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Lessons Learned / Re-Guesting
Suddenness - Part 1
Ulti's Notes:
The third and final crossover segment of Kirby Adventure begins, and we're once again returning to BattleStarX's Kirby's Dream Adventure comic. They had made significant changes and upgrades to their comic and story in the intervening 3 years between From Dream Adventures and Lessons Learned, so there's gonna be quite a lot to annotate to help get y'all up-to-speed on what's going on.
The characters on display here are all of the ones BSX sent me to use on my end, since we once again did the same kind of format of crossover where we each sent each other characters and worked with them simultaneously. A few of them are returning characters from the original crossover segment.
Kublie and Kubby (orange and brown) were characters who were prominently featured on BSX's end of the first crossover, a pair of girls working as PSSS enforcers who got put on probation prior to the first crossover.
Klooshy (black-yellow) was sent to me, and had his thoughts gimmick and a love of explosions.
Karby (gray) was also sent to me, and is similar to Shadik in that he's strong and silent.
The new characters here are Kruzy (neon green-black) who is Klooshy's friend and essentially an intern working for the PSSS, and is a pathetic aspiring-villain type of character. Kexas (green-white) is a self-obsessed gladiator champion who's only friend is Karby. Lastly, Kimsy (orange-purple) on the far end is a subservient minion of King Dedede.
This meeting had nothing really to do with the crossover itself, and was mostly just BSX's method of getting all the relevant characters in one place. Since they're very loose with their storytelling, it wasn't too hard to come up with excuses for why they'd all be around together.
Last thing to immediately annotate is BSX's original author comment below. By this time in KDA's lifespan, BSX had recently started doing what they called 'Quips' in their comments. Essentially, a sort of white-void Authorsona Zone where they had a variation of their Author Doo character who sort of organized the Comments Section rather than worked on the comic itself. A semi-split personality type of deal, essentially.
After a few quips, BSX (with my permission) wound up bringing in Etam for the quips, to tell extra jokes as the characters in the quips observed both the comic pages and the comments sections, and could interact with both as if watching TV. Etam during all his quip appearances was always written by BSX, and had zero input from myself.
The characters on display here are all of the ones BSX sent me to use on my end, since we once again did the same kind of format of crossover where we each sent each other characters and worked with them simultaneously. A few of them are returning characters from the original crossover segment.
Kublie and Kubby (orange and brown) were characters who were prominently featured on BSX's end of the first crossover, a pair of girls working as PSSS enforcers who got put on probation prior to the first crossover.
Klooshy (black-yellow) was sent to me, and had his thoughts gimmick and a love of explosions.
Karby (gray) was also sent to me, and is similar to Shadik in that he's strong and silent.
The new characters here are Kruzy (neon green-black) who is Klooshy's friend and essentially an intern working for the PSSS, and is a pathetic aspiring-villain type of character. Kexas (green-white) is a self-obsessed gladiator champion who's only friend is Karby. Lastly, Kimsy (orange-purple) on the far end is a subservient minion of King Dedede.
This meeting had nothing really to do with the crossover itself, and was mostly just BSX's method of getting all the relevant characters in one place. Since they're very loose with their storytelling, it wasn't too hard to come up with excuses for why they'd all be around together.
Last thing to immediately annotate is BSX's original author comment below. By this time in KDA's lifespan, BSX had recently started doing what they called 'Quips' in their comments. Essentially, a sort of white-void Authorsona Zone where they had a variation of their Author Doo character who sort of organized the Comments Section rather than worked on the comic itself. A semi-split personality type of deal, essentially.
After a few quips, BSX (with my permission) wound up bringing in Etam for the quips, to tell extra jokes as the characters in the quips observed both the comic pages and the comments sections, and could interact with both as if watching TV. Etam during all his quip appearances was always written by BSX, and had zero input from myself.
Original Author's Comment:
05/24/14
The Arena is being cleaned of the blood of their fallen enemies.
Welcome to the second crossover.
Evil fun time will forever be the best kind of fun time.
The Arena is being cleaned of the blood of their fallen enemies.
Welcome to the second crossover.
Evil fun time will forever be the best kind of fun time.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
05/25/14
I still don't know what comic the crossover is with. Mmmph.
FieryExplosion
05/25/14
There's really only two other well-known Kirby comic out there that's still going... and one's already crossovered with this one. Unless there's another out there...
guestuser
05/25/14
Oh for the love of large fiery explosions?
Ultimate Yoshi
05/25/14
Who wouldn't love large fiery explosions?
BattleStarX
05/25/14
I find it funny that I make a line such as "For the love of large fiery explosions" in the comic and a user named FieryExplosion posts in the comments.
Fighter Dee
05/26/14
@BattleStarX: IRONY!
FieryExplosion
05/26/14
@BattleStarX: Utter coincidence, eh?
Syogren
05/27/14
@Fighter Dee: Irony is more when something opposite of expectations occurs. This is simply weird.
Fighter Dee
06/24/14
@Syogren: OK got it!
05/25/14
I still don't know what comic the crossover is with. Mmmph.
FieryExplosion
05/25/14
There's really only two other well-known Kirby comic out there that's still going... and one's already crossovered with this one. Unless there's another out there...
guestuser
05/25/14
Oh for the love of large fiery explosions?
Ultimate Yoshi
05/25/14
Who wouldn't love large fiery explosions?
BattleStarX
05/25/14
I find it funny that I make a line such as "For the love of large fiery explosions" in the comic and a user named FieryExplosion posts in the comments.
Fighter Dee
05/26/14
@BattleStarX: IRONY!
FieryExplosion
05/26/14
@BattleStarX: Utter coincidence, eh?
Syogren
05/27/14
@Fighter Dee: Irony is more when something opposite of expectations occurs. This is simply weird.
Fighter Dee
06/24/14
@Syogren: OK got it!
Suddenness - Part 2
Ulti's Notes:
Due to Kirby Mass Attack's use of a large Kirby tank in its Kirby Quest RPG subgame, a reference itself to Kirby's Epic Yarn's large Kirby tank, BSX had started using the Kirby tanks in their own comic. Klooshy, being particularly destructive with a fondness for explosions, was an obvious candidate for owning one.
It is also worth noting, BSX had a daily update schedule for their comic, whereas I attempted to do an every-other-day schedule. Thus, while my end of the crossover had 40 pages, theirs had 80. To compensate, the KDA pages will be paired up in the reading order, followed by one new KA page.
It is also worth noting, BSX had a daily update schedule for their comic, whereas I attempted to do an every-other-day schedule. Thus, while my end of the crossover had 40 pages, theirs had 80. To compensate, the KDA pages will be paired up in the reading order, followed by one new KA page.
Original Author's Comment:
05/25/14
What's with the super-early update, you ask? Simple, whenever I work in the evening time, I do my comics super-early in the morning so I don't forget about them and have enough energy to do them.
Kirby Tanks are big enough compared to the kirbies themselves, can you imagine a two-story tall one?
I never would have thought, back when I was starting this comic, that I would end up creating such a huge cast list that only continues to grow.
What's with the super-early update, you ask? Simple, whenever I work in the evening time, I do my comics super-early in the morning so I don't forget about them and have enough energy to do them.
Kirby Tanks are big enough compared to the kirbies themselves, can you imagine a two-story tall one?
I never would have thought, back when I was starting this comic, that I would end up creating such a huge cast list that only continues to grow.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ultimate Yoshi
05/26/14
If the Author Doo in the Quips is from the remakes, then he really should only recognize Karby in this bunch.
Luigi_96
05/26/14
Woah.
05/26/14
If the Author Doo in the Quips is from the remakes, then he really should only recognize Karby in this bunch.
Luigi_96
05/26/14
Woah.
Lessons Learned - Part 1
Suddenness - Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
BattleStarX liked to do things a bit abrupt sometimes.
The names mentioned in panel 2 aren't really relevant or important, so don't worry about them. Aside from the fact that Kaaby was the blue, hands-on character from the first crossover.
The names mentioned in panel 2 aren't really relevant or important, so don't worry about them. Aside from the fact that Kaaby was the blue, hands-on character from the first crossover.
Original Author's Comment:
05/26/14
Well, that was sudden.
Well, that was sudden.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Omega Kirby
05/27/14
(כ (◕)כ <(What?)_c(◕.◕c) <(Poyo?)
Syogren
05/27/14
VOID! *grabs violet wisp*
Sapar
05/27/14
Dear nibbies, Kexas is going to the KAS.
Jarkes
05/27/14
Klooshy hasn't done his "contrary thoughts" thing in quite some time...
KameHameHaC12
05/27/14
@Syogren: lol
Luigi_96
05/27/14
@Jarkes: Maybe he started speaking his mind and therefore hasn't needed to?
Super Crash Kirby
05/27/14
@Sapar: Its the end of the world!
guestuser
05/28/14
Pshwoooom
ZeroL
01/09/17
If there's no script, how does Kirby know everyone's names?
05/27/14
(כ (◕)כ <(What?)_c(◕.◕c) <(Poyo?)
Syogren
05/27/14
VOID! *grabs violet wisp*
Sapar
05/27/14
Dear nibbies, Kexas is going to the KAS.
Jarkes
05/27/14
Klooshy hasn't done his "contrary thoughts" thing in quite some time...
KameHameHaC12
05/27/14
@Syogren: lol
Luigi_96
05/27/14
@Jarkes: Maybe he started speaking his mind and therefore hasn't needed to?
Super Crash Kirby
05/27/14
@Sapar: Its the end of the world!
guestuser
05/28/14
Pshwoooom
ZeroL
01/09/17
If there's no script, how does Kirby know everyone's names?
Suddenness - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
Ku-ie was once known as Kuxxel, and was the PSSS boss from BSX's end of the first crossover. She had a name change in-universe between crossovers, as well as quit her job as PSSS head to work with Keeby's Gang instead, albeit reluctantly.
Original Author's Comment:
05/27/14
I'm still quite proud of that portal.
I'm still quite proud of that portal.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Syogren
05/28/14
Past!Author Doo is hilarious.
Luigi_96
05/28/14
@BattleStarX: It looks complicated but I think it'd actually be simple to make.
Fighter Dee
05/28/14
I think Kirby crashed his warpstar...
BattleStarX
05/28/14
Of course he crashed his warpstar. He's Kirby.
plasma_knight303
06/27/14
Maybe she misses Keeby~
*shot, thrown out the window, crapped on by psycho animals, fed to a lion, and burned*
05/28/14
Past!Author Doo is hilarious.
Luigi_96
05/28/14
@BattleStarX: It looks complicated but I think it'd actually be simple to make.
Fighter Dee
05/28/14
I think Kirby crashed his warpstar...
BattleStarX
05/28/14
Of course he crashed his warpstar. He's Kirby.
plasma_knight303
06/27/14
Maybe she misses Keeby~
*shot, thrown out the window, crapped on by psycho animals, fed to a lion, and burned*
Lessons Learned - Part 2
Ulti's Notes:
Shat'l being psychic allowed me to have a small bit of fun with him suddenly realizing what was about to happen, and just calmly letting it happen.
Of course, then there's the question of why it took him this long to realize what was about to happen, but it's not as if I ever really mapped out all of the specifics of how his psychic powers worked (aka, they just did whatever I needed them to in the moment).
Of course, then there's the question of why it took him this long to realize what was about to happen, but it's not as if I ever really mapped out all of the specifics of how his psychic powers worked (aka, they just did whatever I needed them to in the moment).
Original Author's Comment:
05/28/14
Surprise! This segment is actually a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure! To get the full story, you're gonna want to read both comics for a little bit if you don't already. Man, it's been a long time since I said that.
For those curious as to how this will work, BSX will keep up his daily updating schedule whereas I'll be updating every other day.
Also, this was the real reason why I didn't update Kirby Adventure immediately after my APs were done. Sure, I did have to work on my new Let's Play and stuff, but that wasn't actually the main reason. It made for a good excuse, though!
I feel like I had something else to say here, but I can't think of it right now. Ah well.
Surprise! This segment is actually a crossover segment between Kirby Adventure and Kirby's Dream Adventure! To get the full story, you're gonna want to read both comics for a little bit if you don't already. Man, it's been a long time since I said that.
For those curious as to how this will work, BSX will keep up his daily updating schedule whereas I'll be updating every other day.
Also, this was the real reason why I didn't update Kirby Adventure immediately after my APs were done. Sure, I did have to work on my new Let's Play and stuff, but that wasn't actually the main reason. It made for a good excuse, though!
I feel like I had something else to say here, but I can't think of it right now. Ah well.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
05/28/14
I honestly don't see how this was missed, the KDA Arc Synopsis says "Who'd want to come here AGAIN!"
Redkirby
05/28/14
Knew it!!
Syogren
05/28/14
Here we go again!
Luigi_96
05/28/14
Ah, so this is it! Awesome! :D
SuperScratchkat
05/28/14
I love how Shat'l is all, "Hold that thought we're about to be teleported to another dimension. Don't forget what you were gonna say."
guestuser
05/28/14
Why!? Why did it take the palm tree??!!
guestuser
05/28/14
Yay,KA and KDA segment!
And this first time Ryka meet KDA
keeby rulez
05/28/14
@Christal shard64: and the first time Kexas meets the KAS
Fighter Dee
05/28/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I knew it!
Tygah
05/28/14
Why does Shadik have a parasol? >_>
Nekotive
05/28/14
Tygah: He doesn't anymore
Nekotive
05/28/14
Also, am I the only one who found the TitF arc entertaining? That's a shame
BattleStarX
05/28/14
Nekotive: Nope. After all, Etam is currently visiting my white space.
Nekotive
05/29/14
BattleStarX: Good to see someone agrees!
Unrelated: ELLIPSES!!!
GraciaWarrior
05/29/14
Ultimate Yoshi: What you and Battlestar x realted? I mean you and him make the same comic but different the segment.(sorry,my English is bad :( ).
guestuser
12/19/18
Why did that light took the palm tree?
05/28/14
I honestly don't see how this was missed, the KDA Arc Synopsis says "Who'd want to come here AGAIN!"
Redkirby
05/28/14
Knew it!!
Syogren
05/28/14
Here we go again!
Luigi_96
05/28/14
Ah, so this is it! Awesome! :D
SuperScratchkat
05/28/14
I love how Shat'l is all, "Hold that thought we're about to be teleported to another dimension. Don't forget what you were gonna say."
guestuser
05/28/14
Why!? Why did it take the palm tree??!!
guestuser
05/28/14
Yay,KA and KDA segment!
And this first time Ryka meet KDA
keeby rulez
05/28/14
@Christal shard64: and the first time Kexas meets the KAS
Fighter Dee
05/28/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I knew it!
Tygah
05/28/14
Why does Shadik have a parasol? >_>
Nekotive
05/28/14
Tygah: He doesn't anymore
Nekotive
05/28/14
Also, am I the only one who found the TitF arc entertaining? That's a shame
BattleStarX
05/28/14
Nekotive: Nope. After all, Etam is currently visiting my white space.
Nekotive
05/29/14
BattleStarX: Good to see someone agrees!
Unrelated: ELLIPSES!!!
GraciaWarrior
05/29/14
Ultimate Yoshi: What you and Battlestar x realted? I mean you and him make the same comic but different the segment.(sorry,my English is bad :( ).
guestuser
12/19/18
Why did that light took the palm tree?
Suddenness - Part 5
Ulti's Notes:
Caiya and Kaxo, of course, were the two members of this KA group who also went to the KDA dimension in the first crossover.
BSX's format had him consider the different fonts of our comics to be different accents, and had the characters speak in different fonts accordingly during this crossover. So all of BSX's characters keep their Stoobs font, while my characters speak in Tahoma. I try to do the reverse of this myself in my own pages, but immediately reverted it after it was mostly-illegible in my style.
BSX's format had him consider the different fonts of our comics to be different accents, and had the characters speak in different fonts accordingly during this crossover. So all of BSX's characters keep their Stoobs font, while my characters speak in Tahoma. I try to do the reverse of this myself in my own pages, but immediately reverted it after it was mostly-illegible in my style.
Original Author's Comment:
05/28/14
Squish Count + 1
Great, now I'm gonna have to get rid of that tree.
By the way, if you haven't guessed yet (and how I don't know,) my second crossover is once again with Ultimate Yoshi's Kirby Adventure. Make sure to pop over to his side to get both sides of the story, as we're doing the same thing as we did last time.
However, this time, EVERYONE WILL BE THEIR PROPER COLORS! HOO-RAY!
Squish Count + 1
Great, now I'm gonna have to get rid of that tree.
By the way, if you haven't guessed yet (and how I don't know,) my second crossover is once again with Ultimate Yoshi's Kirby Adventure. Make sure to pop over to his side to get both sides of the story, as we're doing the same thing as we did last time.
However, this time, EVERYONE WILL BE THEIR PROPER COLORS! HOO-RAY!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
GraciaWarrior
05/29/14
Yey,Squish count!
Ultimate Yoshi
05/29/14
It's a good thing Keeby's already met some of these guys.
GraciaWarrior
05/29/14
Which is Keito and Keeby?@_@
Syogren
05/29/14
@GraciaWarrior: I think Keito is the lighter yellow one, and Keeby is the darker yellow one.
Omega Kirby
05/29/14
@Syogren: I've never understood why people use that shade of yellow for kirbies.
*Shudder*
1997Cjones
05/29/14
@Omega Kirby: Because Keeby (http://kirby.wikia.com/wiki/Keeby) is a confirmed existant character with that color skin (http://kirby.wikia.com/wiki/Yellow_Kirby)
Fighter Dee
05/29/14
Great, now I can't distinguish Keito and Keeby
How Etam doesn't recognize them? Maybe he only remembers their messed up forms he did...
@Syogren: You didn't help me, sorry.
Luigi_96
05/29/14
I wonder why the portal appeared this time...
FieryExplosion
05/30/14
These guys again? Lol.
05/29/14
Yey,Squish count!
Ultimate Yoshi
05/29/14
It's a good thing Keeby's already met some of these guys.
GraciaWarrior
05/29/14
Which is Keito and Keeby?@_@
Syogren
05/29/14
@GraciaWarrior: I think Keito is the lighter yellow one, and Keeby is the darker yellow one.
Omega Kirby
05/29/14
@Syogren: I've never understood why people use that shade of yellow for kirbies.
*Shudder*
1997Cjones
05/29/14
@Omega Kirby: Because Keeby (http://kirby.wikia.com/wiki/Keeby) is a confirmed existant character with that color skin (http://kirby.wikia.com/wiki/Yellow_Kirby)
Fighter Dee
05/29/14
Great, now I can't distinguish Keito and Keeby
How Etam doesn't recognize them? Maybe he only remembers their messed up forms he did...
@Syogren: You didn't help me, sorry.
Luigi_96
05/29/14
I wonder why the portal appeared this time...
FieryExplosion
05/30/14
These guys again? Lol.
Suddenness - Part 6
Original Author's Comment:
05/29/14
Not that Keeby and Not-Keito share an exact color scheme, but at a quicky glance, you can understand the confusion.
I think he just realized who the crossover is with. He doesn't seem to be taking it well.
Not that Keeby and Not-Keito share an exact color scheme, but at a quicky glance, you can understand the confusion.
I think he just realized who the crossover is with. He doesn't seem to be taking it well.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ultimate Yoshi
05/30/14
It's okay, Etam, I'm not here to spoil your fun or anything. BSX has you under control. Hopefully.
Sapar
05/30/14
@Ultimate Yoshi: And to think he used your own catchphrase against you. RUDE.
Blue Kirby the l33t
05/30/14
@Ultimate Yoshi: he said son of a friggin
HE SAID SON OF A FRIGGIN
I AM A FAN OF YOUR VIDEOS AND I APPROVE OF @BattleStarX: DOING THAT
Luigi_96
05/30/14
You'd think Kaxo would enjoy seeing a squish.
MecanicalCH
05/30/14
poor Etam...he can´t have a good luck day isn´t he?
littlekirby61524
05/30/14
must... poke...
Fighter Dee
05/30/14
I finally managed to see the difference between Keito and Keeby.
05/30/14
It's okay, Etam, I'm not here to spoil your fun or anything. BSX has you under control. Hopefully.
Sapar
05/30/14
@Ultimate Yoshi: And to think he used your own catchphrase against you. RUDE.
Blue Kirby the l33t
05/30/14
@Ultimate Yoshi: he said son of a friggin
HE SAID SON OF A FRIGGIN
I AM A FAN OF YOUR VIDEOS AND I APPROVE OF @BattleStarX: DOING THAT
Luigi_96
05/30/14
You'd think Kaxo would enjoy seeing a squish.
MecanicalCH
05/30/14
poor Etam...he can´t have a good luck day isn´t he?
littlekirby61524
05/30/14
must... poke...
Fighter Dee
05/30/14
I finally managed to see the difference between Keito and Keeby.
Lessons Learned - Part 3
Original Author's Comment:
05/19/14
This is the only proper way to give Kexas and Kublie their entrance into the Kirby Adventure dimension.
You may have noticed that I'm going with the BattleStarX route when it comes to the text font: I'll be using his font of Stoobs for the KDA characters, similar to how he's using my font of Tahoma for my characters. Though, Stoobs looks a bit choppy with anti-alias, but I also can't fix that without making it the biggest hassle in the history of hassles. That's exaggeration, but whatever, it's what it would feel like.
I almost forgot to put Kimsy (the orange/purple Kirby in the water in the last panel) in this comic entirely, up until that last panel. This is what led to her falling into the water off-screen and trying to climb back out. It was the best quick-fix I could think of, and I'm too lazy to go back into completed panels. Yeah.
This is the only proper way to give Kexas and Kublie their entrance into the Kirby Adventure dimension.
You may have noticed that I'm going with the BattleStarX route when it comes to the text font: I'll be using his font of Stoobs for the KDA characters, similar to how he's using my font of Tahoma for my characters. Though, Stoobs looks a bit choppy with anti-alias, but I also can't fix that without making it the biggest hassle in the history of hassles. That's exaggeration, but whatever, it's what it would feel like.
I almost forgot to put Kimsy (the orange/purple Kirby in the water in the last panel) in this comic entirely, up until that last panel. This is what led to her falling into the water off-screen and trying to climb back out. It was the best quick-fix I could think of, and I'm too lazy to go back into completed panels. Yeah.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
05/29/14
You can always tell when something gets a bit more KDA-like when the squishes start popping up in great number.
Sapar
05/29/14
They're just lucky they didn't get a Karby-squorsh.
MecanicalCH
05/30/14
Hello! :D ...*Squish*
Nekotive
05/30/14
I'd say Raize squishes quite well, to be honest.
Luigi_96
05/30/14
I do hope you'll be using anti-aliasing in the future pages because text just needs it sometimes such as right here.
EDIT: I also just happened to notice that Shadik and Karby finally get to meet. :D
guestuser
05/30/14
Poor Kimsy,and 2 squish
guestuser
05/31/14
Uh oh.
The KAS Is now sharing dimensions with Kexas.
This is going to be interesting.
GraciaWarrior
05/31/14
Karby and Shadik already meet
Syogren
05/31/14
Actually...anti-alias is when the text is blurred. You have it off at the moment.
Also, "Hey it was fun crossing over with BSX, let's do it again!"
MMZX
05/31/14
That's one thing you never seen every day.... Rainning Kirbies.....
guestuser
05/31/14
MMZX:FACT
guestuser
06/01/14
squish.
GraciaWarrior
06/01/14
Why everyting is happening while Kirby gone?
Ultizeta
07/30/17
The original version of this page had BSX's Stoobs font for his characters, but basically everybody told me how bad it was to read. I immediately changed their fonts to my regular Tahoma in subsequent comics, but this page remained a negative outlier until right now.
05/29/14
You can always tell when something gets a bit more KDA-like when the squishes start popping up in great number.
Sapar
05/29/14
They're just lucky they didn't get a Karby-squorsh.
MecanicalCH
05/30/14
Hello! :D ...*Squish*
Nekotive
05/30/14
I'd say Raize squishes quite well, to be honest.
Luigi_96
05/30/14
I do hope you'll be using anti-aliasing in the future pages because text just needs it sometimes such as right here.
EDIT: I also just happened to notice that Shadik and Karby finally get to meet. :D
guestuser
05/30/14
Poor Kimsy,and 2 squish
guestuser
05/31/14
Uh oh.
The KAS Is now sharing dimensions with Kexas.
This is going to be interesting.
GraciaWarrior
05/31/14
Karby and Shadik already meet
Syogren
05/31/14
Actually...anti-alias is when the text is blurred. You have it off at the moment.
Also, "Hey it was fun crossing over with BSX, let's do it again!"
MMZX
05/31/14
That's one thing you never seen every day.... Rainning Kirbies.....
guestuser
05/31/14
MMZX:FACT
guestuser
06/01/14
squish.
GraciaWarrior
06/01/14
Why everyting is happening while Kirby gone?
Ultizeta
07/30/17
The original version of this page had BSX's Stoobs font for his characters, but basically everybody told me how bad it was to read. I immediately changed their fonts to my regular Tahoma in subsequent comics, but this page remained a negative outlier until right now.
Suddenness - Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
You may recall when I used the KDA Kirby in the first crossover that this was his signature style of greeting characters. Here, it allows Shat'l to recognize him.
Original Author's Comment:
05/30/14
In case you forgot, the two-story kirby tank is still just off screen. And Kirby's actually met Shat'l before.
In case you forgot, the two-story kirby tank is still just off screen. And Kirby's actually met Shat'l before.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Mimistarlish
05/31/14
Bay - bay Etam,where Keito and ryka go?and what big thing is that?
Luigi_96
05/31/14
Ryka and Keito with a giant Kirby-tank will definitely not end well.
MMZX
05/31/14
That's our Kirby! Knowing everyone's names!
Edit: Wait a minute... I completely forgot Kirby met Shat'l already... lol silly me
Ultimate Yoshi
05/31/14
He'll probably know all their names anyway, regardless of if he's met them before or not.
guestuser
05/31/14
This will likely end with 2 vs 2.
Considering that Past-Doo just angered Etam..
Gamer90030
06/01/14
Wait...
How does the palm tree stay in that position? Only one little corner of it is lodged in the ground.
plasma_knight303
06/27/14
EVERYONE.
05/31/14
Bay - bay Etam,where Keito and ryka go?and what big thing is that?
Luigi_96
05/31/14
Ryka and Keito with a giant Kirby-tank will definitely not end well.
MMZX
05/31/14
That's our Kirby! Knowing everyone's names!
Edit: Wait a minute... I completely forgot Kirby met Shat'l already... lol silly me
Ultimate Yoshi
05/31/14
He'll probably know all their names anyway, regardless of if he's met them before or not.
guestuser
05/31/14
This will likely end with 2 vs 2.
Considering that Past-Doo just angered Etam..
Gamer90030
06/01/14
Wait...
How does the palm tree stay in that position? Only one little corner of it is lodged in the ground.
plasma_knight303
06/27/14
EVERYONE.
Suddenness - Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
As a reminder, Klooshy's two-tiered Kirby tank has been sitting off-screen to the left for this entire scene. Keito and Ryka elected to mess around with it, but the lack of visuals can make it easy to forget what's actually going on there.
Original Author's Comment:
05/31/14
I intend to do Kaxo justice this time. Less violent maniac, more controlled fury.
I intend to do Kaxo justice this time. Less violent maniac, more controlled fury.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
[Gue[GuestName]RR#R]
06/01/14
I would slice through the no-seeable-wall-thing.
Luigi_96
06/01/14
Kirby is always strong!
MecanicalCH
06/01/14
@Luigi_96: Compared to what?
GraciaWarrior
06/01/14
Gahahaha,Etam is funny.
And I wonder what they doing(Keito,Ryka),and where Raize go?
Luigi_96
06/01/14
@MecanicalCH: Dark Matter, Zero, Marx, Dedede, Magolor...
Etc.
Fighter Dee
06/01/14
Luckily, Kaxo won't meet Kexas, or he would die...
But I wonder, who would win a battle between Kexas and Shadik?
NGamerS31
06/01/14
@Fighter Dee: fool! you just created a rip in the smackjeeves from shere power of awsomness! and the great smackjeeves god put ME on fixing duty this week!
MMZX
06/01/14
lol, compared to what indeed.
Koopario
06/01/14
@BattleStarX: I'm tempted to say "Poor Etam" but...
06/01/14
I would slice through the no-seeable-wall-thing.
Luigi_96
06/01/14
Kirby is always strong!
MecanicalCH
06/01/14
@Luigi_96: Compared to what?
GraciaWarrior
06/01/14
Gahahaha,Etam is funny.
And I wonder what they doing(Keito,Ryka),and where Raize go?
Luigi_96
06/01/14
@MecanicalCH: Dark Matter, Zero, Marx, Dedede, Magolor...
Etc.
Fighter Dee
06/01/14
Luckily, Kaxo won't meet Kexas, or he would die...
But I wonder, who would win a battle between Kexas and Shadik?
NGamerS31
06/01/14
@Fighter Dee: fool! you just created a rip in the smackjeeves from shere power of awsomness! and the great smackjeeves god put ME on fixing duty this week!
MMZX
06/01/14
lol, compared to what indeed.
Koopario
06/01/14
@BattleStarX: I'm tempted to say "Poor Etam" but...
Lessons Learned - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
Kexas is not only a world-renowned fighter and gladiator in the KDA universe, but is an extremely feared opponent who uses her strength for maximum intimidation factor. Thus, nobody ever really argues with her, because even if she's wrong, she has the physical prowess to make it not matter, and also lacks the ability to understand ethical or societal implications of fighting people to get what she wants.
Thus, if the KDA cast have to pick someone to defer to, or at least this group of characters who don't have a natural leader among them, well, looking to Kexas is simply the safe survival strategy more than anything else. And considering what I wanted to do in this segment, establishing early on that Kexas was intimidating was important.
Thus, if the KDA cast have to pick someone to defer to, or at least this group of characters who don't have a natural leader among them, well, looking to Kexas is simply the safe survival strategy more than anything else. And considering what I wanted to do in this segment, establishing early on that Kexas was intimidating was important.
Original Author's Comment:
06/02/14
Sorry about the late update. Mario Kart 8 happened.
I decided that using the Stoobs font was a poor idea since I don't use aliased text, and some of you guys complained about having a hard time reading it. So, Tahoma all the way.
Kexas may not be an actual leader, but she sure has the strength to back up anything she says.
Sorry about the late update. Mario Kart 8 happened.
I decided that using the Stoobs font was a poor idea since I don't use aliased text, and some of you guys complained about having a hard time reading it. So, Tahoma all the way.
Kexas may not be an actual leader, but she sure has the strength to back up anything she says.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Redkirby
06/02/14
Heh... I didn't even notice Kimsy until the last panel.
Super Crash Kirby
06/02/14
Looks like Karby and Shadik are having a serious conversation there.
GraciaWarrior
06/02/14
Poor Kimsy :(
Luigi_96
06/02/14
GraciaWarrior: Took the words right out of my mouth.
Er, off my keyboard.
@Karby and Shadik: You two are funny! ^^
GraciaWarrior
06/02/14
Luigi_96: What do you mean?
@Ulti:How did you and BSX can make the same sagment(just diffrent the title)?
Syogren
06/02/14
GraciaWarrior: I'm not Ulti, but I'm guessing they planned this ahead of time. Then they just coordinated their comic making schedules.
Is that correct, Ulti?
Koopario
06/02/14
Super Crash Kirby: Indeed. -_-
BattleStarX
06/02/14
I love conversations that can be done without taking up any panel space.
Shenanigans is a fun word that should really be used more often.
guestuser
06/02/14
Luigi_96: ...
guestuser
07/21/14
Interactions between Shadik and Karby.
06/02/14
Heh... I didn't even notice Kimsy until the last panel.
Super Crash Kirby
06/02/14
Looks like Karby and Shadik are having a serious conversation there.
GraciaWarrior
06/02/14
Poor Kimsy :(
Luigi_96
06/02/14
GraciaWarrior: Took the words right out of my mouth.
Er, off my keyboard.
@Karby and Shadik: You two are funny! ^^
GraciaWarrior
06/02/14
Luigi_96: What do you mean?
@Ulti:How did you and BSX can make the same sagment(just diffrent the title)?
Syogren
06/02/14
GraciaWarrior: I'm not Ulti, but I'm guessing they planned this ahead of time. Then they just coordinated their comic making schedules.
Is that correct, Ulti?
Koopario
06/02/14
Super Crash Kirby: Indeed. -_-
BattleStarX
06/02/14
I love conversations that can be done without taking up any panel space.
Shenanigans is a fun word that should really be used more often.
guestuser
06/02/14
Luigi_96: ...
guestuser
07/21/14
Interactions between Shadik and Karby.
Suddenness - Part 9
Original Author's Comment:
06/01/14
Keeby will forever be a jerk.
Author-Doo nomenclature should confuse so many people.
Keeby will forever be a jerk.
Author-Doo nomenclature should confuse so many people.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
GraciaWarrior
06/02/14
Which is more stupid,Kirby or Caiya?
Luigi_96
06/02/14
@GraciaWarrior: Kirby, because Caiya is actually smart.
[Gue[GuestName]RR#R]
06/02/14
Incoming smack to the eye in 1 day..
BattleStarX
06/02/14
Neither are really stupid. Caiya just suffers from multiple personality syndrome, while Kirby is just less mature. Both can be quite smart, and seem smarter than a lot of kirbies simply because nobody expects them to say those sort of things.
Fighter Dee
06/02/14
Having two Author-Doos is really making things confusing for everyone.
NintendoFan64
06/02/14
@Fighter Dee: No kidding...
MMZX
06/02/14
What happened that made Keeby pissed off? lol
???
01/18/17
@GraciaWarrior: Kirby is not stupid! Just childish.
06/02/14
Which is more stupid,Kirby or Caiya?
Luigi_96
06/02/14
@GraciaWarrior: Kirby, because Caiya is actually smart.
[Gue[GuestName]RR#R]
06/02/14
Incoming smack to the eye in 1 day..
BattleStarX
06/02/14
Neither are really stupid. Caiya just suffers from multiple personality syndrome, while Kirby is just less mature. Both can be quite smart, and seem smarter than a lot of kirbies simply because nobody expects them to say those sort of things.
Fighter Dee
06/02/14
Having two Author-Doos is really making things confusing for everyone.
NintendoFan64
06/02/14
@Fighter Dee: No kidding...
MMZX
06/02/14
What happened that made Keeby pissed off? lol
???
01/18/17
@GraciaWarrior: Kirby is not stupid! Just childish.
Suddenness - Part 10
Ulti's Notes:
As a reminder and refresher, here is Kaaby, the blue hands-on Kirby from the first crossover, and Ku-ie (formerly Kuxxel), the aforementioned ex-PSSS boss from the first crossover.
Original Author's Comment:
06/02/14
And now I no longer need to worry about that tree. Or the two-story tall kirby tank.
Or quite possibly that whole region. Whoops.
And now I no longer need to worry about that tree. Or the two-story tall kirby tank.
Or quite possibly that whole region. Whoops.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ultimate Yoshi
06/03/14
Good thing they don't know their names yet.
GraciaWarrior
06/03/14
For the last time,Which Keeby and Keito,Again ?
BattleStarX
06/03/14
@GraciaWarrior: Keito is a slightly brighter yellow. Also, look at the font. Keeby uses my Stoobs font, which most denizens of my kirby-verse use, while Keito uses the straighter Tahoma font, which is what UY uses.
Luigi_96
06/03/14
Oh boy, Keito. :U
Fighter Dee
06/03/14
@BattleStarX: Three problems solved with a single Friendly Giant Mushroom.
MMZX
06/04/14
Buttons were pressed but you don't want to name them?! Why so lazy for explanation Keeby?! lol
06/03/14
Good thing they don't know their names yet.
GraciaWarrior
06/03/14
For the last time,Which Keeby and Keito,Again ?
BattleStarX
06/03/14
@GraciaWarrior: Keito is a slightly brighter yellow. Also, look at the font. Keeby uses my Stoobs font, which most denizens of my kirby-verse use, while Keito uses the straighter Tahoma font, which is what UY uses.
Luigi_96
06/03/14
Oh boy, Keito. :U
Fighter Dee
06/03/14
@BattleStarX: Three problems solved with a single Friendly Giant Mushroom.
MMZX
06/04/14
Buttons were pressed but you don't want to name them?! Why so lazy for explanation Keeby?! lol
Lessons Learned - Part 5
Ulti's Notes:
A few things to mention here:
Karby, on the far left, is still the strong silent type. One regret from the very first crossover was how little he wound up being used, so my first order of business with him was involving him more. To that extent, pairing him with his closest-KA equivalent in Shadik was a no-brainer.
In the KDA comics, characters would often wind up standing atop each other, and the flexibility of most Kirby characters and species would mean that they would simply get squished. This became so prevalent in KDA that BSX even started running a Squish Counter at times. Kublie, the orange girl here, was one of the most frequent characters who would squish others, thus this was a theme I also wanted to roll with and utilize. It's a good method of making sure the characters from another comic really feel like themselves when I use them.
