessed ninja on the wrong comic =(
pixlyJolt
08/30/18
You were right! Unlike that idiot guest...
07/29/11
NINGA!! XD
BattleStarX
07/29/11
Hmm... possibilities...
1ce_k1d
07/29/11
NINJA
Cocytus
07/29/11
... wow... i did not see that coming... XDDD
Alienoid
07/29/11
At least I was right with the ninja part.
RedJac
07/29/11
OMG! He came out of nowhere, like a...like a...
Andromeda Lazuli
07/29/11
NINJA!!! XD
DarkNut255
07/29/11
My favorite ability! NINJA!
Striffen Cloud
07/29/11
" "How did you-"
"I'm a ninja" "
Has to have been one of the most common exchanges between me and my friends through ALL of high school. Ever.
Air Man1 21
07/30/11
I guessed ninja on the wrong comic =(
pixlyJolt
08/30/18
You were right! Unlike that idiot guest...
Rescue Mission - Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
The "RAWR!" in panel 2 is coming from the pit that Kaxo is looking down into. Previous comics showed Mirror Kirby as having some unseen, ferocious pet in that pit. It viciously attacked and traumatized one of the other KDA characters (can't recall which), so Kaxo taking the monstrous pet as some sort of challenge to fight was a bit of minor payoff to some of BSX's own build-up.
Original Author's Comment:
07/28/11
Kaxo's bad. Really bad. He may be the baddest kirby out there.
And no, I'm still not going to show you what Mirror Kirby's pet is. Why? Cause I'm evil. Very evil.
Fear the bad Kaxo and the evil Doo.
Kaxo's bad. Really bad. He may be the baddest kirby out there.
And no, I'm still not going to show you what Mirror Kirby's pet is. Why? Cause I'm evil. Very evil.
Fear the bad Kaxo and the evil Doo.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
1ce_k1d
07/28/11
NINJA
Sorry, worng comic.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/29/11
CAN'T BREATHE!!! *laughs too much until passing out*
TouhouShake
07/29/11
lol XD
Jerdude14487
07/29/11
HAH HAH!!! lol XD
Fighter Dee
07/29/11
Can Kaxo stand still and not hurt nothing for a single comic!
talons235
11/08/11
I am officially lost and confused on who's who here. Lol
Thecommander248
11/13/14
Shouldn't it be...
"Minions"?
07/28/11
NINJA
Sorry, worng comic.
Andromeda Lazuli
07/29/11
CAN'T BREATHE!!! *laughs too much until passing out*
TouhouShake
07/29/11
lol XD
Jerdude14487
07/29/11
HAH HAH!!! lol XD
Fighter Dee
07/29/11
Can Kaxo stand still and not hurt nothing for a single comic!
talons235
11/08/11
I am officially lost and confused on who's who here. Lol
Thecommander248
11/13/14
Shouldn't it be...
"Minions"?
From Dream Adventures - Part 29
Ulti's Notes:
...Oh.
Hey, so, I guess now you know that I've been writing these annotations as I go, and not after rereading the entire segment. I guess I did explain how Saia knew where Klooshy was on-screen.
Goddamn it, why did I canonically make Shat'l so overpowered? Why did I think that was a good idea? He has way too many skills, it's frustrating to look back on.
Hey, so, I guess now you know that I've been writing these annotations as I go, and not after rereading the entire segment. I guess I did explain how Saia knew where Klooshy was on-screen.
Goddamn it, why did I canonically make Shat'l so overpowered? Why did I think that was a good idea? He has way too many skills, it's frustrating to look back on.
Original Author's Comment:
07/30/11
Surprised nopo-BODY noticed this.
Surprised nopo-BODY noticed this.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
contradiction123
07/30/11
LOL He doesn't know Keeby. (Or DOES he?)
link1566
07/30/11
ya he does
look at the begging bar.it shows keeby in a cracked face
BattleStarX
07/30/11
Hmm... I wonder how the rest of the KA Kirbies would react to my Keeby.
(Posted on my 3DS while on the road.)
Andromeda Lazuli
07/30/11
*passes out from laughing too much*
RedJac
07/30/11
It's like TV in your head!
guestuser
07/30/11
Shat'l is psychic, shouldn't he know what he means?
07/30/11
LOL He doesn't know Keeby. (Or DOES he?)
link1566
07/30/11
ya he does
look at the begging bar.it shows keeby in a cracked face
BattleStarX
07/30/11
Hmm... I wonder how the rest of the KA Kirbies would react to my Keeby.
(Posted on my 3DS while on the road.)
Andromeda Lazuli
07/30/11
*passes out from laughing too much*
RedJac
07/30/11
It's like TV in your head!
guestuser
07/30/11
Shat'l is psychic, shouldn't he know what he means?
Rescue Mission - Part 14
Ulti's Notes:
Keeby's line about it taking so long for Mirror Kirby to summon a mirror is a reference to an earlier KDA comic. You'll never guess what happened in it.
(Mirror Kirby took a while to summon a mirror. Shock and horror.)
(Mirror Kirby took a while to summon a mirror. Shock and horror.)
Original Author's Comment:
07/29/11
Ignoring the fact that Kaxo's idea of saying "hello" is torching them, Keeby really does his darnedest not to get along, doesn't he?
Ignoring the fact that Kaxo's idea of saying "hello" is torching them, Keeby really does his darnedest not to get along, doesn't he?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Andromeda Lazuli
07/29/11
O.o "..." I feel sorry for whatever is being turned into charcoal... Bar-b-que, anyone? ^_^ EDIT: OMG, I POSTED FIRST!!! XD
Air Man1 21
07/30/11
I hope Caiya freezes Kaxo so that he doesn't torch anybody else's pet.
epicness
07/30/11
how bizare,i'm busy camping right now with BBQ
Frosty Yoshi
07/30/11
Well... I'm back and I see Kaxo burnin' the "mintues" as well as some creature already. But Kaxo is like that. You might want to fix the "mintues", though...
Ultimate Yoshi
07/30/11
We didn't start the fire...
...Kaxo did.
Plowshare
01/11/14
Yea! Where's the fun in that?
07/29/11
O.o "..." I feel sorry for whatever is being turned into charcoal... Bar-b-que, anyone? ^_^ EDIT: OMG, I POSTED FIRST!!! XD
Air Man1 21
07/30/11
I hope Caiya freezes Kaxo so that he doesn't torch anybody else's pet.
epicness
07/30/11
how bizare,i'm busy camping right now with BBQ
Frosty Yoshi
07/30/11
Well... I'm back and I see Kaxo burnin' the "mintues" as well as some creature already. But Kaxo is like that. You might want to fix the "mintues", though...
Ultimate Yoshi
07/30/11
We didn't start the fire...
...Kaxo did.
Plowshare
01/11/14
Yea! Where's the fun in that?
From Dream Adventures - Part 30
Ulti's Notes:
The original version and revised version of this page have two completely different Panel 2's because of BattleStarX's page remakes. The original Panel 2 here was a panel remake I made of one of the early KDA pages, but when BSX was doing his own V2 project, that particular page got completely revamped to no longer have anything remotely similar to what I made.
So, when remaking the page, I instead took a completely different scene that better showed a visual representation of KDA Kirby and KDA Keeby spending time with each other. And also the Author Doo.
So, when remaking the page, I instead took a completely different scene that better showed a visual representation of KDA Kirby and KDA Keeby spending time with each other. And also the Author Doo.
Original Author's Comment:
07/31/11
I made panel 2 based on a panel from one of KDA's comic pages. See if you can figure out which one!
I also simply made it as an excuse to have at least one use for the Keeby (KDA version) sprite sheet I made.
Shat'l, I wish I could tell you he'll be fine, but it's up to BattleStarX whether that becomes true.
Knowing BSX, it probably won't be true.
Just because Shat'l wasn't present in The Beginning... doesn't mean he doesn't know the story.
New character pages shall be coming. I drew some of the new characters, they'll be on the fan art page in a second. Edit: Jarkes, rejoice! You made it onto the cast page! :D
I made panel 2 based on a panel from one of KDA's comic pages. See if you can figure out which one!
I also simply made it as an excuse to have at least one use for the Keeby (KDA version) sprite sheet I made.
Shat'l, I wish I could tell you he'll be fine, but it's up to BattleStarX whether that becomes true.
Knowing BSX, it probably won't be true.
Just because Shat'l wasn't present in The Beginning... doesn't mean he doesn't know the story.
New character pages shall be coming. I drew some of the new characters, they'll be on the fan art page in a second. Edit: Jarkes, rejoice! You made it onto the cast page! :D
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkNut255
07/31/11
Uh oh...
Kirbysmith [DJ]
07/31/11
Don't forget the mental scars that result from seeing your best friend try to plot against you.
Blast the Hunter
07/31/11
Graargh, I want to cameo as a villain with my sprites so much, but I fail at spriting, meaning I can't make my sprites in KSSU style. D:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/31/11
Tell you what.
I'll let you cameo with your Advance style sprites, as an exception to the rule, simply because I'm in need of a minor villain for the next segment and you're all to eager to give me one.
So PM me your sprites and a description of your character. :)
Ultimate Yoshi
07/31/11
Comment deleted. No cursing like that on this comic! >:(
DarkMario1000
07/31/11
I wish I coulda came and read that before you deleted it. Now I won't be able to see it. T_T
Gigi19972010
07/31/11
Speaking of cameos, is there at least a possibility to I cameo for the next segment? Cause after a guy (I don't remember who) who commented on Kirby's Spriters Resort gave me kind of the idea, I figured out it was good. :P
Ultimate Yoshi
07/31/11
Probably not next segment, but certainly later on, you can definitely have a cameo! Just PM me the sprites and a description of your character and your problem that the KAS shall solve (unless you're a villain, in which case I choose that last part).
Gigi19972010
07/31/11
OK then. But I'll PM everything later.
guestuser
07/31/11
Are you planning on bringing Talzo back ever?
guestuser
08/02/11
I'm confused. So in the alt. universe, Keeby is an evil boss and hates Kirby? Or am I missing something important as I usually do?
castleofwarriors
12/04/11
Uh... You used Keito in panel 2, not Keeby...
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Hey I have something I can actually talk about, cool. Panel 2 got completely changed to reflect the remade pages of early KDA. The original scene represented no longer existed, so I used a different one instead.
07/31/11
Uh oh...
Kirbysmith [DJ]
07/31/11
Don't forget the mental scars that result from seeing your best friend try to plot against you.
Blast the Hunter
07/31/11
Graargh, I want to cameo as a villain with my sprites so much, but I fail at spriting, meaning I can't make my sprites in KSSU style. D:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/31/11
Tell you what.
I'll let you cameo with your Advance style sprites, as an exception to the rule, simply because I'm in need of a minor villain for the next segment and you're all to eager to give me one.
So PM me your sprites and a description of your character. :)
Ultimate Yoshi
07/31/11
Comment deleted. No cursing like that on this comic! >:(
DarkMario1000
07/31/11
I wish I coulda came and read that before you deleted it. Now I won't be able to see it. T_T
Gigi19972010
07/31/11
Speaking of cameos, is there at least a possibility to I cameo for the next segment? Cause after a guy (I don't remember who) who commented on Kirby's Spriters Resort gave me kind of the idea, I figured out it was good. :P
Ultimate Yoshi
07/31/11
Probably not next segment, but certainly later on, you can definitely have a cameo! Just PM me the sprites and a description of your character and your problem that the KAS shall solve (unless you're a villain, in which case I choose that last part).
