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Master of Puppets
Part 1
Part 2
Original Author's Comment:
03/25/13
Well, now, that was just plain rude.
Well, now, that was just plain rude.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
plasma_knight303
03/25/13
Ultimate Yoshi: 'Twas rather rude.
BattleStarX
03/25/13
If it wasn't rude, would he be evil?
Gigi19972010
03/25/13
Ok, so it's really evil clones.
...Really, what? The comic is going this way? Just like what happened in Tear in the Fabric?
MecanicalCH
03/25/13
something tells me this is going to balance the good with evil...
DarkNut255
03/25/13
Still very pink...
DarkMario1000
03/26/13
But I was thinking about Tear in the Fabric after no-Kaxo showed up and this.
Ybrik Etamitlu wasn't evil. =P
Gigi19972010
guestuser
03/26/13
Hmm.... Someone mentioned Copy in the last discussion. Then, maybe the thing that's creating these comics is a Tac. Just food for thought. BTW! I'm alive!
guestuser
03/26/13
Awh, nuts.
GummyBears101
03/26/13
I wonder if there is a evil version of Saia? Now that would be weird.
Gigi19972010
03/26/13
DarkMario1000:
I will make this very clear, then:
- Take a look at TitF. Let's say it at some point starts digging its own grave. Why? Simple, the single fact of another character with author powers appearing out of nowhere destroys the whole logic of the thing. So, you may ask, what does it have to do with this segment? The same thing happened here, however, the thing which caused this was the evil clones thing, such a cliché and cheesy thing, no matter what happens next.
- Nonsense and a weak plot twist. Explaning why it's weak would take time, so I won't unless someone really wants to know it.
- Not to mention how the comic changed its course dratically since the day it started, and that's not a good thing.
The point of pointing flaws is to make sure they won't happen anymore, people pointed flaws in my comics and I won't let them happen again. But I've seen pointed flaws in this comic which happened again. I'm trying to help here... :/
guestuser
03/26/13
That slash the fake Kirby reminds me of how Ignus got unconsious for a while.
Tygah
03/27/13
Am I correct in assuming that the background turned from white to red when Kaxo met his clone? If it was in the same place, that is :P
guestuser
03/28/13
Why I didn't dance anywhere in the comic?
guestuser
03/28/13
I wonder if Etam's gonna show up or if Ulti has
another opposite...Or does he not have a clone in this segment?
guestuser
05/23/18
Kirby gave birth to kirby :OOOOOO
03/25/13
Ultimate Yoshi: 'Twas rather rude.
BattleStarX
03/25/13
If it wasn't rude, would he be evil?
Gigi19972010
03/25/13
Ok, so it's really evil clones.
...Really, what? The comic is going this way? Just like what happened in Tear in the Fabric?
MecanicalCH
03/25/13
something tells me this is going to balance the good with evil...
DarkNut255
03/25/13
Still very pink...
DarkMario1000
03/26/13
But I was thinking about Tear in the Fabric after no-Kaxo showed up and this.
Ybrik Etamitlu wasn't evil. =P
Gigi19972010
guestuser
03/26/13
Hmm.... Someone mentioned Copy in the last discussion. Then, maybe the thing that's creating these comics is a Tac. Just food for thought. BTW! I'm alive!
guestuser
03/26/13
Awh, nuts.
GummyBears101
03/26/13
I wonder if there is a evil version of Saia? Now that would be weird.
Gigi19972010
03/26/13
DarkMario1000:
I will make this very clear, then:
- Take a look at TitF. Let's say it at some point starts digging its own grave. Why? Simple, the single fact of another character with author powers appearing out of nowhere destroys the whole logic of the thing. So, you may ask, what does it have to do with this segment? The same thing happened here, however, the thing which caused this was the evil clones thing, such a cliché and cheesy thing, no matter what happens next.
- Nonsense and a weak plot twist. Explaning why it's weak would take time, so I won't unless someone really wants to know it.
- Not to mention how the comic changed its course dratically since the day it started, and that's not a good thing.
The point of pointing flaws is to make sure they won't happen anymore, people pointed flaws in my comics and I won't let them happen again. But I've seen pointed flaws in this comic which happened again. I'm trying to help here... :/
guestuser
03/26/13
That slash the fake Kirby reminds me of how Ignus got unconsious for a while.