Lastly, my use of him in the previous crossover led BSX to give Klooshy a love of explosives, since I had him and Raize set off some fireworks. Since Klooshy was still also a medic-in-training, this led BSX to have Klooshy offhandedly mention creating 'healing bombs'. They never got depicted on-screen before, but I decided to give it a shot, since I was the one who inadvertedly led to their creation to begin with.
Karby, on the far left, is still the strong silent type. One regret from the very first crossover was how little he wound up being used, so my first order of business with him was involving him more. To that extent, pairing him with his closest-KA equivalent in Shadik was a no-brainer.
In the KDA comics, characters would often wind up standing atop each other, and the flexibility of most Kirby characters and species would mean that they would simply get squished. This became so prevalent in KDA that BSX even started running a Squish Counter at times. Kublie, the orange girl here, was one of the most frequent characters who would squish others, thus this was a theme I also wanted to roll with and utilize. It's a good method of making sure the characters from another comic really feel like themselves when I use them.
Lastly, my use of him in the previous crossover led BSX to give Klooshy a love of explosives, since I had him and Raize set off some fireworks. Since Klooshy was still also a medic-in-training, this led BSX to have Klooshy offhandedly mention creating 'healing bombs'. They never got depicted on-screen before, but I decided to give it a shot, since I was the one who inadvertedly led to their creation to begin with.
Original Author's Comment:
06/02/14
I looked high and low to see if Klooshy's "healing bombs" ever actually physically appeared in KDA or CDDDN, but I found nothing but a single mention of them. Thus, I made up the colors of the bomb and made it blue. Because blue is healing, apparently. Not that it makes a difference to Saia.
I looked high and low to see if Klooshy's "healing bombs" ever actually physically appeared in KDA or CDDDN, but I found nothing but a single mention of them. Thus, I made up the colors of the bomb and made it blue. Because blue is healing, apparently. Not that it makes a difference to Saia.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
06/02/14
Ah, the joy of healing bombs. I will actually have to work those in one day.
I've been enjoying your KDL3 Let's Play so far, UY. Though it does make me wonder how you'll handle a Kirby64 run. ...You are going to do one, yes? You seem to be plowing through the Anniversary Collection so far.
Koopario
06/02/14
Wha-wha-whaaaaat?! A healing BOMB?! Will this hurt at all? Because y'know...BOMBS.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/02/14
Jarkes: It's really not that bad, y'know.
guestuser
06/02/14
BattleStarX: Healing bombs exist in Guild Wars 2
MMZX
06/02/14
Now if only healing bombs work in reality, we wouldn't have to worry going to the hospital.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/03/14
Jarkes: Both.
Luigi_96
06/03/14
I don't get how an explosive could be healing, but I guess Klooshy knows what he's doing.
Also, KDL3 is the first LP I'm actually going to keep up with because dang it, I can now!
GraciaWarrior
06/03/14
O_O Don't do it Klooshy!
And Aaw Karby and Shadik have a new friends is doesn't talk
Koopario
06/03/14
Luigi_96: But BOMBS, guys! They explode! They hurt! Unless...uh...I'm tempted to say Vezo and Raize because of the coloration...have extra lives or something, they'd DIE!
...
Yeah I really can't tell if that's Vezo and Raize. Unless there's another green and orange kirby in Dream Adventure I'm going to assume that's Vezo and Raize.
Fighter Dee
06/03/14
Most of you didn't heard about Klooshy's world famous healing BOMBS.
guestuser
06/03/14
Fighter Dee: 0_0, nope.I don't know about that before. Not exposed to the bomb would make ill and dangerous
guestuser
06/04/14
Saia does not want people throwing bombs! Karby has a new silent friend!
...Nobody cares about Kimsy.
guestuser
06/04/14
Saia's really freaked out about the carefree attitude of KDA characters. I'm really enjoying reading her dialogue.
06/02/14
Ah, the joy of healing bombs. I will actually have to work those in one day.
I've been enjoying your KDL3 Let's Play so far, UY. Though it does make me wonder how you'll handle a Kirby64 run. ...You are going to do one, yes? You seem to be plowing through the Anniversary Collection so far.
Koopario
06/02/14
Wha-wha-whaaaaat?! A healing BOMB?! Will this hurt at all? Because y'know...BOMBS.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/02/14
Jarkes: It's really not that bad, y'know.
guestuser
06/02/14
BattleStarX: Healing bombs exist in Guild Wars 2
MMZX
06/02/14
Now if only healing bombs work in reality, we wouldn't have to worry going to the hospital.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/03/14
Jarkes: Both.
Luigi_96
06/03/14
I don't get how an explosive could be healing, but I guess Klooshy knows what he's doing.
Also, KDL3 is the first LP I'm actually going to keep up with because dang it, I can now!
GraciaWarrior
06/03/14
O_O Don't do it Klooshy!
And Aaw Karby and Shadik have a new friends is doesn't talk
Koopario
06/03/14
Luigi_96: But BOMBS, guys! They explode! They hurt! Unless...uh...I'm tempted to say Vezo and Raize because of the coloration...have extra lives or something, they'd DIE!
...
Yeah I really can't tell if that's Vezo and Raize. Unless there's another green and orange kirby in Dream Adventure I'm going to assume that's Vezo and Raize.
Fighter Dee
06/03/14
Most of you didn't heard about Klooshy's world famous healing BOMBS.
guestuser
06/03/14
Fighter Dee: 0_0, nope.I don't know about that before. Not exposed to the bomb would make ill and dangerous
guestuser
06/04/14
Saia does not want people throwing bombs! Karby has a new silent friend!
...Nobody cares about Kimsy.
guestuser
06/04/14
Saia's really freaked out about the carefree attitude of KDA characters. I'm really enjoying reading her dialogue.
Suddenness - Part 11
Ulti's Notes:
The KDA Kirby was always depicted as being a terrible driver of his Warp Star. Basically every ride he'd go on would result in a crash.
Original Author's Comment:
06/03/14
Kaxo is not amused with my Kirby.
Kaxo is not amused with my Kirby.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Syogren
06/04/14
Sleeping pain away is the best solution. Unless you're bleeding to death. Then you might now wake up, so you should probably take that into account.
MMZX
06/04/14
Now now, "this" Kirby may seem like an idiot but he is really strong.
Luigi_96
06/04/14
Careful, Kaxo...
He's been known to eat red kirbies.
guestuser
06/05/14
@Luigi_96: if Kaxo is capable and his power works, he will burn kirby or light him on fire
06/04/14
Sleeping pain away is the best solution. Unless you're bleeding to death. Then you might now wake up, so you should probably take that into account.
MMZX
06/04/14
Now now, "this" Kirby may seem like an idiot but he is really strong.
Luigi_96
06/04/14
Careful, Kaxo...
He's been known to eat red kirbies.
guestuser
06/05/14
@Luigi_96: if Kaxo is capable and his power works, he will burn kirby or light him on fire
Portal Malfunction - Part 1
Ulti's Notes:
Much like in the first crossover, BattleStarX wrote his in multiple segments, so here began the second of several segments on his side.
Kaxo mentioning Saia's birthday was something I specifically requested BSX find a way to write in somewhere, since I was still trying to set up for a massively important segment occurring there (which mostly never came to fruition).
Keeby's Flight Star is based on the Flight Warp Star from Kirby Air Ride, a prototype Warp Star with enhanced flying capabilities. In this comic, though, the only one who's able to use the Warp Star in general is Kirby, so this version of the Flight Star is a copycat version that is less functional than the original, but is at the very least usable by others who aren't Kirby.
Kaxo mentioning Saia's birthday was something I specifically requested BSX find a way to write in somewhere, since I was still trying to set up for a massively important segment occurring there (which mostly never came to fruition).
Keeby's Flight Star is based on the Flight Warp Star from Kirby Air Ride, a prototype Warp Star with enhanced flying capabilities. In this comic, though, the only one who's able to use the Warp Star in general is Kirby, so this version of the Flight Star is a copycat version that is less functional than the original, but is at the very least usable by others who aren't Kirby.
Original Author's Comment:
06/04/14
Poor Korby, she never gets the fun jobs.
Jelly beans should always be a high-priority item.
Poor Korby, she never gets the fun jobs.
Jelly beans should always be a high-priority item.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
GraciaWarrior
06/05/14
Korby and Kaxo have same color too
Ultimate Yoshi
06/05/14
Something that might help is if the text bubbles for characters more accurately match their coloration, rather than being just a generic color to represent them.
kirby knight 1000
06/05/14
1337 pages.
lel
Sapar
06/05/14
Sweet nibbies, they're gonna meet Master Green.
BattleStarX
06/05/14
I find it weird that the colorblind person can see the difference in the kirbies. Korby is a lighter red than Kaxo.
Plus the fonts! The fonts!
MMZX
06/05/14
People would go nuts if they realized they were stuck somewhere in white space forever.
Huh, another other-worlder would definitely be Master Green so what would be his response I wonder..? lol
Luigi_96
06/05/14
This page is so leet.
Koopario
06/05/14
You saw that thing Kaxo said about Saia's birthday too, right?
Right?
ebuko
07/15/14
@Luigi_96: I is a l33t thet speakse n00b talke!!1111
ebuko
07/15/14
@Koopario: RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGHT?
06/05/14
Korby and Kaxo have same color too
Ultimate Yoshi
06/05/14
Something that might help is if the text bubbles for characters more accurately match their coloration, rather than being just a generic color to represent them.
kirby knight 1000
06/05/14
1337 pages.
lel
Sapar
06/05/14
Sweet nibbies, they're gonna meet Master Green.
BattleStarX
06/05/14
I find it weird that the colorblind person can see the difference in the kirbies. Korby is a lighter red than Kaxo.
Plus the fonts! The fonts!
MMZX
06/05/14
People would go nuts if they realized they were stuck somewhere in white space forever.
Huh, another other-worlder would definitely be Master Green so what would be his response I wonder..? lol
Luigi_96
06/05/14
This page is so leet.
Koopario
06/05/14
You saw that thing Kaxo said about Saia's birthday too, right?
Right?
ebuko
07/15/14
@Luigi_96: I is a l33t thet speakse n00b talke!!1111
ebuko
07/15/14
@Koopario: RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGHT?
Lessons Learned - Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
The opening of my end of the crossover was intentionally cramped, because Saia was overwhelmed and she was one of the main leads and audience surrogates intended for this segment.
I didn't want to overwhelm for too long, though, so I quickly began separating out the group over the next few pages, to make for smaller groups I could tell different mini-stories with. This was my method of solving the issues of both previous crossovers, where things were either randomly eclectic, or some characters got introduced too late to make an impact.
By formatting the segment into about 4 groups, with KDA and KA characters in each, everything became immensely manageable. It was relatively fewer scenes to keep track of, and the groupings meant that no character truly got left out of everything. Overall, it was the best handling I did of utilizing crossover characters.
I didn't want to overwhelm for too long, though, so I quickly began separating out the group over the next few pages, to make for smaller groups I could tell different mini-stories with. This was my method of solving the issues of both previous crossovers, where things were either randomly eclectic, or some characters got introduced too late to make an impact.
By formatting the segment into about 4 groups, with KDA and KA characters in each, everything became immensely manageable. It was relatively fewer scenes to keep track of, and the groupings meant that no character truly got left out of everything. Overall, it was the best handling I did of utilizing crossover characters.
Original Author's Comment:
06/04/14
Kruzy speaks his first lines! In case you're confused, he likes to sound evil via a creepy-sounding black text bubble, but it seems Vezo was too confused to really be fazed by it.
Vezo's confused, also, because he doesn't recognize anyone yet. Klooshy and Karby got sent to KA when Vezo visited KDA, and Kexas and Kruzy didn't exist in KDA at that time. Kubby and Kublie, on the other hand, that'll be an interesting reunion...
Kruzy speaks his first lines! In case you're confused, he likes to sound evil via a creepy-sounding black text bubble, but it seems Vezo was too confused to really be fazed by it.
Vezo's confused, also, because he doesn't recognize anyone yet. Klooshy and Karby got sent to KA when Vezo visited KDA, and Kexas and Kruzy didn't exist in KDA at that time. Kubby and Kublie, on the other hand, that'll be an interesting reunion...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
06/05/14
That was a perfect Kruzy reaction to someone not being freaked out by his creepy evil voice.
Luigi_96
06/05/14
I'm with Saia.
GraciaWarrior
06/05/14
I like in 1 panel.
Didn't know that coming
MMZX
06/05/14
What? Every situation is always complicated so why complain now? Of course complicated situations are always interesting so at least we won't be bored.
Koopario
06/06/14
Welp
There goes my comment.
Again.
Wonder if that other kirby found a way to live?
guestuser
06/06/14
Wooo! I missed the evil voice!
Also, nice healing bomb.
guestuser
06/06/14
Kimsy forgotten.
06/05/14
That was a perfect Kruzy reaction to someone not being freaked out by his creepy evil voice.
Luigi_96
06/05/14
I'm with Saia.
GraciaWarrior
06/05/14
I like in 1 panel.
Didn't know that coming
MMZX
06/05/14
What? Every situation is always complicated so why complain now? Of course complicated situations are always interesting so at least we won't be bored.
Koopario
06/06/14
Welp
There goes my comment.
Again.
Wonder if that other kirby found a way to live?
guestuser
06/06/14
Wooo! I missed the evil voice!
Also, nice healing bomb.
guestuser
06/06/14
Kimsy forgotten.
Portal Malfunction - Part 2
Ulti's Notes:
This red Kirby working for Keeby was also seen in the first crossover. She's Korby, if I have my names correct, and is hotheaded and craves action.
Original Author's Comment:
06/05/14
Babysitting kirbies is fun.
I don't know how much a million pancakes weighs, I just want to know how much maple syrup I'll need.
Babysitting kirbies is fun.
I don't know how much a million pancakes weighs, I just want to know how much maple syrup I'll need.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Christal shard64
06/06/14
Hehehe,they alredy met( KAxo,Korby)
Why Etam upset?
Luigi_96
06/06/14
According to a Google search, an average pancake weighs in at around 59 Grams. A million pancakes would therefore weigh about 59,000,000 Grams, and therefore, according to a converter I found...
A million pancakes would weigh approximately 130,072 pounds.
You're welcome.
Ybrik Etamitlu
06/06/14
I weigh the same as a million pancakes, but only land with the force of a thousand of 'em. Why? The rest of my weight gets turned into taco jelly and dumped on a random bystander. Off a large building. By a talking ocelot with an abnormally large left wing. Even though ocelots don't even have wings normally. That's why it's abnormal, you dig?
Omega Kirby
06/06/14
@Ybrik Etamitlu: Precisely!
But what happens to the excess taco jelly that cannot fit into any ocelot wings?
Luigi_96
06/06/14
@Ybrik Etamitlu: Sorry, but if anybody weighs 130,000 pounds around here, it's Karby.
littlekirby61524
06/06/14
@Ybrik Etamitlu: O.o uh...
MMZX
06/06/14
Next thing you know, you would see both Kaxo and Korby getting along with both fiery elements.
guestuser
06/08/14
@Ybrik Etamitlu: *mind explosion*
06/06/14
Hehehe,they alredy met( KAxo,Korby)
Why Etam upset?
Luigi_96
06/06/14
According to a Google search, an average pancake weighs in at around 59 Grams. A million pancakes would therefore weigh about 59,000,000 Grams, and therefore, according to a converter I found...
A million pancakes would weigh approximately 130,072 pounds.
You're welcome.
Ybrik Etamitlu
06/06/14
I weigh the same as a million pancakes, but only land with the force of a thousand of 'em. Why? The rest of my weight gets turned into taco jelly and dumped on a random bystander. Off a large building. By a talking ocelot with an abnormally large left wing. Even though ocelots don't even have wings normally. That's why it's abnormal, you dig?
Omega Kirby
06/06/14
@Ybrik Etamitlu: Precisely!
But what happens to the excess taco jelly that cannot fit into any ocelot wings?
Luigi_96
06/06/14
@Ybrik Etamitlu: Sorry, but if anybody weighs 130,000 pounds around here, it's Karby.
littlekirby61524
06/06/14
@Ybrik Etamitlu: O.o uh...
MMZX
06/06/14
Next thing you know, you would see both Kaxo and Korby getting along with both fiery elements.
guestuser
06/08/14
@Ybrik Etamitlu: *mind explosion*
Portal Malfunction - Part 3
Original Author's Comment:
06/06/14
Leaving Kirby in charge of Caiya, Keito and Ryka. That cannot end well.
Leaving Kirby in charge of Caiya, Keito and Ryka. That cannot end well.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Syogren
06/07/14
Oh god why
Luigi_96
06/07/14
Hate to agree with Kaxo, but it's just a walk, Korby. Chillax.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/07/14
@Luigi_96: What's wrong with agreeing with Kaxo?
MMZX
06/07/14
Jeez Korby, you say like taking a walk is a bad thing.
Isn't that good for you Kaxo? Now you get something to do.
Luigi_96
06/07/14
@Ultimate Yoshi: Well, Kaxo is rude and I usually don't agree with rude people.
Koopario
06/08/14
@MMZX: Activity!
guestuser
10/23/16
A barrage of donuts and jelly, Etam?
06/07/14
Oh god why
Luigi_96
06/07/14
Hate to agree with Kaxo, but it's just a walk, Korby. Chillax.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/07/14
@Luigi_96: What's wrong with agreeing with Kaxo?
MMZX
06/07/14
Jeez Korby, you say like taking a walk is a bad thing.
Isn't that good for you Kaxo? Now you get something to do.
Luigi_96
06/07/14
@Ultimate Yoshi: Well, Kaxo is rude and I usually don't agree with rude people.
Koopario
06/08/14
@MMZX: Activity!
guestuser
10/23/16
A barrage of donuts and jelly, Etam?
Lessons Learned - Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
Kruzy, the green and black Kirby, has a gimmick where he tries to freak people out using an evil-sounding voice. BSX depicts that with an inverted speech bubble, as seen here, but the character can also speak normally.
Original Author's Comment:
06/06/14
And now we know the groups they've all been split up into! AND now that Fanhal has been revealed to be participating in this segment, I've put up the segment select button, which you probably already noticed. Don't worry, I won't try and force the rest of Division B into the crossover like I did with the first KDA crossover.
And now we know the groups they've all been split up into! AND now that Fanhal has been revealed to be participating in this segment, I've put up the segment select button, which you probably already noticed. Don't worry, I won't try and force the rest of Division B into the crossover like I did with the first KDA crossover.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
06/06/14
Kexas is alone with Saia.
GOOD JOB SAIA, YOU'VE TERRIBLED THIS
Luigi_96
06/06/14
Just you and Kexas is what you consider simple?
Pfft.
MMZX
06/07/14
Well never make a lady mad. I mean you don't know how scary females are when they really snapped.
44Cinder44
06/07/14
MMZX: Hell hath no fury than a woman scorned, anyone?
BattleStarX
06/07/14
There are reasons Kaaby in my comic pretty much gets to do whatever she pleases.
Omega Kirby
06/08/14
Do Kirbies even really have genders?
They don't wear clothes, which kinda means they have nothing to hide.
Koopario
06/08/14
Jarkes: :(
Luigi_96: Yeah. Saia's gonna need real care after this segment.
Omega Kirby: ...
I never thought about that.
But then again OCs can be male or female, so why not kirbies?
And why don't females have distinctive clothing in the Kirby Universe? Hm...
Well at least Gigi made her girls simple with mismatching colors.
Fighter Dee
06/09/14
Huh, only I noticed that the Segment Button must be very tight?
guestuser
07/21/14
Saia seems to be really pleased with her solution. The only problem is that she's with Kexas...
06/06/14
Kexas is alone with Saia.
GOOD JOB SAIA, YOU'VE TERRIBLED THIS
Luigi_96
06/06/14
Just you and Kexas is what you consider simple?
Pfft.
MMZX
06/07/14
Well never make a lady mad. I mean you don't know how scary females are when they really snapped.
44Cinder44
06/07/14
MMZX: Hell hath no fury than a woman scorned, anyone?
BattleStarX
06/07/14
There are reasons Kaaby in my comic pretty much gets to do whatever she pleases.
Omega Kirby
06/08/14
Do Kirbies even really have genders?
They don't wear clothes, which kinda means they have nothing to hide.
Koopario
06/08/14
Jarkes: :(
Luigi_96: Yeah. Saia's gonna need real care after this segment.
Omega Kirby: ...
I never thought about that.
But then again OCs can be male or female, so why not kirbies?
And why don't females have distinctive clothing in the Kirby Universe? Hm...
Well at least Gigi made her girls simple with mismatching colors.
Fighter Dee
06/09/14
Huh, only I noticed that the Segment Button must be very tight?
guestuser
07/21/14
Saia seems to be really pleased with her solution. The only problem is that she's with Kexas...
Portal Malfunction - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
Kible and Teelzy are two of Keeby's closest friends in KDA. Kible is a medic, and this location in the comic is the hospital she helps at. Kurie is the owner of the hospital, as her name would imply.
I don't think Teelzy really comes up in the rest of the comic, so they aren't relevant, but that at least explains the most basic element of who they are.
I don't think Teelzy really comes up in the rest of the comic, so they aren't relevant, but that at least explains the most basic element of who they are.
Original Author's Comment:
06/07/14
Wow, that's REALLY off-color. Almost didn't get this comic made, was watching Ramza stream Mario Kart 8. So much rage.
Wow, that's REALLY off-color. Almost didn't get this comic made, was watching Ramza stream Mario Kart 8. So much rage.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
06/08/14
Well, it's just a bright neon version of her normal color.
MMZX
06/08/14
Maybe the color represents her health condition like how it is for Author Doo except only his emotions for color change.
Koopario
06/08/14
@BattleStarX: Welp, Etam doesn't seem happy at all.
Or he's just being random.
Kinda hard to tell...
guestuser
10/23/16
Upside-down text of leetness?
06/08/14
Well, it's just a bright neon version of her normal color.
MMZX
06/08/14
Maybe the color represents her health condition like how it is for Author Doo except only his emotions for color change.
Koopario
06/08/14
@BattleStarX: Welp, Etam doesn't seem happy at all.
Or he's just being random.
Kinda hard to tell...
guestuser
10/23/16
Upside-down text of leetness?
Portal Malfunction - Part 5
Ulti's Notes:
After Master of Puppets, like I mentioned in annotations there, I essentially permanently loaned Master Green to BSX for them to use in KDA. After being trapped in a void but using his broken wand to create one last portal, Green was able to escape the void and wound up here.
I don't have the individual pages of Green's involvement in KDA, since he became integrated into the comic fairly seamlessly, but I can at least say what happened to him. He decided to turn over a new leaf and utilize his magic knowledge and lots of arms to help out around the KDA-verse, which led to him being hired at Kurie's hospital.
Other characters vaguely understood that Green came from a different world, especially since he speaks with Tahoma (and thus, to them, sounds Weird), which was why when Keeby ran into this latest batch of dimensional travelers, Keeby led Shat'l to Green in order to help get some answers and clarification.
All this to say, this is what Kible is referring to when Keeby asked her for "the jelly". As well as why Shat'l feels a familiar presence nearby.
I don't have the individual pages of Green's involvement in KDA, since he became integrated into the comic fairly seamlessly, but I can at least say what happened to him. He decided to turn over a new leaf and utilize his magic knowledge and lots of arms to help out around the KDA-verse, which led to him being hired at Kurie's hospital.
Other characters vaguely understood that Green came from a different world, especially since he speaks with Tahoma (and thus, to them, sounds Weird), which was why when Keeby ran into this latest batch of dimensional travelers, Keeby led Shat'l to Green in order to help get some answers and clarification.
All this to say, this is what Kible is referring to when Keeby asked her for "the jelly". As well as why Shat'l feels a familiar presence nearby.
Original Author's Comment:
06/08/14
I'm not sure Shat'l would ever WANT to get into Keeby or Kuxxel's head.
Or worse, Kimmal's.
I'm not sure Shat'l would ever WANT to get into Keeby or Kuxxel's head.
Or worse, Kimmal's.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Christal shard64
06/09/14
Hehe, look out Keeby ,Shat'l gonna read your Mind.
BSX:I can't read upside word you know?
NGamerS31
06/09/14
@Christal shard64: just do a head stand on your chair, like me!
Christal shard64
06/09/14
@NGamerS31: *I feel Dizzy now*@_@
Luigi_96
06/09/14
Is this page missing speech bubbles, or is Shat'l just doing his thing in the first two panels?
BattleStarX
06/09/14
Just doin' his thing. He's psychic, after all.
06/09/14
Hehe, look out Keeby ,Shat'l gonna read your Mind.
BSX:I can't read upside word you know?
NGamerS31
06/09/14
@Christal shard64: just do a head stand on your chair, like me!
Christal shard64
06/09/14
@NGamerS31: *I feel Dizzy now*@_@
Luigi_96
06/09/14
Is this page missing speech bubbles, or is Shat'l just doing his thing in the first two panels?
BattleStarX
06/09/14
Just doin' his thing. He's psychic, after all.
Lessons Learned - Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
Vezo interacted with Kubby and Kublie on BSX's end of the crossover, but most of it was off-screen. Since BSX had a time jump between when the KAS got Dyna Blade to vomit up her victim, and when Shadik's powers were restored by the Author Doo in order to send them home, the KAS members were staying with the PSSS during that period of time between.
Thus, even if it wasn't visibly depicted on-screen, there was a heavy implication that those 5 members of the KAS spent at least a small chunk of time getting to know the PSSS members. Thus, Vezo knowing Kubby and Kublie makes sense, and gets a bit more elaborated upon in more bits of dialogue that I gave them, too.
Thus, even if it wasn't visibly depicted on-screen, there was a heavy implication that those 5 members of the KAS spent at least a small chunk of time getting to know the PSSS members. Thus, Vezo knowing Kubby and Kublie makes sense, and gets a bit more elaborated upon in more bits of dialogue that I gave them, too.
Original Author's Comment:
06/08/14
Why did I decide to make Kublie's latest victim a Squishy? Think about it.
Why did I decide to make Kublie's latest victim a Squishy? Think about it.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
MMZX
06/08/14
Hmm, Not sure what to say here... I mean Kublie trying to squish Author Doo even though the squid isn't a green or a waddle doo.... an idiot who doesn't think comes to mind I guess...?
Luigi_96
06/08/14
SQUISHy. Clever.
BattleStarX
06/09/14
The Queen of Squish continues her reign.
Fighter Dee
06/09/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I will never be able to guess!
guestuser
06/09/14
Ultimate Yoshi: What favorite pokemon you like?and Legendary pokemon?
like Pikachu , Mew,celebi.
I just want to know.
guestuser
06/10/14
More comics?
guestuser
06/10/14
Please!?!?
Ultimate Yoshi
06/10/14
I'm not gonna be updating KA today. E3 is happening.
Guest
06/14/14
I remember from your lets play a Squishy made you lose Pitch. Am I correct?
ebuko
06/18/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I know! The squishy stole her catchphrase!
ebuko
06/18/14
ebuko: in the name
06/08/14
Hmm, Not sure what to say here... I mean Kublie trying to squish Author Doo even though the squid isn't a green or a waddle doo.... an idiot who doesn't think comes to mind I guess...?
Luigi_96
06/08/14
SQUISHy. Clever.
BattleStarX
06/09/14
The Queen of Squish continues her reign.
Fighter Dee
06/09/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I will never be able to guess!
guestuser
06/09/14
Ultimate Yoshi: What favorite pokemon you like?and Legendary pokemon?
like Pikachu , Mew,celebi.
I just want to know.
guestuser
06/10/14
More comics?
guestuser
06/10/14
Please!?!?
Ultimate Yoshi
06/10/14
I'm not gonna be updating KA today. E3 is happening.
Guest
06/14/14
I remember from your lets play a Squishy made you lose Pitch. Am I correct?
ebuko
06/18/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I know! The squishy stole her catchphrase!
ebuko
06/18/14
ebuko: in the name
Portal Malfunction - Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
BattleStarX requested some of the most chaotic members of the KAS, likely because they envisioned this exact scenario, and I certainly cannot blame them.
Original Author's Comment:
06/09/14
Just doin' his thing. He's psychic, after all.
Just doin' his thing. He's psychic, after all.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Mimistarlish
06/10/14
OMG!4 panel!XD, so fanny*laughing hard*
BSX: Hehe, fail
NGamerS31
06/10/14
@BattleStarX: so grey means tired?
Luigi_96
06/10/14
Pfffffffffffft.
Also, Etam, you better watch out. That smile belongs to Kexas.
MMZX
06/10/14
Wow Kirby, lol.
Fighter Dee
06/10/14
And there they go...
guestuser
06/10/14
Yes kirby is the best kirby sitter
MecanicalCH
06/10/14
Kirby can i go too!? I WANNA HAVE SODA/FUN/DONUTS....
Christal shard64
06/10/14
@BattleStarX: Hehe,you Dizzy or tired?(don't worry I now you Feel)
guestuser
06/11/14
Hahahaha! XD
Kirby rocks!
NintendoFan64
06/11/14
@Luigi_96: Wouldn't it be awesome if Kexas somehow got in there (even she's currently in another dimension) and kicked his @$$?!
Syogren
06/16/14
*This base is way _too_ plain compared to ours.
Kirby you derp.
06/10/14
OMG!4 panel!XD, so fanny*laughing hard*
BSX: Hehe, fail
NGamerS31
06/10/14
@BattleStarX: so grey means tired?
Luigi_96
06/10/14
Pfffffffffffft.
Also, Etam, you better watch out. That smile belongs to Kexas.
MMZX
06/10/14
Wow Kirby, lol.
Fighter Dee
06/10/14
And there they go...
guestuser
06/10/14
Yes kirby is the best kirby sitter
MecanicalCH
06/10/14
Kirby can i go too!? I WANNA HAVE SODA/FUN/DONUTS....
Christal shard64
06/10/14
@BattleStarX: Hehe,you Dizzy or tired?(don't worry I now you Feel)
guestuser
06/11/14
Hahahaha! XD
Kirby rocks!
NintendoFan64
06/11/14
@Luigi_96: Wouldn't it be awesome if Kexas somehow got in there (even she's currently in another dimension) and kicked his @$$?!
Syogren
06/16/14
*This base is way _too_ plain compared to ours.
Kirby you derp.
Portal Malfunction - Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
Here he is, Master Green in all his redemption-arc glory.
There's a small typo of "kind" in the first panel, where Keeby is instead written as saying "king" on accident.
There's a small typo of "kind" in the first panel, where Keeby is instead written as saying "king" on accident.
Original Author's Comment:
06/10/14
Literal flip outs are the way to go. If you're going to do something, go whole-hog.
So I've been playing some Neverwinter Nights 2 of late. Enjoyable, and the closest I've ever come to playing a real game of Dungeons and Dragons.
Literal flip outs are the way to go. If you're going to do something, go whole-hog.
So I've been playing some Neverwinter Nights 2 of late. Enjoyable, and the closest I've ever come to playing a real game of Dungeons and Dragons.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Christal shard64
06/11/14
Master Green!!0_0
Luigi_96
06/11/14
Just flipping out isn't good enough. Gotta literally do it.
MMZX
06/11/14
Annnd being a wimp is bad because.....?
Sheesh Master Green should've remember that Shat'l isn't good at fighting lol.
keeby rulez
06/11/14
@MMZX: I'm certain he's worried about kaxo not Shat'l
Fighter Dee
06/11/14
He shouldn't be THAT worried, this Kaxo would be kinda glad he is safe, after what happened and all... or would try to finish what they began there... Maybe he is right...
NintendoFan64
06/11/14
@BattleStarX: that 'king' of information?
Mudkip101
06/12/14
I am pretty sure its "kind" not "king."
ebuko
06/14/14
HE'S FLIPPING OUT!!!
Syogren
06/16/14
Now I want Kaxo and M.G. to meet again, just so Kaxo can tell him that he's not what M.G. thinks he is.
06/11/14
Master Green!!0_0
Luigi_96
06/11/14
Just flipping out isn't good enough. Gotta literally do it.
MMZX
06/11/14
Annnd being a wimp is bad because.....?
Sheesh Master Green should've remember that Shat'l isn't good at fighting lol.
keeby rulez
06/11/14
@MMZX: I'm certain he's worried about kaxo not Shat'l
Fighter Dee
06/11/14
He shouldn't be THAT worried, this Kaxo would be kinda glad he is safe, after what happened and all... or would try to finish what they began there... Maybe he is right...
NintendoFan64
06/11/14
@BattleStarX: that 'king' of information?
Mudkip101
06/12/14
I am pretty sure its "kind" not "king."
ebuko
06/14/14
HE'S FLIPPING OUT!!!
Syogren
06/16/14
Now I want Kaxo and M.G. to meet again, just so Kaxo can tell him that he's not what M.G. thinks he is.
Lessons Learned - Part 9
Ulti's Notes:
Now that the groups were split up and identified, the next important part was establishing for unfamiliar audiences (aka all of you guys reading this now in 2024 onwards) who these newcomers were. Thus, Saia and Kexas interacting meant I needed to quickly put on display the type of character Kexas was.
Original Author's Comment:
06/11/14
With this comic, I tried to both give a little more explanation as to what was going on and to develop Kexas's characterization to both Saia and any KA-only fans unfamiliar with her.
With this comic, I tried to both give a little more explanation as to what was going on and to develop Kexas's characterization to both Saia and any KA-only fans unfamiliar with her.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
06/12/14
Swirly portals of swirliness are the best kind of portals.
Luigi_96
06/12/14
I think Kexas needs to meet Not-Kaxo.
Seriously.
Although it would probably be the end of the world or something.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/12/14
Jarkes: Pre-recorded footage from before the wi-fi went down.
MMZX
06/12/14
Man, Kexas would soon learn that there is always someone who is better than him.
06/12/14
Swirly portals of swirliness are the best kind of portals.
Luigi_96
06/12/14
I think Kexas needs to meet Not-Kaxo.
Seriously.
Although it would probably be the end of the world or something.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/12/14
Jarkes: Pre-recorded footage from before the wi-fi went down.
MMZX
06/12/14
Man, Kexas would soon learn that there is always someone who is better than him.
Portal Malfunction - Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
I believe this is BattleStarX referencing my old April Fool's comic where Caiya eats Popstar.
Caiya is a bit too eloquent in her dumb form here, but it makes for an amusing joke regardless to have her wax poetic about nonsense before immediately reverting to her typical babbling toddler energy.
Caiya is a bit too eloquent in her dumb form here, but it makes for an amusing joke regardless to have her wax poetic about nonsense before immediately reverting to her typical babbling toddler energy.
Original Author's Comment:
06/11/14
Doughnut Philosophy, a study by Silly Caiya.
Mmm... pancakes...
Doughnut Philosophy, a study by Silly Caiya.
Mmm... pancakes...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
06/12/14
I'd follow that kind of thinking.
Luigi_96
06/12/14
Is that where the weight of a million pancakes comes from?
MMZX
06/12/14
Are they going to fight for the doughnut sticks? Hmmmm......
SuperScratchkat
06/12/14
STOP DOING THAT TO MY MIND CAIYA
ebuko
06/30/14
@BattleStarX: I saw a misspell in the 2nd panel. There.
06/12/14
I'd follow that kind of thinking.
Luigi_96
06/12/14
Is that where the weight of a million pancakes comes from?
MMZX
06/12/14
Are they going to fight for the doughnut sticks? Hmmmm......
SuperScratchkat
06/12/14
STOP DOING THAT TO MY MIND CAIYA
ebuko
06/30/14
@BattleStarX: I saw a misspell in the 2nd panel. There.
Portal Malfunction - Part 9
Ulti's Notes:
There was a large multi-segment arc in Kirby's Dream Adventure between the crossovers where there was a massive Dark Matter invasion. It was BSX's attempt at a more serious story to tell, and it turned out pretty well from my memory. It doesn't have much relevance here aside from comparing the relative goofiness of most recent KA segments and the surprisingly plot-heavy KDA adventure.
Original Author's Comment:
06/12/14
Keeby's luck, even if UY took him for a short vacation, that'll be the time when a true Big Bad attacks the KAS.
Oh, random trivia today. It's Friday the 13th, and also a full moon. Prepare for weirdness extraordinaire.
Keeby's luck, even if UY took him for a short vacation, that'll be the time when a true Big Bad attacks the KAS.
Oh, random trivia today. It's Friday the 13th, and also a full moon. Prepare for weirdness extraordinaire.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
GraciaWarrior
06/13/14
That 2 times for remind keeby: first Kirby and now shat'l
Luigi_96
06/13/14
Talk, lest ye be squished.
Also, I hate it when I go to vote and the little image doesn't actually have the character's name in it. :T
Ultimate Yoshi
06/13/14
I'd be willing to take on a little extra baggage if Keeby really wants to come and visit. Can't say how well it would go for him, though.
Sapar
06/13/14
I'd like to see a Karby-squish sometime, personally.
Jarkes
06/13/14
@BattleStarX: "Keeby's luck, even if UY took him for a short vacation, that'll be the time when a true Big Bad attacks the KAS."
Perhaps even Mysterious Shadowy Guy that we briefly saw WAAAY back in the Jetting Across the Ice segment...
littlekirby61524
06/13/14
oh Master Green you're one of the best seats though
Fighter Dee
06/15/14
@Luigi_96: Same here.
ebuko
06/18/14
Now he is Jelly squish!