Gigi19972010
07/31/11
OK then. But I'll PM everything later.
guestuser
07/31/11
Are you planning on bringing Talzo back ever?
guestuser
08/02/11
I'm confused. So in the alt. universe, Keeby is an evil boss and hates Kirby? Or am I missing something important as I usually do?
castleofwarriors
12/04/11
Uh... You used Keito in panel 2, not Keeby...
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Hey I have something I can actually talk about, cool. Panel 2 got completely changed to reflect the remade pages of early KDA. The original scene represented no longer existed, so I used a different one instead.
Rescue Mission - Part 15
Original Author's Comment:
07/30/11
Not that Keeby's the best leader either, though...
Not that Keeby's the best leader either, though...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Andromeda Lazuli
07/31/11
Why does shadow kirby look like he has a mustache in the last panel? Also, looks like Kaxo is in DEEP shit now that he's been told on like that...!
BattleStarX
07/31/11
Not really a mustache, just a crinkled... nose... ok, that doesn't sound right either. Ah! It's because the position of the mouth combined with the cheek patches give him a mustached appearance! Hmm... a mustached kirby...
foxpuff
07/31/11
When will Kaxo ever learn?
Frosty Yoshi
07/31/11
*sigh* To think this is your typical day... Let's just say; It's best to stay away from Kaxo if he's angry (and also if he's not).
Hi(:
04/01/13
The look on Mirror Kirby's face in p4...
Thecommander248
11/13/14
"speaches"? You mean "Speeches"?
07/31/11
Why does shadow kirby look like he has a mustache in the last panel? Also, looks like Kaxo is in DEEP shit now that he's been told on like that...!
BattleStarX
07/31/11
Not really a mustache, just a crinkled... nose... ok, that doesn't sound right either. Ah! It's because the position of the mouth combined with the cheek patches give him a mustached appearance! Hmm... a mustached kirby...
foxpuff
07/31/11
When will Kaxo ever learn?
Frosty Yoshi
07/31/11
*sigh* To think this is your typical day... Let's just say; It's best to stay away from Kaxo if he's angry (and also if he's not).
Hi(:
04/01/13
The look on Mirror Kirby's face in p4...
Thecommander248
11/13/14
"speaches"? You mean "Speeches"?
From Dream Adventures - Part 31
Ulti's Notes:
"Kaaby frozen in shock from something" is definitely a reference to a prior KDA event, but search me if I can provide any context for it anymore. Evidently, something happened to Kaaby, the blue cleaner Kirby, that froze her in a state of shock? A better comparison to think of would probably be what I did to Raize in To The Tower, after Shadik ate the Shotzo and Raize just flopped over, mindbroken.
Original Author's Comment:
07/31/11
Crowded indeed.
New comic on the links page! Go check out My Game: Play!
Crowded indeed.
New comic on the links page! Go check out My Game: Play!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkNut255
07/31/11
Colorful AND Crowded.
RedJac
07/31/11
NO! It's Crowded AND Colorful.
foxpuff
07/31/11
Full of colourful Kirbys!
DarkMario1000
07/31/11
Sort of like a webcomic I know. Author, you know (or may not know) who you are. =P
Gigi19972010
07/31/11
Me? D: (Just kidding... Or maybe not... Ok, I'll stop.)
I've already put 22 kirbies in one pretty small panel. And I think I'm pretty close to break this "record" again. :P
DarkNut255
08/01/11
Is it Ulti with Y&K 2.0?
Andromeda Lazuli
08/01/11
Now if we can get the others in this shot, there'll be a rainbow effect with the different Kirby's in the picture! XD
Jarkes
08/01/11
Hey, Ulti I've got some bad news: Mega Man Legends 3 has been cancelled. Apparently, the ideas given by Capcom's LOYAL FANS didn't "meet their criteria," so rather than make it work, they just decided, "SCREW YOU, WE'RE NOT MAKING IT 'CAUSE YOUR IDEAS SUCK!" I'm not exaggerating. That's pretty much exactly what they said. They just said it politely.
I have now officially lost my respect for Capcom.
BattleStarX
08/01/11
@ Comic: That must've been some explosion. We need more of 'em. >:)
@ Jarkes (Guest): Indeed, my respect for Capcom is now quite low. If they fail to deliver Monster Hunter Freedom 3 to the US, then I'll officially cut all ties with them.
guestuser
03/20/12
BlueyKid:
What does that have to do with anything?
GraciaWarrior
05/16/14
Saia is have a many patients XD
07/31/11
Colorful AND Crowded.
RedJac
07/31/11
NO! It's Crowded AND Colorful.
foxpuff
07/31/11
Full of colourful Kirbys!
DarkMario1000
07/31/11
Sort of like a webcomic I know. Author, you know (or may not know) who you are. =P
Gigi19972010
07/31/11
Me? D: (Just kidding... Or maybe not... Ok, I'll stop.)
I've already put 22 kirbies in one pretty small panel. And I think I'm pretty close to break this "record" again. :P
DarkNut255
08/01/11
Is it Ulti with Y&K 2.0?
Andromeda Lazuli
08/01/11
Now if we can get the others in this shot, there'll be a rainbow effect with the different Kirby's in the picture! XD
Jarkes
08/01/11
Hey, Ulti I've got some bad news: Mega Man Legends 3 has been cancelled. Apparently, the ideas given by Capcom's LOYAL FANS didn't "meet their criteria," so rather than make it work, they just decided, "SCREW YOU, WE'RE NOT MAKING IT 'CAUSE YOUR IDEAS SUCK!" I'm not exaggerating. That's pretty much exactly what they said. They just said it politely.
I have now officially lost my respect for Capcom.
BattleStarX
08/01/11
@ Comic: That must've been some explosion. We need more of 'em. >:)
@ Jarkes (Guest): Indeed, my respect for Capcom is now quite low. If they fail to deliver Monster Hunter Freedom 3 to the US, then I'll officially cut all ties with them.
guestuser
03/20/12
BlueyKid:
What does that have to do with anything?
GraciaWarrior
05/16/14
Saia is have a many patients XD
Rescue Mission - Part 16
Ulti's Notes:
Poor Shadik got left behind in Mirror Kirby's cave. Shadow Kirbies get to stick together, evidently. He probably helped put out the fires, knowing him.
What this page reminds me of, and makes me find funny, is that BSX struggled with a lot of my characters' colorations, but especially with Caiya. However, had he just stuck with the Ice Kirby color palette, he'd have gotten Caiya much closer, since the default Ice Kirby palette uses the same blue hues that Caiya does, and only Caiya's shoes are different.
You can notice this yourself because in the fourth panel, BSX actually just uses regular default Ice Kirby, forgetting to make the shoes blue. Compare the Ice Kirby palette to the attempted recreation of Caiya's palette on his own in the first three panels, and you can clearly see the difference it makes.
This large bird is Dyna Blade, a highly territorial resident of Dream Land. She resides in the mountaintops and tends to be overprotective of her baby chicks. In Kirby Super Star, she terrorizes Dream Land specifically because she's trying to feed her babies, and Kirby knocks a bit of sense into her (and feeds her babies himself with Whispy Woods' apples), befriending Dyna Blade in the process. Here, though, she seems to be a bit more territorial again.
What this page reminds me of, and makes me find funny, is that BSX struggled with a lot of my characters' colorations, but especially with Caiya. However, had he just stuck with the Ice Kirby color palette, he'd have gotten Caiya much closer, since the default Ice Kirby palette uses the same blue hues that Caiya does, and only Caiya's shoes are different.
You can notice this yourself because in the fourth panel, BSX actually just uses regular default Ice Kirby, forgetting to make the shoes blue. Compare the Ice Kirby palette to the attempted recreation of Caiya's palette on his own in the first three panels, and you can clearly see the difference it makes.
This large bird is Dyna Blade, a highly territorial resident of Dream Land. She resides in the mountaintops and tends to be overprotective of her baby chicks. In Kirby Super Star, she terrorizes Dream Land specifically because she's trying to feed her babies, and Kirby knocks a bit of sense into her (and feeds her babies himself with Whispy Woods' apples), befriending Dyna Blade in the process. Here, though, she seems to be a bit more territorial again.
Original Author's Comment:
07/31/11
Begin mini-epic fight sequence.
Yes, I squished Kaxo and Vezo. Why? Vezo's a pain to recolor and I've been having way too much fun with Kaxo. So, no Cutter Power Vezo, but at least you get to see Ice Power Caiya.
Begin mini-epic fight sequence.
Yes, I squished Kaxo and Vezo. Why? Vezo's a pain to recolor and I've been having way too much fun with Kaxo. So, no Cutter Power Vezo, but at least you get to see Ice Power Caiya.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
08/01/11
Number comments have been purged. All seven of them...
Please don't do that again...
DarkNut255
08/01/11
I hate it when people say "FIRST!" and expect to be appreciated. Or just if they say "FIRST!".
Andromeda Lazuli
08/01/11
DYNA BLADE!!! XD I just love Dyna Blade, so nicely designed... I mean, GET OFF KAXO AND VEZO! >w<
Gigi19972010
08/01/11
Why is Cayia like the normal Ice Kirby from KSSU?
BattleStarX
08/01/11
It was made kinda quickly yesterday, and I didn't get around to just transferring the hat over to Caiya. It'll be a bit better tomorrow.
I'm surprised you noticed, with the whole Ice Power Icon over her. I, personally, can't see it too well. But then again, that's me.
Ultimate Yoshi
08/01/11
If it makes it easier on you, BSX, Caiya's color scheme is the same as the Ice power (except with different boots).
SecretAgent000
08/01/11
@BattleStarX
..."Number Comments"?
Jarkes
08/01/11
@SecretAgent000:
People, were shouting, "First!" then "Second!" then "Third!" and so on. I was the fourth one, but I actually shouted, "Forty-Two!" But, BSX, if that annoys you, I'm sorry. I won't do it again.
BattleStarX
08/01/11
One I delete without a fuss. Two I'll gripe about a bit. The simple fact is that seven comments in a row were nothing but a number game. That's why the Author Comment was made.
Gigi19972010
08/01/11
@BattleStarX
I just looked and noticed. Maybe cause I pay a lot of attention about details?
BlagH
08/01/11
Dyna Blade's frickin' badass. Anyone besides UY and me go on Kirby Rainbow Resort and read "Dynabladeknight"?
Edit: If you're a little confused, UY's account name on KRR is Galactic Knight09 and mine is Kirbypie123.
08/01/11
Number comments have been purged. All seven of them...
Please don't do that again...
DarkNut255
08/01/11
I hate it when people say "FIRST!" and expect to be appreciated. Or just if they say "FIRST!".
Andromeda Lazuli
08/01/11
DYNA BLADE!!! XD I just love Dyna Blade, so nicely designed... I mean, GET OFF KAXO AND VEZO! >w<
Gigi19972010
08/01/11
Why is Cayia like the normal Ice Kirby from KSSU?
BattleStarX
08/01/11
It was made kinda quickly yesterday, and I didn't get around to just transferring the hat over to Caiya. It'll be a bit better tomorrow.
