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C Central

Part 1




Ulti's Notes:

C Central was an attempt to expand upon the original reason why I added secondary divisions to the KAS to begin with. I wanted to have occasional moments where I could dip away from the main cast and tell an adventure with some side characters. I think the key thing there is that this was an idea that came from, say, early episodic television where they have like 40 or so episodes per season to tell their goofy antics. This kind of idea didn't quite mesh well with my comic format, however.

As a result, while it was a good idea on paper, the fact that it took THIS long for a segment devoted to side characters to actually take off wound up being a bit of an issue. Luckily, I did C Central at a point where I was more capable as a writer, so I chose the best possible side cast TO focus on, in terms of the Division-related groupings, and the story itself is still decently fun. But it didn't ultimately amount to much in the long run, and especially given the following segments, it's a bit of an odd pace-breaker.

Don't let that hamper any enjoyment you may get out of the segment, but yeah, in the long run, it's a bit of an oddball, looking back on it.

Anyways, while never explicitly stated, I always imagined that the tank that Division C ran across was the remnants of the exploded Klooshy tank that Fanhal blew up in Lessons Learned.

Original Author's Comment:

08/13/14
Whenever I would get a comment that had something to do with wanting to see one of the other Divisions of the KAS have some time in the spotlight, I would always say that I had no plans to do so, and that Division A was the focus of the comic.


Well, guess what, I'm a huge liar. As you probably guessed from its name, this segment will indeed focus on Division C! I have a feeling Jarkes will be celebrating.

But enough about that! There's more news to share: There's a new fan art contest going on! Go check out the rules if you're interested.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

BattleStarX
08/13/14
Being very shiny is a VERY good reason to fiddle with it.


guestuser
08/13/14
I guess Saia got wind of Kaxo's big party.
He could always ask Caiya, I guess... (For the ice sculpture)


Quirby64_:D
08/13/14
Hooray for Stupidity! :D


Kevin The Kirby
08/14/14
SHININESS!!!!!


MecanicalCH
08/14/14
Shiny!! WHERE!? MINE!!


Luigi_96
08/14/14
Hooray for a new fanart contest! Woo!

Also explosions are good.


Ultizeta
07/30/17
All of the revamps in C Central have to do with fixing Aika's text bubbles. In the interest of taking as little time as possible to describe this in the future, all links in this segment to the original pages will be marked by "[x]" and nothing more.



Part 2


Ulti's Notes:

Intentionally trying to expand upon the Division C cast meant trying to figure out what made the four of them different. Aika, the gruff and no-nonsense leader, had the most going for her, and Neona was a close second due to the snarky rapport she had with Ryka and Gigi in Division Addition.

Thus, the two on my radar most were Wake and Nameless, and what I focused on was giving Wake a bit more of a subtly rude, self-centered characterization, where he wasn't always considerate of how others would feel and often put his foot in his mouth through speaking his mind.

Original Author's Comment:

08/14/14
Wake is a bit hasty to try and get things done.

In case you missed it, go check out the latest news post for the information about the new fan art contest!


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

BattleStarX
08/14/14
But mysterious buttons are always ASKING to be pressed. It's why they are there, being all mysterious.


Luigi_96
08/14/14
Pressing mysterious buttons is a good idea though


Quirby64_:D
08/14/14
Now I'm beggining to wonder how these Kirbies are healed...


plasma_knight303
08/15/14
Big shiny buttons are irresistible.


8bithuman
08/15/14
NU MISHIN


Fighter Dee
08/15/14
So... Neon pressed some sort of Auto-Destruct button?


Koopario
08/15/14
Fighter Dee: ...Neon pushed some sort of self-destruct button?
...
...I gotta stop staying up 'til midnight.


guestuser
08/15/14
Wake ? wake u-*shot*


Kevin The Kirby
08/15/14
always press mysterious buttons there the most trustable types of buttons


guestuser
08/16/14
BattleStarX: I bet one is a trick, and it says "Press for free cake"


astroninja1
08/16/14
wait thats not Saia, its Not-Saia. Why are they calling her Saia?


guestuser
08/17/14
Speaking of buttons, is there gonna be one for C Central?


ebuko
08/18/14
Buttons buttons buttons *boom*


Tygah
08/18/14
I'm back! ^-^ Oh wait no one cares or remembers me... Oh well :D

Glad to see another division getting the spotlight, and a new art contest! This one's gonna be good, I can tell!


DarkMario1000
07/30/15
The colours seemed a bit off, which made me realize that, too.
It's probably because Division C doesn't know what happened in "Master of Puppets" (unless, of course, I forgot one past comic)

astroninja1


DarkMario1000
07/30/15
http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1803484/master-of-puppets-part-50/

astroninja1



Part 3




Ulti's Notes:

In comparison to Wake, with Nameless I aimed to try to make him the straight man of the group. As a result, this led to calling back to some of the Division Addition scenes of Wake and Neona telling outlandish stories to a nonbelieving Nameless. He'd be the one in the friend group rolling his eyes at everyone's antics, while simultaneously still participating in them.

Original Author's Comment:

08/21/14
So, I had wanted to update C Central on a daily schedule, but you might have noticed that there was a week-long pause between this update and the last one. Well, summer vacation's coming to a close in a few more weeks for me, and I had yet to start my summer work due to procrastination. I told myself that I basically couldn't work on any of my stuff until I had at least started my summer work, meaning no video-editing/recording and no comic-making. Judging from the fact that I just made a comic today must mean I've gotten some/most of my work done, right? Nope. I still haven't even started yet. I just figured that since not doing stuff I wanted to do wasn't working, I might as well do the stuff I want to do if neither will result in schoolwork getting completed.


It's hard to create comics with a broken mouse, though.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

SuperScratchkat
08/21/14
inb4 there are giant bees


BattleStarX
08/21/14
"Shenanigans" is really a word that should get used more often. Though I'm not sure it should follow "tank" TOO often...


Luigi_96
08/21/14
NOT THE BEES. :U


Fighter Dee
08/22/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Your last sentence made me laugh more than it should.


guestuser
10/09/16
Five comments? Geez guys, step it up.
(-_- )( -_-)



Part 4




Ulti's Notes:

Based on earlier comics, C Central was a small chance to reiterate Aika's relatively-unreasonable distrust of Shat'l that she exhibited back in the first crossover, From Dream Adventures.

Essentially, my mindset was that Aika just couldn't take anyone at their word, and has trust issues in a general sense. She doesn't believe peoples' words, she believes concrete evidence and hard facts. And thus, to her, no matter how accurate Shat'l's predictions seemed to be, they would always be coming from his mouth, and without hard evidene to back each new prediction up, she wouldn't trust that he'd be telling the truth this time.

It's a bit of an odd mindset to give to a character who's meant to be a leader, but I figured that her wrangling capabilities added value to what would otherwise be a difficult person to have in a leadership position.

Original Author's Comment:

08/22/14
Expanding a little bit on Aika's distrust of others, as we saw previously in her appearance in From Dream Adventures.