06/13/14
That 2 times for remind keeby: first Kirby and now shat'l
Luigi_96
06/13/14
Talk, lest ye be squished.
Also, I hate it when I go to vote and the little image doesn't actually have the character's name in it. :T
Ultimate Yoshi
06/13/14
I'd be willing to take on a little extra baggage if Keeby really wants to come and visit. Can't say how well it would go for him, though.
Sapar
06/13/14
I'd like to see a Karby-squish sometime, personally.
Jarkes
06/13/14
@BattleStarX: "Keeby's luck, even if UY took him for a short vacation, that'll be the time when a true Big Bad attacks the KAS."
Perhaps even Mysterious Shadowy Guy that we briefly saw WAAAY back in the Jetting Across the Ice segment...
littlekirby61524
06/13/14
oh Master Green you're one of the best seats though
Fighter Dee
06/15/14
@Luigi_96: Same here.
ebuko
06/18/14
Now he is Jelly squish!
Lessons Learned - Part 10
Ulti's Notes:
The only use I tended to have for KAS Division B characters was as generic Extras. This is the most relevance Pyra got to have in this entire comic: getting whacked with a fish.
On the plus side, I didn't have to bother trying to introduce them, per se, so it works out far better here to have them be the set-up for a joke rather than an attempt at introducing stuff into the world. I'm far better equipped for the crossover this time than I was last time.
On the plus side, I didn't have to bother trying to introduce them, per se, so it works out far better here to have them be the set-up for a joke rather than an attempt at introducing stuff into the world. I'm far better equipped for the crossover this time than I was last time.
Original Author's Comment:
06/12/14
Where does Kruzy even keep those fish?
I can't recall if he has one of those hammerspace devices or not.
I did say I wasn't gonna try and force the rest of Division B into the crossover. That didn't mean I wouldn't include them at all.
Where does Kruzy even keep those fish?
I can't recall if he has one of those hammerspace devices or not.
I did say I wasn't gonna try and force the rest of Division B into the crossover. That didn't mean I wouldn't include them at all.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
06/12/14
I wish I had something to say to this page, but I'll just post this utterly pointless comment.
(Commenting on every page is hard sometimes, man.)
Quirby64_:D
06/12/14
INTRUDERS!
BattleStarX
06/12/14
All P.S.S.S. members have an HSSD. Kimsy does as well.
Sapar
06/13/14
BattleStarX: How very convenient.
MMZX
06/13/14
......Kids... beings kids.. Always so energetic..
44Cinder44
06/14/14
I forgot who Fanhal was, that's not bad, right?
...Right?
HOOPLA!
06/14/14
Smacking with the fish,smacking with the fish,SMACKING WITH THE FISH,SMACK SMACK SMACK!
littlekirby61524
06/14/14
if I were able to I'd turn that fish into a rubber fish
06/12/14
I wish I had something to say to this page, but I'll just post this utterly pointless comment.
(Commenting on every page is hard sometimes, man.)
Quirby64_:D
06/12/14
INTRUDERS!
BattleStarX
06/12/14
All P.S.S.S. members have an HSSD. Kimsy does as well.
Sapar
06/13/14
BattleStarX: How very convenient.
MMZX
06/13/14
......Kids... beings kids.. Always so energetic..
44Cinder44
06/14/14
I forgot who Fanhal was, that's not bad, right?
...Right?
HOOPLA!
06/14/14
Smacking with the fish,smacking with the fish,SMACKING WITH THE FISH,SMACK SMACK SMACK!
littlekirby61524
06/14/14
if I were able to I'd turn that fish into a rubber fish
Portal Malfunction - Part 10
Original Author's Comment:
06/13/14
Korby's startin' to crack. Luckily, we have another pyro not too far away who might help this situation.
And now to nom on some pancakes.
Korby's startin' to crack. Luckily, we have another pyro not too far away who might help this situation.
And now to nom on some pancakes.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Christal shard64
06/14/14
I think Kaxo like her now.
BSX: You must get of Etam now, I have bad feeling now
Luigi_96
06/14/14
I think Kaxo just found someone who he relates to. xD
littlekirby61524
06/14/14
@Luigi_96: Both of them like burning things
@BattleStarX: *Etam Squish!*
@Ybrik Etamitlu: nuuuuuu you must save your pancakes!
MecanicalCH
06/14/14
@BattleStarX: mmm...that sitting pose is just as weird and creepy as your lack of eyelashes...
Jarkes
06/14/14
Of course, being in the background can also result in you having your own separate wacky adventures, but because you're always in the background, no one will ever believe you. Just ask Booster Gold.
MMZX
06/14/14
Burn... but for what reason?!
guestuser
06/15/14
Kaxo just wants to be a front person
That one guy
06/15/14
apparently Korby likes being paid attention to
ebuko
06/18/14
@BattleStarX: I WILL HAZ HIS PANCAIKS
06/14/14
I think Kaxo like her now.
BSX: You must get of Etam now, I have bad feeling now
Luigi_96
06/14/14
I think Kaxo just found someone who he relates to. xD
littlekirby61524
06/14/14
@Luigi_96: Both of them like burning things
@BattleStarX: *Etam Squish!*
@Ybrik Etamitlu: nuuuuuu you must save your pancakes!
MecanicalCH
06/14/14
@BattleStarX: mmm...that sitting pose is just as weird and creepy as your lack of eyelashes...
Jarkes
06/14/14
Of course, being in the background can also result in you having your own separate wacky adventures, but because you're always in the background, no one will ever believe you. Just ask Booster Gold.
MMZX
06/14/14
Burn... but for what reason?!
guestuser
06/15/14
Kaxo just wants to be a front person
That one guy
06/15/14
apparently Korby likes being paid attention to
ebuko
06/18/14
@BattleStarX: I WILL HAZ HIS PANCAIKS
Portal Malfunction - Part 11
Ulti's Notes:
Characters in the KDA world don't have perma-abilities like the KA characters do, but they can utilize any abilities they may have on-hand. Korby here, being hotheaded as she is, likes to utilize the Fire ability, so having her and Kaxo fight with their respective powers was a match made in fiery heaven.
Original Author's Comment:
06/14/14
Aaaaand there they go. Good thing Kaaby left.
Remember, the Author-Doo flies thanks to beans and mystical author powers.
Aaaaand there they go. Good thing Kaaby left.
Remember, the Author-Doo flies thanks to beans and mystical author powers.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Hanna B
06/15/14
Time for a 'heated' battle between Kaxo and.....whatwasitagain KORBY!
Thisss should be interesting!
Luigi_96
06/15/14
Burnination will occur.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/15/14
I like how Kaxo switches to his Stored Ability all fancy-like and Korby is just "poof fire"
GraciaWarrior
06/15/14
FIRE Vs FIRE. So epic XD
MMZX
06/15/14
Oh no.... Why fight fire with fire?! Don't we all know that it'll only increase more and destruction?! Well I can only hope they can accept the consequences for destroying their home.
Vanillamilkshake
06/15/14
Funny thing is, I actually burnt my finger right before I read this.
ebuko
06/18/14
KILL THEM WITH
WATER!
06/15/14
Time for a 'heated' battle between Kaxo and.....whatwasitagain KORBY!
Thisss should be interesting!
Luigi_96
06/15/14
Burnination will occur.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/15/14
I like how Kaxo switches to his Stored Ability all fancy-like and Korby is just "poof fire"
GraciaWarrior
06/15/14
FIRE Vs FIRE. So epic XD
MMZX
06/15/14
Oh no.... Why fight fire with fire?! Don't we all know that it'll only increase more and destruction?! Well I can only hope they can accept the consequences for destroying their home.
Vanillamilkshake
06/15/14
Funny thing is, I actually burnt my finger right before I read this.
ebuko
06/18/14
KILL THEM WITH
WATER!
Lessons Learned - Part 11
Ulti's Notes:
Kimsy was, of all the KDA characters, the one who I had the least to do with. She wasn't a character I was hugely interested in, relatively, so when I received her from BSX, I wasn't entirely sure what to do at first.
I wound up deciding on making her a victim, since she's constantly pathetic and a suck-up in her home comic. Using her, I was able to give Shadik and Karby a mission to go on, which is Kirby Adventure's bread and butter style of writing.
To that front, I thought the most fun thing to do with Kimsy would be to have her fall victim to this world's Castle Dedede. Since there's no Kirby who works for Dedede in this universe, Bandana Waddle Dee and this Waddle Doo have no idea what to expect, and of course, Bandy's utter goofiness led to some wacky shenanigans.
I wound up deciding on making her a victim, since she's constantly pathetic and a suck-up in her home comic. Using her, I was able to give Shadik and Karby a mission to go on, which is Kirby Adventure's bread and butter style of writing.
To that front, I thought the most fun thing to do with Kimsy would be to have her fall victim to this world's Castle Dedede. Since there's no Kirby who works for Dedede in this universe, Bandana Waddle Dee and this Waddle Doo have no idea what to expect, and of course, Bandy's utter goofiness led to some wacky shenanigans.
Original Author's Comment:
06/14/14
Poor Kimsy.
Poor Kimsy.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
[insert generic username]
06/14/14
Isn't that that Mass Attack fishing rod? And where's the string/hook?
Luigi_96
06/14/14
Usually fish done attach to the bobber.
Poor Kimsy indeed. xD
guestuser
06/14/14
Poor whoever-their-name-was. Yep, I forgot everyone. Stupid me.
BattleStarX
06/14/14
Now THAT'S a fishing pole.
MMZX
06/14/14
I'm surprised Waddle Doo has the strength to even use a huge fishing pole lol....
littlekirby61524
06/15/14
@[insert generic username]:
yes, but there isn't one in-game
Koopario
06/15/14
Ultimate Yoshi: wa-wa-wa-waaaa
06/14/14
Isn't that that Mass Attack fishing rod? And where's the string/hook?
Luigi_96
06/14/14
Usually fish done attach to the bobber.
Poor Kimsy indeed. xD
guestuser
06/14/14
Poor whoever-their-name-was. Yep, I forgot everyone. Stupid me.
BattleStarX
06/14/14
Now THAT'S a fishing pole.
MMZX
06/14/14
I'm surprised Waddle Doo has the strength to even use a huge fishing pole lol....
littlekirby61524
06/15/14
@[insert generic username]:
yes, but there isn't one in-game
Koopario
06/15/14
Ultimate Yoshi: wa-wa-wa-waaaa
Portal Malfunction - Part 12
Ulti's Notes:
Similar to how I split up my Kirby characters into 4 to 5 groups, BSX split up theirs into 3 groups. For someone who proclaimed to love chaos, they definitely learned how to organize their storytelling better by the time of this crossover, too. It's far more structured than the previous one, which is to its benefit.
Original Author's Comment:
06/15/14
Like anything different would happen when Silly Caiya is in control.
Oh, hey, tomorrow's the 50th quip. Time flies.
Like anything different would happen when Silly Caiya is in control.
Oh, hey, tomorrow's the 50th quip. Time flies.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
06/16/14
I actually thought that it was KA Kirby here with his dialogue from Panel 1 before I recognized the font, since KA Kirby doesn't use his inhaling abilities that often.
Luigi_96
06/16/14
It's been 50 days already?! :U
MMZX
06/16/14
Damn Keeby, he taught Kirby not to eat unknown items for potential power... Well good luck trying to get the food out of Caiya lol.
GraciaWarrior
06/16/14
Tickle Her!tickle Her To split it out!
I will like it!>:) Hehe
MecanicalCH
06/17/14
HURRY PEOPLE!! we need to save Ybrik Etamitlu!!! what he asked nicely...
ebuko
06/18/14
@BattleStarX: NO HE ISN'T ETAM
ebuko
06/18/14
@ebuko: I meant author doo isn't what Etam described author doo.
06/16/14
I actually thought that it was KA Kirby here with his dialogue from Panel 1 before I recognized the font, since KA Kirby doesn't use his inhaling abilities that often.
Luigi_96
06/16/14
It's been 50 days already?! :U
MMZX
06/16/14
Damn Keeby, he taught Kirby not to eat unknown items for potential power... Well good luck trying to get the food out of Caiya lol.
GraciaWarrior
06/16/14
Tickle Her!tickle Her To split it out!
I will like it!>:) Hehe
MecanicalCH
06/17/14
HURRY PEOPLE!! we need to save Ybrik Etamitlu!!! what he asked nicely...
ebuko
06/18/14
@BattleStarX: NO HE ISN'T ETAM
ebuko
06/18/14
@ebuko: I meant author doo isn't what Etam described author doo.
Portal Malfunction - Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
The twins that Green mentions will show up in-person later. For now, all you need to know is that they love cookies, and are actual young children.
Original Author's Comment:
06/16/14
I can just see the twins now, raiding various parts of DeDeDe's kingdom for cookies.
Mmm... Marshmallows...
I can just see the twins now, raiding various parts of DeDeDe's kingdom for cookies.
Mmm... Marshmallows...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
06/17/14
I'd say it had a lot of power considering what it did...
Fighter Dee
06/17/14
Some marshmallows could be usefull now.
ebuko
06/18/14
@BattleStarX: I was in that fire -_-
06/17/14
I'd say it had a lot of power considering what it did...
Fighter Dee
06/17/14
Some marshmallows could be usefull now.
ebuko
06/18/14
@BattleStarX: I was in that fire -_-
Lessons Learned - Part 12
Original Author's Comment:
06/16/14
Saia's starting to dislike Kexas. Kexas could probably care less.
Saia's starting to dislike Kexas. Kexas could probably care less.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
06/16/14
Saia, you don't tell Kexas what to do. Bad idea.
MecanicalCH
06/16/14
Saia....you want to warp in time?!
BattleStarX
06/16/14
Not every kirby can get along with another, it seems.
By the way, just finished your Kirby's Dream Land 3 Let's Play, UY. Nicely done.
Koopario
06/17/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Agreed.
MMZX
06/17/14
Whether you like it or not eh...?
guestuser
12/19/18
Do kirbies count as seafood XD
06/16/14
Saia, you don't tell Kexas what to do. Bad idea.
MecanicalCH
06/16/14
Saia....you want to warp in time?!
BattleStarX
06/16/14
Not every kirby can get along with another, it seems.
By the way, just finished your Kirby's Dream Land 3 Let's Play, UY. Nicely done.
Koopario
06/17/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Agreed.
MMZX
06/17/14
Whether you like it or not eh...?
guestuser
12/19/18
Do kirbies count as seafood XD
Portal Malfunction - Part 14
Ulti's Notes:
When I end one page in the same exact location that BSX makes their next page, it can create a tiny bit of confusion when reading them in this particular order, lol
Dens are the KDA universe's name for money, if you needed that to be clarified. I'm not sure if it comes from anywhere in particular, or if BSX made it up, though.
Dens are the KDA universe's name for money, if you needed that to be clarified. I'm not sure if it comes from anywhere in particular, or if BSX made it up, though.
Original Author's Comment:
06/17/14
Hey, even if it's a backhanded compliment, coming from Kaxo, it's a good thing.
Logic is for nerds.
Hey, even if it's a backhanded compliment, coming from Kaxo, it's a good thing.
Logic is for nerds.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Syogren
06/18/14
But considering I am a nerd, logic is most certainly for me!
--bricked--
Luigi_96
06/18/14
@BattleStarX: Pancakes don't have much sugar, do they?
MecanicalCH
06/18/14
@Luigi_96: unless you put clavel milk...Honey and some melted sugar cubes...now i want pancakes ....
Jarkes
06/18/14
@MecanicalCH: Or if you get Chocolate Chocolate Chip pancakes at IHOP... Man, those are GOOD...
ebuko
06/18/14
Caikpan
@BattleStarX: Etam loves pancakes. Very much. DONT TOUCH MY PANCAKE ETAM!
06/18/14
But considering I am a nerd, logic is most certainly for me!
--bricked--
Luigi_96
06/18/14
@BattleStarX: Pancakes don't have much sugar, do they?
MecanicalCH
06/18/14
@Luigi_96: unless you put clavel milk...Honey and some melted sugar cubes...now i want pancakes ....
Jarkes
06/18/14
@MecanicalCH: Or if you get Chocolate Chocolate Chip pancakes at IHOP... Man, those are GOOD...
ebuko
06/18/14
Caikpan
@BattleStarX: Etam loves pancakes. Very much. DONT TOUCH MY PANCAKE ETAM!
Portal Malfunction - Part 15
Ulti's Notes:
KDA Kirby has access to basically any Copy Ability from the series. In this case, he turned into Wheel Kirby off-screen and used it to run over Caiya.
Original Author's Comment:
06/18/14
Poor Silly Caiya, got run over by Kirby.
Which still remains, to this day, one of my favorite things to do in Kirby's Dream Course.
Poor Silly Caiya, got run over by Kirby.
Which still remains, to this day, one of my favorite things to do in Kirby's Dream Course.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
GraciaWarrior
06/19/14
Awww :(,no tickling
Luigi_96
06/19/14
Looks like the update got messed up and didn't alert people. Might wanna fix that.
BattleStarX
06/19/14
That's something on Smackjeeve's end, and it's happened plenty of time before. They'll get around to fixing it.
Jarkes
06/19/14
...People have actually played Kirby's Dream Course?
BattleStarX
06/19/14
It was one of the few games I actually perfected on my old SNES, may it rest in peace. I doubt I could do so again, though, it's been SO long since I played it.
guestuser
06/19/14
@Etam
Give him a THOUSAND PANCAKES! Fill the white space with them!
Luigi_96
06/19/14
@BattleStarX: It fixes itself if you set the update time back a minute.
06/19/14
Awww :(,no tickling
Luigi_96
06/19/14
Looks like the update got messed up and didn't alert people. Might wanna fix that.
BattleStarX
06/19/14
That's something on Smackjeeve's end, and it's happened plenty of time before. They'll get around to fixing it.
Jarkes
06/19/14
...People have actually played Kirby's Dream Course?
BattleStarX
06/19/14
It was one of the few games I actually perfected on my old SNES, may it rest in peace. I doubt I could do so again, though, it's been SO long since I played it.
guestuser
06/19/14
@Etam
Give him a THOUSAND PANCAKES! Fill the white space with them!
Luigi_96
06/19/14
@BattleStarX: It fixes itself if you set the update time back a minute.
Lessons Learned - Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
In the previous comic with these characters, I needed something to have stopped Kublie and Kubby such that Vezo could catch up to them. Since Kublie's whole thing is squishing others, I decided to have her do so to a random creature, and when looking through the sprite sheets available for enemies, it made too much sense to have her squish the Squishy enemy.
Between that comic and this one, I remembered that Kublie calls herself the Queen of Squish in KDA, and that led to the incredible revelation that I could cause even more chaos.
Vezo saying that Kublie torched his room at the PSSS was a reference to a line from BSX's end of the crossover, where KA Kirby mentions to Ku-ie/Kuxxel that Kaxo and Kublie burned a room down. BSX never gave a reason for why that occurred, so I filled in the blanks by having it be some sort of prank gone wrong on the pyromaniacs' part.
Between that comic and this one, I remembered that Kublie calls herself the Queen of Squish in KDA, and that led to the incredible revelation that I could cause even more chaos.
Vezo saying that Kublie torched his room at the PSSS was a reference to a line from BSX's end of the crossover, where KA Kirby mentions to Ku-ie/Kuxxel that Kaxo and Kublie burned a room down. BSX never gave a reason for why that occurred, so I filled in the blanks by having it be some sort of prank gone wrong on the pyromaniacs' part.
Original Author's Comment:
06/18/14
I wonder if anybody saw this coming.
This is what Vezo is referencing in panel 1. Hey, BattleStarX never specifically wrote in WHY they torched the room.
I wonder if anybody saw this coming.
This is what Vezo is referencing in panel 1. Hey, BattleStarX never specifically wrote in WHY they torched the room.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkNut255
06/18/14
…Abusing this newfound power in 3… 2… 1...
BattleStarX
06/19/14
I don't know why I didn't see this coming, but it's definitely hilarious.
Luigi_96
06/19/14
What a royal pain. *badum tss*
06/18/14
…Abusing this newfound power in 3… 2… 1...
BattleStarX
06/19/14
I don't know why I didn't see this coming, but it's definitely hilarious.
Luigi_96
06/19/14
What a royal pain. *badum tss*
Portal Malfunction - Part 16
Ulti's Notes:
Considering Shat'l's entire existence came from BSX trying and failing to make a white-colored Kirby, to which I tried to make one myself for them to use, it feels fitting that the white Kirby sprite sheet that became Shat'l winds up meeting the actual white-colored Kirby BSX would wind up creating for KDA.
Original Author's Comment:
06/19/14
I've finally gotten around to pairing of these two. Just to add to your kirby confusion. Though Kible is quite different color-wise to Shat'l.
Etam is not amused.
I've finally gotten around to pairing of these two. Just to add to your kirby confusion. Though Kible is quite different color-wise to Shat'l.
Etam is not amused.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
06/20/14
KIBLE x SHAT'L-- *shot a lot of times* xD
Omega Kirby
06/20/14
KIBLE AND SHAT'L SITTIN' IN A TREE, TEE-AYE-ELL-KAY-EYE-EN-JEE!
MecanicalCH
06/20/14
@BattleStarX: i gladly accept your sacrifice here have million muffins...*throws a million Muffins*
06/20/14
KIBLE x SHAT'L-- *shot a lot of times* xD
Omega Kirby
06/20/14
KIBLE AND SHAT'L SITTIN' IN A TREE, TEE-AYE-ELL-KAY-EYE-EN-JEE!
MecanicalCH
06/20/14
@BattleStarX: i gladly accept your sacrifice here have million muffins...*throws a million Muffins*
Finding the Pieces - Part 1
Ulti's Notes:
This is Kooby and Kurmly, two medic characters. Kooby was the green Kirby from the first crossover, and he's since stopped working for Keeby but still considers him a friend.
Kurmly, on the other hand, never showed up on-screen in the previous crossover (though I believe he got mentioned?) There's not a ton to say about him, admittedly, other than that he's another medic from Kurie's hospital.
Kurmly, on the other hand, never showed up on-screen in the previous crossover (though I believe he got mentioned?) There's not a ton to say about him, admittedly, other than that he's another medic from Kurie's hospital.
Original Author's Comment:
06/20/14
And now for the next kirby color confusion! Because the Author-Doo is feeling evil.
And now for the next kirby color confusion! Because the Author-Doo is feeling evil.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
06/21/14
Awkwarrrrd.
Mimistarlish
06/23/14
Green meet green
Raize meet Kooby
06/21/14
Awkwarrrrd.
Mimistarlish
06/23/14
Green meet green
Raize meet Kooby
Lessons Learned - Part 14
Original Author's Comment:
06/20/14
Kruzy sure loves trying to freak everyone else out.
I probably won't be able to update on Sunday, but if that is indeed the case, you'll just see a make-up Monday update followed by a proper Tuesday update.
Kruzy sure loves trying to freak everyone else out.
I probably won't be able to update on Sunday, but if that is indeed the case, you'll just see a make-up Monday update followed by a proper Tuesday update.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
06/20/14
PIANO
GokentoPower
06/20/14
Sapar: OHHHHHHH NOOOO
It'S A PIANO THAT PI-AN-OH!
Luigi_96
06/20/14
Sapar: GAHH! Whose idea was this?!
BattleStarX
06/20/14
I dare say you've nailed Kruzy perfectly.
MecanicalCH
06/20/14
Sapar: Musical Muffin Time!! *makes the Piano a huge Muffin!*
mmm...Kruzy sure know show to show off...
GraciaWarrior
06/21/14
I hope Fannhal not shock
Nekotive
06/21/14
What do you use to make the frames?
guestuser
06/23/14
No comments
06/20/14
PIANO
GokentoPower
06/20/14
Sapar: OHHHHHHH NOOOO
It'S A PIANO THAT PI-AN-OH!
Luigi_96
06/20/14
Sapar: GAHH! Whose idea was this?!
BattleStarX
06/20/14
I dare say you've nailed Kruzy perfectly.
MecanicalCH
06/20/14
Sapar: Musical Muffin Time!! *makes the Piano a huge Muffin!*
mmm...Kruzy sure know show to show off...
GraciaWarrior
06/21/14
I hope Fannhal not shock
Nekotive
06/21/14
What do you use to make the frames?
guestuser
06/23/14
No comments
Finding the Pieces - Part 2
Ulti's Notes:
As a reminder, Shadow Kirby is a clone of Kirby from Kirby & The Amazing Mirror, who gets called Mirror Kirby in this comic since he's from the Mirror World. Mirror, being a copy ability as well, is also the power that Gigi uses, hence why Ryka gets confused.
Original Author's Comment:
06/21/14
Caiya drooling at it adds a certain layer of grossness.
Old Comics Updated:
100th Comic Special
The Heist - Pt.23; renamed
The Failed Heist - Part 18
Oh, a note. I'm approaching the end of remaking "The Early Days." When I'm done with the remakes, I'll go back, fix little errors like spelling, and then that segment will be officially completed. Woo-hoo!
I might release the remade segments as Comic Files (.cbr) for your offline enjoyment, but I haven't quite decided on whether I will or not. I still have a couple of weeks to go, so we'll see what happens.
Caiya drooling at it adds a certain layer of grossness.
Old Comics Updated:
100th Comic Special
The Heist - Pt.23; renamed
The Failed Heist - Part 18
Oh, a note. I'm approaching the end of remaking "The Early Days." When I'm done with the remakes, I'll go back, fix little errors like spelling, and then that segment will be officially completed. Woo-hoo!
I might release the remade segments as Comic Files (.cbr) for your offline enjoyment, but I haven't quite decided on whether I will or not. I still have a couple of weeks to go, so we'll see what happens.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
GraciaWarrior
06/22/14
Ryka: Mirror: kirby not Gigi in this world :p
Luigi_96
06/22/14
@BattleStarX: Personally, I'd like to see the original versions compared to the remakes in some way.
MecanicalCH
06/22/14
@BattleStarX: it would be fun if you put the originals against the newer ones...so we can see the huge differences that have been done...
Nekotive
06/22/14
Is there a sprite of Kirby looking up that you recommend or could post to Spriter's resource?
06/22/14
Ryka: Mirror: kirby not Gigi in this world :p
Luigi_96
06/22/14
@BattleStarX: Personally, I'd like to see the original versions compared to the remakes in some way.
MecanicalCH
06/22/14
@BattleStarX: it would be fun if you put the originals against the newer ones...so we can see the huge differences that have been done...
Nekotive
06/22/14
Is there a sprite of Kirby looking up that you recommend or could post to Spriter's resource?
Finding the Pieces - Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
Resident tech wizard Kaaby finally gets to show you guys what a regular Kirby Tank looks like.
Original Author's Comment:
06/22/14
Ya know, Shat'l could almost do with a kirby tank of his own. Would let him get out-and-about a bit more often.
I'm actually serious here.
Ya know, Shat'l could almost do with a kirby tank of his own. Would let him get out-and-about a bit more often.
I'm actually serious here.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Christal shard64
06/23/14
Hi Kaaby, can I drive your tank?
Mimistarlish
06/23/14
po-yo !too Kaaby ^_^
SuperScratchkat
06/23/14
I'd love for Scratch to make an appearance!
Here's an example of him: http://dumpofmanypeople.smackjeeves.com/comics/1962400/all-the-things/
He's pretty simple, just Kirby with the Plasma colors.
Luigi_96
06/23/14
Kirby-tank!
Or, uh...
Kaaby-tank? :P
06/23/14
Hi Kaaby, can I drive your tank?
Mimistarlish
06/23/14
po-yo !too Kaaby ^_^
SuperScratchkat
06/23/14
I'd love for Scratch to make an appearance!
Here's an example of him: http://dumpofmanypeople.smackjeeves.com/comics/1962400/all-the-things/
He's pretty simple, just Kirby with the Plasma colors.
Luigi_96
06/23/14
Kirby-tank!
Or, uh...
Kaaby-tank? :P
Lessons Learned - Part 15
Ulti's Notes:
Kruzy had previously displayed a power of some kind that allowed to him to walk on the ceiling. It was entirely unexplained and used solely for comedic effect in KDA.
It made too much sense for the power to get questioned by a KA character though, but I knew that I shouldn't actually answer what was going on, so I tried to be vague with the explanation here by just saying it was something to do with their feet.
This, unfortunately, failed a bit, and BSX wound up rolling with the explanation in full, which wasn't really my intention. In fact, I had hoped to keep it unexplained as best I could, such that it could retain its mystique and charm as something that really only existed for comedy. Alas, it didn't quite work out, and this is admittedly probably my main regret with this crossover, even if it's a small one.
It made too much sense for the power to get questioned by a KA character though, but I knew that I shouldn't actually answer what was going on, so I tried to be vague with the explanation here by just saying it was something to do with their feet.
This, unfortunately, failed a bit, and BSX wound up rolling with the explanation in full, which wasn't really my intention. In fact, I had hoped to keep it unexplained as best I could, such that it could retain its mystique and charm as something that really only existed for comedy. Alas, it didn't quite work out, and this is admittedly probably my main regret with this crossover, even if it's a small one.
Original Author's Comment:
06/23/14
As promised, here's your Monday update.
Fanhal better hope that gravity decides not to screw with him real soon.
As promised, here's your Monday update.
Fanhal better hope that gravity decides not to screw with him real soon.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Quirby64_:D
06/23/14
FEAR ITTTTTTTTT
MecanicalCH
06/23/14
Ultimate Yoshi: can i use the unholy power too? pleaseee!!! i wanna walk in the ceiling...
contradiction123
06/23/14
so uhhh.... what IS the thing they're doing with their feet exactly..?
Ultimate Yoshi
06/23/14
contradiction123: I have no idea, personally. It's BattleStarX who created these guys, so I left Klooshy's explanation intentionally vague so as to not accidentally rewrite BSX's reasoning/put in a full explanation where there wasn't supposed to be.
guestuser
06/24/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I bet they just walk up the walls and onto the ceiling.
Luigi_96
06/24/14
Finally, there's a reason BSX's characters can walk on the ceiling! xD
guestuser
06/24/14
I hope you not falling Fanhal.
SuperScratchkat
06/24/14
Fun Fact: I have a Popopo with Fanhal's color scheme planned for later in my comic. I thought, "Man, I think I actually found a set of colors that isn't already taken!"
And then Fanhal.
06/23/14
FEAR ITTTTTTTTT
MecanicalCH
06/23/14
Ultimate Yoshi: can i use the unholy power too? pleaseee!!! i wanna walk in the ceiling...
contradiction123
06/23/14
so uhhh.... what IS the thing they're doing with their feet exactly..?
Ultimate Yoshi
06/23/14
contradiction123: I have no idea, personally. It's BattleStarX who created these guys, so I left Klooshy's explanation intentionally vague so as to not accidentally rewrite BSX's reasoning/put in a full explanation where there wasn't supposed to be.
guestuser
06/24/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I bet they just walk up the walls and onto the ceiling.
Luigi_96
06/24/14
Finally, there's a reason BSX's characters can walk on the ceiling! xD
guestuser
06/24/14
I hope you not falling Fanhal.
SuperScratchkat
06/24/14
Fun Fact: I have a Popopo with Fanhal's color scheme planned for later in my comic. I thought, "Man, I think I actually found a set of colors that isn't already taken!"
And then Fanhal.
Finding the Pieces - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
I had to do a bit of explaining in the comments after this page, to clarify an important thing for BSX: The character of Not-Kaxo was only named that from a meta, out-of-universe angle. In-universe, none of the Master of Puppets clones got given separate names from their original counterparts, so the name 'Not-Kaxo' didn't actually exist.
Thus, as you'll see in the next page, this allowed for a slight course-correction retcon pretty quickly. The coordination wasn't perfect during this crossover, but it was still leagues better than before, at least.
Thus, as you'll see in the next page, this allowed for a slight course-correction retcon pretty quickly. The coordination wasn't perfect during this crossover, but it was still leagues better than before, at least.
Original Author's Comment:
06/23/14
As you have no doubt noticed, I've been given the whole crossover characters a lot better and balanced amount of screen time. That's one thing I felt I didn't do too well the last time I had UY's characters over here.
Also I sadistically enjoy this page.
As you have no doubt noticed, I've been given the whole crossover characters a lot better and balanced amount of screen time. That's one thing I felt I didn't do too well the last time I had UY's characters over here.
Also I sadistically enjoy this page.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Hanna B
06/24/14
Could...Could I cameo in..the white space?
She doesn't have many sprites, but...there's this one: http://prntscr.com/3vz7hj
And she's very shy around others most of the time, just in case you needed to know.
Sapar
06/24/14
I sent you a cameo PM, in case you didn't see it.
Luigi_96
06/24/14
Keeby? Worse than Not-Kaxo?
No way.
SuperScratchkat
06/24/14
Well exCUSE me, Etam. (I don't know what I expected. I mean, seriously. It's Etam. Of COURSE he's going to put down the other characters)
Ultimate Yoshi
06/24/14
I guess Kooby doesn't remember Raize, considering during the last crossover, the two of them were on the same side of it all. Then again, Kooby spent more time with Saia than he did with Raize.
Oh, also, a side-note, while my cast page and author comments called him Not-Kaxo, in-comic he never was given that name, nor were any of the other clones.
Quirby64_:D
06/24/14
Ey, could I cameo in dat white space also?
http://sta.sh/015kin8zy7t8 (Sheet)
If it's OK, mah boi
Blue Kirby the l33t
06/24/14
Etam wants someone fun? I'll help! http://gkandabunchofotherppl.smackjeeves.com/comics/1758342/blue-kirbys-sprites/
If you can have him telling Etam "...and that's how pickles can lay tadpole eggs.", I'd really want to see his response!
guestuser
06/24/14
I love the last panel XD.
Looks like Kaxo's fist and Keeby's face are going to be the best of friends.
06/24/14
Could...Could I cameo in..the white space?
She doesn't have many sprites, but...there's this one: http://prntscr.com/3vz7hj
And she's very shy around others most of the time, just in case you needed to know.
Sapar
06/24/14
I sent you a cameo PM, in case you didn't see it.
Luigi_96
06/24/14
Keeby? Worse than Not-Kaxo?
No way.
SuperScratchkat
06/24/14
Well exCUSE me, Etam. (I don't know what I expected. I mean, seriously. It's Etam. Of COURSE he's going to put down the other characters)
Ultimate Yoshi
06/24/14
I guess Kooby doesn't remember Raize, considering during the last crossover, the two of them were on the same side of it all. Then again, Kooby spent more time with Saia than he did with Raize.
Oh, also, a side-note, while my cast page and author comments called him Not-Kaxo, in-comic he never was given that name, nor were any of the other clones.
Quirby64_:D
06/24/14
Ey, could I cameo in dat white space also?
http://sta.sh/015kin8zy7t8 (Sheet)
If it's OK, mah boi
Blue Kirby the l33t
06/24/14
Etam wants someone fun? I'll help! http://gkandabunchofotherppl.smackjeeves.com/comics/1758342/blue-kirbys-sprites/
If you can have him telling Etam "...and that's how pickles can lay tadpole eggs.", I'd really want to see his response!
guestuser
06/24/14
I love the last panel XD.
Looks like Kaxo's fist and Keeby's face are going to be the best of friends.
Finding the Pieces - Part 5
Ulti's Notes:
I don't know how much it would've broken BSX's canon, but I almost kinda wish after this page that there was going to be set up for one of the KA characters being able to fly the Warp Star. Ryka tries later, but man, I'm just thinking of the comedic value of dumb-mode Caiya somehow being the only other character allowed to fly it. Alas.
Original Author's Comment:
06/24/14
While I may have grouped up the other kirbies based on their colors compared to mine, these ones are definitely grouped up based on their personalities.
A note, there are four new characters on the Cast & Credits page, though one of them has technically shown up already.
While I may have grouped up the other kirbies based on their colors compared to mine, these ones are definitely grouped up based on their personalities.
A note, there are four new characters on the Cast & Credits page, though one of them has technically shown up already.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
christal shard64
06/25/14
Here we go the crash
GraciaWarrior
06/25/14
I want drive a warp star too :(
Etam! don't do anything stupid
Sapar
06/25/14
It's funny that you still call me that after all this time.
Luigi_96
06/25/14
@BattleStarX: I'm so glad you used that sprite for Gooey. :>
Omega Kirby
06/25/14
@Luigi_96: ?
SuperScratchkat
06/25/14
*reads cast section*
FIZRIM
THAT FRICKEN NAME OMG
I COULD SAY IT FOREVER
FIIIIIIIZZZZRRRIIIIIIIM
Luigi_96
06/25/14
@Omega Kirby: In the cast&credits page
06/25/14
Here we go the crash
GraciaWarrior
06/25/14
I want drive a warp star too :(
Etam! don't do anything stupid
Sapar
06/25/14
It's funny that you still call me that after all this time.
Luigi_96
06/25/14
@BattleStarX: I'm so glad you used that sprite for Gooey. :>
Omega Kirby
06/25/14
@Luigi_96: ?
