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Escape!
Part 1
Part 2
Ulti's Notes:
If you click through the original and revised buttons, you'll see that the combat comics of Escape are quite different from my usual affair. I went back at a later date to revise them, like usual, in order to get them in-line visually with my typical standard. While I don't actively dislike the idea of a wilder and more variable panel layout, especially for a chaotic fight scene, my early implementation of it wasn't exactly up to quality standards, and ultimately standarizing it was a better call for this I think. Especially since after this segment, I never did panels like this again, making it quite a visual outlier.
Vezo, being an inexperienced newbie, goes down in a single page of combat, compared to everybody else. I think the interesting thing that I was able to achieve with this whole segment was how even when I was young, I knew that combat for combat's sake wasn't going to cut it or be that interesting. So, instead, I not only perpetuated a mystery of 'who is this dark blue Kirby and what does he even want', but also used the time to subtly establish the main cast just that little bit more.
Whether you realized it or not, the fight scenes did manage to tell you things about the various KAS characters, and that's worthwhile.
Vezo, being an inexperienced newbie, goes down in a single page of combat, compared to everybody else. I think the interesting thing that I was able to achieve with this whole segment was how even when I was young, I knew that combat for combat's sake wasn't going to cut it or be that interesting. So, instead, I not only perpetuated a mystery of 'who is this dark blue Kirby and what does he even want', but also used the time to subtly establish the main cast just that little bit more.
Whether you realized it or not, the fight scenes did manage to tell you things about the various KAS characters, and that's worthwhile.
Original Author's Comment:
12/06/10
*GASP* WHAT- WHAT COULD THIS POSSIBLY BE???
I think it could possibly be my best fight scene ever.
Tough luck Vezo, but you had no chance of winning anyway.
*GASP* WHAT- WHAT COULD THIS POSSIBLY BE???
I think it could possibly be my best fight scene ever.
Tough luck Vezo, but you had no chance of winning anyway.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
12/06/10
It's one of your only fight scenes. Well, at least in this comic, anyway.
Also, I just noticed that Blue's (that's what I'm calling him for now, until his name is officially revealed) fighter headband is white. ...Why?
Djoing
12/06/10
Funfact: the red kirby in the games has a white headband when he uses fighter.
doesn't explain this, but it's a fun fact.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/06/10
@guestuser:
In this comic, sure. But in Yoshi & Kirby, I've had them battle the Ultimate Shy, Test, Naval Piranha, and King Dedede. This is by far my best presentation.
And why does it matter? Like I said on Y&K, I like minor recolors.
Neon-J
12/06/10
RISING BREAK!
BattleStarX
12/06/10
That's quite a comic for a fight scene. I find it hard to add fight scenes to sprite comics, it just never seems fluid enough. You did a nice job, though.
guestuser
12/07/10
The blue kirby with the white headband reminds me of Jiro.
Silverlilly
12/07/10
NO! VEZO! IS HE ALIVE!?!?!?
DarkMario1000
12/09/10
I'm sure you'll make great ones, and maybe greater
guestuser
02/26/11
These backgrounds rock.
jamopop
08/25/11
Vulcan... JAB!
guestuser
05/30/12
After I healed, I realized that there was a Fire Orb in his hand. That must have made his attacks so fiery. Better not tell Kaxo he got it first.
guestuser
05/27/14
I was in the HQ this whole fight so who knows what happened there also is Vezo ok?
guestuser
05/27/14
@Kieto: Look you shall know that I killed him dude
guestuser
05/27/14
@Vezo: WHAT DID HE DOO!!!!!!
guestuser
04/03/16
@Kaxo:Replying to yourself? Can't blame ya.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Uh oh, there goes Vezo. Brace yourselves, team!
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Major revisions happened with Escape! No longer shall it be the odd-segment-out with it's wacky-paneled fight scenes. I debated keeping them and just making them look nicer, but I felt they'd fit in better with the rest of the comic if I made them look normal. Not to mention, some of the pages' legibility was severely under-prioritized for favor of wacky layouts anyway, so it's not as if they were the easiest and most enjoyable to read to begin with.
The tricky thing, though, is Past Ulti was not a very meticulous record-keeper with these fight scenes as he was for literally everything else. Basically what that means is that almost every one of these pages had to be recreated from scratch. It was an annoying process.
Anyways, you can see the original page and it's funky layout here.
12/06/10
It's one of your only fight scenes. Well, at least in this comic, anyway.
Also, I just noticed that Blue's (that's what I'm calling him for now, until his name is officially revealed) fighter headband is white. ...Why?
Djoing
12/06/10
Funfact: the red kirby in the games has a white headband when he uses fighter.
doesn't explain this, but it's a fun fact.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/06/10
@guestuser:
In this comic, sure. But in Yoshi & Kirby, I've had them battle the Ultimate Shy, Test, Naval Piranha, and King Dedede. This is by far my best presentation.
And why does it matter? Like I said on Y&K, I like minor recolors.
Neon-J
12/06/10
RISING BREAK!
BattleStarX
12/06/10
That's quite a comic for a fight scene. I find it hard to add fight scenes to sprite comics, it just never seems fluid enough. You did a nice job, though.
guestuser
12/07/10
The blue kirby with the white headband reminds me of Jiro.
Silverlilly
12/07/10
NO! VEZO! IS HE ALIVE!?!?!?
DarkMario1000
12/09/10
I'm sure you'll make great ones, and maybe greater
guestuser
02/26/11
These backgrounds rock.
jamopop
08/25/11
Vulcan... JAB!
guestuser
05/30/12
After I healed, I realized that there was a Fire Orb in his hand. That must have made his attacks so fiery. Better not tell Kaxo he got it first.
guestuser
05/27/14
I was in the HQ this whole fight so who knows what happened there also is Vezo ok?
guestuser
05/27/14
@Kieto: Look you shall know that I killed him dude
guestuser
05/27/14
@Vezo: WHAT DID HE DOO!!!!!!
guestuser
04/03/16
@Kaxo:Replying to yourself? Can't blame ya.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Uh oh, there goes Vezo. Brace yourselves, team!
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Major revisions happened with Escape! No longer shall it be the odd-segment-out with it's wacky-paneled fight scenes. I debated keeping them and just making them look nicer, but I felt they'd fit in better with the rest of the comic if I made them look normal. Not to mention, some of the pages' legibility was severely under-prioritized for favor of wacky layouts anyway, so it's not as if they were the easiest and most enjoyable to read to begin with.
The tricky thing, though, is Past Ulti was not a very meticulous record-keeper with these fight scenes as he was for literally everything else. Basically what that means is that almost every one of these pages had to be recreated from scratch. It was an annoying process.
Anyways, you can see the original page and it's funky layout here.
Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
I'm gonna use this page where I don't have much to say to say that if I don't have anything to say going forward on certain pages, I simply won't have an Ulti's Notes section. I'm not gonna bother forcing myself to write new info on 700 pages, that's just unnecessary. If a page speaks for itself, then I'll leave it at that.
Original Author's Comment:
12/07/10
Yep, now he's fighting Keito.
Also, Mr. Darknut255:
STOP SAYING THE BLUE KIRBY'S NAME IN YOUR COMMENTS.
I WOULD THINK THE FACT THAT I KEEP DELETING THEM WOULD TIP YOU OFF THAT I DON'T WANT IT REVEALED. IF YOU KNOW IT ALREADY, THEN WHOOP-DE-DOO FOR YOU. BUT SHUT UP ABOUT IT WHEN YOU'RE ON SMACK JEEVES.
Yep, now he's fighting Keito.
Also, Mr. Darknut255:
STOP SAYING THE BLUE KIRBY'S NAME IN YOUR COMMENTS.
I WOULD THINK THE FACT THAT I KEEP DELETING THEM WOULD TIP YOU OFF THAT I DON'T WANT IT REVEALED. IF YOU KNOW IT ALREADY, THEN WHOOP-DE-DOO FOR YOU. BUT SHUT UP ABOUT IT WHEN YOU'RE ON SMACK JEEVES.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
12/08/10
What is blue dude doing in the final panel? Charging an atack, or something else?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/08/10
@guestuser:
Yes, yes he is. It's kinda hard to tell because Keito's getting ready his Stored Ability.
DarkNut255
12/08/10
Sorry.
DarkMario1000
12/09/10
We'll know eventually, DarkNut. Right now, you have to be defending the room with the Big (Boss) Key before Link shows u-
*slashed*
guestuser
05/27/14
His name is talzo an evil kirby out to kill the KAS but I know that he was once on thier team SUPRISE SUPRISE
161616
11/24/14
@Guest:
...I'm pretty sure the cat's out of the bag by this point. Considering he revealed it a while ago.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Ah, Beam. A good ability for beginners.
Ultizeta: Well, you're going to get to the comic where you get mad at me, LOL.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
lol I got so mad at DarkNut
Anyways all that happened here was dialogue revision.
12/08/10
What is blue dude doing in the final panel? Charging an atack, or something else?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/08/10
@guestuser:
Yes, yes he is. It's kinda hard to tell because Keito's getting ready his Stored Ability.
DarkNut255
12/08/10
Sorry.
DarkMario1000
12/09/10
We'll know eventually, DarkNut. Right now, you have to be defending the room with the Big (Boss) Key before Link shows u-
*slashed*
guestuser
05/27/14
His name is talzo an evil kirby out to kill the KAS but I know that he was once on thier team SUPRISE SUPRISE
161616
11/24/14
@Guest:
...I'm pretty sure the cat's out of the bag by this point. Considering he revealed it a while ago.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Ah, Beam. A good ability for beginners.
Ultizeta: Well, you're going to get to the comic where you get mad at me, LOL.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
lol I got so mad at DarkNut
Anyways all that happened here was dialogue revision.
Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
Having Keito and the blue Kirby be evenly matched was another bit of subtle character establishment. Keito is, as mentioned once already, the second-in-command of Kirby's Division of the KAS. I wanted to establish that despite his goofier antics and ambitions, he was still pretty competent and somebody worth respecting. Putting him on an even playing field, at least strength-wise, to this blue Kirby (who will proceed to defeat everybody he comes across) was a way I could sneakily improve Keito's reputation compared to the other Divison A Squadmembers.
Original Author's Comment:
12/08/10
...or are they?
Yay, more free paneling!
I really like making these fight scenes. They're fun.
...or are they?
Yay, more free paneling!
I really like making these fight scenes. They're fun.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
AvoryAzion
12/08/10
I like the paneling, it's perfect for fight scenes.
BattleStarX
12/08/10
Agreed, the somewhat chaotic placement seems perfect for chaotic moments.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/08/10
I agree. It just looks and feels right the way it's laid out.
DarkNut255
12/09/10
Heh, nice.
Also. I'm sorry for revealing *insert the blue kirby's name here*'s name.