Whether or not Wake is right or wrong about her is up to you to decide.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

Luigi_96
08/22/14
But Shat'l is psychic. :|


Extremmefan
08/22/14
Luigi_96: Yeah! Shat'l ALWAYS had proofs!


BattleStarX
08/22/14
Weirdness is awesome.


DarkNut255
08/23/14
Aika needs to be involved in weirdness more.

Also, I just realized that Neona’s text in panel one is a slightly larger font than anyother in the comic.


plasma_knight303
08/23/14
Silly Wake.


Everyone loves weirdness.


Sapar
08/23/14
You'd think that Shat'l being right about everything would be enough proof at this point.


Kevin The Kirby
08/24/14
Psychics themselves are proof


guestuser
08/27/14
The REAL question is, do you think Shat'l foresaw them not going to him for advice?


Koopario
08/31/14
@Falcon_Lunch!: Yes.


guestuser
09/02/14
Way too many kirbies this sucks


Kevin The Kirby
09/02/14
@Guest: Then why are you reading it?



Part 5




Ulti's Notes:

After getting some background sprite sheets to use for this sequence, I immediately remembered the last time I had used this particular location in a sprite comic. Thus, I analyzed the original sequence from 4 years previous, and adapted the conversation between some Yoshies into a new conversation with the Division C members.

This page is all a big reference to the original Yoshi & Kirby comic that I had made, specifically the pages in the linked chapter after the Dedede explosion. I'm not well-versed enough in HTML to know how to link to it directly, but if you Ctrl+F the phrase "Remember when this comic was called 'Yoshi & Kirby'?" without the "" marks, you'll be taken directly to the two pages referenced.

Despite wanting to make this reference, though, I aimed to do so in such a way that wouldn't feel out-of-place, which I think came across in the fact that nobody even realized it was a reference for a good several years.

Original Author's Comment:

09/04/14
"Of course. Explosions are great moments to savor."


Sorry about the wait again, but school's started now, so somehow that equates to more time to work on Kirby Adventure. Make of that what you will.

For now, have two new Skrawlers episodes! Well, they're only semi-new, I haven't linked them here yet but they've both been on the channel for a few weeks/days, respectively.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

8bithuman
09/04/14
The great dragon is real!!!


BattleStarX
09/05/14
Epic faceplant. Is is the only way to properly do one.


Luigi_96
09/05/14
It's a DRAGON. :U


guestuser
09/05/14
@UltimateYoshi: YOU'RE REALLY FEELING IT!


1ce_k1d
09/05/14
8bithuman: It was always real!
Just hiding!


GraciaWarrior
09/05/14
THE GREAT DRAGON!!! >:)

Anyway, Nice Avatar Ulti


guestuser
09/05/14
Hi, Shulk!


Sapar
09/05/14
Wait, how are you still making Skrawlers videos? Does the network still allow for friend brawls...?


Ultimate Yoshi
09/05/14
Sapar: As was stated before, these videos were recorded before the wi-fi was shut down.


Sapar
09/06/14
Ultimate Yoshi: *Gasp* so the Skrawlers is going to end soon? D:


guestuser
01/01/16
Is panel 1+2 a Y&K reference?


Ultizeta
07/30/17
Here's the color fix link. I also just want to point out that only one person in the past 3 years noticed that this entire page was a reference to two old Yoshi & Kirby pages. And even then, the one person who recognized that only noticed half of the reference.


Yoskichu
06/29/18
Just for the record, the "one person" Ulti mentioned was me.




That's cool I guess.



Part 6


Ulti's Notes:

This dragon is normally part of an RPG-themed boss fight, but I used it here for a differing purpose, to use the preconception of a dragon's power to illustrate that this small snowman antagonist, a creature known as a Chilly, was stronger than he appeared.

This Chilly was a new cameo antagonist, the last in the comic in fact. Belonging to the user MarioKong, his name is Chef Freezè (pronounced Free-zeh) and utilizes a stereotypical French accent, despite France not existing in this universe. It wouldn't be the first time a regional accent was utilized in a different kind of context for a media property, though.

Original Author's Comment:

09/06/14
I apologize for the wait, MarioKong, but at last! Your cameo character has finally made it into the comic! Yes, this Chilly chef is indeed a new cameo! I was informed that he speaks with a French accent. I apologize in advance.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

MetaFawful
09/06/14
Oh gosh yes.


8bithuman
09/06/14
He is made of chili
(BAM I MADE A PUN)


Luigi_96
09/06/14
That is a Chilly

with a French accent

and a mustache.












Heck to the yes.


MarioKong
09/06/14
Yaaaaaaaaay! :D


SuperScratchkat
09/06/14
yeah okay


ebuko
09/06/14
Yes, The purple dragon DID get frozen. It's not your imagination.


guestuser
09/06/14
OH GOOD LORD KILL IT WITH FIRE.


Koopario
09/06/14
Uh...


BattleStarX
09/06/14
...That may be the most awesome Chilly ever.


Kevin The Kirby
09/06/14
That chilly can just make a bowl of chilli so he needs to chill out I had to XD


guestuser
09/09/14
THE CHEF IS PERFECTO :D



Part 7


Ulti's Notes:

As dictated by cameo concepts, sometimes a character would come with aspects that I myself wouldn't typically come up with on my own. For myself, an insane chef snowman would be enough of a viable character idea, but MarioKong provided me "Food-Comp" to use as well.

Food-Comp is essentially a sentient computer window, based on the Computer Virus boss fight from Kirby Super Star. This witch is a recolored version of one of the 5 enemies the Computer Virus spawns within its windows. It's actually the aforementioned RPG boss that the dragon from earlier also originated from. It's all a big reference to stereotypical RPGs, so the other fights include a small slime and a medieval knight.

It's a bit out-there on top of everything else, but it's what I was given, so I worked with it as best I could.

Original Author's Comment:

09/07/14
It's funny that the cameo that involves an insane Chilly chef wanting to cook a Kirby comes in a segment immediately after Bandana Dee tried to do the exact same thing to Kimsy. Completely unintentional coincidence, I assure you.


Oh, I also have some important news to share. I'm no longer accepting cameos for Kirby Adventure. You can read more about that here.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

8bithuman
09/07/14
chillys eating kirbys instead of the other way around?


Ultimate Yoshi
09/07/14
@Jarkes: Yes, I realize this but be patient, and I don't know.


Luigi_96
09/08/14
Not technically cannibalism... I guess.


Koopario
09/08/14
Can't anyone in this comic just...inhale? Like...
KAS Member: Chilly!
*eats Chilly*
*gets Ice ability*


CapedLuigisYoshi
09/08/14
Koopario: Recall that back in Technical Difficulties, it was a surprise that Kirby himself could copy abilities.

As for inhaling... I can't recall if we've seen anyone other than Kirby and Shadik inhale stuff, actually. And neither of them are with the Division C folks.


guestuser
09/08/14
Koopario: .....
*is sad*


BattleStarX
09/08/14
Unintentional punnies are the best kind of punnies.


TheGreenShyGuy
09/09/14
I was just about to submit a cameo... D: oh well!