Tygah
03/27/13
Am I correct in assuming that the background turned from white to red when Kaxo met his clone? If it was in the same place, that is :P
guestuser
03/28/13
Why I didn't dance anywhere in the comic?
guestuser
03/28/13
I wonder if Etam's gonna show up or if Ulti has
another opposite...Or does he not have a clone in this segment?
guestuser
05/23/18
Kirby gave birth to kirby :OOOOOO
A Different Type of Comic
Ulti's Notes:
This, now THIS, is where everything went to shit. The above Thanksgiving comic was originally a bonus released around Tree to Tree, as something unimportant and silly. It replaces the original comic, viewed if you click 'Original Comic' there.
The Original Comic was the stupidest decision made during the whole Gigi/Kaxo debacle. I took an already contentious situation and made it 5 times worse by deciding that the best way to respond to Gigi's critical comments was through a comic format, where I responded to her using the "guise" of a snarky character to justify being even ruder.
Everything about this original page is stupid and idiotic, and I took some of the criticism way too seriously, but then it got amped up to eleven by the time that the comments rolled around. There was a reason why back in 2017 I purged the page in the archives.
What's nice about the way I'm formatting this particular reupload, though, is that I can keep the original comments as-is rather than separate image links like they originally were, since it's in a separate scrollable box that won't make the page really annoying, and it'll be just as easily glossed-over in this archive as it would be otherwise.
Anyways, while my stance on preservation means that this whole debacle WAS retained, I don't really recommend reading through it unless you enjoy a bunch of dumb teenagers being dumb teenagers, arguing about shit that really isn't important, and things getting heated unreasonably so and people just talking over each other.
I really just want to take all the people involved in these comments and just tell them all to shut up. I dragged a lot of people down to an obnoxious level, and while certainly the majority of the blame is mine for turning this into an issue at all AND responding in this idiotic way in the first place, people didn't need to respond so childishly either, it's just a goddamn mess. You're all kids, none of this really mattered in the end, go shut up and get off the computer and touch some grass, please.
The Original Comic was the stupidest decision made during the whole Gigi/Kaxo debacle. I took an already contentious situation and made it 5 times worse by deciding that the best way to respond to Gigi's critical comments was through a comic format, where I responded to her using the "guise" of a snarky character to justify being even ruder.
Everything about this original page is stupid and idiotic, and I took some of the criticism way too seriously, but then it got amped up to eleven by the time that the comments rolled around. There was a reason why back in 2017 I purged the page in the archives.
What's nice about the way I'm formatting this particular reupload, though, is that I can keep the original comments as-is rather than separate image links like they originally were, since it's in a separate scrollable box that won't make the page really annoying, and it'll be just as easily glossed-over in this archive as it would be otherwise.
Anyways, while my stance on preservation means that this whole debacle WAS retained, I don't really recommend reading through it unless you enjoy a bunch of dumb teenagers being dumb teenagers, arguing about shit that really isn't important, and things getting heated unreasonably so and people just talking over each other.
I really just want to take all the people involved in these comments and just tell them all to shut up. I dragged a lot of people down to an obnoxious level, and while certainly the majority of the blame is mine for turning this into an issue at all AND responding in this idiotic way in the first place, people didn't need to respond so childishly either, it's just a goddamn mess. You're all kids, none of this really mattered in the end, go shut up and get off the computer and touch some grass, please.
Original Author's Comment:
07/27/17
This entire page has been purged from what it once was, and replaced with an older bonus comic that was linked sometime around Helping Hand but never officially uploaded to the main site before.
The reason for this is due to the sheer lack of flow the giant criticism-addressing page forced. Not only was it ridiculously long and honestly a really stupid way of bringing up criticism, but it forced people to care about something they might not even have wanted to. Thus, now that it's four years later, in order to make a comic reread more appealing, I've replaced it with this, as well as removing all comments.
However, for the sake of posterity, I've backed up both the original page as well as every single comment that still remained on the page (one person's account was banned, so their comment wasn't around anymore).
This entire page has been purged from what it once was, and replaced with an older bonus comic that was linked sometime around Helping Hand but never officially uploaded to the main site before.
The reason for this is due to the sheer lack of flow the giant criticism-addressing page forced. Not only was it ridiculously long and honestly a really stupid way of bringing up criticism, but it forced people to care about something they might not even have wanted to. Thus, now that it's four years later, in order to make a comic reread more appealing, I've replaced it with this, as well as removing all comments.
However, for the sake of posterity, I've backed up both the original page as well as every single comment that still remained on the page (one person's account was banned, so their comment wasn't around anymore).
