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Tree to Tree
Part 1
Part 2
Original Author's Comment:
11/30/11
I completely derped last comic, Kirby was originally gonna be returning from the HAND get-together, when I realized while making this one that Shat'l had went with Kirby, and therefore, if Shat'l was here, Kirby couldn't be returning from the HAND get-together.
So I opted for this instead.
I completely derped last comic, Kirby was originally gonna be returning from the HAND get-together, when I realized while making this one that Shat'l had went with Kirby, and therefore, if Shat'l was here, Kirby couldn't be returning from the HAND get-together.
So I opted for this instead.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
11/30/11
*Cries* :3
Sleepy Kirby
11/30/11
Man, I can't believe this comment excists long enough to have nostalgic moments about itself.
321TaTer
11/30/11
:C
*Also Cries*
guestuser
11/30/11
D:
guestuser
11/30/11
*Feeling very unfomfortable with all the crying but still sad*
plasma_knight303
11/30/11
well...*sniff* that answers Ryka's *sniff* question. :'(
DarkNut255
11/30/11
:D
Oh wait, wrong emoticon.
D,: ONOES KEBY DIDE! ITZ NOT LIK EH DUZNT EKSIT NI REL LIF ADN HTIS HAZ ALREDEE BENE SHUN AN STTUTED BEFUR.
(Translation: OH NO, KEEBY DIED! IT'S NOT LIKE HE DOESN'T EXIST IN REAL LIFE AND THIS HAS ALREADY BEEN SHOWN AND STATED BEFORE!)
To be honest, sad moments have to happen, but it's been stated in EVEVERY CHAPTER NOW. (Helping Hand is the only one that it hasn't been stated in.)
BattleStarX
11/30/11
Aww... sad moment...
And I am not surprised in the least that Kirby goes and visits Keeby's grave. He's just nice like that.
contradiction123
11/30/11
D:
Foxfoxy34
12/01/11
D:
Don't worry Keeby is still close to you,maybe even closer
DarkMario1000
12/01/11
Screw you, Galacta!
Flying Peacock
12/01/11
D{:
...
But maybe the KAS may still get lost on the mission...
Firecat1311
12/01/11
THERE IS A HOLE IN THE SIDE OF THE GROUND THAT KEEBY'S GRAVE IS IN?
D:
ZOMBIES AND/OR GRAVEROBBERS
NUUUUuuuu-- nevermind the hole is probably too far down X3
...............
...Or is it?
guestuser
12/01/11
Um, dude? There's a grave there. That says "RIP Keeby". So, no. He's not still alive. :P
On topic: I HATE GALACTA KNIGHT. >:U I hated him before because he was the reason I never beat the true arena, but now I hate him even more. >:U
lstaff4
05/09/12
That would make Shadik cry.SHADIK
guestuser
08/12/12
That's sad that Kebby was murdered,I hope they find away to bring him back to life...Wait,can the life orb revive him?After all,it is called a life orb.
Kirby:(SMACKO)
Me:OW! I WAS JUST ASKING!!!
Kirby:Oh....oops.
Me:-_-...
Pikaboy777
10/25/13
Man. If Galacta Knight shows up one more time, I WILL GO BALISTIC!!!
lunerkirby
04/05/14
cure you DUMB GALACTA KIGHT! YOU JERCK MEANY POO POO FACE!!
guestuser
04/30/14
I'm unemotional and only physical pain makes me cry so this did nothing to me...I wish I had a heart
Extremmefan
07/26/14
At the page of Keeby's death, I was making a huge ceremony in my comment!
guestuser
10/02/18
Still waiting if uy is gonna make a seaqule to this series after coming back to this page and the other one to say use the life orb to revive keeby, so kirby can be happy
RedsterTheGamer
10/11/18
@A random guy: I'll do something like that... wait no spoilers!
11/30/11
*Cries* :3
Sleepy Kirby
11/30/11
Man, I can't believe this comment excists long enough to have nostalgic moments about itself.
321TaTer
11/30/11
:C
*Also Cries*
guestuser
11/30/11
D:
guestuser
11/30/11
*Feeling very unfomfortable with all the crying but still sad*
plasma_knight303
11/30/11
well...*sniff* that answers Ryka's *sniff* question. :'(
DarkNut255
11/30/11
:D
Oh wait, wrong emoticon.
D,: ONOES KEBY DIDE! ITZ NOT LIK EH DUZNT EKSIT NI REL LIF ADN HTIS HAZ ALREDEE BENE SHUN AN STTUTED BEFUR.
(Translation: OH NO, KEEBY DIED! IT'S NOT LIKE HE DOESN'T EXIST IN REAL LIFE AND THIS HAS ALREADY BEEN SHOWN AND STATED BEFORE!)
To be honest, sad moments have to happen, but it's been stated in EVEVERY CHAPTER NOW. (Helping Hand is the only one that it hasn't been stated in.)
BattleStarX
11/30/11
Aww... sad moment...
And I am not surprised in the least that Kirby goes and visits Keeby's grave. He's just nice like that.
contradiction123
11/30/11
D:
Foxfoxy34
12/01/11
D:
Don't worry Keeby is still close to you,maybe even closer
DarkMario1000
12/01/11
Screw you, Galacta!
Flying Peacock
12/01/11
D{:
...
But maybe the KAS may still get lost on the mission...
Firecat1311
12/01/11
THERE IS A HOLE IN THE SIDE OF THE GROUND THAT KEEBY'S GRAVE IS IN?
D:
ZOMBIES AND/OR GRAVEROBBERS
NUUUUuuuu-- nevermind the hole is probably too far down X3
...............
...Or is it?
guestuser
12/01/11
Um, dude? There's a grave there. That says "RIP Keeby". So, no. He's not still alive. :P
On topic: I HATE GALACTA KNIGHT. >:U I hated him before because he was the reason I never beat the true arena, but now I hate him even more. >:U
lstaff4
05/09/12
That would make Shadik cry.SHADIK
guestuser
08/12/12
That's sad that Kebby was murdered,I hope they find away to bring him back to life...Wait,can the life orb revive him?After all,it is called a life orb.
Kirby:(SMACKO)
Me:OW! I WAS JUST ASKING!!!
Kirby:Oh....oops.
Me:-_-...
Pikaboy777
10/25/13
Man. If Galacta Knight shows up one more time, I WILL GO BALISTIC!!!
lunerkirby
04/05/14
cure you DUMB GALACTA KIGHT! YOU JERCK MEANY POO POO FACE!!
guestuser
04/30/14
I'm unemotional and only physical pain makes me cry so this did nothing to me...I wish I had a heart
Extremmefan
07/26/14
At the page of Keeby's death, I was making a huge ceremony in my comment!
guestuser
10/02/18
Still waiting if uy is gonna make a seaqule to this series after coming back to this page and the other one to say use the life orb to revive keeby, so kirby can be happy
RedsterTheGamer
10/11/18
@A random guy: I'll do something like that... wait no spoilers!
Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
Honestly, Tree to Tree kinda had a bit of a promising start. You wouldn't know it was a rough segment from the get-go, at least.
Original Author's Comment:
12/01/11
How fitting that DarkNut255's cameo debuts on comic 255! Totally by accident, I tell you. Oh, wait, what am I saying! This was purposeful and totally not just me being extraordinarily lucky with timing! Not at all!
I also realized we haven't had a donuts joke or a Shadik joke for some time. FIXED.
And there's a new KNID part too: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x8tsOMGejus
How fitting that DarkNut255's cameo debuts on comic 255! Totally by accident, I tell you. Oh, wait, what am I saying! This was purposeful and totally not just me being extraordinarily lucky with timing! Not at all!
I also realized we haven't had a donuts joke or a Shadik joke for some time. FIXED.
And there's a new KNID part too: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x8tsOMGejus
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
12/01/11
I knew it. :O
Darkus the Hedgehog
12/01/11
You still accept cameos?
contradiction123
12/01/11
What's wrong with being behind a bush?
BattleStarX
12/01/11
Exactly my thoughts. A lot stealthier landing spot. After all, how often do enemies actually LOOK in the bushes?
Only stealthier spot, it seems, would be a cardboard box. (Seriously? How can you miss a box that wasn't there before, and seems to move on its own?)
That said, hi there, Saia.
((By the way, UY, why is 34 a dirty number?))
Firecat1311
12/02/11
"add 'NOT placing us behind bushes' to list of things NOT to do"?
KIRBY APPROVES OF BUSHES
or it was a simple mistake :P
Tygah
12/02/11
I can finally keep up with the comics again! So...
*Insert bush related comment here*
guestuser
12/02/11
"Oh, look, a bush! *flush*"
(I really hope someone gets that...)
Flying Peacock
12/02/11
I guess foes can hide behind bushes as well?
Sleepy Kirby
12/02/11
Shadik's list o where not to go:
*Inside trees
*In mid-air
*At the theater (You're going to buy a ticket and like it! Love, Kirby)
*Behind bushes
DarkNut255
12/02/11
GEE… I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS GUY IS MY CAMEO IT WAS SO HERD TO-
Whatever, but yeah, Ulti, you so far got my cameo 100% perfect.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/02/11
@Jarkes
Isn't that from Kirby Vs. Shy Guy?
DarkMario1000
12/02/11
With his emotion signs to let everyone know he's still alive and has a soul. xP
guestuser
12/03/11
Ultimate Yoshi:
YES. Back when it was still funny, and actually about, y'know, Kirby fighting Shy Guys.
contradiction123
12/04/11
@Jarkes
I dunno. I still think it's funny.
Neon-J
12/06/11
Cutest jump ever.
Divine Knight
03/07/12
When I looked at your avatar, I honestly thought that I was looking at a picture from the anime. Then I realized that I wasn't.
12/01/11
I knew it. :O
Darkus the Hedgehog
12/01/11
You still accept cameos?
contradiction123
12/01/11
What's wrong with being behind a bush?
BattleStarX
12/01/11
Exactly my thoughts. A lot stealthier landing spot. After all, how often do enemies actually LOOK in the bushes?
Only stealthier spot, it seems, would be a cardboard box. (Seriously? How can you miss a box that wasn't there before, and seems to move on its own?)
That said, hi there, Saia.
((By the way, UY, why is 34 a dirty number?))
Firecat1311
12/02/11
"add 'NOT placing us behind bushes' to list of things NOT to do"?
KIRBY APPROVES OF BUSHES
or it was a simple mistake :P
Tygah
12/02/11
I can finally keep up with the comics again! So...
*Insert bush related comment here*
guestuser
12/02/11
"Oh, look, a bush! *flush*"
(I really hope someone gets that...)
Flying Peacock
12/02/11
I guess foes can hide behind bushes as well?
Sleepy Kirby
12/02/11
Shadik's list o where not to go:
*Inside trees
*In mid-air
*At the theater (You're going to buy a ticket and like it! Love, Kirby)
*Behind bushes
DarkNut255
12/02/11
GEE… I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS GUY IS MY CAMEO IT WAS SO HERD TO-
Whatever, but yeah, Ulti, you so far got my cameo 100% perfect.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/02/11
@Jarkes
Isn't that from Kirby Vs. Shy Guy?
DarkMario1000
12/02/11
With his emotion signs to let everyone know he's still alive and has a soul. xP
guestuser
12/03/11
Ultimate Yoshi:
YES. Back when it was still funny, and actually about, y'know, Kirby fighting Shy Guys.
contradiction123
12/04/11
@Jarkes
I dunno. I still think it's funny.
Neon-J
12/06/11
Cutest jump ever.
Divine Knight
03/07/12
When I looked at your avatar, I honestly thought that I was looking at a picture from the anime. Then I realized that I wasn't.
Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
Poor DarkNut255. While their comments often pressured me into updating some of my other comics through incessant begging, they were still a longtime and active fan of the comic, and yet their cameo here, Kiblar the silver Sir Kibble, was severely shafted during this segment.
The character was a cowardly, shy knight who hoped to prove himself. I never really used the character, though, mostly just focusing on the cowardly aspect. The real issue, though, was how the plot of this segment got horribly usurped.
Part of my solution to trying to recapture the 'magic' of To The Tower was... well, you can see it here to start. I retread a lot of ground, including bringing back charaters from it unnecessarily. FP had no business being here at all, and I wound up focusing on him instead of the actual new cameo character who was supposed to be the focus of the segment. FP could be fun, but it was way too attention-grabbing, and hindered the writing a lot.
The character was a cowardly, shy knight who hoped to prove himself. I never really used the character, though, mostly just focusing on the cowardly aspect. The real issue, though, was how the plot of this segment got horribly usurped.
Part of my solution to trying to recapture the 'magic' of To The Tower was... well, you can see it here to start. I retread a lot of ground, including bringing back charaters from it unnecessarily. FP had no business being here at all, and I wound up focusing on him instead of the actual new cameo character who was supposed to be the focus of the segment. FP could be fun, but it was way too attention-grabbing, and hindered the writing a lot.
Original Author's Comment:
12/04/11
CHAOS SHALL ENSUE LIKE IT HAS NEVER ENSUED BEFORE.
Also, I'm making this up on the spot as I go along. WOO!
Want a new Nightmare In Dream Land video? LOOK NO FURTHER: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xN0P7B9LCk4
Though I actually haven't gotten around to adding the door annotations at the end yet. So here's Torkirby's video as well, if you ever clicked those: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74AF-3W_2GY
CHAOS SHALL ENSUE LIKE IT HAS NEVER ENSUED BEFORE.
Also, I'm making this up on the spot as I go along. WOO!
Want a new Nightmare In Dream Land video? LOOK NO FURTHER: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xN0P7B9LCk4
Though I actually haven't gotten around to adding the door annotations at the end yet. So here's Torkirby's video as well, if you ever clicked those: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74AF-3W_2GY
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Alienoid
12/04/11
LOL.
Kaxo and Caiya are funny.
guestuser
12/04/11
I lieks cookeiz.
As does FP.
This will be intresting...
Fusion Kirby
12/04/11
Return of FP?
So he's a perma-character?
Tygah
12/04/11
Oh, I hope he doesn't eat that, now that it was on the ground in the forest...
BattleStarX
12/04/11
Cookies, they make the world go 'round.
By the way, UY, Stone cannot be USED underwater, but if you use it ABOVE water, you'll sink ever so nicely as a stone (not necessarily a good thing.)
guestuser
12/04/11
BattleStarX:
But in the Old Tower in Great Cave Offensive, you NEED to do this in at least one part to get all of the treasures.
DarkMario1000
12/04/11
what were they doing? (Kaxo & Caiya)
Striffen Cloud
12/04/11
I have the goofiest grin on my face from that last panel.
Falcon_Pawnch75
12/04/11
Looking at the chapter title, it is obvious what this entire thing will be about.
This entire chapter will be about me attempting to defeat The Peg's younger cousin, The Block. He's right there under Kaxo. Waiting. But I shall defeat him. Oh yes, I shall.
btw Kaxo X Caiya OTP *runs*
Sleepy Kirby
12/04/11
Yay cameos.
guestuser
12/04/11
Why is Caiya sleeping on Kaxo?
Gigi19972010
12/04/11
WHAT ABOUT ME?! MY CHARACTER ISN'T A CAMEO!
*Grabs a gun and aims at UY*
ClowCard
12/04/11
What are red and blue kirby doing??
guestuser
12/05/11
What I see is that Kaxo got envious about Caiya's place and tripped her over it, going himself on it. Then Caiya went on Kaxo as a revenge. Seems childish, but they are.
plasma_knight303
05/09/12
Daw, Kaxo and Caiya are so cute togeth- *gets burned by Kaxo*
guestuser
04/30/14
BWAHAHAHA CAIYA SAT ON KAXO
THIS IS TOP NOTCH COMEDY
guestuser
01/01/15
What if caiya saw fp's cookie? Oh noes...
12/04/11
LOL.
Kaxo and Caiya are funny.
guestuser
12/04/11
I lieks cookeiz.
As does FP.
This will be intresting...
Fusion Kirby
12/04/11
Return of FP?
So he's a perma-character?
Tygah
12/04/11
Oh, I hope he doesn't eat that, now that it was on the ground in the forest...
BattleStarX
12/04/11
Cookies, they make the world go 'round.
By the way, UY, Stone cannot be USED underwater, but if you use it ABOVE water, you'll sink ever so nicely as a stone (not necessarily a good thing.)
guestuser
12/04/11
BattleStarX:
But in the Old Tower in Great Cave Offensive, you NEED to do this in at least one part to get all of the treasures.
DarkMario1000
12/04/11
what were they doing? (Kaxo & Caiya)
Striffen Cloud
12/04/11
I have the goofiest grin on my face from that last panel.
Falcon_Pawnch75
12/04/11
Looking at the chapter title, it is obvious what this entire thing will be about.
This entire chapter will be about me attempting to defeat The Peg's younger cousin, The Block. He's right there under Kaxo. Waiting. But I shall defeat him. Oh yes, I shall.
btw Kaxo X Caiya OTP *runs*
Sleepy Kirby
12/04/11
Yay cameos.
guestuser
12/04/11
Why is Caiya sleeping on Kaxo?
Gigi19972010
12/04/11
WHAT ABOUT ME?! MY CHARACTER ISN'T A CAMEO!
*Grabs a gun and aims at UY*
ClowCard
12/04/11
What are red and blue kirby doing??
guestuser
12/05/11
What I see is that Kaxo got envious about Caiya's place and tripped her over it, going himself on it. Then Caiya went on Kaxo as a revenge. Seems childish, but they are.
plasma_knight303
05/09/12
Daw, Kaxo and Caiya are so cute togeth- *gets burned by Kaxo*
guestuser
04/30/14
BWAHAHAHA CAIYA SAT ON KAXO
THIS IS TOP NOTCH COMEDY
guestuser
01/01/15
What if caiya saw fp's cookie? Oh noes...
Part 5
Original Author's Comment:
12/04/11
There are many ways to be persuasive. Charm is one, bribery is another. Being annoying probably is the best way, however. That, or threats. > >
There are many ways to be persuasive. Charm is one, bribery is another. Being annoying probably is the best way, however. That, or threats. > >
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ninnco
12/04/11
First.
Anyway. Caiya and Kaxo= LUL
Annoyance is the best way to go.
Gigi19972010
12/04/11
Lol first panel.
And I still have that gun. :O
Air Man1 21
12/04/11
It would be funny if they just left Caiya on Kaxo, and continued the mission without 'em. Also if your FP then treats aren't an option when trying to persuade someone.
Tygah
12/04/11
Let's just hope there are no pegs this time.
1ce_k1d
12/04/11
I don't get the comment above.
Nowait, I mean Airman
Falcon_Pawnch75
12/04/11
Airman, if you're implying I can't use threats, you've got a LOT to learn about me =p
So I'm just randomly here? Cool, just like regular me :P
BattleStarX
12/04/11
Caiya is gonna burn.
DarkMario1000
12/04/11
*Kicks Gigi19972010's gun with a Falco Phantasm and blasts it with guns in a SSE-esque manner*
What were Caiya and Kaxo doin'? That's still my question.
guestuser
12/04/11
Kiblar is so scared, he's retreating into his armor.
Now THAT takes effort.
DarkNut255
12/04/11
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!!
Andromeda Lazuli
12/05/11
MEEP.
guestuser
12/05/11
You know, ever since I created all those TvTropes pages for this comic... I've been the only one to do any edits. Seriously, people, I can't be the only one who edits it. I mean, there's no way I'm the only troper here... It needs some Wiki Magic (that's what the site calls it when a page goes from having almost nothing to being really huge very quickly.)
Sleepy Kirby
12/05/11
I swear, if he lost another cookie...
guestuser
12/05/11
Ohh, now I get it.
(For those of you who don't know who I mean, LIVE WITH IT!!!)
guestuser
12/05/11
i wonder if the two find another orb,
guestuser
01/01/15
Hey who threw a gun at my face?
12/04/11
First.
Anyway. Caiya and Kaxo= LUL
Annoyance is the best way to go.
Gigi19972010
12/04/11
Lol first panel.
And I still have that gun. :O
Air Man1 21
12/04/11
It would be funny if they just left Caiya on Kaxo, and continued the mission without 'em. Also if your FP then treats aren't an option when trying to persuade someone.
Tygah
12/04/11
Let's just hope there are no pegs this time.
1ce_k1d
12/04/11
I don't get the comment above.
Nowait, I mean Airman
Falcon_Pawnch75
12/04/11
Airman, if you're implying I can't use threats, you've got a LOT to learn about me =p
So I'm just randomly here? Cool, just like regular me :P
BattleStarX
12/04/11
Caiya is gonna burn.
DarkMario1000
12/04/11
*Kicks Gigi19972010's gun with a Falco Phantasm and blasts it with guns in a SSE-esque manner*
What were Caiya and Kaxo doin'? That's still my question.
guestuser
12/04/11
Kiblar is so scared, he's retreating into his armor.