Part 8




Original Author's Comment:

09/10/14
Meanwhile, Aika's sure having the time of her life. It took me a while to figure out how to word her dialogue in the last panel.


There's a new Skrawlers video out! It's a bit of a long one, but there's lots of fun to be had in this one!


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

Luigi_96
09/10/14
Gotta love these clients


BattleStarX
09/10/14
Aika seems absolutely THRILLED with the current situation. She and Kuxxel could have a grump-off.


Kevin The Kirby
09/11/14
That mission is definetly the hardest one they've ever faced they might need Kirby for this one.....


Koopario
09/11/14
Get NOVA, we'll need extra help for this...


CapedLuigisYoshi
09/11/14
How did you carry that bottle without arms, then?


MarioKong
09/11/14
CapedLuigisYoshi: Magic.


Fighter Dee
09/11/14
Call everyone, this is will be the mission of their lives...


Extremmefan
09/11/14
CapedLuigisYoshi: Hammer Space Storage (See Kirby's Dream Adventure for reference).


Tygah
09/11/14
CapedLuigisYoshi: I think he can carry it in his mouth, but opening it is another story


guestuser
09/13/14
Of course everybody needed to come for this. It's the most important mission of their careers.


Syogren
11/24/14
I'm not sure they'll be able to do this one, guys. This is the hardest mission yet.


guestuser
01/01/16
Gator:Fine. Attack! Aika:AAAHHH!!! Gator chases Aika around in a Pac-man-equse maze. Gator:WAKAWAKAWAKWAWAKWAKWAKWAKW



Part 9


Ulti's Notes:

Chef Kawasaki is a frequent miniboss from the Kirby series, who is well-known and typically provides the Cook copy ability to Kirby. Chef Shiitake, meanwhile, comes from the Kirby anime, and is the mentor of Chef Kawasaki (who's depicted as much more of a blundering goofball in the anime). Both are basically the only chefs in the Kirby universe, so it stood to reason that their name recognition would be pretty high for any aspiring chefs like Freezè.

Original Author's Comment:

09/13/14
Chef Freezè's got a few screws loose.

Update on the art contest: the current deadline is now at October 4th at a minimum. Although I'm thinking the segment might not end up being 30 parts long. We'll see. I'll keep you guys updated, but you've still got plenty of time to draw a submission!


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

Luigi_96
09/13/14
Yo, chef dude. Your meal just left.


MarioKong
09/13/14
I love this! X3


Kevin The Kirby
09/13/14
I think someone should notify him that his ingredients just left....


BattleStarX
09/13/14
I can tell this is just gonna be full of win.


guestuser
09/13/14
At least those poor Kirbies won't be baked into...well, anything.


TheGreenShyGuy
09/14/14
And he's still babbling on about that xD


guestuser
09/14/14
I like how Aika's throwing one of her teammates at the Chilly in the segment button. Good joke.


guestuser
09/14/14
...He DEFINITELY has screws loose if he thinks Kawasaki and Shiitake are on the same level of good cooking.



Part 10


Ulti's Notes:

One of the most difficult parts of writing this segment was coming up with increasingly-asinine, yet theoretically-imagineable, things for Division C to have supposedly encountered.

Original Author's Comment:

09/16/14
Nameless isn't so easily fooled after this happened.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

8bithuman
09/16/14
Or what about that time when they fought that evil swarm of ants that ate Whispy Woods?


Luigi_96
09/16/14
Spaghetti bears


SuperScratchkat
09/16/14
Thank you Ulti, for making us even MORE interested in Division C's antics.


BattleStarX
09/16/14
Potential off-screen antics is just never trustworthy.


1ce_k1d
09/16/14
Spaghetti bears!
Bouncing here and there and everywhere!
Body count that's beyond compare!
They're Spaghetti bears!


CapedLuigisYoshi
09/16/14
Or that time there was a French Chilly chef with a computer wizard at his disposal who wanted to cook the Kir- wait, that just happened.

...Or that time they confronted Dedede but he gave up immediatel- wait, no, wrong division.

...Or that time when the Great Flame Kirby broke out of the Second Post and proceeded to- okay, this is too silly.


Koopario
09/16/14
CapedLuigisYoshi: Hey what about the time when they had to stop Raize on--oh wait no.
Well what about that time when they all got kidnapped by Gala--no wait different story.


Tygah
09/16/14
Just wanna say that Wake is placed perfectly on that hill. Not that I doubt your comic making skills, but idk it just looks like a really perfectly placed sprite :)


Sapar
09/16/14
Koopario: or the time they skinned hapless fans of Kirby Adven- oh wait, that was me.


guestuser
09/18/14
Sapar: hm, well, it's not like--wait, WHAT?!


guestuser
09/19/14
@Guest: Well, what about the time Teelzy started floati-oh wait.

BURN IT ALL!


guestuser
09/19/14
Does anyone care that this is the 550th comic?


guestuser
09/21/14
@Alder613: we have parties every year and 100 comics
e_e
cant you tell?


Yoskichu
06/29/18
Or that time Caiya found a magic pond that cloned her when she said a thing she read in a book or similar and eventually the clones took over Dream Land until people learned how to reverse the cloning thing?



wait...


CassCraft
11/14/19
But it is troo



Part 11


Ulti's Notes:

I never explained how or why Chef Freezè could teleport, since that's not something a Chilly can normally do. Given that this wasn't a particularly serious segment, though, it didn't really affect the credibility of everything.

Original Author's Comment:

09/22/14
This is actually really creepy if you think about it.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

Extremmefan
09/22/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Yes it is... But I feel like I'm gonna kill that Chief Chilly... because I'm French and I don't like people taking my country's accent (That and he's far too violent and crazy).


Luigi_96
09/22/14
Extremmefan: What if he's not taking the accent, he just has it because he's French?


BattleStarX
09/22/14
Yes, I too prefer my ingredients well dead and silent before I use them.

...What? Don't look at me like that.


1ce_k1d
09/23/14
BattleStarX: To be fair, an apple still attached to the tree is technically alive.


MarioKong
09/23/14
Luigi_96: Or maybe he just has it because I like French accents.


Extremmefan
09/23/14
MarioKong: *Stares at MarioKong*.


MarioKong
09/23/14
Extremmefan: *stares back*


Extremmefan
09/23/14
MarioKong: *stares at MarioKong until he die from boredom*.


MarioKong
09/23/14
Extremmefan: *I just zone out and think about other things*


Extremmefan
09/23/14
MarioKong: *Luigi's voice imitation* Bye bye!



Part 12




Original Author's Comment:

09/24/14
It's weird. I've recently come to the conclusion that Aika's personality is basically the grumpy Kirby personality that I've been trying to rework in Chapter 4's segments, but for whatever reason I find it much more entertaining and interesting to write for Aika. Maybe it's just because she isn't Kirby that I like it more. Ah well.


Yesterday was a bit of a stressful yet fun day for me, as I participated in a Super Smash Bros. Melee tournament at my school! Despite not having played Melee in six years due to my copy of the game breaking (I seem to have terrible luck with Smash Bros. games), I managed to nab fourth place out of approximately 34 players! Not bad, if I do say so myself.