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Part 3
Ulti's Notes:
We now return you to your regularly scheduled Master of Puppets.
Original Author's Comment:
04/01/13
Not-Kirby seems to be avoiding the issue.
Not-Kirby seems to be avoiding the issue.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
04/01/13
Avoiding the issue: fine.
Talkin' sweet nothings to another's sword: creepy.
Gigi19972010
04/01/13
Sword > Master
Obviously.
Luigi_96
04/01/13
Jarkes: Minecraft. More specifically, creepers.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/01/13
Luigi_96: That's a Minecraft reference? I thought it was just a thing some people say.
Luigi_96
04/01/13
http://cdn.head-fi.org/a/a5/900x900px-LL-a53e734d_THATS-A-VERY-NICE-EVERYTHING-YOU-HAVE-THERE-BE-A-SHAME-IF-SOMETHING-HAPPENED-TO-IT.jpg
I guess it kinda is just a thing people say, probably mocking door-to-door salesmen, but that's what I thought of.
guestuser
04/02/13
well to be more specific its from minecraft but not just minecraft the true origin came from the youtube channel BlueXephos now I don't remember the episode and it just stuck and become well known to the internet and I may be wrong
Neon-J
04/02/13
It IS just a thing people say, but it's taken a Memetic Mutation and become a Minecraft meme, thanks to the Yogscast.
@Guest comment above: It's true origin was not the Yogscast at all. They just made it popular and Minecrafty.
guestuser
04/02/13
It be a sssshame if ssssssomthing where to happened to it....
milomus2
04/02/13
BOOOOOOOM! Swordshot!
DarkMario1000
04/02/13
RUN, UY! (S)HE MIGHT ARREST YOU FOR PANEL 5!!!
It'd be a shame if somethin' happened to the sword? Erm, Kirby could just make another one appear; it IS his stored ability. XD
Princess_Eevee9
04/03/13
Don't know MineCraft so this reference flew over my head.
guestuser
02/02/14
Actually, it's a thing the Mafia would say. No joke. That's a nice building you have there... Be a shame if anything would happen to it...
ZeypherComix
04/22/14
Creeper reference! Sweet!
04/01/13
Avoiding the issue: fine.
Talkin' sweet nothings to another's sword: creepy.
Gigi19972010
04/01/13
Sword > Master
Obviously.
Luigi_96
04/01/13
Jarkes: Minecraft. More specifically, creepers.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/01/13
Luigi_96: That's a Minecraft reference? I thought it was just a thing some people say.
Luigi_96
04/01/13
http://cdn.head-fi.org/a/a5/900x900px-LL-a53e734d_THATS-A-VERY-NICE-EVERYTHING-YOU-HAVE-THERE-BE-A-SHAME-IF-SOMETHING-HAPPENED-TO-IT.jpg
I guess it kinda is just a thing people say, probably mocking door-to-door salesmen, but that's what I thought of.
guestuser
04/02/13
well to be more specific its from minecraft but not just minecraft the true origin came from the youtube channel BlueXephos now I don't remember the episode and it just stuck and become well known to the internet and I may be wrong
Neon-J
04/02/13
It IS just a thing people say, but it's taken a Memetic Mutation and become a Minecraft meme, thanks to the Yogscast.
@Guest comment above: It's true origin was not the Yogscast at all. They just made it popular and Minecrafty.
guestuser
04/02/13
It be a sssshame if ssssssomthing where to happened to it....
milomus2
04/02/13
BOOOOOOOM! Swordshot!
DarkMario1000
04/02/13
RUN, UY! (S)HE MIGHT ARREST YOU FOR PANEL 5!!!
It'd be a shame if somethin' happened to the sword? Erm, Kirby could just make another one appear; it IS his stored ability. XD
Princess_Eevee9
04/03/13
Don't know MineCraft so this reference flew over my head.
guestuser
02/02/14
Actually, it's a thing the Mafia would say. No joke. That's a nice building you have there... Be a shame if anything would happen to it...
ZeypherComix
04/22/14
Creeper reference! Sweet!
Part 4
Ulti's Notes:
This is when the idea of "evil clones fighting the main squadmembers" turns a bit iffy and slowly gets derailed. I don't know if it was purposeful or not, but I just kinda eventually stopped writing the clones as being particularly evil or bad, and some of the later ones hardly even displayed any animosity or different traits to the originals.