I'm surprised you noticed, with the whole Ice Power Icon over her. I, personally, can't see it too well. But then again, that's me.
Ultimate Yoshi
08/01/11
If it makes it easier on you, BSX, Caiya's color scheme is the same as the Ice power (except with different boots).
SecretAgent000
08/01/11
@BattleStarX
..."Number Comments"?
Jarkes
08/01/11
@SecretAgent000:
People, were shouting, "First!" then "Second!" then "Third!" and so on. I was the fourth one, but I actually shouted, "Forty-Two!" But, BSX, if that annoys you, I'm sorry. I won't do it again.
BattleStarX
08/01/11
One I delete without a fuss. Two I'll gripe about a bit. The simple fact is that seven comments in a row were nothing but a number game. That's why the Author Comment was made.
Gigi19972010
08/01/11
@BattleStarX
I just looked and noticed. Maybe cause I pay a lot of attention about details?
BlagH
08/01/11
Dyna Blade's frickin' badass. Anyone besides UY and me go on Kirby Rainbow Resort and read "Dynabladeknight"?
Edit: If you're a little confused, UY's account name on KRR is Galactic Knight09 and mine is Kirbypie123.
From Dream Adventures - Part 32
Ulti's Notes:
This was entirely me, BattleStarX had nothing to do with me using his own Author Doo in my comic. True to Author Doo's word, he really didn't know why he was here, I just made it so myself.
Admittedly, more realistically, this was probably due to me realizing I had a few more pages than I thought before the crossover would be wrapping up, and messing around with authorsonas would help fill the void and be an opportunity I otherwise wouldn't get to indulge in due to the normal nature of Kirby Adventure.
Admittedly, more realistically, this was probably due to me realizing I had a few more pages than I thought before the crossover would be wrapping up, and messing around with authorsonas would help fill the void and be an opportunity I otherwise wouldn't get to indulge in due to the normal nature of Kirby Adventure.
Original Author's Comment:
08/02/11
Hi Author Doo!
Hi Author Doo!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkNut255
08/02/11
Hi!
Jerdude14487
08/02/11
You should show up with author doo! :3 Make it more authory and literally kick author doo out of the panel! :3
Don't do it unless you like it... Why do people always think i'm telling them to do it. -.-
BattleStarX
08/02/11
Even in my own Comic, I haven't the foggiest idea why I'm there half the time.
Striffen Cloud
08/02/11
I'd say he got you spot on, then. XD
TouhouShake
08/02/11
XDDDDD
Kirbysmith [DJ]
08/02/11
I sure hope Author Doo memorized the Comic Creator Rulebook. ;)
BTW, I like Korby's thinking pose in the last panel. Is it custom?
guestuser
08/02/11
I'm been doing lots of stuff recently (The primary thing being getting a passport for my aunt's destination wedding) but I am back and am now caught up on the comic. I am leaving for Mexico this Thursday, and may or may not have my dad's laptop with me, so I may dissapear again. Gotta run, more stuff to see!
guestuser
08/02/11
@:Kirbysmith [DJ]
You mean the one from AKK?
DarkMario1000
08/02/11
I actually thought Shat'l was tryin' to be punny in the last square. "Who's the Doo (dude)?"
At least you're one who knows how to correctly use who's vs whose. =D
Andromeda Lazuli
08/02/11
OMG! RANDOM AUTHOR DOO APPEARANCE!!! XD
Kirbysmith [DJ]
08/02/11
@guestuser:
Hey, they're both Kirby comics with inter-dimensional travel. Why not? XD
epicness
08/02/11
A wild Author Doo appeared!
foxpuff
08/02/11
Looks like the sleeping Kirby finally woke up. I liked the last panel too.
Extremmefan
07/26/14
I have only three favorite Kirby sprite comic authors, two of them are somehow here:
Author Doo IS IN the comic
Ultimate Yoshi (as Ultimate Kirby) created the comic so he's always present here.
08/02/11
Hi!
Jerdude14487
08/02/11
You should show up with author doo! :3 Make it more authory and literally kick author doo out of the panel! :3
Don't do it unless you like it... Why do people always think i'm telling them to do it. -.-
BattleStarX
08/02/11
Even in my own Comic, I haven't the foggiest idea why I'm there half the time.
Striffen Cloud
08/02/11
I'd say he got you spot on, then. XD
TouhouShake
08/02/11
XDDDDD
Kirbysmith [DJ]
08/02/11
I sure hope Author Doo memorized the Comic Creator Rulebook. ;)
BTW, I like Korby's thinking pose in the last panel. Is it custom?
guestuser
08/02/11
I'm been doing lots of stuff recently (The primary thing being getting a passport for my aunt's destination wedding) but I am back and am now caught up on the comic. I am leaving for Mexico this Thursday, and may or may not have my dad's laptop with me, so I may dissapear again. Gotta run, more stuff to see!
guestuser
08/02/11
@:Kirbysmith [DJ]
You mean the one from AKK?
DarkMario1000
08/02/11
I actually thought Shat'l was tryin' to be punny in the last square. "Who's the Doo (dude)?"
At least you're one who knows how to correctly use who's vs whose. =D
Andromeda Lazuli
08/02/11
OMG! RANDOM AUTHOR DOO APPEARANCE!!! XD
Kirbysmith [DJ]
08/02/11
@guestuser:
Hey, they're both Kirby comics with inter-dimensional travel. Why not? XD
epicness
08/02/11
A wild Author Doo appeared!
foxpuff
08/02/11
Looks like the sleeping Kirby finally woke up. I liked the last panel too.
Extremmefan
07/26/14
I have only three favorite Kirby sprite comic authors, two of them are somehow here:
Author Doo IS IN the comic
Ultimate Yoshi (as Ultimate Kirby) created the comic so he's always present here.
Rescue Mission - Part 17
Ulti's Notes:
Keeby is inhaling a bit of debris from Dyna Blade's attacks in Panel 3 in order to gain the Stone copy ability in Panel 4. Unlike my characters, the Kirbies of KDA aren't limited to only using Stored Abilities.
Instead, if my memory serves, most of them just flat-out CAN'T use copy abilities at all? But KDA Keeby is like Kirby in that he can use copy abilities regularly, like one would expect after playing any Kirby game. So, here he is, using a regular copy ability. Soak it in.
Instead, if my memory serves, most of them just flat-out CAN'T use copy abilities at all? But KDA Keeby is like Kirby in that he can use copy abilities regularly, like one would expect after playing any Kirby game. So, here he is, using a regular copy ability. Soak it in.
Original Author's Comment:
08/01/11
I've always liked UY's Kirby. Brave and loyal to his crew.
Hold the phone, is Keeby doing what we think he's doing?
I've always liked UY's Kirby. Brave and loyal to his crew.
Hold the phone, is Keeby doing what we think he's doing?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
08/01/11
SINCE WHEN IS THERE A ROCK KIRBY 0_o
MentalKnight64
08/02/11
Epicness are you joking or just never played Kirby?
Frosty Yoshi
08/02/11
Got a few things:
- Who is Harm? 'Out of harms way' XD (I know what it means, just joking)
- How come pink stones splattered around if Dyna Blade landed on white ground? 0.0
- Never knew that Keeby had the stone ability. Why didn't he use it before?
Raging Ghost
08/02/11
@MentalKnight64
I'm sure he never played Kirby.
Poyo
08/02/11
@Frosty Yoshi:
Actually, if you look, in the third panel Keeby seems to have an inhaling pose and there's a rock fairly close to him.
BattleStarX
08/02/11
Indeed. The Stone Power has been in nearly EVERY game Copy Powers have been in. The only exception I belive is Kirby's Air Ride. That would have been mighty counter-productive.
By far the "best" version of Stone Kirby is The Crystal Shard version, where you can actually get up and move around, instead of just staying in one spot, and you were very literally a stone Kirby.
epicness
08/02/11
I meant a Rock Copy Essebce Kirby in KA or maybe i jsut dont remember
EDIT:nvm,i saw poyo's comment
BattleStarX
08/02/11
Hmm... I don't think any of the KA Kirbies do have the Rock Ability... might be a good idea for UY.
And yeah, sorry 'bout the confusion.
foxpuff
08/02/11
Is it just me or is Keeby helping because he also got a bone to pick with Dyna Blade?
BlagH
08/02/11
Did anyone read my comment from the last comic?
Ultimate Yoshi
08/02/11
@ BSX
Yeah, none of my charries have a Stone Stored Ability. Though Hali does use the stone palette for her main body...
Air Man1 21
08/04/11
@Ultimate Yoshi
You should make Hali's stored ability stone. It says in her cast profile that she wants a stored ability. Make it stone. It could be part of the mission's reward.
epicness
08/04/11
^ Naw,make her Mirror
08/01/11
SINCE WHEN IS THERE A ROCK KIRBY 0_o
MentalKnight64
08/02/11
Epicness are you joking or just never played Kirby?
Frosty Yoshi
08/02/11
Got a few things:
- Who is Harm? 'Out of harms way' XD (I know what it means, just joking)
- How come pink stones splattered around if Dyna Blade landed on white ground? 0.0
- Never knew that Keeby had the stone ability. Why didn't he use it before?
Raging Ghost
08/02/11
@MentalKnight64
I'm sure he never played Kirby.
Poyo
08/02/11
@Frosty Yoshi:
Actually, if you look, in the third panel Keeby seems to have an inhaling pose and there's a rock fairly close to him.
BattleStarX
08/02/11
Indeed. The Stone Power has been in nearly EVERY game Copy Powers have been in. The only exception I belive is Kirby's Air Ride. That would have been mighty counter-productive.
By far the "best" version of Stone Kirby is The Crystal Shard version, where you can actually get up and move around, instead of just staying in one spot, and you were very literally a stone Kirby.
epicness
08/02/11
I meant a Rock Copy Essebce Kirby in KA or maybe i jsut dont remember
EDIT:nvm,i saw poyo's comment
BattleStarX
08/02/11
Hmm... I don't think any of the KA Kirbies do have the Rock Ability... might be a good idea for UY.
And yeah, sorry 'bout the confusion.
foxpuff
08/02/11
Is it just me or is Keeby helping because he also got a bone to pick with Dyna Blade?
BlagH
08/02/11
Did anyone read my comment from the last comic?
Ultimate Yoshi
08/02/11
@ BSX
Yeah, none of my charries have a Stone Stored Ability. Though Hali does use the stone palette for her main body...
Air Man1 21
08/04/11
@Ultimate Yoshi
You should make Hali's stored ability stone. It says in her cast profile that she wants a stored ability. Make it stone. It could be part of the mission's reward.
epicness
08/04/11
^ Naw,make her Mirror
From Dream Adventures - Part 33
Ulti's Notes:
Another rare appearance from my authorsona, to 'combat' BattleStarX's. The meta-awkward aspect of this is that it's like a weird roleplay between myself and a fake BSX also played by myself? If you really stop and think about how I'm just the one writing all of my own pages entirely, and that BSX had no input on this whatsoever, it just makes you raise an eyebrow.
The yellow coloration of the Author Doo in the latter two panels is how the Author Doo expresses fear/surprise.
The weird gray circle is what the erase tool looked like in Adobe Photoshop CS2, the program I used to make Kirby Adventure pages. The idea was that I was erasing him, literally, from the comic.