Speaking of Super Smash Bros., I've got some videos to link related to that! First up is a new Skrawlers video! Second, I don't actually I believe I linked these earlier, but I have not just one, and not just two, but three Project M replay videos for you to enjoy! There isn't any commentary, but the fights are still fairly interesting, so give 'em a watch if you feel like it.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

BattleStarX
09/24/14
Mmm... evil cackling... Such a fun way to pass the time.


Koopario
09/24/14
...Aika is looking up. Why is Aika looking up?
...
OH MY GOD SHE'S READING THE TEXT IN THE SPEECH BUBBLE ISN'T SHE DEFEND THE FOURTH WALL


BattleStarX
09/24/14
Koopario: She doesn't seem to be looking it up to me. And since I made that "look up" sprite that I've seen UY use a few times...


KHKirby
09/25/14
I thought the #1 of evil cackling was to never walk towards evil cackling.


Luigi_96
09/25/14
KHKirby: Yes, but this is Aika we're talking about.


Fighter Dee
09/26/14
KHKirby: That's a lie, the first thing you should do once you hear a evil cackling is walk to it!


guestuser
09/27/14
...I'm sorry, I just can't take that evil cackling seriously.


KHKirby
09/27/14
Also, I'd like to make a note that I am the "Chris" person in Ulti's replays.

Also, notice how I don't win a single match. At all.


TheGreenShyGuy
10/23/14
I guess Aika's just used to this...



Part 13




Original Author's Comment:

09/28/14
If telling jokes to soda can make it fizzier, cackling in the presence of soup can totally make it spicier. Logic holds no control when it comes to video game cooking.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

BattleStarX
09/28/14
Hey, they say the best cooking ingredient is love, but surely other emotions can add in other flavors.

Imagine what kind of dishes Mister Indignant Pit up there could make. :P


Extremmefan
09/28/14
BattleStarX: Maaaayyyybbbeee...


KHKirby
09/28/14
BattleStarX: How about a healthy dose of Floor Ice Cream?


Luigi_96
09/29/14
Kirbies are zesty enough without cackling.


Air Man1 21
09/29/14
BattleStarX: Anything without eggplant.


Koopario
09/29/14
BattleStarX: He makes the best Mistakes anyone'll ever see.


Luigi_96
09/30/14
Green Kirby the Leaft: *wipes mouth with napkin* Hmm?



Part 14


Original Author's Comment:

10/03/14
Obviously, Wake is totally wrong. If they were in Ryka's mind, they'd be surrounded by an infinite amount of soda right now.


Smash 3DS comes out tomorrow! You can expect a dearth of updates from me for a bit.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

CapedLuigisYoshi
10/03/14
The blue-green background seems most similar to the background of the cast icon of Etam.

...

Etam's full name is Ybrik Etamitlu, which is Ultimate Kirby backwards.

The word "ultimate" can mean last.

The last game Kirby appeared in before tomorrow's Smash Bros was Triple Deluxe.

Triple --> 3 --> 3rd Gen

Hoenn Confirmed.


Luigi_96
10/03/14
CapedLuigisYoshi: That logic though.


CapedLuigisYoshi
10/03/14
Jarkes: Half-Life 3 is too big.


NikNW
10/03/14
Ultimate Yoshi: My life has basically been out of commission since the demo came out! I'll probably shut down all outside contact when I get the full game.

P.S. Coincidentally I just learned what dearth means today. Seems to happen to me a lot.


Kebi_in_your_pants
10/03/14
CapedLuigisYoshi: triangles have 3 sides, 3rd gen has illuma-*ded*


Tygah
10/04/14
This division sasses each other so much XD I love it


Fighter Dee
10/04/14
CapedLuigisYoshi: What? (Don't bother explaining I understood, I'm just confused because nothing in there does nothing like that)


guestuser
10/07/14
Fucking you ultimate both you and gigi can go suck my black hard dick


Kirby 128
10/08/14
Gross, man!


guestuser
10/08/14
Kirby 128: Not as gross as your cock suckling mom


guestuser
10/14/14
Hey ultimateyoshi please bring back the cameo! Please! I want one BADLY!


TheGreenShyGuy
10/23/14
Oh look it's 2006 kirby sprite comic backrounds! :D


guestuser
05/21/16
CapedLuigisYoshi:Then omega ruby and alpha sapphire came out.



Part 15




Original Author's Comment:

10/10/14
It's jokes like these that would never have happened would I script any of my pages. Spontaneous writing for the win!


Smash 3DS is about as good as I expected. Although for every great thing about it, I find myself getting incredibly aggravated at an equal amount of things. The stages are really aggravating, the controls aren't as responsive, the wi-fi's on par with Brawl's, items are horribly unfair this time around, single player is ridiculously repetitive, et cetera. On the plus side, though, the characters are great, the music is awesome, the graphics are pretty good for the 3DS, and anything wrong with the game is redeemable by the sheer existence of Greninja. GOD, he is amazing. By far the best newcomer in the game. Although, despite how blasphemous this may sound coming from me, but Pac-Man is really fun to play as well. I'm glad I gave him the chance despite hating him (unlike a certain OTHER Kirby sprite comic author...)


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

Kebi_in_your_pants
10/10/14
I had the same problems aswell (online was horrid, i only used it to play with my friends because everyone else spammed the same move), I wonder if that is actually a chilly...


guestuser
10/10/14
I made a chef character and he's a Chilly (thanks to whoever sent the Chef Chilly cameo for the idea). Also to Smash Bros, I just love the game! Almost everything is just great. I also can see why some items seem unfair (like that alien thing that can abduct you). Also, what's wrong with the stages and single player? I kinda like some of the stages (even the WarioWare stage is one of my favorites).


NikNW
10/10/14
I'm not sure, but the chef might not be the social type.

I'm not sure about you guys, but when I play Smash 3DS online, more than half of the matches I play are against a Little Mac. Pretty annoying if you ask me.


Luigi_96
10/10/14
Ever heard of deep fried ice cream? That's what this guy could turn into.


MarioKong
10/10/14
@DeeBert: It was me. :3


Extremmefan
10/10/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I don't like Greninja... Gigi doesn't like him either... and I'm pretty sure a whole lot of other sprite comic authors doesn't like him... BTW, and there's my sister (normally she loves everything she sees) who doesn't like him either... Why would you like him? He's nothing compared to Sonic in terms of speed, Meta Knight and Lucario in term of cool, and Mario in term of playability... so basically, I think they were just stalling when coming up with the idea of putting him.


pikscast
10/10/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I think the controls are quite good. Then again, it could be where I played the demo for hours upon hours. Meh


guestuser
10/10/14
pikscast: I also think the controls are good too.


Extremmefan
10/10/14
Also, troll guest from previous page, you're gonna die a painful death.
EDIT: He hasn't visited Kirby's Dream Adventure yet... and it's the most popular non-completed Kirby comic on Smack Jeeves.


Sapar
10/10/14
Greninja is who I'm manning right now, actually. I don't really play Pokemon that much anymore, but his moveset is just so unique that he draws me in.