It didn't ruin the segment by any means, but it is a bit odd considering the entire premise of the segment was 'evil clones', and I didn't stick with it til the end.
It's the effect of my style of writing being pretty in-the-moment, and me still being very inexperienced relatively and not having my writing style down-pat yet. I was still pretty variable about the events and story beats, changing things when I felt I was going in a different direction.
It didn't ruin the segment by any means, but it is a bit odd considering the entire premise of the segment was 'evil clones', and I didn't stick with it til the end.
It's the effect of my style of writing being pretty in-the-moment, and me still being very inexperienced relatively and not having my writing style down-pat yet. I was still pretty variable about the events and story beats, changing things when I felt I was going in a different direction.
Original Author's Comment:
04/03/13
Foo indeed.
Foo indeed.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Fusion Kirby
04/03/13
How long has that phrase been absent? Since "To the Tower", I believe?
Luigi_96
04/03/13
Jarkes: I was wondering that too...
Ultimate Yoshi
04/03/13
Jarkes: Chapter 1 consists of the first four segments of the comic, The First Mission, Average Days, Escape, and To The Tower.
Chapter 2 was the following four, Meet The KAS, The Beginning, From Dream Adventures, and Jetting Across The Ice.
Chapter 3 are these last six segments, Helping Hand, Tree To Tree, Tear In The Fabric, Division Addition, Such An Odd Eight, and Master Of Puppets. MoP is the last segment before Chapter 4 will begin.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/03/13
Jarkes: Nope.
DarkMario1000
04/04/13
because there are no doughnuts around…
nor is there a Kaxo to poke fun at. =P
BattleStarX
04/04/13
Fooey-foo.
guestuser
04/05/13
@All: You thought I was going to be gone for 2-5 years. Happy late April Fools! =P
guestuser
04/05/13
DarkMario1000: Nor is there a Zan to get chocolate donuts from.
Princess_Eevee9
04/10/13
BattleStarX: Master Foo?
04/03/13
How long has that phrase been absent? Since "To the Tower", I believe?
Luigi_96
04/03/13
Jarkes: I was wondering that too...
Ultimate Yoshi
04/03/13
Jarkes: Chapter 1 consists of the first four segments of the comic, The First Mission, Average Days, Escape, and To The Tower.
Chapter 2 was the following four, Meet The KAS, The Beginning, From Dream Adventures, and Jetting Across The Ice.
Chapter 3 are these last six segments, Helping Hand, Tree To Tree, Tear In The Fabric, Division Addition, Such An Odd Eight, and Master Of Puppets. MoP is the last segment before Chapter 4 will begin.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/03/13
Jarkes: Nope.
DarkMario1000
04/04/13
because there are no doughnuts around…
nor is there a Kaxo to poke fun at. =P
BattleStarX
04/04/13
Fooey-foo.
guestuser
04/05/13
@All: You thought I was going to be gone for 2-5 years. Happy late April Fools! =P
guestuser
04/05/13
DarkMario1000: Nor is there a Zan to get chocolate donuts from.
Princess_Eevee9
04/10/13
BattleStarX: Master Foo?
Part 5
Ulti's Notes:
Instead of blocking it with a fourth-wall breaking sign, I elected to try to actually write a smarter and observant Caiya for a change. It turns out that she's quite sesquipedalian.
Original Author's Comment:
04/06/13
VOCABULARY
VOCABULARY
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Alienoid
04/06/13
WORDS
1ce_k1d
04/06/13
I lost them at "think".
BattleStarX
04/06/13
Double-Smart Caiya is breaking my brain. Quick! Someone toss a donut between them!
Djoing
04/06/13
"also, it makes me slightly darker so the readers can tell which one of us is which."
Tygah
04/06/13
Makes me wonder...If Caiya is in her less intelligent personality most of the time,, would her copy mostly be in her more intelligent personality?
Also, that copy is such a cool shade of blue!
Luigi_96
04/06/13
INTELLIGENCE. O_O
Plazem
04/06/13
My god, caiya speaks science! o.e
star kirby12
04/06/13
...It looks like the two are sort of getting along...
milomus2
04/06/13
Luigi_96: Why, whats wrong with intelligence? with intelligence, we know that the mathematical equation 5+5=10 is not actually math, just notation of the implied existence of "math" a similar concept with clocks and time. "time" was just a theory made by humans to help people know when and where to be. The world decided that they needed one singular "time" throughout the world, resulting in the creation of time-zones. Watches and clocks were created to accompany this "time". therefore, clocks are just a notation to support the implied existence of a theoretical substance. There is, in reality, no such thing as a "space/time continueum". There is, however, "the fabric of space", the very real substance that "space/time" was derived from. And that's just a little bit of intelligence!
guestuser
04/06/13
@All: My birthday's today, so give me a shout-out.