The yellow coloration of the Author Doo in the latter two panels is how the Author Doo expresses fear/surprise.
The weird gray circle is what the erase tool looked like in Adobe Photoshop CS2, the program I used to make Kirby Adventure pages. The idea was that I was erasing him, literally, from the comic.
Original Author's Comment:
08/02/11
I think the crossover is rubbing off on me... I never would've done something like this without the influence of BattleStarX!
Don't worry, eraseringation is completely painless. Just freaky.
Almost as freaky as Author Doo's lack of eyelashes. > >
For those wondering about why Author Doo turned yellow, that's how BSX does expressions for his representative Doo. Green is normal, yellow is scared, red is angry, and there are others I don't really know what emotion they translate to.
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
I think the crossover is rubbing off on me... I never would've done something like this without the influence of BattleStarX!
Don't worry, eraseringation is completely painless. Just freaky.
Almost as freaky as Author Doo's lack of eyelashes. > >
For those wondering about why Author Doo turned yellow, that's how BSX does expressions for his representative Doo. Green is normal, yellow is scared, red is angry, and there are others I don't really know what emotion they translate to.
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Captain Yoshi
08/02/11
Poyo?
DarkNut255
08/02/11
Shouldn't it be "What are you FOUR looking at?".
Ultimate Yoshi
08/02/11
Kirby's not really paying attention.
BattleStarX
08/02/11
"Eraseringation?"
I just may have to borrow that.
guestuser
08/02/11
Heh. Battle of the in-comic personas.
RedJac
08/02/11
Oh my Poyo!
lord_aizen66
08/03/11
hmmmmmmm i wonder if battlestarx will be getting you back for this^^
DarkMario1000
08/03/11
They are sooooo confused. Why tortue the characters you're using in this comic??? Evil UY!!! XD
Andromeda Lazuli
08/03/11
*laughs too much* OH GOD, YOU'RE KILLING ME!!! XD
guestuser
08/03/11
Other Comic writers should not go into the KA world?
guestuser
08/04/11
i just started to read these and im addicted!theyre really good!
Air Man1 21
08/04/11
Klooshy and Ryka should meet each other. Think of what would happen! Also make KA Kirby say Poyo when he returns. It'll be hilarious.
guestuser
08/05/11
Yeah, totally! I've been waiting for Ryka to show up in the comic again. Same with Talzo.
guestuser
09/24/11
i think this should be the cause for a comic chapter where the KAA go to beat up ultimate kirby wanna know more? reply
guestuser
05/30/12
Etam really should have made the debut here instead.
Quirby64_
10/26/13
:
i have a feeling thats the eraser circle from GIMP....
guestuser
02/20/14
What that circle?it's thing was cool
Extremmefan
07/26/14
Quirby64_:D: Or the eraser circle from Paint.net
08/02/11
Poyo?
DarkNut255
08/02/11
Shouldn't it be "What are you FOUR looking at?".
Ultimate Yoshi
08/02/11
Kirby's not really paying attention.
BattleStarX
08/02/11
"Eraseringation?"
I just may have to borrow that.
guestuser
08/02/11
Heh. Battle of the in-comic personas.
RedJac
08/02/11
Oh my Poyo!
lord_aizen66
08/03/11
hmmmmmmm i wonder if battlestarx will be getting you back for this^^
DarkMario1000
08/03/11
They are sooooo confused. Why tortue the characters you're using in this comic??? Evil UY!!! XD
Andromeda Lazuli
08/03/11
*laughs too much* OH GOD, YOU'RE KILLING ME!!! XD
guestuser
08/03/11
Other Comic writers should not go into the KA world?
guestuser
08/04/11
i just started to read these and im addicted!theyre really good!
Air Man1 21
08/04/11
Klooshy and Ryka should meet each other. Think of what would happen! Also make KA Kirby say Poyo when he returns. It'll be hilarious.
guestuser
08/05/11
Yeah, totally! I've been waiting for Ryka to show up in the comic again. Same with Talzo.
guestuser
09/24/11
i think this should be the cause for a comic chapter where the KAA go to beat up ultimate kirby wanna know more? reply
guestuser
05/30/12
Etam really should have made the debut here instead.
Quirby64_
10/26/13
:
i have a feeling thats the eraser circle from GIMP....
guestuser
02/20/14
What that circle?it's thing was cool
Extremmefan
07/26/14
Quirby64_:D: Or the eraser circle from Paint.net
Rescue Mission - Part 18
Ulti's Notes:
It's strange how Kirby immediately realized this new yellow Kirby was Kroby, the missing PSSS member they were trying to find. I don't think they ever got an actual description of him, yet it's his first assumption that the Kirby that Dyna Blade was forced to cough up was who they were looking for.
On that front, Keeby's comment about how this has "happened before"? I don't think that EVER got explained, either in retconned remake pages for KDA or anything that happened afterwards. If BSX had continued making page remakes, he probably would've retconned that explanation, would be my guess. Either that, or my memory's failing me again.
The big golden fist is a transformation of Keeby's Stone ability. In-game, the Stone power doesn't just turn Kirby into a rock, but a myriad of various heavy objects. He can be a 10-ton weight, a brick, and a variety of sculpted statues ranging from simple stuff like this kind of fist here, to golden Nintendo references.
On that front, Keeby's comment about how this has "happened before"? I don't think that EVER got explained, either in retconned remake pages for KDA or anything that happened afterwards. If BSX had continued making page remakes, he probably would've retconned that explanation, would be my guess. Either that, or my memory's failing me again.
The big golden fist is a transformation of Keeby's Stone ability. In-game, the Stone power doesn't just turn Kirby into a rock, but a myriad of various heavy objects. He can be a 10-ton weight, a brick, and a variety of sculpted statues ranging from simple stuff like this kind of fist here, to golden Nintendo references.
Original Author's Comment:
08/02/11
You're probably thinking a few things right now. 1) Is that it? Yes, fight scenes with me are short and sweet. It's just easier that way. Though Kirby vs. Meta Knight scenes will go on for some time, just never finished on-screen.
2) When did that happen before? I might show you. But I wanted a more... unusual end to this fight.
3) Where's Shadik been this whole time? He didn't make it through the Mirror in time, and is currently stuck with Mirror Kirby.
4) Since when can Keeby use Copy Abilities? I've never said he COULDN'T, it's just that Kirby can tap into them at will.
5)Yes, this is pretty much the end of the Cross-over, with a couple more comics to get the KA Crew back together and send them off. Then a couple more to welcome back Keeby's crew, and then we're off to the next segment.
You're probably thinking a few things right now. 1) Is that it? Yes, fight scenes with me are short and sweet. It's just easier that way. Though Kirby vs. Meta Knight scenes will go on for some time, just never finished on-screen.
2) When did that happen before? I might show you. But I wanted a more... unusual end to this fight.
3) Where's Shadik been this whole time? He didn't make it through the Mirror in time, and is currently stuck with Mirror Kirby.
4) Since when can Keeby use Copy Abilities? I've never said he COULDN'T, it's just that Kirby can tap into them at will.
5)Yes, this is pretty much the end of the Cross-over, with a couple more comics to get the KA Crew back together and send them off. Then a couple more to welcome back Keeby's crew, and then we're off to the next segment.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
1ce _k1d
08/02/11
Woooooooooooooo!
MentalKnight64
08/03/11
How would he know what Kroby looked like? Also, poor Kroby...Oh Well
Poyo
08/03/11
Hmm. This was a little shorter than I thought it would be, but oh well. Awkward moments with Keeby. Learning Kuxxel's name.
Frosty Yoshi
08/03/11
It's too bad the punch in the second panel gave no glow or light or something else... Otherwise it would be the Keeby version of 'Falcon Punch!' Heh heh...
BTW, the virus-question of a few comics ago did help, but not enough to make myself a profile. Stupid size limit... 'You can put it on your Facebook.' But Facebook simply isn't made for comic hosting... I get at most two comments and 1 like or so... *sigh* What to do...
DarkNut255
08/03/11
I really enjoyed this segment, on both ends.
epicness
08/03/11
Hilarious and awesome at the same time
plasma_knight303
09/24/11
Anyone notice Caiya poking Dyna Blade's wing?
08/02/11
Woooooooooooooo!
MentalKnight64
08/03/11
How would he know what Kroby looked like? Also, poor Kroby...Oh Well
Poyo
08/03/11
Hmm. This was a little shorter than I thought it would be, but oh well. Awkward moments with Keeby. Learning Kuxxel's name.
Frosty Yoshi
08/03/11
It's too bad the punch in the second panel gave no glow or light or something else... Otherwise it would be the Keeby version of 'Falcon Punch!' Heh heh...
BTW, the virus-question of a few comics ago did help, but not enough to make myself a profile. Stupid size limit... 'You can put it on your Facebook.' But Facebook simply isn't made for comic hosting... I get at most two comments and 1 like or so... *sigh* What to do...
DarkNut255
08/03/11
I really enjoyed this segment, on both ends.
epicness
08/03/11
Hilarious and awesome at the same time
plasma_knight303
09/24/11
Anyone notice Caiya poking Dyna Blade's wing?
Going Home - Part 1
Ulti's Notes:
The final of the three segments BSX did for the crossover begins here, and it was very very short and simple. I'm still a bit surprised at the time jump BSX wrote in, given that other indications previously seemed to imply that time between the two comics was identical, but oh well, it's not like it makes a huge difference one way or the other. What was a few hours on KA's end was a few days on KDA's end, and that's all.
Author Doo is being all nice and powerful, fixing Shadik's Shadow Jump so the KA cast can get back to my comic, but he's also taking credit for a problem he himself caused, since as the god and author of KDA, he's the one who broke Shadik's Shadow Jump to begin with. Sure, it was to let the characters adventure on-foot and hang out with Keeby the entire time, but still.
Author Doo is being all nice and powerful, fixing Shadik's Shadow Jump so the KA cast can get back to my comic, but he's also taking credit for a problem he himself caused, since as the god and author of KDA, he's the one who broke Shadik's Shadow Jump to begin with. Sure, it was to let the characters adventure on-foot and hang out with Keeby the entire time, but still.
Original Author's Comment:
08/03/11
As you see, I survived eraseringation (told you I'd use it, UY,) just fine. Why can Shadik suddenly Shadow Jump again? I'm back in my own universe, so weird things like that can happen again.
And as you can see, Kaxo and Kublie are up to no good. Those two could destroy Dream Land if we let them.
Remember, never anger the boss/landlord/whatever. You may or may not survive the consequences...
As you see, I survived eraseringation (told you I'd use it, UY,) just fine. Why can Shadik suddenly Shadow Jump again? I'm back in my own universe, so weird things like that can happen again.
And as you can see, Kaxo and Kublie are up to no good. Those two could destroy Dream Land if we let them.
Remember, never anger the boss/landlord/whatever. You may or may not survive the consequences...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
08/03/11
T_T its ending already?
star kirby12
08/03/11
Wow that's fast.
1ce_k1d
08/04/11
O.O
lord_aizen66
08/04/11
hu why are they going home does not seem like they solved anything??
MentalKnight64
08/04/11
In actuality it seems like they caused more problems rather than solving any.
Striffen Cloud
08/04/11
I forgot they were supposed to solve something in the first place. Eh, Maybe it was an unimportant character like DeDeDe who needed something done. Maybe to take care of author doo or something stupid like that. :3
BattleStarX
08/04/11
They were supposed to rescue Kroby.