DarkMario1000
12/09/10
but a day for fighting!
guestuser
12/09/10
Is the dark purple Kirby in the banner the "Fanhal" mentioned on Kaxo's profile? Also, when is he going to make his debut?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/09/10
@guestuser:
No, Fanhal isn't nearly going to be important enough to get placed on the banner.
guestuser
12/09/10
@Ultimate Yoshi:
Then... who's the dark purple Kirby? And by "not important," does that mean Fanhal's just going to be a minor character, like Wake?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/09/10
@guestuser:
Dark Purple Kirby is an upcoming character that I added so that when it appears, the banner will be up to date with all the important characters and I won't need to change it or something.
guestuser
12/15/10
In KSS, Beam is way better than Fighter.
guestuser
05/01/11
It's the background of Machine Mansion and the other machine-type level of Canvas Curse, if I am right.
Also, first post! Yay for me! Also, maybe last post. :P
EDIT: Mad Mechanism was the other machine-type level using this background.
guestuser
05/27/14
@Ultimate Yoshi:
Akia is cool Ain't THAT a good name?
guestuser
10/21/16
@Guest:
I should point out that while beam has good reach, range, and can go through walls, Fighter has invincibility frames.
You see Beam's charge attack? Fighter can Rising Break through/over it.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Smash Bros reference?
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Yay, less free paneling!
Lots of new zoom-ins were used here, as well as completely removing the original second panel which was completely useless.
12/08/10
I like the paneling, it's perfect for fight scenes.
BattleStarX
12/08/10
Agreed, the somewhat chaotic placement seems perfect for chaotic moments.
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/08/10
I agree. It just looks and feels right the way it's laid out.
DarkNut255
12/09/10
Heh, nice.
Also. I'm sorry for revealing *insert the blue kirby's name here*'s name.
DarkMario1000
12/09/10
but a day for fighting!
guestuser
12/09/10
Is the dark purple Kirby in the banner the "Fanhal" mentioned on Kaxo's profile? Also, when is he going to make his debut?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/09/10
@guestuser:
No, Fanhal isn't nearly going to be important enough to get placed on the banner.
guestuser
12/09/10
@Ultimate Yoshi:
Then... who's the dark purple Kirby? And by "not important," does that mean Fanhal's just going to be a minor character, like Wake?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/09/10
@guestuser:
Dark Purple Kirby is an upcoming character that I added so that when it appears, the banner will be up to date with all the important characters and I won't need to change it or something.
guestuser
12/15/10
In KSS, Beam is way better than Fighter.
guestuser
05/01/11
It's the background of Machine Mansion and the other machine-type level of Canvas Curse, if I am right.
Also, first post! Yay for me! Also, maybe last post. :P
EDIT: Mad Mechanism was the other machine-type level using this background.
guestuser
05/27/14
@Ultimate Yoshi:
Akia is cool Ain't THAT a good name?
guestuser
10/21/16
@Guest:
I should point out that while beam has good reach, range, and can go through walls, Fighter has invincibility frames.
You see Beam's charge attack? Fighter can Rising Break through/over it.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Smash Bros reference?
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Yay, less free paneling!
Lots of new zoom-ins were used here, as well as completely removing the original second panel which was completely useless.
Part 5
Ulti's Notes:
Honestly, the real question here isn't WHY would one use superglue to fix a ceiling, but rather, HOW would superglue even fix a ceiling to begin with?
As part of that aforementioned reputation-building for Keito, while he may be respectable in combat, the real method of defeating him is his hubris and planning. A strategist, he is not. He's a goof, so while not exactly a cloudcuckoolander like Caiya, he's far from the smart commander that he'd need to be to not get taken advantage of like this.
As part of that aforementioned reputation-building for Keito, while he may be respectable in combat, the real method of defeating him is his hubris and planning. A strategist, he is not. He's a goof, so while not exactly a cloudcuckoolander like Caiya, he's far from the smart commander that he'd need to be to not get taken advantage of like this.
Original Author's Comment:
12/09/10
Really like how this turned out, especially the first three panels giving the illusion of a 'normal' comic, then the chaotic placement begins again.
Keito is down for the count, as he is stuck to the ceiling. Who knows who would've won if not for the superglue?
Well, I do, but still.
Before you say 'but why was there an explosion? And fire, for that matter?' in the comments, here is your answer:
WHY WOULDN'T THERE BE? :D Also, holy crap, I have 69 fans? How the heck is this that popular? (Also, no immature comments about that specific number. MATURE comments, on the other hand... *slapped*)
Really like how this turned out, especially the first three panels giving the illusion of a 'normal' comic, then the chaotic placement begins again.
Keito is down for the count, as he is stuck to the ceiling. Who knows who would've won if not for the superglue?
Well, I do, but still.
Before you say 'but why was there an explosion? And fire, for that matter?' in the comments, here is your answer:
WHY WOULDN'T THERE BE? :D Also, holy crap, I have 69 fans? How the heck is this that popular? (Also, no immature comments about that specific number. MATURE comments, on the other hand... *slapped*)
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
12/09/10
Hey, if various anime can make big explosions for no reason, why can't we?
You're definitely the king of fight scenes, Yoshi.
guestuser
12/09/10
@BattleStarX:
Don't forget Power Rangers and Transformers!
Silverlilly
12/10/10
There IS a thing called using wood and nails.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/10/10
@Silverlilly:
Wood? Nails? WHAT IS THIS WITCHCRAFT???
- - Keito
DarkMario1000
12/10/10
Good job, Keito…
guestuser
12/10/10
Why fire? Three letters: DBZ.
Why super glue? …I'm a little stuck on that one. =D
EDIT: That tan kirby doesn't have a member file!!! WHO DOES HE WORK FOR?!?!
Ultimate Yoshi
12/10/10
@guestuser:
Wake has no SHOWN member file because he is an unimportant character. He is still part of the agency, however.
Silverlilly
12/11/10
@Ultimate Yoshi:
Wood is something that comes from trees when you cut them down. A nail is a sharp bit of metal.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/11/10
@Silverlilly:
And do you know what sarcasm is?
guestuser
12/12/10
Wood and nails are old news. Duct tape is where it's at.
guestuser
12/21/10
Silence is golden. Duct tape is silver. And Keito is bronze.
(the user apoligizes for the immature reference.)
guestuser
01/10/11
Excuse me for being pathetic for not noticing this till now, but why is the room reversed from the last scene?
Ultimate Yoshi
01/10/11
@guestuser:
Originally, I was going to have one of the panels of this fight in Wake's viewpoint. However, this proved to be impossible concerning the background and everything. Since Wake is in a reversed perspective, the room was reversed as well. As I was making this I forgot to change it back to normal perspective, but I don't think it matters too much.
guestuser
07/06/11
Does anyone else notice that Keito moved from the right side of the room to the left?
................................
Super glue? Smooth one, Keito.
guestuser
05/31/12
Note to self: Never say pretty please.
Knightkirby
12/05/12
Superglue?
guestuser
01/16/16
@Kirbysmith is out:
I see what u did dere.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Should've used duct tape instead.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
There's a reason for the random explosion now: comedic effect. I also cut out a panel of Keito getting kicked in the face, so that it doesn't happen two times in a row for no reason.
12/09/10
Hey, if various anime can make big explosions for no reason, why can't we?
You're definitely the king of fight scenes, Yoshi.
guestuser
12/09/10
@BattleStarX:
Don't forget Power Rangers and Transformers!
Silverlilly
12/10/10
There IS a thing called using wood and nails.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/10/10
@Silverlilly:
Wood? Nails? WHAT IS THIS WITCHCRAFT???
- - Keito
DarkMario1000
12/10/10
Good job, Keito…
guestuser
12/10/10
Why fire? Three letters: DBZ.
Why super glue? …I'm a little stuck on that one. =D
EDIT: That tan kirby doesn't have a member file!!! WHO DOES HE WORK FOR?!?!
Ultimate Yoshi
12/10/10
@guestuser:
Wake has no SHOWN member file because he is an unimportant character. He is still part of the agency, however.
Silverlilly
12/11/10
@Ultimate Yoshi:
Wood is something that comes from trees when you cut them down. A nail is a sharp bit of metal.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/11/10
@Silverlilly:
And do you know what sarcasm is?
guestuser
12/12/10
Wood and nails are old news. Duct tape is where it's at.
guestuser
12/21/10
Silence is golden. Duct tape is silver. And Keito is bronze.
(the user apoligizes for the immature reference.)
guestuser
01/10/11
Excuse me for being pathetic for not noticing this till now, but why is the room reversed from the last scene?
Ultimate Yoshi
01/10/11
@guestuser:
Originally, I was going to have one of the panels of this fight in Wake's viewpoint. However, this proved to be impossible concerning the background and everything. Since Wake is in a reversed perspective, the room was reversed as well. As I was making this I forgot to change it back to normal perspective, but I don't think it matters too much.
guestuser
07/06/11
Does anyone else notice that Keito moved from the right side of the room to the left?
................................
Super glue? Smooth one, Keito.
guestuser
05/31/12
Note to self: Never say pretty please.
Knightkirby
12/05/12
Superglue?
guestuser
01/16/16
@Kirbysmith is out:
I see what u did dere.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Should've used duct tape instead.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
There's a reason for the random explosion now: comedic effect. I also cut out a panel of Keito getting kicked in the face, so that it doesn't happen two times in a row for no reason.
Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
What I like about this page is that it implies Kirby painted it very recently, as opposed to the longer while that the flashback in Average Days might've implied beforehand. And yet he still wanted to paint the other corridor.
Original Author's Comment:
12/10/10
Uh oh, Saia, better get outta there.
YAY FOR THE RETURN OF THE INSANELY-PAINTED CORRIDOR!!
This might be my most colorful comic yet.
Uh oh, Saia, better get outta there.
YAY FOR THE RETURN OF THE INSANELY-PAINTED CORRIDOR!!
This might be my most colorful comic yet.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/11/10
Hooray! It's Disney's Wonderful World of Colour! Er, I mean "Kirby's".
I can't wait to see an action scene in THIS room!
locoroco1
12/11/10
Parasol is way better than fighter.
Luigi_96
12/11/10
umm...I forget. what happened with an umbrella?
BattleStarX
12/11/10
@Luigi_96:
He got sucker-smashed by the parasol.
From meep, we went to eep. I feel sorry for the KAS.
guestuser
12/11/10
I didn't expect this... The battle taking place in the hideously painted corridor, I mean. I DID expect Blue to take his revenge on Saia...
DarkNut255
12/15/10
Eep's not as fun as Meep...
TheJGamer
01/28/17
GET OUT OF HERE SAIA
Ultizeta
05/19/17
I rewrote the last two panels to be more in-character for blue Kirby, and had Saia visually react this time around. I also changed the gradient sidebars to add more contrast to the insanely painted corridor.
12/11/10
Hooray! It's Disney's Wonderful World of Colour! Er, I mean "Kirby's".
I can't wait to see an action scene in THIS room!
locoroco1
12/11/10
Parasol is way better than fighter.
Luigi_96
12/11/10
umm...I forget. what happened with an umbrella?
BattleStarX
12/11/10
@Luigi_96:
He got sucker-smashed by the parasol.
From meep, we went to eep. I feel sorry for the KAS.
guestuser
12/11/10
I didn't expect this... The battle taking place in the hideously painted corridor, I mean. I DID expect Blue to take his revenge on Saia...
DarkNut255
12/15/10
Eep's not as fun as Meep...