Now THAT takes effort.
DarkNut255
12/04/11
MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!!
Andromeda Lazuli
12/05/11
MEEP.
guestuser
12/05/11
You know, ever since I created all those TvTropes pages for this comic... I've been the only one to do any edits. Seriously, people, I can't be the only one who edits it. I mean, there's no way I'm the only troper here... It needs some Wiki Magic (that's what the site calls it when a page goes from having almost nothing to being really huge very quickly.)
Sleepy Kirby
12/05/11
I swear, if he lost another cookie...
guestuser
12/05/11
Ohh, now I get it.
(For those of you who don't know who I mean, LIVE WITH IT!!!)
guestuser
12/05/11
i wonder if the two find another orb,
guestuser
01/01/15
Hey who threw a gun at my face?
Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
Another problem with the segment was that I didn't really learn my lesson yet about having a proper goal in mind. I was still operating under "have funny shenanigans as they try to get to their goal" writing, while having the goal be too ambiguous and awkward.
Trying to find one single chest in the area was directionless, and thus, the plot couldn't really progress, not unless I incorporated the chest into something else. And while I DO wind up doing that, it's way too little, too late, as you'll wind up seeing.
Trying to find one single chest in the area was directionless, and thus, the plot couldn't really progress, not unless I incorporated the chest into something else. And while I DO wind up doing that, it's way too little, too late, as you'll wind up seeing.
Original Author's Comment:
12/07/11
FP should stand for Falcon_Pester.
FP should stand for Falcon_Pester.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
12/07/11
And, as usual, FP is himself and the other cameos suffer.
contradiction123
12/07/11
FP needs to get some hobbies....
Gigi19972010
12/07/11
*G-U-N*
Yes, I have no life.
DarkMario1000
12/07/11
T_T What are/were Kaxo and Caiya doing?
DarkNut255
12/07/11
Hm… Saia and Caiya…
Oh, and YET again, Kirby takes the Client.
plasma_knight303
12/07/11
heh, that's pretty funny. Saia and Caiya.
BattleStarX
12/08/11
I love how everyone is oblivious as to what Kaxo and Caiya are up to except Saia.
Falcon_Pawnch75
12/08/11
Kaxo and FP in the same group. Two dangerously destructive minds working together...
Oh dear, I 'll like to see how this will work out =D
DarkMario1000
12/08/11
If someone knows what is going on with Kaxo and Caiya, say it! >~<
guestuser
12/08/11
DarkMario1000
To my knowledge, Caiya is annoying Kaxo, Kaxo grabs her to do something violent, but accidently pulls her on top of him squishing him. Then instead of getting off, Caiya falls asleep. Then in this comic, Kaxo throws her off him, and Saia looks at Kaxo disapprovingly because he threw her into a wall.
Sleepy Kirby
12/08/11
Oh, FP.
*laugh track*
guestuser
12/08/11
*Hits Gigi's gun hand with a sword hit, then fires a plasma beam at the gun, destroying it*
*Laughs at DarkMario1000's failure*
*Watches in horror as Gigi pulls out another gun*
Anyway, I love how nobody noticed what Caiya and Kaxo were doing until now.
Fusion Kirby
12/09/11
If it's the return of FP, THEN IT MUST BE THE RETURN OF THE EVIL PEG.
EDIT: Have you ever considered giving Hali the Stone Ability? Or Crash?
Tygah
12/10/11
To be honest, FP is my favorite cameo, and one of my favorite characters (but you'd better not let that go to your head, FP.)
Striffen Cloud
12/10/11
Beautiful.
Sky Verum
12/11/11
Yeah, saia looks pissed at a certain red brute.
plasma_knight303
05/09/12
Caiya is still sleepeh someone has to carry her
12/07/11
And, as usual, FP is himself and the other cameos suffer.
contradiction123
12/07/11
FP needs to get some hobbies....
Gigi19972010
12/07/11
*G-U-N*
Yes, I have no life.
DarkMario1000
12/07/11
T_T What are/were Kaxo and Caiya doing?
DarkNut255
12/07/11
Hm… Saia and Caiya…
Oh, and YET again, Kirby takes the Client.
plasma_knight303
12/07/11
heh, that's pretty funny. Saia and Caiya.
BattleStarX
12/08/11
I love how everyone is oblivious as to what Kaxo and Caiya are up to except Saia.
Falcon_Pawnch75
12/08/11
Kaxo and FP in the same group. Two dangerously destructive minds working together...
Oh dear, I 'll like to see how this will work out =D
DarkMario1000
12/08/11
If someone knows what is going on with Kaxo and Caiya, say it! >~<
guestuser
12/08/11
DarkMario1000
To my knowledge, Caiya is annoying Kaxo, Kaxo grabs her to do something violent, but accidently pulls her on top of him squishing him. Then instead of getting off, Caiya falls asleep. Then in this comic, Kaxo throws her off him, and Saia looks at Kaxo disapprovingly because he threw her into a wall.
Sleepy Kirby
12/08/11
Oh, FP.
*laugh track*
guestuser
12/08/11
*Hits Gigi's gun hand with a sword hit, then fires a plasma beam at the gun, destroying it*
*Laughs at DarkMario1000's failure*
*Watches in horror as Gigi pulls out another gun*
Anyway, I love how nobody noticed what Caiya and Kaxo were doing until now.
Fusion Kirby
12/09/11
If it's the return of FP, THEN IT MUST BE THE RETURN OF THE EVIL PEG.
EDIT: Have you ever considered giving Hali the Stone Ability? Or Crash?
Tygah
12/10/11
To be honest, FP is my favorite cameo, and one of my favorite characters (but you'd better not let that go to your head, FP.)
Striffen Cloud
12/10/11
Beautiful.
Sky Verum
12/11/11
Yeah, saia looks pissed at a certain red brute.
plasma_knight303
05/09/12
Caiya is still sleepeh someone has to carry her
Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
These sorts of switch-and-door puzzles is something common to Kirby games, and this exact puzzle is taken directly from the games unchanged. Though having multiple characters makes it a bit easier to go through.
Original Author's Comment:
12/11/11
I think this is the first time we've seen Shadik run since To The Tower - Part 44.
FP, u so silly.
Have you ever heard a door go vrrnp?
I think this is the first time we've seen Shadik run since To The Tower - Part 44.
FP, u so silly.
Have you ever heard a door go vrrnp?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Foxfoxy34
12/11/11
Why don't you try pressing a switch FP
FP:DIE I TELL YOU!!!!
Shadik can you press it for him?
BattleStarX
12/11/11
No, I've never heard a door go *vrrnp* but that does sound awfully familiar. *sniffs the air.*
On a side note, I hate those puzzles so much, though the Bomb power did make them INFINITELY easier.
Andromeda Lazuli
12/11/11
I'm betting that I'm not gonna be able to take him seriously the entire time. XD
guestuser
12/11/11
@clasby
Yeah, that makes sen-...wait.
Couldn't Shadik have just teleported there without having to go through the puzzle?
Muddykip64
12/11/11
@SecretAgent000: Probobly, but that would mess up the plot...
contradiction123
12/11/11
@SecretAgent000: Darn! beaten to the punch.
Tygah
12/11/11
I hate those puzzles too, and since I almost never have bomb, I usually just use the power I have to shoot the buttons, which is not easy since stone is one of my favorites.
guestuser
12/11/11
LOL FP has issues. XD
Falcon_Pawnch75
12/12/11
NO, YOU HAVE ISSUES.
...it's funny, out of the abilities the Kirbies have, my Yoyo is the best one for this puzzle because of its long range.
guestuser
12/12/11
Wait, KAXO is advocating coordination and teamwork? IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD.
Nice new avatar, BTW, Ulti. Who's the Umbreon with the Ulitmate Bandana?
1ce_k1d
12/12/11
Nice avitar UY.
THE'RE GONNA SUFFICATE!
Flying Peacock
12/12/11
* Shadik uses shadow jump
And might shadow jump Kaxo in the maze,
then get himself and FP out
DarkMario1000
12/12/11
Looks awesome.
T_T My new animation is over the limit!
Sleepy Kirby
12/12/11
WHAT'S UP WITH YOUR PIC?????/D/F/F/VF//V/1
guestuser
12/12/11
All my doors Vrrrrp.
guestuser
12/12/11
Eh, I prefer the doors that make that woosh sound. I like the woosh. It is the door saying, "I am closed."
guestuser
12/12/11
Doors are like computers. You don't want them to talk.
plasma_knight303
12/13/11
BOMBZ! BOMBZZZZ!!! *chucks a million bombs at BattleStarX*
bomb is my fav. ability. nothing beats it in my eyes.
guestuser
12/13/11
Does Shadik have a facepalm sprite?
guestuser
12/13/11
I don't see why not, considering the fact that the whole team are recolors of Kirby.
guestuser
12/13/11
maybe they will escape but FP will find a stringed platform and... you know the rest
guestuser
12/13/11
maybe they will escape but FP will find a stringed platform and... you know the rest
Air Man1 21
12/14/11
kirbystar
Don't you mean thinking?
@...
Kaxo could always just push the button again and let them out (or at least FP). Why did you repeat yourself?
Lastly, my "s" key is broken and will be stupid sometimes.
guestuser
12/14/11
i think it gliched
guestuser
12/14/11
I've heard a door say, "Thank you for making me happy." (HGTG reference)
guestuser
12/15/11
@Poyo and BlagH:
...Dangit, no one got my joke. (It was a reference to Kim Possible, and the villain Se~nor Senior Senior: When Ron mentioned that his doors made a "woosh" sound, that's how he responded.)
WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000
02/12/13
HA!!! FP's as funny as Saito!!!
12/11/11
Why don't you try pressing a switch FP
FP:DIE I TELL YOU!!!!
Shadik can you press it for him?
BattleStarX
12/11/11
No, I've never heard a door go *vrrnp* but that does sound awfully familiar. *sniffs the air.*
On a side note, I hate those puzzles so much, though the Bomb power did make them INFINITELY easier.
Andromeda Lazuli
12/11/11
I'm betting that I'm not gonna be able to take him seriously the entire time. XD
guestuser
12/11/11
@clasby
Yeah, that makes sen-...wait.
Couldn't Shadik have just teleported there without having to go through the puzzle?
Muddykip64
12/11/11
@SecretAgent000: Probobly, but that would mess up the plot...
contradiction123
12/11/11
@SecretAgent000: Darn! beaten to the punch.
Tygah
12/11/11
I hate those puzzles too, and since I almost never have bomb, I usually just use the power I have to shoot the buttons, which is not easy since stone is one of my favorites.
guestuser
12/11/11
LOL FP has issues. XD
Falcon_Pawnch75
12/12/11
NO, YOU HAVE ISSUES.
...it's funny, out of the abilities the Kirbies have, my Yoyo is the best one for this puzzle because of its long range.
guestuser
12/12/11
Wait, KAXO is advocating coordination and teamwork? IT'S THE END OF THE WORLD.
Nice new avatar, BTW, Ulti. Who's the Umbreon with the Ulitmate Bandana?
1ce_k1d
12/12/11
Nice avitar UY.
THE'RE GONNA SUFFICATE!
Flying Peacock
12/12/11
* Shadik uses shadow jump
And might shadow jump Kaxo in the maze,
then get himself and FP out
DarkMario1000
12/12/11
Looks awesome.
T_T My new animation is over the limit!
Sleepy Kirby
12/12/11
WHAT'S UP WITH YOUR PIC?????/D/F/F/VF//V/1
guestuser
12/12/11
All my doors Vrrrrp.
guestuser
12/12/11
Eh, I prefer the doors that make that woosh sound. I like the woosh. It is the door saying, "I am closed."
guestuser
12/12/11
Doors are like computers. You don't want them to talk.
plasma_knight303
12/13/11
BOMBZ! BOMBZZZZ!!! *chucks a million bombs at BattleStarX*
bomb is my fav. ability. nothing beats it in my eyes.
guestuser
12/13/11
Does Shadik have a facepalm sprite?
guestuser
12/13/11
I don't see why not, considering the fact that the whole team are recolors of Kirby.
guestuser
12/13/11
maybe they will escape but FP will find a stringed platform and... you know the rest
guestuser
12/13/11
maybe they will escape but FP will find a stringed platform and... you know the rest
Air Man1 21
12/14/11
kirbystar
Don't you mean thinking?
@...
Kaxo could always just push the button again and let them out (or at least FP). Why did you repeat yourself?
Lastly, my "s" key is broken and will be stupid sometimes.
guestuser
12/14/11
i think it gliched
guestuser
12/14/11
I've heard a door say, "Thank you for making me happy." (HGTG reference)
guestuser
12/15/11
@Poyo and BlagH:
...Dangit, no one got my joke. (It was a reference to Kim Possible, and the villain Se~nor Senior Senior: When Ron mentioned that his doors made a "woosh" sound, that's how he responded.)
WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000
02/12/13
HA!!! FP's as funny as Saito!!!
Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
This is a repeat gag from when Kirby said the same stuff to FP, before entering a dead-end room with a wooden stake. The gag is mostly the dead-end part.
When Kirby enters water in the games, he spontaneously gains a snorkel and goggles. They're simply cosmetics, so him suddenly getting them here is just based on the game mechanics.
When Kirby enters water in the games, he spontaneously gains a snorkel and goggles. They're simply cosmetics, so him suddenly getting them here is just based on the game mechanics.
Original Author's Comment:
12/15/11
Kirby shouldn't have opened his mouth.
Kirby shouldn't have opened his mouth.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
12/15/11
...where DOES Kirby keep that snorkel when not in use, anyway?
Tygah
12/15/11
A better question would be how does it work when the hole is underwater. But I've learned not to question Kirby Logic.
Striffen Cloud
12/15/11
Tygah: The snorkel part is purely aesthetic. It has a magical mouthpiece.
contradiction123
12/15/11
Actually, I read in the Guinness Book of World Records that Kirby can hold his breath "for ages," so that might explain it. Maybe not, though.
Gigi19972010
12/15/11
Kirbies don't breath. At least I thought that before Kirby Mass Attack. Anyway, it's video games' logic.
BattleStarX
12/15/11
Tygah: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rebreather
Those snorkels are also good for keeping the water out of your eyes. Plus, they make kirbies look cuter. Almost as cute as the little floaty ring you get in Return to Dreamland on the surface of water.
((By the way, UY, you're kinda funny when you enter Rage Quit mode.))
Tygah
12/15/11
Magical mouthpieces and rebreathers make sense, but it makes me wonder about Kirby 64's underwater stages...He could still inhale D:
DarkMario1000
12/16/11
DON'T QUESTION NINTENDO® LOGIC!
Sleepy Kirby
12/16/11
The Cave strikes back.
foxpuff
12/16/11
There might be a lot more rooms like this one.
guestuser
12/16/11
@KirbyCC
radios and kirby logic
guestuser
12/17/11
I wonder how the Kirbies will fair in the Great Cave's harder puzlles. :O!!!!
guestuser
12/17/11
"...I hate you Phan Phan!"
"...Noooooooooooooooooooooo!"
"...All that for a Wheel."
You're hilarious, UY.
plasma_knight303
12/18/11
Kiblar's gonna drown.
guestuser
12/19/11
Cute little avatar you have there, Ulti!
guestuser
12/19/11
Agreed, that avatar is so cute. :3
Darkhog
12/20/11
UY, I know you may have other responsibilities, but could you make new comic a bit before X-Mas? Especially it's a sprite comic, not hand drawn like my (shut up, I know I used Inkscape, but had to move mouse by HAND! So it's hand-drawn): http://kirbys-adventures.smackjeeves.com/
12/15/11
...where DOES Kirby keep that snorkel when not in use, anyway?
Tygah
12/15/11
A better question would be how does it work when the hole is underwater. But I've learned not to question Kirby Logic.
Striffen Cloud
12/15/11
Tygah: The snorkel part is purely aesthetic. It has a magical mouthpiece.
contradiction123
12/15/11
Actually, I read in the Guinness Book of World Records that Kirby can hold his breath "for ages," so that might explain it. Maybe not, though.
Gigi19972010
12/15/11
Kirbies don't breath. At least I thought that before Kirby Mass Attack. Anyway, it's video games' logic.
BattleStarX
12/15/11
Tygah: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rebreather
Those snorkels are also good for keeping the water out of your eyes. Plus, they make kirbies look cuter. Almost as cute as the little floaty ring you get in Return to Dreamland on the surface of water.
((By the way, UY, you're kinda funny when you enter Rage Quit mode.))
Tygah
12/15/11
Magical mouthpieces and rebreathers make sense, but it makes me wonder about Kirby 64's underwater stages...He could still inhale D:
DarkMario1000
12/16/11
DON'T QUESTION NINTENDO® LOGIC!
Sleepy Kirby
12/16/11
The Cave strikes back.
foxpuff
12/16/11
There might be a lot more rooms like this one.
guestuser
12/16/11
@KirbyCC
radios and kirby logic
guestuser
12/17/11
I wonder how the Kirbies will fair in the Great Cave's harder puzlles. :O!!!!
guestuser
12/17/11
"...I hate you Phan Phan!"
"...Noooooooooooooooooooooo!"
"...All that for a Wheel."
You're hilarious, UY.
plasma_knight303
12/18/11
Kiblar's gonna drown.
guestuser
12/19/11
Cute little avatar you have there, Ulti!
guestuser
12/19/11
Agreed, that avatar is so cute. :3
Darkhog
12/20/11
UY, I know you may have other responsibilities, but could you make new comic a bit before X-Mas? Especially it's a sprite comic, not hand drawn like my (shut up, I know I used Inkscape, but had to move mouse by HAND! So it's hand-drawn): http://kirbys-adventures.smackjeeves.com/
Part 9
Ulti's Notes:
Lava in Kirby games is treated like a simple hazard that deals a bit of damage, as opposed to instantly killing a character from touch, or burning them from a close distance like real-life lava. So, Caiya here is fine, just a bit temporarily-singed.
Original Author's Comment:
12/21/11
It's my birthday! Let's celebrate by burning Caiya in molten lava! Yaaaaaaay!
One last update before my break!
It's my birthday! Let's celebrate by burning Caiya in molten lava! Yaaaaaaay!
One last update before my break!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
321TaTer
12/21/11
Happy Birthday, Ulti! :D
Fusion Kirby
12/21/11
@UY: Happy Birthday!
Does anyone else know what else today is?
Flying Peacock
12/21/11
and watch your step so you don't break the platforms...even though they aren't breaking at all
Djoing
12/21/11
And then she died.
Alienoid
12/21/11
Happy Birthday Ultimate Yoshi!
1ce_k1d
12/21/11
See my coment in the latest page in Yoshi and Kirby 2.0!
BattleStarX
12/21/11
Happy Birthday, UY.
By the way, even if it is just DDD, Taunting the boss, not good. Never works out in the end.
guestuser
12/21/11
Once a year we celebrate with stupid hats and plastic plates the fact that you were able to make another trip around the sun!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ULTI!
For those of you who don't get what I was doing, go to YouTube and look up "Happy Birthday Tord". It's hilarious. XD
guestuser
12/21/11
Happy B-Day, dood! More beating up your characters, too! More yay!! :D
MentalKnight64
12/21/11
what 1ce_k1d said
guestuser
12/21/11
let's hope you get overcooked donust from cayia's mouth!
plasma_knight303
12/21/11
Happy birthday! :D
DarkNut255
12/21/11
Happy Birthday Ulti!
Evil Eye
12/22/11
Happy birthday and best of luck.
Gigi19972010
12/22/11
HAPPY BIRTHDAY AGAIN.
I just realized that your birthday is in the same day the world will end on 2012.
Yeah.
Tygah
12/22/11
And birthday...And I guess Saia's just disappointed, not worried at all? Well, Kirby survives lava pretty well so I guess Caiya can too.
Cocytus
12/22/11
happy birthday!
guestuser
12/22/11
Happy birthday Ulti, and a Merry Christmahannukwaanzica to you all.
Striffen Cloud
12/22/11
Oh cool, it's my best friend's boyfriend's birthday, too!
Happy birthday!
guestuser
12/22/11
Hope your having a good time!
Foxfoxy34
12/22/11
Happy Birthday,you get to do whatever you want-OH NO HE'S GETTING MAD WITH POWER!
Ackirby
12/22/11
:D
Black-Eye
12/22/11
Happy Birthday! Also, this comic is awesome
Air Man1 21
12/22/11
Happy Birthday
As for the comic, it is a very good thing that Caiya is with Saia and not Kaxo.
foxpuff
12/22/11
Happy (late) birthday! Also, that is what happens when you're walking over lava while tired.
Sleepy Kirby
12/23/11
I'ma firing my HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
guestuser
12/24/11
Ultimate Yoshi
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!