SuperScratchkat
06/25/14
*reads cast section*
FIZRIM
THAT FRICKEN NAME OMG
I COULD SAY IT FOREVER
FIIIIIIIZZZZRRRIIIIIIIM
Luigi_96
06/25/14
@Omega Kirby: In the cast&credits page
Lessons Learned - Part 16
Original Author's Comment:
06/24/14
Really, it's kinda true. Kaaby improved her building standards significantly since the first crossover. Also she changed color, but that's besides the point.
Really, it's kinda true. Kaaby improved her building standards significantly since the first crossover. Also she changed color, but that's besides the point.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
06/24/14
A lot of my kirbies have changed color throughout the years. Some for the better. And some because for some reason, CS6 recolors differently than CS4. I've yet to understand why.
Luigi_96
06/24/14
Awkward. xD
SuperScratchkat
06/25/14
I just noticed.
This base.
Is that foreground you put up on the Spriter's Resort.
The one that I use for one of MY bases.
aaaaaaaaaaaa i am ashamed i have copied you and that is bad
Koopa1018
02/08/15
SuperScratchkat: This is a sprite comic. Technically, he's also copying, as is every other sprite-comicker out there.
guestuser
12/19/18
He kinda acts like a bully
06/24/14
A lot of my kirbies have changed color throughout the years. Some for the better. And some because for some reason, CS6 recolors differently than CS4. I've yet to understand why.
Luigi_96
06/24/14
Awkward. xD
SuperScratchkat
06/25/14
I just noticed.
This base.
Is that foreground you put up on the Spriter's Resort.
The one that I use for one of MY bases.
aaaaaaaaaaaa i am ashamed i have copied you and that is bad
Koopa1018
02/08/15
SuperScratchkat: This is a sprite comic. Technically, he's also copying, as is every other sprite-comicker out there.
guestuser
12/19/18
He kinda acts like a bully
Finding the Pieces - Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
Leave it to BattleStarX to take one of the most random pages from my early comics in Average Days and turn Shat'l's power to affect the speech bubble visuals into a translation tool.
Original Author's Comment:
06/25/14
Continuity!
I do have a few others lined up after I'm done playing around with Sapar, but by all means, send some more in. Gives me something fun to play around with the Quips and gives you a chance to be picked on/insulted by Etam.
Though I doubt I'll ever get his speech pattern right. Must be because I never watch surfing/skating/etc movies or shoes.
Continuity!
I do have a few others lined up after I'm done playing around with Sapar, but by all means, send some more in. Gives me something fun to play around with the Quips and gives you a chance to be picked on/insulted by Etam.
Though I doubt I'll ever get his speech pattern right. Must be because I never watch surfing/skating/etc movies or shoes.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Mimistarlish
06/26/14
Yey! finally I can Understand what Kaaby saying
Sapar
06/26/14
M'gldy.
SuperScratchkat
06/26/14
Scratch: At least I have ARMS! Hmph.
(I'm really not mad at all it's fine don't worry)
MecanicalCH
06/26/14
Kexas attacked another one? >:D
Ultimate Yoshi
06/26/14
Etam never actually had a surfing accent or anything like that. I just kind of... wrote him.
Luigi_96
06/26/14
Kaaby has WORDS. :U
MIND=BLOWN
Jarkes
06/26/14
Holy crap, is this a nod to that very weird moment from an early KA comic where Shat'l made Shadik's thoughts visible?
Nekotive
06/26/14
What's this "Little Green Tomatoes" thing I've heard about that no links to it will work?
NGamerS31
06/27/14
@Nekotive: A drawn comic, just randomness with a name based on a famous KDA line: "For the love of little green tomatoes!"
go to BSX's DA page and you'll find everything.
06/26/14
Yey! finally I can Understand what Kaaby saying
Sapar
06/26/14
M'gldy.
SuperScratchkat
06/26/14
Scratch: At least I have ARMS! Hmph.
(I'm really not mad at all it's fine don't worry)
MecanicalCH
06/26/14
Kexas attacked another one? >:D
Ultimate Yoshi
06/26/14
Etam never actually had a surfing accent or anything like that. I just kind of... wrote him.
Luigi_96
06/26/14
Kaaby has WORDS. :U
MIND=BLOWN
Jarkes
06/26/14
Holy crap, is this a nod to that very weird moment from an early KA comic where Shat'l made Shadik's thoughts visible?
Nekotive
06/26/14
What's this "Little Green Tomatoes" thing I've heard about that no links to it will work?
NGamerS31
06/27/14
@Nekotive: A drawn comic, just randomness with a name based on a famous KDA line: "For the love of little green tomatoes!"
go to BSX's DA page and you'll find everything.
Finding the Pieces - Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
Kibby makes an appearance! With this purple lad shown off, that makes every character from the original crossover getting to show up again. Since the original crossover, Kibby's picked up some cookign interests and isn't quite as lazy as he used to be.
Original Author's Comment:
06/26/14
Goof covering with typical Kaxo charm.
No DDD News today, I had stuff I needed to do in the evening. I doubt there will be remakes tomorrow, I'm working, so I'll most likely only have time for my main comic.
Goof covering with typical Kaxo charm.
No DDD News today, I had stuff I needed to do in the evening. I doubt there will be remakes tomorrow, I'm working, so I'll most likely only have time for my main comic.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
06/27/14
Sweet and sour, Etam, don't question me. That's just asking to get turned into a chicken.
Nekotive
06/27/14
I like the red and green thing going on here, but KIBBY HAD TO RUIN IT!!
Nekotive
06/27/14
PS: HOENN CONFIRMED, BABY!! WOOOOOOOO!
If only November would come sooner...
NGamerS31
06/27/14
@Nekotive: Your reaction is delayed as sh*t!
Luigi_96
06/27/14
Aaaaaaaand the award for the most delayed rection to anything ever, goes to...
...Nekotive!! Congratulations on not following gaming news! *applause*
Nekotive
06/27/14
@Luigi_96: Try to slap me and I'll show you my catlike reflexes!
*slapped*
(5 years later)
BLOCK!! Oh wait...
Seriously, I just felt like saying it. Because Hoenn is confirmed, there's new formes for the main legends, there's Mega Sableye (Oh Arceus have mercy on us. Dat Prankster tho.), beautiful graphics, and IF THERE AREN'T ANY TRUMPETS I WILL MURDER EVERYONE!!!
SuperScratchkat
06/27/14
Wait.... the purple one is named Kibby?
B-but MY purple popopo is named Kibby!
EEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Nekotive
06/27/14
@SuperScratchkat: Well, this might get confusing for... reasons... (*NO NAMES YET!!*)
GraciaWarrior
06/27/14
Well. Mr sugar is like Sapar,I guess
06/27/14
Sweet and sour, Etam, don't question me. That's just asking to get turned into a chicken.
Nekotive
06/27/14
I like the red and green thing going on here, but KIBBY HAD TO RUIN IT!!
Nekotive
06/27/14
PS: HOENN CONFIRMED, BABY!! WOOOOOOOO!
If only November would come sooner...
NGamerS31
06/27/14
@Nekotive: Your reaction is delayed as sh*t!
Luigi_96
06/27/14
Aaaaaaaand the award for the most delayed rection to anything ever, goes to...
...Nekotive!! Congratulations on not following gaming news! *applause*
Nekotive
06/27/14
@Luigi_96: Try to slap me and I'll show you my catlike reflexes!
*slapped*
(5 years later)
BLOCK!! Oh wait...
Seriously, I just felt like saying it. Because Hoenn is confirmed, there's new formes for the main legends, there's Mega Sableye (Oh Arceus have mercy on us. Dat Prankster tho.), beautiful graphics, and IF THERE AREN'T ANY TRUMPETS I WILL MURDER EVERYONE!!!
SuperScratchkat
06/27/14
Wait.... the purple one is named Kibby?
B-but MY purple popopo is named Kibby!
EEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Nekotive
06/27/14
@SuperScratchkat: Well, this might get confusing for... reasons... (*NO NAMES YET!!*)
GraciaWarrior
06/27/14
Well. Mr sugar is like Sapar,I guess
Lessons Learned - Part 17
Ulti's Notes:
This is, I think, technically use of the 'Worf Effect' trope? The thing where, in order to show how much of a threat a character is, they beat a more well-known character in a fight.
It's only technically since I had yet to really truly show Aika being combat-capable on-screen, but I at least insinuated a lot of her skill through other characters' dialogue over the years. Enough that this still probably felt a little bit surprising for people who didn't know Kexas's strength.
It's only technically since I had yet to really truly show Aika being combat-capable on-screen, but I at least insinuated a lot of her skill through other characters' dialogue over the years. Enough that this still probably felt a little bit surprising for people who didn't know Kexas's strength.
Original Author's Comment:
06/26/14
Maybe if Kexas was a dandelion ninja, things would have gone better for Division C.
I've started up a new Let's Play! And it's of... Pac-Man World 2? Yeah, I'm honestly just as confused by that game choice as you probably are.
Maybe if Kexas was a dandelion ninja, things would have gone better for Division C.
I've started up a new Let's Play! And it's of... Pac-Man World 2? Yeah, I'm honestly just as confused by that game choice as you probably are.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Redkirby
06/26/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Or a lava cat.
Luigi_96
06/26/14
Eeyup, that's Kexas.
MecanicalCH
06/26/14
seems Kexas limited her punching force...since she could had made window like hole that really are a rip of time space continuum...as she has proven before...
littlekirby61524
06/26/14
now my question is this: what if Saia gave Kexas her umbrella?
Sapar
06/26/14
littlekirby61524: Actually, Kexas uses a variant of Crash. So it proooobably wouldn't be nearly as effective.
guestuser
06/27/14
No one Can beat Kexas
littlekirby61524
06/27/14
Sapar: but way earlier in the comic Saia had used her umbrella a few times, once was taking out Talzo in one hit.
Sapar
06/27/14
littlekirby61524: That wasn't my point. Trading Crash for Parasol would, in actuality, be a downgrade. ie Kexas would probably be WORSE off with the Parasol ability than without it.
However, if Saia were to physically GIVE Kexas the parasol, instead of the Parasol ABILITY...... THEN I could see your logic.
littlekirby61524
06/27/14
Sapar: that's what I mean physically give it to Kexas, not the ability, but as an item.
Sapar
06/27/14
littlekirby61524: ..........OoOoOoOoOoOoOo.
MecanicalCH
06/27/14
littlekirby61524: i bet Kexas would break the Parasol with her strength...
Sapar: indeed as an ability it would be a downgrade...but as a weapon...without using its ability...it would be amazing...but i think Kexas would end breaking it...
plasma_knight303
06/28/14
"Kublie, stop picking fights with the natives."
Except Kexas.
GraciaWarrior
06/28/14
Hehe, Know Saia know Kexas skill.
Omega Kirby
06/28/14
What would happen if Kexas stole Dana's 'sweetheart'?
Koopa1018
02/08/15
Ultimate Yoshi: Pac-Man World 2? Nice. I love that game.
Are you going for 100%, or no?
Ultizeta
07/30/17
Color fix for Aika's text bubbles.
06/26/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Or a lava cat.
Luigi_96
06/26/14
Eeyup, that's Kexas.
MecanicalCH
06/26/14
seems Kexas limited her punching force...since she could had made window like hole that really are a rip of time space continuum...as she has proven before...
littlekirby61524
06/26/14
now my question is this: what if Saia gave Kexas her umbrella?
Sapar
06/26/14
littlekirby61524: Actually, Kexas uses a variant of Crash. So it proooobably wouldn't be nearly as effective.
guestuser
06/27/14
No one Can beat Kexas
littlekirby61524
06/27/14
Sapar: but way earlier in the comic Saia had used her umbrella a few times, once was taking out Talzo in one hit.
Sapar
06/27/14
littlekirby61524: That wasn't my point. Trading Crash for Parasol would, in actuality, be a downgrade. ie Kexas would probably be WORSE off with the Parasol ability than without it.
However, if Saia were to physically GIVE Kexas the parasol, instead of the Parasol ABILITY...... THEN I could see your logic.
littlekirby61524
06/27/14
Sapar: that's what I mean physically give it to Kexas, not the ability, but as an item.
Sapar
06/27/14
littlekirby61524: ..........OoOoOoOoOoOoOo.
MecanicalCH
06/27/14
littlekirby61524: i bet Kexas would break the Parasol with her strength...
Sapar: indeed as an ability it would be a downgrade...but as a weapon...without using its ability...it would be amazing...but i think Kexas would end breaking it...
plasma_knight303
06/28/14
"Kublie, stop picking fights with the natives."
Except Kexas.
GraciaWarrior
06/28/14
Hehe, Know Saia know Kexas skill.
Omega Kirby
06/28/14
What would happen if Kexas stole Dana's 'sweetheart'?
Koopa1018
02/08/15
Ultimate Yoshi: Pac-Man World 2? Nice. I love that game.
Are you going for 100%, or no?
Ultizeta
07/30/17
Color fix for Aika's text bubbles.
Finding the Pieces - Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
KDA Kirby may crash his Warp Star all the time, but it still gets him to where he's trying to go, at least. But Keeby beat him to the punch.
Original Author's Comment:
06/27/14
Sanity's over-rated.
Breaking brains is fun.
Sanity's over-rated.
Breaking brains is fun.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Mimistarlish
06/28/14
OH FOR THE LOVE OF.....!
WORDS INVERTED AGAIN!
THIS MAKE MY HEAD HURT!>:(
canecacomleite
06/28/14
Poor Mirror Kirby.
Luigi_96
06/28/14
You just don't want to know.
Jarkes
06/28/14
So I'm guessing that Mirror Kirby is not going to encounter Kaxo again? That'd be kind of amusing.
Sapar
06/28/14
Hey, I can do upside-down speech too! I'll show you in the next quip- while STANDING UPSIDE-DOWN UNDERNEATH YOU!
(Please do that, I want to see his reaction)
MecanicalCH
06/28/14
@Sapar: that makes us two now! XD
guestuser
06/28/14
Who is Who where is Who When is who doctor Who and wham is Who.
Falcon_Lunch!
06/28/14
You really don't want to finish that question, Mirror.
06/28/14
OH FOR THE LOVE OF.....!
WORDS INVERTED AGAIN!
THIS MAKE MY HEAD HURT!>:(
canecacomleite
06/28/14
Poor Mirror Kirby.
Luigi_96
06/28/14
You just don't want to know.
Jarkes
06/28/14
So I'm guessing that Mirror Kirby is not going to encounter Kaxo again? That'd be kind of amusing.
Sapar
06/28/14
Hey, I can do upside-down speech too! I'll show you in the next quip- while STANDING UPSIDE-DOWN UNDERNEATH YOU!
(Please do that, I want to see his reaction)
MecanicalCH
06/28/14
@Sapar: that makes us two now! XD
guestuser
06/28/14
Who is Who where is Who When is who doctor Who and wham is Who.
Falcon_Lunch!
06/28/14
You really don't want to finish that question, Mirror.
Finding the Pieces - Part 9
Original Author's Comment:
06/28/14
Just a pair of white kirbies, standing around chatting since they haven't much else to do.
How could I deny such a fun request like that, Sapar?
Just a pair of white kirbies, standing around chatting since they haven't much else to do.
How could I deny such a fun request like that, Sapar?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
06/29/14
Hmmm.... What should I do for my next scheme? *grows beard and arm, scratches beard*
Luigi_96
06/29/14
Shat'l, you have no tact.
littlekirby61524
06/29/14
@Sapar: tongue
Sapar
06/30/14
@littlekirby61524: It's green, thank you.
06/29/14
Hmmm.... What should I do for my next scheme? *grows beard and arm, scratches beard*
Luigi_96
06/29/14
Shat'l, you have no tact.
littlekirby61524
06/29/14
@Sapar: tongue
Sapar
06/30/14
@littlekirby61524: It's green, thank you.
Lessons Learned - Part 18
Ulti's Notes:
When I was asking for KDA characters to use, I actually initially prompted BSX with a proposition about Kexas in particular. While I had a few other characters I thought I'd enjoy using (namely Kubby and Kublie), Kexas was the main catalyst behind the crossover, with the ideas I had for her.
With BSX's permission and go-ahead, I basically tasked myself with developing Kexas as a character, because of how I perceived the character and what would prevent her from growing or evolving.
Essentially, Kexas was a massive powerhouse who had a frightening reputation, and not a single character in KDA was willing to truly go up against her. The only ones who might be capable of it, Kirby and Keeby, would either not be emotionally intelligent enough to worry about it, or just flat-out not care, respectively.
Thus, despite how much of a fan favorite character Kexas was in KDA, she was also extremely stagnant and one-note. I wanted to see her evolve, something BSX wasn't against the idea of, but I didn't see an immediate way that any outside force could get Kexas to change, or understand that she COULD change.
But that was just within the confines of KDA itself. With the potential of a crossover, I could pit Kexas against another character who DOESN'T know her reputation. By using Saia, I was able to pair Kexas up with a character who would be strong enough to at least get Kexas to Try in combat, and also someone who would actually care about Kexas's behavior.
Was it a bit silly to use the crossover to evolve a character who wasn't even my own? Perhaps a tad, and I can certainly see why it might be awkward for those not in the know, but I was also able to not make it the sole focus of the crossover and provide plenty of other material to sink one's teeth into, so I don't particularly regret this direction either.
Either way, the point is, the whole arguments and Saia being overwhelmed during this segment was all intentionally leading up to a fight between these two.
With BSX's permission and go-ahead, I basically tasked myself with developing Kexas as a character, because of how I perceived the character and what would prevent her from growing or evolving.
Essentially, Kexas was a massive powerhouse who had a frightening reputation, and not a single character in KDA was willing to truly go up against her. The only ones who might be capable of it, Kirby and Keeby, would either not be emotionally intelligent enough to worry about it, or just flat-out not care, respectively.
Thus, despite how much of a fan favorite character Kexas was in KDA, she was also extremely stagnant and one-note. I wanted to see her evolve, something BSX wasn't against the idea of, but I didn't see an immediate way that any outside force could get Kexas to change, or understand that she COULD change.
But that was just within the confines of KDA itself. With the potential of a crossover, I could pit Kexas against another character who DOESN'T know her reputation. By using Saia, I was able to pair Kexas up with a character who would be strong enough to at least get Kexas to Try in combat, and also someone who would actually care about Kexas's behavior.
Was it a bit silly to use the crossover to evolve a character who wasn't even my own? Perhaps a tad, and I can certainly see why it might be awkward for those not in the know, but I was also able to not make it the sole focus of the crossover and provide plenty of other material to sink one's teeth into, so I don't particularly regret this direction either.
Either way, the point is, the whole arguments and Saia being overwhelmed during this segment was all intentionally leading up to a fight between these two.
Original Author's Comment:
06/28/14
Yep, that DID just happen.
Yep, that DID just happen.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Redkirby
06/28/14
Don't mess with the parasol. Lesson of the day.
Luigi_96
06/28/14
OH. SNAP.
littlekirby61524
06/28/14
gweheheheheheheheh it's parasol time
BattleStarX
06/28/14
Ah, Parasol. Will forever remain my favorite power.
Fighter Dee
06/28/14
I wanted to say that didn't happened, Ulti already said it happened, so...
That shouldn't have happened!
guestuser
06/29/14
Brave Saia, but not the brightest move XD.
Looks like someone is going to enter another dimension today...
Sapar
06/29/14
Goodbye, Saia. You will be missed.
guestuser
06/29/14
Saia can beat Kexas?!
Nekotive
06/29/14
In one comic, Saia did more damage to Kexas than Karby did over the course of the entire arena segment of Channel DDD. That's still not saying much.
MecanicalCH
06/29/14
ohhh.....ohhh...*goes to prepare Saia´s grave...*
guestuser
06/30/14
...
parasol > kexas.
mind = blown O___o
GraciaWarrior
06/30/14
O_0' Wow, just WOW!
ebuko
06/30/14
Ultimate Yoshi: That. is. TROLOLOLOLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
ace8993
07/02/14
Thumbs up if you saw that background from Super Mario Bros Z Episode 8
guestuser
07/02/14
GUYS
GUYS
SAIA IS STRONGER THAN KEXAS
GUYS
Extremmefan
07/24/14
ace8993: Thumbs up!
guestuser
12/30/14
dont mess with it...
Ultizeta
07/30/17
Color fix.
pixlyJolt
09/13/18
Kexas is a freaking prick
RedsterTheGamer
10/14/20
Gotta love that THWACK.
06/28/14
Don't mess with the parasol. Lesson of the day.
Luigi_96
06/28/14
OH. SNAP.
littlekirby61524
06/28/14
gweheheheheheheheh it's parasol time
BattleStarX
06/28/14
Ah, Parasol. Will forever remain my favorite power.
Fighter Dee
06/28/14
I wanted to say that didn't happened, Ulti already said it happened, so...
That shouldn't have happened!
guestuser
06/29/14
Brave Saia, but not the brightest move XD.
Looks like someone is going to enter another dimension today...
Sapar
06/29/14
Goodbye, Saia. You will be missed.
guestuser
06/29/14
Saia can beat Kexas?!
Nekotive
06/29/14
In one comic, Saia did more damage to Kexas than Karby did over the course of the entire arena segment of Channel DDD. That's still not saying much.
MecanicalCH
06/29/14
ohhh.....ohhh...*goes to prepare Saia´s grave...*
guestuser
06/30/14
...
parasol > kexas.
mind = blown O___o
GraciaWarrior
06/30/14
O_0' Wow, just WOW!
ebuko
06/30/14
Ultimate Yoshi: That. is. TROLOLOLOLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
ace8993
07/02/14
Thumbs up if you saw that background from Super Mario Bros Z Episode 8
guestuser
07/02/14
GUYS
GUYS
SAIA IS STRONGER THAN KEXAS
GUYS
Extremmefan
07/24/14
ace8993: Thumbs up!
guestuser
12/30/14
dont mess with it...
Ultizeta
07/30/17
Color fix.
pixlyJolt
09/13/18
Kexas is a freaking prick
RedsterTheGamer
10/14/20
Gotta love that THWACK.
Finding the Pieces - Part 10
Ulti's Notes:
Green Kirbies like to talk.
Original Author's Comment:
06/29/14
Just a couple of boring green kirbies standing around chatting.
Fear the sugar.
Just a couple of boring green kirbies standing around chatting.
Fear the sugar.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
GraciaWarrior
06/30/14
You know? this Kirby's form KA and KDA most same their Color.
Sapar
06/30/14
Wait, why would I resist sugar? It's delicious!
Luigi_96
06/30/14
The last crossover inspired many things. But healing bombs were definitely the best.
Falcon_Lunch!
06/30/14
So THAT'S where the healing bombs came from!
Omega Kirby
06/30/14
@Sapar: But it's anti sugar! From an ANTI-AUTHOR!
(That means it's salt, by the way.
Omega Kirby
06/30/14
Also...
¡sᴉɥʇ ǝʞᴉl pᴉdnʇs ʎllɐǝɹ ʞool no⅄
MecanicalCH
06/30/14
@Omega Kirby: ¡ʇuǝɯɯoɔ ɐ uᴉ ʇxǝʇ uʍop ǝpᴉsdn sᴉɥʇ ǝsn oʇ ʇsɹᴉɟ ǝɥʇ ǝɹǝʍ ǝɯ puɐ ɹǝɥʇoɹq ʎɯ ʇnq ʇɹɐɯs ǝɹɐ noʎ ʞuᴉɥʇ noʎ
littlekirby61524
06/30/14
SUGER!!!!!!!
ImusteatthesugerandthenIwillgoovertothetruearenaandwinbygoingcrazyoneverythingandboreeverythingbytalkinglikethisandqwertyuiopasdjklzxcvbnm.
Sapar
07/01/14
@MecanicalCH: How do you do that??
Syogren
07/02/14
@Sapar: ˙ʇᴉ ǝlƃooפ ʇsnſ ˙looɔ os s,ʇI ˙ɹoʇɐɹǝuǝƃ ʇxǝʇ uʍop-ǝpᴉsdn uɐ pǝsn I os 'ɯǝɥʇ ƃuᴉpuᴉɟ ɟo ʞɔᴉs ʇoƃ I 'sᴉɥʇ ǝdʎʇ oʇ ʇdɯǝʇʇɐ ʎɯ uᴉ 'ɹǝʌǝʍoH ˙ɯǝɥʇ ƃuᴉpuᴉɟ ɟo ɹǝʇʇɐɯ ɐ ʇsnɾ s’ʇI ˙ᴉᴉɔsɐ uᴉ sɹǝʇɔɐɹɐɥɔ uʍop-ǝpᴉsdn ǝɹɐ ǝɹǝɥʇ 'ʇno suɹnʇ ʇᴉ s∀
06/30/14
You know? this Kirby's form KA and KDA most same their Color.
Sapar
06/30/14
Wait, why would I resist sugar? It's delicious!
Luigi_96
06/30/14
The last crossover inspired many things. But healing bombs were definitely the best.
Falcon_Lunch!
06/30/14
So THAT'S where the healing bombs came from!
Omega Kirby
06/30/14
@Sapar: But it's anti sugar! From an ANTI-AUTHOR!
(That means it's salt, by the way.
Omega Kirby
06/30/14
Also...
¡sᴉɥʇ ǝʞᴉl pᴉdnʇs ʎllɐǝɹ ʞool no⅄
MecanicalCH
06/30/14
@Omega Kirby: ¡ʇuǝɯɯoɔ ɐ uᴉ ʇxǝʇ uʍop ǝpᴉsdn sᴉɥʇ ǝsn oʇ ʇsɹᴉɟ ǝɥʇ ǝɹǝʍ ǝɯ puɐ ɹǝɥʇoɹq ʎɯ ʇnq ʇɹɐɯs ǝɹɐ noʎ ʞuᴉɥʇ noʎ
littlekirby61524
06/30/14
SUGER!!!!!!!
ImusteatthesugerandthenIwillgoovertothetruearenaandwinbygoingcrazyoneverythingandboreeverythingbytalkinglikethisandqwertyuiopasdjklzxcvbnm.
Sapar
07/01/14
@MecanicalCH: How do you do that??
Syogren
07/02/14
@Sapar: ˙ʇᴉ ǝlƃooפ ʇsnſ ˙looɔ os s,ʇI ˙ɹoʇɐɹǝuǝƃ ʇxǝʇ uʍop-ǝpᴉsdn uɐ pǝsn I os 'ɯǝɥʇ ƃuᴉpuᴉɟ ɟo ʞɔᴉs ʇoƃ I 'sᴉɥʇ ǝdʎʇ oʇ ʇdɯǝʇʇɐ ʎɯ uᴉ 'ɹǝʌǝʍoH ˙ɯǝɥʇ ƃuᴉpuᴉɟ ɟo ɹǝʇʇɐɯ ɐ ʇsnɾ s’ʇI ˙ᴉᴉɔsɐ uᴉ sɹǝʇɔɐɹɐɥɔ uʍop-ǝpᴉsdn ǝɹɐ ǝɹǝɥʇ 'ʇno suɹnʇ ʇᴉ s∀
Finding the Pieces - Part 11
Original Author's Comment:
06/30/14
Actually, who knows what wacky shenanigans Division D gets into when the camera's not focused on them.
Creepy Etam is a go.
Actually, who knows what wacky shenanigans Division D gets into when the camera's not focused on them.
Creepy Etam is a go.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
07/01/14
Watch in horror, as nothing actually happens to me.
guestuser
07/01/14
Hello! Friendly Squish Counter speaking!
YOUR CURRENT SQUISH COUNT: 90
YOUR CURRENT BOOP COUNT: 2
...That is all.
MecanicalCH
07/01/14
@BattleStarX: why i feel that candy...would go BOOM boom?
Luigi_96
07/01/14
Not here =/= missing, Ryka.
44Cinder44
07/01/14
Yay smart Caiya!
07/01/14
Watch in horror, as nothing actually happens to me.
guestuser
07/01/14
Hello! Friendly Squish Counter speaking!
YOUR CURRENT SQUISH COUNT: 90
YOUR CURRENT BOOP COUNT: 2
...That is all.
MecanicalCH
07/01/14
@BattleStarX: why i feel that candy...would go BOOM boom?
Luigi_96
07/01/14
Not here =/= missing, Ryka.
44Cinder44
07/01/14
Yay smart Caiya!
Lessons Learned - Part 19
Ulti's Notes:
None of this is canon by any means, but it's a bit of a cheerfully dark headcanon to adopt. All that food has to come from somewhere, and when both flora and fauna are sentient AND there are meat and veggie dishes everywhere, it can lead to MatPat-esque theories, that's for sure.
I played it off for laughs, but it IS a rather dark implication if you stop and consider it.
Alternatively, you can also play into the whole 'creatures respawn moments later' vibe, and say that anything that gets cooked and eaten also simultaneously survives without a scratch. Video game logic is weird, wonky, and a little bit silly. Don't read too much into it, is the point.
I mostly just did this because it was funny in the moment.
I played it off for laughs, but it IS a rather dark implication if you stop and consider it.
Alternatively, you can also play into the whole 'creatures respawn moments later' vibe, and say that anything that gets cooked and eaten also simultaneously survives without a scratch. Video game logic is weird, wonky, and a little bit silly. Don't read too much into it, is the point.
I mostly just did this because it was funny in the moment.
Original Author's Comment:
06/30/14
Dream Landers live by one sole motto: "Eat or be eaten."
Where did you think all that random food Kirby encountered on his adventures came from?
Dream Landers live by one sole motto: "Eat or be eaten."
Where did you think all that random food Kirby encountered on his adventures came from?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Fighter Dee
06/30/14
They both are dead! Two silent Kirbies going after them, no way to remain alive.
BattleStarX
06/30/14
Stealth shadow jumping into a tree. Well played, Shadik. Well played.
Luigi_96
06/30/14
Ohh goodness.
Nekotive
06/30/14
The anticipation for the next Kexas comic page is KILLING ME!!
GraciaWarrior
07/01/14
Hai Shadik, Hai Karby
guestuser
12/19/18
Uh oh...
06/30/14
They both are dead! Two silent Kirbies going after them, no way to remain alive.
BattleStarX
06/30/14
Stealth shadow jumping into a tree. Well played, Shadik. Well played.
Luigi_96
06/30/14
Ohh goodness.
Nekotive
06/30/14
The anticipation for the next Kexas comic page is KILLING ME!!
GraciaWarrior
07/01/14
Hai Shadik, Hai Karby
guestuser
12/19/18
Uh oh...
Finding the Pieces - Part 12
Ulti's Notes:
Teelzy is intentionally an inverted-colored Kirby, with white outlines and all that jazz. However, her inversion normally has her appearing pink, whereas here she's off-colored and multi-colored as a result of some sort of sickness. I don't recall what the illness was, or if it was actually relevant, but it definitely wasn't particularly relevant to the crossover itself, just something to occupy time more-or-less.
Original Author's Comment:
07/01/14
Now she's REALLY off-color.
I've been enjoying having UY's kirbies over more this time than the last one. Maybe because I've planned this segment out in a more relaxed way. Maybe because I'm not pulling my beard out trying to recolor them properly. Who knows.
No DDD News today, my laptop actually over-heated and shut down a couple times already. 90+ degree heat and 90%+ humidity makes me and my laptop very unhappy.
Now she's REALLY off-color.
I've been enjoying having UY's kirbies over more this time than the last one. Maybe because I've planned this segment out in a more relaxed way. Maybe because I'm not pulling my beard out trying to recolor them properly. Who knows.
No DDD News today, my laptop actually over-heated and shut down a couple times already. 90+ degree heat and 90%+ humidity makes me and my laptop very unhappy.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Fighter Dee
07/02/14
How come she is always sick?
That one guy
07/02/14
@Fighter Dee: She isn't ALWAYS sick, she just happens to get sick a lot.
Sapar
07/02/14
Oh, I wanna eat myself! BSX, can I eat myself, PLEEEEEASE??????
Luigi_96
07/02/14
Well then!
Also, Etam has lost his only friend. D:
guestuser
07/02/14
@Sapar
I would say you're crazy, but you're also a shark on a unicycle so I won't question it. XD
Woohoo! Teelzy's back! And so is the cloning machine!
ebuko
07/02/14
@??: when I first saw kirky and kirmy in the cloning machine (I didn't see anyone talk about it) I was like: ARE THERE MILLIONS OF THEM?!?!?!
ebuko
07/02/14
... TEELZY LOOKS LIKE SHE WILL BARF RAINBOWS
(I think that because of the colors) No offense Teezly.
ebuko
07/02/14
@BattleStarX: If the cake goes boom, Etam would freak out
MecanicalCH
07/02/14
@BattleStarX: Ooogiiiieee.....
(can´t stop thinking it has to do with Edna and Harvey...Harvey´s new eyes...)
GraciaWarrior
07/03/14
Did I miss something?
Sapar: How about I eating you?You look delicious(Grap knife and frok)
Mimistarlish
07/03/14
@Luigi_96: I like you Avatar,but why Redtro -_-'
Luigi_96
07/03/14
@Mimistarlish: ...Because that's the character's name...
And it's part of a characters page...
07/02/14
How come she is always sick?
That one guy
07/02/14
@Fighter Dee: She isn't ALWAYS sick, she just happens to get sick a lot.
Sapar
07/02/14
Oh, I wanna eat myself! BSX, can I eat myself, PLEEEEEASE??????
Luigi_96
07/02/14
Well then!
Also, Etam has lost his only friend. D:
guestuser
07/02/14
@Sapar
I would say you're crazy, but you're also a shark on a unicycle so I won't question it. XD
Woohoo! Teelzy's back! And so is the cloning machine!
ebuko
07/02/14
@??: when I first saw kirky and kirmy in the cloning machine (I didn't see anyone talk about it) I was like: ARE THERE MILLIONS OF THEM?!?!?!
ebuko
07/02/14
... TEELZY LOOKS LIKE SHE WILL BARF RAINBOWS
(I think that because of the colors) No offense Teezly.
ebuko
07/02/14
@BattleStarX: If the cake goes boom, Etam would freak out
MecanicalCH
07/02/14
@BattleStarX: Ooogiiiieee.....
(can´t stop thinking it has to do with Edna and Harvey...Harvey´s new eyes...)
GraciaWarrior
07/03/14
Did I miss something?
Sapar: How about I eating you?You look delicious(Grap knife and frok)
Mimistarlish
07/03/14
@Luigi_96: I like you Avatar,but why Redtro -_-'
Luigi_96
07/03/14
@Mimistarlish: ...Because that's the character's name...
And it's part of a characters page...
Finding the Pieces - Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
Here we see the results of my random "I'm a ninja" quip from the first crossover. BSX gave Kibby actual ninja powers, and the KDA universe was never quite the same.
Original Author's Comment:
07/02/14
Kibby did SOMETHING to annoy the crap out of Korby and Kaxo. Guess that's why Raize and Kooby were outside.
I actually know who I'm gonna grab next, unless I see a particularly interesting one pop up in my inbox/comments.
Kibby did SOMETHING to annoy the crap out of Korby and Kaxo. Guess that's why Raize and Kooby were outside.
I actually know who I'm gonna grab next, unless I see a particularly interesting one pop up in my inbox/comments.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Air Man1 21
07/03/14
Etam has claimed his first victim.
Luigi_96
07/03/14
*GASP*
ETAM... ATE SAPAR! :U
GraciaWarrior
07/03/14
I Too late to eat sapar too :p
@Luigi_96: :O and Kibby get burning!
Omega Kirby
07/03/14
@Luigi_96: Oh...
Did you want to eat that?
MecanicalCH
07/03/14
@BattleStarX: Sapar!!! NOOOO!!!...WHY!? WHY!?
Sapar
07/03/14
@MecanicalCH: I'd eat him from the inside, but I think someone else should have some more fun.
MecanicalCH
07/03/14
@Sapar: ohh...so you will kinda infiltrated his insides in a Mario & Luigi star saga:Bowser inside story?
guestuser
07/03/14
I am immensely amused by the fourth panel XD.
@MecanicalCH
First Etam's insides, then the world!
Muix
10/25/15
I spy, with my little eye, Kibby in the fourth panel!
07/03/14
Etam has claimed his first victim.
Luigi_96
07/03/14
*GASP*
ETAM... ATE SAPAR! :U
GraciaWarrior
07/03/14
I Too late to eat sapar too :p
@Luigi_96: :O and Kibby get burning!
Omega Kirby
07/03/14
@Luigi_96: Oh...
Did you want to eat that?
MecanicalCH
07/03/14
@BattleStarX: Sapar!!! NOOOO!!!...WHY!? WHY!?
Sapar
07/03/14
@MecanicalCH: I'd eat him from the inside, but I think someone else should have some more fun.
MecanicalCH
07/03/14
@Sapar: ohh...so you will kinda infiltrated his insides in a Mario & Luigi star saga:Bowser inside story?
guestuser
07/03/14
I am immensely amused by the fourth panel XD.
@MecanicalCH
First Etam's insides, then the world!
Muix
10/25/15
I spy, with my little eye, Kibby in the fourth panel!
Lessons Learned - Part 20
Ulti's Notes:
This is, to date, still one of my all-time favorite Kirby Adventure comics. It's especially funny to me if you recall that Kimsy works for King Dedede and his Waddle Dees, and doesn't quite know that she's in another dimension right now and dealing with a different Castle Dedede.