TheJGamer
01/28/17
GET OUT OF HERE SAIA
Ultizeta
05/19/17
I rewrote the last two panels to be more in-character for blue Kirby, and had Saia visually react this time around. I also changed the gradient sidebars to add more contrast to the insanely painted corridor.
Part 7
Ulti's Notes:
Remember what I was saying about being able to use the fight scenes to help establish characters a bit more in subtle ways? Remember how I was also saying that I was struggling with figuring out how to depict Saia? Yeah, this isn't exactly the most accurate portrayal of her. Just more early installment weirdness to get past, really.
Original Author's Comment:
12/11/10
Just clearing room for the big fight.
Also, Everybody should check out this comic here:
http://kirbyda.smackjeeves.com/
If you're a fan of Kirby Adventure, you should love this comic.
Just clearing room for the big fight.
Also, Everybody should check out this comic here:
http://kirbyda.smackjeeves.com/
If you're a fan of Kirby Adventure, you should love this comic.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkMario1000
12/11/10
Can't he have a little mercy! She said she'd let him go! >:o
BattleStarX
12/11/10
Revenge, it can be rather sweet sometimes.
guestuser
12/11/10
...Okay... What's the "big fight?" Blue Kirby vs. THE Kirby?
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/11/10
The Kirby Adventure Squad NEVER walks away from a fight…
They prefer to run.
guestuser
12/12/10
I just wonder what's for dinn-um, how "unnamed" Kirby deals with Kaxo. With their aggressive personalities, it should be fun, preferably with lots of yelling and fire and candy corn and-*shot* Dammit I already got shot D:
guestuser
04/15/11
Would you want some Inkscape with that crash?
guestuser
05/31/12
I was planning to eat some delicious apples... When I randomly passed out and here I am.
castleofwarriors
07/03/12
Relax. Summon your Stored Ability, and go stop that guy.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Dark blue Kirby used to be a teacher, apparently.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
More panel straightening, and a tiny bit of dialogue tweaking.
12/11/10
Can't he have a little mercy! She said she'd let him go! >:o
BattleStarX
12/11/10
Revenge, it can be rather sweet sometimes.
guestuser
12/11/10
...Okay... What's the "big fight?" Blue Kirby vs. THE Kirby?
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/11/10
The Kirby Adventure Squad NEVER walks away from a fight…
They prefer to run.
guestuser
12/12/10
I just wonder what's for dinn-um, how "unnamed" Kirby deals with Kaxo. With their aggressive personalities, it should be fun, preferably with lots of yelling and fire and candy corn and-*shot* Dammit I already got shot D:
guestuser
04/15/11
Would you want some Inkscape with that crash?
guestuser
05/31/12
I was planning to eat some delicious apples... When I randomly passed out and here I am.
castleofwarriors
07/03/12
Relax. Summon your Stored Ability, and go stop that guy.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Dark blue Kirby used to be a teacher, apparently.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
More panel straightening, and a tiny bit of dialogue tweaking.
Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
Kaxo and Caiya randomly showed up here for no reason in the original comic. While they still sorta do so now, thanks to the bonus page I made for the end of Average Days, Shat'l now gives Kaxo a reason to at least be with Caiya while confronting the blue Kirby here. Just a little way I was able to retroactively add a bit more narrative cohesion to these early pages.
Original Author's Comment:
12/13/10
Oh noes, he's outnumbered!
Yayz, my streak of no missed updates in December wasn't broken! HUZZAHIFICATION TIEM
Oh noes, he's outnumbered!
Yayz, my streak of no missed updates in December wasn't broken! HUZZAHIFICATION TIEM
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Shadowfan0X94
12/13/10
sorry but this comic is bad and it got a rating of 2/10 which is a F... check out my comic it got 10/10 which is a A+!!!! u can learn a lot from it
Ultimate Yoshi
12/13/10
@Shadowfan0X94:
Oh really then?
Cause I think there's about 75 people who disagree with you.
I'm also not gonna take the 'advice' (and I use that term loosely) of somebody who doesn't use punctuation (normally), capitalization, and spelling properly.
I wonder if there are any people on the Internet who have actually heard and follow the saying "If you can't say something nice, you shouldn't say anything at all."
Jake E. Fisher
12/13/10
@Ultimate Yoshi:
dont worry about what he says.Shadowfan is a well known troll who says anyone's comic is bad but his is better even though his sucks.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/13/10
@Jake E. Fisher:
I could tell by a glimpse of his 'A+!!!! worthy' comic.
BattleStarX
12/13/10
Generic Alarm Sounds...
Now that I think about it, nearly all alarms sound the same...
locoroco1
12/13/10
Well, one's fire, one's ice. *insert image of the two accidentally hitting eachother*
Luigi_96
12/13/10
You were trolled by shadowfan? I've seen that on another comic before...It's sorta funny to see him insulting awesome comics. XD
Silverlilly
12/13/10
I like the red blinking light effect.
Am I the only one who noticed that?
guestuser
12/21/10
Sapanda anyone? (see Solara the Hedgehog's comic for reference.)
guestuser
02/26/11
ROFL.ur as good as battlestar
guestuser
05/31/12
For anyone too clueless to figure out the alarm and however it works... Let's just say "Kaxo Detector".
Ultizeta
05/19/17
I love that I take Shadowfan0X94 so seriously below this comment. Why did I bother responding to the obvious troll? Because I was 13 and still using words like "huzzahification tiem" and "oh noes".
Anyways, I did dialogue rewording here to be more in-character for Kaxo and blue Kirby.
CapedLuigisYoshi
05/19/17
...Weird how a few of the earlier remake pages had dialogue changes that removed swears, and yet this pages has an added one.
I mean, I'm not sure if the other swears being removed is just coincidental or a reaction to 13-year-old you probably thinking they were cool and edgy.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
@CapedLuigisYoshi:
I hardly count damn as a swear, and it gets used frequently throughout the rest of the comic. However, I held back on anything more serious than that in the rest of the comic, so removing them felt appropriate.
12/13/10
sorry but this comic is bad and it got a rating of 2/10 which is a F... check out my comic it got 10/10 which is a A+!!!! u can learn a lot from it
Ultimate Yoshi
12/13/10
@Shadowfan0X94:
Oh really then?
Cause I think there's about 75 people who disagree with you.
I'm also not gonna take the 'advice' (and I use that term loosely) of somebody who doesn't use punctuation (normally), capitalization, and spelling properly.
I wonder if there are any people on the Internet who have actually heard and follow the saying "If you can't say something nice, you shouldn't say anything at all."
Jake E. Fisher
12/13/10
@Ultimate Yoshi:
dont worry about what he says.Shadowfan is a well known troll who says anyone's comic is bad but his is better even though his sucks.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/13/10
@Jake E. Fisher:
I could tell by a glimpse of his 'A+!!!! worthy' comic.
BattleStarX
12/13/10
Generic Alarm Sounds...
Now that I think about it, nearly all alarms sound the same...
locoroco1
12/13/10
Well, one's fire, one's ice. *insert image of the two accidentally hitting eachother*
Luigi_96
12/13/10
You were trolled by shadowfan? I've seen that on another comic before...It's sorta funny to see him insulting awesome comics. XD
Silverlilly
12/13/10
I like the red blinking light effect.
Am I the only one who noticed that?
guestuser
12/21/10
Sapanda anyone? (see Solara the Hedgehog's comic for reference.)
guestuser
02/26/11
ROFL.ur as good as battlestar
guestuser
05/31/12
For anyone too clueless to figure out the alarm and however it works... Let's just say "Kaxo Detector".
Ultizeta
05/19/17
I love that I take Shadowfan0X94 so seriously below this comment. Why did I bother responding to the obvious troll? Because I was 13 and still using words like "huzzahification tiem" and "oh noes".
Anyways, I did dialogue rewording here to be more in-character for Kaxo and blue Kirby.
CapedLuigisYoshi
05/19/17
...Weird how a few of the earlier remake pages had dialogue changes that removed swears, and yet this pages has an added one.
I mean, I'm not sure if the other swears being removed is just coincidental or a reaction to 13-year-old you probably thinking they were cool and edgy.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
@CapedLuigisYoshi:
I hardly count damn as a swear, and it gets used frequently throughout the rest of the comic. However, I held back on anything more serious than that in the rest of the comic, so removing them felt appropriate.
Part 9
Original Author's Comment:
12/14/10
Now this is gonna be fuuuuuuun. >:3
Now this is gonna be fuuuuuuun. >:3
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
12/14/10
*Laughing like a maniac*
This is gonna be freakin' sweet!
BTW,how'd you do the sideways paneling?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/14/10
@Luigi_96:
'Skew' tool in Adobe Photoshop.
locoroco1
12/14/10
Screw Humanity. He's an alien.
Luigi_96
12/14/10
@Ultimate Yoshi:
hmm...I'll have to see if I can do that in GIMP. It looks awesome!
BattleStarX
12/14/10
This is why you never wanna break out unless you're absolutely sure you know where all the strong players are.
DarkMario1000
12/14/10
He is indeed screwed!
kainou lunarfox
12/14/10
Oooh snap. Fire, Ice AND Plasma? He's outmatched for sure.. XD
guestuser
12/14/10
Kaxo should melt the Blue Dude.XD
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/14/10
Way to go, Ice Cream Kirby!!! Er… I mean, Cayia. :D
guestuser
12/14/10
About time for Raize to get some (concuis) screen time!
NoahTH
01/08/11
Plasma is very powerful. >:D
StygianKnight
01/24/14
@Ultimate Yoshi:
Heck, MS Paint has "Skew" too. But not as a tool, as a formatting option.
GraciaWarrior
05/03/14
I like that color.
Red,Blue and Green remind me about something character. :/
Extremmefan
07/10/14
That' strange, the three main elements are stopping him (ice is solid water, fire is fire, electricity is an electric current).
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Yeah, Dark Blue Kirby. You're screwed.
Unless...
Ultizeta
05/19/17
This was easily one of the worst offenders of visual issues I had to fix with these revisions. "sideways paneling ftw"? Yeah right. Let's just make things look nicer here, shall we?
Also, fun fact, if you look closely at the original page, you can see that in that infamous skewed panel, you can see my cursor by Kaxo's fire, which went completely unnoticed for six and a half years even by myself. Good job.
12/14/10
*Laughing like a maniac*
This is gonna be freakin' sweet!
BTW,how'd you do the sideways paneling?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/14/10
@Luigi_96:
'Skew' tool in Adobe Photoshop.
locoroco1
12/14/10
Screw Humanity. He's an alien.
Luigi_96
12/14/10
@Ultimate Yoshi:
hmm...I'll have to see if I can do that in GIMP. It looks awesome!
BattleStarX
12/14/10
This is why you never wanna break out unless you're absolutely sure you know where all the strong players are.
DarkMario1000
12/14/10
He is indeed screwed!
kainou lunarfox
12/14/10
Oooh snap. Fire, Ice AND Plasma? He's outmatched for sure.. XD
guestuser
12/14/10
Kaxo should melt the Blue Dude.XD
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/14/10
Way to go, Ice Cream Kirby!!! Er… I mean, Cayia. :D
guestuser
12/14/10
About time for Raize to get some (concuis) screen time!