...and stuff.
guestuser
12/26/11
Let's spread Christmahyannukwanzika cheer!
guestuser
12/26/11
Happy late birthday, UY!
Also, Gigi, the Maya's apparently counted wrong, thus making the day the world will end not UY's birthday.
guestuser
12/27/11
Yay, another update!
...And the platforms aren't breaking!
...And the return of Bwarr.!
guestuser
12/31/11
BattlestarX told me that you do cameos!
So please accept mine.
Name: Lily
Species: mainly purple and some blue Kirby
Purpose: Newest division A recruit
Stored ability: Beam
Personality: Smart, sweet, creative, and Brave
Ultimate Yoshi
12/31/11
Apparently BSX didn't tell you about the part where THERE ARE RULES TO CAMEOING.
guestuser
12/31/11
Ultimate Yoshi
Oh, I didn't know about there being rules
guestuser
12/31/11
@Mewme:
Yeah, that sounds suspiciously Mary Sueish.
guestuser
12/31/11
By the way, Ulti, your break's over, so... why haven't there been any updates?
guestuser
12/31/11
@Jarkes
????????
guestuser
12/31/11
@Mewme:
"Mary Sue" is a colloquial term used to describe/define fan characters (or official characters) who: A. Do everything right, B. All the characters love this character, C. Sometimes used as a mouthpiece for the author to express his or her views on anything, D. Have no apparent flaws, and/or E. Exists so that the author can pair herself (it's usually a female author when this happens) with the main character of a series, or another character in the series, and demonize all the other characters who could have potential relationships with that character. This one's an "and/or" because that's not always the case. Perfect example from an official, best selling work: Bella Swan. Keep in mind, these are generalizations, and not all OCs (Original Characters) are Mary Sues or representations of the author. For that matter, not all Mary Sues fit all of these criteria.
Now, regarding your character. The only criteria she really fits are the "Newest Division A recruit" (which is established in-story as being incredibly hard to do) and the fact that the "Personality" bit has no character flaws. That's it, though. I'm NOT accusing you of criteria C and E.
guestuser
12/31/11
@Jarkes
Oh, thanks. I guess that I have some cameo editing to do!
guestuser
12/31/11
Name: Lily
Personality: Smart and sweet but goes a little nuts when there is danger.
Species: mainly purple and some blue Kirby
Purpose: Part of the newest division
Stored ability: Beam
guestuser
12/31/11
@Mewme
You have to give a sprite sheet for your cameos.
guestuser
01/01/12
Sprite sheet???! :0
guestuser
01/01/12
Ulti posted the Rules of making a cameo a long time ago on the News page. Even if you did have a sprite sheet, you don't qualify. Sorry.
guestuser
01/02/12
Err, Ulti, just a recomendation, but Talzo and Aika's portraits in the cast page are quite similar, and someone who looks at them and has not read the comic may think they are working together.
guestuser
01/03/12
You're right about that, actually, they do look similar.
Icetoa180
01/04/12
Happy late birthday!
guestuser
01/08/12
No new comic?
guestuser
01/09/12
@fireKirbyFirekirbyFireKirb
I guess he's working on it or on vacation still. Just wait.
Gigi19972010
01/12/12
I'm having nightmares about this comic. And, like, it's not the first time.
Just don't ask.
Mint612
01/14/12
Happy really late birthday!I haven't been reading this in awhile.
BattleStarX
01/15/12
@fireKirbyFirekirbyFireKirb (Guest):
Even sprite comic authors need a break from time to time. Sure, our comics aren't as physically demanding as a hand drawn one, but they can be more mentally demanding, since you have a limited number of poses to work with, even with edits.
guestuser
01/22/12
Wait since Caiya has a stored ability ice how would it affect her. Oh and btw, please answer this, why... AM I BANNED FROM COMMENTING!?!?!?!
guestuser
01/25/12
He's probably just taking a break; I've seen him around on the BitF Forums.
guestuser
02/05/12
I don't know either, really.
Luigi_96
02/06/12
Alright, I feel obligated to say something... Ultimate Yoshi told me that he is currently unable to make comics because of a lack of photoshop on his computer, and that's what he uses for making comics. I don't know how he lost it, but that's what he told me.
guestuser
02/07/12
I've been thinking about this, and I figured he lost the program he used. Coupled with something I read once in which he said "I always wondered how Paint users recolor," I figured that it wasn't a default and was not easy to replace.
Of course, I didn't know it was Photoshop, and I thought that that theory was unlikely...
Ah, well.
kuruby
02/10/12
I wish he can continue this comic soon, good luck with the photoshop.
Luigi_96
02/10/12
...Is this section named after the tune in Kirby Mass Attack??
12/21/11
Happy Birthday, Ulti! :D
Fusion Kirby
12/21/11
@UY: Happy Birthday!
Does anyone else know what else today is?
Flying Peacock
12/21/11
and watch your step so you don't break the platforms...even though they aren't breaking at all
Djoing
12/21/11
And then she died.
Alienoid
12/21/11
Happy Birthday Ultimate Yoshi!
1ce_k1d
12/21/11
See my coment in the latest page in Yoshi and Kirby 2.0!
BattleStarX
12/21/11
Happy Birthday, UY.
By the way, even if it is just DDD, Taunting the boss, not good. Never works out in the end.
guestuser
12/21/11
Once a year we celebrate with stupid hats and plastic plates the fact that you were able to make another trip around the sun!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ULTI!
For those of you who don't get what I was doing, go to YouTube and look up "Happy Birthday Tord". It's hilarious. XD
guestuser
12/21/11
Happy B-Day, dood! More beating up your characters, too! More yay!! :D
MentalKnight64
12/21/11
what 1ce_k1d said
guestuser
12/21/11
let's hope you get overcooked donust from cayia's mouth!
plasma_knight303
12/21/11
Happy birthday! :D
DarkNut255
12/21/11
Happy Birthday Ulti!
Evil Eye
12/22/11
Happy birthday and best of luck.
Gigi19972010
12/22/11
HAPPY BIRTHDAY AGAIN.
I just realized that your birthday is in the same day the world will end on 2012.
Yeah.
Tygah
12/22/11
And birthday...And I guess Saia's just disappointed, not worried at all? Well, Kirby survives lava pretty well so I guess Caiya can too.
Cocytus
12/22/11
happy birthday!
guestuser
12/22/11
Happy birthday Ulti, and a Merry Christmahannukwaanzica to you all.
Striffen Cloud
12/22/11
Oh cool, it's my best friend's boyfriend's birthday, too!
Happy birthday!
guestuser
12/22/11
Hope your having a good time!
Foxfoxy34
12/22/11
Happy Birthday,you get to do whatever you want-OH NO HE'S GETTING MAD WITH POWER!
Ackirby
12/22/11
:D
Black-Eye
12/22/11
Happy Birthday! Also, this comic is awesome
Air Man1 21
12/22/11
Happy Birthday
As for the comic, it is a very good thing that Caiya is with Saia and not Kaxo.
foxpuff
12/22/11
Happy (late) birthday! Also, that is what happens when you're walking over lava while tired.
Sleepy Kirby
12/23/11
I'ma firing my HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
guestuser
12/24/11
Ultimate Yoshi
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!
...and stuff.
guestuser
12/26/11
Let's spread Christmahyannukwanzika cheer!
guestuser
12/26/11
Happy late birthday, UY!
Also, Gigi, the Maya's apparently counted wrong, thus making the day the world will end not UY's birthday.
guestuser
12/27/11
Yay, another update!
...And the platforms aren't breaking!
...And the return of Bwarr.!
guestuser
12/31/11
BattlestarX told me that you do cameos!
So please accept mine.
Name: Lily
Species: mainly purple and some blue Kirby
Purpose: Newest division A recruit
Stored ability: Beam
Personality: Smart, sweet, creative, and Brave
Ultimate Yoshi
12/31/11
Apparently BSX didn't tell you about the part where THERE ARE RULES TO CAMEOING.
guestuser
12/31/11
Ultimate Yoshi
Oh, I didn't know about there being rules
guestuser
12/31/11
@Mewme:
Yeah, that sounds suspiciously Mary Sueish.
guestuser
12/31/11
By the way, Ulti, your break's over, so... why haven't there been any updates?
guestuser
12/31/11
@Jarkes
????????
guestuser
12/31/11
@Mewme:
"Mary Sue" is a colloquial term used to describe/define fan characters (or official characters) who: A. Do everything right, B. All the characters love this character, C. Sometimes used as a mouthpiece for the author to express his or her views on anything, D. Have no apparent flaws, and/or E. Exists so that the author can pair herself (it's usually a female author when this happens) with the main character of a series, or another character in the series, and demonize all the other characters who could have potential relationships with that character. This one's an "and/or" because that's not always the case. Perfect example from an official, best selling work: Bella Swan. Keep in mind, these are generalizations, and not all OCs (Original Characters) are Mary Sues or representations of the author. For that matter, not all Mary Sues fit all of these criteria.
Now, regarding your character. The only criteria she really fits are the "Newest Division A recruit" (which is established in-story as being incredibly hard to do) and the fact that the "Personality" bit has no character flaws. That's it, though. I'm NOT accusing you of criteria C and E.
guestuser
12/31/11
@Jarkes
Oh, thanks. I guess that I have some cameo editing to do!
guestuser
12/31/11
Name: Lily
Personality: Smart and sweet but goes a little nuts when there is danger.
Species: mainly purple and some blue Kirby
Purpose: Part of the newest division
Stored ability: Beam
guestuser
12/31/11
@Mewme
You have to give a sprite sheet for your cameos.
guestuser
01/01/12
Sprite sheet???! :0
guestuser
01/01/12
Ulti posted the Rules of making a cameo a long time ago on the News page. Even if you did have a sprite sheet, you don't qualify. Sorry.
guestuser
01/02/12
Err, Ulti, just a recomendation, but Talzo and Aika's portraits in the cast page are quite similar, and someone who looks at them and has not read the comic may think they are working together.
guestuser
01/03/12
You're right about that, actually, they do look similar.
Icetoa180
01/04/12
Happy late birthday!
guestuser
01/08/12
No new comic?
guestuser
01/09/12
@fireKirbyFirekirbyFireKirb
I guess he's working on it or on vacation still. Just wait.
Gigi19972010
01/12/12
I'm having nightmares about this comic. And, like, it's not the first time.
Just don't ask.
Mint612
01/14/12
Happy really late birthday!I haven't been reading this in awhile.
BattleStarX
01/15/12
@fireKirbyFirekirbyFireKirb (Guest):
Even sprite comic authors need a break from time to time. Sure, our comics aren't as physically demanding as a hand drawn one, but they can be more mentally demanding, since you have a limited number of poses to work with, even with edits.
guestuser
01/22/12
Wait since Caiya has a stored ability ice how would it affect her. Oh and btw, please answer this, why... AM I BANNED FROM COMMENTING!?!?!?!
guestuser
01/25/12
He's probably just taking a break; I've seen him around on the BitF Forums.
guestuser
02/05/12
I don't know either, really.
Luigi_96
02/06/12
Alright, I feel obligated to say something... Ultimate Yoshi told me that he is currently unable to make comics because of a lack of photoshop on his computer, and that's what he uses for making comics. I don't know how he lost it, but that's what he told me.
guestuser
02/07/12
I've been thinking about this, and I figured he lost the program he used. Coupled with something I read once in which he said "I always wondered how Paint users recolor," I figured that it wasn't a default and was not easy to replace.
Of course, I didn't know it was Photoshop, and I thought that that theory was unlikely...
Ah, well.
kuruby
02/10/12
I wish he can continue this comic soon, good luck with the photoshop.
Luigi_96
02/10/12
...Is this section named after the tune in Kirby Mass Attack??
Part 10
Ulti's Notes:
After my 15th birthday, I got a new laptop and it took me a while to get Photoshop on the computer for me to make new comic pages with. This prompted a two month break, which I think gave me a good amount of time away from the comic. It didn't quite help the segment, though, because I think it also threw me off my game on what was already a subtly struggling plot.
Original Author's Comment:
02/11/12
HEYGUYS SORRY
I UM
KINDA LOST PHOTOSHOP
WHEN I GOT A NEW COMPUTER
NO PHOTOSHOP
SO
I HAD TO WAIT
WAIT A LOT
FOR
NEW PHOTOSHOP
WHICH I GOT
TODAY
SO
YAAAAY~
PREPARE YOURSELVES FOR A COMIC ONSLAUGHT (HOPEFULLY)
ALSO TORKIRBY SAYS HI.
HEYGUYS SORRY
I UM
KINDA LOST PHOTOSHOP
WHEN I GOT A NEW COMPUTER
NO PHOTOSHOP
SO
I HAD TO WAIT
WAIT A LOT
FOR
NEW PHOTOSHOP
WHICH I GOT
TODAY
SO
YAAAAY~
PREPARE YOURSELVES FOR A COMIC ONSLAUGHT (HOPEFULLY)
ALSO TORKIRBY SAYS HI.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Mint612
02/11/12
OH MA GAWD YOU UPDATED!CELEBREATE
Luigi_96
02/11/12
YES!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!! ^_^ YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!! Okay, I'm gonna stop now. Maybe. :D Oh, and LOL to the comic!! Was this segment's name based on the tune from Kirby mass attack??
Gigi19972010
02/11/12
*Has just watched a TV article about 12/21/2012*
*Goes checks favorites*
OMG KIRBY ADVENTURE WAS UPDATED?! THAT'S WHAT THE END OF THE WORLD MEANS! IT'S EARLIER THAN EVERYONE THOUGHT! RUN TO THE HILLS! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!
Huh, I missed you. :3
(Some guys will just wait three more hours and will understand the coincidences. EVERYTHING IS SO WEIRD!)
Alienoid
02/11/12
Huzzah!
1ce_k1d
02/11/12
Something seems different...
NAAAH. That'd be silly.
DarkMario1000
02/11/12
*Me being nonchalant* Welcome back! (Even though some knew you weren't dead, a.k.a. The Skrawlers).
And FP still being…FP…
321TaTer
02/11/12
Yayz updaet
Muddykip64
02/11/12
Yay!
Kumaria18
02/11/12
GASP! You updated... OMG IT'S WITCHCRAFT!!! Haha just kidding! Welcome back! I've missed this comic! =D
BattleStarX
02/11/12
Ah, Kaxo, how I missed you.
I also missed your comics too, UY, don't think it was just your kookie characters that I missed.
Air Man1 21
02/11/12
Now I see why pressing the button again wouldn't help...
But anyways welcome back. I suggest you back things up so extended vacations don't last 3 times as long.
Falcon_Pawnch75
02/11/12
OH MY GOD AN UPDATE
Silly Kaxo. Taking me seriously is one of the stupidest things you can do :3
Icetoa180
02/11/12
YayZ! The comic is back! Woo!
kuruby
02/11/12
I'm happy you come back, and also good one ^^
guestuser
02/12/12
Welcome back! And... uh... uh... enjoy! *throws candies and Yoshi cookies around then walks away*
Ackirby
02/12/12
Gasp! The comic is back!?
Sleepy Kirby
02/12/12
MADNESS!
guestuser
02/12/12
*celebrates*
guestuser
02/12/12
New comic, and aided by antialiased text too!
guestuser
02/13/12
That Kirby is a witch I tells ya! BEERN HIM/HER BERN HIM/HER BERRRRRRRRRRRRNNNN HIMMMM/HERRRRRRRRRRRR!
guestuser
02/13/12
It's here! It's here! It's fina-lully here!
There's no more time for escapache, it's-
Reply if you got the reference!
Koopa1018
02/26/12
-A quote from Strong Sad! And it's "expectasche," not "escapache."
Pikaboy777
10/25/13
FP has some issues...
guestuser
06/28/14
Hi to You Torkirby!
Ultizeta
07/23/17
When I got a new computer back in 2012, my text settings were changed. It took me a bit to figure out how to get it to look the way it used to, and in the meantime I just put up with different looking text for a few pages. Now, I can go back and fix these pages to have consistent-looking text.
02/11/12
OH MA GAWD YOU UPDATED!CELEBREATE
Luigi_96
02/11/12
YES!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!! ^_^ YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!! Okay, I'm gonna stop now. Maybe. :D Oh, and LOL to the comic!! Was this segment's name based on the tune from Kirby mass attack??
Gigi19972010
02/11/12
*Has just watched a TV article about 12/21/2012*
*Goes checks favorites*
OMG KIRBY ADVENTURE WAS UPDATED?! THAT'S WHAT THE END OF THE WORLD MEANS! IT'S EARLIER THAN EVERYONE THOUGHT! RUN TO THE HILLS! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!
Huh, I missed you. :3
(Some guys will just wait three more hours and will understand the coincidences. EVERYTHING IS SO WEIRD!)
Alienoid
02/11/12
Huzzah!
1ce_k1d
02/11/12
Something seems different...
NAAAH. That'd be silly.
DarkMario1000
02/11/12
*Me being nonchalant* Welcome back! (Even though some knew you weren't dead, a.k.a. The Skrawlers).
And FP still being…FP…
321TaTer
02/11/12
Yayz updaet
Muddykip64
02/11/12
Yay!
Kumaria18
02/11/12
GASP! You updated... OMG IT'S WITCHCRAFT!!! Haha just kidding! Welcome back! I've missed this comic! =D
BattleStarX
02/11/12
Ah, Kaxo, how I missed you.
I also missed your comics too, UY, don't think it was just your kookie characters that I missed.
Air Man1 21
02/11/12
Now I see why pressing the button again wouldn't help...
But anyways welcome back. I suggest you back things up so extended vacations don't last 3 times as long.
Falcon_Pawnch75
02/11/12
OH MY GOD AN UPDATE
Silly Kaxo. Taking me seriously is one of the stupidest things you can do :3
Icetoa180
02/11/12
YayZ! The comic is back! Woo!
kuruby
02/11/12
I'm happy you come back, and also good one ^^
guestuser
02/12/12
Welcome back! And... uh... uh... enjoy! *throws candies and Yoshi cookies around then walks away*
Ackirby
02/12/12
Gasp! The comic is back!?
Sleepy Kirby
02/12/12
MADNESS!
guestuser
02/12/12
*celebrates*
guestuser
02/12/12
New comic, and aided by antialiased text too!
guestuser
02/13/12
That Kirby is a witch I tells ya! BEERN HIM/HER BERN HIM/HER BERRRRRRRRRRRRNNNN HIMMMM/HERRRRRRRRRRRR!
guestuser
02/13/12
It's here! It's here! It's fina-lully here!
There's no more time for escapache, it's-
Reply if you got the reference!
Koopa1018
02/26/12
-A quote from Strong Sad! And it's "expectasche," not "escapache."
Pikaboy777
10/25/13
FP has some issues...
guestuser
06/28/14
Hi to You Torkirby!
Ultizeta
07/23/17
When I got a new computer back in 2012, my text settings were changed. It took me a bit to figure out how to get it to look the way it used to, and in the meantime I just put up with different looking text for a few pages. Now, I can go back and fix these pages to have consistent-looking text.
Part 11
Original Author's Comment:
02/12/12
Sorry about the lack of a comic yesterday. I'm totally out of excuses, though, at this point, cause of that two month hiatus.
WHATEVER.
Also, I made a recorded Creative Process of making this comic, it should be uploaded by, like, 4, maximum. When it's out, I'll be sure to post a link.
Edit: Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3cCNPGAslh8
Sorry about the lack of a comic yesterday. I'm totally out of excuses, though, at this point, cause of that two month hiatus.
WHATEVER.
Also, I made a recorded Creative Process of making this comic, it should be uploaded by, like, 4, maximum. When it's out, I'll be sure to post a link.
Edit: Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3cCNPGAslh8
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
02/12/12
Hmm... the font in the speech bubbles is a bit different...
So are you going to start updating Y&K again soon?
kuruby
02/12/12
Hey, tath's one of the mobs of kirby mass attack, isnt it?
Sleepy Kirby
02/12/12
A-maze-ing!
padam tshz
Luigi_96
02/12/12
YAY a Beanbon!! ^_^ They're really fun to draw. :P
Gigi19972010
02/12/12
It's not like the Beanbon has something to do with the title, since both are from Mass Attack.
Of course not.
guestuser
02/12/12
^Implying that's not obvious.
BattleStarX
02/12/12
Hmm... makes me wanna play KRtDL again, I love the Leaf power.
Must improve my spriter skills to work that into KSSU style sprites...
Ackirby
02/13/12
Neat creative video. I wondered how you make your comics so well.
DarkMario1000
02/13/12
I'm guessing that's an enemy from Mass Attack or RtDL…yep, still haven't gotten either nor 3DS games.
guestuser
02/13/12
Yep, it's a Beanbon from Mass Attack.
guestuser
02/13/12
I hope you'll get back to your other comics soon too. BTW.: Losing Photoshop is not an excuse. There's lot of other free gfx software. You can even make comics in paint (given you don't need anything too fancy like rotation). But best graphics software, even better than Photoshop is GIMP which you can download for free @gimp.org. If you don't like windows floating around, you may use GIMP's fork called GIMPshop - all functions of GIMP in photoshop-like ui.
guestuser
02/13/12
Strange strange strange...Spy: Indeead.