Thecommander248
11/13/14
"apologize"? I love this crossover. It's been so much fun. I saved everything in order on my computer so it will be easier to read in the future.
08/03/11
T_T its ending already?
star kirby12
08/03/11
Wow that's fast.
1ce_k1d
08/04/11
O.O
lord_aizen66
08/04/11
hu why are they going home does not seem like they solved anything??
MentalKnight64
08/04/11
In actuality it seems like they caused more problems rather than solving any.
Striffen Cloud
08/04/11
I forgot they were supposed to solve something in the first place. Eh, Maybe it was an unimportant character like DeDeDe who needed something done. Maybe to take care of author doo or something stupid like that. :3
BattleStarX
08/04/11
They were supposed to rescue Kroby.
Thecommander248
11/13/14
"apologize"? I love this crossover. It's been so much fun. I saved everything in order on my computer so it will be easier to read in the future.
From Dream Adventures - Part 34
Ulti's Notes:
While my order for the crossover pages has been to alternate between KDA pages and KA pages, based on Shat'l's comment here, this particular KA page came after the previous KDA page, so I doubled up on KDA pages to make the comment flow a bit better.
Original Author's Comment:
08/04/11
I think Korby is echoing all of your thoughts. Especially mine. This crossover has dragged on for too long in my opinion. I'm just glad that BattleStarX didn't plan on making it last much longer either.
I think Korby is echoing all of your thoughts. Especially mine. This crossover has dragged on for too long in my opinion. I'm just glad that BattleStarX didn't plan on making it last much longer either.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
08/04/11
Honestly, I think it was short on KDA and long on KA. o.O
BattleStarX
08/04/11
Just think, in a couple of comics, we'll be back to normal... well, as normal as it gets when you've got a massive number of squishy puffballs as your stars...
epicness
08/04/11
T_T
guestuser
08/05/11
Gigi19972010:
I think that's because the KDA crossover segment was split into several segments, and this one was not, giving the appearance of having more parts.
08/04/11
Honestly, I think it was short on KDA and long on KA. o.O
BattleStarX
08/04/11
Just think, in a couple of comics, we'll be back to normal... well, as normal as it gets when you've got a massive number of squishy puffballs as your stars...
epicness
08/04/11
T_T
guestuser
08/05/11
Gigi19972010:
I think that's because the KDA crossover segment was split into several segments, and this one was not, giving the appearance of having more parts.
From Dream Adventures - Part 35
Ulti's Notes:
It had been becoming increasingly clear to me in previous chapters that I did not like the default map I was using for the Division A headquarters. It was a bit limited in space, and the awkward "wall teleporter" thing was just nonsensical. Thus, since BSX loaned me a character who was known to go overboard with cleaning and remodeling to the point of completely overhauling some of his own buildings and locations in KDA, well, it was a no-brainer that I could use Kaaby for the same purpose here.
Going forward, this allowed the KAS base to be a lot more capable of housing characters, providing a bit more wiggle room, and most importantly not looking so goofy and bland.
For the teleporter itself, I actually used a save pad from KSSU in order to represent it. The save pad is in a couple of subgames in KSSU, where you stand on it and it saves your progress, simple as that. It felt like it could be repurposed pretty believably into a teleport pad, and this essentially retconned how the teleporter worked going forward too.
Going forward, this allowed the KAS base to be a lot more capable of housing characters, providing a bit more wiggle room, and most importantly not looking so goofy and bland.
For the teleporter itself, I actually used a save pad from KSSU in order to represent it. The save pad is in a couple of subgames in KSSU, where you stand on it and it saves your progress, simple as that. It felt like it could be repurposed pretty believably into a teleport pad, and this essentially retconned how the teleporter worked going forward too.
Original Author's Comment:
08/04/11
Oh wow indeed.
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Oh wow indeed.
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
08/04/11
Very wow indeed.
link1566
08/04/11
coool teleporter.did you just make one?
Gigi19972010
08/04/11
Another idea I had but you had almost the same and used before me.
What did I say? What did I say? =P
epicness
08/04/11
What?what!?What is it!?!?
guestuser
08/05/11
Unless I'm mistaken, Ulty used the save point from The Great Cave Offensive for the teleporter.
guestuser
08/05/11
This way they can save every time they teleport!
guestuser
08/05/11
Huh. It took me a minute to realize this, but I just realized that KDA Kirby just mistook Keito for KDA Keeby.
1ce_k1d
08/05/11
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
guestuser
08/05/11
Oh yeah! I didn't even notice that until you pointed it out, but you're right!
blazikendude
08/05/11
i love this comic!keep on truckin!
guestuser
09/19/11
You mean to say that that entire wall was dirt, and that the entire floor, was covered in dirt? Wow...
Drawkey
09/25/11
I'm not even trying to keep up with this story.
08/04/11
Very wow indeed.
link1566
08/04/11
coool teleporter.did you just make one?
Gigi19972010
08/04/11
Another idea I had but you had almost the same and used before me.
What did I say? What did I say? =P
epicness
08/04/11
What?what!?What is it!?!?
guestuser
08/05/11
Unless I'm mistaken, Ulty used the save point from The Great Cave Offensive for the teleporter.
guestuser
08/05/11
This way they can save every time they teleport!
guestuser
08/05/11
Huh. It took me a minute to realize this, but I just realized that KDA Kirby just mistook Keito for KDA Keeby.
1ce_k1d
08/05/11
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW
guestuser
08/05/11
Oh yeah! I didn't even notice that until you pointed it out, but you're right!
blazikendude
08/05/11
i love this comic!keep on truckin!
guestuser
09/19/11
You mean to say that that entire wall was dirt, and that the entire floor, was covered in dirt? Wow...
Drawkey
09/25/11
I'm not even trying to keep up with this story.
Going Home - Part 2
Original Author's Comment:
08/04/11
That's right, they last being they're gonna see from the KDA Universe is Keeby. Not exactly the best send-off. But then again, he wants his crew back. By the way, those glasses DO exist in the game. Just not on a normal Kirby.
That's right, they last being they're gonna see from the KDA Universe is Keeby. Not exactly the best send-off. But then again, he wants his crew back. By the way, those glasses DO exist in the game. Just not on a normal Kirby.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
08/04/11
*has CSI shades*Oh it will flashy indeed...
Kirbysmith [DJ]
08/04/11
*has Dangeresque shades*
Looks like they're gonna hafta JUUUUUUUMP!!!
(Shadow jump, that is. ;D)
epicness
08/04/11
*Has Proto Man Shades*We're in a big flash
Ultimate Yoshi
08/04/11
Too late for that, Kirby! XD
Striffen Cloud
08/05/11
Kirbysmith, you just made my morning.
Jarkes
08/05/11
@Kirbysmith [DJ]:
YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHH!
BattleStarX
08/05/11
Just now, I suddenly have a flashback to Men in Black.
08/04/11
*has CSI shades*Oh it will flashy indeed...
Kirbysmith [DJ]
08/04/11
*has Dangeresque shades*
Looks like they're gonna hafta JUUUUUUUMP!!!
(Shadow jump, that is. ;D)
epicness
08/04/11
*Has Proto Man Shades*We're in a big flash
Ultimate Yoshi
08/04/11
Too late for that, Kirby! XD
Striffen Cloud
08/05/11
Kirbysmith, you just made my morning.
Jarkes
08/05/11
@Kirbysmith [DJ]:
YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHH!
BattleStarX
08/05/11
Just now, I suddenly have a flashback to Men in Black.
From Dream Adventures - Part 36
Original Author's Comment:
08/06/11
Kaaby defies the laws of physics.
But I'm sure you knew that already.
Hmm, why does that seem familiar? :P
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Kaaby defies the laws of physics.
But I'm sure you knew that already.
Hmm, why does that seem familiar? :P
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
08/06/11
In 3...2...1...
BattleStarX
08/06/11
Never question Kaaby's choices.
It's unhealthy.
guestuser
08/06/11
Shat'l seems to be forgetting the fact that it's Kirby.
MentalKnight64
08/06/11
Yeah it's a series about a 5in. puffball beating up monsters in a person's dream. Does the act of making something huge on the inside when compared to the outside have to make sense?
DarkMario1000
08/06/11
Teleport vs running to the location, ftw? XD
guestuser
08/06/11
i think ive commented on this before.lol.love it like krazy!im always looking forward to the next one!!!!
nintendofan123
08/07/11
what isn't physaclly possible
guestuser
08/24/11
why hasn't anyone punched Kaaby yet?
Foxfoxy34
10/28/12
@Guest: Because it's a death wish
08/06/11
In 3...2...1...
BattleStarX
08/06/11
Never question Kaaby's choices.
It's unhealthy.
guestuser
08/06/11
Shat'l seems to be forgetting the fact that it's Kirby.
MentalKnight64
08/06/11
Yeah it's a series about a 5in. puffball beating up monsters in a person's dream. Does the act of making something huge on the inside when compared to the outside have to make sense?
DarkMario1000
08/06/11
Teleport vs running to the location, ftw? XD
guestuser
08/06/11
i think ive commented on this before.lol.love it like krazy!im always looking forward to the next one!!!!
nintendofan123
08/07/11
what isn't physaclly possible
guestuser
08/24/11
why hasn't anyone punched Kaaby yet?
Foxfoxy34
10/28/12
@Guest: Because it's a death wish
Going Home - Part 3
Original Author's Comment:
08/05/11
What? I'm evil. I thought you knew that.
What? I'm evil. I thought you knew that.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
08/05/11
*Has pocorn,soda and comfy seats*Anyone want popcorn?
And what are you talking about?I know that you're evil remember the time when you threaten to deleted King Dedede,ahh,those were the good times.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
08/06/11
Why do I have the feeling that Caiya is going to come back for that donut?
aqua
08/06/11
i love these soo much.im adicted!lol!how do you make sprite comics?
p.s.im looking forward for the next one;)
Striffen Cloud
08/06/11
It's like he hasn't learned anything in the time since he met Author Doo. XD
guestuser
05/30/12
Caiya is gonna get mad.
guestuser
05/30/12
DONUT!!!!!!!
Extremmefan
07/26/14
@Caiya & @Kirby: Wow...
Extremmefan
07/26/14
*Has popcorn, soda, comfy seats, a free popcorn machine, a free soda can distributor, a free snack distributor, all the portable video game console and games and a pillow* you want some donuts Caiya? I can give you a lot of them thanks to my snack distributor.
08/05/11
*Has pocorn,soda and comfy seats*Anyone want popcorn?
And what are you talking about?I know that you're evil remember the time when you threaten to deleted King Dedede,ahh,those were the good times.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
08/06/11
Why do I have the feeling that Caiya is going to come back for that donut?
aqua
08/06/11
i love these soo much.im adicted!lol!how do you make sprite comics?
p.s.im looking forward for the next one;)
Striffen Cloud
08/06/11
It's like he hasn't learned anything in the time since he met Author Doo. XD
guestuser
05/30/12
Caiya is gonna get mad.
guestuser
05/30/12
DONUT!!!!!!!
Extremmefan
07/26/14
@Caiya & @Kirby: Wow...