NoahTH
01/08/11
Plasma is very powerful. >:D
StygianKnight
01/24/14
@Ultimate Yoshi:
Heck, MS Paint has "Skew" too. But not as a tool, as a formatting option.
GraciaWarrior
05/03/14
I like that color.
Red,Blue and Green remind me about something character. :/
Extremmefan
07/10/14
That' strange, the three main elements are stopping him (ice is solid water, fire is fire, electricity is an electric current).
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Yeah, Dark Blue Kirby. You're screwed.
Unless...
Ultizeta
05/19/17
This was easily one of the worst offenders of visual issues I had to fix with these revisions. "sideways paneling ftw"? Yeah right. Let's just make things look nicer here, shall we?
Also, fun fact, if you look closely at the original page, you can see that in that infamous skewed panel, you can see my cursor by Kaxo's fire, which went completely unnoticed for six and a half years even by myself. Good job.
Part 10
Original Author's Comment:
12/14/10
Who are YOU rooting for?
Also, T is not his name, it's the first letter of his name. You're not gettin' it that easily. >:3
Caiya doesn't like moving, I guess. She stood in the exact same spot the entire time.
Who are YOU rooting for?
Also, T is not his name, it's the first letter of his name. You're not gettin' it that easily. >:3
Caiya doesn't like moving, I guess. She stood in the exact same spot the entire time.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/14/10
Dark Blue Kirby: That's Mister T to YOU!
Luigi_96
12/14/10
Geez,this is like MK2716 figting GFK,GIK and GLK! except harder! XD
Djoing
12/14/10
his name is...
Turqoise.
guestuser
12/14/10
@Luigi_96:
...What?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/14/10
@guestuser:
Read 'A Kirby Komic'.
guestuser
12/14/10
@Djoing:
You`re wrong. I know his REAL name.
guestuser
12/14/10
What's up with people shouting out the name of their attacks?
That will only alert the enemy and it's... lame O.o
Ultimate Yoshi
12/14/10
@guestuser:
They say it as they perform the attack.
It's lame? You seem to be the only one complaining about it.
DarkMario1000
12/14/10
Got 'em!
Gigi19972010
12/15/10
Very good comic! I like your battle scenes. Keep it on!
guestuser
12/15/10
The name is Tony!
guestuser
12/15/10
How much life does "T" have
guestuser
12/15/10
@guestuser:
You r wrong 2.
guestuser
12/15/10
@Ulti:
I would, but it keeps getting longer and longer, and I'd never be able to catch up...
Striffen Cloud
02/05/11
His name is obviously Turtle.
guestuser
05/31/12
Yeah, bring it on, T!
castleofwarriors
07/03/12
Hey, leave some for Raize and Caiya!
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Right, he's not screwed just yet.
Ultizeta: Personally, I think also removing the freeform paneling was nice. I got a bit confused when I first read this.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Fixed the paneling yet again. All these effects were a PAIN to recreate. Past Ulti, why did you have to not save anything for these panels. Past Ulti, why.
12/14/10
Dark Blue Kirby: That's Mister T to YOU!
Luigi_96
12/14/10
Geez,this is like MK2716 figting GFK,GIK and GLK! except harder! XD
Djoing
12/14/10
his name is...
Turqoise.
guestuser
12/14/10
@Luigi_96:
...What?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/14/10
@guestuser:
Read 'A Kirby Komic'.
guestuser
12/14/10
@Djoing:
You`re wrong. I know his REAL name.
guestuser
12/14/10
What's up with people shouting out the name of their attacks?
That will only alert the enemy and it's... lame O.o
Ultimate Yoshi
12/14/10
@guestuser:
They say it as they perform the attack.
It's lame? You seem to be the only one complaining about it.
DarkMario1000
12/14/10
Got 'em!
Gigi19972010
12/15/10
Very good comic! I like your battle scenes. Keep it on!
guestuser
12/15/10
The name is Tony!
guestuser
12/15/10
How much life does "T" have
guestuser
12/15/10
@guestuser:
You r wrong 2.
guestuser
12/15/10
@Ulti:
I would, but it keeps getting longer and longer, and I'd never be able to catch up...
Striffen Cloud
02/05/11
His name is obviously Turtle.
guestuser
05/31/12
Yeah, bring it on, T!
castleofwarriors
07/03/12
Hey, leave some for Raize and Caiya!
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Right, he's not screwed just yet.
Ultizeta: Personally, I think also removing the freeform paneling was nice. I got a bit confused when I first read this.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Fixed the paneling yet again. All these effects were a PAIN to recreate. Past Ulti, why did you have to not save anything for these panels. Past Ulti, why.
Part 11
Ulti's Notes:
Unlike when I called Saia "Caia" and had to revise it, T calling Caiya "Saia" here was an intentional bit. It's a sort of joke on how the two names are basically identical (not one of my smarter moves), while also showing that T doesn't actually know them. Raize and Kaxo both mentioned both Saia and Caiya mid-fight, so T is just misremembering which one was which. Like many readers probably might.
Using the fight scenes to help build the characters of the main cast was useful, but that shouldn't ignore the subtle ways in which I also used it to establish the character of the blue Kirby here too. T is clever, highly aware and attuned to detail, and with some of my revisions, a crafty planner and highly-focused individual. He's snarky, confident, and a bit indulgent. It all comes together to make for an interesting antagonist character, I think.
I point it out here because this page is particularly interesting for T's character. He's being chased down, and while his goal is to find Hali, or potentially just get out of the base entirely, he doesn't run from this fight despite the exit being right behind him. Instead, he works out how to beat it, and never once considers leaving or hiding. It's just another way of character establishment that I bet a lot of people never really thought about.
Using the fight scenes to help build the characters of the main cast was useful, but that shouldn't ignore the subtle ways in which I also used it to establish the character of the blue Kirby here too. T is clever, highly aware and attuned to detail, and with some of my revisions, a crafty planner and highly-focused individual. He's snarky, confident, and a bit indulgent. It all comes together to make for an interesting antagonist character, I think.
I point it out here because this page is particularly interesting for T's character. He's being chased down, and while his goal is to find Hali, or potentially just get out of the base entirely, he doesn't run from this fight despite the exit being right behind him. Instead, he works out how to beat it, and never once considers leaving or hiding. It's just another way of character establishment that I bet a lot of people never really thought about.
Original Author's Comment:
12/14/10
VERYYYY
LOOOONG
COMMIIC
Yep.
Edit: I also gots me a new template.
VERYYYY
LOOOONG
COMMIIC
Yep.
Edit: I also gots me a new template.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
12/15/10
Wall of texts, you gotta love and hate 'em.
DarkMario1000
12/15/10
Strategizing…something that the others should be doing
guestuser
12/15/10
Heh. Nice "T" saying the cus word in symbols. Is Caiya sleeping? Can you make the "T" guy a profile after his name is told?
Gigi19972010
12/15/10
Texts, texts and more texts. This guy speaks much when he want... Wow...
Silverlilly
12/15/10
Cayia is plotting something, probably.
DarkNut255
12/16/10
Nice new template!
Also... Fusion Kirby, that was WAY too long a post. Even if 97.7% of it was enter/return spaces.
Yes. That's what I call the space above. ↑
~タートナック二五五 (Tātonakku255/DarkNut255)
Jordan171998
12/19/10
Lol it the great kirby brothers
guestuser
03/01/11
lol i hate waiting
castleofwarriors
07/03/12
His name is quite obviously Text!
guestuser
02/10/13
The way I see it:
Kaxo is fiery and is very emotional, often relying on his anger;
Caiya is icy and prefers to think before he acts;
Raize has the sucky plasma(my opinion) and thinks well but occasionally his emotions spark up and override his thoughts
TheJGamer
01/28/17
*sigh* Ah, walls of text.
Ultizeta
01/28/17
@TheJGamer:
Please stop spamming every old comic page with commentary that doesn't add any in-depth discussion, questions, or prompts. I understand you want to react to the pages, but you're not really adding anything worthwhile and spamming my inbox.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
@Ultizeta:
Sorry.
Anyways, what's a stored ability?
Ultizeta
01/28/17
@TheJGamer:
A variation of the idea found in Kirby Super Star's Milky Way Wishes sub-game and Kirby Squeak Squad. Some of the KAS members have one Copy Ability that they can activate or put away at any point.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
@Ultizeta:
Alright, thanks. I'll put just one more comment, which is when I catch up. Your comic is getting interesting so far. (I'm at To The Tower - Part 1)
Again, sorry about the comments.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Blue Kirby no longer does an edgy ASCII curse, I correct a typo for "aggressive" in panel 3, and extended panels 1 and 2 to remove the original gradient between them. Cool beans.
12/15/10
Wall of texts, you gotta love and hate 'em.
DarkMario1000
12/15/10
Strategizing…something that the others should be doing
guestuser
12/15/10
Heh. Nice "T" saying the cus word in symbols. Is Caiya sleeping? Can you make the "T" guy a profile after his name is told?
Gigi19972010
12/15/10
Texts, texts and more texts. This guy speaks much when he want... Wow...
Silverlilly
12/15/10
Cayia is plotting something, probably.
DarkNut255
12/16/10
Nice new template!
Also... Fusion Kirby, that was WAY too long a post. Even if 97.7% of it was enter/return spaces.
Yes. That's what I call the space above. ↑
~タートナック二五五 (Tātonakku255/DarkNut255)
Jordan171998
12/19/10
Lol it the great kirby brothers
guestuser
03/01/11
lol i hate waiting
castleofwarriors
07/03/12
His name is quite obviously Text!
guestuser
02/10/13
The way I see it:
Kaxo is fiery and is very emotional, often relying on his anger;
Caiya is icy and prefers to think before he acts;
Raize has the sucky plasma(my opinion) and thinks well but occasionally his emotions spark up and override his thoughts
TheJGamer
01/28/17
*sigh* Ah, walls of text.
Ultizeta
01/28/17
@TheJGamer:
Please stop spamming every old comic page with commentary that doesn't add any in-depth discussion, questions, or prompts. I understand you want to react to the pages, but you're not really adding anything worthwhile and spamming my inbox.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
@Ultizeta:
Sorry.
Anyways, what's a stored ability?
Ultizeta
01/28/17
@TheJGamer:
A variation of the idea found in Kirby Super Star's Milky Way Wishes sub-game and Kirby Squeak Squad. Some of the KAS members have one Copy Ability that they can activate or put away at any point.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
@Ultizeta:
Alright, thanks. I'll put just one more comment, which is when I catch up. Your comic is getting interesting so far. (I'm at To The Tower - Part 1)
Again, sorry about the comments.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Blue Kirby no longer does an edgy ASCII curse, I correct a typo for "aggressive" in panel 3, and extended panels 1 and 2 to remove the original gradient between them. Cool beans.
Part 12
Original Author's Comment:
12/16/10
Always plan ahead, kids. It allows you to beat the crap out of people without getting hit back.
Also, new buttons for comic choice!
Always plan ahead, kids. It allows you to beat the crap out of people without getting hit back.
Also, new buttons for comic choice!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/16/10
Okay, that was even more confusing than one of those random Caramelldansen flash-mobs.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/16/10
@Kirbysmith [DJ]:
How so?