The first panel is a nod to the Kirby anime, where King Dedede tapes a picture of Kirby over an ingredient called Zebon and gets Chef Kawasaki to think that he needs to cook Kirby in order to make a delicious meal. The ruse eventually gets discovered and Kirby doesn't get cooked. Since this mini-story was about Bandy trying to cook a Kirby, it felt like a silly little reference I could slide in.
The first panel is a nod to the Kirby anime, where King Dedede tapes a picture of Kirby over an ingredient called Zebon and gets Chef Kawasaki to think that he needs to cook Kirby in order to make a delicious meal. The ruse eventually gets discovered and Kirby doesn't get cooked. Since this mini-story was about Bandy trying to cook a Kirby, it felt like a silly little reference I could slide in.
Original Author's Comment:
07/02/14
Timing is essential to humor.
Timing is essential to humor.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
MecanicalCH
07/03/14
HAHAHAHAHA!!! this page is pure gold! :D
you´re gonna make a great dinner for the King!
...oh. ...is this a prank?
Nope!
HAHAHAHAHA the reaction is great!!!
BattleStarX
07/03/14
Kimsy is responding in a perfectly understandable way.
SkyyKirby44
07/03/14
Isn't the first panel a reference to Right Back At Ya?
Luigi_96
07/03/14
I'm going to be laughing at this all night now. xD
guestuser
07/03/14
SkyyKirby44: YES! It's about the one with Zebon and Cook Kirby!
Omega Kirby
07/03/14
But Meta Knight took it off!
DarkNut255
07/03/14
Wait a minute, I just realized that the Bandana Waddle Dee is either Bandy or Fettuccine! Or another Dee that looks just like him!
Ultimate Yoshi
07/03/14
DarkNut255: He's Bandy. The lighter orange one is Fettuccine.
Fighter Dee
07/03/14
Yes Bandy, yes it was. Idiot.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/05/14
Jarkes: Calling him Bandy Andy specifically adds to the name, whereas Bandy is just a simple nickname for Bandana Dee.
07/03/14
HAHAHAHAHA!!! this page is pure gold! :D
you´re gonna make a great dinner for the King!
...oh. ...is this a prank?
Nope!
HAHAHAHAHA the reaction is great!!!
BattleStarX
07/03/14
Kimsy is responding in a perfectly understandable way.
SkyyKirby44
07/03/14
Isn't the first panel a reference to Right Back At Ya?
Luigi_96
07/03/14
I'm going to be laughing at this all night now. xD
guestuser
07/03/14
SkyyKirby44: YES! It's about the one with Zebon and Cook Kirby!
Omega Kirby
07/03/14
But Meta Knight took it off!
DarkNut255
07/03/14
Wait a minute, I just realized that the Bandana Waddle Dee is either Bandy or Fettuccine! Or another Dee that looks just like him!
Ultimate Yoshi
07/03/14
DarkNut255: He's Bandy. The lighter orange one is Fettuccine.
Fighter Dee
07/03/14
Yes Bandy, yes it was. Idiot.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/05/14
Jarkes: Calling him Bandy Andy specifically adds to the name, whereas Bandy is just a simple nickname for Bandana Dee.
Finding the Pieces - Part 14
Ulti's Notes:
This particular background was previously used by myself as part of Castle Dedede, since that's where it's used in the original Kirby Super Star Ultra game. Since BSX repurposed for Mirror Kirby's new home (since Kaxo burned his first cavern home down in the first crossover), Caiya's confusion was warranted and a cheeky reference to the different usages of the same background.
Original Author's Comment:
07/03/14
Beware the soda zombies.
Oh, there's another new member on the cast list. I think you'll like him.
Beware the soda zombies.
Oh, there's another new member on the cast list. I think you'll like him.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
07/04/14
.........God I love Etam.
Jarkes
07/04/14
I want to see Mirror Kirby's reaction to Kaxo being back.
Omega Kirby
07/04/14
@Sapar: I can't see why.
He just took a bite out of you.
Luigi_96
07/04/14
Redtro, you know you want to eat some. xD
Sapar
07/04/14
@Omega Kirby: I would do the exact same thing. Actually, I was planning to, if Etam doesn't finish that.
HatKirby
07/05/14
@BattleStarX:
Two things:
First off, I adore your comic. It's amazing.
Secondly, I would really love a cameo quip appearence thing and would really be honored if I were to be granted that privilege. However, I don't have a smackjeeves account yet. Is there some sort of rule restricting access that I'm not aware of? Or maybe not, which would be amazing.
Anyway, if I'm successful in this effort, you will have the required details.
Thanks in advance!
07/04/14
.........God I love Etam.
Jarkes
07/04/14
I want to see Mirror Kirby's reaction to Kaxo being back.
Omega Kirby
07/04/14
@Sapar: I can't see why.
He just took a bite out of you.
Luigi_96
07/04/14
Redtro, you know you want to eat some. xD
Sapar
07/04/14
@Omega Kirby: I would do the exact same thing. Actually, I was planning to, if Etam doesn't finish that.
HatKirby
07/05/14
@BattleStarX:
Two things:
First off, I adore your comic. It's amazing.
Secondly, I would really love a cameo quip appearence thing and would really be honored if I were to be granted that privilege. However, I don't have a smackjeeves account yet. Is there some sort of rule restricting access that I'm not aware of? Or maybe not, which would be amazing.
Anyway, if I'm successful in this effort, you will have the required details.
Thanks in advance!
Finding the Pieces - Part 15
Ulti's Notes:
I don't admittedly recall who this white/orange Kirby is, but presumably they're a medic. They don't reappear after this page, though, so knowing who they are isn't immensely relevant.
BSX also didn't actually follow through on this line of thought, for some reason, which was an odd choice. Whatever was medically wrong with Teelzy never gets addressed, at least within the crossover itself. It might've gotten brought up afterwards, but I don't remember since it's been ten years since this.
BSX also didn't actually follow through on this line of thought, for some reason, which was an odd choice. Whatever was medically wrong with Teelzy never gets addressed, at least within the crossover itself. It might've gotten brought up afterwards, but I don't remember since it's been ten years since this.
Original Author's Comment:
07/04/14
So many white kirbies!
There is never enough cake.
So many white kirbies!
There is never enough cake.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
HatKirby
07/05/14
This comment was made almost immediately this latest comic came out. Wow. Also, Mr Author Doo, could you please consider my request from the previous page? I may have sugar for you...
Also: is there ever enough cake?
BattleStarX
07/05/14
@HatKirby: I don't have any restrictions at the moment for cameo requests.
Just make sure it's a good one, or Etam will have a field day.
Omega Kirby
07/05/14
Why did you make Kaxo look so violent? He's nothing like that in Kirby Adventure...
EDIT: I mean, not that violent
BattleStarX
07/05/14
@Omega Kirby: Kaxo hasn't done anything overly violent in this crossover. He's sparred with Korby and watched as she torched a room as a way of getting rid of ninjas.
Luigi_96
07/05/14
There are a lot of white Kirbies right now. Wow. xD
HatKirby
07/05/14
@BattleStarX:
Can I email you the information? I'd like to keep it sort of a surprise...
HatKirby
07/05/14
@HatKirby: By all means. I have an email address on my profile page.
8bithuman
07/05/14
http://tinyurl.com/pkqfteh
This is Cursor Kirby. Be warned of his tenancy to unintentionally drop his 4th walls.
07/05/14
This comment was made almost immediately this latest comic came out. Wow. Also, Mr Author Doo, could you please consider my request from the previous page? I may have sugar for you...
Also: is there ever enough cake?
BattleStarX
07/05/14
@HatKirby: I don't have any restrictions at the moment for cameo requests.
Just make sure it's a good one, or Etam will have a field day.
Omega Kirby
07/05/14
Why did you make Kaxo look so violent? He's nothing like that in Kirby Adventure...
EDIT: I mean, not that violent
BattleStarX
07/05/14
@Omega Kirby: Kaxo hasn't done anything overly violent in this crossover. He's sparred with Korby and watched as she torched a room as a way of getting rid of ninjas.
Luigi_96
07/05/14
There are a lot of white Kirbies right now. Wow. xD
HatKirby
07/05/14
@BattleStarX:
Can I email you the information? I'd like to keep it sort of a surprise...
HatKirby
07/05/14
@HatKirby: By all means. I have an email address on my profile page.
8bithuman
07/05/14
http://tinyurl.com/pkqfteh
This is Cursor Kirby. Be warned of his tenancy to unintentionally drop his 4th walls.
Lessons Learned - Part 21
Original Author's Comment:
07/04/14
Klooshy and Kruzy don't do a very good job of keeping out of trouble.
Klooshy and Kruzy don't do a very good job of keeping out of trouble.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Omega Kirby
07/04/14
Keeping out of trouble? What's that?
Luigi_96
07/04/14
Smashing! :D
BattleStarX
07/04/14
Poor Fanhal, being stuck with Kruzy.
Koopario
07/06/14
Omega Kirby: Yup.
guestuser
07/06/14
Ultimate Yoshi: It's them. In a freaking Tankbot.
Phhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahhaahhahahahahahahahahahaha.
07/04/14
Keeping out of trouble? What's that?
Luigi_96
07/04/14
Smashing! :D
BattleStarX
07/04/14
Poor Fanhal, being stuck with Kruzy.
Koopario
07/06/14
Omega Kirby: Yup.
guestuser
07/06/14
Ultimate Yoshi: It's them. In a freaking Tankbot.
Phhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahhaahhahahahahahahahahahaha.
Finding the Pieces - Part 16
Original Author's Comment:
07/05/14
While technically true, he did instigate it.
It still amazes me how much of a love/hate thing Etam inspires.
While technically true, he did instigate it.
It still amazes me how much of a love/hate thing Etam inspires.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
HOOPLA!
07/06/14
Is no suppose to be now?
NGamerS31
07/06/14
@HOOPLA!: NO!NO TO LEAVE!
Sapar
07/06/14
"I really, REALLY don't like you."
"See, that line's longer than the other three."
plasma_knight303
07/06/14
@Sapar: "But there were only two others-"
"I SAID GET IN LINE"
44Cinder44
07/06/14
Kismessisitude?
Luigi_96
07/06/14
@BattleStarX: I personally like Etam, but Redtro doesn't like anybody at first. xD
MecanicalCH
07/06/14
i kinda liked Etam until he eat Sapar...that´s my job...
07/06/14
Is no suppose to be now?
NGamerS31
07/06/14
@HOOPLA!: NO!NO TO LEAVE!
Sapar
07/06/14
"I really, REALLY don't like you."
"See, that line's longer than the other three."
plasma_knight303
07/06/14
@Sapar: "But there were only two others-"
"I SAID GET IN LINE"
44Cinder44
07/06/14
Kismessisitude?
Luigi_96
07/06/14
@BattleStarX: I personally like Etam, but Redtro doesn't like anybody at first. xD
MecanicalCH
07/06/14
i kinda liked Etam until he eat Sapar...that´s my job...
Recharging the Batteries - Part 1
Ulti's Notes:
What's truly impressive is that Ryka's favorite brand of soda is interdimensionally consistent. Now THAT'S marketing.
Original Author's Comment:
07/06/14
Okay, I'll admit, puzzles in Kirby games are not exactly anything to write home about, but still, give the puffball some credit.
Whoops, forgot to get rid of the width bar at the top... ah well.
Okay, I'll admit, puzzles in Kirby games are not exactly anything to write home about, but still, give the puffball some credit.
Whoops, forgot to get rid of the width bar at the top... ah well.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Christal shard64
07/07/14
O_O
Where Ryka got that soda?!
littlekirby61524
07/07/14
@Christal shard64: from Mirror Kirby's fridge~
Luigi_96
07/07/14
@BattleStarX: If they threw in some puzzles of Zelda difficulty, well, that would probably still be nothing to write home about.
Go Redtro! Beat the snot out of him! >:D
MecanicalCH
07/07/14
GO REDTRO!!! GO!! may the Muffin powers be with you!!!
Fighter Dee
07/07/14
And THAT's why I like Redtro.
07/07/14
O_O
Where Ryka got that soda?!
littlekirby61524
07/07/14
@Christal shard64: from Mirror Kirby's fridge~
Luigi_96
07/07/14
@BattleStarX: If they threw in some puzzles of Zelda difficulty, well, that would probably still be nothing to write home about.
Go Redtro! Beat the snot out of him! >:D
MecanicalCH
07/07/14
GO REDTRO!!! GO!! may the Muffin powers be with you!!!
Fighter Dee
07/07/14
And THAT's why I like Redtro.
Lessons Learned - Part 22
Ulti's Notes:
I don't remember the EXACT set of words it stands for, but an "HSSD" is a hammerspace device (and may stand for HammerSpace Storage Device or something). Basically, think of it like a technology-induced Bag of Holding from D&D. You can carry things around of any size or shape, in an invisible and infinite endless space that can store an immense buttload of stuff.
It was an invention of BSX, specifically used by the PSSS and its agents. Since Kruzy here is a probationary agent from the PSSS, he knows about them, but Klooshy never worked for that group, so I came up with the explanation that he bought one from one of the PSSS agents (the mentioned Kippy). This was completely made up by me, but it fits pretty neatly into everything BSX had already shown off, so... hey, it worked.
Also friendly reminder that Fanhal has the Bomb Stored Ability.
It was an invention of BSX, specifically used by the PSSS and its agents. Since Kruzy here is a probationary agent from the PSSS, he knows about them, but Klooshy never worked for that group, so I came up with the explanation that he bought one from one of the PSSS agents (the mentioned Kippy). This was completely made up by me, but it fits pretty neatly into everything BSX had already shown off, so... hey, it worked.
Also friendly reminder that Fanhal has the Bomb Stored Ability.
Original Author's Comment:
07/06/14
Welp, there goes the Klooshy Tank. I'm sure he's got spares back in the KDA universe, though.
Welp, there goes the Klooshy Tank. I'm sure he's got spares back in the KDA universe, though.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
07/06/14
That had to hurt...
Omega Kirby
07/06/14
Luigi_96: I'm surprised that there's no remains of the tank whatsoever...
MecanicalCH
07/06/14
Omega Kirby: there are but they are so small...they can´t be seen! XD
guestuser
07/06/14
Excuse me, THEY are in trouble?
Fanhal you forget your place as comedy relief. Get back to your job! Lol.
BattleStarX
07/06/14
Oh yeah, he definitely has spares. Oh, the number of Klooshy Tanks the twins have ruined off-screen...
guestuser
07/21/14
Never underestimate the strength of the KAS?
DarkMario1000
07/30/15
that I was able to Google® "HSSD kirby" and what I was looking for showed up on the first page of the search results.
07/06/14
That had to hurt...
Omega Kirby
07/06/14
Luigi_96: I'm surprised that there's no remains of the tank whatsoever...
MecanicalCH
07/06/14
Omega Kirby: there are but they are so small...they can´t be seen! XD
guestuser
07/06/14
Excuse me, THEY are in trouble?
Fanhal you forget your place as comedy relief. Get back to your job! Lol.
BattleStarX
07/06/14
Oh yeah, he definitely has spares. Oh, the number of Klooshy Tanks the twins have ruined off-screen...
guestuser
07/21/14
Never underestimate the strength of the KAS?
DarkMario1000
07/30/15
that I was able to Google® "HSSD kirby" and what I was looking for showed up on the first page of the search results.
Recharging the Batteries - Part 2
Ulti's Notes:
These are the aforementioned twins mentioned a few pages ago. They normally only speak in BSX's Poyoese language, like Kaaby the blue Kirby does. Shat'l is once again translating their dialogue to be readable for the first time here.
They're basically cookie-obsessed children. That's about all you need to know, especially since they once again only show up in this page. BSX's end of the crossover was a tad eclectic like that, with characters of theirs just showing up very briefly.
They're basically cookie-obsessed children. That's about all you need to know, especially since they once again only show up in this page. BSX's end of the crossover was a tad eclectic like that, with characters of theirs just showing up very briefly.
Original Author's Comment:
07/07/14
There are many worse ways to die than via a super powered bear hug from something really cute.
Your move, jedi.
There are many worse ways to die than via a super powered bear hug from something really cute.
Your move, jedi.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
07/08/14
Lightsaber is nothing compared to the power of FISH.
Mimistarlish
07/08/14
Daww [<:'D!*explode of cutenese*
guestuser
07/08/14
Admittedly, this is the first time I have seen someone dual wielding fish XD.
"How can someone have no cookies at all?" Lol.
Falcon_Lunch!
07/08/14
GAAAAAH
THE CUTENESS
I CAN'T HANDLE IT
I JUST CAN'T HANDLE IT
Fighter Dee
07/08/14
Am I the only one here who's Cuteness-Proof?
GraciaWarrior
07/09/14
@Fighter Dee: *gasp*YOU THE CUTENESE HEATER?!*Prepare the gun*
plasma_knight303
07/10/14
@Fighter Dee: BURN THE HATER *prepares flamethrower*
07/08/14
Lightsaber is nothing compared to the power of FISH.
Mimistarlish
07/08/14
Daww [<:'D!*explode of cutenese*
guestuser
07/08/14
Admittedly, this is the first time I have seen someone dual wielding fish XD.
"How can someone have no cookies at all?" Lol.
Falcon_Lunch!
07/08/14
GAAAAAH
THE CUTENESS
I CAN'T HANDLE IT
I JUST CAN'T HANDLE IT
Fighter Dee
07/08/14
Am I the only one here who's Cuteness-Proof?
GraciaWarrior
07/09/14
@Fighter Dee: *gasp*YOU THE CUTENESE HEATER?!*Prepare the gun*
plasma_knight303
07/10/14
@Fighter Dee: BURN THE HATER *prepares flamethrower*
Recharging the Batteries - Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
BSX's use of the different text fonts does make it easier to tell which characters are which, I must admit. Having Kaxo and Korby standing side-by-side can be a bit confusing, and I'm not even colorblind like BSX is.
Original Author's Comment:
07/08/14
At least it wasn't just a bucket this time.
Mmm... kirby-chair.
At least it wasn't just a bucket this time.
Mmm... kirby-chair.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Koopario
07/09/14
Yikes. That's a bit problematic for the ninja problem.
Also kirbies are very puffy.
Also:
FIRST POST!!!!!11!!
NGamerS31
07/09/14
@BattleStarX: another author you say? NYA HA HA HA HA! NYA HA HA! HAIL NGAMER!
http://spritebox2.smackjeeves.com/comics/1980750/me/ did I mention the germen accent?
Luigi_96
07/09/14
I wanna sit on a Kirby...
Sapar
07/09/14
Y'know, technically Sapar is MY author character, or at least my equivalent of one...
BattleStarX
07/09/14
@Sapar: And he resorted to sugary trickery rather than a straight-up fight.
Sapar
07/09/14
@BattleStarX: Which would of COURSE work on Sapar.
I still think it would've been cool to see me eat the cake.
MecanicalCH
07/09/14
@Sapar: or the cake eating itself!
8bithuman
07/09/14
Wait, is Sapar like dead or just alive inside Etam?
BattleStarX
07/09/14
@8bithuman: Don't worry, we haven't seen the last of good ol' Mr. Sugar Noddy.
07/09/14
Yikes. That's a bit problematic for the ninja problem.
Also kirbies are very puffy.
Also:
FIRST POST!!!!!11!!
NGamerS31
07/09/14
@BattleStarX: another author you say? NYA HA HA HA HA! NYA HA HA! HAIL NGAMER!
http://spritebox2.smackjeeves.com/comics/1980750/me/ did I mention the germen accent?
Luigi_96
07/09/14
I wanna sit on a Kirby...
Sapar
07/09/14
Y'know, technically Sapar is MY author character, or at least my equivalent of one...
BattleStarX
07/09/14
@Sapar: And he resorted to sugary trickery rather than a straight-up fight.
Sapar
07/09/14
@BattleStarX: Which would of COURSE work on Sapar.
I still think it would've been cool to see me eat the cake.
MecanicalCH
07/09/14
@Sapar: or the cake eating itself!
8bithuman
07/09/14
Wait, is Sapar like dead or just alive inside Etam?
BattleStarX
07/09/14
@8bithuman: Don't worry, we haven't seen the last of good ol' Mr. Sugar Noddy.
Lessons Learned - Part 23
Ulti's Notes:
In Kirby's Dream Adventure, Kexas used this edited sprite to depict a sinister, confident smirk. It became her signature smile, often used whenever she was showing off. While using her in the crossover, it was a clearly obvious aspect of her that I would use, at least to anyone who knew anything about Kexas and KDA.
However, I didn't want to overuse it either, because the temptation to do so can be quite strong when trying to use a character you're less familiar with. Being conservative can be key, so I elected to only use her signature smile once, to have it have greater effect. At least, for those who liked the character and knew her from KDA.
For anyone else, aka 99.9% of people reading this here and now? It's just a regular smirk that probably surprises you to have this much annotated attention on it. But hey, that's how you know it was naturally woven in, that it doesn't really stand out unless you know what it represents. Personally, I think more writing could stand to be like that sometimes.
However, I didn't want to overuse it either, because the temptation to do so can be quite strong when trying to use a character you're less familiar with. Being conservative can be key, so I elected to only use her signature smile once, to have it have greater effect. At least, for those who liked the character and knew her from KDA.
For anyone else, aka 99.9% of people reading this here and now? It's just a regular smirk that probably surprises you to have this much annotated attention on it. But hey, that's how you know it was naturally woven in, that it doesn't really stand out unless you know what it represents. Personally, I think more writing could stand to be like that sometimes.
Original Author's Comment:
07/08/14
There we go, THERE'S the smile Kexas is famous for.
Oh hey, check out the new Skrawlers video! It's a bit of a long one, but it's still filled with entertainment!
There we go, THERE'S the smile Kexas is famous for.
Oh hey, check out the new Skrawlers video! It's a bit of a long one, but it's still filled with entertainment!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
07/08/14
That will forever be the best evil smile I will ever come up with.
Blizzard
07/08/14
That smile... menacing
Luigi_96
07/08/14
Blizzard: That's sort of the point. :P
guestuser
07/08/14
Next comic, Saia flying through several walls anime style while Kexas laughs about how powerful she is lol.
44Cinder44
07/08/14
My guess is they were both knocked out.
Just my two cents.
Sapar
07/08/14
@??: That, or the parasol just shatters like glass.
MecanicalCH
07/08/14
my bet is Saia will end breaking every bone in her body...
guestuser
07/08/14
But Saia's parasol is so powerful...
My bet is Kexas won't be able to break the parasol.
I have no idea if that's what will happen, though...
GraciaWarrior
07/09/14
*The bells ringing*Ding ding*
Saia Vs Kexas!
*have soda and pop corn*
Koopario
07/09/14
Parasol can be a formidable ability.
But then again this is Kexas so my money's on her. Or at least I think it's a her.
Prob...probably
Nekotive
07/10/14
I actually think Saia may be able to hold her own in this fight. She'll still probably lose, though. This IS Kexas we're talking about.
07/08/14
That will forever be the best evil smile I will ever come up with.
Blizzard
07/08/14
That smile... menacing
Luigi_96
07/08/14
Blizzard: That's sort of the point. :P
guestuser
07/08/14
Next comic, Saia flying through several walls anime style while Kexas laughs about how powerful she is lol.
44Cinder44
07/08/14
My guess is they were both knocked out.
Just my two cents.
Sapar
07/08/14
@??: That, or the parasol just shatters like glass.
MecanicalCH
07/08/14
my bet is Saia will end breaking every bone in her body...
guestuser
07/08/14
But Saia's parasol is so powerful...
My bet is Kexas won't be able to break the parasol.
I have no idea if that's what will happen, though...
GraciaWarrior
07/09/14
*The bells ringing*Ding ding*
Saia Vs Kexas!
*have soda and pop corn*
Koopario
07/09/14
Parasol can be a formidable ability.
But then again this is Kexas so my money's on her. Or at least I think it's a her.
Prob...probably
Nekotive
07/10/14
I actually think Saia may be able to hold her own in this fight. She'll still probably lose, though. This IS Kexas we're talking about.
Recharging the Batteries - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
I'm not ENTIRELY sure what the deal is with the next few KDA pages, but it seems as though BSX was going through a visual rework and having to iron out kinks of a new program or new update of some kind. Mainly, the text bubbles wind up being quite different for a few pages.
The eventual resulting text bubbles ARE a definite improvement, mainly because the extended tails allow them to be placed around panels better and not feel quite as cramped or taking up important room in a panel, so it's a win for clarity. It just means that for a few pages, the speech bubbles go through a few iterations.
Anyways, Magic Kirby is an ability only seen in Kirby & The Amazing Mirror and Kirby Squeak Squad, neither of which shares the same art style as Kirby Super Star Ultra. You saw this with Ignis Unis in Jetting Across the Ice, where the character was just smaller. BSX decided that they wanted to use Magic as one of Kirby's many powers he could tap into in KDA, and just decided to shrug off the fact that Kirby would shrink every time he used it.
The eventual resulting text bubbles ARE a definite improvement, mainly because the extended tails allow them to be placed around panels better and not feel quite as cramped or taking up important room in a panel, so it's a win for clarity. It just means that for a few pages, the speech bubbles go through a few iterations.
Anyways, Magic Kirby is an ability only seen in Kirby & The Amazing Mirror and Kirby Squeak Squad, neither of which shares the same art style as Kirby Super Star Ultra. You saw this with Ignis Unis in Jetting Across the Ice, where the character was just smaller. BSX decided that they wanted to use Magic as one of Kirby's many powers he could tap into in KDA, and just decided to shrug off the fact that Kirby would shrink every time he used it.
Original Author's Comment:
07/09/14
Nothing like issuing a harsh scolding to get your point across.
...Those chat-tails took way to long to make.
Don't you just hate it when the furniture gets feisty?
Nothing like issuing a harsh scolding to get your point across.
...Those chat-tails took way to long to make.
Don't you just hate it when the furniture gets feisty?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Christal shard64
07/10/14
Eeek,the little Kirby is cute \(^v^)/
Luigi_96
07/10/14
Of course it'll work, this is Kirby.
Also, Redtro, you need to be a more cooperative couch. I'mma need to teach you a lesson when you come back to me... :T
And I like the not-actually-new style of speech bubbles.
44Cinder44
07/10/14
Smart Caiya is great.
Koopario
07/10/14
@Luigi_96: Is it wrong that I'm actually rooting for Redtro now?
plasma_knight303
07/10/14
@BattleStarX:
Bad couch, BAD!
No feisty-ness!
No bacon for you, mister! *gives bacon anyway*
Fighter Dee
07/10/14
@Koopario: No, Etam is a jerk.
8bithuman
07/10/14
Retro, you should never make Etam mad. Did you see what he did to the last guy?
Mimistarlish
07/11/14
This remind me about Random Kirby
07/10/14
Eeek,the little Kirby is cute \(^v^)/
Luigi_96
07/10/14
Of course it'll work, this is Kirby.
Also, Redtro, you need to be a more cooperative couch. I'mma need to teach you a lesson when you come back to me... :T
And I like the not-actually-new style of speech bubbles.
44Cinder44
07/10/14
Smart Caiya is great.
Koopario
07/10/14
@Luigi_96: Is it wrong that I'm actually rooting for Redtro now?
plasma_knight303
07/10/14
@BattleStarX:
Bad couch, BAD!
No feisty-ness!
No bacon for you, mister! *gives bacon anyway*
Fighter Dee
07/10/14
@Koopario: No, Etam is a jerk.
8bithuman
07/10/14
Retro, you should never make Etam mad. Did you see what he did to the last guy?
Mimistarlish
07/11/14
This remind me about Random Kirby
Recharging the Batteries - Part 5
Original Author's Comment:
07/10/14
A day of changing things up a bit with the text. Everything was done in Photoshop this time, rather than Paint, which I normally use for the text.
I don't like it, took too long. Will try something potentially MUCH faster but still good looking tomorrow.
The problem with cameos... how much knowledge of the outside world should they have?
A day of changing things up a bit with the text. Everything was done in Photoshop this time, rather than Paint, which I normally use for the text.
I don't like it, took too long. Will try something potentially MUCH faster but still good looking tomorrow.
The problem with cameos... how much knowledge of the outside world should they have?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
07/11/14
The Kirby's can have Tablet?
Koopario
07/11/14
I'm still rooting for Redtro. Can't he move his arms?
plasma_knight303
07/11/14
*else
Luigi_96
07/11/14
@BattleStarX: Small detail I neglected when sending the cameo request: Redtro can use the Force.
You don't have to implement that if you don't want to though.
MecanicalCH
07/11/14
@Luigi_96: Redtro may the force of Muffins be with you! >:D
Omega Kirby
07/11/14
Join the dark side Blu-Ray! The muffins will never beat the pancakes!
8bithuman
07/11/14
I never knew that Kirbys stored weight.
MecanicalCH
07/11/14
@Omega Kirby: KILL THE INFIDEL!!! *shoots several times!!!*
07/11/14
The Kirby's can have Tablet?
Koopario
07/11/14
I'm still rooting for Redtro. Can't he move his arms?
plasma_knight303
07/11/14
*else
Luigi_96
07/11/14
@BattleStarX: Small detail I neglected when sending the cameo request: Redtro can use the Force.
You don't have to implement that if you don't want to though.
MecanicalCH
07/11/14
@Luigi_96: Redtro may the force of Muffins be with you! >:D
Omega Kirby
07/11/14
Join the dark side Blu-Ray! The muffins will never beat the pancakes!
8bithuman
07/11/14
I never knew that Kirbys stored weight.
MecanicalCH
07/11/14
@Omega Kirby: KILL THE INFIDEL!!! *shoots several times!!!*
Lessons Learned - Part 24
Ulti's Notes:
"Being punched into the future" was a gag from BSX, where I believe it was something that Kexas at the very least threatened to do to some of her subordinates in the Arena. She may have actually done it, too? It's been quite a while. Regardless, it's a reference, not just something completely random for Kexas to have said.
Original Author's Comment:
07/10/14
Saia might have just lost her edge in this battle.
Saia might have just lost her edge in this battle.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
07/10/14
Saia never HAD an edge.
Redkirby
07/10/14
Kexas + Parasol = Oh no
Luigi_96
07/10/14
Oh, you do NOT take Saia's parasol.
...I'm not sure why, but dangit, you DON'T.
Fighter Dee
07/10/14
WHAT THAT PARASOL IS MADE OF?
MecanicalCH
07/10/14
Fighter Dee: its made with Dee´s souls!
BattleStarX
07/10/14
Watching my favorite copy power stand up to the might that is Kexas just makes me feel all giddy.
MecanicalCH
07/10/14
BattleStarX: Parasol is your favorite ability?!
8bithuman
07/10/14
Well, I guess we should all evacuate the comic now.
plasma_knight303
07/10/14
BattleStarX: Parasol best ability.
FEAR ME MORTALS
I SHALL KILL YOU WITH AN UMBRELLA
guestuser
07/10/14
Redkirby: I must agree. I am very frightened now.
guestuser
07/11/14
Warning!warning!warning. Kexas have Saia parasol!
Koopario
07/11/14
AAAAAAAPARASOLKEXASNOOOOOOOOOOWE'REDOOOOOOOOMEDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
(If the Parasol is made of Dee souls wouldn't it just be easier to break? I mean, Waddle Dees.)
Omega Kirby
07/11/14
Shadik will always remain my hero.
guestuser
07/11/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Warning! Challenger Approaching! (smashbros.com and video will be up in 2:17:36:35.)
07/10/14
Saia never HAD an edge.
Redkirby
07/10/14
Kexas + Parasol = Oh no
Luigi_96
07/10/14
Oh, you do NOT take Saia's parasol.
...I'm not sure why, but dangit, you DON'T.
Fighter Dee
07/10/14
WHAT THAT PARASOL IS MADE OF?
MecanicalCH
07/10/14
Fighter Dee: its made with Dee´s souls!
BattleStarX
07/10/14
Watching my favorite copy power stand up to the might that is Kexas just makes me feel all giddy.
MecanicalCH
07/10/14
BattleStarX: Parasol is your favorite ability?!
8bithuman
07/10/14
Well, I guess we should all evacuate the comic now.
plasma_knight303
07/10/14
BattleStarX: Parasol best ability.
FEAR ME MORTALS
I SHALL KILL YOU WITH AN UMBRELLA
guestuser
07/10/14
Redkirby: I must agree. I am very frightened now.
guestuser
07/11/14
Warning!warning!warning. Kexas have Saia parasol!
Koopario
07/11/14
AAAAAAAPARASOLKEXASNOOOOOOOOOOWE'REDOOOOOOOOMEDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
(If the Parasol is made of Dee souls wouldn't it just be easier to break? I mean, Waddle Dees.)
Omega Kirby
07/11/14
Shadik will always remain my hero.
guestuser
07/11/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Warning! Challenger Approaching! (smashbros.com and video will be up in 2:17:36:35.)
Recharging the Batteries - Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
This is the most notable of BSX's speech bubble experimentation, mainly because the jagged, lightning-bolt bubble tails give off an impression that every character is shouting. Visual clarity and shorthand is important, and comics have long since used spikier speech bubbles and tails to represent raised voices or shouts! So it's fascinating to see how the unintended use of something can wind up creating an entirely different impression, simply because of how brains have been conditioned to read it.
Certainly, there's nothing objectively saying spikier bubbles or speech tails should indicate raised voice... similar to how TYPING IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS DOESN'T NECESSARILY HAVE TO INDICATE SHOUTING, ESPECIALLY SINCE A LOT OF PROFESSIONAL COMICS TEND TO BE WRITTEN IN ALL UPPER-CASE FOR EASIER ACCESSIBILITY. And yet! Prior conditioning still has an impact on expectations and mental understandings! That's your comic creation lesson for the day.
Anyway, this is the only page where these spiky tails appear. BSX fixes it by the next page.
Certainly, there's nothing objectively saying spikier bubbles or speech tails should indicate raised voice... similar to how TYPING IN ALL CAPITAL LETTERS DOESN'T NECESSARILY HAVE TO INDICATE SHOUTING, ESPECIALLY SINCE A LOT OF PROFESSIONAL COMICS TEND TO BE WRITTEN IN ALL UPPER-CASE FOR EASIER ACCESSIBILITY. And yet! Prior conditioning still has an impact on expectations and mental understandings! That's your comic creation lesson for the day.
Anyway, this is the only page where these spiky tails appear. BSX fixes it by the next page.
Original Author's Comment:
07/11/14
Hrm... not sure this turned out much better... but at least it was a LOT faster. Why can't their be a simple triangle shape tool?
Hrm... not sure this turned out much better... but at least it was a LOT faster. Why can't their be a simple triangle shape tool?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
07/12/14
Just take the one in MS Paint and rotate it.
8bithuman
07/12/14
The force is stronger than a million pancakes???
HatKirby
07/12/14
@BattleStarX:
Apparently you didn't get my email, or I didn't send it correctly, or something. Anyway, here goes:
My cameo is Vim. He's a Halcandran artificial intelligence (Halcandran as in Halcandra from KRtDL).
I have no sprites for him, but I've got an idea for a sprite you could (theoretically) easily make: one of the glowing sphere things from the Normal Beam (the move that dismisses Helpers) with the crosshairs thing that shows up when you scan an enemy with Copy on top of it. The sphere part changes color to show emotion.
He's easily confused, but doesn't easily get angry. When he does, however, he shoots lasers.
Also, he's a hologram, which means he can pass through solid objects and teleport.
Please reply via email if you need any clarification.
Thanks very much again!
(Reproduced from sent email, approximately)
Luigi_96
07/12/14
I'm not a fan of these tails. Why don't you just use Photoshop and have seperate layers for the speech bubbles?
07/12/14
Just take the one in MS Paint and rotate it.
8bithuman
07/12/14
The force is stronger than a million pancakes???
HatKirby
07/12/14
@BattleStarX:
Apparently you didn't get my email, or I didn't send it correctly, or something. Anyway, here goes:
My cameo is Vim. He's a Halcandran artificial intelligence (Halcandran as in Halcandra from KRtDL).
I have no sprites for him, but I've got an idea for a sprite you could (theoretically) easily make: one of the glowing sphere things from the Normal Beam (the move that dismisses Helpers) with the crosshairs thing that shows up when you scan an enemy with Copy on top of it. The sphere part changes color to show emotion.
He's easily confused, but doesn't easily get angry. When he does, however, he shoots lasers.
Also, he's a hologram, which means he can pass through solid objects and teleport.
Please reply via email if you need any clarification.
Thanks very much again!
(Reproduced from sent email, approximately)
Luigi_96
07/12/14
I'm not a fan of these tails. Why don't you just use Photoshop and have seperate layers for the speech bubbles?
Recharging the Batteries - Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
Caiya's font mistakenly used Stoobs instead of Tahoma in the last panel, likely due to BSX still getting used to new speech bubble stuff.
Original Author's Comment:
07/12/14
Turns out there IS a tool I can make simple triangles with on photoshop. SO much easier, simpler and neater.
Maybe now UY will stop nagging me about it.