Luigi_96
02/13/12
He was gonna get Photoshop back anyway, I'm sure he didn't wanna get used to a whole new program, just to have to re-adjust to Photoshop. It makes sense to me.
Also, GIMPshop? Is that something you have to download seperate?
Icetoa180
02/13/12
It doesnt matter if there are anymore slight breaks. Also, im uploading this from my 3ds in mexico. Thats what i call dedication!
guestuser
02/14/12
OK, understood, Luigi_96. And not, GIMPshop is stand-alone program. You can have both GIMP and GIMPshop, but you can have GIMPshop alone too.
Luigi_96
02/14/12
Ah, okay.
02/12/12
Hmm... the font in the speech bubbles is a bit different...
So are you going to start updating Y&K again soon?
kuruby
02/12/12
Hey, tath's one of the mobs of kirby mass attack, isnt it?
Sleepy Kirby
02/12/12
A-maze-ing!
padam tshz
Luigi_96
02/12/12
YAY a Beanbon!! ^_^ They're really fun to draw. :P
Gigi19972010
02/12/12
It's not like the Beanbon has something to do with the title, since both are from Mass Attack.
Of course not.
guestuser
02/12/12
^Implying that's not obvious.
BattleStarX
02/12/12
Hmm... makes me wanna play KRtDL again, I love the Leaf power.
Must improve my spriter skills to work that into KSSU style sprites...
Ackirby
02/13/12
Neat creative video. I wondered how you make your comics so well.
DarkMario1000
02/13/12
I'm guessing that's an enemy from Mass Attack or RtDL…yep, still haven't gotten either nor 3DS games.
guestuser
02/13/12
Yep, it's a Beanbon from Mass Attack.
guestuser
02/13/12
I hope you'll get back to your other comics soon too. BTW.: Losing Photoshop is not an excuse. There's lot of other free gfx software. You can even make comics in paint (given you don't need anything too fancy like rotation). But best graphics software, even better than Photoshop is GIMP which you can download for free @gimp.org. If you don't like windows floating around, you may use GIMP's fork called GIMPshop - all functions of GIMP in photoshop-like ui.
guestuser
02/13/12
Strange strange strange...Spy: Indeead.
Luigi_96
02/13/12
He was gonna get Photoshop back anyway, I'm sure he didn't wanna get used to a whole new program, just to have to re-adjust to Photoshop. It makes sense to me.
Also, GIMPshop? Is that something you have to download seperate?
Icetoa180
02/13/12
It doesnt matter if there are anymore slight breaks. Also, im uploading this from my 3ds in mexico. Thats what i call dedication!
guestuser
02/14/12
OK, understood, Luigi_96. And not, GIMPshop is stand-alone program. You can have both GIMP and GIMPshop, but you can have GIMPshop alone too.
Luigi_96
02/14/12
Ah, okay.
Part 12
Ulti's Notes:
The creature behind Saia that Caiya is mistaking for a donut is a tree-based enemy known as a Jungle Bomb. I think they're based on pineapples, which calls to mind grenades, thus: bombs. They come from the Sub-Tree area in Kirby Super Star.
Original Author's Comment:
02/15/12
Seriously, would you expect anything less?
Seriously, would you expect anything less?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ackirby
02/15/12
Another Kirby pancake for the team!
Luigi_96
02/16/12
Wouldn't that be more like pineapple?
DarkMario1000
02/16/12
Simple. Kirby Adventure without Caiya and her randomness…
Wut, you expected a creative answer? =p
BattleStarX
02/16/12
I would expect nothing less of Caiya.
kuruby
02/16/12
Caiya din't need hepl. she only need donuts
guestuser
02/16/12
clasby333: That is your sword...not a donut.
guestuser
02/16/12
Ackirby: I wunder how they taset? ^w^
Striffen Cloud
02/16/12
It may look like a pineapple
but it's BURSTING with flavor!
foxpuff
02/16/12
It seems what she needed to see or eat right now is a donut. :P
guestuser
02/17/12
Fi: If you desire doughnuts, perhaps you should try dow -
Caiya: DONUT!
Fi: Wait - NO I AM NOT A DOUGHNUTOHHYLIAWHATAREYOUDOING
Caiya: *nom*
Nice sprite edit on the "eating and running," by the way. You can tell it's good because it took this long for someone to notice that it wasn't official.
guestuser
02/17/12
Caiya's gonna get a bomb to the face in a few seconds.
Luigi_96
02/17/12
LOL. That would be awesome. XD
Tygah
02/18/12
At least we know she's feeling alright.
blueyoshicool
10/12/13
It's a pineapple flavored donut.
guestuser
01/04/14
Poor Saia I:(
Pasca46
02/13/16
Ackirby: Good thing she doesn't like pancakes...
02/15/12
Another Kirby pancake for the team!
Luigi_96
02/16/12
Wouldn't that be more like pineapple?
DarkMario1000
02/16/12
Simple. Kirby Adventure without Caiya and her randomness…
Wut, you expected a creative answer? =p
BattleStarX
02/16/12
I would expect nothing less of Caiya.
kuruby
02/16/12
Caiya din't need hepl. she only need donuts
guestuser
02/16/12
clasby333: That is your sword...not a donut.
guestuser
02/16/12
Ackirby: I wunder how they taset? ^w^
Striffen Cloud
02/16/12
It may look like a pineapple
but it's BURSTING with flavor!
foxpuff
02/16/12
It seems what she needed to see or eat right now is a donut. :P
guestuser
02/17/12
Fi: If you desire doughnuts, perhaps you should try dow -
Caiya: DONUT!
Fi: Wait - NO I AM NOT A DOUGHNUTOHHYLIAWHATAREYOUDOING
Caiya: *nom*
Nice sprite edit on the "eating and running," by the way. You can tell it's good because it took this long for someone to notice that it wasn't official.
guestuser
02/17/12
Caiya's gonna get a bomb to the face in a few seconds.
Luigi_96
02/17/12
LOL. That would be awesome. XD
Tygah
02/18/12
At least we know she's feeling alright.
blueyoshicool
10/12/13
It's a pineapple flavored donut.
guestuser
01/04/14
Poor Saia I:(
Pasca46
02/13/16
Ackirby: Good thing she doesn't like pancakes...
Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
Even though Kirby Adventure began in 2010, and the timeline of the comic was still based on it being around the same time as the latest Kirby game at that point, 2008's Kirby Super Star Ultra, that didn't stop me from aiming to include new things where I could. Thus, here we see a Beanbon from 2011's Kirby Mass Attack, a game that had released only a couple months prior to these pages.
Mass Attack is a game set on the Popopo Islands, an archipelago on the southern side of Planet Popstar. It's much more tropical (at least, some of the islands are), and instead of Waddle Dees being the most common enemy creature encountered, instead the Beanbon was. It's basically a plant-like replacement for the Waddle Dee.
Despite me using Mass Attack content here, I still wanted to establish the timeline I was consistently using. Thus, this still took place before Kirby Mass Attack, and thus, Kirby was unaware of anything that game actively introduced to the Kirby series. So this is (in this canon) his first introduction to Beanbons.
Mass Attack is a game set on the Popopo Islands, an archipelago on the southern side of Planet Popstar. It's much more tropical (at least, some of the islands are), and instead of Waddle Dees being the most common enemy creature encountered, instead the Beanbon was. It's basically a plant-like replacement for the Waddle Dee.
Despite me using Mass Attack content here, I still wanted to establish the timeline I was consistently using. Thus, this still took place before Kirby Mass Attack, and thus, Kirby was unaware of anything that game actively introduced to the Kirby series. So this is (in this canon) his first introduction to Beanbons.
Original Author's Comment:
02/20/12
BEANBONS.
BEANBONS.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
02/21/12
ULTI YOU STEALER OF IDEAS.
WHY DOES IT KEEP HAPPENING?! WHY?!?!?!?!
Ultimate Yoshi
02/21/12
Gigi19972010
Wait what
Gigi19972010
02/21/12
Ultimate Yoshi:
Just ignore me.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
02/21/12
That has got to be the worst thief ever. PERIOD. EXCLAMATION MARK.
Muddykip64
02/21/12
BEANBONS!
DarkMario1000
02/21/12
That…was somewhat anti-climatic
BattleStarX
02/21/12
Well, a little honesty goes a long way.
Fusion Kirby
02/21/12
So this takes place before KMA?
kuruby
02/21/12
This beanbon seems sincere, but I don't think this type of sincerity is good if you say it in fron of kirby. At least you can help him anyway.
Luigi_96
02/21/12
This comic explains why mass attack happened! XD
Ackirby
02/26/12
I like Beanbons.
Ultizeta
07/23/17
It's kind of annoying that I can't just erase the text, but instead I have to remake all the text bubbles too. Apparently I didn't bold the non-pixelated Tahoma font when using it, which makes all the proper-looking bolded pixelated Tahoma font not fit into the old text bubbles.
02/21/12
ULTI YOU STEALER OF IDEAS.
WHY DOES IT KEEP HAPPENING?! WHY?!?!?!?!
Ultimate Yoshi
02/21/12
Gigi19972010
Wait what
Gigi19972010
02/21/12
Ultimate Yoshi:
Just ignore me.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
02/21/12
That has got to be the worst thief ever. PERIOD. EXCLAMATION MARK.
Muddykip64
02/21/12
BEANBONS!
DarkMario1000
02/21/12
That…was somewhat anti-climatic
BattleStarX
02/21/12
Well, a little honesty goes a long way.
Fusion Kirby
02/21/12
So this takes place before KMA?
kuruby
02/21/12
This beanbon seems sincere, but I don't think this type of sincerity is good if you say it in fron of kirby. At least you can help him anyway.
Luigi_96
02/21/12
This comic explains why mass attack happened! XD
Ackirby
02/26/12
I like Beanbons.
Ultizeta
07/23/17
It's kind of annoying that I can't just erase the text, but instead I have to remake all the text bubbles too. Apparently I didn't bold the non-pixelated Tahoma font when using it, which makes all the proper-looking bolded pixelated Tahoma font not fit into the old text bubbles.
Part 14
Ulti's Notes:
Xyxxa is a name that was basically a borderline parody of my own naming conventions and love of hard uncommon consonants. I pronounced it "zicks-uh", but regardless, she didn't show up enough for it to really be an issue anyway.
Xyxxa is a Helmee, another Kirby Mass Attack enemy. They're ghosts possessing knight helmets, and can wield either spears or lanterns. I picked one to be Banai's partner here because I just simply liked the design a lot.
For what it's worth, I also intended these two to be lesbians, which was why I put emphasis on both characters being girls. But it didn't amount to even an in-comic mention, so my LGBT representation was unaffected by this. Don't worry, though, nowadays basically all of the characters and their reimaginations are openly queer.
Xyxxa is a Helmee, another Kirby Mass Attack enemy. They're ghosts possessing knight helmets, and can wield either spears or lanterns. I picked one to be Banai's partner here because I just simply liked the design a lot.
For what it's worth, I also intended these two to be lesbians, which was why I put emphasis on both characters being girls. But it didn't amount to even an in-comic mention, so my LGBT representation was unaffected by this. Don't worry, though, nowadays basically all of the characters and their reimaginations are openly queer.
Original Author's Comment:
02/21/12
It's pronounced "zicks-ah".
It's pronounced "zicks-ah".
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
02/21/12
Good burn.
Gigi19972010
02/21/12
Xyxxa?
THAT NAMES.
foxpuff
02/21/12
For one thing, theives don't talk to others if they are planning to steal from them in the first place.
DarkMario1000
02/21/12
This is already awkward for Kirby…a new place with new creatures…
Luigi_96
02/22/12
Do you just pound your keyboard and think of a way to pronounce it or what?! :U
guestuser
02/22/12
Are you still accepting cameos?
guestuser
02/23/12
Huh, and I thought the name of my evil Hammer Bro character, Zindax, was silly... Don't ask.
Also, is Tiger Paw Studios the Skrawlers videos?
Ultimate Yoshi
02/23/12
Nope, they're my fifth LP that took place after I finished Nightmare In Dream Land. They're a series of games my friend on Skype made, he asked me if I could LP one, so I decided to LP them all. They're relatively short, and what I linked is the entire LP. They're also pretty hilarious and introduce the first time where I speed things up and sound like a chipmunk.
kuruby
02/23/12
what they try to steal to Dedede?
guestuser
02/23/12
Insults. Weee.
guestuser
02/28/12
You know... now that I think about it... I haven't watched ANY of the Skrawlers videos OR any of your LPs. I've got to remedy that soon... once I'm done with my midterms... College can be rough...
guestuser
11/25/13
Extremely late comment, but Banai and Xyxxa are from Kirby Mass Attack, but you said OC requests had to be from Super Star Ultra. But nice names and I can't believe you remembered Popopo islands.
02/21/12
Good burn.
Gigi19972010
02/21/12
Xyxxa?
THAT NAMES.
foxpuff
02/21/12
For one thing, theives don't talk to others if they are planning to steal from them in the first place.
DarkMario1000
02/21/12
This is already awkward for Kirby…a new place with new creatures…
Luigi_96
02/22/12
Do you just pound your keyboard and think of a way to pronounce it or what?! :U
guestuser
02/22/12
Are you still accepting cameos?
guestuser
02/23/12
Huh, and I thought the name of my evil Hammer Bro character, Zindax, was silly... Don't ask.
Also, is Tiger Paw Studios the Skrawlers videos?
Ultimate Yoshi
02/23/12
Nope, they're my fifth LP that took place after I finished Nightmare In Dream Land. They're a series of games my friend on Skype made, he asked me if I could LP one, so I decided to LP them all. They're relatively short, and what I linked is the entire LP. They're also pretty hilarious and introduce the first time where I speed things up and sound like a chipmunk.
kuruby
02/23/12
what they try to steal to Dedede?
guestuser
02/23/12
Insults. Weee.
guestuser
02/28/12
You know... now that I think about it... I haven't watched ANY of the Skrawlers videos OR any of your LPs. I've got to remedy that soon... once I'm done with my midterms... College can be rough...
guestuser
11/25/13
Extremely late comment, but Banai and Xyxxa are from Kirby Mass Attack, but you said OC requests had to be from Super Star Ultra. But nice names and I can't believe you remembered Popopo islands.
Part 15
Ulti's Notes:
I don't actually have anything to say about this page, but considering neither did 15-year-old Ulti from 2012, I'm putting something here anyway just so that things aren't weirdly awkward in this box beneath the comic page.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
contradiction123
02/28/12
xD Nice punch!
HE'S OUT COLD FOLKS!
Alienoid
02/28/12
How can Kaxo see them?
WITCHCRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAFT!
guestuser
02/28/12
Mutant pirahna fish... isn't that redundant?
Ultimate Yoshi
02/28/12
@Jarkes
Well, there are piranha plants out there. Maybe it's not as redundant as one would assume in the gaming world.
BattleStarX
02/28/12
Quick. Efficient. Good ol' Shaddik.
kuruby
02/28/12
punch him to shut up is always a good method. And classic. ^^
Ackirby
02/28/12
FP is crazy. PURE CRAZY. HE PULLS OUT BITS OF HIS BRAIN, SWALLOWS THEM, AND SAYS WHATEVER WAS IN THAT PART OF THE BRAIN.
Or something. There's no way he planned that out... It had to be from the top of his head.
guestuser
02/28/12
Ackirby: Maybe he's not a Kirby at all!
Luigi_96
02/28/12
lol, shadik is awesome. xD
(just to brag, posted from my dsi xl)
Falcon_Pawnch75
02/28/12
I'm like, the Pinkie Pie of KA :D
Air Man1 21
02/28/12
That was the first thing that I thought when I read it too.
DarkMario1000
02/29/12
Wow, there's something you don't see everyday. Then again, this chapter is pretty much things you don't see everyday…
Like a thief announcing that he's a thief.
guestuser
02/29/12
DarkMario1000:
Yeah, I mean, usually they prefer the term "treasure hunter."
02/28/12
xD Nice punch!
HE'S OUT COLD FOLKS!
Alienoid
02/28/12
How can Kaxo see them?
WITCHCRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAFT!
guestuser
02/28/12
Mutant pirahna fish... isn't that redundant?
Ultimate Yoshi
02/28/12
@Jarkes
Well, there are piranha plants out there. Maybe it's not as redundant as one would assume in the gaming world.
BattleStarX
02/28/12
Quick. Efficient. Good ol' Shaddik.
kuruby
02/28/12
punch him to shut up is always a good method. And classic. ^^
Ackirby
02/28/12
FP is crazy. PURE CRAZY. HE PULLS OUT BITS OF HIS BRAIN, SWALLOWS THEM, AND SAYS WHATEVER WAS IN THAT PART OF THE BRAIN.
Or something. There's no way he planned that out... It had to be from the top of his head.
guestuser
02/28/12
Ackirby: Maybe he's not a Kirby at all!
Luigi_96
02/28/12
lol, shadik is awesome. xD
(just to brag, posted from my dsi xl)
Falcon_Pawnch75
02/28/12
I'm like, the Pinkie Pie of KA :D
Air Man1 21
02/28/12
That was the first thing that I thought when I read it too.
DarkMario1000
02/29/12
Wow, there's something you don't see everyday. Then again, this chapter is pretty much things you don't see everyday…
Like a thief announcing that he's a thief.
guestuser
02/29/12
DarkMario1000:
Yeah, I mean, usually they prefer the term "treasure hunter."
Part 16
Original Author's Comment:
02/29/12
Banai and Xyxxa are both female. Feel like I should mention that, for some reason.
Not much left to go for this segment, actually!
Banai and Xyxxa are both female. Feel like I should mention that, for some reason.
Not much left to go for this segment, actually!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
contradiction123
02/29/12
Moar helping?
Muddykip64
02/29/12
...
DarkNut255
02/29/12
How cum I get the short segment… :C
Eh, just kidding. I am perfectly content with what I have.
guestuser
02/29/12
By the way, Ulti: What are your thoughts on the Derpy edit?
Ultimate Yoshi
02/29/12
I feel like Hasbro shouldn't have made the edits to Derpy, cause that was just plain unnecessary, and I hate how Hasbro seems to not really be appreciating the fanbase in terms of how much of a demographic we are. Covering up Derpy in The Last Roundup was essentially saying how a disability is bad and that those with them shouldn't participate in everyday society.
Then again, I don't want to make a big deal out of it, considering how lucky we were to even have Derpy for a moment in any given episode be named and have lines. Besides, it was just for The Last Roundup, anyway.
guestuser
02/29/12
@Ulti:
Yeah, that just about summed up my initial reaction. But hey, we'll still get her in funny background events, she just probably won't have lines any more. And we still have the unedited version of the episode on the Friendship Express DVD, and the unedited version of the episode is also probably still up on YouTube, so we can always watch it in one of those places.
On an unrelated note, do you think Nintendo should remake Kirby 64 for the 3DS? I mean, it already has enemies attacking you from the background, so it actually would make perfect sense... but then again, it would be better if it were just a brand new Kirby game, since the remakes of Ocarina of Time, Star Fox 64, and Rayman 2 were probably enough as far as N64 remakes go. Well, okay, Rayman 3D was actually ported from the Dreamcast version, but you get what I'm saying.
Andromeda Lazuli
02/29/12
They're thieves and they're asking them for help...? This is gonna go to into my weird section.
Ackirby
02/29/12
Wait, why would Kirby be helping a thief? Wouldn't that make him...
...EVIL?
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!
But seriously, the humour in the last panel is rather funny. Xyxxa almost looks like he's breaking the fourth wall. There are a lot of people out there that can mistaken Kirby for an ORIDINARY PINK Puffball. XD
BTW, is this yours? Or was it STOLEN?
http://kirbysrainbowresort.net/gallery/displayimage.php?album=950&pos=50
I'm just curious.
guestuser
02/29/12
THEIR GIRLS AND THIEVES!
Andromeda Lazuli: Oiy shalye. 0-0
Gigi19972010
02/29/12
Ackirby:
It is his.
guestuser
02/29/12
I wonder if we'll see Ryka again
DarkMario1000
02/29/12
DERP. They are…?
Gigi19972010
Nice new profile pic.
Tygah
03/01/12
I really like your creative naming, but can I ask how you pronounce Xyxxa?
Ackirby
03/01/12
Tygah Did you look at the Author's comment at
http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1430893/tree-to-tree-part-14/
Koopa1018
03/03/12
Banai's pose, Xyxxa's spear...
If I was Banai, I'd be screaming in pain.