StarMario777 & ChaosSonic777
12/16/10
@Ultimate Yoshi:
you can't tell what pannels follow what. seriously, does it go up-and-down or left-and-right?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/16/10
Changed it a bit, hope it's easier to read.
DarkNut255
12/16/10
Hmm... the comic falls off the middle of the template... I think you should enlarge it if you know how...
Also, if you don't know how, don't ask me, I have no clue.
OH YEAH, ABOUT THE COMIC ITSELF! I liked it, but is 'T' going to defeat everyone!?
Well... until he gets to... Kirby and/or Hali?
I dunno.
locoroco1
12/17/10
His strategy wouldn't have worked if Caiya had just attacked once.
guestuser
12/17/10
@locoroco1:
I think that's the idea...
Also, I have a question. Is Meta Knight going to be in this comic?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/17/10
@guestuser:
Only if I get an idea of something he could request of the KAS.
Luigi_96
12/17/10
that seemed too easy!
Also,nice new buttons!! Can you show me how to do that please?
Fusion Kirby
12/17/10
What if I come in, and try to slay him? That would make it so the others can help.
guestuser
12/17/10
Looks like only Shat'l, Shadik, and Kirby are left of the KAS. Well, he's gotta tire out eventually...right?
locoroco1
12/17/10
Plus Shadik has awesome shadow powers.
guestuser
06/09/11
Do you REALLY think that Ultimate Yoshi would kill off his main characters? -_-
guestuser
05/31/12
Somewhere... Right now... I feel fail.
castleofwarriors
07/03/12
Shadik:__________________________.
(I think the prisoner beat up Kaxo, Caiya, and Raize.)
guestuser
01/04/13
@Shat'l: Omg, same!
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Oh noooo, now the Squad is screwed.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Hah, see, I told you guys the funky paneling was hard to read. I actually forgot I had to remake the original version of this page because my layout was so unreadable you couldn't understand the flow of the panels. I don't think I have that version saved anywhere, but I do have the second version that the current version replaced.
Anyways, this is the last page I revised for this batch. I don't think I'm gonna be doing many more batches like this, though. After this point, most pages start to get to a certain degree of quality that I think I can leave alone. I'll be fixing up individual moments and issues that need to be reworked, but no more entire segments, I don't think.
guestuser
07/13/17
@Ultizeta:
Wouldn't the original panel be in pumpkin experience?
12/16/10
Okay, that was even more confusing than one of those random Caramelldansen flash-mobs.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/16/10
@Kirbysmith [DJ]:
How so?
StarMario777 & ChaosSonic777
12/16/10
@Ultimate Yoshi:
you can't tell what pannels follow what. seriously, does it go up-and-down or left-and-right?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/16/10
Changed it a bit, hope it's easier to read.
DarkNut255
12/16/10
Hmm... the comic falls off the middle of the template... I think you should enlarge it if you know how...
Also, if you don't know how, don't ask me, I have no clue.
OH YEAH, ABOUT THE COMIC ITSELF! I liked it, but is 'T' going to defeat everyone!?
Well... until he gets to... Kirby and/or Hali?
I dunno.
locoroco1
12/17/10
His strategy wouldn't have worked if Caiya had just attacked once.
guestuser
12/17/10
@locoroco1:
I think that's the idea...
Also, I have a question. Is Meta Knight going to be in this comic?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/17/10
@guestuser:
Only if I get an idea of something he could request of the KAS.
Luigi_96
12/17/10
that seemed too easy!
Also,nice new buttons!! Can you show me how to do that please?
Fusion Kirby
12/17/10
What if I come in, and try to slay him? That would make it so the others can help.
guestuser
12/17/10
Looks like only Shat'l, Shadik, and Kirby are left of the KAS. Well, he's gotta tire out eventually...right?
locoroco1
12/17/10
Plus Shadik has awesome shadow powers.
guestuser
06/09/11
Do you REALLY think that Ultimate Yoshi would kill off his main characters? -_-
guestuser
05/31/12
Somewhere... Right now... I feel fail.
castleofwarriors
07/03/12
Shadik:__________________________.
(I think the prisoner beat up Kaxo, Caiya, and Raize.)
guestuser
01/04/13
@Shat'l: Omg, same!
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Oh noooo, now the Squad is screwed.
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Hah, see, I told you guys the funky paneling was hard to read. I actually forgot I had to remake the original version of this page because my layout was so unreadable you couldn't understand the flow of the panels. I don't think I have that version saved anywhere, but I do have the second version that the current version replaced.
Anyways, this is the last page I revised for this batch. I don't think I'm gonna be doing many more batches like this, though. After this point, most pages start to get to a certain degree of quality that I think I can leave alone. I'll be fixing up individual moments and issues that need to be reworked, but no more entire segments, I don't think.
guestuser
07/13/17
@Ultizeta:
Wouldn't the original panel be in pumpkin experience?
Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
While a good portion of the moves and attacks that all of the characters have been doing in this story segment are real moves (or variations of existing moves) from the Kirby series and the respective powers of each copy ability, the Fighter ability that T uses has no move like this white beam at all normally. Think of it as a sort of T special, I suppose.
The four Kirbies at the top, including Wake and Aika, are the 4 KAS members of Division C. They're not particularly important for a while, but this is noteworthy that they're included here. It's funny to me that I didn't make the second most important Division in the comic to be Division B, but instead C. There are 4 total divisions, going from A to D, and B barely gets any mention whatsoever.
This is one of the times when the comic revisions only wind up being for a dark-colored character's text. Every time Aika speaks in the comic will come with a revision, because as you can see from the original page, her text is nearly unreadable originally, and I was quite stubbornly not interested in fixing it for half a decade.
The four Kirbies at the top, including Wake and Aika, are the 4 KAS members of Division C. They're not particularly important for a while, but this is noteworthy that they're included here. It's funny to me that I didn't make the second most important Division in the comic to be Division B, but instead C. There are 4 total divisions, going from A to D, and B barely gets any mention whatsoever.
This is one of the times when the comic revisions only wind up being for a dark-colored character's text. Every time Aika speaks in the comic will come with a revision, because as you can see from the original page, her text is nearly unreadable originally, and I was quite stubbornly not interested in fixing it for half a decade.
Original Author's Comment:
12/18/10
I think the comic speaks for itself, in a way.
I think the comic speaks for itself, in a way.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
12/18/10
:O
Well,that explains the dark purple kirby...NOO! HALI!!...who was hali again?
Ninnco
12/18/10
NOw that Akia is there, shud u add to the KAS profiles?after he\she shows his or her ability of course
Ultimate Yoshi
12/18/10
@Luigi_96:
She's the Director of the Kirby Adventure Squad.
@Ninnco:
No, not until Aika gets more appearances.
Gigi19972010
12/18/10
So he wants to kill Hali... Poor Hali...
DarkNut255
12/18/10
Hali...
I'm just wondering... what (if any) division is Aika in?
guestuser
12/18/10
My guess is that "T" was once part of the KAS, and then he was fired. So now he wants revenge.
Also... is Hali actually dead? ...Naaaah.
Alienoid
01/29/11
I spy with my little eye, something *coughsomeonecough* that starts with S!
Air Man1 21
04/11/11
Are the four kirbies in the second panel of any importance? They seem quite unimportant.
nintendofan123
08/05/11
TASLOH KILLZED HALEE
guestuser
05/31/12
SPOILER ALERT
SPOILER ALERT
SPOILER ALERT
Well thank god Shadik. (And perfect timing)
guestuser
11/01/14
I see *PSHFOOOOOM!*
Ultizeta
06/24/17
A new batch of updates, but these ones are more spread out. It's at this point in Kirby Adventure that I felt things started to get a bit more bearable, so I'm focusing more on important issues rather than tediously fixing effect fonts and slightly blurry border lines. No, all that's going to change from here on out are more glaring issues. This page's update was to fix Aika (purple)'s text bubble color so that it was more readable.
12/18/10
:O
Well,that explains the dark purple kirby...NOO! HALI!!...who was hali again?
Ninnco
12/18/10
NOw that Akia is there, shud u add to the KAS profiles?after he\she shows his or her ability of course
Ultimate Yoshi
12/18/10
@Luigi_96:
She's the Director of the Kirby Adventure Squad.
@Ninnco:
No, not until Aika gets more appearances.
Gigi19972010
12/18/10
So he wants to kill Hali... Poor Hali...
DarkNut255
12/18/10
Hali...
I'm just wondering... what (if any) division is Aika in?
guestuser
12/18/10
My guess is that "T" was once part of the KAS, and then he was fired. So now he wants revenge.
Also... is Hali actually dead? ...Naaaah.
Alienoid
01/29/11
I spy with my little eye, something *coughsomeonecough* that starts with S!
Air Man1 21
04/11/11
Are the four kirbies in the second panel of any importance? They seem quite unimportant.
nintendofan123
08/05/11
TASLOH KILLZED HALEE
guestuser
05/31/12
SPOILER ALERT
SPOILER ALERT
SPOILER ALERT
Well thank god Shadik. (And perfect timing)
guestuser
11/01/14
I see *PSHFOOOOOM!*
Ultizeta
06/24/17
A new batch of updates, but these ones are more spread out. It's at this point in Kirby Adventure that I felt things started to get a bit more bearable, so I'm focusing more on important issues rather than tediously fixing effect fonts and slightly blurry border lines. No, all that's going to change from here on out are more glaring issues. This page's update was to fix Aika (purple)'s text bubble color so that it was more readable.
Part 14
Ulti's Notes:
As of this page, I no longer kept updating older pages, as this was the point where I felt like the quality of the original pages reached a consistent enough "good enough" qualtiy to them. They're still not exactly always the best (like that white beam in the previous page, not exactly an SFX masterpiece), but they're much more in-line with expectations of "my early work" while still not being absolute trash or completely out-of-character.
Original Author's Comment:
12/18/10
OH SNAP
OH SNAP
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
blitz5000
12/18/10
YES! YES! VICTORYYY!!
DarkMario1000
12/18/10
No comment, blitz
guestuser
12/18/10
Nice.
Also, I checked out "A Kirby Komic." ...It took me 3 1/2 hours to get through all of them.
BattleStarX
12/18/10
Monologues are over-rated. Just attack while they're busy talking. Who needs honor anyways?
Silverlilly
12/18/10
FINISH HIM OFF!
...okay, don't KILL him.
Gigi19972010
12/19/10
I knew that Kirby'd come and...Finish him! Gogogo!
Luigi_96
12/19/10
OH SHNAPZ!! :O
guestuser
05/31/12
Insulting gets you nowhere, Talzo.
12/18/10
YES! YES! VICTORYYY!!
DarkMario1000
12/18/10
No comment, blitz
guestuser
12/18/10
Nice.
Also, I checked out "A Kirby Komic." ...It took me 3 1/2 hours to get through all of them.
BattleStarX
12/18/10
Monologues are over-rated. Just attack while they're busy talking. Who needs honor anyways?
Silverlilly
12/18/10
FINISH HIM OFF!
...okay, don't KILL him.
Gigi19972010
12/19/10
I knew that Kirby'd come and...Finish him! Gogogo!