KHKirby
04/06/13
PHRASEOLOGY
Also Ulti, could you delete the link to the Caiya Fan Art that I made? I deleted it because it was terrible. :/ I'm ChrisTheKirby on DA.
DarkMario1000
04/06/13
That always takes me by surprise…then again…
Luigi_96
04/06/13
milomus2: When did I say there was anything WRONG with intelligence? I'm simply shocked to see Saiya and her clone using some of it to create big words and sentences that would be incomprehensible to someone with a small vocabulary.
guestuser
04/06/13
MY GOD MY MIND JUST EXPLODED
guestuser
04/07/13
Donut, come back !
guestuser
04/08/13
The learning! It burns!
Luigi_96
04/08/13
Jarkes: I meant that... pardon me, I'm using a digital keyboard here. >_<
Princess_Eevee9
04/10/13
Why be evil when one is smart though.~
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
When Caiya wakes up in a place that's different from where she fell asleep she automatically goes into smart-Caiya mode.
guestuser
01/04/14
Hey!the blue color is my favorite
guestuser
05/05/14
Am I the only one who can decode that without a dictionary?
Ultizeta
07/27/17
Funnily enough, despite my intent to make the Caiya's seem smart here, I failed at making MYSELF smart by misspelling "benevolence" in the original page. I also fixed a bit of text tangenting in panel 7.
04/06/13
WORDS
1ce_k1d
04/06/13
I lost them at "think".
BattleStarX
04/06/13
Double-Smart Caiya is breaking my brain. Quick! Someone toss a donut between them!
Djoing
04/06/13
"also, it makes me slightly darker so the readers can tell which one of us is which."
Tygah
04/06/13
Makes me wonder...If Caiya is in her less intelligent personality most of the time,, would her copy mostly be in her more intelligent personality?
Also, that copy is such a cool shade of blue!
Luigi_96
04/06/13
INTELLIGENCE. O_O
Plazem
04/06/13
My god, caiya speaks science! o.e
star kirby12
04/06/13
...It looks like the two are sort of getting along...
milomus2
04/06/13
Luigi_96: Why, whats wrong with intelligence? with intelligence, we know that the mathematical equation 5+5=10 is not actually math, just notation of the implied existence of "math" a similar concept with clocks and time. "time" was just a theory made by humans to help people know when and where to be. The world decided that they needed one singular "time" throughout the world, resulting in the creation of time-zones. Watches and clocks were created to accompany this "time". therefore, clocks are just a notation to support the implied existence of a theoretical substance. There is, in reality, no such thing as a "space/time continueum". There is, however, "the fabric of space", the very real substance that "space/time" was derived from. And that's just a little bit of intelligence!
guestuser
04/06/13
@All: My birthday's today, so give me a shout-out.
KHKirby
04/06/13
PHRASEOLOGY
Also Ulti, could you delete the link to the Caiya Fan Art that I made? I deleted it because it was terrible. :/ I'm ChrisTheKirby on DA.
DarkMario1000
04/06/13
That always takes me by surprise…then again…
Luigi_96
04/06/13
milomus2: When did I say there was anything WRONG with intelligence? I'm simply shocked to see Saiya and her clone using some of it to create big words and sentences that would be incomprehensible to someone with a small vocabulary.
guestuser
04/06/13
MY GOD MY MIND JUST EXPLODED
guestuser
04/07/13
Donut, come back !
guestuser
04/08/13
The learning! It burns!
Luigi_96
04/08/13
Jarkes: I meant that... pardon me, I'm using a digital keyboard here. >_<
Princess_Eevee9
04/10/13
Why be evil when one is smart though.~
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
When Caiya wakes up in a place that's different from where she fell asleep she automatically goes into smart-Caiya mode.
guestuser
01/04/14
Hey!the blue color is my favorite
guestuser
05/05/14
Am I the only one who can decode that without a dictionary?
Ultizeta
07/27/17
Funnily enough, despite my intent to make the Caiya's seem smart here, I failed at making MYSELF smart by misspelling "benevolence" in the original page. I also fixed a bit of text tangenting in panel 7.