I actually like Pac-man as well, but not as much as Gren. Just like you.... Eerie, isn't it?


Koopario
10/11/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Freeflow author! THAT IS WHAT YOU ARE!
And it's all the better for it.

I can't get quite used to Greninja's moveset, sadly. I haven't tried Pac-man yet (for the sheer reason of Shulk and Robin just suck me in) and quite honestly, I've seen him play. It's a great moveset.


DarkNut255
10/11/14
Sadly, I don’t have Smash 3DS yet, and won’t get it until my birthday (later this month, at least, so I don’t have to wait half a year like I did with Kirby: Triple Deluxe), but I did play the demo.

The items ARE annoying (especially the one free point item, the Gradius guys, and the bug thing (the one from Skyward Sword), and I am dissapointed by no Ice Climbers or Lucas. Although ROB’s still in it, so I am happy.


guestuser
10/11/14
DarkNut255: I don't find the items that annoying to me, but I think it's because of my skill. Also, what do you mean by "Gradius guys"? I know what you are talking about the free point item and the bug thing, but what do you mean by "Gradius guys"?


BattleStarX
10/12/14
What's a script? Can you nom it?

So how's Greninja doing? Will he be near insta-banned like how Meta Knight was in Brawl? And the most important question, what does Kirby's hat look like when he copies him?

And Pac-Man's fun, ne? Will have to try him out. I'm just glad Ness is still in. I like playing Ness, and really need to re-play Earthbound again. Maybe it's time to get a WiiU since it's on the virtual console...


DarkNut255
10/12/14
Jarkes: Yeah, that's what I meant.


guestuser
10/12/14
what is this shit comic it looks like a dick shoved up somones ass. YOu dumbass comic makers need to get lives.


guestuser
10/12/14
Extremmefan: Suck my dickk you fucker you can go jump down a pit and die


guestuser
10/13/14
can you put that little aika tab back i like those


guestuser
10/13/14
your my favorite author and you aways do a good job on this comic ,oh and did you put etam in your comic or did etam hack in.


Extremmefan
10/13/14
@Fucking you 2: Yourself, jerk!
>:(
You're worst than any motherf**er I knew in my school.


guestuser
10/13/14
@Fucking you 2: Looks like we've found the Mariotehplumber of webcomics.

BTW, let's see YOU do better.


guestuser
10/14/14
King Dedede maining! Awesome! Plus, Greninja isn't even that good. One f smash equals ohko from the King!


guestuser
10/14/14
Also, UltimateYoshi, I've read basically 450 of your comics. Great comic! Too bad you took down the cameo thing. I kinda wanted one.


guestuser
10/14/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Personally, I think greninja sucks. Play him ALL you want, but if I have the luck of facing you, you are going DOWN. ------------------------------------------------------------------
King Dedede's final smash shouldve been Masked Dedede. Or when DLC comes out, they HAVE to put it in as a alt costume. With the hammer.


guestuser
10/14/14
DarkNut255: The Special Flag does give you an extra stock/point, but its useless in 4 player matches, the Galaga is not hard to escape as well as you can destroy it, and the beetle is EASY to reflect at someone. The only really annoying item is the Gust Bellows. It basically is unavoidable, and when used right kills any character with no exeptions.


guestuser
10/14/14
Jarkes:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d3iLBIF4_9Y

You can watch his Sonic Adventure 2 review here, but for your sanity, you probably shouldn't.

Also, it's not MarioTHEplumber, it's MarioTEHplumber.


Jojothejman
10/22/14
I always find my self liking all the characters in smash bros and just defaulting to usually 10 or 15. I get bored really easily.



Part 16


Original Author's Comment:

10/14/14
This background is actually the Windows 7 Aero theme. Nobody seemed to notice. It must not be as recognizable as the mac background, considering everyone except me noticed when I accidentally used that back in Jetting Across The Ice.


Recent conversations-slash-arguments over at my review site have led me to wonder what you guys truly think of this comic. So, if you've ever been too afraid to speak up or just didn't feel like it before, don't hesitate right now. Give me all the criticism you've got, and tell me things to improve on. Just, y'know, make sure they're things that actually need improving or can be improved in this comic in the first place. And obviously don't be rude or impolite about it, either.

And if you don't care about any of that, maybe you will care about the very last Brawl Skrawlers episode, found right here. Caution: it's two hours long. It's worth sticking it all the way through, though.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

guestuser
10/14/14
Hm, didn't thought about that's the Windows 7 background. Also, I think they are in some kind of storage.


Ultimate Yoshi
10/14/14
Jarkes: Yoshi & Kirby is going to be coming back at some point, rest assured. I'm not putting a date on it though, considering that would probably just lead to disappointment. I'll admit I've been thinking about the comic lately, so you can take that as some positive news if anything.


guestuser
10/14/14
Jarkes: Maybe when he get's some free time, he'll resume Yoshi & Kirby.
EDIT: Ninja'd!


BattleStarX
10/14/14
Fear not, Ulti, you've plenty of nit-pickers and complainers that read your comic. They'll keep you in line.

And if that doesn't work, I'll send Etam back.


guestuser
10/15/14
BattleStarX: Yep because this comic sucks dick.


guestuser
10/15/14
@Fucking you: Well, let's see YOU do better.


guestuser
10/15/14
BattleStarX: Actually, I think you send Etam to the hater guest.


guestuser
10/15/14
This comic seems to be doing extremely well. C Central is hilarious so far. Too bad cameos aren't appearing...
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MASKED DEDEDE NEEDS TO BE IN DLC!


Luigi_96
10/15/14
Honestly, any problems I've ever had with this comic have gone away already. So yeah.


Extremmefan
10/15/14
@Fucking you: Well, I've got only one thing to say to you, hate guest... F*** you!


DarkNut255
10/15/14
The only issues I’ve had with KA are either ones that are being fixed (Kirby’s drastic personality change after The Beginning, and the fact that certain characters haven’t been used for a LONG time), or based around a certain segment (The Beginning’s sudden change in tone halfway through, Tear in the Fabric’s sudden ending (although that was simply because of that segment’s negative reception), or Tree to Tree’s jumbled plot), so there aren’t very many issues with KA now, atleast not one that I can think of.


Sapar
10/15/14
@Fucking you: Do me next! I want a turn!


Fighter Dee
10/17/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Don't worry, I think this is one of the best webcomics I've read.


guestuser
10/18/14
ultimate Yoshi did you unlock all unlockable characters in smash and what one is your favorite


guestuser
10/18/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Halloween special pls


guestuser
10/18/14
@ebuko: a halloween special would be amazing maybe all of divison a b and c trying to scare divison e! or just weelzen'jet,divison d,and more cameos!


guestuser
10/20/14
Apparently the hate guest was too immature to stop at 20 Times Kirby and so came here instead.

What a loser.

Well, I think this is a pretty good comic so far, but I do think Talzo and his gang aren't showing up enough. Plus, you added Gigi in quite a while ago, and she hasn't really done anything yet. The storyline's been at a standstill for a while. I'm not saying you have to do anything right away, but I do want to see what Talzo's plans are regarding Gigi. That's the only thing I've got by this point.