Ultizeta
07/27/17
I like how I "just mention" the fact that these two are both female. I was actually intending for these two to be lesbians, lol.
02/29/12
Moar helping?
Muddykip64
02/29/12
...
DarkNut255
02/29/12
How cum I get the short segment… :C
Eh, just kidding. I am perfectly content with what I have.
guestuser
02/29/12
By the way, Ulti: What are your thoughts on the Derpy edit?
Ultimate Yoshi
02/29/12
I feel like Hasbro shouldn't have made the edits to Derpy, cause that was just plain unnecessary, and I hate how Hasbro seems to not really be appreciating the fanbase in terms of how much of a demographic we are. Covering up Derpy in The Last Roundup was essentially saying how a disability is bad and that those with them shouldn't participate in everyday society.
Then again, I don't want to make a big deal out of it, considering how lucky we were to even have Derpy for a moment in any given episode be named and have lines. Besides, it was just for The Last Roundup, anyway.
guestuser
02/29/12
@Ulti:
Yeah, that just about summed up my initial reaction. But hey, we'll still get her in funny background events, she just probably won't have lines any more. And we still have the unedited version of the episode on the Friendship Express DVD, and the unedited version of the episode is also probably still up on YouTube, so we can always watch it in one of those places.
On an unrelated note, do you think Nintendo should remake Kirby 64 for the 3DS? I mean, it already has enemies attacking you from the background, so it actually would make perfect sense... but then again, it would be better if it were just a brand new Kirby game, since the remakes of Ocarina of Time, Star Fox 64, and Rayman 2 were probably enough as far as N64 remakes go. Well, okay, Rayman 3D was actually ported from the Dreamcast version, but you get what I'm saying.
Andromeda Lazuli
02/29/12
They're thieves and they're asking them for help...? This is gonna go to into my weird section.
Ackirby
02/29/12
Wait, why would Kirby be helping a thief? Wouldn't that make him...
...EVIL?
DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!
But seriously, the humour in the last panel is rather funny. Xyxxa almost looks like he's breaking the fourth wall. There are a lot of people out there that can mistaken Kirby for an ORIDINARY PINK Puffball. XD
BTW, is this yours? Or was it STOLEN?
http://kirbysrainbowresort.net/gallery/displayimage.php?album=950&pos=50
I'm just curious.
guestuser
02/29/12
THEIR GIRLS AND THIEVES!
Andromeda Lazuli: Oiy shalye. 0-0
Gigi19972010
02/29/12
Ackirby:
It is his.
guestuser
02/29/12
I wonder if we'll see Ryka again
DarkMario1000
02/29/12
DERP. They are…?
Gigi19972010
Nice new profile pic.
Tygah
03/01/12
I really like your creative naming, but can I ask how you pronounce Xyxxa?
Ackirby
03/01/12
Tygah Did you look at the Author's comment at
http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1430893/tree-to-tree-part-14/
Koopa1018
03/03/12
Banai's pose, Xyxxa's spear...
If I was Banai, I'd be screaming in pain.
Ultizeta
07/27/17
I like how I "just mention" the fact that these two are both female. I was actually intending for these two to be lesbians, lol.
Part 17
Original Author's Comment:
02/29/12
Happy leap day!
I feel happy for thinking up Xyxxa's line in panel 3.
Smack Jeeves' clock is ridiculously off for me, does anyone know of a way to fix that?
Happy leap day!
I feel happy for thinking up Xyxxa's line in panel 3.
Smack Jeeves' clock is ridiculously off for me, does anyone know of a way to fix that?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ackirby
03/01/12
Ultimate Yoshi
Nope. Not at All. I'm having that same problem.
It would be a bit awkward for Kirby to help her with a 2 second story. I think Kirby might need more explanation. OR. The story may be just what it seems. NO, KIRBBY, DON'T DO IT!
1ce_k1d
03/01/12
It's March 1st where I am.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
03/01/12
That story sounds a bit... foreboding. But at least it'll make a great plot-line!
Wait, the clock's off? Did you adjust your user settings?
Luigi_96
03/01/12
Lol, that IS a good line in panel 3. xD
Oh, and is the time being off the reason you didn't get my messages? or did you, and just didn't reply once the comic posted?
guestuser
03/01/12
Wthiton: I don't know.
Addums: No idea.
Abe: No cule what so ever.
Tedy-rosevelt: YA!
Divine Knight
03/01/12
I've been having kind of the same problems before wait (Goes to check)Yep still having the same problem.
Gigi19972010
03/01/12
My clock just changed when my summer time ended, but that was last Saturday... It's the same time as my computer.
BattleStarX
03/01/12
When you steal from a thief who's stolen from a thief who's just plain stolen, what do you call it?
DarkMario1000
03/01/12
The last panel made me chuckle. Kirby the thief. I'd like to see him as a Ninja-thief.
@BSX Hmmm…STORY TIME WITH DARK MARIO~!
I say Thief A stole something successfully. Thief A got careless because of his success, so Thief B was able to snatch it without breaking sweat while Thief A celebrated. Thief B was so thrilled about stealing from a stealer, but he did not give credit to his girlfriend who actually told him about item he wanted to smuggle. He was planning to take all the money and not share a penny. That's when the girlfriend—knowing her boyfriend's strengths and weaknesses—was able to dress in disguise—as Thief C—and snatch it from Thief B without leaving a trace. Thief B did not win, nor did Thief A ever see his item again. The End. =p
So, to answer your question: I call it deception, immoral…and pokémon luck.
guestuser
03/02/12
kirby is not a thief. he has not agreed to help them.
Tygah
03/03/12
No, I accidentally skipped that one because I haven't had a computer, thanks though.
guestuser
03/07/12
Hey, I need some advice. I don't have Mass Attack OR Return to Dream Land yet (I know, shocker, right?). For a number of reasons, I can't buy them both at once. Which one should I get first? I'm leaning towards Mass Attack, mainly because for Return to Dream Land, I'd be playing solo most of the time (seriously, why doesn't the game have Wi-fi in case you don't have time to invite three of your friends over?). What do you think?
There's also the fact that I really want to increase the amount of 3DS games I have. I'm planning to buy a new game sometime this week, but, given that I'm in college and have a pretty big workload, I can only really buy one new game every so often. I'm debating between Mario Kart 7, Star Fox 64 3D, and Tales of the Abyss, and there's also the fact that, again, I don't have KMA or KRtDL yet. I'm having serious indecision issues here.
guestuser
03/07/12
RtD. I 100%'ed it in Single Player and liked it.
guestuser
03/07/12
@Meta-Mind:
Did you 100% in Extra Mode? I hear that's pretty difficult, especially with the True Arena and whatnot.
Also, as I said, I seriously want to expand my 3DS library (I only have 3 games: Ocarina of Time 3D, Super Street Fighter 4 3D, and Super Mario 3D Land). So, should I get one of the 3DS games I mentioned first (since, in all likelihood, if I got any of them for my birthday in the summer, I would probably only get 1 of them), or go ahead and get RtDL?
guestuser
03/07/12
Who fed you that ficiticious information? Extra Mode is just as easy as Normal, especially since you remember where all the Gears are and can collect them on your first playthrough.
The diminished healthbar and harder bosses make up for that, though, but it's still not much harder than Normal.
I have less 3DS games than you, and I'm still good. I haven't even beaten OoT 3D yet.
Well, not all the way. I *think* I 100%'ed Normal, but I'm stuck on the Spirit Temple in MQ.
I'd advise getting RtD.
guestuser
03/09/12
@Meta-Mind:
I ended up getting RtDL. It's pretty good so far. I've already beaten the entire first world, Energy Spheres included.
...BUT, in order to get it, I had to ignore the fact that my local GameStop actually had a used copy of the Wii Metroid Prime Trilogy compilation, and had it for a much lower price than I'd find it elsewhere. But I had already made up my mind. But don't worry, I'm not blaming you or anything. Sometimes you just gotta choose.
...By the way, which is harder? The KSSU True Arena, or the RtDL True Arena?
guestuser
03/10/12
And now I've beaten the second world, and obtained all the Energy Spheres in that one too. I move fast.
guestuser
03/10/12
The RtD True Arena is about half as hard as the KSSU True Arena, at least judging by the number of times I died before beating it.
KSSU: 1
KRtD: 0
(I know that's not half, but there's no way to lose .5 lives).
Ultizeta
07/27/17
The final textual fix of this sequence. From here on out, there's very few moments in which I'll need to change the font again.
03/01/12
Ultimate Yoshi
Nope. Not at All. I'm having that same problem.
It would be a bit awkward for Kirby to help her with a 2 second story. I think Kirby might need more explanation. OR. The story may be just what it seems. NO, KIRBBY, DON'T DO IT!
1ce_k1d
03/01/12
It's March 1st where I am.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
03/01/12
That story sounds a bit... foreboding. But at least it'll make a great plot-line!
Wait, the clock's off? Did you adjust your user settings?
Luigi_96
03/01/12
Lol, that IS a good line in panel 3. xD
Oh, and is the time being off the reason you didn't get my messages? or did you, and just didn't reply once the comic posted?
guestuser
03/01/12
Wthiton: I don't know.
Addums: No idea.
Abe: No cule what so ever.
Tedy-rosevelt: YA!
Divine Knight
03/01/12
I've been having kind of the same problems before wait (Goes to check)Yep still having the same problem.
Gigi19972010
03/01/12
My clock just changed when my summer time ended, but that was last Saturday... It's the same time as my computer.
BattleStarX
03/01/12
When you steal from a thief who's stolen from a thief who's just plain stolen, what do you call it?
DarkMario1000
03/01/12
The last panel made me chuckle. Kirby the thief. I'd like to see him as a Ninja-thief.
@BSX Hmmm…STORY TIME WITH DARK MARIO~!
I say Thief A stole something successfully. Thief A got careless because of his success, so Thief B was able to snatch it without breaking sweat while Thief A celebrated. Thief B was so thrilled about stealing from a stealer, but he did not give credit to his girlfriend who actually told him about item he wanted to smuggle. He was planning to take all the money and not share a penny. That's when the girlfriend—knowing her boyfriend's strengths and weaknesses—was able to dress in disguise—as Thief C—and snatch it from Thief B without leaving a trace. Thief B did not win, nor did Thief A ever see his item again. The End. =p
So, to answer your question: I call it deception, immoral…and pokémon luck.
guestuser
03/02/12
kirby is not a thief. he has not agreed to help them.
Tygah
03/03/12
No, I accidentally skipped that one because I haven't had a computer, thanks though.
guestuser
03/07/12
Hey, I need some advice. I don't have Mass Attack OR Return to Dream Land yet (I know, shocker, right?). For a number of reasons, I can't buy them both at once. Which one should I get first? I'm leaning towards Mass Attack, mainly because for Return to Dream Land, I'd be playing solo most of the time (seriously, why doesn't the game have Wi-fi in case you don't have time to invite three of your friends over?). What do you think?
There's also the fact that I really want to increase the amount of 3DS games I have. I'm planning to buy a new game sometime this week, but, given that I'm in college and have a pretty big workload, I can only really buy one new game every so often. I'm debating between Mario Kart 7, Star Fox 64 3D, and Tales of the Abyss, and there's also the fact that, again, I don't have KMA or KRtDL yet. I'm having serious indecision issues here.
guestuser
03/07/12
RtD. I 100%'ed it in Single Player and liked it.
guestuser
03/07/12
@Meta-Mind:
Did you 100% in Extra Mode? I hear that's pretty difficult, especially with the True Arena and whatnot.
Also, as I said, I seriously want to expand my 3DS library (I only have 3 games: Ocarina of Time 3D, Super Street Fighter 4 3D, and Super Mario 3D Land). So, should I get one of the 3DS games I mentioned first (since, in all likelihood, if I got any of them for my birthday in the summer, I would probably only get 1 of them), or go ahead and get RtDL?
guestuser
03/07/12
Who fed you that ficiticious information? Extra Mode is just as easy as Normal, especially since you remember where all the Gears are and can collect them on your first playthrough.
The diminished healthbar and harder bosses make up for that, though, but it's still not much harder than Normal.
I have less 3DS games than you, and I'm still good. I haven't even beaten OoT 3D yet.
Well, not all the way. I *think* I 100%'ed Normal, but I'm stuck on the Spirit Temple in MQ.
I'd advise getting RtD.
guestuser
03/09/12
@Meta-Mind:
I ended up getting RtDL. It's pretty good so far. I've already beaten the entire first world, Energy Spheres included.
...BUT, in order to get it, I had to ignore the fact that my local GameStop actually had a used copy of the Wii Metroid Prime Trilogy compilation, and had it for a much lower price than I'd find it elsewhere. But I had already made up my mind. But don't worry, I'm not blaming you or anything. Sometimes you just gotta choose.
...By the way, which is harder? The KSSU True Arena, or the RtDL True Arena?
guestuser
03/10/12
And now I've beaten the second world, and obtained all the Energy Spheres in that one too. I move fast.
guestuser
03/10/12
The RtD True Arena is about half as hard as the KSSU True Arena, at least judging by the number of times I died before beating it.
KSSU: 1
KRtD: 0
(I know that's not half, but there's no way to lose .5 lives).
Ultizeta
07/27/17
The final textual fix of this sequence. From here on out, there's very few moments in which I'll need to change the font again.
Part 18
Original Author's Comment:
03/10/12
Sorry it took a while to make this, but on the plus side, I got my old text back!
The reason I hadn't updated for a few days was because I was working on a new new-and-improved cast of characters page! Not only have Talzo's gang been added, but every single bio has been updated, along with new buttons to choose! Ta-da!
Sorry it took a while to make this, but on the plus side, I got my old text back!
The reason I hadn't updated for a few days was because I was working on a new new-and-improved cast of characters page! Not only have Talzo's gang been added, but every single bio has been updated, along with new buttons to choose! Ta-da!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
contradiction123
03/10/12
Can't he just teleport?
Yes, that has been said many times, but still.
1ce_k1d
03/10/12
SHADOW JUMP
Koopa1018
03/11/12
Nice new bios! It's cool how they explain a few unanswered (and unasked) questions about the squad! Aika's is a little hard to read, though.
Tygah
03/11/12
Kaxo should look on the bright side...Treasure!!
DarkMario1000
03/11/12
But I'm pretty sure he's quite annoyed.
BattleStarX
03/11/12
Ah, Kaxo, forever impatient.
guestuser
03/11/12
IS THAT CHEST CONTAINING THE LEGENDARY FIRE ORB FOR KAXO TO WRECK HAVOC WITH?! :D
guestuser
03/11/12
Yippee! Plot going!
Gigi19972010
03/11/12
Just let FP there, he is useless. :P
foxpuff
03/11/12
Why not just attack the bomb block?
Ninnco
03/11/12
FP's A LOST CAUSE!
guestuser
03/11/12
Thwack is the new Vrrnp.
guestuser
03/11/12
Hey, I have a question. In order to get 100% on RtDL Normal Mode, do I have to get Gold Medals in the Copy Ability Challenges and beat the three levels of both sub-games, as well as the Arena?
Ultimate Yoshi
03/11/12
@Jarkes
For 100%, for one thing, The Arena is a separate entity, not part of the save file. Neither are the sub-games, I don't think, but I already had them beaten when I got 100% so I wouldn't know. But I know for a fact that you need to at least have gotten a Bronze medal for every Ability Challenge.
guestuser
03/12/12
IMO? Yes.
"Officially?" No.
guestuser
03/13/12
@Ulti and Meta-Mind:
Okay, then. By the way, why did no one warn me that Egg Engines was a MASSIVE difficulty spike? Seriously, in the second level, in order to get the second Energy Sphere, you have to bring a Stone ability from one room into another, which is filled with water and these HUGE spiked wheels which are GUARANTEED to knock the ability out of you (and since you're in water, you can't suck it back up), and you have to take it ALL THE WAY THROUGH THIS ROOM, and jump up in a tiny area where you're supposed to go into stone form and slam into otherwise unbreakable blocks and get the Energy Sphere. Seriously, why did no one warn me about this?
Ultimate Yoshi
03/13/12
@ Jarkes
Egg Engines was certainly harder than Nutty Noon, but it wasn't a severe difficulty spike. If anything, the difficulty spike comes along when you fight Landia the dragon. And there have always been puzzles in Kirby games like that. You think THAT'S bad? Have you even TOUCHED Kirby's Dream Land 2 before?
guestuser
03/13/12
@Ulti:
Okay, it was a SMALL difficulty spike, mainly because of the sharp increase of giant cannons that either shoot fire or electricty (including one Energy Sphere where you have to put yourself in the line of fire of two cannons in order to get). And no, I haven't played Dream Land 2. I HAVE, however, played Dream Land 3, and some of the Heart Stars in that can be pretty brutal. I was stuck at level 5 of Cloudy Park (the one where you have to take Rick to the end of the level in order to get the Heart Star) for MONTHS before I got past it. And IIRC, I'm currently at the second level of Iceberg, not because that level's particularly difficult (in fact, I haven't even attempted the level yet), but because I just... haven't played the game in a while (I intend to get back to it at some point, probably when I'm finished with Return to Dream Land). I'm also currently at the beginning of Neo Star on Kirby 64. I actually have both of these games on the Virtual Console.
Fusion Kirby
03/13/12
I Beat RtDL recently, but not the Arena Yet. I have, maybe 82% or Something.
guestuser
03/13/12
Leave FP there... he's more annoying to me than even NAVO is.
guestuser
03/13/12
I forgot my password...
Anyways leave FP there, no one will mind.
1ce_k1d
03/17/12
Shadik's bio is wrong, he spoke in the 1 year anniversery!
Tygah
03/17/12
I'm not sure that counts as canon.
Falcon_Pawnch75
03/18/12
There's no points in leaving me.
I'll just fourth wall myself into the finale like I always do :D
guestuser
03/19/12
Huh... I thought Egg Engines was bad... turns out, Dangerous Dinner is SO much worse... but, about one hour ago, I managed to get the last Energy Sphere, AND get a Silver Medal in the Item Challenge! Now all I have left (in the Normal mode, anyway) is the Landia, Lor Starcutter, and Magolor boss fights. ...And that's where you said the REAL difficulty spike was... Joy.
Do I have to do all of those boss fights in one go, or does the game save in between each one?
guestuser
03/19/12
*Sigh*... the bomb block actually leads outside the switch maze. In order to get FP out of there, they'd have to go through the maze again. Has anyone who mentioned the bomb block actually PLAYED Super Star?
k64speed
07/01/12
*Mentions something about bomb block* YES.
Pikaboy777
10/25/13
Hello? That's why there is a bomb box!!
03/10/12
Can't he just teleport?
Yes, that has been said many times, but still.
1ce_k1d
03/10/12
SHADOW JUMP
Koopa1018
03/11/12
Nice new bios! It's cool how they explain a few unanswered (and unasked) questions about the squad! Aika's is a little hard to read, though.
Tygah
03/11/12
Kaxo should look on the bright side...Treasure!!
DarkMario1000
03/11/12
But I'm pretty sure he's quite annoyed.
BattleStarX
03/11/12
Ah, Kaxo, forever impatient.
guestuser
03/11/12
IS THAT CHEST CONTAINING THE LEGENDARY FIRE ORB FOR KAXO TO WRECK HAVOC WITH?! :D
guestuser
03/11/12
Yippee! Plot going!
Gigi19972010
03/11/12
Just let FP there, he is useless. :P
foxpuff
03/11/12
Why not just attack the bomb block?
Ninnco
03/11/12
FP's A LOST CAUSE!
guestuser
03/11/12
Thwack is the new Vrrnp.
guestuser
03/11/12
Hey, I have a question. In order to get 100% on RtDL Normal Mode, do I have to get Gold Medals in the Copy Ability Challenges and beat the three levels of both sub-games, as well as the Arena?
Ultimate Yoshi
03/11/12
@Jarkes
For 100%, for one thing, The Arena is a separate entity, not part of the save file. Neither are the sub-games, I don't think, but I already had them beaten when I got 100% so I wouldn't know. But I know for a fact that you need to at least have gotten a Bronze medal for every Ability Challenge.
guestuser
03/12/12
IMO? Yes.
"Officially?" No.
guestuser
03/13/12
@Ulti and Meta-Mind:
Okay, then. By the way, why did no one warn me that Egg Engines was a MASSIVE difficulty spike? Seriously, in the second level, in order to get the second Energy Sphere, you have to bring a Stone ability from one room into another, which is filled with water and these HUGE spiked wheels which are GUARANTEED to knock the ability out of you (and since you're in water, you can't suck it back up), and you have to take it ALL THE WAY THROUGH THIS ROOM, and jump up in a tiny area where you're supposed to go into stone form and slam into otherwise unbreakable blocks and get the Energy Sphere. Seriously, why did no one warn me about this?