Part 6
Ulti's Notes:
My idea of having a new orb in every Chapter of KA was going on in full force here. Since I neglected to have any new orb show up in the previous 5 segments, this was the last opportunity I had to insert one in, and I felt like this could be a good opportunity to do so.
Thus, I inserted in this new information about the orbs being incapable of being magically reproduced, and gave Not-Caiya a different orb, with the handwaved justification/guess-from-Caiya that when the magic trap couldn't duplicate the Ice Orb, it instead just nabbed whatever other random orb it could find, teleporting in the Spark Orb for Not-Caiya as a result.
Thus, I inserted in this new information about the orbs being incapable of being magically reproduced, and gave Not-Caiya a different orb, with the handwaved justification/guess-from-Caiya that when the magic trap couldn't duplicate the Ice Orb, it instead just nabbed whatever other random orb it could find, teleporting in the Spark Orb for Not-Caiya as a result.
Original Author's Comment:
04/08/13
GASP.
GASP.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
04/08/13
So much smart talking going on here. Apparently the donut I sent got lost in the mail. Stupid, inter-dimensional mail service, never gets the shipment right.
I wonder what orbs do to those who's powers don't match them...
1997Cjones
04/08/13
Green? What could that be?
MecanicalCH
04/08/13
1997Cjones: green...mmm...no idea...
Plazem
04/08/13
BattleStarX: Allow me to give you an educated guess. Since the orb is probably plasma, based on it's color, It could allow the caiya clone to probably use a strong plasma attack, possibly weakened by her non-plasma ability.
Gigi19972010
04/08/13
Oh no!!!! It's the evil green orb of DEATH!!!!
Knightkirby
04/08/13
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGREENWILLDESTROYUSALL
HyperTurtle32
04/09/13
Jarkes: I used to think that when I first started reading the comic, but not anymore.
guestuser
04/09/13
If that's THE Life Orb, WE'REALLGONNADIIIIIIE!!! If not, thank Arceus! By the way, I think I have it because I have a color-changing orb. Wait a minute..............................
guestuser
04/09/13
Is that the nature orb?!
WEAERALLGONNADIIEEEEEEEEE
Princess_Eevee9
04/10/13
@kirbylubber: I thought nature was supposed to give life not take thooough. D:
JosephX
04/12/13
When Ciya activates her ability, so does her copy. It reminds me of the copy robot fight from Megaman 1, where if you select any weapon, so will the copy.
guestuser
04/12/13
Princess_Eevee9: THREEE WORDS:
POISON
IVY
BATMAN
guestuser
01/04/14
Maybe sparks or ice orb of green color
guestuser
05/21/16
HyperTurtle32:Ditto.
04/08/13
So much smart talking going on here. Apparently the donut I sent got lost in the mail. Stupid, inter-dimensional mail service, never gets the shipment right.
I wonder what orbs do to those who's powers don't match them...
1997Cjones
04/08/13
Green? What could that be?
MecanicalCH
04/08/13
1997Cjones: green...mmm...no idea...
Plazem
04/08/13
BattleStarX: Allow me to give you an educated guess. Since the orb is probably plasma, based on it's color, It could allow the caiya clone to probably use a strong plasma attack, possibly weakened by her non-plasma ability.
Gigi19972010
04/08/13
Oh no!!!! It's the evil green orb of DEATH!!!!
Knightkirby
04/08/13
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGREENWILLDESTROYUSALL
HyperTurtle32
04/09/13
Jarkes: I used to think that when I first started reading the comic, but not anymore.
guestuser
04/09/13
If that's THE Life Orb, WE'REALLGONNADIIIIIIE!!! If not, thank Arceus! By the way, I think I have it because I have a color-changing orb. Wait a minute..............................
guestuser
04/09/13
Is that the nature orb?!
WEAERALLGONNADIIEEEEEEEEE
Princess_Eevee9
04/10/13
@kirbylubber: I thought nature was supposed to give life not take thooough. D:
JosephX
04/12/13
When Ciya activates her ability, so does her copy. It reminds me of the copy robot fight from Megaman 1, where if you select any weapon, so will the copy.
guestuser
04/12/13
Princess_Eevee9: THREEE WORDS:
POISON
IVY
BATMAN
guestuser
01/04/14
Maybe sparks or ice orb of green color
guestuser
05/21/16
HyperTurtle32:Ditto.