Sensing a pattern?
Turns out there IS a tool I can make simple triangles with on photoshop. SO much easier, simpler and neater.
Maybe now UY will stop nagging me about it.
Sensing a pattern?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
07/13/14
Keeby is his usual grumpy self.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/13/14
I nag, only because I love.
And I must say, this style of text bubbles definitely looks muuuuuch better.
Luigi_96
07/13/14
Ahh beautiful new text bubbles. :D
Aaaaand Redtro's a cookie.
8bithuman
07/13/14
Sapar is going to have company.
Omega Kirby
07/13/14
Why must all the cool characters be turned into food?
Sapar
07/13/14
@Omega Kirby: I get hungry too, y'know...
Oh, and Caiya seems to have lost her accent.
Dutchguy
07/14/14
So for my birthday Etam turns a kirby into a cookie eh?
07/13/14
Keeby is his usual grumpy self.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/13/14
I nag, only because I love.
And I must say, this style of text bubbles definitely looks muuuuuch better.
Luigi_96
07/13/14
Ahh beautiful new text bubbles. :D
Aaaaand Redtro's a cookie.
8bithuman
07/13/14
Sapar is going to have company.
Omega Kirby
07/13/14
Why must all the cool characters be turned into food?
Sapar
07/13/14
@Omega Kirby: I get hungry too, y'know...
Oh, and Caiya seems to have lost her accent.
Dutchguy
07/14/14
So for my birthday Etam turns a kirby into a cookie eh?
Lessons Learned - Part 25
Ulti's Notes:
Like a lot of other characters in KDA, Kexas is able to tap into a copy ability when she so desires. Except unlike most other characters, the ability SHE has access to is the Crash power, which in the games is a rare screen-nuke power that instantly kills any lesser enemy and deals massive explosive energy to bosses.
Her tapping into it here was more emotionally charged than she normally gets, since this was the start of the pages where I aimed to explore Kexas's character a bit deeper. Saia has no idea of Kexas's background, like most current readers, so it's easy to assume she's just a dick. However, Kexas basically has dealt with privilege all her life from her skills and life position.
I thought it was painfully fascinating to consider the implications that Kexas just truly couldn't be taught to be a better person, because nobody was brave enough to tell her 'no', but this also led to her leading a very stagnant and unfulfilling life. She had been constantly depicted as enjoying being a fighter, but to date, the only character willing to even TRY to befriend her was Karby, the gray silent Kirby.
So to me, I couldn't help but consider Kexas as painfully lonely... but without even quite realizing that she WAS lonely. My goal here with the character was to simply put her in a position where she could actually realize that maybe her life isn't all roses, and that being feared might not be the respect she actually wants from people. And to do that, I utilized Saia's very caring and discerning nature to bring it out of her for the first time.
Using the opportunity to also display Saia as a more competent fighter than one might expect was a nice bonus to everything, too. One might assume that Kexas as a seasoned gladiator would wipe the floor with Saia, but her defensive fighting style actually showed her as much more capable, which I enjoyed course-correcting for Saia. She hadn't always been shown off as the most competent at times, which wasn't what I wanted.
Her tapping into it here was more emotionally charged than she normally gets, since this was the start of the pages where I aimed to explore Kexas's character a bit deeper. Saia has no idea of Kexas's background, like most current readers, so it's easy to assume she's just a dick. However, Kexas basically has dealt with privilege all her life from her skills and life position.
I thought it was painfully fascinating to consider the implications that Kexas just truly couldn't be taught to be a better person, because nobody was brave enough to tell her 'no', but this also led to her leading a very stagnant and unfulfilling life. She had been constantly depicted as enjoying being a fighter, but to date, the only character willing to even TRY to befriend her was Karby, the gray silent Kirby.
So to me, I couldn't help but consider Kexas as painfully lonely... but without even quite realizing that she WAS lonely. My goal here with the character was to simply put her in a position where she could actually realize that maybe her life isn't all roses, and that being feared might not be the respect she actually wants from people. And to do that, I utilized Saia's very caring and discerning nature to bring it out of her for the first time.
Using the opportunity to also display Saia as a more competent fighter than one might expect was a nice bonus to everything, too. One might assume that Kexas as a seasoned gladiator would wipe the floor with Saia, but her defensive fighting style actually showed her as much more capable, which I enjoyed course-correcting for Saia. She hadn't always been shown off as the most competent at times, which wasn't what I wanted.
Original Author's Comment:
07/12/14
When it comes to the characters that I use, even when I'm only borrowing them, I like to explore them and who they are in a manner that some people may not be used to seeing, or even like very much.
When it comes to the characters that I use, even when I'm only borrowing them, I like to explore them and who they are in a manner that some people may not be used to seeing, or even like very much.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Redkirby
07/12/14
Looks like the base is gonna need remodeling.
BattleStarX
07/12/14
"Oh dear" may be a bit of an understatement.
guestuser
07/12/14
BattleStarX: this won't end well
EDIT: Saia: NO GOD NO... PLEASE NO... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Luigi_96
07/12/14
... Wow.
MecanicalCH
07/13/14
*hidden in a cardboard box...*
8bithuman
07/13/14
I warned you all to evacuate. Now it's too late.
plasma_knight303
07/13/14
And then Saia's Parasol protects her from the attack.
guestuser
07/13/14
Oh no!SAIA!
guestuser
07/13/14
OW!MY EYE!
Extremmefan
07/13/14
Green Kirby the Leaft: I'm more with Saia than Kexas because, even if he lived in the Arena all his life, he doesn't need to be a bully to the others.
Nekotive
07/13/14
Holy !#@$!$#&@@$#@&%&#@%%&*%#&@&%&@%$*!&$&*%@&&*@*$&@#*&$*@&*@ on a sandwich
Sapar
07/13/14
Extremmefan: I would agree with you, except for one thing.
Kexas is a girl.
guestuser
07/14/14
Redkirby: Remodeling? They're gonna need a whole new base after this. Quite possibly a new Dreamland.
guestuser
07/14/14
0h cr4p. 7h15 15 n07 g01ng 70 3nd w3ll.
44Cinder44
07/16/14
@Guest: Mituna Captor, is that yo-
Oh.
Wrong quirk.
Extremmefan
07/24/14
Sapar: Being a girl or a boy doesn't matter, my argument is still justified...
Green Kirby the Leaft: thanks...
Extremmefan
07/24/14
MecanicalCH: so that's what it was!
07/12/14
Looks like the base is gonna need remodeling.
BattleStarX
07/12/14
"Oh dear" may be a bit of an understatement.
guestuser
07/12/14
BattleStarX: this won't end well
EDIT: Saia: NO GOD NO... PLEASE NO... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Luigi_96
07/12/14
... Wow.
MecanicalCH
07/13/14
*hidden in a cardboard box...*
8bithuman
07/13/14
I warned you all to evacuate. Now it's too late.
plasma_knight303
07/13/14
And then Saia's Parasol protects her from the attack.
guestuser
07/13/14
Oh no!SAIA!
guestuser
07/13/14
OW!MY EYE!
Extremmefan
07/13/14
Green Kirby the Leaft: I'm more with Saia than Kexas because, even if he lived in the Arena all his life, he doesn't need to be a bully to the others.
Nekotive
07/13/14
Holy !#@$!$#&@@$#@&%&#@%%&*%#&@&%&@%$*!&$&*%@&&*@*$&@#*&$*@&*@ on a sandwich
Sapar
07/13/14
Extremmefan: I would agree with you, except for one thing.
Kexas is a girl.
guestuser
07/14/14
Redkirby: Remodeling? They're gonna need a whole new base after this. Quite possibly a new Dreamland.
guestuser
07/14/14
0h cr4p. 7h15 15 n07 g01ng 70 3nd w3ll.
44Cinder44
07/16/14
@Guest: Mituna Captor, is that yo-
Oh.
Wrong quirk.
Extremmefan
07/24/14
Sapar: Being a girl or a boy doesn't matter, my argument is still justified...
Green Kirby the Leaft: thanks...
Extremmefan
07/24/14
MecanicalCH: so that's what it was!
Recharging the Batteries - Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
Kooby accidentally uses Tahoma in the last panel when he should've used Stoobs.
Admittedly, I don't really know what Kooby and the watermelon-colored Kirby are talking about here. Apparently, the Waddle Dee running the Arena that Kexas is from, known as Arena-Dee, beat somebody up? But I don't know who, so... your guess is as good as mine.
Admittedly, I don't really know what Kooby and the watermelon-colored Kirby are talking about here. Apparently, the Waddle Dee running the Arena that Kexas is from, known as Arena-Dee, beat somebody up? But I don't know who, so... your guess is as good as mine.
Original Author's Comment:
07/13/14
Nice reminder Kopoy.
Today was neat, clean and easy. I should really spend a day or two and toy around with Photoshop some more, see what else I happen to find.
Jedi Kirbies have a rather plain and boring flavor.
Nice reminder Kopoy.
Today was neat, clean and easy. I should really spend a day or two and toy around with Photoshop some more, see what else I happen to find.
Jedi Kirbies have a rather plain and boring flavor.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
GraciaWarrior
07/14/14
Stop eating anyone Etam!>:O
NGamerS31
07/14/14
*checks character page* kruzy's text in the last panel...
MecanicalCH
07/14/14
now Redtro! >:(
Etam...why why!?
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/14/14
Is it my turn in teh white spaic
Luigi_96
07/14/14
Redtro is not spicy. D:
8bithuman
07/14/14
Etam, you are going to get fat. Do we have to call the max flexer?
07/14/14
Stop eating anyone Etam!>:O
NGamerS31
07/14/14
*checks character page* kruzy's text in the last panel...
MecanicalCH
07/14/14
now Redtro! >:(
Etam...why why!?
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/14/14
Is it my turn in teh white spaic
Luigi_96
07/14/14
Redtro is not spicy. D:
8bithuman
07/14/14
Etam, you are going to get fat. Do we have to call the max flexer?
Recharging the Batteries - Part 9
Ulti's Notes:
Kaxo would almost certainly win in a fight against Ku-ie, but luckily he has slightly better manners than that.
Original Author's Comment:
07/14/14
Those two get along so well.
It's amazing how much faster a comic gets made when you set just a few custom hotkeys.
Though I think I'll have to up the font to 13. It was 10 when I was using paint, and it's 12 now. Weird, ne?
You may've made a plain cookie, Redtro, but at least you shall be fully consumed.
Those two get along so well.
It's amazing how much faster a comic gets made when you set just a few custom hotkeys.
Though I think I'll have to up the font to 13. It was 10 when I was using paint, and it's 12 now. Weird, ne?
You may've made a plain cookie, Redtro, but at least you shall be fully consumed.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Air Man1 21
07/15/14
Wonder how long this will last...
Mimistarlish
07/15/14
Who's that guy? Caiya?
ebuko
07/15/14
@Mimistarlish: Caiya has ice stored ability, not fighter / throw
Luigi_96
07/15/14
Hey, it's SkyyKirby44!
8bithuman
07/15/14
Someone should make a horror movie about Etam eating random authors.
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/15/14
When suddenly Skyy
Yes that's his name
I think
I actually don't know
SkyyKirby44
07/15/14
@Blue Kirby the l33t: It is.
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/16/14
@SkyyKirby44: Oh good 'cause I was confused on wether or not his name was intentional or a misspelling that you kept.
HatKirby
07/17/14
@BattleStarX:
Hi! Really sorry if I sound somewhat pushy, but I just sort of want a reply concerning the cameo thing. I know you're busy with other people who've made it easier and your whole mysterious job thing, so thanks if you read and reply to this.
BattleStarX
07/17/14
@HatKirby: I prefer keeping a cameo a secret, to make it more fun.
I also somewhat prefer being given the sprites. The quips are meant to be made quick and fast for the bizarre lols.
07/15/14
Wonder how long this will last...
Mimistarlish
07/15/14
Who's that guy? Caiya?
ebuko
07/15/14
@Mimistarlish: Caiya has ice stored ability, not fighter / throw
Luigi_96
07/15/14
Hey, it's SkyyKirby44!
8bithuman
07/15/14
Someone should make a horror movie about Etam eating random authors.
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/15/14
When suddenly Skyy
Yes that's his name
I think
I actually don't know
SkyyKirby44
07/15/14
@Blue Kirby the l33t: It is.
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/16/14
@SkyyKirby44: Oh good 'cause I was confused on wether or not his name was intentional or a misspelling that you kept.
HatKirby
07/17/14
@BattleStarX:
Hi! Really sorry if I sound somewhat pushy, but I just sort of want a reply concerning the cameo thing. I know you're busy with other people who've made it easier and your whole mysterious job thing, so thanks if you read and reply to this.
BattleStarX
07/17/14
@HatKirby: I prefer keeping a cameo a secret, to make it more fun.
I also somewhat prefer being given the sprites. The quips are meant to be made quick and fast for the bizarre lols.
Lessons Learned - Part 26
Ulti's Notes:
Morpho Knight is having a weird day.
(That's a joke about the butterfly for all you non-Kirby fans reading this. A later Kirby game from after the comic concluded would retcon the red butterfly into a magical death knight.)
(That's a joke about the butterfly for all you non-Kirby fans reading this. A later Kirby game from after the comic concluded would retcon the red butterfly into a magical death knight.)
Original Author's Comment:
07/14/14
Meanwhile...
Meanwhile...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
07/14/14
That turned out infinitely better than I thought it would. Which took something.
Luigi_96
07/14/14
*dies laughing*
guestuser
07/14/14
Ultimate Yoshi: CAPTAIN FACLON DA BEST!
But in all seriousness, C'MON, we all knew CF would get into Smash 4!
guestuser
07/15/14
Lol,the butterfly ^^
8bithuman
07/15/14
SQUISHIEEEEEES!!!!
guestuser
07/15/14
Hey ulti,nice avatar.
Anyway.FALCON PUNCH!!*punch to ulti face and He fainted*OOps,I too hard punch Him O^O'*Runs away*
guestuser
07/15/14
Hello, That one guy here with another episode of Nitpicking! In Meet The KAS (Part 7 I believe), while he's explaining Caiya, Kirby says she has schizophrenia, with Ryka saying "That's multiple personality disorder, right?" or something among those lines. To tell the truth, multi-personality disorder and schizophrenia are an entirely different thing. As I said, i'm a pr!ck, so I decided to be all like "OMFG U DID THIS MISTAKE AAAAH". Please don't think I dislike the comic just because of that, though, as I simply wanted to point that out.
guestuser
07/15/14
@NintendoFan64: Darn right!
guestuser
07/15/14
Jarkes: OH COME ON! HOW DID I MISSPELL THAT! Ugh, thanks for pointing that out.
Also, I know he's one of the original twelve, that's kinda the point!
@Thunderbolt 27: XD
Koopario
07/16/14
BattleStarX: I don't remember which one that is. But the sheer randomness...
guestuser
07/17/14
OMG!449 FANS!
guestuser
07/17/14
Ulti: OMG!
449 to 500 :D
GraciaWarrior
07/17/14
Where part Karby and Shadik?(Crap, My English is bad DX)
07/14/14
That turned out infinitely better than I thought it would. Which took something.
Luigi_96
07/14/14
*dies laughing*
guestuser
07/14/14
Ultimate Yoshi: CAPTAIN FACLON DA BEST!
But in all seriousness, C'MON, we all knew CF would get into Smash 4!
guestuser
07/15/14
Lol,the butterfly ^^
8bithuman
07/15/14
SQUISHIEEEEEES!!!!
guestuser
07/15/14
Hey ulti,nice avatar.
Anyway.FALCON PUNCH!!*punch to ulti face and He fainted*OOps,I too hard punch Him O^O'*Runs away*
guestuser
07/15/14
Hello, That one guy here with another episode of Nitpicking! In Meet The KAS (Part 7 I believe), while he's explaining Caiya, Kirby says she has schizophrenia, with Ryka saying "That's multiple personality disorder, right?" or something among those lines. To tell the truth, multi-personality disorder and schizophrenia are an entirely different thing. As I said, i'm a pr!ck, so I decided to be all like "OMFG U DID THIS MISTAKE AAAAH". Please don't think I dislike the comic just because of that, though, as I simply wanted to point that out.
guestuser
07/15/14
@NintendoFan64: Darn right!
guestuser
07/15/14
Jarkes: OH COME ON! HOW DID I MISSPELL THAT! Ugh, thanks for pointing that out.
Also, I know he's one of the original twelve, that's kinda the point!
@Thunderbolt 27: XD
Koopario
07/16/14
BattleStarX: I don't remember which one that is. But the sheer randomness...
guestuser
07/17/14
OMG!449 FANS!
guestuser
07/17/14
Ulti: OMG!
449 to 500 :D
GraciaWarrior
07/17/14
Where part Karby and Shadik?(Crap, My English is bad DX)
Recharging the Batteries - Part 10
Ulti's Notes:
I think by this point, BSX got the hang of their new text bubbles, which is good because font issues would've been highly confusing with Keito and Keeby both speaking. Too much yellow might've caused a bit of an issue otherwise.
Original Author's Comment:
07/15/14
Never question what Kaaby can do. Safer on your brain.
By the way, I did end up amping the font to 13. Looks much better.
I love that little tuft of hair.
Never question what Kaaby can do. Safer on your brain.
By the way, I did end up amping the font to 13. Looks much better.
I love that little tuft of hair.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
ebuko
07/16/14
@BattleStarX: WHO THE HECK IS THAT?
Koopario
07/16/14
All kirbies in this comic have abilities you may not want to think about too hard, excluding Adventure Squad members that are not Shat'l.
And maybe Shadik but I'm still not entirely sure he's ever appeared here.
Luigi_96
07/16/14
@ebuko: It's SkyyKirby44.
MecanicalCH
07/16/14
@BattleStarX: Etam Helpful!? XD
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/16/14
@BattleStarX: My friend Melody-Pika made the little hair tuft for him. She's good at that sort of thing.
07/16/14
@BattleStarX: WHO THE HECK IS THAT?
Koopario
07/16/14
All kirbies in this comic have abilities you may not want to think about too hard, excluding Adventure Squad members that are not Shat'l.
And maybe Shadik but I'm still not entirely sure he's ever appeared here.
Luigi_96
07/16/14
@ebuko: It's SkyyKirby44.
MecanicalCH
07/16/14
@BattleStarX: Etam Helpful!? XD
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/16/14
@BattleStarX: My friend Melody-Pika made the little hair tuft for him. She's good at that sort of thing.
Recharging the Batteries - Part 11
Ulti's Notes:
No, I don't really know either. As mentioned earlier, a lot of characters would just show up in BSX's side of the crossover very briefly, and not really have much involvement or impact on things. BSX just might not have known what quite to do with Shat'l, while still wanting him to have things going on around him.
Original Author's Comment:
07/16/14
Kible and Shat'l make a good combo.
Fish slap in three... two... one...
Kible and Shat'l make a good combo.
Fish slap in three... two... one...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
07/17/14
Etam!please don't do anything stupid!
Kimmal?
Luigi_96
07/17/14
Oh hi there Kimmal. :D
MecanicalCH
07/17/14
@BattleStarX: no the fish! no the fish!!! T.T
Ultimate Yoshi
07/17/14
It DOES, however, normally rain Kirbies outside of the PSSS base. Kuzzie's looking at trying to get that fixed. Kruzy swears he has nothing to do with it.
8bithuman
07/17/14
FEAR THE FISH!!!!!!!!
Koopario
07/18/14
Etam you're being too predictable.
I suggest you use a different form of COMEDIC COMBAT.
07/17/14
Etam!please don't do anything stupid!
Kimmal?
Luigi_96
07/17/14
Oh hi there Kimmal. :D
MecanicalCH
07/17/14
@BattleStarX: no the fish! no the fish!!! T.T
Ultimate Yoshi
07/17/14
It DOES, however, normally rain Kirbies outside of the PSSS base. Kuzzie's looking at trying to get that fixed. Kruzy swears he has nothing to do with it.
8bithuman
07/17/14
FEAR THE FISH!!!!!!!!
Koopario
07/18/14
Etam you're being too predictable.
I suggest you use a different form of COMEDIC COMBAT.
Lessons Learned - Part 27
Ulti's Notes:
Karby isn't quite like Shadik, or Gigi19972010's Grace the Bomb Kirby. Karby HAD been shown speaking, very rarely, so for Karby, it was an intentional choice to never speak.
However, it was still rare enough that I wasn't 100% sure this was a good joke to make. So, before finalizing it, I pitched the idea to BSX, who signed off on it with full approval. I'm glad they did, because it's a good joke.
Though, in retrospect, I'm not entirely sure on the Waddle Doo being so confused. It gives me a sort of Marvel-esque vibe of acknowledging the joke a bit too much? Whereas if it was just Bandy being super nonchalant about it, I think it might've been funnier.
However, it was still rare enough that I wasn't 100% sure this was a good joke to make. So, before finalizing it, I pitched the idea to BSX, who signed off on it with full approval. I'm glad they did, because it's a good joke.
Though, in retrospect, I'm not entirely sure on the Waddle Doo being so confused. It gives me a sort of Marvel-esque vibe of acknowledging the joke a bit too much? Whereas if it was just Bandy being super nonchalant about it, I think it might've been funnier.
Original Author's Comment:
07/17/14
Whoops, I forgot to update yesterday. Oh well.
I've started up a new Let's Play of yet another horrible game! This time, I'm taking on Spyro: Enter The Dragonfly. Come enjoy my torturous experience by going to the LP playlist right here!
Whoops, I forgot to update yesterday. Oh well.
I've started up a new Let's Play of yet another horrible game! This time, I'm taking on Spyro: Enter The Dragonfly. Come enjoy my torturous experience by going to the LP playlist right here!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Quirby64_:D
07/17/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I have'haven't looked at many of your LPs, really, but do you have one on a racing game? :P
(And also knocking kirbies unconcious is totally brolliant)
Luigi_96
07/17/14
Quirby64_:D: He did Kirby Air Ride recently.
@The Comic: That was awesome. xD
Sapar
07/17/14
Though I doubt you'd do it, as Super Meat Boy would probably set a new record for editing, particularly post-commentary.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/17/14
Sapar: Honestly, I've legitimately thought about it, but I don't want to erase my brothers' file on that game, nor do I think it's worth buying a second time just to do a Let's Play of it. (I also can't just make/use a second save file, the game only allows for one)
Sapar
07/18/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Why not just play through the levels again, without erasing the save file? Assuming he's already completed the game, anyway....
8bithuman
07/18/14
...is anyone surprised by Karby's 2nd sentence?
Nekotive
07/18/14
8bithuman: Very.
Third if you count that deleted one.
guestuser
07/18/14
Shadik and karby back at ya!XD
guestuser
07/18/14
Hey, I was wondering, is Talzo gonna show up sometime soon?
BattleStarX
07/19/14
Green Kirby the Leaft: Karby is indeed the strong silent type like Shadik. Though the difference is, he can actually talk, just chooses not to.
And not counting the now-deleted line, this is actually Karby's third sentence. Though I'm not sure one word counts as much of a sentence.
guestuser
07/20/14
So I just found this comic a few days ago, and just finished reading all of it. All I have to say is keep up the good work, because this comic is awesome.
07/17/14
Ultimate Yoshi: I have'haven't looked at many of your LPs, really, but do you have one on a racing game? :P
(And also knocking kirbies unconcious is totally brolliant)
Luigi_96
07/17/14
Quirby64_:D: He did Kirby Air Ride recently.
@The Comic: That was awesome. xD
Sapar
07/17/14
Though I doubt you'd do it, as Super Meat Boy would probably set a new record for editing, particularly post-commentary.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/17/14
Sapar: Honestly, I've legitimately thought about it, but I don't want to erase my brothers' file on that game, nor do I think it's worth buying a second time just to do a Let's Play of it. (I also can't just make/use a second save file, the game only allows for one)
Sapar
07/18/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Why not just play through the levels again, without erasing the save file? Assuming he's already completed the game, anyway....
8bithuman
07/18/14
...is anyone surprised by Karby's 2nd sentence?
Nekotive
07/18/14
8bithuman: Very.
Third if you count that deleted one.
guestuser
07/18/14
Shadik and karby back at ya!XD
guestuser
07/18/14
Hey, I was wondering, is Talzo gonna show up sometime soon?
BattleStarX
07/19/14
Green Kirby the Leaft: Karby is indeed the strong silent type like Shadik. Though the difference is, he can actually talk, just chooses not to.
And not counting the now-deleted line, this is actually Karby's third sentence. Though I'm not sure one word counts as much of a sentence.
guestuser
07/20/14
So I just found this comic a few days ago, and just finished reading all of it. All I have to say is keep up the good work, because this comic is awesome.
Recharging the Batteries - Part 12
Original Author's Comment:
07/17/14
Raize is learning. Kaxo remains unimpressed.
Some fish would make pretty deadly weapons.
Raize is learning. Kaxo remains unimpressed.
Some fish would make pretty deadly weapons.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
canecacomleite
07/18/14
Kaxo is not amused. And I'm pretty sure a bazooka that shoots fish would be awesome.
Mimistarlish
07/18/14
Raize know that coming XD
Luigi_96
07/18/14
@BattleStarX: Indeed. Swordfish, puffer fish, sharks...
MecanicalCH
07/18/14
@BattleStarX: Why the fish!? T.T that was mean...
plasma_knight303
07/18/14
Don't drink and drive, kids.
07/18/14
Kaxo is not amused. And I'm pretty sure a bazooka that shoots fish would be awesome.
Mimistarlish
07/18/14
Raize know that coming XD
Luigi_96
07/18/14
@BattleStarX: Indeed. Swordfish, puffer fish, sharks...
MecanicalCH
07/18/14
@BattleStarX: Why the fish!? T.T that was mean...
plasma_knight303
07/18/14
Don't drink and drive, kids.
Recharging the Batteries - Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
It feels kinda weird to criticize old pages that weren't made by me, but I can't completely hold my tongue here in terms of how awkward some of these pages by BSX were in retrospect. I really don't see what was gained by having this Kimmal character flop onto the floor, glare at everybody silently, and then leave.
Original Author's Comment:
07/18/14
You don't know the half of it, Shat'l.
Did someone mention a fish bazooka? >:P
So I've been watching the F-Zero anime of late. It's interesting, I'll give it that. A pity it's so short, I'll finish it in no time, unfortunately.
You don't know the half of it, Shat'l.
Did someone mention a fish bazooka? >:P
So I've been watching the F-Zero anime of late. It's interesting, I'll give it that. A pity it's so short, I'll finish it in no time, unfortunately.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
canecacomleite
07/19/14
Oh god...
Luigi_96
07/19/14
And the winner of the "Understatement of the Year" award goes to...
...
...
Shat'l! Come on doooown!
Jarkes
07/19/14
@BattleStarX: Are you watching the Japanese version, or the 4Kids dub?
BattleStarX
07/19/14
@Jarkes: Japanese, since the dub got canceled far to early in its life.
Jarkes
07/19/14
@BattleStarX: Wait, the dub didn't even get through the whole series? Dang... Even the Kirby anime had all 100 episodes dubbed (though with some bizarre reordering, like putting the first two parts of the five-part finale at the halfway point of the series to more easily promote Kirby Air Ride, which admittedly WAS the purpose of those episodes, but still, it made a lot of things in the last three episodes to not make much sense)...
MecanicalCH
07/19/14
@BattleStarX: ummm...what?...a fish bazooka!? don´t point it at me!! O.o
8bithuman
07/19/14
FISHIEEEEEES!!!
07/19/14
Oh god...
Luigi_96
07/19/14
And the winner of the "Understatement of the Year" award goes to...
...
...
Shat'l! Come on doooown!
Jarkes
07/19/14
@BattleStarX: Are you watching the Japanese version, or the 4Kids dub?
BattleStarX
07/19/14
@Jarkes: Japanese, since the dub got canceled far to early in its life.
Jarkes
07/19/14
@BattleStarX: Wait, the dub didn't even get through the whole series? Dang... Even the Kirby anime had all 100 episodes dubbed (though with some bizarre reordering, like putting the first two parts of the five-part finale at the halfway point of the series to more easily promote Kirby Air Ride, which admittedly WAS the purpose of those episodes, but still, it made a lot of things in the last three episodes to not make much sense)...
MecanicalCH
07/19/14
@BattleStarX: ummm...what?...a fish bazooka!? don´t point it at me!! O.o
8bithuman
07/19/14
FISHIEEEEEES!!!
Lessons Learned - Part 28
Ulti's Notes:
This honestly wasn't planned at all, but sometimes my completely wild and unrelated ideas have just enough of a sensible throughline that I can seamlessly integrate them and make it appear intentional all along.
One aspect of the crossover I did quite love was how in-sync I had Shadik and Karby. The previous time two silent characters interacted, with Shadik and Grace, they didn't really spend much time together aside from the one silly "silent conversation" page. Here, though, this pairing was able to work together incredibly well, and it was a lot of fun to have them teamed up like this.
One aspect of the crossover I did quite love was how in-sync I had Shadik and Karby. The previous time two silent characters interacted, with Shadik and Grace, they didn't really spend much time together aside from the one silly "silent conversation" page. Here, though, this pairing was able to work together incredibly well, and it was a lot of fun to have them teamed up like this.
Original Author's Comment:
07/21/14
I've got some catching up to do, don't I? Sorry about missing some of the update days, I've either been a bit busy or lacked motivation. I'll just update a few days daily to get back to where I should be.
This comic was a bit rushed, though, hence the much-more-copy-and-paste-feel of the Squishy army, especially in that last panel. I just wanted to get a comic out today so that I didn't have even more work to catch up on.
I've got some catching up to do, don't I? Sorry about missing some of the update days, I've either been a bit busy or lacked motivation. I'll just update a few days daily to get back to where I should be.
This comic was a bit rushed, though, hence the much-more-copy-and-paste-feel of the Squishy army, especially in that last panel. I just wanted to get a comic out today so that I didn't have even more work to catch up on.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
NikNW
07/21/14
The queen of squish has finally been squished upon.
Blizzard
07/21/14
Mmm what kind of dish will they make the Squishy's into, Im hoping for Calamari
Luigi_96
07/21/14
Octopus! :D
8bithuman
07/21/14
Fear the silent ninja monochrome Kirbys.
guestuser
07/21/14
Shadik and Karby would make great agents. It'd be hard to decode their secret communications.
BattleStarX
07/21/14
I love how Karby adds the "Please" as a post-script. At least you remembered how to use manners, Karby, unlike Kexas...
Extremmefan
07/24/14
Karby (miming what he'll say): Are you thinking what I'm thinking?
Shadik (also miming his reply): Of course!
Guest
05/20/16
NOT THE KARBY SQUISH
07/21/14
The queen of squish has finally been squished upon.
Blizzard
07/21/14
Mmm what kind of dish will they make the Squishy's into, Im hoping for Calamari
Luigi_96
07/21/14
Octopus! :D
8bithuman
07/21/14
Fear the silent ninja monochrome Kirbys.
guestuser
07/21/14
Shadik and Karby would make great agents. It'd be hard to decode their secret communications.
BattleStarX
07/21/14
I love how Karby adds the "Please" as a post-script. At least you remembered how to use manners, Karby, unlike Kexas...
Extremmefan
07/24/14
Karby (miming what he'll say): Are you thinking what I'm thinking?
Shadik (also miming his reply): Of course!
Guest
05/20/16
NOT THE KARBY SQUISH
Going Home - Part 1
Ulti's Notes:
Kaxo acting like a regular old Pokémon rival here.
The power Kirby brings out in the last panel is the Water ability, a power formally introduced in Kirby's Return to Dream Land in 2011 on the Wii. Since Super Star Ultra came out before that in 2008, it not only didn't have ANY sprites associated with it (and thus BSX resorted to using fan-made custom sprites for it), but it explained Kaxo's sheer confusion. The KA timeline is only up to 2010's Epic Yarn and 2011's Mass Attack (which released before RtDL in 2011), so he's never seen any of RtDL's new abilities before.
The power Kirby brings out in the last panel is the Water ability, a power formally introduced in Kirby's Return to Dream Land in 2011 on the Wii. Since Super Star Ultra came out before that in 2008, it not only didn't have ANY sprites associated with it (and thus BSX resorted to using fan-made custom sprites for it), but it explained Kaxo's sheer confusion. The KA timeline is only up to 2010's Epic Yarn and 2011's Mass Attack (which released before RtDL in 2011), so he's never seen any of RtDL's new abilities before.
Original Author's Comment:
07/19/14
(Otherwise N/A)
(Otherwise N/A)
Going Home - Part 2
Ulti's Notes:
Much like last time Kaxo was in the KDA universe with his fire powers, he is victim to instantanous dousing. Water beats Fire, after all.
Original Author's Comment:
07/20/14
Yes, I just took a lot of creative license for Water. I have access to so few sprites, I just got to make do with what I can.
Oh it's on now!
Yes, I just took a lot of creative license for Water. I have access to so few sprites, I just got to make do with what I can.
Oh it's on now!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
GraciaWarrior
07/21/14
Fire vs water!
Water is always win!
Omega Kirby
07/21/14
@GraciaWarrior: Not always. Don't forget water evaporates.
Extremmefan
07/21/14
@Omega Kirby and @GraciaWarrior: Well at least MOST of the time...
8bithuman
07/21/14
Fish warrrrrr!
Luigi_96
07/21/14
*presses Staples Easy Button*
MecanicalCH
07/21/14
@BattleStarX: *hidden in cardboard box to avoid being Fish´d*
Extremmefan
07/28/14
@MecanicalCH: THAT AGAIN?!
07/21/14
Fire vs water!
Water is always win!
Omega Kirby
07/21/14
@GraciaWarrior: Not always. Don't forget water evaporates.
Extremmefan
07/21/14
@Omega Kirby and @GraciaWarrior: Well at least MOST of the time...
8bithuman
07/21/14
Fish warrrrrr!
Luigi_96
07/21/14
*presses Staples Easy Button*
MecanicalCH
07/21/14
@BattleStarX: *hidden in cardboard box to avoid being Fish´d*
Extremmefan
07/28/14
@MecanicalCH: THAT AGAIN?!
Lessons Learned - Part 29
Ulti's Notes:
Saia's Parasol is pretty strong.
Original Author's Comment:
07/21/14
Kexas doesn't seem too thrilled about this turn of events.
For anyone questioning how the base wasn't completely destroyed by Kexas' Crash usage, I direct you to exhibit A. See? Not a scratch can be found on the surrounding area. Thus, your argument is invalid.
Kexas doesn't seem too thrilled about this turn of events.
For anyone questioning how the base wasn't completely destroyed by Kexas' Crash usage, I direct you to exhibit A. See? Not a scratch can be found on the surrounding area. Thus, your argument is invalid.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
07/21/14
@Extremmefan: Don't you have anything relevant to say? Like something related to the page itself, or related to Ulti's comment? Come on.
EDIT: This is now a reply to nooothing.
BattleStarX
07/21/14
I gotta get me that parasol.
Koopario
07/21/14
Luigi_96: I think his comment got deleted :/
Anyway, we all know Kexas. Loves talking.
Yuuuuuuuuuup.
But surrounding area=fine, but enemy=blown away, at least usually, to my knowledge.
So Saia=fine, because of Parasol?
I think anything would die after a crash like that.
Except maybe Gordos.
'Cause y'know...Gordos.
8bithuman
07/21/14
Koopario I think your math is wrong. Gordos>Crash Shotzo>Crash Buildings>Crash and Parasol>Crash.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/21/14
Jarkes: It was essentially a 'first' comment. Anyone who posts anything like that without any semblance of a relevant comment in the rest of the comment gets their comment deleted, and this was no exception.
MecanicalCH
07/21/14
BattleStarX: better a cardboard box... *the box survived the huge Crash attack...*
guestuser
07/22/14
That parasol must be made of the same thing as the fridge in Indianna Jones.
Extremmefan
07/24/14
Ultimate Yoshi:
reply to author comment: One of the most interesting comic after a cliffhanger...
reply to user comment: I wasn't trying to say it, sorry...
Luigi_96: Nothing to say... I just don't want to annoy anyone...
EDIT: Nothing indeed... my previous comment was deleted but I don't really care since it was nothing to worry about...
Koopario: It was indeed deleted but, since it was nothing, I don't care. Also, Gordos are invincible (except Captain Stitch), I tried to use crash on an area full of enemies and only Gordos stayed alive... but Saia uses Parasol ability, which is defensive...
8bithuman: Gordos and Shotzos are both invincible and can resist Crash...
BattleStarX: Don't bother trying, please...
Jarkes: Ultimate Yoshi already told you... I don't need to say more...
MecanicalCH: what's a cardboard box?
@Somari: Or a invincible candy, or the Triforce...
07/21/14
@Extremmefan: Don't you have anything relevant to say? Like something related to the page itself, or related to Ulti's comment? Come on.
EDIT: This is now a reply to nooothing.
BattleStarX
07/21/14
I gotta get me that parasol.
Koopario
07/21/14
Luigi_96: I think his comment got deleted :/
Anyway, we all know Kexas. Loves talking.
Yuuuuuuuuuup.
But surrounding area=fine, but enemy=blown away, at least usually, to my knowledge.