Extremmefan
07/26/14
*Has popcorn, soda, comfy seats, a free popcorn machine, a free soda can distributor, a free snack distributor, all the portable video game console and games and a pillow* you want some donuts Caiya? I can give you a lot of them thanks to my snack distributor.
From Dream Adventures - Part 37
Ulti's Notes:
Fanhal just completely disappears without a trace between panels 5 and 6. Forget Kibby, he's the true Ninja around here, apparently.
Original Author's Comment:
08/06/11
And thus, we bid farewell to the Kirbies from Kirby's Dream Adventure! And reunite with the rest of the Kirby Adventure Squad!
First 9-paneler since From Dream Adventures - Part 5!
Return of the almighty Bwarr!
Remember to serve it cold, though, Keito!
Where did Fanhal go? ...No idea.
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Edit: Also, forgot to mention! I've been drawing little Kirby Adventure-related stuff that I call Kirby Adventure Sillies! Right now there are only three, but you can check them out at my DeviantArt gallery here.
And thus, we bid farewell to the Kirbies from Kirby's Dream Adventure! And reunite with the rest of the Kirby Adventure Squad!
First 9-paneler since From Dream Adventures - Part 5!
Return of the almighty Bwarr!
Remember to serve it cold, though, Keito!
Where did Fanhal go? ...No idea.
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Edit: Also, forgot to mention! I've been drawing little Kirby Adventure-related stuff that I call Kirby Adventure Sillies! Right now there are only three, but you can check them out at my DeviantArt gallery here.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Jerdude14487
08/06/11
So many lolz in this one comic page!! XD
BattleStarX
08/06/11
Oh, I can't wait to see Kirby's reaction.
Cocytus
08/06/11
you know, i love it how you can have so many kirbys doing so many different thigns, like the yellow red and black kirby situation at the same time the pink and white kirby's conversation, and the other three kirby's little thing on the side XDD it's amazing!
DarkNut255
08/06/11
Well, back to the grind.
foxpuff
08/06/11
The mega tomato again!
guestuser
08/06/11
Cocytus:
...You have no idea what the character names are, do you?
guestuser
08/06/11
You know, come to think of it... we haven't seen Talzo since his dramatic escape way back in... well, "Escape!" Is he going to be in the next segment? I hope so. I mean, he is the main villain, after all...
guestuser
08/06/11
So the boss's name is Kuxxel. Knew we'd find it out someday.
guestuser
08/06/11
ha ha ha!the big maximum tomato!i still wonder how he greww it that fast....
DarkMario1000
08/07/11
She learned Bowser's *Bwarr* onomatopoeia! She used *Bwarr*
EDIT: @Jarkers
Goddammit! I proofread my comment and noticed I had a spelling error…and I STILL missed that! Always screw up on both of their names. >.<
guestuser
08/07/11
@FireKirbyFireKirb:
Um... we found that out in BattleStarX's side of the crossover...
DarkMario1000:
I think you mean Caiya... and she's used "Bwarr" before...
Anyway (this one's for Ulti), I have a random question. Well, three random questions, actually. 1) What's your least favorite Kirby game? 2) What, in your opinion, is the hardest boss in the Kirby series? 3) What, in your opinion, is the hardest level in the Kirby series?
Ultimate Yoshi
08/07/11
1. My least favorite? Huh... that's... a really tough question. I guess... Squeak Squad, mostly because it was so freaking easy, it didn't take advantage of the Nintendo DS in any way, it barely had any new songs, the only hard boss was Mecha Kracko, and it just seemed kinda rushed, especially with the storyline. Doesn't mean I hate it though.
2. The hardest boss... huh... that's a hard question. Dark Matter from Kirby's Dream Land 2, I've never even BEAT. Zero and 02 are also kinda tough, so is Miracle Matter. But I think I have to say, Galacta Knight is the hardest. Mostly because of how much he hurts you, how unpredictable he can be, and how many different attacks he can pull off.
3. Hardest LEVEL? Unlike before, this one is obvious, at least to me. KDL was really easy, KA/NID was also simple enough, KDL2 was tougher but not too tough, KSS/U had pretty easy levels, KDL3 had tricky levels only because of the Heart Stars, K64 had easy but fun levels, KatAM was tricky due to the maze but that was the only hard part, KSqSq was super easy, and KEY was by far the easiest. But as for the hardest level? The only game I ever really truly had difficulty beating levels was Canvas Curse. And the only level in that game that I deem worthy of hardest level? Machine Mansion. Without a doubt, 100%, Machine Mansion. ALL OF MY HATE.
DarkMario1000
08/07/11
You thought Machine Manchine was tough too, eh? I'm glad I'm not the only one.
guestuser
08/07/11
do you have to pay to make the comics?i really want to make some...
DarkMario1000
08/07/11
Uh…no. But you do need an account.
In any case, why ask that here? There are a couple of search engines out there that could've answered your question and then some.
guestuser
08/07/11
LOL, I haven't read that comic in weeks, so I didn't know.
guestuser
08/08/11
I actually found Machine Mansion pretty easy. If I would have to answer your question, my answer would be; Silent Seabed. Water + Gordos + Electricity = Impending Doom. But Frozen Fantasy and Mad Mechanism weren't roses and moonlight either.
Oh, and DM1000, you wrote Machine 'Manchine'.
guestuser
08/08/11
@Frosty Yoshi
DM1000's version has a beard and a mustache.
guestuser
08/08/11
@Frosty Yoshi:
Ah, yes, Frozen Fantasy. That level actually caused me to give up on Canvas Curse. Stupid anti-rainbow line fields...
Oh, Ulti, I have another question: Which do you think is better: the music in the original SNES version of Kirby Super Star, or the remixed versions of the same music from Super Star Ultra?
Ultimate Yoshi
08/08/11
Super Star Ultra. By far.
By the way, it might have actually BEEN Mad Mechanism and not Machine Mansion that was really difficult for me. Both have similar names and similar settings, so you can see how I got confused. Whichever one is at the end of the game, that's the one that gave me the most trouble.
Gobbler9
08/08/11
Return of bwarr!
guestuser
08/08/11
Machine Mansion was 4-1, so we speak, and Mad Mechanism 7-2. All of Wonder Lilane's levels were irritating but I found Spectacle Space actually the most easy of the three, thanks to the easy second area. Mad Mechanism is the level I find the hardest, but Frozen Fantasy's maze is also irritating.
But Silent Seabed is still the hardest in my opinion so that's why I don't want to attempt it with the other three spheres. However, I actually beated it with Meta Knight.
On a half-unrelated note, Canvas Curse was my first Kirby game, with KEY being the second one. I have more though...
DarkMario1000
08/09/11
Goddangit, still fumbling when typing. >~<
I love how this page has become a nice little conversation about Canvas Curse's hard levels. Now, let's not forget completing the game AGAIN with the different ball characters.
Waddle Dee Ball was…there to be there?
Meta Knight. WTF is up with his stamina!
Dedede made things a little easy (I liked playing the game as Dedede ball), though the swim courses always made me think otherwise.
Waddle Doo…uh, just a faster ball with the beam ability. Nothing special except…yeah. =0
Gigi19972010
08/09/11
I've got now Canvas Curse's songs stuck in my head. Colapse Castle just got there randomly. But I must say, Canvas Curse's songs are extremely epic. They are almost all remixes, and good remixes, and even those other songs that aren't remixes rules. And the games itself is pretty hard, mainly if you want all the 250 medals. I've got just 199. '-' Most of the Rainbow Run levels are hard to get the 3 medals in both Time and Line Trials. And the subgames? I almost lost my fingers getting an A in Paint Panic and an AA in Truck Chase (the second I actually just played because of its awesome music, lol, hehehe...) and my best at Block Attack (I don't even remember if it was this name '-') was a C, I think. Or even an E. Dunno. And I've just finished the game again with Waddle Dee Ball, now I'm with Meta Knight Ball, then Dedede Ball. I don't have Waddle Doo Ball yet, but maybe I'll never have... =P
(And am I the only one who prefers the KCC's songs than the KEY's songs? And loves Truck Chase and Mega Yan Yarn's musics? Cause I fell like I am... :P)
guestuser
08/10/11
My favorite ball would actually be Meta Knight, 'cuz his speed is just that awesome. The stamina doesn't really matter to me. Dedede is too slow and his attack doesn't always hit, at least in my opinion. Waddle Dee and Kirby are fine with me. I don't have Waddle Doo... yet.
And the minigames? Paint Panic is easy, I got a AAA. In levels 2 & 3. Lv. 1 earned me a A.
The other's, however...
Block Attack: Lv.1/Lv.2: B, Lv.3: E
Cart Run: Lv.1: B, Lv.2: D, Lv.3: Not even attempted :P
Drawkey
09/25/11
OK finally I actually know these characters. I think.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
*sigh* I've had too much "poyo"s for one day. Anyways, nice work on not confusing everyone's names!
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Color fix.
08/06/11
So many lolz in this one comic page!! XD
BattleStarX
08/06/11
Oh, I can't wait to see Kirby's reaction.
Cocytus
08/06/11
you know, i love it how you can have so many kirbys doing so many different thigns, like the yellow red and black kirby situation at the same time the pink and white kirby's conversation, and the other three kirby's little thing on the side XDD it's amazing!
DarkNut255
08/06/11
Well, back to the grind.
foxpuff
08/06/11
The mega tomato again!
guestuser
08/06/11
Cocytus:
...You have no idea what the character names are, do you?
guestuser
08/06/11
You know, come to think of it... we haven't seen Talzo since his dramatic escape way back in... well, "Escape!" Is he going to be in the next segment? I hope so. I mean, he is the main villain, after all...
guestuser
08/06/11
So the boss's name is Kuxxel. Knew we'd find it out someday.
guestuser
08/06/11
ha ha ha!the big maximum tomato!i still wonder how he greww it that fast....
DarkMario1000
08/07/11
She learned Bowser's *Bwarr* onomatopoeia! She used *Bwarr*
EDIT: @Jarkers
Goddammit! I proofread my comment and noticed I had a spelling error…and I STILL missed that! Always screw up on both of their names. >.<
guestuser
08/07/11
@FireKirbyFireKirb:
Um... we found that out in BattleStarX's side of the crossover...
DarkMario1000:
I think you mean Caiya... and she's used "Bwarr" before...
Anyway (this one's for Ulti), I have a random question. Well, three random questions, actually. 1) What's your least favorite Kirby game? 2) What, in your opinion, is the hardest boss in the Kirby series? 3) What, in your opinion, is the hardest level in the Kirby series?
Ultimate Yoshi
08/07/11
1. My least favorite? Huh... that's... a really tough question. I guess... Squeak Squad, mostly because it was so freaking easy, it didn't take advantage of the Nintendo DS in any way, it barely had any new songs, the only hard boss was Mecha Kracko, and it just seemed kinda rushed, especially with the storyline. Doesn't mean I hate it though.
2. The hardest boss... huh... that's a hard question. Dark Matter from Kirby's Dream Land 2, I've never even BEAT. Zero and 02 are also kinda tough, so is Miracle Matter. But I think I have to say, Galacta Knight is the hardest. Mostly because of how much he hurts you, how unpredictable he can be, and how many different attacks he can pull off.