Part 7
Original Author's Comment:
04/10/13
The return of Not-Kaxo!
In other news, I've discovered that I'm absolutely insane. I decided to go through the Extra Game of Kirby's Dream Land 1 with only one health point.
The return of Not-Kaxo!
In other news, I've discovered that I'm absolutely insane. I decided to go through the Extra Game of Kirby's Dream Land 1 with only one health point.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Alienoid
04/10/13
I can only wonder what Saia, Raize and Shadik will be like.
Shat'l may be the most chaotic.
MecanicalCH
04/10/13
ummm....Kaxo finally found someone to fight...to DEATH!
Luigi_96
04/10/13
Ultimate Yoshi: I now have the urge to try that myself... how many lives are you going with? (I can't watch it at the moment, so that's why I ask)
Fusion Kirby
04/10/13
Ultimate Yoshi: I was laughing.
So Hard.
Princess_Eevee9
04/10/13
Jarkes: Red for happiness of course.~
BattleStarX
04/10/13
Twice the Kaxo means twice the burnination.
Let it commence.
DarkMario1000
04/11/13
Kaxo, you're not alone this time. Are you satisfied? Time to turn up the heat.
Oh look, the new segment button.
MixMagi365
04/12/13
Alienoid: naw, i'm probably guessing Shadik will
04/10/13
I can only wonder what Saia, Raize and Shadik will be like.
Shat'l may be the most chaotic.
MecanicalCH
04/10/13
ummm....Kaxo finally found someone to fight...to DEATH!
Luigi_96
04/10/13
Ultimate Yoshi: I now have the urge to try that myself... how many lives are you going with? (I can't watch it at the moment, so that's why I ask)
Fusion Kirby
04/10/13
Ultimate Yoshi: I was laughing.
So Hard.
Princess_Eevee9
04/10/13
Jarkes: Red for happiness of course.~
BattleStarX
04/10/13
Twice the Kaxo means twice the burnination.
Let it commence.
DarkMario1000
04/11/13
Kaxo, you're not alone this time. Are you satisfied? Time to turn up the heat.
Oh look, the new segment button.
MixMagi365
04/12/13
Alienoid: naw, i'm probably guessing Shadik will
Part 8
Ulti's Notes:
Not-Kaxo was the only cloned character who I wound up not writing like they were just another version of the character. While I had Not-Caiya claim that any sense of goodness in her was replaced with evil, it pretty quickly became apparent that that any animosity the clones had would quickly go away, the more they interacted with their main selves.
Not-Kaxo was the exception, since the story justification I went with after the 20 Times Kirby crossover was that he was created in advance of the other clones. He wasn't really written like Kaxo at all, in the end, I just kinda made him this big dick who liked to talk a lot.
In retrospect, it's a bit annoying to me that I didn't write Kaxo's clone as being more Kaxo-like, but alas. I was still a bit frantically trying to metaphorically duct tape together what I wanted Kaxo to be like properly, and so it wasn't the most well-thought-out in the long run.
Not-Kaxo was the exception, since the story justification I went with after the 20 Times Kirby crossover was that he was created in advance of the other clones. He wasn't really written like Kaxo at all, in the end, I just kinda made him this big dick who liked to talk a lot.
In retrospect, it's a bit annoying to me that I didn't write Kaxo's clone as being more Kaxo-like, but alas. I was still a bit frantically trying to metaphorically duct tape together what I wanted Kaxo to be like properly, and so it wasn't the most well-thought-out in the long run.
Original Author's Comment:
04/12/13
Not-Kaxo is a jerk.
Not-Kaxo is a jerk.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
epicness
04/12/13
Even Kaxo has standards.
Alienoid
04/12/13
epicness: The more people he kills, the less people left to pick on.
epicness
04/12/13
Alienoid:
... oooooooooooh...
The Bomb Master
04/12/13
looks like we've finally found his "not without compassion" part.
Luigi_96
04/12/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Then again, so is normal Kaxo.
Also, "bullynable"?
Ultimate Yoshi
04/12/13
Luigi_96: Ask Gigi about that 'word', she's the one who made it up.
MecanicalCH
04/12/13
I think Kaxxo is in love with Raven!!!
Luigi_96
04/12/13
Ultimate Yoshi: So, it's not supposed to be "bullyable"?
guestuser
04/12/13
...Plot Twist?