So Saia=fine, because of Parasol?
I think anything would die after a crash like that.
Except maybe Gordos.
'Cause y'know...Gordos.
8bithuman
07/21/14
Koopario I think your math is wrong. Gordos>Crash Shotzo>Crash Buildings>Crash and Parasol>Crash.
Ultimate Yoshi
07/21/14
Jarkes: It was essentially a 'first' comment. Anyone who posts anything like that without any semblance of a relevant comment in the rest of the comment gets their comment deleted, and this was no exception.
MecanicalCH
07/21/14
BattleStarX: better a cardboard box... *the box survived the huge Crash attack...*
guestuser
07/22/14
That parasol must be made of the same thing as the fridge in Indianna Jones.
Extremmefan
07/24/14
Ultimate Yoshi:
reply to author comment: One of the most interesting comic after a cliffhanger...
reply to user comment: I wasn't trying to say it, sorry...
Luigi_96: Nothing to say... I just don't want to annoy anyone...
EDIT: Nothing indeed... my previous comment was deleted but I don't really care since it was nothing to worry about...
Koopario: It was indeed deleted but, since it was nothing, I don't care. Also, Gordos are invincible (except Captain Stitch), I tried to use crash on an area full of enemies and only Gordos stayed alive... but Saia uses Parasol ability, which is defensive...
8bithuman: Gordos and Shotzos are both invincible and can resist Crash...
BattleStarX: Don't bother trying, please...
Jarkes: Ultimate Yoshi already told you... I don't need to say more...
MecanicalCH: what's a cardboard box?
@Somari: Or a invincible candy, or the Triforce...
Going Home - Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
One could even call such a moment a 'tear in the fabric', if they were so inclined.
Original Author's Comment:
07/21/14
(Otherwise N/A)
(Otherwise N/A)
Going Home - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
I find it amusing that BSX had so many characters in their KDA cast that nobody even noticed that any of the characters I got sent were missing. I don't think it's necessarily a self-diss against how expansive BSX's cast was, but moreso a credit to how many different factions and groups there were that everything was still able to function relatively normally within this universe that a few missing cogs weren't mandatory to keep things running smoothly, so to speak.
Original Author's Comment:
07/23/14
Unlike last time, no one's really gone ahead and take a head count.
Unlike last time, no one's really gone ahead and take a head count.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/24/14
No, don't make plans. Plans always get messed up. You should just wing it instead.
Sapar
07/24/14
@BattleStarX: Aw, no quip?
plasma_knight303
07/24/14
@Ultimate Yoshi: What's a plan? Can you eat it?
Luigi_96
07/24/14
No... no quip?
... *breaks down emotionally*
8bithuman
07/24/14
Where is the second p--
Where is the quip? D:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/24/14
Geez, guys, he was having Photoshop issues. I'm sure making sure that his program was working properly was more important than creating an unimportant side picture. We've gone for over 1000 comics without even having one, you don't need to freak out because there isn't one today.
07/24/14
No, don't make plans. Plans always get messed up. You should just wing it instead.
Sapar
07/24/14
@BattleStarX: Aw, no quip?
plasma_knight303
07/24/14
@Ultimate Yoshi: What's a plan? Can you eat it?
Luigi_96
07/24/14
No... no quip?
... *breaks down emotionally*
8bithuman
07/24/14
Where is the second p--
Where is the quip? D:
Ultimate Yoshi
07/24/14
Geez, guys, he was having Photoshop issues. I'm sure making sure that his program was working properly was more important than creating an unimportant side picture. We've gone for over 1000 comics without even having one, you don't need to freak out because there isn't one today.
Lessons Learned - Part 30
Ulti's Notes:
The biggest thing I wanted to avoid when aiming to give Kexas development was to actually develop her. I didn't want to feel like I was writing the character too much. So what I elected to do instead was to simply plant the seeds for BSX to give her growth instead. I instigated the circumstances that would give Kexas the chance to grow, but other than this initial spark, I left it all up to the hands of BSX to see how she'd grow, or if she even successfully could.
It's still perhaps a bit silly that I spent a lot of time in the crossover working on a character that wasn't even mine, but while it may be a touch awkward for a Kirby Adventure-centric viewpoint, it must be reminded that this was done during a time when both my and BSX's comics were pretty significant on Smack Jeeves and had loyal, thriving communities around both. It added to the lasting charm of the Kirby sprite comic community in general, as well as the camaraderie of both series and us as creators. Ultimately, even if in retrospect and from this viewpoint it might come across as a bit of a weird focus to have, I can only think of it as a success still for the context of the era it was created within.
It's still perhaps a bit silly that I spent a lot of time in the crossover working on a character that wasn't even mine, but while it may be a touch awkward for a Kirby Adventure-centric viewpoint, it must be reminded that this was done during a time when both my and BSX's comics were pretty significant on Smack Jeeves and had loyal, thriving communities around both. It added to the lasting charm of the Kirby sprite comic community in general, as well as the camaraderie of both series and us as creators. Ultimately, even if in retrospect and from this viewpoint it might come across as a bit of a weird focus to have, I can only think of it as a success still for the context of the era it was created within.
Original Author's Comment:
07/22/14
Writing this conversation turned out much better than I was expecting.
Writing this conversation turned out much better than I was expecting.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
07/23/14
So very, very deep. Well done.
MecanicalCH
07/23/14
Kexas...kind?....a kind....Kexas....that just sounds...weird...but i will befriend her! :D
Luigi_96
07/23/14
I could never write this conversation properly. Bravo, Ulti.
Koopario
07/23/14
BattleStarX: ...
Ok then...
Ok Saia...
I'll try to imagine Kexas as kind...
And...
I'm sorry this is just so well done yet so...bizzare. I don't know why.
guestuser
07/24/14
Oh.
Extremmefan
07/24/14
Luigi_96: I couldn't either, if I had a Kirby sprite comic.
07/23/14
So very, very deep. Well done.
MecanicalCH
07/23/14
Kexas...kind?....a kind....Kexas....that just sounds...weird...but i will befriend her! :D
Luigi_96
07/23/14
I could never write this conversation properly. Bravo, Ulti.
Koopario
07/23/14
BattleStarX: ...
Ok then...
Ok Saia...
I'll try to imagine Kexas as kind...
And...
I'm sorry this is just so well done yet so...bizzare. I don't know why.
guestuser
07/24/14
Oh.
Extremmefan
07/24/14
Luigi_96: I couldn't either, if I had a Kirby sprite comic.
Going Home - Part 5
Original Author's Comment:
07/23/14
Respect does not necessarily mean liking.
At least he's not feeling timey-wimey.
Respect does not necessarily mean liking.
At least he's not feeling timey-wimey.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
MecanicalCH
07/24/14
@BattleStarX: aww...but feeling Timey-wimey is fun...
also what happened!? what happened!? last page Etam was gone!
Luigi_96
07/24/14
That is high praise from Kaxo.
8bithuman
07/24/14
@BattleStarX I think it's dangerous to cause so many paradoxes.
GraciaWarrior
07/24/14
Kaxo, be nice now -_-
07/24/14
@BattleStarX: aww...but feeling Timey-wimey is fun...
also what happened!? what happened!? last page Etam was gone!
Luigi_96
07/24/14
That is high praise from Kaxo.
8bithuman
07/24/14
@BattleStarX I think it's dangerous to cause so many paradoxes.
GraciaWarrior
07/24/14
Kaxo, be nice now -_-
Going Home - Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
Kroby was the PSSS member who was Dyna Blade's victim in the first crossover.
Original Author's Comment:
07/24/14
She may not show it, but Kuxxel's gotten used to more chaotic moments.
And we'll get back to DDD News on Monday as well. There may or may not be remakes this weekend.
She may not show it, but Kuxxel's gotten used to more chaotic moments.
And we'll get back to DDD News on Monday as well. There may or may not be remakes this weekend.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
8bithuman
07/25/14
Master Green will soon join Dedede's buffet.
Luigi_96
07/25/14
Kirby logic. It always makes perfect sense, except for when it doesn't.
Sapar
07/25/14
Ohey Etam acknowledges the weird lack of Quipitude two days ago.
plasma_knight303
06/23/17
At least Kirby said "Ku-ie" this time.
07/25/14
Master Green will soon join Dedede's buffet.
Luigi_96
07/25/14
Kirby logic. It always makes perfect sense, except for when it doesn't.
Sapar
07/25/14
Ohey Etam acknowledges the weird lack of Quipitude two days ago.
plasma_knight303
06/23/17
At least Kirby said "Ku-ie" this time.
Lessons Learned - Part 31
Ulti's Notes:
I find it funny that I wrote in so much chaos that some of the characters truly took this long to even understand the basic premise of what was going on.
Original Author's Comment:
07/24/14
Looks like one particular Squishy managed to escape his fate to be consumed by a fat penguin. Good for him.
Looks like one particular Squishy managed to escape his fate to be consumed by a fat penguin. Good for him.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
07/24/14
That Squishy is one loyal servant.
8bithuman
07/24/14
the squishies will return!!!
NikNW
07/24/14
There goes Dedede's dessert.
Luigi_96
07/24/14
I'm sure this Squishy won't be important in any way
plasma_knight303
07/24/14
Green Kirby the Leaft: "Well, that's normal, everyone, back to your business!"
GraciaWarrior
07/25/14
Shadow jump return again!
Nekotive
07/31/14
Pchooooo
07/24/14
That Squishy is one loyal servant.
8bithuman
07/24/14
the squishies will return!!!
NikNW
07/24/14
There goes Dedede's dessert.
Luigi_96
07/24/14
I'm sure this Squishy won't be important in any way
plasma_knight303
07/24/14
Green Kirby the Leaft: "Well, that's normal, everyone, back to your business!"
GraciaWarrior
07/25/14
Shadow jump return again!
Nekotive
07/31/14
Pchooooo
Going Home - Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
This is a funny page to me, because it really goes to show how little of an impact Division B had, especially for readers of my comic like BattleStarX. See, the characters Pyra and Lycor (one of whom was whacked with a fish earlier in this crossover), they're brother and sister. But they're such minor and unimportant characters that this detail got overlooked entirely. I don't even blame BSX, it's just funny to me that they're so forgettable and irrelevant that the concept of Kirby siblings seemed foreign to characters who have coworkers that are siblings.
Original Author's Comment:
07/25/14
I don't think I've ever been so in need of sugar that I've sung praises to soda.
I don't think I've ever been so in need of sugar that I've sung praises to soda.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Air Man1 21
07/26/14
Messy cameos...
Extremmefan
07/26/14
This comic is as long as 8-bit Theater!
BattleStarX
07/26/14
@Extremmefan: This comic will be longer than Bob & George by the time I'm done with it.
Assuming, of course, I stop one day.
Luigi_96
07/26/14
@BattleStarX: "Fifteen years and 5,000 comics later..."
8bithuman
07/26/14
That leads to the question. Where do Kirbys come from?
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/26/14
@8bithuman: Well, according to past comics, they're born from stars. The twins were born from a black hole.
Super Crash Kirby
07/27/14
@Blue Kirby the l33t: So was Teelzy.
Extremmefan
07/28/14
@BattleStarX: Maybe longer than 8-bit Theater too?
07/26/14
Messy cameos...
Extremmefan
07/26/14
This comic is as long as 8-bit Theater!
BattleStarX
07/26/14
@Extremmefan: This comic will be longer than Bob & George by the time I'm done with it.
Assuming, of course, I stop one day.
Luigi_96
07/26/14
@BattleStarX: "Fifteen years and 5,000 comics later..."
8bithuman
07/26/14
That leads to the question. Where do Kirbys come from?
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/26/14
@8bithuman: Well, according to past comics, they're born from stars. The twins were born from a black hole.
Super Crash Kirby
07/27/14
@Blue Kirby the l33t: So was Teelzy.
Extremmefan
07/28/14
@BattleStarX: Maybe longer than 8-bit Theater too?
Going Home - Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
Hey, at least Raize can say that it wasn't HIM who crashed the Warp Star this time.
Original Author's Comment:
07/26/14
Don't worry everybody, the soda was not spilled!
Don't worry everybody, the soda was not spilled!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
07/27/14
See? I just said it on the news post, and I already have an opportunity to get myself banned.
But hey, at least my glorious return is imminent~
Jarkes
07/27/14
It would seem that Raize STILL cannot fly Warp Stars...
GraciaWarrior
07/27/14
Where kirby?
Ow BSX,that Gross Xp
Luigi_96
07/27/14
Get that Redtro cookie and Sapar cake out of there! xD
Ultimate Yoshi
07/27/14
@Jarkes: Well, Kirby was still the one driving this particular Warp Star.
8bithuman
07/27/14
Hooray for Sapar and redtro!
07/27/14
See? I just said it on the news post, and I already have an opportunity to get myself banned.
But hey, at least my glorious return is imminent~
Jarkes
07/27/14
It would seem that Raize STILL cannot fly Warp Stars...
GraciaWarrior
07/27/14
Where kirby?
Ow BSX,that Gross Xp
Luigi_96
07/27/14
Get that Redtro cookie and Sapar cake out of there! xD
Ultimate Yoshi
07/27/14
@Jarkes: Well, Kirby was still the one driving this particular Warp Star.
8bithuman
07/27/14
Hooray for Sapar and redtro!
Lessons Learned - Part 32
Ulti's Notes:
Kubby and Kublie had no confirmed romantic aspects between the two, but there was at least enough material between the two being work partners that there was a minor shipping angle that was possible. And I couldn't help but roll with it and add a bit of fuel to that fire, even if I knew the fire was never gonna really be lit.
Also Vezo gets to be the meta guy making a joke about the KDA character names, because I couldn't resist.
Also Vezo gets to be the meta guy making a joke about the KDA character names, because I couldn't resist.
Original Author's Comment:
07/26/14
This comic idea came to me on a whim, and I just rolled with it. Sometimes, I think my best comics are created that way.
This comic idea came to me on a whim, and I just rolled with it. Sometimes, I think my best comics are created that way.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
plasma_knight303
07/26/14
UY why do you make all your characters so lovable, especially the minor ones like the Squishy here
BattleStarX
07/26/14
Squishing is such a good stress relief.
Luigi_96
07/26/14
plasma_knight303: I think the real question here is why wouldn't he?
Sapar
07/26/14
Luigi_96: The mark of a true author is to make their characters lovable, even if they have some of the most despicable flaws.
8bithuman
07/26/14
Squishing squishies? Paradox!!!
GraciaWarrior
07/27/14
Kubby is blush in 5 panel
guestuser
07/27/14
You know what they say, all Squishies squish Squishies!
07/26/14
UY why do you make all your characters so lovable, especially the minor ones like the Squishy here
BattleStarX
07/26/14
Squishing is such a good stress relief.
Luigi_96
07/26/14
plasma_knight303: I think the real question here is why wouldn't he?
Sapar
07/26/14
Luigi_96: The mark of a true author is to make their characters lovable, even if they have some of the most despicable flaws.
8bithuman
07/26/14
Squishing squishies? Paradox!!!
GraciaWarrior
07/27/14
Kubby is blush in 5 panel
guestuser
07/27/14
You know what they say, all Squishies squish Squishies!
Going Home - Part 9
Ulti's Notes:
At the very least, Shat'l, it's not also timey-wimey.
Original Author's Comment:
07/27/14
Kirby? Learn how to fly? Psh, that'll never happen.
Told ya it wasn't the last we saw of them.
Kirby? Learn how to fly? Psh, that'll never happen.
Told ya it wasn't the last we saw of them.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
littlekirby61524
07/28/14
@BattleStarX: but can Kirby do Flyfishing?
BattleStarX
07/28/14
@littlekirby61524: Who knows. He does seem to enjoy fishing from time to time.
MecanicalCH
07/28/14
@BattleStarX: YAY! Sapar and Redtro are ok! ...mostly ok...middly ok?...nicely ok?...no?...ok...i will shut up now...SUGAR!!
8bithuman
07/28/14
I blame all this time traveling for the wibbly wobbly timeline. Also, double cameo!
Luigi_96
07/28/14
Panel 3: install* will*
Sapar
07/28/14
You forgot the second l's in panel 3
07/28/14
@BattleStarX: but can Kirby do Flyfishing?
BattleStarX
07/28/14
@littlekirby61524: Who knows. He does seem to enjoy fishing from time to time.
MecanicalCH
07/28/14
@BattleStarX: YAY! Sapar and Redtro are ok! ...mostly ok...middly ok?...nicely ok?...no?...ok...i will shut up now...SUGAR!!
8bithuman
07/28/14
I blame all this time traveling for the wibbly wobbly timeline. Also, double cameo!
Luigi_96
07/28/14
Panel 3: install* will*
Sapar
07/28/14
You forgot the second l's in panel 3
Going Home - Part 10
Ulti's Notes:
That palm tree certainly did explode, and Keito and Ryka are clearly blameless.
Original Author's Comment:
07/28/14
Nobody has to worry about that tree anymore. It was nuked.
Nobody has to worry about that tree anymore. It was nuked.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
07/29/14
And the Tree was the only thing that exploded also ADVENTURE!
Sapar
07/29/14
.....You forgot the second l in the fourth panel.
You seem to have an l problem. Did you forget to pay the Alphabet bill?
BattleStarX
07/29/14
Photoshop has this odd lag when I'm typing, that's prolly all it is. I definitely hit it, but it doesn't register.
Luigi_96
07/29/14
I agree with Etam
HatKirby
07/30/14
@BattleStarX:
Hey!
First off, I just want to apologize in advance if this ends up sounding pushy.
Secondly, I never got a reply concerning my cameo request that I submitted a little while back. I sent you an email about it, but you never replied to that, so I posted a comment on Recharging the Batteries part 16. Do you think you could look at it?
BattleStarX
07/30/14
@HatKirby: I did make a mention of it. So, here, in front of everyone, I say no, you won't get a cameo. All cameo's so far have provided their own sprites, which helps speed up the process of quips. They're supposed to be fast, not take up any more time than a panel in the main comic. And I don't feel your character would be fun wot work with.
There.
HatKirby
07/30/14
Sorry.
07/29/14
And the Tree was the only thing that exploded also ADVENTURE!
Sapar
07/29/14
.....You forgot the second l in the fourth panel.
You seem to have an l problem. Did you forget to pay the Alphabet bill?
BattleStarX
07/29/14
Photoshop has this odd lag when I'm typing, that's prolly all it is. I definitely hit it, but it doesn't register.
Luigi_96
07/29/14
I agree with Etam
HatKirby
07/30/14
@BattleStarX:
Hey!
First off, I just want to apologize in advance if this ends up sounding pushy.
Secondly, I never got a reply concerning my cameo request that I submitted a little while back. I sent you an email about it, but you never replied to that, so I posted a comment on Recharging the Batteries part 16. Do you think you could look at it?
BattleStarX
07/30/14
@HatKirby: I did make a mention of it. So, here, in front of everyone, I say no, you won't get a cameo. All cameo's so far have provided their own sprites, which helps speed up the process of quips. They're supposed to be fast, not take up any more time than a panel in the main comic. And I don't feel your character would be fun wot work with.
There.
HatKirby
07/30/14
Sorry.
Lessons Learned - Part 33
Ulti's Notes:
BSX and I hadn't discussed this before, but I was pretty confident that they wouldn't say no to a bit of extra chaotic energy with a new character to work with. Given all the other silly stuff I had given them to use, I figured a goofily-obedient Squishy would be right up their alley, and as it so happened, I was extremely correct once BSX started using the Squishy for themselves in future KDA pages.
Unfortunately, this is solely an archive for Kirby Adventure, so you won't be seeing that stuff here.
Unfortunately, this is solely an archive for Kirby Adventure, so you won't be seeing that stuff here.
Original Author's Comment:
07/28/14
If Kublie is alone with the Squishy, however, there won't be anyone around who can stop the inevitable mischief. Except Kexas, though she'd probably enjoy watching it rather than put a stop to it.
If Kublie is alone with the Squishy, however, there won't be anyone around who can stop the inevitable mischief. Except Kexas, though she'd probably enjoy watching it rather than put a stop to it.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
07/28/14
Such a happy Squishy
BattleStarX
07/28/14
Shenanigans is a fun word that should really be used more often.
8bithuman
07/29/14
squishy's name is squishy
it's official
guestuser
07/29/14
Can you imagine if Kublie and Kexa teamed up, and went on a squishing spree?!
07/28/14
Such a happy Squishy
BattleStarX
07/28/14
Shenanigans is a fun word that should really be used more often.
8bithuman
07/29/14
squishy's name is squishy
it's official
guestuser
07/29/14
Can you imagine if Kublie and Kexa teamed up, and went on a squishing spree?!
Going Home - Part 11
Ulti's Notes:
Building up the Master Green and Kaxo reunion the way that BSX did, it was quite fun to have it be so anticlimactic on Kaxo's part. Green is clearly just traumatized.
Original Author's Comment:
07/29/14
The fated meeting has come at last.
And I prolly disappointed a lot of you.
Etam and the Author-Doo spending quality time together is most likely a bad thing.
The fated meeting has come at last.
And I prolly disappointed a lot of you.
Etam and the Author-Doo spending quality time together is most likely a bad thing.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
07/30/14
@VG Fan:
Everyone's allowed their own opinion. If you don't like my comic, you don't need to read it, fair's fair.
If you come on here to complain, however, your comments will be deleted. Continue and you will be banned. I never said I was all nice, forgiving and full of sunshine and rainbows. The Author-Doo rules with an iron-fist.
GraciaWarrior
07/30/14
What happened to master green in last panel?
Luigi_96
07/30/14
@GraciaWarrior: I believe he fell over in shock.
SuperScratchkat
07/30/14
"Oh. It's YOU again..." ~GLaDOS
BattleStarX
07/30/14
@SuperScratchkat: That bot has to have some of the best writing in video game history.
8bithuman
07/30/14
Master Green is still scared of Kaxo.
Koopario
07/30/14
@BattleStarX: Don't bad things always happen when you show up in at least one panel? Especially when you've had sugar.
I imagine a clone of you would be even worse.
guestuser
07/31/14
Author Doo how would you rule with an Iron Fist if you just have stubs.
Fighter Dee
08/08/14
Oh good, now he's flipping out again...
07/30/14
@VG Fan:
Everyone's allowed their own opinion. If you don't like my comic, you don't need to read it, fair's fair.
If you come on here to complain, however, your comments will be deleted. Continue and you will be banned. I never said I was all nice, forgiving and full of sunshine and rainbows. The Author-Doo rules with an iron-fist.
GraciaWarrior
07/30/14
What happened to master green in last panel?
Luigi_96
07/30/14
@GraciaWarrior: I believe he fell over in shock.
SuperScratchkat
07/30/14
"Oh. It's YOU again..." ~GLaDOS
BattleStarX
07/30/14
@SuperScratchkat: That bot has to have some of the best writing in video game history.
8bithuman
07/30/14
Master Green is still scared of Kaxo.
Koopario
07/30/14
@BattleStarX: Don't bad things always happen when you show up in at least one panel? Especially when you've had sugar.
I imagine a clone of you would be even worse.
guestuser
07/31/14
Author Doo how would you rule with an Iron Fist if you just have stubs.
Fighter Dee
08/08/14
Oh good, now he's flipping out again...
Going Home - Part 12
Ulti's Notes:
If Kaxo had succeeded in making a Master Not-Green, that would've just been a Master Red.
Original Author's Comment:
07/30/14
Okay, so I didn't make Kaxo THAT nice. Punishment must still be made.
Maybe if I devote a quip to it, people will finally get it through their heads. I don't know what's up with them of late.
Okay, so I didn't make Kaxo THAT nice. Punishment must still be made.
Maybe if I devote a quip to it, people will finally get it through their heads. I don't know what's up with them of late.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
8bithuman
07/31/14
Master Green got back what he used to do to Kirby. Haha, shocked? Get it?
SuperScratchkat
07/31/14
Kaxo Rule One: Don't leave Kaxo alone with anyone who tried to kill him.
Kaxo Rule Two:DON'T LEAVE KAXO ALONE WITH ANYONE WHO TRIED TO KILL HIM.
Luigi_96
07/31/14
Kaxo, just... No.
guestuser
07/31/14
@SuperScratchkat: Kaxo rule number 3:dont try to kill kaxo.kaxo rule number 4:dont be alone with him after you tried to kill him Kaxo rule number 5:never tell your parents.
07/31/14
Master Green got back what he used to do to Kirby. Haha, shocked? Get it?
SuperScratchkat
07/31/14
Kaxo Rule One: Don't leave Kaxo alone with anyone who tried to kill him.
Kaxo Rule Two:DON'T LEAVE KAXO ALONE WITH ANYONE WHO TRIED TO KILL HIM.
Luigi_96
07/31/14
Kaxo, just... No.
guestuser
07/31/14
@SuperScratchkat: Kaxo rule number 3:dont try to kill kaxo.kaxo rule number 4:dont be alone with him after you tried to kill him Kaxo rule number 5:never tell your parents.
Lessons Learned - Part 34
Original Author's Comment:
07/30/14
It's an unfortunate truth of being low on the totem pole: someone at the top will make you do their work.
It's an unfortunate truth of being low on the totem pole: someone at the top will make you do their work.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
07/30/14
Oh come on, Fanhal, it was just a tank. And it's not like they actually dropped it on top of you after flying an unknown distance, creating a super-squish.
plasma_knight303
07/30/14
Just a tank? Not that severe.
For all we know, he could have been dropped into a cavern on Hotbeat without protection.
Extremmefan
07/30/14
plasma_knight303: true...
Luigi_96
07/30/14
Well they need to be grouped together anyway.
(Also I kind of wonder why some people who aren't the author feel the need to reply to every comment on the page so far. And not just the case seen above, I've seen this multiple times.)
Koopario
07/30/14
Luigi_96: Why? You've seen what one of them can do on their own, so imagine three, plus Kexas, who is still in the base as far as I know.
Luigi_96
07/30/14
Koopario: Because they can't all go back home from all these different places now can they?
Extremmefan
07/31/14
Luigi_96: I just like to say if I agree or not... it is a problem for you?
Kevin The Kirby
08/01/14
Kruzzy and Klooshy you trouble makers XD
161616
08/11/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Actually, the lower you are depicted on the totem pole, the higher you actually are. If there was actually a totem pole, Hali would be at the bottom.
07/30/14
Oh come on, Fanhal, it was just a tank. And it's not like they actually dropped it on top of you after flying an unknown distance, creating a super-squish.
plasma_knight303
07/30/14
Just a tank? Not that severe.
For all we know, he could have been dropped into a cavern on Hotbeat without protection.
Extremmefan
07/30/14
plasma_knight303: true...
Luigi_96
07/30/14
Well they need to be grouped together anyway.
(Also I kind of wonder why some people who aren't the author feel the need to reply to every comment on the page so far. And not just the case seen above, I've seen this multiple times.)
Koopario
07/30/14
Luigi_96: Why? You've seen what one of them can do on their own, so imagine three, plus Kexas, who is still in the base as far as I know.
Luigi_96
07/30/14
Koopario: Because they can't all go back home from all these different places now can they?
Extremmefan
07/31/14
Luigi_96: I just like to say if I agree or not... it is a problem for you?
Kevin The Kirby
08/01/14
Kruzzy and Klooshy you trouble makers XD
161616
08/11/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Actually, the lower you are depicted on the totem pole, the higher you actually are. If there was actually a totem pole, Hali would be at the bottom.
Going Home - Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
Sometimes I wonder how much the daily upload schedule impacted BSX's production. Pages like this were surely easier to make, when so much could be copied-and-pasted, but it reads a little less impactfully on future readings.
Original Author's Comment:
07/31/14
What gave you that idea, Kooby?
What gave you that idea, Kooby?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Christal shard64
08/01/14
Why Keeby squish Kirby?
Poor him :(
Luigi_96
08/01/14
Never accept candy from strangers/psychopaths, Author-Doo.
8bithuman
08/01/14
Eeeeeeeeaaaaaat theeeeeeeeee caaaaaannnndyyyyyyyyyy.
Sapar
08/01/14
You just know that he's gonna eat it anyway.
Nekotive
08/01/14
I've found a severe lack of the phrase "I dig" in the quips. This is infuriating. I paid good money for these quips.
MecanicalCH
08/01/14
@BattleStarX: SUGAR!!! *NOMNOM!!*
HOOPLA!
08/01/14
DON'T EAT THE CANDY!
IT'S A TRAP!
08/01/14
Why Keeby squish Kirby?
Poor him :(
Luigi_96
08/01/14
Never accept candy from strangers/psychopaths, Author-Doo.
8bithuman
08/01/14
Eeeeeeeeaaaaaat theeeeeeeeee caaaaaannnndyyyyyyyyyy.
Sapar
08/01/14
You just know that he's gonna eat it anyway.
Nekotive
08/01/14
I've found a severe lack of the phrase "I dig" in the quips. This is infuriating. I paid good money for these quips.
MecanicalCH
08/01/14
@BattleStarX: SUGAR!!! *NOMNOM!!*
HOOPLA!
08/01/14
DON'T EAT THE CANDY!
IT'S A TRAP!
Going Home - Part 14
Original Author's Comment:
08/01/14
Well, it was nice having them again. I think I did them a bit more justice than last time.
And they had the right colors the whole way through! WOO! Don't you love that, UY?
Seriously. What's my next segment? Dimensional Mishaps? I know it'll involve Teelzy, Master Green, and the hospital a good deal. It'll prolly have splashes of the Thieves and the Medics. And Keeby or Kirby will most likely make a showing. But beyond that? Not a clue. It'll write itself.
Speaking of segments, there's a few new ones on the Segment Synopsis page, and Point Zero has been fleshed out a bit more. That is still a long ways away.
Well, it was nice having them again. I think I did them a bit more justice than last time.
And they had the right colors the whole way through! WOO! Don't you love that, UY?
Seriously. What's my next segment? Dimensional Mishaps? I know it'll involve Teelzy, Master Green, and the hospital a good deal. It'll prolly have splashes of the Thieves and the Medics. And Keeby or Kirby will most likely make a showing. But beyond that? Not a clue. It'll write itself.
Speaking of segments, there's a few new ones on the Segment Synopsis page, and Point Zero has been fleshed out a bit more. That is still a long ways away.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
GraciaWarrior
08/02/14
Okeyy?Where is Kirby now?
MecanicalCH
08/02/14
@BattleStarX: O.O you don´t script anything!? you even better than it though! O.O
Luigi_96
08/02/14
Home, sweet home!
kitkat68
08/02/14
@GraciaWarrior: Who knows. Most likely off screen somewhere.
Ultimate Yoshi
08/02/14
Colors make the world go round.
guestuser
08/02/14
@BattleStarX: I thought That It was Gonna be about all the stuff that happend to master green so far Even the stuff that has already happend.
08/02/14
Okeyy?Where is Kirby now?
MecanicalCH
08/02/14
@BattleStarX: O.O you don´t script anything!? you even better than it though! O.O
Luigi_96
08/02/14
Home, sweet home!
kitkat68
08/02/14
@GraciaWarrior: Who knows. Most likely off screen somewhere.
Ultimate Yoshi
08/02/14
Colors make the world go round.
guestuser
08/02/14
@BattleStarX: I thought That It was Gonna be about all the stuff that happend to master green so far Even the stuff that has already happend.
Lessons Learned - Part 35
Ulti's Notes:
After all the shenanigannery I pulled with Kublie earlier, I felt it was important to not flanderize her TOO much, per se. To that extent, I wanted to give her a small bit of "oh, impressive", where she displays some of her talents beyond making chaos. Truly, if she was meant to be the PSSS's payment enforcer, she HAD to have more skills than just making a mess of things. I enjoyed giving her this display of competence, while also making it true to her mischievous side that she doesn't always display these skills so that she can get on other peoples' nerves.
Original Author's Comment:
08/01/14
Kimsy asks a question that surprisingly nobody else has asked yet in any of the crossovers.
Kimsy asks a question that surprisingly nobody else has asked yet in any of the crossovers.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkNut255
08/01/14
So it’s only a… half-parallel world?
kitkat68
08/01/14
You know, I never really thought about that till now.
Extremmefan
08/01/14
Ultimate Yoshi, DarkNut255 and kitkat68: I knew it myself, because it seemed so logic...
BattleStarX
08/01/14
Though there are plenty of similarities between our kirbies, even if they have different names.
NikNW
08/01/14
Y'know, I always see parallel worlds, but never perpendicular ones. I want to see what a perpendicular one is like.
Luigi_96
08/02/14
Amazing
Kevin The Kirby
08/02/14
I wonder what a parallel world of a parallel world would be like.
lizliz77
08/02/14
I like this, but when are you going to finish kirby and yoshi? It's getting interesting.
08/01/14
So it’s only a… half-parallel world?
kitkat68
08/01/14
You know, I never really thought about that till now.
Extremmefan
08/01/14
Ultimate Yoshi, DarkNut255 and kitkat68: I knew it myself, because it seemed so logic...
BattleStarX
08/01/14
Though there are plenty of similarities between our kirbies, even if they have different names.
NikNW
08/01/14
Y'know, I always see parallel worlds, but never perpendicular ones. I want to see what a perpendicular one is like.
Luigi_96
08/02/14
Amazing
Kevin The Kirby
08/02/14
I wonder what a parallel world of a parallel world would be like.
lizliz77
08/02/14
I like this, but when are you going to finish kirby and yoshi? It's getting interesting.
Portal Watch - Part 1
Ulti's Notes:
Master Green also didn't return to Kirby Adventure because I had no more use for him. I gave the character to BSX, so with BSX he remained.
Original Author's Comment:
08/02/14
It's much safer for Master Green over here anyway. Even if he is in danger of being used as a comfy chair.
It's much safer for Master Green over here anyway. Even if he is in danger of being used as a comfy chair.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
SuperScratchkat
08/03/14
ITS FOUR IN THE MORNING
WHY WOULD YOU BE UPLOADING COMICS AT FUGJIN FOUR IN THE MORNING AAA
Christal shard64
08/03/14
Keeby it's new Ku - ie
BattleStarX
08/03/14
@SuperScratchkat: As you can see by my Author comment, I actually uploaded this at 1 in the afternoon yesterday. I just have it come out at 4am in the morning just so things come out at relatively the same time, since I almost never work on my comics at the same exact time every day.
Luigi_96
08/03/14
Hammer-to-the-face count +1?
Mimistarlish
08/03/14
Wait, what happen to the Kirbys in KA?
Sapar
08/03/14
@BattleStarX: Er, Author-Doo? You've been forgetting then second 'c' in words for a while now.... There's not really any other typos, but that, along with one time that had the same thing with an 'l,' is kinda weird, especially since it's the same circumstance every time.
Is there something up with your keyboard? Just curious...
Falcon_Lunch!
08/04/14
Two things:
ONE: Flying squish is WIN!
TWO: No! NOT THE COMFY CHAIR!
Did anybody get that reference besides me? Or was that not a reference and I'm just being weirdy?
08/03/14
ITS FOUR IN THE MORNING
WHY WOULD YOU BE UPLOADING COMICS AT FUGJIN FOUR IN THE MORNING AAA
Christal shard64
08/03/14
Keeby it's new Ku - ie
BattleStarX
08/03/14
@SuperScratchkat: As you can see by my Author comment, I actually uploaded this at 1 in the afternoon yesterday. I just have it come out at 4am in the morning just so things come out at relatively the same time, since I almost never work on my comics at the same exact time every day.
Luigi_96
08/03/14
Hammer-to-the-face count +1?
Mimistarlish
08/03/14
Wait, what happen to the Kirbys in KA?
Sapar
08/03/14
@BattleStarX: Er, Author-Doo? You've been forgetting then second 'c' in words for a while now.... There's not really any other typos, but that, along with one time that had the same thing with an 'l,' is kinda weird, especially since it's the same circumstance every time.
Is there something up with your keyboard? Just curious...
Falcon_Lunch!
08/04/14
Two things:
ONE: Flying squish is WIN!
TWO: No! NOT THE COMFY CHAIR!
Did anybody get that reference besides me? Or was that not a reference and I'm just being weirdy?
Portal Watch - Part 2
Original Author's Comment:
08/03/14
A jobs a job, you take what you can get.
Lazy Author-Doo is lazy.
A jobs a job, you take what you can get.
Lazy Author-Doo is lazy.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
That one guy
08/04/14
Then Korby realizes how boring the mission actually is.
Luigi_96
08/04/14
@BattleStarX: That comment is very accurate.
NGamerS31
08/04/14
I really like keeby's eyes in the first panel, is it costume?
BattleStarX
08/04/14
@NGamerS31: Of course it's not a costume. Kirbies don't wear clothes. :P
The eyes are from the "jolly guy" sprite, just duplicated, mirrored, and attached on.
08/04/14
Then Korby realizes how boring the mission actually is.
Luigi_96
08/04/14
@BattleStarX: That comment is very accurate.
NGamerS31
08/04/14
I really like keeby's eyes in the first panel, is it costume?
BattleStarX
08/04/14
@NGamerS31: Of course it's not a costume. Kirbies don't wear clothes. :P
The eyes are from the "jolly guy" sprite, just duplicated, mirrored, and attached on.