Ultimate Yoshi
03/13/12
@ Jarkes
Egg Engines was certainly harder than Nutty Noon, but it wasn't a severe difficulty spike. If anything, the difficulty spike comes along when you fight Landia the dragon. And there have always been puzzles in Kirby games like that. You think THAT'S bad? Have you even TOUCHED Kirby's Dream Land 2 before?
guestuser
03/13/12
@Ulti:
Okay, it was a SMALL difficulty spike, mainly because of the sharp increase of giant cannons that either shoot fire or electricty (including one Energy Sphere where you have to put yourself in the line of fire of two cannons in order to get). And no, I haven't played Dream Land 2. I HAVE, however, played Dream Land 3, and some of the Heart Stars in that can be pretty brutal. I was stuck at level 5 of Cloudy Park (the one where you have to take Rick to the end of the level in order to get the Heart Star) for MONTHS before I got past it. And IIRC, I'm currently at the second level of Iceberg, not because that level's particularly difficult (in fact, I haven't even attempted the level yet), but because I just... haven't played the game in a while (I intend to get back to it at some point, probably when I'm finished with Return to Dream Land). I'm also currently at the beginning of Neo Star on Kirby 64. I actually have both of these games on the Virtual Console.
Fusion Kirby
03/13/12
I Beat RtDL recently, but not the Arena Yet. I have, maybe 82% or Something.
guestuser
03/13/12
Leave FP there... he's more annoying to me than even NAVO is.
guestuser
03/13/12
I forgot my password...
Anyways leave FP there, no one will mind.
1ce_k1d
03/17/12
Shadik's bio is wrong, he spoke in the 1 year anniversery!
Tygah
03/17/12
I'm not sure that counts as canon.
Falcon_Pawnch75
03/18/12
There's no points in leaving me.
I'll just fourth wall myself into the finale like I always do :D
guestuser
03/19/12
Huh... I thought Egg Engines was bad... turns out, Dangerous Dinner is SO much worse... but, about one hour ago, I managed to get the last Energy Sphere, AND get a Silver Medal in the Item Challenge! Now all I have left (in the Normal mode, anyway) is the Landia, Lor Starcutter, and Magolor boss fights. ...And that's where you said the REAL difficulty spike was... Joy.
Do I have to do all of those boss fights in one go, or does the game save in between each one?
guestuser
03/19/12
*Sigh*... the bomb block actually leads outside the switch maze. In order to get FP out of there, they'd have to go through the maze again. Has anyone who mentioned the bomb block actually PLAYED Super Star?
k64speed
07/01/12
*Mentions something about bomb block* YES.
Pikaboy777
10/25/13
Hello? That's why there is a bomb box!!
Part 19
Ulti's Notes:
This was about the point where FP, a typically-silly and goofy character, started to become utterly flanderized and ridiculous. While most commenters seemed to enjoy it, it wasn't a transition I'm particularly proud of, since it grounds the character less and makes him feel even more out-of-place.
You can also see how I was struggling a bit with writing the plot. Since I hadn't made my realization about the whole 'destination/goals' thing yet, I was still just having characters wander around and doing unimportant stuff, and it was wreaking havoc on my pacing.
While more jokes during this segment aged better than I remembered, it's still ultimately meaningless in too many ways. Characterization doesn't evolve (and for some, it degrades), plot goes nowhere, and large swathes of the segment winds up being largely irrelevant. It's not well-written, plain and simple.
You can also see how I was struggling a bit with writing the plot. Since I hadn't made my realization about the whole 'destination/goals' thing yet, I was still just having characters wander around and doing unimportant stuff, and it was wreaking havoc on my pacing.
While more jokes during this segment aged better than I remembered, it's still ultimately meaningless in too many ways. Characterization doesn't evolve (and for some, it degrades), plot goes nowhere, and large swathes of the segment winds up being largely irrelevant. It's not well-written, plain and simple.
Original Author's Comment:
03/20/12
FP made his lines up. Not me. Blame him.
IT'S ALL HIS FAULT.
FP made his lines up. Not me. Blame him.
IT'S ALL HIS FAULT.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
contradiction123
03/20/12
I SHALL GET THOSE POTATOES AND RID THE WORLD OF THE EVIL LEMONS THAT ARE SOUR AND EVIL AND RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AND I SHALL ALSO GET TEH TOILET PAPER OF AWESOME, AND WIPE MY FACE WITH IT, AS IT SHALL BE SO SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOFT.
Falcon_Pawnch75
03/20/12
Y-you liar! I did no such thing! Blame me not for thy mistakes!
foxpuff
03/20/12
Someone's gone crazy.
guestuser
03/20/12
BlueyKid:
Falcon_Pawnch75 is the one who created the character FP, if that's what you think doesn't make sense.
DarkMario1000
03/20/12
FP should've just *puts on shades* FALCON PAWWWNCH!!! that wall.
guestuser
03/20/12
Why would they leave without the treasure? D:
Gigi19972010
03/21/12
Perfect. :P
Also, just out of curiousity Ulti, why do you keep updating much less than you used to?
Falcon_Pawnch75
03/21/12
I don't need to Falcon Pawnch. I just walk through walls because I'm Jesus.
Stone_Merten
03/21/12
Nice series you got going there.
May I suggest a name change to Kirby Adventure Squad instead of Kirby Adventure? I must say though... this is amazing! but a little serious....
guestuser
03/21/12
Ultimate Yoshi: you forgot the chest.
Divine Knight
03/21/12
Completely random, FP. Completely random.
guestuser
03/21/12
I just beat normal mode of RtDL with 100% completion! YEAH! Though... I have a question. Where exactly is the "HAL Room?" I've seen screenshots of it (including one in the end credits) but I have no idea where it is.
guestuser
03/22/12
The HAL Room is an easter egg that originaly appeared in Kirby's Dream Land 3. I'm not sure how to find it, but somebody probably will!
guestuser
03/22/12
@BlagH:
I thought it originally appeared in Kirby's Adventure...
guestuser
03/24/12
The HAL room is in Stages 6-3 and 1-3, IIRC. It's been a while.
ONOES, THE POTATOES ARE ALLIED WITH THE EVIL PEG!
guestuser
03/24/12
@Meta_Mind:
Actually, I figured it out from GameFAQS. The HAL rooms are in 1-4 and 6-5. But you were pretty close.
Also, can anyone recommend some good Kirby LPs (besides yours, Ulti)? I'm looking for particularly funny Kirby 64 or Dream Land 3 LPs in particular.
guestuser
03/24/12
By the way, Ulti, is your current avatar Master Green from Kirby's Dream Land 2? I just noticed the similarities...
guestuser
03/24/12
Yes, it is.
guestuser
03/27/12
FP: SERIOUSLY?!
guestuser
03/30/12
Hey, I'm at the Hyper Zone in KDL3, and... jeezus! Not only are Dark Matter and Zero scary as hell, they're fricking hard too! I can't believe so many people have done no damage runs of Boss Butch (and apparently, if I want a full, 100% complete file on the game, I've got to pretty much do that too).
guestuser
07/17/14
I SHALL FIND THE DRAGON TRAINER AND ASK HIM HOW TO TRAIN A BONEKNAPPER!!!!!!!!!!!!
03/20/12
I SHALL GET THOSE POTATOES AND RID THE WORLD OF THE EVIL LEMONS THAT ARE SOUR AND EVIL AND RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AND I SHALL ALSO GET TEH TOILET PAPER OF AWESOME, AND WIPE MY FACE WITH IT, AS IT SHALL BE SO SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOFT.
Falcon_Pawnch75
03/20/12
Y-you liar! I did no such thing! Blame me not for thy mistakes!
foxpuff
03/20/12
Someone's gone crazy.
guestuser
03/20/12
BlueyKid:
Falcon_Pawnch75 is the one who created the character FP, if that's what you think doesn't make sense.
DarkMario1000
03/20/12
FP should've just *puts on shades* FALCON PAWWWNCH!!! that wall.
guestuser
03/20/12
Why would they leave without the treasure? D:
Gigi19972010
03/21/12
Perfect. :P
Also, just out of curiousity Ulti, why do you keep updating much less than you used to?
Falcon_Pawnch75
03/21/12
I don't need to Falcon Pawnch. I just walk through walls because I'm Jesus.
Stone_Merten
03/21/12
Nice series you got going there.
May I suggest a name change to Kirby Adventure Squad instead of Kirby Adventure? I must say though... this is amazing! but a little serious....
guestuser
03/21/12
Ultimate Yoshi: you forgot the chest.
Divine Knight
03/21/12
Completely random, FP. Completely random.
guestuser
03/21/12
I just beat normal mode of RtDL with 100% completion! YEAH! Though... I have a question. Where exactly is the "HAL Room?" I've seen screenshots of it (including one in the end credits) but I have no idea where it is.
guestuser
03/22/12
The HAL Room is an easter egg that originaly appeared in Kirby's Dream Land 3. I'm not sure how to find it, but somebody probably will!
guestuser
03/22/12
@BlagH:
I thought it originally appeared in Kirby's Adventure...
guestuser
03/24/12
The HAL room is in Stages 6-3 and 1-3, IIRC. It's been a while.
ONOES, THE POTATOES ARE ALLIED WITH THE EVIL PEG!
guestuser
03/24/12
@Meta_Mind:
Actually, I figured it out from GameFAQS. The HAL rooms are in 1-4 and 6-5. But you were pretty close.
Also, can anyone recommend some good Kirby LPs (besides yours, Ulti)? I'm looking for particularly funny Kirby 64 or Dream Land 3 LPs in particular.
guestuser
03/24/12
By the way, Ulti, is your current avatar Master Green from Kirby's Dream Land 2? I just noticed the similarities...
guestuser
03/24/12
Yes, it is.
guestuser
03/27/12
FP: SERIOUSLY?!
guestuser
03/30/12
Hey, I'm at the Hyper Zone in KDL3, and... jeezus! Not only are Dark Matter and Zero scary as hell, they're fricking hard too! I can't believe so many people have done no damage runs of Boss Butch (and apparently, if I want a full, 100% complete file on the game, I've got to pretty much do that too).
guestuser
07/17/14
I SHALL FIND THE DRAGON TRAINER AND ASK HIM HOW TO TRAIN A BONEKNAPPER!!!!!!!!!!!!
Part 20
Ulti's Notes:
You can see how Kiblar was really getting the short end of the stick around here. Within his own segment, not only FP stole away the spotlight with his extroverted goofiness, but then I usurped his chest-search with Banai and Xyxxa for no real reason.
It was extra annoying because the pair of thieves basically gave Kirby a quest of "find our stolen thing", which... already was the plot of the segment?? So I just duplicated the plot for no reason, and then threw in this unrelated teleportation thing for good measure, because I had no idea what I was really writing and was floundering behind-the-scenes.
It was extra annoying because the pair of thieves basically gave Kirby a quest of "find our stolen thing", which... already was the plot of the segment?? So I just duplicated the plot for no reason, and then threw in this unrelated teleportation thing for good measure, because I had no idea what I was really writing and was floundering behind-the-scenes.
Original Author's Comment:
03/30/12
KIRBY JUST DUN GOT POOF'D.
Um, anyone here got hours upon hours of time to spare? Cause I was doing a Let's Play series during my prolonged absence when I didn't have Photoshop... and it kinda became super long. It's, uh, 50 parts of a romhack of Super Mario 64, that was quite entertaining and had a lot of funny moments, so if anyone has 20 hours to spare, I'd recommend clicking this link: http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL08F161816A640E2D&feature=mh_lolz
KIRBY JUST DUN GOT POOF'D.
Um, anyone here got hours upon hours of time to spare? Cause I was doing a Let's Play series during my prolonged absence when I didn't have Photoshop... and it kinda became super long. It's, uh, 50 parts of a romhack of Super Mario 64, that was quite entertaining and had a lot of funny moments, so if anyone has 20 hours to spare, I'd recommend clicking this link: http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL08F161816A640E2D&feature=mh_lolz
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
contradiction123
03/30/12
GIGI! HOW DARE YE?
At least, I'm betting my money that it's Gigi. Not that I have money.
Jerdude14487
03/30/12
contradiction123@: That or he's turning into 10 kirbies like Kirby Mass Attack.
Gigi19972010
03/30/12
contradiction123:
Because I already stole it! >:D
BattleStarX
03/30/12
I don't know 'bout Gigi, but I promise that I didn't do it. I'm still too busy making my Dedede's life miserable.
Hmm... what do you call a thief that steals from a thief?
contradiction123
03/30/12
Gigi19972010: I NEVER HAD MONEY.
HA HA HA!
Gigi19972010
03/31/12
contradiction123:
.-.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
03/31/12
BattleStarX: An anti-antitheft thief?
Divine Knight
03/31/12
Oh lord. THE SUSPENSE!
1ce_k1d
03/31/12
FWOBBLE FWOBBLE
guestuser
03/31/12
Kirby's about to join the "Stuck in a Rainbow Orb Club"...
guestuser
03/31/12
Also, I'm going to laugh so hard if FP ends up saving the day... Then again, he kind of did that in To The Tower... so yeah.
DarkMario1000
03/31/12
I call what others call *puts on shades* a S'MIRROR ATTACK!
Oooohohohohohohoooo!!!
Naw, that wasn't even punny. XD
guestuser
03/31/12
It's the big bad! He's makin' his move!!!!
guestuser
03/31/12
I suspect Gigi.
Koopa1018
03/31/12
KIRBY GOT KALBIED. Naw, not really.
Stone_Merten
03/31/12
OMG! Kirby wher'dya go?!?!?!?!
I suspect a familier mirror kirby!
PS. could I possibly get a cameo? I'd be a brown kirby. for an Idea vist Kirbies of the Void.
guestuser
04/01/12
I BEAT DREAM LAND 3 TODAY! I actually managed to do the entire second phase of the Zero battle (where it rips out its iris... very freaky) with literally one hitpoint remaining. Of course, I've still got the Minigame rush, the jumping minigame, and the Boss Butch before I have 100%... but you know what? I'm gonna take a break from that. Now, onward to finishing Kirby 64!
Ackirby
04/01/12
AND THEN KIRBY DIED. THE END.
Yeah, I'm pretty sure the statement above isn't true.
Knightkirby
12/06/12
Kirby's slowly becoming more Caiya-ish.
03/30/12
GIGI! HOW DARE YE?
At least, I'm betting my money that it's Gigi. Not that I have money.
Jerdude14487
03/30/12
contradiction123@: That or he's turning into 10 kirbies like Kirby Mass Attack.
Gigi19972010
03/30/12
contradiction123:
Because I already stole it! >:D
BattleStarX
03/30/12
I don't know 'bout Gigi, but I promise that I didn't do it. I'm still too busy making my Dedede's life miserable.
Hmm... what do you call a thief that steals from a thief?
contradiction123
03/30/12
Gigi19972010: I NEVER HAD MONEY.
HA HA HA!
Gigi19972010
03/31/12
contradiction123:
.-.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
03/31/12
BattleStarX: An anti-antitheft thief?
Divine Knight
03/31/12
Oh lord. THE SUSPENSE!
1ce_k1d
03/31/12
FWOBBLE FWOBBLE
guestuser
03/31/12
Kirby's about to join the "Stuck in a Rainbow Orb Club"...
guestuser
03/31/12
Also, I'm going to laugh so hard if FP ends up saving the day... Then again, he kind of did that in To The Tower... so yeah.
DarkMario1000
03/31/12
I call what others call *puts on shades* a S'MIRROR ATTACK!
Oooohohohohohohoooo!!!
Naw, that wasn't even punny. XD
guestuser
03/31/12
It's the big bad! He's makin' his move!!!!
guestuser
03/31/12
I suspect Gigi.
Koopa1018
03/31/12
KIRBY GOT KALBIED. Naw, not really.
Stone_Merten
03/31/12
OMG! Kirby wher'dya go?!?!?!?!
I suspect a familier mirror kirby!
PS. could I possibly get a cameo? I'd be a brown kirby. for an Idea vist Kirbies of the Void.
guestuser
04/01/12
I BEAT DREAM LAND 3 TODAY! I actually managed to do the entire second phase of the Zero battle (where it rips out its iris... very freaky) with literally one hitpoint remaining. Of course, I've still got the Minigame rush, the jumping minigame, and the Boss Butch before I have 100%... but you know what? I'm gonna take a break from that. Now, onward to finishing Kirby 64!
Ackirby
04/01/12
AND THEN KIRBY DIED. THE END.
Yeah, I'm pretty sure the statement above isn't true.
Knightkirby
12/06/12
Kirby's slowly becoming more Caiya-ish.
Part 21
Ulti's Notes:
Nova was a large, clockwork star who granted wishes. He is from Kirby Super Star's Milky Way Wishes subgame, in which the evil Marx tricks Kirby into summoning the wishing star in order to steal Kirby's wish for himself. Marx usurps Kirby's wish once Nova is summoned, and wishes to control Planet Popstar. Kirby is having none of that in-game, though, and proceeds to enter the gigantic clockwork star and destroy Nova from the inside-out, before then taking the fight directly to Marx (and winning).
The background utilized here is indeed taken from the boss fight against Nova's inner workings, known in the games as either Heart of Nova or Galactic NOVA Nucleus. Normally, there are pillars to attack that represent Nova's life-force, but here, it's just the background layer being shown off.
The background utilized here is indeed taken from the boss fight against Nova's inner workings, known in the games as either Heart of Nova or Galactic NOVA Nucleus. Normally, there are pillars to attack that represent Nova's life-force, but here, it's just the background layer being shown off.
Original Author's Comment:
04/01/12
Man, I bet NOBODY saw this development coming!
Shocking, ain't it?
Man, I bet NOBODY saw this development coming!
Shocking, ain't it?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
contradiction123
04/01/12
Not really.
AFTER COMIC HAS CHANGED EDIT: It might be an enemy. MAYBE.
EDIT: OR MAYBEY, HE GOT TELEPORTED THROUGH TIME, AND OLD KIRBY IS COMING TO BLOW THIS SUCKER. AND BAM! INSTA-DOOM
Andromeda Lazuli
04/01/12
There... Isn't anything there...
foxpuff
04/01/12
Um... It's blank.
Gigi19972010
04/01/12
I was expecting a better joke... .-.
Luigi_96
04/01/12
LOL!! xD
Also, Gigi, LOVE the new avvie!
Gigi19972010
04/01/12
Luigi_96:
Thanks, gotta love Calvin and Hobbes. xP
Divine Knight
04/01/12
Heh heh... Got me there Yoshi.
MarioKong
04/01/12
Its nothing there.
DarkNut255
04/01/12
BEST. COMIC. EVAR.
Except for Yoshi and Kirby, any of 'Shnaps's comics, and… uhh… SOMETHING. THE COMIC.
JosephX
04/01/12
Could someone tell me what's going on? I'm getting a blank page here.
guestuser
04/01/12
Such a large plot twist!
Stone_Merten
04/01/12
OMG! OH MY GOD THAT WAS THE MOST EPIC FIGHT SCENE IN EXISTANCE
DarkMario1000
04/01/12
Wow, this is shockin'…
Koopa1018
04/01/12
WOOTLES BEST EVAAAAA!
wenkuang77
04/01/12
so it WAS him!
BattleStarX
04/01/12
I imagine Kirby's wondering what the heck he's seeing at the moment. That rainbow sphere must've done a number on him.
castleofwarriors
04/02/12
Blank.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/02/12
Alright, April Foolery over, time to actually SHOW the comic. :P
Gigi19972010
04/03/12
No moar blankness.
IT IS FANHAL- *SHOT*
If Gigi teleported him, I love you forever. :3
Stone_Merten
04/03/12
............................... gah teleporting and creepy voices! oh my god help!..............
Tygah
04/03/12
I don't get why NOVA had to explode. He was just granting a wish, didn't really do anything wrong...
guestuser
04/03/12
Finally, the moment of truth is at hand....THE BIG BAD FINALLY REVEALS HIM/HERSELF!!!!! Yesh! Yesh!!!!!1!!
guestuser
04/03/12
It's Marx! Or Magolor! Or Zero! Or NOVA! Or - *shot*
Ackirby
04/03/12
Wow! How did this happen!?
Air Man1 21
04/04/12
He had to be exploded to prevent the wish from being granted.
Also, Kirby is floating.
Tygah
04/04/12
Yah, I suppose you're right. I just felt bad blowing him up.
Koopa1018
04/04/12
This is an actual comic? Well then...I wonder who it is? Magolor?
Tygah: Remember MKMU? MK summoned NOVA after Kirby had "destroyed" him!
EDIT: It probably isn't GK--his speech bubble was dark pinkish!
BattleStarX
04/04/12
Surprisingly, my previous comment is still somehow relevant.
And Kirby, did you really have to say that? It's so cliché.
04/01/12
Not really.
AFTER COMIC HAS CHANGED EDIT: It might be an enemy. MAYBE.