Part 17




Ulti's Notes:

'Grenouille' is the French word for 'frog', and was basically one of the only things in French that I knew the word for.

Original Author's Comment:

10/19/14
Side note to Future Ulti: Food-Comp speaks in Tunga. Now you don't have to spend a half-hour trying to figure out what font I used.


I just want to remind everyone that the art contest is still going on! I'm thinking I'm going to make the deadline permanently be at November 9th, which gives you guys three more weeks to get in an entry! Remember, the winner gets a character in a major role in the comic, and since I'm no longer accepting cameos, that makes it a much rarer opportunity!


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

BattleStarX
10/19/14
Tunga, ne? Don't think I've heard of that font... might even have it, but never payed the least bit of attention to it. Looks like a nice "computer" font. I just use System.


Luigi_96
10/19/14
I'd say his food-comp

has a virus


KHKirby
10/19/14
Aika is a national treasure and should be preserved at all costs.


guestuser
10/19/14
Careful Aika, I think your gonna be transported to where the others and the dragon are at.
Green Kirby the Leaft: Now that you mentioned it, that's kinda odd, it should have been blue or white.
Ultimate Yoshi: I might enter the art contest but I think I won't accept the prize depending on when can I get my cameo sprite sheet done.


guestuser
10/20/14
Luigi_96: Hah I get it. But isn't it already a virus?


Luigi_96
10/20/14
Jarkes: It's a recolor of Computer Virus. So yes it kind of is.


Tygah
10/20/14
I like the zig-zagged speech bubble for the Computer!


guestuser
10/20/14
Luigi_96: And the dragon is also a part of the "virus". And I know the comic is a little off on some things, but doesn't that mean the Food-Comp or Computer Virus killed its most powerful "program" to give to an insane Chilly chef for cooking? The meal is gonna have a slight taste of programming.Speaking of which, What was the origin of conputer virus?


guestuser
10/20/14
No offence ulti.


Kebi_in_your_pants
11/06/14
I finished up the final bits of the picture I was "drawing" (is mouse considered drawing?) should I send it in PM or some other way?


Ultimate Yoshi
11/06/14
Kebi_in_your_pants: Private Message is fine.



Part 18


Original Author's Comment:

10/22/14
That was easy.


Hey folks! I've started up a new Let's Play, after a bit of an unintentional break from them! Catch the first episode of Pikmin 2 by clicking here, or follow the LP playlist by clicking here!


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

Koopario
10/22/14
Ultimate Yoshi: And so it was.
I honestly don't know if they'll pop out where they want to though. Those of you who think they'll get lost when they exit, say "aye."
Also, first hopefully please don't delete this I'll edit if you want.


guestuser
10/23/14
If that Chef Chilly is going to put a password, then I think it'll be "Chef".


Luigi_96
10/23/14
Or at least voice recognition. Seriously, dude.


MarioKong
10/23/14
My cameo is an idiot. Just like I wanted him to be. :3


CapedLuigisYoshi
10/23/14
...Hmm.

This isn't especially relevant to this particular page, but it is relevant to the arc and I just remembered to comment on it now, so: prediction!

As this arc seems to at least somewhat be leading up to something having to do with Aika's issues with others, I can see this leading into her issues with Shat'l. In particular, someone's likely to bring up that Shat'l's never actually been wrong about a prediction (aside from the events of Master of Puppets), and so she'll go to talk with him about that, perhaps even to give him another chance...

...only to find that Kirby's returned in the meantime and is confronting Shat'l about his (supposed) incorrect assessment of Kirby's vacation, which Aika takes as an excuse to re-justify her dismissive attitude toward Shat'l.


guestuser
10/23/14
CapedLuigisYoshi: Shat'l only gave Kirby the wrong idea, he did it only so the events of Mass Attack would go the right path.


CapedLuigisYoshi
10/23/14
@KingDededeMainer: Yeah, but no one else knows that.


Fighter Dee
10/23/14
Ultimate Yoshi: A Let's Play of Pikmin 2, right now that I just finished the first...


guestuser
10/23/14
CapedLuigisYoshi: Shat'l did. :T but still, if kirby didn't go, canon or not, the entire Kirby Universe wouldn't be th kirby universe. It would be the Skully Universe.


CapedLuigisYoshi
10/23/14
@KingDededeMainer: "no one ELSE"

Like, obviously Shat'l knows that he had to lie, but no other character does. All Aika has to do is overhear Kirby being like, "Hey, Shat'l, the vacation you said would go well almost got me killed," and she'd immediately take that as a way to keep disregarding his powers.

This kind of misunderstanding isn't uncommon in fiction.


guestuser
10/23/14
Oh oops. But still. Shat'l could explain when kirby comes back, but I guess Kirby would know by then anyway. He would still be extremely pissed off at Shat'l, but he would know.
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On a side note, King Dedede would've COMPLETELY whooped Necrodus's butt if he wasn't focused on throwing bombs inside bubbles at Kirby. All Hail the King!


guestuser
10/23/14
On a side SIDE note, I wonder how King Dedede is feeling about Kirby Infiltrating his beloved sweets castle. And one last thing: Technically Necrodeus kinda half-knows, but yeah no one ELSE knows.


pika_pika_pika
10/23/14
Wonder what horrors will befall the crazy French chilly. Usually its a Kirby cooking a chilly (and just about everything else) in dreamland, or at least in the games.


Koopario
10/24/14
Green Kirby the Leaft: Probably got banned.


Yoskichu
03/05/17
Computer:Enter password
Uhh...
Pudding.
Computer:Unauthorized password. Please kill subject c:/dragonhint.exe to continue
Wait what
*computer virus style fight*



Part 19




Original Author's Comment:

10/26/14
Would you tropers out there consider this Lampshade Hanging, or am I wrong? That's one trope I've always had difficulty in fully grasping what it actually entails, I feel.

For everyone else, I've got nothing. Except a new avatar, I s'pose.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

Djoing
10/26/14
More like 'leaning on the fourth wall'.


guestuser
10/26/14
That lighting bolt is more like a glowing rope.


Luigi_96
10/26/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Sounds like lampshading to me, although I don't know much about tropes.


Kebi_in_your_pants
10/26/14
I don't really look at tropes but I will check it out. Is it a coincidence that I beat pikmin 3 yesterday? (@profile pic)

Edit: immediately after commenting I check the page before's comment.

ANOTHER EDIT: It is the first part of lampshading (making it clear that you understand this is impossible) but its not entirely it.


1ce_k1d
10/26/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I am kind of a troper and I have no idea what to call that.


astroninja1
10/26/14
as kebi said, the first part is making it clear you understand its impossible. pretty surethe second part involves giving an explanation of how she did it


BattleStarX
10/26/14
Don't be hatin' on the 'stache, Aika. The 'stache is awesome.