3. Hardest LEVEL? Unlike before, this one is obvious, at least to me. KDL was really easy, KA/NID was also simple enough, KDL2 was tougher but not too tough, KSS/U had pretty easy levels, KDL3 had tricky levels only because of the Heart Stars, K64 had easy but fun levels, KatAM was tricky due to the maze but that was the only hard part, KSqSq was super easy, and KEY was by far the easiest. But as for the hardest level? The only game I ever really truly had difficulty beating levels was Canvas Curse. And the only level in that game that I deem worthy of hardest level? Machine Mansion. Without a doubt, 100%, Machine Mansion. ALL OF MY HATE.
DarkMario1000
08/07/11
You thought Machine Manchine was tough too, eh? I'm glad I'm not the only one.
guestuser
08/07/11
do you have to pay to make the comics?i really want to make some...
DarkMario1000
08/07/11
Uh…no. But you do need an account.
In any case, why ask that here? There are a couple of search engines out there that could've answered your question and then some.
guestuser
08/07/11
LOL, I haven't read that comic in weeks, so I didn't know.
guestuser
08/08/11
I actually found Machine Mansion pretty easy. If I would have to answer your question, my answer would be; Silent Seabed. Water + Gordos + Electricity = Impending Doom. But Frozen Fantasy and Mad Mechanism weren't roses and moonlight either.
Oh, and DM1000, you wrote Machine 'Manchine'.
guestuser
08/08/11
@Frosty Yoshi
DM1000's version has a beard and a mustache.
guestuser
08/08/11
@Frosty Yoshi:
Ah, yes, Frozen Fantasy. That level actually caused me to give up on Canvas Curse. Stupid anti-rainbow line fields...
Oh, Ulti, I have another question: Which do you think is better: the music in the original SNES version of Kirby Super Star, or the remixed versions of the same music from Super Star Ultra?
Ultimate Yoshi
08/08/11
Super Star Ultra. By far.
By the way, it might have actually BEEN Mad Mechanism and not Machine Mansion that was really difficult for me. Both have similar names and similar settings, so you can see how I got confused. Whichever one is at the end of the game, that's the one that gave me the most trouble.
Gobbler9
08/08/11
Return of bwarr!
guestuser
08/08/11
Machine Mansion was 4-1, so we speak, and Mad Mechanism 7-2. All of Wonder Lilane's levels were irritating but I found Spectacle Space actually the most easy of the three, thanks to the easy second area. Mad Mechanism is the level I find the hardest, but Frozen Fantasy's maze is also irritating.
But Silent Seabed is still the hardest in my opinion so that's why I don't want to attempt it with the other three spheres. However, I actually beated it with Meta Knight.
On a half-unrelated note, Canvas Curse was my first Kirby game, with KEY being the second one. I have more though...
DarkMario1000
08/09/11
Goddangit, still fumbling when typing. >~<
I love how this page has become a nice little conversation about Canvas Curse's hard levels. Now, let's not forget completing the game AGAIN with the different ball characters.
Waddle Dee Ball was…there to be there?
Meta Knight. WTF is up with his stamina!
Dedede made things a little easy (I liked playing the game as Dedede ball), though the swim courses always made me think otherwise.
Waddle Doo…uh, just a faster ball with the beam ability. Nothing special except…yeah. =0
Gigi19972010
08/09/11
I've got now Canvas Curse's songs stuck in my head. Colapse Castle just got there randomly. But I must say, Canvas Curse's songs are extremely epic. They are almost all remixes, and good remixes, and even those other songs that aren't remixes rules. And the games itself is pretty hard, mainly if you want all the 250 medals. I've got just 199. '-' Most of the Rainbow Run levels are hard to get the 3 medals in both Time and Line Trials. And the subgames? I almost lost my fingers getting an A in Paint Panic and an AA in Truck Chase (the second I actually just played because of its awesome music, lol, hehehe...) and my best at Block Attack (I don't even remember if it was this name '-') was a C, I think. Or even an E. Dunno. And I've just finished the game again with Waddle Dee Ball, now I'm with Meta Knight Ball, then Dedede Ball. I don't have Waddle Doo Ball yet, but maybe I'll never have... =P
(And am I the only one who prefers the KCC's songs than the KEY's songs? And loves Truck Chase and Mega Yan Yarn's musics? Cause I fell like I am... :P)
guestuser
08/10/11
My favorite ball would actually be Meta Knight, 'cuz his speed is just that awesome. The stamina doesn't really matter to me. Dedede is too slow and his attack doesn't always hit, at least in my opinion. Waddle Dee and Kirby are fine with me. I don't have Waddle Doo... yet.
And the minigames? Paint Panic is easy, I got a AAA. In levels 2 & 3. Lv. 1 earned me a A.
The other's, however...
Block Attack: Lv.1/Lv.2: B, Lv.3: E
Cart Run: Lv.1: B, Lv.2: D, Lv.3: Not even attempted :P
Drawkey
09/25/11
OK finally I actually know these characters. I think.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
*sigh* I've had too much "poyo"s for one day. Anyways, nice work on not confusing everyone's names!
Ultizeta
07/15/17
Color fix.
Going Home - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
And thus, ends the KDA side of the crossover. All of his characters made it back, safe and sound, and with Kirby getting his big tomato, the status quo remained more-or-less unchanged. All in a month's work, really.
This won't be the last crossover event of Kirby Adventure, though, so keep your eyes peeled for more in the future. Ideally, they'll be as well-annotated as this one was, and hopefully just as understandable without the context of the full original comics.
This won't be the last crossover event of Kirby Adventure, though, so keep your eyes peeled for more in the future. Ideally, they'll be as well-annotated as this one was, and hopefully just as understandable without the context of the full original comics.
Original Author's Comment:
08/06/11
What a welcome home.
What a welcome home.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
08/07/11
Uhhh they were still in Dream Land,just a different one
Gigi19972010
08/07/11
/\
And also, SJ didn't show that this comic was updated...
BattleStarX
08/07/11
That happens from time to time. Just a hiccup in their system.
Ultimate Yoshi
08/07/11
Apparently that mega tomato loves crushing the yellow Kirbies!
Must have something to do with the portal.
SecretAgent000
08/07/11
...and Korby promptly kisses the ground.
(Oh, and FYI, I was on vacation, and just got caught up.)
foxpuff
08/08/11
And the chase is back on for the tomato.
guestuser
05/30/12
No donut...
Extremmefan
07/26/14
@Caiya: I'll give you my donut boxes... there's too much for me...
08/07/11
Uhhh they were still in Dream Land,just a different one
Gigi19972010
08/07/11
/\
And also, SJ didn't show that this comic was updated...
BattleStarX
08/07/11
That happens from time to time. Just a hiccup in their system.
Ultimate Yoshi
08/07/11
Apparently that mega tomato loves crushing the yellow Kirbies!
Must have something to do with the portal.
SecretAgent000
08/07/11
...and Korby promptly kisses the ground.
(Oh, and FYI, I was on vacation, and just got caught up.)
foxpuff
08/08/11
And the chase is back on for the tomato.
guestuser
05/30/12
No donut...
Extremmefan
07/26/14
@Caiya: I'll give you my donut boxes... there's too much for me...
From Dream Adventures - Part 38
Ulti's Notes:
The crossover lasted a tiny bit longer on my end, since BattleStarX and I were no longer constrained to each others' timeframes. This page in particular, though, was mostly just filler so I could reach an even 40 pages, I think. Aside from Kirby reacting to the base, there's not much new here. All of the flashback panels narrated by Shat'l mostly serve as an unnecessary TL;DR for the segment, and frankly I shouldn't have written this page like this at all.
Original Author's Comment:
08/08/11
Lalala flashback stuff.
The crossover is lasting a bit longer on my end than BattleStarX's. Mostly cause we've got a bit of wrapping up to attend to for the KAS.
Lalala flashback stuff.
The crossover is lasting a bit longer on my end than BattleStarX's. Mostly cause we've got a bit of wrapping up to attend to for the KAS.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Air Man1 21
08/08/11
Yay for flashbacks! I also like the new base.
epicness
08/08/11
One flashback and one waveback!
Cool!
Gigi19972010
08/08/11
The crossover is now over (lol, it rhymed!), but you can't wait for the next Kirby-themed-comic crossover, between Kirby Adventure and 20 Times Kirby! Coming on 2012 to your computer screen or whatever-you-use-to-access-the-internet and- *gets blasted by Ulti*
epicness
08/08/11
NOW I WANT A 20TK AND KD CROSSOVER!!!
guestuser
08/08/11
Gigi19972010:
ARE YOU SERIOUS?
lord_aizen66
08/08/11
i have been thinking that since this crossover started i think a 20 kirby crossover would be a great idea :D
guestuser
08/09/11
Ha, another crossover!Yeah, like we haven't done enough dimensional bending!...A-are you serious?'Cause, when you mess with the universe it might... y'know...Implode...and stuff. Did you get all that? I didn't.
Drawkey
09/25/11
I think a 20 Times Kirby crossing over with both Adventure and Dream Adventure, and maybe 19 Heroes, Mirror World and Blast should appear.
To be really confusing.
08/08/11
Yay for flashbacks! I also like the new base.
epicness
08/08/11
One flashback and one waveback!
Cool!
Gigi19972010
08/08/11
The crossover is now over (lol, it rhymed!), but you can't wait for the next Kirby-themed-comic crossover, between Kirby Adventure and 20 Times Kirby! Coming on 2012 to your computer screen or whatever-you-use-to-access-the-internet and- *gets blasted by Ulti*
epicness
08/08/11
NOW I WANT A 20TK AND KD CROSSOVER!!!
guestuser
08/08/11
Gigi19972010:
ARE YOU SERIOUS?
lord_aizen66
08/08/11
i have been thinking that since this crossover started i think a 20 kirby crossover would be a great idea :D
guestuser
08/09/11
Ha, another crossover!Yeah, like we haven't done enough dimensional bending!...A-are you serious?'Cause, when you mess with the universe it might... y'know...Implode...and stuff. Did you get all that? I didn't.
Drawkey
09/25/11
I think a 20 Times Kirby crossing over with both Adventure and Dream Adventure, and maybe 19 Heroes, Mirror World and Blast should appear.
To be really confusing.
Reasons - Part 1
Ulti's Notes:
This page of Kirby's Dream Adventure wasn't strictly part of the Kirby Adventure Crossover, but I saved it anyway because the first few panels of it felt like it was enough of a small coda to the crossover that it would be worth including.
This was the start of a new chapter for KDA entitled Reasons, that would elaborate on Keeby's past and essentially provide the reasons why Keeby acted the way he did. Basically, an explanation for Keeby's earlier about being "like this for 5 years" because he had to do Kirby's job, and stuff.
Now, Kirby's Dream Adventure is gone because of the Smack Jeeves explosion of 2020, and BattleStarX no longer makes pages for it or has it publicly available anywhere. The Wayback Machine on Internet Archive is also notoriously bad at image retention on smaller sites like Smack Jeeves, so while text and layout are somewhat easy to find on there, images are often extremely unreliably preserved, so it's not a viable method to read KDA either. However, I've gotten into contact with BSX myself, and entirely separately, found out that a few Smack Jeeves refugees were taking it upon themselves to preserve their own personal archive of what they had saved of KDA to a site called ComicFury. BSX didn't know about the reupload, but didn't mind its existence either, so I was granted permission to link the unofficial reupload here.