Luigi_96
12/19/10
OH SHNAPZ!! :O
guestuser
05/31/12
Insulting gets you nowhere, Talzo.
Part 15
Ulti's Notes:
Speaking of being absolute trash or completely out-of-character, don't ask what I was thinking with the fourth wall break in the original version of the page here. I think I was trying to channel the way Order of the Stick does stuff like that, with its self-aware meta humor, but it's so difficult to get that sort of thing right without breaking tone or immersion that I would tell any self-respecting author to avoid this sort of style of humor at all costs, before at least a good like decade of experience first.
And even then, with that experience, I feel like one is likely to just realize that it's not a great idea to just randomly throw in, lol
And even then, with that experience, I feel like one is likely to just realize that it's not a great idea to just randomly throw in, lol
Original Author's Comment:
12/19/10
Look back two pages. In the panel before Blue Kirby fires a laser in Hali's direction, you can see a faint 'pshooom' sound. Guess my hiding it was so good that nobody noticed it and guessed Shadik saved Hali!
Also, let's all dance on the charred remains of the fourth wall!
Look back two pages. In the panel before Blue Kirby fires a laser in Hali's direction, you can see a faint 'pshooom' sound. Guess my hiding it was so good that nobody noticed it and guessed Shadik saved Hali!
Also, let's all dance on the charred remains of the fourth wall!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
12/19/10
I DIBS BREAK DANCING!
guestuser
12/19/10
Yeah, I noticed it after I looked back.
Ah, yes. Breaking the fourth wall never gets old. In fact, in my fanfics, whenever someone breaks it, everyone hears a *boom* sound.
DarkNut255
12/19/10
FOURTH WALL BREAKING YEAH!
I knew Hali would survive, I just completely forgot about Shadik. Heh.
Gigi19972010
12/19/10
Yeah, Hali survived! xD
I knew that was something weird, but a had no idea what it was...
locoroco1
12/20/10
I just assumed the beam made that sound when it vaporized her.
guestuser
12/20/10
Sounds like you broke the 4th wall.
guestuser
12/20/10
lolno, I knew Hali survived, but I thought it was some power Hali somehow had as a plot device. That was pretty smart. :p
My guess is that T..., er, BLUE KIRBY was like Pigma in Star Fox 64, part of the original Kirby Adventure Squad, but defected or was thrown out by Kirby/Hali. Either way, I just wanna see how the rest of this segment plays out.
NoahTH
01/08/11
Why can't we learn now?!
Alienoid
01/28/11
Poor Shadik. He has no idea what the fourth wall is. I feel sorry for him.
Ultizeta
06/24/17
Also worth noting is that not every page from here on out GETS a revamp, as evidence by the previous page.
Anyways, in panel 4, I modified dialogue to reflect what I originally intended to be the reason but for SOME reason never actually wrote into the comic how Shadik knew to rescue Hali. I also changed panel 6's dialogue to no longer break the fourth wall for no reason.
12/19/10
I DIBS BREAK DANCING!
guestuser
12/19/10
Yeah, I noticed it after I looked back.
Ah, yes. Breaking the fourth wall never gets old. In fact, in my fanfics, whenever someone breaks it, everyone hears a *boom* sound.
DarkNut255
12/19/10
FOURTH WALL BREAKING YEAH!
I knew Hali would survive, I just completely forgot about Shadik. Heh.
Gigi19972010
12/19/10
Yeah, Hali survived! xD
I knew that was something weird, but a had no idea what it was...
locoroco1
12/20/10
I just assumed the beam made that sound when it vaporized her.
guestuser
12/20/10
Sounds like you broke the 4th wall.
guestuser
12/20/10
lolno, I knew Hali survived, but I thought it was some power Hali somehow had as a plot device. That was pretty smart. :p
My guess is that T..., er, BLUE KIRBY was like Pigma in Star Fox 64, part of the original Kirby Adventure Squad, but defected or was thrown out by Kirby/Hali. Either way, I just wanna see how the rest of this segment plays out.
NoahTH
01/08/11
Why can't we learn now?!
Alienoid
01/28/11
Poor Shadik. He has no idea what the fourth wall is. I feel sorry for him.
Ultizeta
06/24/17
Also worth noting is that not every page from here on out GETS a revamp, as evidence by the previous page.
Anyways, in panel 4, I modified dialogue to reflect what I originally intended to be the reason but for SOME reason never actually wrote into the comic how Shadik knew to rescue Hali. I also changed panel 6's dialogue to no longer break the fourth wall for no reason.
Part 16
Original Author's Comment:
12/20/10
I really like writing Blue Kirby.
Panel 5 is probably my most favorite single panel in this entire comic series so far.
I really like writing Blue Kirby.
Panel 5 is probably my most favorite single panel in this entire comic series so far.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
12/21/10
Everything's worth a shot. Ya never know... it might just work!
Marioman12345
12/21/10
Kirby Is Cool,
T Is Like Syeed.
DarkNut255
12/21/10
*LAUGHS* Nice! This was hilarious!
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/21/10
It was worth a shot! Well, a shot in the face, maybe. *shot!*
Luigi_96
12/21/10
"No. No? No. Oh." *Luaghs so hard,I fall off my chair.* Dude,that was great! XP
Ninnco
12/21/10
NO! if you do, YoU'LL SPILL TEH BEANS
guestuser
05/31/12
No, no, and NO. "No?" Noooooooope! "No!?" No! "NOOOOOOOOOOO!" No? "...I'm confused..."
WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000
02/05/13
lol. quit it! quit it1!1 I SAID QUIT IT!!! no. no? no.
12/21/10
Everything's worth a shot. Ya never know... it might just work!
Marioman12345
12/21/10
Kirby Is Cool,
T Is Like Syeed.
DarkNut255
12/21/10
*LAUGHS* Nice! This was hilarious!
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/21/10
It was worth a shot! Well, a shot in the face, maybe. *shot!*
Luigi_96
12/21/10
"No. No? No. Oh." *Luaghs so hard,I fall off my chair.* Dude,that was great! XP
Ninnco
12/21/10
NO! if you do, YoU'LL SPILL TEH BEANS
guestuser
05/31/12
No, no, and NO. "No?" Noooooooope! "No!?" No! "NOOOOOOOOOOO!" No? "...I'm confused..."
WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000
02/05/13
lol. quit it! quit it1!1 I SAID QUIT IT!!! no. no? no.
Part 17
Ulti's Notes:
Mach Tornado is a powerful move used by the skilled swordsman Meta Knight, another well-known character from the Kirby series. Kirby himself, or the Sword ability in which Kirby is using here, can't ever actually do the Mach Tornado himself in-game, but I reasoned that it made for a funny escalation of Kirby wiping the floor with T, and I still reason that now.
Original Author's Comment:
12/21/10
Be careful what you wish for...
Also, happy 14th birthday to me! :D
Be careful what you wish for...
Also, happy 14th birthday to me! :D
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
blitz5000
12/22/10
are you deleting my comments? because either my comments ain't posting here or you're deleting them. I'm not accusing you of anything but it keeps happening.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/22/10]
@blitz5000:
Why would you think they're just disappearing? I'm deleting your comments, but only because they are kinda rude and mean. In a way.
guestuser
12/22/10
...Since when can Kirby use Mach Tornado?
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/22/10
He is Kirby… he doesn't have to make sense as long as he's awesome!
BattleStarX
12/22/10
Kirby is known for his ability to copy things. So, after fighting Meta Knight enough times, he probably learned how to himself.
kirbypuff
12/22/10
Happy birthday?
Gigi19972010
12/22/10
Wait, Kirby can use Mach Tornado?
Cool...
NoahTH
01/08/11
That move was over-powered in Brawl! >:D
BlueyKid
05/31/12
Meta Knight + Kirby = Meta Kirby. Meta Kirby + Ulti (Photoshop) = Meta Kirby in disguise.
Extremmefan
07/10/14
@BlueyKid:
Exactly! This seems logic.
12/22/10
are you deleting my comments? because either my comments ain't posting here or you're deleting them. I'm not accusing you of anything but it keeps happening.
Ultimate Yoshi
12/22/10]
@blitz5000:
Why would you think they're just disappearing? I'm deleting your comments, but only because they are kinda rude and mean. In a way.
guestuser
12/22/10
...Since when can Kirby use Mach Tornado?
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/22/10
He is Kirby… he doesn't have to make sense as long as he's awesome!
BattleStarX
12/22/10
Kirby is known for his ability to copy things. So, after fighting Meta Knight enough times, he probably learned how to himself.
kirbypuff
12/22/10
Happy birthday?
Gigi19972010
12/22/10
Wait, Kirby can use Mach Tornado?
Cool...
NoahTH
01/08/11
That move was over-powered in Brawl! >:D
BlueyKid
05/31/12
Meta Knight + Kirby = Meta Kirby. Meta Kirby + Ulti (Photoshop) = Meta Kirby in disguise.
Extremmefan
07/10/14
@BlueyKid:
Exactly! This seems logic.
Part 18
Original Author's Comment:
12/22/10
Rawr, moderate comic is moderate.
Although now Escape! is the longest segment so far.
Rawr, moderate comic is moderate.
Although now Escape! is the longest segment so far.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
blitz5000
12/22/10
see? told ya.
guestuser
12/22/10
Yays, he's gonna beat the crap out of them again!
Or get outnumbered. Whichever you prefer.
DarkMario1000
12/22/10
Breaking the awkward silence! That's exactly what the last panel does! ^_^
digikoopa
12/23/10
HE GOT LEGS!!!
Ultizeta
06/24/17
A few dialogue adjustments to get Saia more in-character. There's no feasible reason why a more pacifist healer would hate the infirmary or be eager to see violence, but earlier on in the comic, I had like zero clue where I was going with Saia. That's been fixed now, as has Keito's weird usage of "legs" instead of "feet" in panel 2.
12/22/10
see? told ya.
guestuser
12/22/10
Yays, he's gonna beat the crap out of them again!
Or get outnumbered. Whichever you prefer.
DarkMario1000
12/22/10
Breaking the awkward silence! That's exactly what the last panel does! ^_^
digikoopa
12/23/10
HE GOT LEGS!!!
Ultizeta
06/24/17
A few dialogue adjustments to get Saia more in-character. There's no feasible reason why a more pacifist healer would hate the infirmary or be eager to see violence, but earlier on in the comic, I had like zero clue where I was going with Saia. That's been fixed now, as has Keito's weird usage of "legs" instead of "feet" in panel 2.
Part 19
Original Author's Comment:
12/23/10
Kirby defies the laws of physics.
But I'm sure you knew that already.
Kirby defies the laws of physics.
But I'm sure you knew that already.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
blitz5000
12/23/10
it is possible. well, would be, if firing energy slice beam... things was possible. because, you see, if he were to slice through it, it would interrupt the energy flow, causing the beam to dissipate.
blitz5000
12/23/10
or the sword would be incinerated.
guestuser
12/23/10
Possibility doesn't exist. Heck, firing off bursts of energy from your feet is impossible too, why can't swords be magic and dissipate the energy?