Lessons Learned - Part 36
Original Author's Comment:
08/03/14
It's good to know that these guys can always count on Keeby.
It's good to know that these guys can always count on Keeby.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
08/03/14
That Squishy looks so comfortable up there.
Luigi_96
08/03/14
Raize, you're gonna crack the fourth wall!
MetaFawful
08/03/14
What? Keeby doesn't have hair.
Kevin The Kirby
08/03/14
Well in the end the squishy got what he wanted
GraciaWarrior
08/04/14
Hair? what hair?
Omega Kirby
08/04/14
MetaFawful: Or does he?
Kevin The Kirby: Yeah... It's good that he's already brown.
08/03/14
That Squishy looks so comfortable up there.
Luigi_96
08/03/14
Raize, you're gonna crack the fourth wall!
MetaFawful
08/03/14
What? Keeby doesn't have hair.
Kevin The Kirby
08/03/14
Well in the end the squishy got what he wanted
GraciaWarrior
08/04/14
Hair? what hair?
Omega Kirby
08/04/14
MetaFawful: Or does he?
Kevin The Kirby: Yeah... It's good that he's already brown.
Portal Watch - Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
This is why in the real world, bridges and underpasses have those height limit signs for trucks and stuff.
Original Author's Comment:
08/04/14
Apparently not all places were made with a kirby tank in mind. Silly people.
The fourth wall doesn't exist in the quips. Invisible walls, however, are in full force.
Apparently not all places were made with a kirby tank in mind. Silly people.
The fourth wall doesn't exist in the quips. Invisible walls, however, are in full force.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Extremmefan
08/05/14
Hey! I'm back! Thanks, BattleStarX!
Also, yay for invisible walls!
That one guy
08/05/14
I don't think Kaaby likes Kirby's idea.
Also, was I the only one who noticed the little reticle on the ceiling when Kirby became Bomb Kirby?
BattleStarX
08/05/14
@Extremmefan: You're still mentioning it. >:(
8bithuman
08/05/14
Don't break the 4th wall, kids. *looks at screen*
Luigi_96
08/05/14
@BattleStarX: Why is this such a difficult concept for some people?
KHKirby
08/05/14
How much do you think it'd cost for me to commission a Kirby tank from Kaaby?
Darkhog
08/05/14
You should use Ybrik Etamitlu in the main comic. That'd be hilarious. Dunno if UY will approve it though.
Sapar
08/05/14
@That one guy: Nah, I saw it there too by random chance.
Extremmefan
08/06/14
@BattleStarX: So? Mentioning it shouldn't matter. It's not like I said it.
EDIT: There! You're happy?
guestuser
01/18/17
I am surprised no one considered that Kaaby wasn't too happy when Kirby crashed into the hospital not too long ago.
08/05/14
Hey! I'm back! Thanks, BattleStarX!
Also, yay for invisible walls!
That one guy
08/05/14
I don't think Kaaby likes Kirby's idea.
Also, was I the only one who noticed the little reticle on the ceiling when Kirby became Bomb Kirby?
BattleStarX
08/05/14
@Extremmefan: You're still mentioning it. >:(
8bithuman
08/05/14
Don't break the 4th wall, kids. *looks at screen*
Luigi_96
08/05/14
@BattleStarX: Why is this such a difficult concept for some people?
KHKirby
08/05/14
How much do you think it'd cost for me to commission a Kirby tank from Kaaby?
Darkhog
08/05/14
You should use Ybrik Etamitlu in the main comic. That'd be hilarious. Dunno if UY will approve it though.
Sapar
08/05/14
@That one guy: Nah, I saw it there too by random chance.
Extremmefan
08/06/14
@BattleStarX: So? Mentioning it shouldn't matter. It's not like I said it.
EDIT: There! You're happy?
guestuser
01/18/17
I am surprised no one considered that Kaaby wasn't too happy when Kirby crashed into the hospital not too long ago.
Portal Watch - Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
Kaaby is the only character in KDA to rival Kexas's reputation of fear and intimidation. Which was why, earlier in the crossover, Kaaby was one of the only characters Kexas showed any respect towards prior to her talk with Saia.
Original Author's Comment:
08/05/14
Whoops! Ran out of time for making comics today, so just KDA. My bad, let myself get too engrossed with Fable III.
Maybe I will, maybe I won't. We'll just have to see. If I do, it'll be fun.
Whoops! Ran out of time for making comics today, so just KDA. My bad, let myself get too engrossed with Fable III.
Maybe I will, maybe I won't. We'll just have to see. If I do, it'll be fun.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
SkyyKirby44
08/06/14
It wouldn't be a wise choice after all…
Luigi_96
08/06/14
Think about what would happen if somebody got a blue screen of death on Kabby's computer.
KHKirby
08/06/14
I'm pretty sure that Kexas isn't the most fearsome Kirby in Dreamland.
It's Kaaby.
08/06/14
It wouldn't be a wise choice after all…
Luigi_96
08/06/14
Think about what would happen if somebody got a blue screen of death on Kabby's computer.
KHKirby
08/06/14
I'm pretty sure that Kexas isn't the most fearsome Kirby in Dreamland.
It's Kaaby.
Lessons Learned - Part 37
Ulti's Notes:
It IS kinda funny how none of the KA characters actually accomplished much at all, and everything got resolved on the KDA end of things.
Original Author's Comment:
08/05/14
It's like this was planned or something.
It's like this was planned or something.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
8bithuman
08/05/14
Shat'l is never predictable. Even compared to Caiya.
Luigi_96
08/05/14
The answer could always be "I'm Psychic"
littlekirby61524
08/05/14
Green Kirby the Leaft: psychics use psychic logic, which is only logical to them.
guestuser
08/06/14
Hay again psychic man
Koopario
08/07/14
Luigi_96: Except for that one page during that Etam incident...I'll link if possible.
EDIT: There we go!
http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1512089/tear-in-the-fabric-part-17/
Kevin The Kirby
08/07/14
Psychic logic the only logic that doesn't make any sence at random times
08/05/14
Shat'l is never predictable. Even compared to Caiya.
Luigi_96
08/05/14
The answer could always be "I'm Psychic"
littlekirby61524
08/05/14
Green Kirby the Leaft: psychics use psychic logic, which is only logical to them.
guestuser
08/06/14
Hay again psychic man
Koopario
08/07/14
Luigi_96: Except for that one page during that Etam incident...I'll link if possible.
EDIT: There we go!
http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1512089/tear-in-the-fabric-part-17/
Kevin The Kirby
08/07/14
Psychic logic the only logic that doesn't make any sence at random times
Portal Watch - Part 5
Original Author's Comment:
08/06/14
Or worse, imagine if Kruzy got a hold of the wand.
It may surprise you, but I actually made a separate sprite sheet for Etam. Guess that makes him special.
Or worse, imagine if Kruzy got a hold of the wand.
It may surprise you, but I actually made a separate sprite sheet for Etam. Guess that makes him special.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Too Lazy To log in or use my bro
08/07/14
That machine is gonna lead to trouble I bet 200 Jelly beans on that.
guestuser
08/07/14
And @BattleStarX/AuthorDoo It would be worse if
Dark Meta Knight got the wand
8bithuman
08/07/14
@BattleStarX happy 100 quips!
1000 greens goooooo
Luigi_96
08/07/14
I can't believe it's been (over) 100 days since you started the quips. It seems like a few weeks ago. xD
MecanicalCH
08/08/14
i still can´t figure out what Quips mean...T.T
08/07/14
That machine is gonna lead to trouble I bet 200 Jelly beans on that.
guestuser
08/07/14
And @BattleStarX/AuthorDoo It would be worse if
Dark Meta Knight got the wand
8bithuman
08/07/14
@BattleStarX happy 100 quips!
1000 greens goooooo
Luigi_96
08/07/14
I can't believe it's been (over) 100 days since you started the quips. It seems like a few weeks ago. xD
MecanicalCH
08/08/14
i still can´t figure out what Quips mean...T.T
Portal Watch - Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
The classic 'tempting of the fates'.
Original Author's Comment:
08/07/14
(Otherwise N/A)
(Otherwise N/A)
Lessons Learned - Part 38
Ulti's Notes:
I don't really use my Ultimate Kirby "authorsona" particularly much, and especially less so after the debacle of Tear in the Fabric. However, given the presence of "authorsonas" in Kirby's Dream Adventure regularly (which you've obviously seen in the myriad of BSX's comment Quips), it felt appropriate to have one small moment with my own sona to harken back to the goofiness of the first crossover.
Given the joke-y nature of that original erasure joke from the first crossover, I didn't really think too hard about the weird implications of the author fight that could be read into it. Nobody DID read anything into it, but especially after what occurred between myself and Gigi during THAT crossover, it felt appropriate to 'make amends' with the fictional sona characters here.
Given the joke-y nature of that original erasure joke from the first crossover, I didn't really think too hard about the weird implications of the author fight that could be read into it. Nobody DID read anything into it, but especially after what occurred between myself and Gigi during THAT crossover, it felt appropriate to 'make amends' with the fictional sona characters here.
Original Author's Comment:
08/07/14
It's a bottomless bag!
Kexas, Karby, and Kubby are still around for now, but they'll be going back next comic. I split up the KDA cast returning mostly because I don't have many other ideas for the epilogue of this segment.
It's a bottomless bag!
Kexas, Karby, and Kubby are still around for now, but they'll be going back next comic. I split up the KDA cast returning mostly because I don't have many other ideas for the epilogue of this segment.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
08/07/14
The Author-Doo accepts your offering and has forgotten all about the matter spoken of. :P
And look at sneaky Shat'l, stowing the wand away.
8bithuman
08/07/14
The fourth wall is once again broken...wait, is there even a fourth wall???
Extremmefan
08/07/14
8bithuman: I believe not...
SuperScratchkat
08/07/14
"our first dimensional mishap"
ROLL CREDITS- oh wait
Luigi_96
08/07/14
8bithuman: The Sprite Comic Rulebook states: "If/when the 'author' of a comic shows up in said comic, the fourth wall, if not already broken by the characters in the comic, no longer exists."
(Totally didn't just make that up.)
MecanicalCH
08/08/14
Luigi_96: unless the author is also a character and has accepted having less power for the sake of auto-continuity in time space continuum on said comic!
(Totally din´t continue and making more rules! XD)
guestuser
08/08/14
Whats this erasinator thingy you were talking about i do'nt know what it is.
guestuser
08/08/14
What happen to Saia in 3 panel?
Kevin The Kirby
08/09/14
Whats a eraseringation?
Extremmefan
08/09/14
Kevin The Kirby: Basically the fact to put back author comic representation back in their comic, only usable by the author of the comic where the "author cameo" appeared. You need to read the previous pages AND their author comments before asking such questions.
Kevin The Kirby
08/10/14
Extremmefan: Thank You
08/07/14
The Author-Doo accepts your offering and has forgotten all about the matter spoken of. :P
And look at sneaky Shat'l, stowing the wand away.
8bithuman
08/07/14
The fourth wall is once again broken...wait, is there even a fourth wall???
Extremmefan
08/07/14
8bithuman: I believe not...
SuperScratchkat
08/07/14
"our first dimensional mishap"
ROLL CREDITS- oh wait
Luigi_96
08/07/14
8bithuman: The Sprite Comic Rulebook states: "If/when the 'author' of a comic shows up in said comic, the fourth wall, if not already broken by the characters in the comic, no longer exists."
(Totally didn't just make that up.)
MecanicalCH
08/08/14
Luigi_96: unless the author is also a character and has accepted having less power for the sake of auto-continuity in time space continuum on said comic!
(Totally din´t continue and making more rules! XD)
guestuser
08/08/14
Whats this erasinator thingy you were talking about i do'nt know what it is.
guestuser
08/08/14
What happen to Saia in 3 panel?
Kevin The Kirby
08/09/14
Whats a eraseringation?
Extremmefan
08/09/14
Kevin The Kirby: Basically the fact to put back author comic representation back in their comic, only usable by the author of the comic where the "author cameo" appeared. You need to read the previous pages AND their author comments before asking such questions.
Kevin The Kirby
08/10/14
Extremmefan: Thank You
Portal Watch - Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
The staggered arrival of the returning cast was likely a two-fold combination of the way I had characters leave panel-by-panel instead of all at once, in order to let them have their own individual seconds to say goodbye with their parting words, and then also BSX's daily upload meaning that anything that could pad out a scene was likely grasped on eagerly. So, hey, it all works out.
Original Author's Comment:
08/08/14
(Otherwise N/A)
(Otherwise N/A)
Lessons Learned - Part 39
Ulti's Notes:
Due to how the characters' returns were staggered a bit, I wound up having to organize the pages in this particular way, so that the order made sense to read right after one another. Had I displayed two KDA pages in a row like I had the entire rest of this webpage, Kexas would have arrived in KDA before actually leaving KA, and that just would've been silly.
Also damn, Vezo, stop being such a Marvel-quote kind of character, that kind of dry observational non-humor really aged poorly.
Also damn, Vezo, stop being such a Marvel-quote kind of character, that kind of dry observational non-humor really aged poorly.
Original Author's Comment:
08/09/14
There they go, off to cause mischief and trouble back at their home dimension.
There they go, off to cause mischief and trouble back at their home dimension.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Extremmefan
08/09/14
Kexas will think about being better with social communication.
8bithuman
08/09/14
Shat'l jinxed it. The next segment is probably going to be as weird as this one.
Luigi_96
08/09/14
Shat'l, this was normal.
BattleStarX
08/09/14
Normal is over-rated anyway.
MarioKong
08/09/14
Is my cameo character gonna be the next segment? I mean, it's been two years now, and I don't want to nag, but...
Kevin The Kirby
08/09/14
What is normal? i've never heard of the word before.....
MecanicalCH
08/09/14
BattleStarX: i bet Kexas will be back to time traveling launching techniques in the next second she is back!
guestuser
08/10/14
Aww,Shadik friend is left again :(
guestuser
08/10/14
And kirby return to home now
08/09/14
Kexas will think about being better with social communication.
8bithuman
08/09/14
Shat'l jinxed it. The next segment is probably going to be as weird as this one.
Luigi_96
08/09/14
Shat'l, this was normal.
BattleStarX
08/09/14
Normal is over-rated anyway.
MarioKong
08/09/14
Is my cameo character gonna be the next segment? I mean, it's been two years now, and I don't want to nag, but...
Kevin The Kirby
08/09/14
What is normal? i've never heard of the word before.....
MecanicalCH
08/09/14
BattleStarX: i bet Kexas will be back to time traveling launching techniques in the next second she is back!
guestuser
08/10/14
Aww,Shadik friend is left again :(
guestuser
08/10/14
And kirby return to home now
Portal Watch - Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
Since BattleStarX would always talk about how much they loved sugary treats, the jellybean bag was just a silly acknowledgement of such. As far as the "Doo's Yearly Event" that Kublie mentions, BSX had a tradition of doing in-universe parties hosted by his Author Doo sona, inviting their cast of characters to a yearly comic anniversary party that often had Christmas and New Year's themes to it, since Kirby's Dream Adventure originally began in late December of 2009.
Original Author's Comment:
08/09/14
(Otherwise N/A)
(Otherwise N/A)
Portal Watch - Part 9
Ulti's Notes:
One thing I always found interesting was how Kexas was always treated like the biggest powerhouse, but Karby was sort of like a subtle sleeper "He's Even Stronger" sort of character. This would get acknowledged a bit later in KDA as Kexas viewed Karby as a protégé and eventual successor to her in the Arena.
Original Author's Comment:
08/10/14
Karby squishes are things of beauty.
No DDD News coming today, I was at a big family party. Hopefully this time, I won't get sunburned.
Karby squishes are things of beauty.
No DDD News coming today, I was at a big family party. Hopefully this time, I won't get sunburned.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Christal shard64
08/11/14
Karby is metal Kirby
Extremmefan
08/11/14
@Christal shard64: ... Have you played any Super Smash Bros?!
Jarkes
08/11/14
@Extremmefan: Metal was also a Copy ability in Squeak Squad...
8bithuman
08/11/14
@Christal shard64 That must also explain Karby's invincibility...
Quirby64_:D
08/11/14
..Maddenning Tests?
OH SNAPPLE--
Luigi_96
08/11/14
I guess nobody's voting for this comic anymore besides me.
MecanicalCH
08/12/14
@Luigi_96: i do vote it...T.T
08/11/14
Karby is metal Kirby
Extremmefan
08/11/14
@Christal shard64: ... Have you played any Super Smash Bros?!
Jarkes
08/11/14
@Extremmefan: Metal was also a Copy ability in Squeak Squad...
8bithuman
08/11/14
@Christal shard64 That must also explain Karby's invincibility...
Quirby64_:D
08/11/14
..Maddenning Tests?
OH SNAPPLE--
Luigi_96
08/11/14
I guess nobody's voting for this comic anymore besides me.
MecanicalCH
08/12/14
@Luigi_96: i do vote it...T.T
Portal Watch - Part 10
Ulti's Notes:
And with that, that's all of the crossover pages by BattleStarX! And the final crossover segment in Kirby Adventure, thankfully. These segments have been much more annoying to annotate and set up for display here on this website, so being done with them is a huge relief.
As far as the future of Kirby's Dream Adventure is concerned, the comic continued for a good long while, and in fact was forcibly ended by Smack Jeeves being shut down in 2020. Until then, it went for a good 3 years longer than Kirby Adventure did, and continued its daily upload streak impressively enough. The loss of Smack Jeeves killed BSX's motivation to continue working, though, and production on KDA indefinitely halted. The comic's never been officially reuploaded, though as stated in a previous annotation, an unsanctioned partial reupload does exist on ComicFury.
In regards to BSX themselves, since the end of Smack Jeeves and KDA, they've mostly kept themselves busy in private, but they do have a Twitter account, as well as a YouTube where they upload occasional longplay gaming videos of things like Stardew Valley and The Elder Scrolls. So it's certainly not the same as making comics, but they're still around if that sort of content interests you!
As far as the future of Kirby's Dream Adventure is concerned, the comic continued for a good long while, and in fact was forcibly ended by Smack Jeeves being shut down in 2020. Until then, it went for a good 3 years longer than Kirby Adventure did, and continued its daily upload streak impressively enough. The loss of Smack Jeeves killed BSX's motivation to continue working, though, and production on KDA indefinitely halted. The comic's never been officially reuploaded, though as stated in a previous annotation, an unsanctioned partial reupload does exist on ComicFury.
In regards to BSX themselves, since the end of Smack Jeeves and KDA, they've mostly kept themselves busy in private, but they do have a Twitter account, as well as a YouTube where they upload occasional longplay gaming videos of things like Stardew Valley and The Elder Scrolls. So it's certainly not the same as making comics, but they're still around if that sort of content interests you!
Original Author's Comment:
08/11/14
Poor flimsy Kimsy.
So no DDD News again today. "Why Author-Doo? Why can't you keep to your schedule?!" Hey, the Author-Doo's been a busy man. Work first, comics second. And DDD News is just a side comic anyhoo. As long as KDA keeps up, all's good, right?
Poor flimsy Kimsy.
So no DDD News again today. "Why Author-Doo? Why can't you keep to your schedule?!" Hey, the Author-Doo's been a busy man. Work first, comics second. And DDD News is just a side comic anyhoo. As long as KDA keeps up, all's good, right?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Mimistarlish
08/12/14
Poor kimsy,He is in forgeten(my English is suck)
Extremmefan
08/12/14
@Mimistarlish: You mean "She's forgotten.", right?
Also, Kimsy is a girl.
Luigi_96
08/12/14
Woah Etam. Woah.
MecanicalCH
08/12/14
@BattleStarX: now that is just meany Etam! give that hat back! >:C
Quirby64_:D
08/12/14
@BattleStarX: Now, If only I had a phone to call the closest thing to 911..for *cough* THIEVERY *cough*......
8bithuman
08/12/14
Gasp! The hat! Etam, no one takes someone else's hat...
08/12/14
Poor kimsy,He is in forgeten(my English is suck)
Extremmefan
08/12/14
@Mimistarlish: You mean "She's forgotten.", right?
Also, Kimsy is a girl.
Luigi_96
08/12/14
Woah Etam. Woah.
MecanicalCH
08/12/14
@BattleStarX: now that is just meany Etam! give that hat back! >:C
Quirby64_:D
08/12/14
@BattleStarX: Now, If only I had a phone to call the closest thing to 911..for *cough* THIEVERY *cough*......
8bithuman
08/12/14
Gasp! The hat! Etam, no one takes someone else's hat...
Lessons Learned - Part 40
Ulti's Notes:
This finally does it for Lessons Learned, so the next segment gets to be a bit of a return to form... somewhat. You'll see what I mean as soon as you see its name.
Also the funny thing about doing annotations is that when I talk about my personal insights and behind-the-scenes development, it can wind up being the exact same stuff as my "end of chapter" long-form notes that I originally wrote up. As you can see directly below, where nearly everything I said in 2014 is stuff you just read in annotations I wrote in 2024.
At least you know that I'm consistent and that my memory isn't failing me that much, eh?
Also the funny thing about doing annotations is that when I talk about my personal insights and behind-the-scenes development, it can wind up being the exact same stuff as my "end of chapter" long-form notes that I originally wrote up. As you can see directly below, where nearly everything I said in 2014 is stuff you just read in annotations I wrote in 2024.
At least you know that I'm consistent and that my memory isn't failing me that much, eh?
Original Author's Comment:
08/11/14
And with that, the third crossover of Kirby Adventure is complete! That might also be the third and final, depending on how things go in the future. I can't see another crossover with 20 Times Kirby happening due to how much more rigid planning Gigi puts into her comic, and I'm Kirby's Dream Adventure-d out for now. Maybe in the distant future, there'll be a fourth crossover, but don't get your hopes up.
So, as per Kirby Adventure tradition, time to talk in-depth about the segment and my writing process.
I'll freely admit it right here and now: the only reason why I asked BattleStarX if he'd be willing to do another crossover was so that I could do what I did with Kexas during this segment.
Back when I was doing my Kirby's Dream Adventure In-Depth Review over at my review comic, Ulti Reviews, I took notice of Kexas a little bit more. Everyone who reads KDA knows Kexas, she's probably the most popular character in the comic. She's entertaining and her strength and reputation makes her also one of the most feared KDA characters. However, as I was rereading the entire archives to review the comic, I started to notice something about Kexas. As good as she was, she was also starting to become a bit of a one-note character in KDA. Every situation involving her was essentially exactly the same, and as opposed to some other characters in a similar boat in KDA, Kexas's reputation made it pretty much impossible for her to change from her current position. Nobody could talk any change into her, she was perfectly happy where she was, and people who didn't like her were too afraid to speak up against her. I noticed that if BSX ever intended to give more depth to Kexas, he was kind of written into a corner. I saw no feasible way for Kexas's character to expand any more from how she was presented already... unless someone who didn't know Kexas's reputation encountered her.
This is where the crossover idea sprung into my mind. Kexas could get depth to her one-note personality if she encountered somebody who wasn't aware of her strength or background. The only kinds of people who wouldn't know that would be characters not from that universe. This then eventually developed into having said person be Saia, as she's not only the only Kirby I have who would have enough care to want to talk with Kexas, but she'd also be strong enough to stand up to Kexas in the first place.
Of course, I would never do any of this without BattleStarX's permission, so in my initial private message proposals, I basically presented the idea to him in as much detail as I had already worked out. To my happiness, BSX was all for the idea, so after a few more inquiries into Kexas straight from the creator, I was ready to go on that front.
Also of course, it wouldn't quite be a crossover if only Kexas was involved, so I had to balance between the heavier Kexas characterization stuff with the kookiness of the other six characters I got. In addition to immediately requesting Kexas as a character, BSX gave me Karby and Kimsy to work with, and then I later requested Kubby, Kublie, Kruzy, and Klooshy, whereas aside from Ryka and Shat'l, BSX got to decide everyone he got to work with from my end.
When it came to getting the characterizations right, I think Kruzy and Kublie were the easiest for me to work with. Kruzy immediately clicked with me, and his evil-voice shenanigans were fun to work with. Klooshy was a bit mellowed down, and I don't think I was quite able to use him to his full potential, but he still came out alright. On the other hand, despite how much I love the Kubby-Kublie pairing in KDA, I actually struggled a bit when using it myself. I was able to use the two more effectively when they weren't together, surprisingly enough, or at the very least, when they were addressing somebody else. Thus, the Squishy entered the scene. I left his name and a good chunk of his personality open for interpretation by BattleStarX, thus making it so that BSX can do basically whatever he wants with the Squishy. Unlike Master Green, the Squishy had very little to go on, meaning BSX can write him however he so desires.
The pairing of Karby and Shadik was one that absolutely had to happen. Karby and Shadik missed each other in the first crossover, and Grace and Shadik didn't interact all that much in the second. This time around, I immediately put the two together to create as much silent laughs as I could. Speaking of which, though, that one scene where Karby actually speaks aloud? That was a BSX-approved scene. Unlike in the first and second crossovers, when I would usually just write jokes that may or may not create information from nowhere, or potentially overwrite canonical information, I was a lot more careful this time around. I thought of the joke midway through the crossover, and immediately went to BSX asking if it would be okay. Approval was definitely a lot more important to me this time around, as I wanted to ensure the characters were as accurate as they could be.
Alas, with each crossover comes an underused character. In the first one, it was Karby. In the second one, it was Leo (and Daniel and Yan, to an extent). This time around, Kimsy took the role of being underused. I'll admit, I had a very difficult time working with Kimsy. Like I said, I even forgot to initially put her into the comic when the rest of the KDA cast arrives. I tried to make up for her early underuse in the later half of the segment, but even then, she only has about two comics where she's got more than one line. I really enjoyed the comic where Bandana Dee wakes her up, as well as the comic with her talking to Kublie, but as a whole, Kimsy suffered a bit from me just simply not knowing what to do with her. She still fared better than Karby and Leo did, but it's undeniable how little she participated in this.
I don't have much else to talk about when it comes to the Kexas scenes. I wanted to expand upon her characterization, but I also did so in a way that accomplished two important things. One was that it didn't actually create any new information. Everything I did had its roots in her official KDA backstory, I just used it in a slightly different manner. The other thing is that in all actuality, I didn't change Kexas in the slightest. The way I wrote that conversation was an intentional way of simply sowing the seeds. Any actual change in Kexas's characterization, if there is one at all, can and will be written solely by BattleStarX now. I set the stage for the character growth to occur, but I didn't actually write it myself. I didn't want to feel as though I was interfering too much with the character, so now the future of Kexas rests solely on the hands of the Author Doo.
So yeah, that's all I really have to talk about for now, unless I'm just forgetting something. In the end, I think this crossover ended up being the best one of the three, so that's a good note to end on with the most likely final KA crossover. Hopefully you all enjoyed the segment, and if nothing else, the next segment should be a fun ride as well.
And with that, the third crossover of Kirby Adventure is complete! That might also be the third and final, depending on how things go in the future. I can't see another crossover with 20 Times Kirby happening due to how much more rigid planning Gigi puts into her comic, and I'm Kirby's Dream Adventure-d out for now. Maybe in the distant future, there'll be a fourth crossover, but don't get your hopes up.
So, as per Kirby Adventure tradition, time to talk in-depth about the segment and my writing process.
I'll freely admit it right here and now: the only reason why I asked BattleStarX if he'd be willing to do another crossover was so that I could do what I did with Kexas during this segment.
Back when I was doing my Kirby's Dream Adventure In-Depth Review over at my review comic, Ulti Reviews, I took notice of Kexas a little bit more. Everyone who reads KDA knows Kexas, she's probably the most popular character in the comic. She's entertaining and her strength and reputation makes her also one of the most feared KDA characters. However, as I was rereading the entire archives to review the comic, I started to notice something about Kexas. As good as she was, she was also starting to become a bit of a one-note character in KDA. Every situation involving her was essentially exactly the same, and as opposed to some other characters in a similar boat in KDA, Kexas's reputation made it pretty much impossible for her to change from her current position. Nobody could talk any change into her, she was perfectly happy where she was, and people who didn't like her were too afraid to speak up against her. I noticed that if BSX ever intended to give more depth to Kexas, he was kind of written into a corner. I saw no feasible way for Kexas's character to expand any more from how she was presented already... unless someone who didn't know Kexas's reputation encountered her.
This is where the crossover idea sprung into my mind. Kexas could get depth to her one-note personality if she encountered somebody who wasn't aware of her strength or background. The only kinds of people who wouldn't know that would be characters not from that universe. This then eventually developed into having said person be Saia, as she's not only the only Kirby I have who would have enough care to want to talk with Kexas, but she'd also be strong enough to stand up to Kexas in the first place.
Of course, I would never do any of this without BattleStarX's permission, so in my initial private message proposals, I basically presented the idea to him in as much detail as I had already worked out. To my happiness, BSX was all for the idea, so after a few more inquiries into Kexas straight from the creator, I was ready to go on that front.
Also of course, it wouldn't quite be a crossover if only Kexas was involved, so I had to balance between the heavier Kexas characterization stuff with the kookiness of the other six characters I got. In addition to immediately requesting Kexas as a character, BSX gave me Karby and Kimsy to work with, and then I later requested Kubby, Kublie, Kruzy, and Klooshy, whereas aside from Ryka and Shat'l, BSX got to decide everyone he got to work with from my end.
When it came to getting the characterizations right, I think Kruzy and Kublie were the easiest for me to work with. Kruzy immediately clicked with me, and his evil-voice shenanigans were fun to work with. Klooshy was a bit mellowed down, and I don't think I was quite able to use him to his full potential, but he still came out alright. On the other hand, despite how much I love the Kubby-Kublie pairing in KDA, I actually struggled a bit when using it myself. I was able to use the two more effectively when they weren't together, surprisingly enough, or at the very least, when they were addressing somebody else. Thus, the Squishy entered the scene. I left his name and a good chunk of his personality open for interpretation by BattleStarX, thus making it so that BSX can do basically whatever he wants with the Squishy. Unlike Master Green, the Squishy had very little to go on, meaning BSX can write him however he so desires.
The pairing of Karby and Shadik was one that absolutely had to happen. Karby and Shadik missed each other in the first crossover, and Grace and Shadik didn't interact all that much in the second. This time around, I immediately put the two together to create as much silent laughs as I could. Speaking of which, though, that one scene where Karby actually speaks aloud? That was a BSX-approved scene. Unlike in the first and second crossovers, when I would usually just write jokes that may or may not create information from nowhere, or potentially overwrite canonical information, I was a lot more careful this time around. I thought of the joke midway through the crossover, and immediately went to BSX asking if it would be okay. Approval was definitely a lot more important to me this time around, as I wanted to ensure the characters were as accurate as they could be.
Alas, with each crossover comes an underused character. In the first one, it was Karby. In the second one, it was Leo (and Daniel and Yan, to an extent). This time around, Kimsy took the role of being underused. I'll admit, I had a very difficult time working with Kimsy. Like I said, I even forgot to initially put her into the comic when the rest of the KDA cast arrives. I tried to make up for her early underuse in the later half of the segment, but even then, she only has about two comics where she's got more than one line. I really enjoyed the comic where Bandana Dee wakes her up, as well as the comic with her talking to Kublie, but as a whole, Kimsy suffered a bit from me just simply not knowing what to do with her. She still fared better than Karby and Leo did, but it's undeniable how little she participated in this.
I don't have much else to talk about when it comes to the Kexas scenes. I wanted to expand upon her characterization, but I also did so in a way that accomplished two important things. One was that it didn't actually create any new information. Everything I did had its roots in her official KDA backstory, I just used it in a slightly different manner. The other thing is that in all actuality, I didn't change Kexas in the slightest. The way I wrote that conversation was an intentional way of simply sowing the seeds. Any actual change in Kexas's characterization, if there is one at all, can and will be written solely by BattleStarX now. I set the stage for the character growth to occur, but I didn't actually write it myself. I didn't want to feel as though I was interfering too much with the character, so now the future of Kexas rests solely on the hands of the Author Doo.
So yeah, that's all I really have to talk about for now, unless I'm just forgetting something. In the end, I think this crossover ended up being the best one of the three, so that's a good note to end on with the most likely final KA crossover. Hopefully you all enjoyed the segment, and if nothing else, the next segment should be a fun ride as well.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
08/11/14
I have a question: Are you planning on putting Talzo in the next segment? It's been a while since he showed up, and I'd really like to find out more about what his next plan is.
BattleStarX
08/11/14
Yeah, this was definitely our better cross-overs. With full on planning on one end and extra effort to not massacre characters on the other, I think we should get a lot less complaints about canon things this time around.
Not that we each didn't get a lot to play with last time, hehehe.
I actually look forward to the next segment to focus on Kexas and the other kirbies of that group now after this. Sometimes you just need something like this to break a mode JUST enough.
littlekirby61524
08/11/14
I can't wait to see what happens next~
Extremmefan
08/11/14
... Yeah, this was a good crossover, with effort in both comics. I'm still happy to read those comics and I'll always be a fan of KA and KDA!
Sapar
08/11/14
Wait..... "Fun ride?" "Next segment?" "As?"
..........Hmmmmmmmmmm. >:)
8bithuman
08/11/14
Master green and the Ku-ie's Jelly will always hold the memories of Calibri.
Luigi_96
08/11/14
Honestly, I'm glad things are back to non-crossover.
It's not that I don't necessarily like the crossovers, I just don't find them as enjoyable as the normal segments.
But maybe that's just me.
Kevin The Kirby
08/12/14
I still wouldn't trust master green
guestuser
08/12/14
Where's Kirby?
His not return yet
guestuser
08/12/14
I'm sorry but from the beginning there were too many Kirby's to keep track of too many characters overall took many different things all over the place and honestly its kinda annoying
08/11/14
I have a question: Are you planning on putting Talzo in the next segment? It's been a while since he showed up, and I'd really like to find out more about what his next plan is.
BattleStarX
08/11/14
Yeah, this was definitely our better cross-overs. With full on planning on one end and extra effort to not massacre characters on the other, I think we should get a lot less complaints about canon things this time around.
Not that we each didn't get a lot to play with last time, hehehe.
I actually look forward to the next segment to focus on Kexas and the other kirbies of that group now after this. Sometimes you just need something like this to break a mode JUST enough.
littlekirby61524
08/11/14
I can't wait to see what happens next~
Extremmefan
08/11/14
... Yeah, this was a good crossover, with effort in both comics. I'm still happy to read those comics and I'll always be a fan of KA and KDA!
Sapar
08/11/14
Wait..... "Fun ride?" "Next segment?" "As?"
..........Hmmmmmmmmmm. >:)
8bithuman
08/11/14
Master green and the Ku-ie's Jelly will always hold the memories of Calibri.
Luigi_96
08/11/14
Honestly, I'm glad things are back to non-crossover.
It's not that I don't necessarily like the crossovers, I just don't find them as enjoyable as the normal segments.
But maybe that's just me.
Kevin The Kirby
08/12/14
I still wouldn't trust master green
guestuser
08/12/14
Where's Kirby?
His not return yet
guestuser
08/12/14
I'm sorry but from the beginning there were too many Kirby's to keep track of too many characters overall took many different things all over the place and honestly its kinda annoying
Ulti's Notes:
There was ample discussion between myself and BSX in DMs left unsaved, talking about the characters we'd each want to send each other, and going deep into their personalities. I didn't want another Kaxo situation, so I wrote up an entire document detailing inner personality workings for BSX to reference. BSX did the same for me, and we each used each others' notes to great effect.
If I'm not mistaken, Ryka was one of the characters BSX had an interest in using, thus I threw her in as soon as I could. With a wildcard like her, it wasn't particularly difficult.
Original Author's Comment:
New segment time! This one will be interesting for sure.
A lot of people thought that we wouldn't be seeing the shenanigans that the Squad got up to when Kirby doing Mass Attack. Not sure why, but here's proof that we indeed will be seeing what happens when the leader is away.
Also, I'm back from that break, and have been for a little over a week now. I admittedly was pretty lazy for a little bit and really haven't done that much in terms of comics. I've been moreso focusing on my next Let's Play, as it's requiring quite a bit of work. That should be starting up soon.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
05/25/14
All hail the all-mighty soda.
CapedLuigisYoshi
05/26/14
Oh, Saia. Why would you say that phrase in panel 2? Now you're gonna be kept away much longer than that long.
guestuser
05/26/14
Hey, Ulti Yosh! For the Lessons Learned button, have Ryka inhaling a ton of soda!
Luigi_96
05/26/14
Ryka! :D
GraciaWarrior
05/26/14
Yey! update!.
Ryka just like Caiya.
Sapar
05/26/14
Jarkes: .....To Dreamland?
RYKA'S ADVENTURE
RYKA TRIPLE DELUXE
RYKA SUPER STAR
RYKA 64
RYKA'S AIR RIDE
And who could forget Ryka Squeak Squad, where she chases the Squeaks for her precious strawberry soda!?
guestuser
05/27/14
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!what wrong with me -_-
Tygah
05/27/14
I'm surprised saying doughnuts didn't spark dumb-Caiya XD
Nekotive
05/28/14
Honestly, I was expecting a "donut" freak out, not a "soda" one!