Koopario
10/26/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Good enough for me!


guestuser
10/27/14
Is Aika stored ability is Suplex?


pika_pika_pika
10/27/14
silly chilly, it makes perfect sense to be able to pick up lightning and beat others up with it


pikscast
10/29/14
PIIIIIIIIIIIKMIIIIIIIIIIIIN

Sorry, but I love Pikmin, so nice avatar


Ultimate Yoshi
10/29/14
pikscast: You're certainly not alone in that opinion.

If you're such a big fan of the series, you might enjoy watching my Let's Plays of the game. I did the first one last year, and I'm currently doing the second game, if that interests you.


guestuser
10/29/14
Ultimate Yoshi: it probably won't affect the comic much, but King Dedede has Pyrokenises. Just a little thing if you are interested in fine detail to your characters. Speaking of which, why isn't the King in the Cast section?
Also one more thing, I have proof of the King a fire user: Hammer Flip. Sure, Kirby can do it too, But he still has control over fire.
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Gimmie your friend code temporarily and ill whoop you in Smash Bros.


pikscast
11/01/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I did my own let's play of Pikmin 3.


guestuser
11/03/14
Hillo. My name is MegaDachiX. I am known as Quick Man on miiverse and am banned. Ultimate, I mega heart your comix.


guestuser
11/03/14
Ultimate Yoshi: plz make Etam return. And btw, while u r at it, make jet and talzo return as well. And add a black and dark purple Kirby who is some psychomaniac with magic powas and his catch phrase is "DOOOOOOOM!" plz do at least one o the following. Thx!


guestuser
11/03/14
Idk why, but Chief Chilly reminds me of Starchy from Adventure Time. .-.


guestuser
11/05/14
I REALLY hope "The Fourth Wall Will Not Protect You" comes into use soon.


TheGreenShyGuy
11/09/14
No way, there was almost actual action in this comic! It's been a while!



Part 20




Original Author's Comment:

11/03/14
In case you are not French, the French words used in this comic are: "Understand, cook?" and "...Come again?"


Aika's threats are much more amusing if you reverse the order she says them in.


I would've had this comic out much sooner, but Smack Jeeves keeps having lots of server problems for some reason. I had this done at 6 pm on Friday, but couldn't submit it until now.


Reminder! You've only got 7 days left to submit an entry for the art contest! I've only got seven entries so far, so feel free to add to that! You've got nothing to lose by entering, and a permanent (and decently important) place in Kirby Adventure history to gain!


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

Luigi_96
11/03/14
Look who's about to become a puddle.


MarioKong
11/03/14
Luigi_96: A very French puddle!


guestuser
11/03/14
MarioKong: a very French puddle w/ a mustache!









mustache!


MarioKong
11/03/14
@MegaDachiX: And that mustache has a mustache!
...and a small mustache-Eiffel Tower. With a mustache.


guestuser
11/03/14
I have a question Ulti, will there be more contests or will the third fan art contest be the last contest?


guestuser
11/03/14
MarioKong: Welcome 2 Mustache Land! Go to the Petting Zoo and see our moostaches, or visit the StacheFair and play games and win mustaches! Go to Taylor Swiftstache's concert as well from 7 to 9:30!


pika_pika_pika
11/03/14
MarioKong and a very French chef hat


guestuser
11/04/14
Ultimate Yoshi: guess wut guys! Im turning 11 today! Woohoo! Ulti, it would really make my day if u make a b-day shoutout to me. Pretty plz?!?!


Sapar
11/04/14
@MegaDachiX: Yeeeeeah I doubt that's happening. Nothing against you, but people really only do that with close friends.

Happy birthday anyway, though! ^^



Part 21




Original Author's Comment:

11/04/14
So long, Freezè, we hardly knew ye.


Only 5 more days for the art contest! I've got 8 submissions now, but don't be shy! Anyone and everyone can enter!


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

pika_pika_pika
11/04/14
Be careful Aika, if you don't eat the soup soon after it is done, it might get Chilly. Then it might Freezè your mouth.


guestuser
11/04/14
Oh my, I think I should really get a Smackjeeves account and make something for the fan art contest!


pikscast
11/04/14
And of course, the hat has changed heads.


NikNW
11/04/14
Don't put on the hat! It is EVILLLL!


Luigi_96
11/04/14
That's surprisingly morbid.

Then again this is the Kirby universe soooo


guestuser
11/05/14
Let us all keep the spirit of Freezè in our hearts.

He shall be missed...


Fighter Dee
11/05/14
@Guest: Not really...


Koopario
11/05/14
Luigi_96: But this is the Kirby Adventure universe we're talking about here.
Keeby died here for no good reason.
Freezè had a better reason to die but still.


guestuser
11/05/14
Koopario: You have a point. Who could be next?!?! My prediction is Shat'l. He'll probably sacrifice himself by blocking Kirby from Necrodeus' attack.


pikscast
11/06/14
@UltimateYoshi
TELL ME WHERE YOU FOUND YOUR AVATAR


Ultimate Yoshi
11/06/14
pikscast: Oh, c'mon, a big Pikmin fan like you, and you haven't already seen the new Pikmin animated shorts that they've been talking about for weeks and finally released to the public on 3DS and Wii U just yesterday during the Nintendo Direct? I am disappoint.

But seriously, go watch them, they are definitely worth it.


guestuser
11/06/14
Ultimate Yoshi: can u tell meh the shortcut site 2 them plz? And while I'm at it, if I was Aika, I would put Chef Freeze in a snow cone maker and give a snow cone to the others.


Kebi_in_your_pants
11/06/14
@X: They are on the 3DS eshop.


EDIT: also on the WIIU eshop for $4.99 (for both versions, 'cept 3Ds is Standard Definition but 3D, and the WIIU is HD.)


guestuser
11/08/14
Fighter Dee:







Yeah, you're probably right.


BattleStarX
11/08/14
Mmm~... snowman soup...


pikscast
11/09/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Thought so. Just wanted to be sure.


guestuser
11/09/14
BattleStarX: tell Author Doo I sed hai


TheGreenShyGuy
11/09/14
THE DAY HAS ARRIVED!


MarioKong
11/11/14
FreezÄ?
...
Freezé.


Nashew
01/27/16
Jarkes: Lol


Ultizeta
07/30/17
[x]


The Pixel Furret
01/10/19
Oh how wrong you were



Part 22




Ulti's Notes:

Basically the gag of this entire segment was leading up to this reveal.

Original Author's Comment:

11/11/14
This is the greatest idea I've ever had and nobody can convince me otherwise.

Refresh yourself if you don't remember that story.


In other news, the 3rd Fan Art Contest is over! I've judged the results and decided a winner! Check out all the entries at the latest news post, found right here!


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

CapedLuigisYoshi
11/11/14
...

...

............

...I'm settling on "How is that bandana staying on?"


1ce_k1d
11/11/14
For a second I thought that was a bagel with a sprout coming out of it.


BattleStarX
11/11/14
"Bring it on, fluffface!"

...I may need to use that one day.


Kebi_in_your_pants
11/11/14
That's a bit Out Of Character, but then again if I was surrounded by lies all the time and then it suddenly proven true I would freak out too.