EDIT: OR MAYBEY, HE GOT TELEPORTED THROUGH TIME, AND OLD KIRBY IS COMING TO BLOW THIS SUCKER. AND BAM! INSTA-DOOM
Andromeda Lazuli
04/01/12
There... Isn't anything there...
foxpuff
04/01/12
Um... It's blank.
Gigi19972010
04/01/12
I was expecting a better joke... .-.
Luigi_96
04/01/12
LOL!! xD
Also, Gigi, LOVE the new avvie!
Gigi19972010
04/01/12
Luigi_96:
Thanks, gotta love Calvin and Hobbes. xP
Divine Knight
04/01/12
Heh heh... Got me there Yoshi.
MarioKong
04/01/12
Its nothing there.
DarkNut255
04/01/12
BEST. COMIC. EVAR.
Except for Yoshi and Kirby, any of 'Shnaps's comics, and… uhh… SOMETHING. THE COMIC.
JosephX
04/01/12
Could someone tell me what's going on? I'm getting a blank page here.
guestuser
04/01/12
Such a large plot twist!
Stone_Merten
04/01/12
OMG! OH MY GOD THAT WAS THE MOST EPIC FIGHT SCENE IN EXISTANCE
DarkMario1000
04/01/12
Wow, this is shockin'…
Koopa1018
04/01/12
WOOTLES BEST EVAAAAA!
wenkuang77
04/01/12
so it WAS him!
BattleStarX
04/01/12
I imagine Kirby's wondering what the heck he's seeing at the moment. That rainbow sphere must've done a number on him.
castleofwarriors
04/02/12
Blank.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/02/12
Alright, April Foolery over, time to actually SHOW the comic. :P
Gigi19972010
04/03/12
No moar blankness.
IT IS FANHAL- *SHOT*
If Gigi teleported him, I love you forever. :3
Stone_Merten
04/03/12
............................... gah teleporting and creepy voices! oh my god help!..............
Tygah
04/03/12
I don't get why NOVA had to explode. He was just granting a wish, didn't really do anything wrong...
guestuser
04/03/12
Finally, the moment of truth is at hand....THE BIG BAD FINALLY REVEALS HIM/HERSELF!!!!! Yesh! Yesh!!!!!1!!
guestuser
04/03/12
It's Marx! Or Magolor! Or Zero! Or NOVA! Or - *shot*
Ackirby
04/03/12
Wow! How did this happen!?
Air Man1 21
04/04/12
He had to be exploded to prevent the wish from being granted.
Also, Kirby is floating.
Tygah
04/04/12
Yah, I suppose you're right. I just felt bad blowing him up.
Koopa1018
04/04/12
This is an actual comic? Well then...I wonder who it is? Magolor?
Tygah: Remember MKMU? MK summoned NOVA after Kirby had "destroyed" him!
EDIT: It probably isn't GK--his speech bubble was dark pinkish!
BattleStarX
04/04/12
Surprisingly, my previous comment is still somehow relevant.
And Kirby, did you really have to say that? It's so cliché.
Part 22
Ulti's Notes:
This was, blatantly, me running entirely out of ideas and trying to desperately cobble things together.
Wiz returning from To the Tower had no bearing on anything, and was intended to be a cool "whoa!" moment, but even then, nobody in the comments was particularly impressed. Even in the moment, this was something that failed, and I think that hit me hard at the time, because the segment just takes a very swift nosedive immediately following this.
Wiz returning from To the Tower had no bearing on anything, and was intended to be a cool "whoa!" moment, but even then, nobody in the comments was particularly impressed. Even in the moment, this was something that failed, and I think that hit me hard at the time, because the segment just takes a very swift nosedive immediately following this.
Original Author's Comment:
04/05/12
Go back and make sure you didn't miss the last update because of April Fool's!
So, nobody guessed it was Wiz, DESPITE the fact that it was the exact same coloration, AND he uses magic. I guess Gigi was just the popular guess!
Also, I'm starting a new Kirby Let's Play! It's of Kirby's Dream Land 2
Go back and make sure you didn't miss the last update because of April Fool's!
So, nobody guessed it was Wiz, DESPITE the fact that it was the exact same coloration, AND he uses magic. I guess Gigi was just the popular guess!
Also, I'm starting a new Kirby Let's Play! It's of Kirby's Dream Land 2
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkMario1000
04/05/12
Me: *thinking* Holy crap, Galacta Knight is back with Marx!!!
Me after reading: Oh, it's just Wiz…
guestuser
04/05/12
Wait, so the guy that's bossing Talzo around...that was Wiz? ...Eh, makes sense I guess...OKAY YOU CAN SMASH HIS JAW IN NOW!!!
guestuser
04/05/12
@Trevor:
No, Wiz doesn't have glowing red eyes. And his speech bubbles are different from that other guy. He MIGHT be working for him though.
DarkMario1000:
You know, now that I think about it, Marx hasn't appeared in this comic at all...
Gigi19972010
04/05/12
Ah well, I still like Wiz.
BattleStarX
04/05/12
How could we think of Wiz when we have a troublemaker like Gigi around? It's only natural!
guestuser
04/05/12
HA HA HA! Kirby said wiz. '^.^'
Divine Knight
04/05/12
He survived Caiya's attack?!? Time to call the Navy.
Tygah
04/05/12
Wonder if the background will stay the same colour this time?
Ackirby
04/06/12
GAH!!!
WIZ!?!?!?
Man, I really hate this guy!!! (Web-comicwise)
Stone_Merten
04/06/12
How did he peice back together is shattered parts?
Koopa1018
04/06/12
What? Ugh...he's really not the, um, "guy," I was hoping for.
04/05/12
Me: *thinking* Holy crap, Galacta Knight is back with Marx!!!
Me after reading: Oh, it's just Wiz…
guestuser
04/05/12
Wait, so the guy that's bossing Talzo around...that was Wiz? ...Eh, makes sense I guess...OKAY YOU CAN SMASH HIS JAW IN NOW!!!
guestuser
04/05/12
@Trevor:
No, Wiz doesn't have glowing red eyes. And his speech bubbles are different from that other guy. He MIGHT be working for him though.
DarkMario1000:
You know, now that I think about it, Marx hasn't appeared in this comic at all...
Gigi19972010
04/05/12
Ah well, I still like Wiz.
BattleStarX
04/05/12
How could we think of Wiz when we have a troublemaker like Gigi around? It's only natural!
guestuser
04/05/12
HA HA HA! Kirby said wiz. '^.^'
Divine Knight
04/05/12
He survived Caiya's attack?!? Time to call the Navy.
Tygah
04/05/12
Wonder if the background will stay the same colour this time?
Ackirby
04/06/12
GAH!!!
WIZ!?!?!?
Man, I really hate this guy!!! (Web-comicwise)
Stone_Merten
04/06/12
How did he peice back together is shattered parts?
Koopa1018
04/06/12
What? Ugh...he's really not the, um, "guy," I was hoping for.
Part 23
Ulti's Notes:
This is something that I believe I mentioned earlier in To the Tower's annotations, but to reiterate: I completely made this up about Wiz for absolutely no reason. This is not an attribute Wiz ever has in the one game appearance he got.
He also teleported between sentences in Panel 3 when Kirby tried to slash him, but funnily enough, despite being a magician, he also never has the ability to teleport in the games either. I just loved making things up about Wiz, apparently.
He also teleported between sentences in Panel 3 when Kirby tried to slash him, but funnily enough, despite being a magician, he also never has the ability to teleport in the games either. I just loved making things up about Wiz, apparently.
Original Author's Comment:
04/06/20
Hope the animation looks good. Courtesy of my good friend, Crabmaster!
Not sensing much surprise or interest in Wiz's reappearance.
Hope the animation looks good. Courtesy of my good friend, Crabmaster!
Not sensing much surprise or interest in Wiz's reappearance.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkMario1000
04/06/12
Looks pretty good.
foxpuff
04/07/12
Zappy zap.
Ackirby
04/07/12
Hey! It's my old pal, Gif!
How have you been, Gif?
guestuser
04/07/12
Kirby never did have much luck with Wiz, did he? At least without the other Kirbies, we get to see the Mirror Wizard fight a little more.
Divine Knight
04/07/12
Animation!!!!! I love animations!
Stone_Merten
04/07/12
nice animation. So he grows and shrinks?
P.S. love the animated avi fox puff!
foxpuff
04/07/12
Stone_Merten: Thanks! I did it myself. :)
MarioKong
04/07/12
I like Wiz. Wiz iz cool.
Tygah
04/07/12
Surprised? Yes, I am. And the animation looks great!
guestuser
04/08/12
Any tips on how to get past stage 4 of Shiver Star in Kirby 64? Freaking descending ceiling keeps killing me because I can't tell what spots are safe to stand on... Not to mention, there's still a couple sections of that level AFTER that section... fun... I've already acquired the first two shards, but I can't GET to the third shard because of that freaking descending ceiling section.
guestuser
04/08/12
Also, do you plan on doing LP's for every Kirby game? Your Dream Land 2 LP is actually the first LP of yours that I've actually watched part of (I just watched the first two parts).
Ultimate Yoshi
04/09/12
@ Jarkes
Sorry, haven't played 64 in AGES. I'm of no use when it comes to post-Rock Star advice.
Yes, I plan on eventually 100%ing every single Kirby game in the main series. I may also do a few side games, like Kirby's Avalanche or Kirby Air Ride.
Edit: My friend Torkirby says to keep trying and you'll learn which areas are safe. He says that section is trial and error. I'll take his word for it!
guestuser
04/09/12
@Ultimate_Yoshi:
Okay, cool. Also, don't you find it weird that Dream Land 2 retains your lives when you turn off the game and go back to it, but Dream Land 3 and 64 (directed by the same person as 2) don't? Actually, I think DL2 might be the only Kirby game that retains your accumulated lives.
Also, I only have one part left of your DL2 LP. I just finished watching the Bonus Chance Rush video. Have you ever noticed that LP's are funnier when the LPer is failing?
Also, I'm a little confused as to how often you use savestates, and how often you just skip all the way back to the part where you had just messed up.
EDIT: Okay, apparently you uploaded an extra video to the playlist while I was in the middle of watching that one. Huh.
guestuser
04/09/12
I also noticed that, in your Kirby's Nightmare In Dream Land LP, not only could I barely hear the game audio, but the audio was out of sync with the visuals.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/09/12
@ Jarkes
My Let's Plays before Kirby's Dream Land 2 all have some quirk, oddity, or deformity. Mega Man 2 had no voice commentary, Yoshi's Island had the game audio really high and I was really quiet, Kirby's Dream Land had audio desync and non-widescreen when it shouldve been widescreen, Nightmare In Dream Land had some desycn as well, as well as some non-widescreen-ness, and some badly exported videos in Butter Building and Grape Garden, Tiger Paw Studios was me testing a new microphone, so it sounded a bit odd, and Super Mario Star Road really was the only LP of mine before KDL2 where nothing in editing really went wrong at all.
guestuser
04/12/12
I've started watching your Super Mario Star Road LP... were there ever any moments where you wanted to say, "Screw it! I'm checking a guide!" and then do so?
Also, is Bomberman 64 on the Virtual Console? I know Bomberman Hero is, but I'm not sure if that's related to Bomberman 64 and Bomberman 64: The Second Attack (is that what it's called?) besides all of them being on the N64. And if I recall correctly, all of them are brutally hard.
04/06/12
Looks pretty good.
foxpuff
04/07/12
Zappy zap.
Ackirby
04/07/12
Hey! It's my old pal, Gif!
How have you been, Gif?
guestuser
04/07/12
Kirby never did have much luck with Wiz, did he? At least without the other Kirbies, we get to see the Mirror Wizard fight a little more.
Divine Knight
04/07/12
Animation!!!!! I love animations!
Stone_Merten
04/07/12
nice animation. So he grows and shrinks?
P.S. love the animated avi fox puff!
foxpuff
04/07/12
Stone_Merten: Thanks! I did it myself. :)
MarioKong
04/07/12
I like Wiz. Wiz iz cool.
Tygah
04/07/12
Surprised? Yes, I am. And the animation looks great!
guestuser
04/08/12
Any tips on how to get past stage 4 of Shiver Star in Kirby 64? Freaking descending ceiling keeps killing me because I can't tell what spots are safe to stand on... Not to mention, there's still a couple sections of that level AFTER that section... fun... I've already acquired the first two shards, but I can't GET to the third shard because of that freaking descending ceiling section.
guestuser
04/08/12
Also, do you plan on doing LP's for every Kirby game? Your Dream Land 2 LP is actually the first LP of yours that I've actually watched part of (I just watched the first two parts).
Ultimate Yoshi
04/09/12
@ Jarkes
Sorry, haven't played 64 in AGES. I'm of no use when it comes to post-Rock Star advice.
Yes, I plan on eventually 100%ing every single Kirby game in the main series. I may also do a few side games, like Kirby's Avalanche or Kirby Air Ride.
Edit: My friend Torkirby says to keep trying and you'll learn which areas are safe. He says that section is trial and error. I'll take his word for it!
guestuser
04/09/12
@Ultimate_Yoshi:
Okay, cool. Also, don't you find it weird that Dream Land 2 retains your lives when you turn off the game and go back to it, but Dream Land 3 and 64 (directed by the same person as 2) don't? Actually, I think DL2 might be the only Kirby game that retains your accumulated lives.
Also, I only have one part left of your DL2 LP. I just finished watching the Bonus Chance Rush video. Have you ever noticed that LP's are funnier when the LPer is failing?
Also, I'm a little confused as to how often you use savestates, and how often you just skip all the way back to the part where you had just messed up.
EDIT: Okay, apparently you uploaded an extra video to the playlist while I was in the middle of watching that one. Huh.
guestuser
04/09/12
I also noticed that, in your Kirby's Nightmare In Dream Land LP, not only could I barely hear the game audio, but the audio was out of sync with the visuals.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/09/12
@ Jarkes
My Let's Plays before Kirby's Dream Land 2 all have some quirk, oddity, or deformity. Mega Man 2 had no voice commentary, Yoshi's Island had the game audio really high and I was really quiet, Kirby's Dream Land had audio desync and non-widescreen when it shouldve been widescreen, Nightmare In Dream Land had some desycn as well, as well as some non-widescreen-ness, and some badly exported videos in Butter Building and Grape Garden, Tiger Paw Studios was me testing a new microphone, so it sounded a bit odd, and Super Mario Star Road really was the only LP of mine before KDL2 where nothing in editing really went wrong at all.
guestuser
04/12/12
I've started watching your Super Mario Star Road LP... were there ever any moments where you wanted to say, "Screw it! I'm checking a guide!" and then do so?
Also, is Bomberman 64 on the Virtual Console? I know Bomberman Hero is, but I'm not sure if that's related to Bomberman 64 and Bomberman 64: The Second Attack (is that what it's called?) besides all of them being on the N64. And if I recall correctly, all of them are brutally hard.
Part 24
Ulti's Notes:
Nosedive, part 1: Instead of a dramatic confrontation continuing between Wiz and Kirby, or even a fight at all, instead, FP just randomly showed up, because... well, the drama failed entirely, so I fell back on lolhumor since I had no other fallbacks.
Original Author's Comment:
04/13/12
Now, normally, you guys would be stuck with zero updates for the next few days. Normally, I'd say I'm on vacation, and you'd just have to suffer without updates for a few days or a week.
But you know what? Screw it, I've got a laptop now. The Kirby Adventure Squad waits for no vacation!
So, FP! He's here now. Not as if I'm just gonna leave him there. How did he get here? ...He's FP. Let's just leave it at that.
AND then there's more! Have a very long video made by yours truly. BUT WAIT. Before you just ignore it because I used the word long as an adjective, read on. The video is a montage of 50 moments of funny that were shown in my previous seven Let's Plays, as well as some Skrawlers clips! The video may be 48 minutes, but it's 48 minutes worth of nothing but FUNNY. So go ahead, and watch my Let's Play Montage! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbWpcpufbZo
Now, normally, you guys would be stuck with zero updates for the next few days. Normally, I'd say I'm on vacation, and you'd just have to suffer without updates for a few days or a week.
But you know what? Screw it, I've got a laptop now. The Kirby Adventure Squad waits for no vacation!
So, FP! He's here now. Not as if I'm just gonna leave him there. How did he get here? ...He's FP. Let's just leave it at that.
AND then there's more! Have a very long video made by yours truly. BUT WAIT. Before you just ignore it because I used the word long as an adjective, read on. The video is a montage of 50 moments of funny that were shown in my previous seven Let's Plays, as well as some Skrawlers clips! The video may be 48 minutes, but it's 48 minutes worth of nothing but FUNNY. So go ahead, and watch my Let's Play Montage! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xbWpcpufbZo
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ackirby
04/13/12
RAAAAAAAANDOM!
Divine Knight
04/13/12
Kirby's face makes me crack up every time I see it!
Alexini0699
04/13/12
MAGICAL COOKIE!
BattleStarX
04/13/12
...That's one good cookie.
DarkMario1000
04/13/12
FP at least delayed the battle somewhat…in his very crazed and random possible way.
guestuser
04/13/12
ALL HALE THE MAGIC COOKIE!
guestuser
04/13/12
He's so hilarious XD
guestuser
04/14/12
...So, what? FP is like, the Deadpool of the Kirby Adventure Squad Universe? If so...THAT'S AMAZING! :D
Koopa1018
04/14/12
*FACEPALM*
guestuser
04/23/12
Trevor The Hedgehog: ALL RIGHT A KRIBY WITH DEADPOOL POWER!
guestuser
04/30/14
Three words for FP, WHAT THE MOUSTACHE?
04/13/12
RAAAAAAAANDOM!
Divine Knight
04/13/12
Kirby's face makes me crack up every time I see it!
Alexini0699
04/13/12
MAGICAL COOKIE!
BattleStarX
04/13/12
...That's one good cookie.
DarkMario1000
04/13/12
FP at least delayed the battle somewhat…in his very crazed and random possible way.
guestuser
04/13/12
ALL HALE THE MAGIC COOKIE!
guestuser
04/13/12
He's so hilarious XD
guestuser
04/14/12
...So, what? FP is like, the Deadpool of the Kirby Adventure Squad Universe? If so...THAT'S AMAZING! :D
Koopa1018
04/14/12
*FACEPALM*
guestuser
04/23/12
Trevor The Hedgehog: ALL RIGHT A KRIBY WITH DEADPOOL POWER!
guestuser
04/30/14
Three words for FP, WHAT THE MOUSTACHE?
Part 25
Ulti's Notes:
Nosedive, part 2: "Oh no, bringing back Wiz failed to garner positive attention, and I don't know what to do with him anymore!! Let's just end it immediately with Caiya."
Like, it's just so... unconfident. I didn't hold my ground, I didn't try to at least do something worthwhile with this stuff. The moment my rough ideas were met with resistance under any level, I just folded and gave up. It wasn't a great idea to begin with, but at least previous segments tried to follow through on their rough ideas. First with Helping Hand and now here in Tree to Tree, I just lacked the willpower and energy to upkeep these things, and it really shows.
Like, it's just so... unconfident. I didn't hold my ground, I didn't try to at least do something worthwhile with this stuff. The moment my rough ideas were met with resistance under any level, I just folded and gave up. It wasn't a great idea to begin with, but at least previous segments tried to follow through on their rough ideas. First with Helping Hand and now here in Tree to Tree, I just lacked the willpower and energy to upkeep these things, and it really shows.
Original Author's Comment:
04/14/12
Why you, Kirby? Because, it's funny, of course!
Because I'm just too lazy, here's the KDL2 LP playlist. Go watch the ones you haven't if you feel like it: http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLD6F8A1782FC485C0&feature=mh_lolz
Why you, Kirby? Because, it's funny, of course!
Because I'm just too lazy, here's the KDL2 LP playlist. Go watch the ones you haven't if you feel like it: http://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLD6F8A1782FC485C0&feature=mh_lolz
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkMario1000
04/14/12
Caiya's double random personality cracks me up at the most "didn't see that comin'" moments.
1ce_k1d
04/14/12
Ultimate Yoshi: Let'splaylist?
kirbypuff
04/14/12
If Wiz was just eaten, then is he gone permanently?
BattleStarX
04/14/12
DONUT!
Koopa1018
04/14/12
Uh...Achievement Trough Ignorance, TV Tropers?
Hammerbro22
04/14/12
I think the answer your looking for is DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT!
foxpuff
04/14/12
How'd Caiya get there?
Stone_Merten
04/15/12
Wiz is made of donuts! Lets eat him!