Also, Kirby for God Tier.
kainou lunarfox
12/23/10
"how is that even possible" Simple. Sword Beam. (See anime for details) XD I kinda feel sorry for "T".. being slashed constantly has GOT to hurt..
guestuser
12/23/10
he also defies the laws of physics by floating. he breathes in, then floats. increasing his mass but not his volume. he should be heavier!
BattleStarX
12/23/10
He's just cool like that. No further description necessary.
Silverlilly
12/23/10
Kirby's Kirby. Enough said.
guestuser
12/24/10
On an unrelated note, U.Y., I resent that advertisement about the catholics and witnesses.I'm a Jehovah's witness myself and I don't appreciate this being used. If you will, could you stop using that advertisement?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/24/10
@guestuser:
...what the heck are you talking about?
Edit: Oh, okay. I have absolutely no control over advertisements that appear, as far as I can tell. But reason I didn't understand is because those advertisements only appear if you're not logged into an account. If it is offensive to you, my solution is to simply get an account. It IS free.
Gigi19972010
12/24/10
It's normal for Kirby to defies the laws of physics. Simple.
guestuser
04/22/11
hey Ultimate Yoshi, how can you draw half-invicible kirby in panel 6?
Extremmefan
07/13/14
Panel 5: "T"' derp face!
12/23/10
it is possible. well, would be, if firing energy slice beam... things was possible. because, you see, if he were to slice through it, it would interrupt the energy flow, causing the beam to dissipate.
blitz5000
12/23/10
or the sword would be incinerated.
guestuser
12/23/10
Possibility doesn't exist. Heck, firing off bursts of energy from your feet is impossible too, why can't swords be magic and dissipate the energy?
Also, Kirby for God Tier.
kainou lunarfox
12/23/10
"how is that even possible" Simple. Sword Beam. (See anime for details) XD I kinda feel sorry for "T".. being slashed constantly has GOT to hurt..
guestuser
12/23/10
he also defies the laws of physics by floating. he breathes in, then floats. increasing his mass but not his volume. he should be heavier!
BattleStarX
12/23/10
He's just cool like that. No further description necessary.
Silverlilly
12/23/10
Kirby's Kirby. Enough said.
guestuser
12/24/10
On an unrelated note, U.Y., I resent that advertisement about the catholics and witnesses.I'm a Jehovah's witness myself and I don't appreciate this being used. If you will, could you stop using that advertisement?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/24/10
@guestuser:
...what the heck are you talking about?
Edit: Oh, okay. I have absolutely no control over advertisements that appear, as far as I can tell. But reason I didn't understand is because those advertisements only appear if you're not logged into an account. If it is offensive to you, my solution is to simply get an account. It IS free.
Gigi19972010
12/24/10
It's normal for Kirby to defies the laws of physics. Simple.
guestuser
04/22/11
hey Ultimate Yoshi, how can you draw half-invicible kirby in panel 6?
Extremmefan
07/13/14
Panel 5: "T"' derp face!
Part 20
Ulti's Notes:
T's remarks on how he is "THE Kirby" who has "beaten everyone" is mostly a comment related to my aforementioned, personal timeline for Kirby Adventure where the many Kirby games prior to Kirby Super Star Ultra all occured before Kirby Adventure. King Dedede and Meta Knight have been shown or mentioned before in annotations, and are well-known and formidable opponents in their own right.
Dark Matter, meanwhile, is a recurring evil villain in various early Kirby titles, most notably Kirby's Dream Land 2 for the Game Boy and Kirby's Dream Land 3 for the SNES. He's typically depicted as a black orb with an eyeball, and orange dots. He seeks to destroy positive emotion, and often possesses heroic characters (especially King Dedede). Kirby defeated him with the power of good feelings and helping people, via a Rainbow Sword and a magic cane known as the Love-Love Stick.
"Everyone else" is just to avoid listing out the final boss of every other Kirby game in one text bubble.
Dark Matter, meanwhile, is a recurring evil villain in various early Kirby titles, most notably Kirby's Dream Land 2 for the Game Boy and Kirby's Dream Land 3 for the SNES. He's typically depicted as a black orb with an eyeball, and orange dots. He seeks to destroy positive emotion, and often possesses heroic characters (especially King Dedede). Kirby defeated him with the power of good feelings and helping people, via a Rainbow Sword and a magic cane known as the Love-Love Stick.
"Everyone else" is just to avoid listing out the final boss of every other Kirby game in one text bubble.
Original Author's Comment:
12/24/10
Happy fifty comics! :D
Also, yay, I've got a new Links page! Each time a new comic is added to there, I'll post it on the next comic too.
So, all that's up right now are my other comics:
http://yoshikirby.smackjeeves.com/ - Yoshi & Kirby
http://smwredone.smackjeeves.com/ - Super Mario World: Redone
If anybody wants their comic up there, all you need do is ask, I can do the rest. Of course, the quality of your comic will either help or hurt your chances of it getting up there.
Happy fifty comics! :D
Also, yay, I've got a new Links page! Each time a new comic is added to there, I'll post it on the next comic too.
So, all that's up right now are my other comics:
http://yoshikirby.smackjeeves.com/ - Yoshi & Kirby
http://smwredone.smackjeeves.com/ - Super Mario World: Redone
If anybody wants their comic up there, all you need do is ask, I can do the rest. Of course, the quality of your comic will either help or hurt your chances of it getting up there.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sootthewolf
12/24/10
Lol "That was lame"
poonipoonz
12/24/10
Haha nice comic :D
kainou lunarfox
12/24/10
Haha! I didn't expect him to run. the "That was laame" was just icing to the cake. XD Niice job.
guestuser
12/24/10
Blue Kirby feels Saia's pain. Only 1000x worse. I think being slashed to pieces by Kirby hurts a lot more than having Raize thrown into you :p
DarkNut255
12/24/10
May I have my comics up there? Just use the banners to the comics and use my profile to get to them. I have two.
Also, do I have to make a links page myself?
Oh, and for text under the banner/link, you can make it yourself. If that's okay with you.
Edit: Thanks! Also, I made this out of pure boredom: http://i51.tinypic.com/11u8adw.png
WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000
02/05/13
"no running" Now, WHERE have I heard THAT from..........
12/24/10
Lol "That was lame"
poonipoonz
12/24/10
Haha nice comic :D
kainou lunarfox
12/24/10
Haha! I didn't expect him to run. the "That was laame" was just icing to the cake. XD Niice job.
guestuser
12/24/10
Blue Kirby feels Saia's pain. Only 1000x worse. I think being slashed to pieces by Kirby hurts a lot more than having Raize thrown into you :p
DarkNut255
12/24/10
May I have my comics up there? Just use the banners to the comics and use my profile to get to them. I have two.
Also, do I have to make a links page myself?
Oh, and for text under the banner/link, you can make it yourself. If that's okay with you.
Edit: Thanks! Also, I made this out of pure boredom: http://i51.tinypic.com/11u8adw.png
WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000
02/05/13
"no running" Now, WHERE have I heard THAT from..........
Part 21
Ulti's Notes:
Wake shouts the word "NEON!" when T ambushes the group because that was the name of the sprite sheet I created for the neon-pink Kirby character. The neon-pink and brown Kirbies in Division C didn't yet have names, and in my whim brilliance, I decided that Neon itself could simply be the name of the neon Kirby. I would later amend her name to being Neona, Neon for short, but this may be, like, the only time that nickname of Neon got used.
Stars are a common iconography in the Kirby series, and in the games where Kirby has Copy Abilities, if he drops an ability, it bounces around in the form of a yellow star for a bit before vanishing. If that star gets re-inhaled, Kirby can reclaim the dropped ability. If Kirby takes a large hit of damage while having an ability, the ability star can also get dropped unintentionally, as if the enemy knocked the power out of them.
That's what happened with T's Fighter power in the fourth and fifth panels. Aika flung T across the room, and all of the damage he had taken thus far led to it being enough that his Fighter ability was knocked out of him. Thus, an ability star was left behind, and it promptly vanished by the sixth panel.
Stars are a common iconography in the Kirby series, and in the games where Kirby has Copy Abilities, if he drops an ability, it bounces around in the form of a yellow star for a bit before vanishing. If that star gets re-inhaled, Kirby can reclaim the dropped ability. If Kirby takes a large hit of damage while having an ability, the ability star can also get dropped unintentionally, as if the enemy knocked the power out of them.
That's what happened with T's Fighter power in the fourth and fifth panels. Aika flung T across the room, and all of the damage he had taken thus far led to it being enough that his Fighter ability was knocked out of him. Thus, an ability star was left behind, and it promptly vanished by the sixth panel.
Original Author's Comment:
12/25/10
Merry Christmas, everybody!
Yes, Neon is her real name. I couldn't think of anything else.
Wow, that T sure has created quite a racket in the base, hasn't he?
Now we've also got our first two links (along with additional links, so I guess that's four):
Kirby Funfest!: http://kirbyfunfest.smackjeeves.com/
Mario And Luigi Rise Of Evil Guy: http://lmroeg.smackjeeves.com/
Mario And Luigi Return Of Evil Guy: http://mlroeg.smackjeeves.com/
To Be Marshmallow Gamers: http://marshmallowgamers.smackjeeves.com/
Yay!
Merry Christmas, everybody!
Yes, Neon is her real name. I couldn't think of anything else.
Wow, that T sure has created quite a racket in the base, hasn't he?
Now we've also got our first two links (along with additional links, so I guess that's four):
Kirby Funfest!: http://kirbyfunfest.smackjeeves.com/
Mario And Luigi Rise Of Evil Guy: http://lmroeg.smackjeeves.com/
Mario And Luigi Return Of Evil Guy: http://mlroeg.smackjeeves.com/
To Be Marshmallow Gamers: http://marshmallowgamers.smackjeeves.com/
Yay!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
blitz5000
12/25/10
I WAS EXPECTING A FILLER!! I DON'T SEE A FILLER, I JUST- oh, wait, no, that's a good thing.
DarkNut255
12/25/10
Nice.
kainou lunarfox
12/25/10
*plays benny hill after reading comic* The chase is on. XD
guestuser
12/25/10
Raize sure is determined. He has two members of the Squad thrown at him after getting high on Pep Brews, and still has the energy to run after T-I mean Blue Kirby.
...also, I notice the two members of the Squad that Blue Kirby threw at Raize are the girls of the Squad. Implications? :p
guestuser
12/25/10
CONTINUITY ERROR!
In the second-to-last panel, Caiya is next to Kaxo. But, in the last panel, Raize is now next to him, and Caiya is next to Vezo, who only appeared in this shot.
Also, at first I think Wake was shouting "NEON!" for no real reason... then I read your author comment.
Luigi_96
12/25/10
what happened to T's headband in panel 5?
Silverlilly
12/25/10
I love panels 8 and 9.
"YOU WILL BURN!"
"...I gotta stop getting up in the mornings."
XD
guestuser
12/26/10
@Luigi_96:
He lost his ability, so the headband is gone. You'll notice a "lost ability star" floating away from him as he continues running.