Luigi_96
11/11/14
Oh gosh. XD


guestuser
11/11/14
THIS IS SO RANDOM AND WELL THOUGHT OUT IT DESERVES A MONTY PYTHON AWARD


guestuser
11/11/14
Did you make that sprite? Also, looks like I didn't get in the fan art contest in time, oh well.


Sapar
11/11/14
I wouldn't even dare to sway your opinion, Ulti.


Pasca46
02/24/17
The plants... the plaaaants... get them away from meee...



Part 23


Ulti's Notes:

The moral of the story is to not trust Wake.

Original Author's Comment:

11/13/14
Which ones were real stories and which ones were fake? It's up to you to decide.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

CapedLuigisYoshi
11/13/14
Well, we all know they were making up that story where that weird quasi-color-inverted puffball ripped a hole in reality and started making everything wacky until he was stopped by a kabuki beam. That could NEVER have happened.


Quirby64_:D
11/14/14
Heyeyeyeyey, I'd go with an even 51 percent.


guestuser
11/14/14
Maybe 80%, and also, poor Nameless, looks like he is all upset about every story he knows is just a lie.


NikNW
11/14/14
Well, we can all agree that the cake is a l-*shot*


Luigi_96
11/14/14
CapedLuigisYoshi: Oh come on now, don't be ridiculous.


guestuser
11/14/14
Ultimate Yoshi: hey Ulti, are there going to be more art contests or was the 3rd the last 1?


Ultimate Yoshi
11/14/14
@X: I've seen a lot of people asking this lately, so consider this a response to everyone; I have absolutely no idea.


guestuser
11/14/14
Hey, ulti? I need to tell you something. I used to be KingDededeMainer, but you banned me, probably because I was either rude or annoying. I just wanted to say I'm sorry, and I didn't mean to annoy/insult you in any way. I really am.



Part 24


Ulti's Notes:

Giving the character of Gigi a focus on pointing out illogical aspects was inspired by the real person of Gigi19972010's dislike of Tear in the Fabric and Etam because of how illogical he was. A touch petty, perhaps, but also bringing in an undeniable aspect of the person into the character, so... it evens out, I think.

Original Author's Comment:

11/15/14
You've all been waiting for this for a long time, haven't you?


That's a rhetorical question.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

BattleStarX
11/15/14
That's quite the vacation Kirby's having.


Spicyice101
11/15/14
I have made an awsome fan art, but want to know how to post it.


Ultimate Yoshi
11/15/14
Spicyice101: There are many ways. Post a link to it in comments, private message it, email it, etc. Take your pick.


Spicyice101
11/16/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I emailed it to you, it's Vezo vs Kaxo, if it was a even fight.


guestuser
11/16/14
Gigi probably didn't know that Kirby was on vacation or she could be coming up with something.


Luigi_96
11/16/14
Ooooh she didn't know... :U


Spicyice101
11/16/14
Ultimate Yoshi: did you get it?


44Cinder44
11/16/14
Maybe Kirby didn't get back when he said her would?


guestuser
11/16/14
44Cinder44: He's busy "vacationing", remember?


Koopario
11/16/14
Not entirely sure things will happen that are related to Talzo...
Buuuuuut Gigi must be surprised for some good reason. Sorry KAS, looks like for once you're on your own.


guestuser
11/18/14
Aw yuss. I am GIGANTANOURMOUS fan of Ryka. And Caiya.



Part 25


Original Author's Comment:

11/17/14
That's that for C Central. We've got this cliffhanger for the next segment to tease you. It should start sometime next week.


I'll be honest, I both really enjoyed and really hated writing this segment. Chef Freeze was as fun to use as I expected him to be, and Aika was surprisingly entertaining for me as well. But, while I enjoyed certain jokes with them, the other members of Division C were just not that fun to work with.

Out of Wake, Neona, and Nameless, the only one I feel has a full fledged personality is Neona, and I felt like I couldn't even show it that well here. She works better with Ryka and Gigi than she does Wake and Nameless, and speaking of them, I just feel as though I can't really write them well when they're the focus. I suppose that's why they're only background characters, but it kinda annoys me just how similar all three of these guys ended up being in this segment. I really feel as though they could've all swapped lines of dialogue and nothing would have changed. There's a very fragile differentiation between the three, especially Neona and Wake, that I personally feel only comes to light when they're separate.

I still enjoyed the segment, and I think it came out well, but that subgoal of expanding upon these side characters did not come to fruition. Ah well. I can at least say I gave it a shot, though.

As far as planning out this segment goes, though, I had this general concept created since the very beginning of the comic. Ever since I created the second Division and implied the existence of others, I knew that I'd eventually want to focus a segment on these guys. Division Addition was like a precursor to that idea, but rather than focusing on a specific Division's antics, it just worked with the three main characters I threw together.

Speaking of Division Addition, the climactic joke that C Central had been building up to was planned from its very conception in this segment. When I was writing out those silly stories for Neona to tell Nameless, I didn't initially think they were true, but the moment I came up with the term "dandelion ninja", I felt that was too brilliant of an idea to just go to waste like that. Thus, the plan was set in motion to have all of Division C's insane-sounding antics wind up actually being true after all. Admittedly, though, in the realm of Kirby, things like lava cats and magazine-obsessed penguins aren't too outlandish after all.


I'd probably drop a hint or two about the next segment like I normally do at the end of a Behind-The-Segment, but I think these last two C Central comics did a good enough job at teasing what's to come.


Smack Jeeves Comments Section:

guestuser
11/17/14
I think Gigi is going to come up with a plan while Kirby isn't here.


CapedLuigisYoshi
11/18/14
Careful, Gigi. Folks are known to just randomly pop in that green room any time they're being talked about.


BattleStarX
11/18/14
Been a while since we've had a big-baddie attack over here. Reason why I used so many jokes about it. :P


Luigi_96
11/18/14
Oh man I'm guessing the next chapters are gonna be a heck of a ride. :U


NarenIsGood
11/18/14
Ryka is so clueless. And without soda.


guestuser
11/18/14
I guess the next Segment is about Talzo


pika_pika_pika
11/18/14
Kirby's vacation is causing caos


guestuser
11/18/14
Talzo is going to be happy...


Sapar
11/19/14
Quack quack moooo


guestuser
11/19/14
NO DON'T YOU WILL SUMMON THE DANDELION NINJAS
YOU WILL DESTROY US ALLLL


Ultimate Yoshi
11/21/14
Jarkes: Yep. Hope you're not too upset. Honestly, I'm just not fond of revealing the concepts of certain segments just out in the open like that, so whenever you asked me about it, I kept quiet about my plans.


Hmm... something looks different, doesn't it?


guestuser
11/21/14
Hey, it looks like Talzo's finally doing something, huh? About time!


ethanpotato
11/21/14
Jarkes: oh good. Its not just me


NarenIsGood
11/21/14



Spicyice101
11/21/14
NarenIsGood: me too


guestuser
11/21/14
Holy crap wut happened to the comic


1ce_k1d
11/22/14
Well this is interesting.


GraciaWarrior
11/22/14
This comic So COOL!And
NEW BANNER


guestuser
11/27/14
GASP! ACTUAL STORY PROGRESSION!:O