So, to my personal surprise, there IS a method of reading and experiencing Kirby's Dream Adventure, as it was back in the day! It's not a complete archival, and some pages aren't in their full quality, but it's got mostly everything before the crossover and a good chunk of what came after all semi-intact, so if this all interested you in it at all, you can go find Kirby's Dream Adventure by clicking here.
This was the start of a new chapter for KDA entitled Reasons, that would elaborate on Keeby's past and essentially provide the reasons why Keeby acted the way he did. Basically, an explanation for Keeby's earlier about being "like this for 5 years" because he had to do Kirby's job, and stuff.
Now, Kirby's Dream Adventure is gone because of the Smack Jeeves explosion of 2020, and BattleStarX no longer makes pages for it or has it publicly available anywhere. The Wayback Machine on Internet Archive is also notoriously bad at image retention on smaller sites like Smack Jeeves, so while text and layout are somewhat easy to find on there, images are often extremely unreliably preserved, so it's not a viable method to read KDA either. However, I've gotten into contact with BSX myself, and entirely separately, found out that a few Smack Jeeves refugees were taking it upon themselves to preserve their own personal archive of what they had saved of KDA to a site called ComicFury. BSX didn't know about the reupload, but didn't mind its existence either, so I was granted permission to link the unofficial reupload here.
So, to my personal surprise, there IS a method of reading and experiencing Kirby's Dream Adventure, as it was back in the day! It's not a complete archival, and some pages aren't in their full quality, but it's got mostly everything before the crossover and a good chunk of what came after all semi-intact, so if this all interested you in it at all, you can go find Kirby's Dream Adventure by clicking here.
Original Author's Comment:
08/07/11
Return of the waviness, and it's not just a wavy-edge this time.
Return of the waviness, and it's not just a wavy-edge this time.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
08/07/11
FLASHBACK!
SecretAgent000
08/08/11
@epicness
...looks more like a waveback to me.
Andromeda Lazuli
08/08/11
Awkward wavy flashback mode, ACTIVATE!!!
epicness
08/08/11
Ooookay WAVEBACK!
08/07/11
FLASHBACK!
SecretAgent000
08/08/11
@epicness
...looks more like a waveback to me.
Andromeda Lazuli
08/08/11
Awkward wavy flashback mode, ACTIVATE!!!
epicness
08/08/11
Ooookay WAVEBACK!
From Dream Adventures - Part 39
Ulti's Notes:
This second TL;DR was a bit more important than the previous one, because it had two-fold purpose: it let me flex a tiny bit by recreating various panels from the KDA side of the crossover myself (and with the proper color palettes), and it would also give anyone who exclusively just read the KA side of the crossover a bit of information on what happened on the KDA side.
Original Author's Comment:
08/09/11
It was kinda fun remaking those KDA panels.
Except when I couldn't find that one freaking background in panel 2. It's from Revenge of Meta Knight. Seriously, it looked like part of Candy Mountain. FORTY MINUTES WERE WASTED SEARCHING FOR THE DAMN THING.
Luckily everywhere else wasn't that bad, though I did mistake Mallow Castle for Castle Dedede while doing panel 3.
Behold! Kirby's Dream Adventure scenes where the Kirby Adventure Kirbies actually have the correct palette! *hit by BSX*
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
It was kinda fun remaking those KDA panels.
Except when I couldn't find that one freaking background in panel 2. It's from Revenge of Meta Knight. Seriously, it looked like part of Candy Mountain. FORTY MINUTES WERE WASTED SEARCHING FOR THE DAMN THING.
Luckily everywhere else wasn't that bad, though I did mistake Mallow Castle for Castle Dedede while doing panel 3.
Behold! Kirby's Dream Adventure scenes where the Kirby Adventure Kirbies actually have the correct palette! *hit by BSX*
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
contradiction123
08/09/11
Hehe,i like the fight....
BattleStarX
08/09/11
For the life of me, I couldnt' get Vezo to turn out correctly. And the others, well, my colorblindness really doesn't make my job easy.
Jerdude14487
08/09/11
your color blind???
guestuser
08/09/11
BattleStarX:
You're colorblind? ...That explains a lot.
guestuser
08/09/11
Wait...you're colorblind?
Wow, I certainly didn't know that. :S
BattleStarX
08/09/11
Yup. The only way I know what color I've made my kirbies is the simple fact that I can hover over the color choices and wait for the words to pop up.
lord_aizen66
08/10/11
wow that sucks and how coler blind are you are they just dull and a bit mixed or is everything shades of grey
DarkMario1000
08/10/11
Then again, who wouldn't be? =P
guestuser
08/10/11
@DarkMario
...pacifists?
guestuser
02/20/14
Actully that's Kirby Mirror not shadow
Ultizeta
07/15/17
The final color fix of this segment. I'm glad to finally finish with this.
08/09/11
Hehe,i like the fight....
BattleStarX
08/09/11
For the life of me, I couldnt' get Vezo to turn out correctly. And the others, well, my colorblindness really doesn't make my job easy.
Jerdude14487
08/09/11
your color blind???
guestuser
08/09/11
BattleStarX:
You're colorblind? ...That explains a lot.
guestuser
08/09/11
Wait...you're colorblind?
Wow, I certainly didn't know that. :S
BattleStarX
08/09/11
Yup. The only way I know what color I've made my kirbies is the simple fact that I can hover over the color choices and wait for the words to pop up.
lord_aizen66
08/10/11
wow that sucks and how coler blind are you are they just dull and a bit mixed or is everything shades of grey
DarkMario1000
08/10/11
Then again, who wouldn't be? =P
guestuser
08/10/11
@DarkMario
...pacifists?
guestuser
02/20/14
Actully that's Kirby Mirror not shadow
Ultizeta
07/15/17
The final color fix of this segment. I'm glad to finally finish with this.
From Dream Adventures - Part 40
Ulti's Notes:
Since BSX didn't provide a reason for why Shadik couldn't Shadow Jump, I took it upon myself to provide one here. It wasn't difficult to come up with, really I'm just surprised it was something I needed to explain at all, since it was BSX who was the one who restricted Shadik like that to begin with.
Anyways, that's a wrap on this, finally. The next segment is the final one of Kirby Adventure's second chapter, and it's when everything changes for a while, arguably. For better or for worse, it's a segment that will mark a bit of a tonal shift.
Anyways, that's a wrap on this, finally. The next segment is the final one of Kirby Adventure's second chapter, and it's when everything changes for a while, arguably. For better or for worse, it's a segment that will mark a bit of a tonal shift.
Original Author's Comment:
08/10/11
Looks like that cannon became canon after all, BSX! :P
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Looks like that cannon became canon after all, BSX! :P
This page is part of a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
foxpuff
08/10/11
Firing a cannon. Wonder how the cannon got mixed into it.
BattleStarX
08/10/11
What an ending. Epic.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
08/10/11
Ending the comic with a blast. A Kirby Blast! (Oh wait, wrong comic.)
epicness
08/10/11
^ -_-...
Andromeda Lazuli
08/10/11
I wonder where the canon ball ended up after being fired... ^_^
Striffen Cloud
08/10/11
Oh, Kaaby and her cannons. ^_^
DarkMario1000
08/11/11
(Please let it hit Castle Dedede…Please let it hit Castle Dedede…Please le-)
Ohai! =3
guestuser
10/03/11
Andromeda Lazuli:
Wouldn't it be funny if the cannonball traveled all the way to Frozen Fantasy and ended up hitting Talzo in the face?
castleofwarriors
12/04/11
No, it hit Ignus Unis, blasting him into Frozen Fantasy, where he discovered that his candy tasted better there, ultimately resulting in Kirby being responsible for the next mission.
Thecommander248
11/14/14
AMAZING! I love that things like that crossover can happen. That was a really cool idea.
08/10/11
Firing a cannon. Wonder how the cannon got mixed into it.
BattleStarX
08/10/11
What an ending. Epic.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
08/10/11
Ending the comic with a blast. A Kirby Blast! (Oh wait, wrong comic.)
epicness
08/10/11
^ -_-...
Andromeda Lazuli
08/10/11
I wonder where the canon ball ended up after being fired... ^_^
Striffen Cloud
08/10/11
Oh, Kaaby and her cannons. ^_^
DarkMario1000
08/11/11
(Please let it hit Castle Dedede…Please let it hit Castle Dedede…Please le-)
Ohai! =3
guestuser
10/03/11
Andromeda Lazuli:
Wouldn't it be funny if the cannonball traveled all the way to Frozen Fantasy and ended up hitting Talzo in the face?
castleofwarriors
12/04/11
No, it hit Ignus Unis, blasting him into Frozen Fantasy, where he discovered that his candy tasted better there, ultimately resulting in Kirby being responsible for the next mission.
Thecommander248
11/14/14
AMAZING! I love that things like that crossover can happen. That was a really cool idea.
Ulti's Notes:
That's a long-winded way of saying that Shat'l makes the plot happen by being a psychic.
Original Author's Comment:
And thus begins the new segment: a crossover between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure!
Shat'l shows off his psychic awesomeness for us.
His eyes are closed in the first two panels, by the way.
If you're confused, just head on over to Kirby's Dream Adventure, or start directly at the crossover pages!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
07/01/11
...wait, are the comics in the same version of the universe or different versions?
Dlee
07/01/11
Cool… are they going to save him… brown is on probation
Raging Ghost
07/01/11
If it's a crossover, there's a problem. In Kirby Dream Adventure, Keeby leads some rag-tag group of Kirbies. In your comic, Keeby is dead.
guestuser
07/01/11
Raging Ghost
...hence, my question.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/01/11
I, uh, don't see how that's a problem. I know that Keeby is dead in KA, and I know that Keeby leads a gang in KDA. They're completely different Keebys in completely different universes. (Which also answers SA0's question). So I don't see what the problem with that is.
DarkMario1000
07/01/11
Augh, mind trampled!
Nah, I'm kidding.
guestuser
07/01/11
Is that her in panel 4?
lord_aizen66
07/01/11
ok important question with both of you be hosting the same pages or will i need to read both to get whats going on??
Ultimate Yoshi
07/01/11
The way this is going to work is that some of my characters will be going into his comic and some of his characters will be coming into my comic. In order to get the full actions, you should read both. The comics he makes are staying on his comic site, and vice versa.
MentalKnight64
07/02/11
Okay who's Aika and who exactly is Satomi.
Gigi19972010
07/03/11
Psychic powers FTW. =D
guestuser
05/27/12
Battlestar DOES know about this, right?
guestuser
05/27/12
@Kirby (Guest):
Oh, yeah. This was a while ago. The two of them actually planned it together, where some of BSX's characters would visit this comic, and some of Ulti's characters would be visiting KDA. The crossovers were going on at the exact same time, and in order to make sense of it, you had to read both arcs.
Knightkirby
12/05/12
Whoa, Kirby's dream adventure and the KAS! WHAT'S NEXT!!!!????
Guest
06/28/13
Ultimate Yoshi: another epic crossover begins here...
Ultizeta
07/15/17
The biggest batch of updates yet has begun. Every single one of the KDA cast members had to be recolored to fit their proper colorizations that BSX gave them, so I had a lot of work to do here.
But on this particular page, I redid the first panel to make it look nicer and not just copy and paste from BSX's original page.