Pikaboy777
10/25/13
Yeesh! Someone take Caiya to Crispy Creme before he eats everyone! LOL
guestuser
04/30/14
Revenge of the randoms FP and caiya
Thecommander248
11/14/14
Koopa1018: That is correct sir. Adding to the Trope page. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Webcomic/KirbyAdventure
guestuser
09/18/17
I almost laughed in the middle of homeroom. "DONUUUUUT!" HAHAHAHAHAHA
04/14/12
Caiya's double random personality cracks me up at the most "didn't see that comin'" moments.
1ce_k1d
04/14/12
Ultimate Yoshi: Let'splaylist?
kirbypuff
04/14/12
If Wiz was just eaten, then is he gone permanently?
BattleStarX
04/14/12
DONUT!
Koopa1018
04/14/12
Uh...Achievement Trough Ignorance, TV Tropers?
Hammerbro22
04/14/12
I think the answer your looking for is DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT!
foxpuff
04/14/12
How'd Caiya get there?
Stone_Merten
04/15/12
Wiz is made of donuts! Lets eat him!
Pikaboy777
10/25/13
Yeesh! Someone take Caiya to Crispy Creme before he eats everyone! LOL
guestuser
04/30/14
Revenge of the randoms FP and caiya
Thecommander248
11/14/14
Koopa1018: That is correct sir. Adding to the Trope page. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Webcomic/KirbyAdventure
guestuser
09/18/17
I almost laughed in the middle of homeroom. "DONUUUUUT!" HAHAHAHAHAHA
Part 26
Ulti's Notes:
Wiz being an illusionist, for the record, is also completely made up for the comic. But I guess giving him extra magic abilities like illusions and teleportation isn't completely out-of-nowhere, given it's magical in nature. I'm only really bringing these up for annotation purposes, not for criticism purposes.
Believe me, I'll criticize things where it's worth doing so, you've already been seeing it.
Believe me, I'll criticize things where it's worth doing so, you've already been seeing it.
Original Author's Comment:
04/14/12
EVERYTHING MUST BE DONE FOR THE SCIENCEYNESS. THOSE WHO DO NOT COMPLY MUST BE SCIENCED.
EVERYTHING MUST BE DONE FOR THE SCIENCEYNESS. THOSE WHO DO NOT COMPLY MUST BE SCIENCED.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
foxpuff
04/14/12
Nothing but science. :P
DarkNut255
04/14/12
SCIENCYNESSESFSGJS
GJAISDGHAIHGRAIRH
YES.
guestuser
04/14/12
Of course, don't you know anything about SCIENCE?
guestuser
04/14/12
So I guess Wiz is dead for real this time, right? Since he didn't actually shatter...
BattleStarX
04/14/12
Eat him, Caiya! We must not be scienced!
DarkMario1000
04/14/12
the return…
of BWARR!!!!???
Smugleafdoofus3
04/14/12
IT IS SILLY. BWARR IS ALMIGHTY!
guestuser
04/15/12
I was just in this for the science. *points to FP* HIM, on the other hand...
Falcon_Pawnch75
04/15/12
Space? Space? I wanna go to space. Space. Space. I wanna go to space please lemme go to space. Space. Space!
guestuser
04/15/12
Ba Ba, Ba, Ba, Ba. Oh, space cops, here come the space cops. It's cool, cool, cool, cool.
guestuser
04/15/12
Hey, I need some advice. See, I've obtained all the treasures in Kirby and the Amazing Mirror, I've gone through all the rooms, and I've beaten Dark Mind, but I only have 97% completion. What am I missing? I beat Dark Mind before finding all the treasures, so do I have to fight Dark Mind again?
Stone_Merten
04/15/12
yay! Cayia is stupid again!
Grrrrrr.....brrrrrr.frrrrrrrr.........hrrrrrrrrr.bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb......wwwwwwwwww.......................BBBBBBBBWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
guestuser
04/15/12
Never mind, I was missing a few non-Collection Room treasure chests in a few areas. I have 100% now.
guestuser
07/10/12
PORTAL 2 FOR THE SCIENCEY!
Omega Kirby
04/18/13
Hahahaha! Funniest moment in KA Evar!!!!!!!
guestuser
04/30/14
You kill me FP
04/14/12
Nothing but science. :P
DarkNut255
04/14/12
SCIENCYNESSESFSGJS
GJAISDGHAIHGRAIRH
YES.
guestuser
04/14/12
Of course, don't you know anything about SCIENCE?
guestuser
04/14/12
So I guess Wiz is dead for real this time, right? Since he didn't actually shatter...
BattleStarX
04/14/12
Eat him, Caiya! We must not be scienced!
DarkMario1000
04/14/12
the return…
of BWARR!!!!???
Smugleafdoofus3
04/14/12
IT IS SILLY. BWARR IS ALMIGHTY!
guestuser
04/15/12
I was just in this for the science. *points to FP* HIM, on the other hand...
Falcon_Pawnch75
04/15/12
Space? Space? I wanna go to space. Space. Space. I wanna go to space please lemme go to space. Space. Space!
guestuser
04/15/12
Ba Ba, Ba, Ba, Ba. Oh, space cops, here come the space cops. It's cool, cool, cool, cool.
guestuser
04/15/12
Hey, I need some advice. See, I've obtained all the treasures in Kirby and the Amazing Mirror, I've gone through all the rooms, and I've beaten Dark Mind, but I only have 97% completion. What am I missing? I beat Dark Mind before finding all the treasures, so do I have to fight Dark Mind again?
Stone_Merten
04/15/12
yay! Cayia is stupid again!
Grrrrrr.....brrrrrr.frrrrrrrr.........hrrrrrrrrr.bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb......wwwwwwwwww.......................BBBBBBBBWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
guestuser
04/15/12
Never mind, I was missing a few non-Collection Room treasure chests in a few areas. I have 100% now.
guestuser
07/10/12
PORTAL 2 FOR THE SCIENCEY!
Omega Kirby
04/18/13
Hahahaha! Funniest moment in KA Evar!!!!!!!
guestuser
04/30/14
You kill me FP
Part 27
Ulti's Notes:
Aaaand nosedive, the third and final: This was me just giving up entirely. I wrote the segment off as a failure, gave up, and just abruptly concluded it after an equally-abrupt interruption from Wiz, who was entirely unrelated to anything else going on here.
Kiblar never got to do anything, Banai and Xyxxa never got to do anything, Wiz had nothing to do with anything, the only character who got to do much was FP and even then he just devolved into speaking nonsense and deriving humor out of that. It was... so rough.
It's a shame, because in theory, there's something truly salvagable within here. Have Kiblar's treasure held hostage by Banai and Xyxxa, work out the trade of this random gemstone with the chest and the crew going to find that, and give the gemstone to Wiz (maybe powering his magic or something?) Now there's a plot, a reason for Wiz to be involved, and a clear goal for the Squad to unite behind, and everybody gets to be involved in some fashion.
It's not an unworkable segment, and I think that's why it's, in my opinion, still the worst segment of Kirby Adventure. On its own, it may not be the worst idea, but compared to what it could've been, it's the least living up to its potential even for the time of writing it.
Oh well, at least it's over, and I don't have to annotate it anymore. I can leave it in the past for good now. Next up, though... hah, god, it's like a neverending punch of rough times. Tear in the Fabric was the next segment, and boy was that a unique kind of doozy.
Kiblar never got to do anything, Banai and Xyxxa never got to do anything, Wiz had nothing to do with anything, the only character who got to do much was FP and even then he just devolved into speaking nonsense and deriving humor out of that. It was... so rough.
It's a shame, because in theory, there's something truly salvagable within here. Have Kiblar's treasure held hostage by Banai and Xyxxa, work out the trade of this random gemstone with the chest and the crew going to find that, and give the gemstone to Wiz (maybe powering his magic or something?) Now there's a plot, a reason for Wiz to be involved, and a clear goal for the Squad to unite behind, and everybody gets to be involved in some fashion.
It's not an unworkable segment, and I think that's why it's, in my opinion, still the worst segment of Kirby Adventure. On its own, it may not be the worst idea, but compared to what it could've been, it's the least living up to its potential even for the time of writing it.
Oh well, at least it's over, and I don't have to annotate it anymore. I can leave it in the past for good now. Next up, though... hah, god, it's like a neverending punch of rough times. Tear in the Fabric was the next segment, and boy was that a unique kind of doozy.
Original Author's Comment:
04/16/12
11 hour car rides can be tiring. I've got nothing on my mind right now, it's just a complete blank. I feel like FP!
11 hour car rides can be tiring. I've got nothing on my mind right now, it's just a complete blank. I feel like FP!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Kirbysmith [DJ]
04/16/12
Who'd have known that the artifact you were looking for was unknowingly taken by thieves that you were aiding to steal from another thief who also stole from them?
guestuser
04/16/12
Back from my vacation to Hersheypark, and I see the storyline's closing. I didn't really like this storyline too much, but that's just me.
Smugleafdoofus3
04/16/12
So, Tree to Tree ends? What's next?
DarkMario1000
04/16/12
Pretty anticlimatic chapter.
EDIT: I must not know how to spell "chuckling" the correct way. >~>
DarkNut255
04/16/12
Man, I'M the one who gets the short end of the stick…
First no Y&K and now this…
Must be karma for not updating my stuff at all. Yup. That must be it.
Stone_Merten
04/16/12
So DDD stole the orb from someone
so theives steal it from DDD
Wiz Steals from thieves
So thieves rob a Kibble
lets make that more complicated....
DDD stole something from wiz
So thives stole it from DDD
Wiz retrived orb from theives without them knowing
Theives panic and steal something to make up for it
Kirby kills Wiz and gets thing
Theive leave it with dead wiz
Item is returned to thieves
DDD steals item from theives again
Realizes tis the wrong thing
Gives it to Kirby
Kirby gives it to Theives
Turns out to be Kibbles....
Divine Knight
04/16/12
My head's spinning right now from the sheer fail. Kirby must be mad.
Falcon_Pawnch75
04/16/12
Anybody notice I'm standing in midair?
Alexini0699
04/16/12
Hmm...WAIT! Where's Caiya?
guestuser
04/16/12
Is that the shadow orb?
Smugleafdoofus3
04/16/12
When do we see the fire orb? I want Kaxo to burn up everything...
foxpuff
04/16/12
You know, now that I think of it, I don't think that was a nice reward. :P
guestuser
04/17/12
...WHEN SUDDENLY TALZO!!!
guestuser
04/19/12
I need which-game-should-I-get advice again. Should I get Kirby Mass Attack, one of the 3DS games I mentioned last time (Star Fox 64 3D or Tales of the Abyss; I've decided that I really don't want Mario Kart 7 at all), or Kid Icarus Uprising (which has replaced Mario Kart 7 on my "most-wanted 3DS games" list)? I'm leaning towards Mass Attack, and then asking for one or more of the 3DS ones for my birthday (which is in June), but I'm not sure. Even then, I'm not going to be buying one of these games until early May, once finals are all said and done with (yes, in college (or at least my college), finals are done in EARLY May).
Ultimate Yoshi
04/19/12
@ Jarkes
Kirby Mass Attack is addicting as hell, extraordinarily fun, and the subgames are amazing. I think you know what I think you should choose.
guestuser
04/19/12
@Ulti:
Yeah, that's what I was thinking. Is it true that it's extremely hard to get 100% in Mass Attack? I heard that it has an Achievement system of sorts, and one of the "Achievements" is to play through every single level without getting hit once. Not necessarily never getting hit in the entire game, just playing through each level over and over until you can get through it without getting hit. At least, that's what I think it was...
Ultimate Yoshi
04/19/12
@ Jarkes
You are 100% correct. So time consuming.
guestuser
04/19/12
@Ulti:
So, in this particular case, the "Achievements" actually DO count towards the percentage? From what I understand, on most Xbox 360 and PS3 games (I just have a Wii and 3DS), the Achievements, while nice, don't count towards a game's already existing completion percentage (if the game tracks it, that is).
guestuser
04/21/12
Hey, question about your Super Mario Star Road LP: I just finished watching part 15 (though I skipped some of that part as well as the previous part, since it was the same failing over and over), and I was wondering: At what point do you go back to that ghost place (I already forgot the name of it)? I'm just curious. Also, when do you get the Wing Cap?
Ultimate Yoshi
04/21/12
@Jarkes
Here's the simple solution: Watch and find out!
(I'm just saying that because I don't remember anything specific about that LP anymore)
guestuser
04/21/12
@Ulti:
Oh, okay. So, what's your next LP going to be? Kirby Super Star Ultra? Or just Super Star?
guestuser
04/24/12
So, anyway: your thoughts on the Season 2 finale of MLP:FiM?
guestuser
04/24/12
Ulti, I know that you normally stop updates for a week or two after finishing a story arc, but could you possibly start updating Q&A: Ultimate Edition again?
guestuser
04/25/12
When will the new episode come out?
guestuser
07/10/12
cookie? donut? FP, for you, chocolate chip ice cream. 000 TRIPLE SCOOP and Caiya, this barely looks like a donut, but WHAT. EVER. O
guestuser
07/10/12
Wait... that thing the apple thing from kirby mass attack had... isn't that an... NOE. DATZ CRAZEENEZ. Although... this is just a wild guess... is that an element orb??
04/16/12
Who'd have known that the artifact you were looking for was unknowingly taken by thieves that you were aiding to steal from another thief who also stole from them?
guestuser
04/16/12
Back from my vacation to Hersheypark, and I see the storyline's closing. I didn't really like this storyline too much, but that's just me.
Smugleafdoofus3
04/16/12
So, Tree to Tree ends? What's next?
DarkMario1000
04/16/12
Pretty anticlimatic chapter.
EDIT: I must not know how to spell "chuckling" the correct way. >~>
DarkNut255
04/16/12
Man, I'M the one who gets the short end of the stick…
First no Y&K and now this…
Must be karma for not updating my stuff at all. Yup. That must be it.
Stone_Merten
04/16/12
So DDD stole the orb from someone
so theives steal it from DDD
Wiz Steals from thieves
So thieves rob a Kibble
lets make that more complicated....
DDD stole something from wiz
So thives stole it from DDD
Wiz retrived orb from theives without them knowing
Theives panic and steal something to make up for it
Kirby kills Wiz and gets thing
Theive leave it with dead wiz
Item is returned to thieves
DDD steals item from theives again
Realizes tis the wrong thing
Gives it to Kirby
Kirby gives it to Theives
Turns out to be Kibbles....
Divine Knight
04/16/12
My head's spinning right now from the sheer fail. Kirby must be mad.
Falcon_Pawnch75
04/16/12
Anybody notice I'm standing in midair?
Alexini0699
04/16/12
Hmm...WAIT! Where's Caiya?
guestuser
04/16/12
Is that the shadow orb?
Smugleafdoofus3
04/16/12
When do we see the fire orb? I want Kaxo to burn up everything...
foxpuff
04/16/12
You know, now that I think of it, I don't think that was a nice reward. :P
guestuser
04/17/12
...WHEN SUDDENLY TALZO!!!
guestuser
04/19/12
I need which-game-should-I-get advice again. Should I get Kirby Mass Attack, one of the 3DS games I mentioned last time (Star Fox 64 3D or Tales of the Abyss; I've decided that I really don't want Mario Kart 7 at all), or Kid Icarus Uprising (which has replaced Mario Kart 7 on my "most-wanted 3DS games" list)? I'm leaning towards Mass Attack, and then asking for one or more of the 3DS ones for my birthday (which is in June), but I'm not sure. Even then, I'm not going to be buying one of these games until early May, once finals are all said and done with (yes, in college (or at least my college), finals are done in EARLY May).
Ultimate Yoshi
04/19/12
@ Jarkes
Kirby Mass Attack is addicting as hell, extraordinarily fun, and the subgames are amazing. I think you know what I think you should choose.
guestuser
04/19/12
@Ulti:
Yeah, that's what I was thinking. Is it true that it's extremely hard to get 100% in Mass Attack? I heard that it has an Achievement system of sorts, and one of the "Achievements" is to play through every single level without getting hit once. Not necessarily never getting hit in the entire game, just playing through each level over and over until you can get through it without getting hit. At least, that's what I think it was...
Ultimate Yoshi
04/19/12
@ Jarkes
You are 100% correct. So time consuming.
guestuser
04/19/12
@Ulti:
So, in this particular case, the "Achievements" actually DO count towards the percentage? From what I understand, on most Xbox 360 and PS3 games (I just have a Wii and 3DS), the Achievements, while nice, don't count towards a game's already existing completion percentage (if the game tracks it, that is).
guestuser
04/21/12
Hey, question about your Super Mario Star Road LP: I just finished watching part 15 (though I skipped some of that part as well as the previous part, since it was the same failing over and over), and I was wondering: At what point do you go back to that ghost place (I already forgot the name of it)? I'm just curious. Also, when do you get the Wing Cap?
Ultimate Yoshi
04/21/12
@Jarkes
Here's the simple solution: Watch and find out!
(I'm just saying that because I don't remember anything specific about that LP anymore)
guestuser
04/21/12
@Ulti:
Oh, okay. So, what's your next LP going to be? Kirby Super Star Ultra? Or just Super Star?
guestuser
04/24/12
So, anyway: your thoughts on the Season 2 finale of MLP:FiM?
guestuser
04/24/12
Ulti, I know that you normally stop updates for a week or two after finishing a story arc, but could you possibly start updating Q&A: Ultimate Edition again?
guestuser
04/25/12
When will the new episode come out?
guestuser
07/10/12
cookie? donut? FP, for you, chocolate chip ice cream. 000 TRIPLE SCOOP and Caiya, this barely looks like a donut, but WHAT. EVER. O
guestuser
07/10/12
Wait... that thing the apple thing from kirby mass attack had... isn't that an... NOE. DATZ CRAZEENEZ. Although... this is just a wild guess... is that an element orb??
Ulti's Notes:
Regardless, though, to solve the issue that JAtI had, I decided to send the Squad to a different location from the Great Cave Offensive, the subgame where the Old Tower area came from. Instead of the Tower, I chose the Sub-Tree area to have them explore next.
Original Author's Comment:
Baweeeew, baweeew, baweewaweeew baweewweeeew, badada da da dababa ba ba- I lost track of the song.
I think this is the fourth time I've used that 'holding a letter and reading it' type of panel. First two times in To The Tower, third in The Beginning..., and fourth now. Maybe I'm missing a time? Who knows!
Also! Check out this thing that MentalKnight64 and Jarkes are making for Kirby Adventure!: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Webcomic/KirbyAdventure
If you're into this sort of thing, feel free to help out! If any of you need some info for me, I'll see if I can help too!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
11/29/11
clasby333:
That's where the Old Tower originally came from.
guestuser
11/29/11
Mail mail mail mail; it makes me want to wag my tail - *shot*
I've wanted to do that for a while now. Props if you know where I picked it up.
Anyway, glad there's a new segment up now.
guestuser
11/29/11
Yay another mission segment! Who is the mystery employer? What are his/her intentions? What will go horribly wrong this time? Find out all this on he next few strips of "Tree to Tree"!
BattleStarX
11/29/11
Best not to brink Kaxo along on this mission, if trees are involved in some way.
Unless you wanna borrow Keeby's bucket, hehehe...
DarkMario1000
11/29/11
I did that in the "To the Tower" segment, I believed. XD
DarkNut255
11/29/11
GEE AGAIN. I WONDER WHO'S CAMEO THIS IS.
contradiction123
11/29/11
Kirby isn't back yet?
Flying Peacock
11/30/11
I hate the great cave in the actual game because some of the treasures can get "destroyed." I wonder if the KAS would get lost... :{D
Foxfoxy34
11/30/11
Tree to Tree is a song from Kirby Mass Attack, do I get a prize?
Sleepy Kirby
11/30/11
Why Tree to Tree if you're going underground? Oh no wait probably like twist for logical ness ok lol idunno.
star kirby12
11/30/11
Why is it always finding something?!
Foxfoxy34
11/30/11
I wonder if it's going to be a Mass Attack background
Gigi19972010
11/30/11
Ha, it's DarkNut's cameo. Do I get a cookie? Also, comic 255 is coming, why did you think I said stalling? :P
So, you ripped the Underground Forest? I was ripping it... Anyway, if you haven't, I can post it on Kirby's Spriters Resort, but if you have... Whatever. :P
Ultimate Yoshi
11/30/11
I was planning on ripping it as I went along, but if you've already got it, that'd be incredibly helpful!
Gigi19972010
11/30/11
Ultimate Yoshi:
Well, I only have the first "room", I don't know what you'll need, though.
Ultimate Yoshi
11/30/11
Gigi19972010
Even so, every bit helps.
Gigi19972010
11/30/11
Ultimate Yoshi:
So I'm going to post it today, but later, I'm pretty busy now.
guestuser
12/14/11
Jetting across the ice, I believe. Some Birdon delivered mail to the KAS.
Luigi_96
01/31/12
You sure do those letter holding panels better than I do!
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Oh gosh, does anyone else have memories of struggling to get all 60 treasures?