Neon-J
12/26/10
ME! =D
guestuser
12/26/10
@guestuser:
That's because everybody besides Caiya is running, Caiya's just walking.
guestuser
05/31/12
If you look at Part 12 of Tearing the Fabric... Yeah...
castleofwarriors
07/03/12
Don't worry, I'll fix that for you~
Also, NamelessXWake is now this comic's first ship!
guestuser
01/04/13
@castleofwarriors:
WTF?! A SHIP?! No way, dude.
Ultizeta
06/24/17
All that happened here was fixing Aika's text colors again.
12/25/10
I WAS EXPECTING A FILLER!! I DON'T SEE A FILLER, I JUST- oh, wait, no, that's a good thing.
DarkNut255
12/25/10
Nice.
kainou lunarfox
12/25/10
*plays benny hill after reading comic* The chase is on. XD
guestuser
12/25/10
Raize sure is determined. He has two members of the Squad thrown at him after getting high on Pep Brews, and still has the energy to run after T-I mean Blue Kirby.
...also, I notice the two members of the Squad that Blue Kirby threw at Raize are the girls of the Squad. Implications? :p
guestuser
12/25/10
CONTINUITY ERROR!
In the second-to-last panel, Caiya is next to Kaxo. But, in the last panel, Raize is now next to him, and Caiya is next to Vezo, who only appeared in this shot.
Also, at first I think Wake was shouting "NEON!" for no real reason... then I read your author comment.
Luigi_96
12/25/10
what happened to T's headband in panel 5?
Silverlilly
12/25/10
I love panels 8 and 9.
"YOU WILL BURN!"
"...I gotta stop getting up in the mornings."
XD
guestuser
12/26/10
@Luigi_96:
He lost his ability, so the headband is gone. You'll notice a "lost ability star" floating away from him as he continues running.
Neon-J
12/26/10
ME! =D
guestuser
12/26/10
@guestuser:
That's because everybody besides Caiya is running, Caiya's just walking.
guestuser
05/31/12
If you look at Part 12 of Tearing the Fabric... Yeah...
castleofwarriors
07/03/12
Don't worry, I'll fix that for you~
Also, NamelessXWake is now this comic's first ship!
guestuser
01/04/13
@castleofwarriors:
WTF?! A SHIP?! No way, dude.
Ultizeta
06/24/17
All that happened here was fixing Aika's text colors again.
Part 22
Ulti's Notes:
I've talked about before how Shat'l's future sight and near-omnipotence hinders a lot of the plot, since if he can see anything, and with the friends at his disposal and their own personal powers (like world-renowned heroism, teleportation, elemental abilities, etc) nothing bad should ever happen with his omnipotence.
While meta-textually, this doesn't happen because it'd be a bad story, and Shat'l's powers are really only as omnipotent as I make them out to be (or I remember to make them), in-universe it is actually a bit funny to think about the other alternative: that Shat'l had foreseen that, somehow, someway, the world would be worse-off if he DIDN'T let himself get trampled by T running out the door here.
While meta-textually, this doesn't happen because it'd be a bad story, and Shat'l's powers are really only as omnipotent as I make them out to be (or I remember to make them), in-universe it is actually a bit funny to think about the other alternative: that Shat'l had foreseen that, somehow, someway, the world would be worse-off if he DIDN'T let himself get trampled by T running out the door here.
Original Author's Comment:
12/26/10
That's it, keeeeep running.
Poor Shat'l.
That's it, keeeeep running.
Poor Shat'l.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
12/26/10
Second panel is the best. xD
BattleStarX
12/26/10
Wouldn't be a proper escape if you stopped and worried about every poor soul in your way, whether they are your target or not.
kainou lunarfox
12/26/10
Hehehe, ya think if Shat'l is a psychic that he'd see that coming... guess they can't see everything.. XD
DarkNut255
12/27/10
*Epic voice* They always come back...
Anyways, good comic!
GhrimSand
01/03/11
I like the comic, the only thing I would suggest is a character page.
There's way too many names to remember.
Edit; I'm blind. There IS a character page. Sorry about the misconception.
Extremmefan
07/10/14
It's hard to remember the names, divisions and organizations.
12/26/10
Second panel is the best. xD
BattleStarX
12/26/10
Wouldn't be a proper escape if you stopped and worried about every poor soul in your way, whether they are your target or not.
kainou lunarfox
12/26/10
Hehehe, ya think if Shat'l is a psychic that he'd see that coming... guess they can't see everything.. XD
DarkNut255
12/27/10
*Epic voice* They always come back...
Anyways, good comic!
GhrimSand
01/03/11
I like the comic, the only thing I would suggest is a character page.
There's way too many names to remember.
Edit; I'm blind. There IS a character page. Sorry about the misconception.
Extremmefan
07/10/14
It's hard to remember the names, divisions and organizations.
Part 23
Ulti's Notes:
Fanhal will come up again eventually, so I'll talk about him at a later point. For now, the reveal of Talzo's full name and background marks the conclusion of Escape! It essentially is just a glorified set-up segment, but it's a fun enough one looking back. It adds to some of the main cast's characterizations and reputation, it does a great job at presenting a main antagonist (especially after Average Days almost accidentally neutered his engagement), and for a sprite comic, the combat isn't half bad.
Original Author's Comment:
12/27/10
TALZO!!!
THAT'S HIS NAME, YOU HAPPY NOW????
Well, Talzo's escaped, so logically, the Escape! segment is over now that he's actually explained.
Fun fact: I actually didn't want to make a new Kirby sprite sheet recolor for Fanhal, so that's actually Neon from two comics ago. Hey, sometimes grayscaled flashbacks can be helpful!
TALZO!!!
THAT'S HIS NAME, YOU HAPPY NOW????
Well, Talzo's escaped, so logically, the Escape! segment is over now that he's actually explained.
Fun fact: I actually didn't want to make a new Kirby sprite sheet recolor for Fanhal, so that's actually Neon from two comics ago. Hey, sometimes grayscaled flashbacks can be helpful!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
12/28/10
WE CAN USE HIS NAME NOW! EXUBERANCE!
...wait, if Talzo got himself kicked out, why does he want to revenge himself on the Squad? Did he feel his expulsion was wrong? Why was Fanhal picked to assist in getting rid of him? Why is Shadik just standing there? Why am I asking you all these questions? Find out next time on-*shot*
Djoing
12/28/10
Talzo? nah, I'm calling him Plook.
Luigi_96
12/28/10
WHERE do you get these names?
DarkNut255
12/28/10
Talzo = 'T' = That dark blue Kirby who can beat up everyone.
BattleStarX
12/28/10
Half the difficulty of having so many kirbies is coming up with the names. There's only so many names you can make before your brain goes *POP*.
guestuser
01/01/11
Talzo... I agree with 96. Where do you come up with these names?
NoahTH
01/08/11
Talzo doesn't even feel a bit guilty? :O
12/28/10
WE CAN USE HIS NAME NOW! EXUBERANCE!
...wait, if Talzo got himself kicked out, why does he want to revenge himself on the Squad? Did he feel his expulsion was wrong? Why was Fanhal picked to assist in getting rid of him? Why is Shadik just standing there? Why am I asking you all these questions? Find out next time on-*shot*
Djoing
12/28/10
Talzo? nah, I'm calling him Plook.
Luigi_96
12/28/10
WHERE do you get these names?
DarkNut255
12/28/10
Talzo = 'T' = That dark blue Kirby who can beat up everyone.
BattleStarX
12/28/10
Half the difficulty of having so many kirbies is coming up with the names. There's only so many names you can make before your brain goes *POP*.
guestuser
01/01/11
Talzo... I agree with 96. Where do you come up with these names?
NoahTH
01/08/11
Talzo doesn't even feel a bit guilty? :O
Ulti's Notes:
For one thing, combat meant that I could show off all of the characters' Stored Abilities in-comic, rather than just relegating them to supplemental cast page material. Secondly, it let me sneak in something that was actually relevant to any grander story.
The efforts of this blue Kirby, who's name gets revealed by the end of the segment (or by user comments lol) are the first in a larger scheme, and while none of this quite gets picked up on for a bit due to the focus on goofier misadventures in a general sense, overall Escape is arguably the first 'important' segment of the comic.
Original Author's Comment:
Yep, new segment.
Blue Kirby is taking matters into his own hands.
Vezo is walking backwards in the last panel.
Meep is fun to say.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
12/05/10
Blue kirbys stored ability is fighter?
And,yes. meep is fun to say. lol
locoroco1
12/05/10
Vezo will destroy him. If you've ever played Squeak Squad you'll see Cutter is way better than fighter.
Jarkes
12/05/10
@locoroco1:
Not really. Besides, Kirby games don't have a matchup thing for abilities, since Kirby's the only one to ever use them. It all really boils down to personal opinion.
(Although I do agree that Fighter is kind of lame in Squeak Squad... But Cutter's not all that great until you get the ability scroll.)
And seriously, WHAT IS THE BLUE KIRBY'S NAME?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/05/10
@Jarkes:
Not tellin'.
And for all those who HAVE commented saying his name, please don't. I wanna keep it a secret, or rather, as much of a secret I can keep it when it's already out on the internet somewhere.
@locoroco1:
This isn't Squeak Squad, it's Kirby Super Star Ultra. Plus, Vezo is a probie and not very adept at fighting. We'll see what happens.
guestuser
12/05/10
@Ultimate_Yoshi:
How is it already out on the Internet when (presumably) you haven't told ANYONE?
Ultimate Yoshi
12/06/10
@guestuser:
Because I made a drawing and included all of their names alongside each character. This blue Kirby was one of those characters.
BattleStarX
12/06/10
Ah, the great meep, a noise made when they know there's no gettin' out of the situation without something down right horrid happening to them.
Silverlilly
12/06/10
Will Razie (sp?) come running back and crash into the blue Kirby and then they win? Probably not, but it would be funny!
Kirbysmith [DJ]
12/06/10
I know his name!1!! lololol*SHOT*
Sorry. Were-noob problem. ^~^'
DarkMario1000
12/09/10
I hope…
guestuser
12/15/10
Cheap cage... Very cheap cage.
And "Meep" is way more fun to say than "Yoshi"
Noah
01/08/11
Shoryuken!
MentalKnight64
06/30/11
Cutter is pretty powerful and since it's a projectile it could keep Fighter away from it until Fighter runs off or dies. However not sure if it could win against Fire since that's a projectile and he isn't experienced enough.
Knightkirby
12/05/12
Y didn't he do anything before
guestuser
11/27/13
Interesting that the only reason he's breaking out now, apparently, is because he can't take the stupidness anymore.
Luigi_96
05/12/14
It's hard to believe there was a time that we didn't know what Blue Kirby's name is.
guestuser
05/27/14
@Ultimate Yoshi
What is Talzo's stored ability (YES I KNOW HIS NAME)
guestuser
05/27/14
I told you that blue kirby Is TALZO yes I love the comics! THX ULTAMATE YOSHI!!!
guestuser
05/27/14
Say whan I log on I'm gonna make awesome comics too
guestuser
07/18/15
That headband looks more hammer than it does fighter.
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Totally not a ripoff of Shoryuken...
Ultizeta
05/19/17
Made yet another batch of comic revisions. This page now has an extra gradient and changed up the first panel to work better with blue Kirby's character.