BattleStarX
04/12/13
Where's the burnination?
guestuser
04/13/13
I was reading the comic before this, and Ulti's avatar was Marx, then when I read this comic, his avatar had changed! Cool avatar...
DarkMario1000
04/13/13
I think the clone just exceeded that limit. And Kaxo's not too pleased about that.
Oh cool, the evolution of Nintendo® systems.
domex
04/14/13
This will be one interesting battle, considering Kaxo's temper...
Omega Kirby
04/20/13
Wait...Kaxo's never actually met Raven! How could he be in llove with her?
Firecat1311
04/25/13
Omega Kirby: He's not "in love" with anyone, and he doesn't know about Raven. The reason he's snapping is because someone tried to kill someone else under his name.
04/12/13
Even Kaxo has standards.
Alienoid
04/12/13
epicness: The more people he kills, the less people left to pick on.
epicness
04/12/13
Alienoid:
... oooooooooooh...
The Bomb Master
04/12/13
looks like we've finally found his "not without compassion" part.
Luigi_96
04/12/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Then again, so is normal Kaxo.
Also, "bullynable"?
Ultimate Yoshi
04/12/13
Luigi_96: Ask Gigi about that 'word', she's the one who made it up.
MecanicalCH
04/12/13
I think Kaxxo is in love with Raven!!!
Luigi_96
04/12/13
Ultimate Yoshi: So, it's not supposed to be "bullyable"?
guestuser
04/12/13
...Plot Twist?
BattleStarX
04/12/13
Where's the burnination?
guestuser
04/13/13
I was reading the comic before this, and Ulti's avatar was Marx, then when I read this comic, his avatar had changed! Cool avatar...
DarkMario1000
04/13/13
I think the clone just exceeded that limit. And Kaxo's not too pleased about that.
Oh cool, the evolution of Nintendo® systems.
domex
04/14/13
This will be one interesting battle, considering Kaxo's temper...
Omega Kirby
04/20/13
Wait...Kaxo's never actually met Raven! How could he be in llove with her?
Firecat1311
04/25/13
Omega Kirby: He's not "in love" with anyone, and he doesn't know about Raven. The reason he's snapping is because someone tried to kill someone else under his name.
Part 9
Ulti's Notes:
The early half of this segment was a bit repetitive, if you couldn't tell. I do think I figured out an okay way of having the repetitive scenes feel different enough, but it still could've been a bit more truncated and better-written in retrospect.
Original Author's Comment:
04/17/13
*floats away on a lawn chair because magic*
I've started up some new Let's Plays for you guys to enjoy! One of them is of the N64 game known as Bomberman 64, one of my all time favorite games: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lUkPqqqWtfc
The other is a blind LP of the PS1 game Spyro The Dragon, the first in the classic series starring everyone's favorite purple dragon: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=soxTlghxcXU
*floats away on a lawn chair because magic*
I've started up some new Let's Plays for you guys to enjoy! One of them is of the N64 game known as Bomberman 64, one of my all time favorite games: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lUkPqqqWtfc
The other is a blind LP of the PS1 game Spyro The Dragon, the first in the classic series starring everyone's favorite purple dragon: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=soxTlghxcXU
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
04/17/13
Hmm, this clone seems nice...
Also, Bomberman and Spyro? That's quite a departure.
Knightkirby
04/17/13
but i like magic. magic is awesome.
Mint612
04/17/13
hmmm...
SCIENCE LOVERS UNITE!
BattleStarX
04/17/13
Good ol' magic, where would we be without it?
And yay for a Bomberman Let's Play! Shirobon really doesn't get a lot of game time these days, does he? Pity. We could do with another game along the lines of 64 and 64: The Second Attack
guestuser
04/17/13
Indubitably, these two rather spiffy clones seem to be in quite an agreement, unlike those other tenacious clones.
*sips tea* I SAY!
Alienoid
04/17/13
Huzzah, my favourite character gets along with sciency stuff with his clone.
HUZZEH!
The Bomb Master
04/17/13
stupid magic. it defies science, so it's unexplainable, so we can't figure out what's going on.
Plazem
04/17/13
Mint612: FOR SCIENCE!!!!
guestuser
04/18/13
I watched more often I want a account I love the comics I also love Kirby how did you ultimate yoshi think of master of the puppets
DarkNut255
04/18/13
Magii~iic!!
DarkMario1000
04/19/13
…
F*CK YEA…
04/17/13
Hmm, this clone seems nice...
Also, Bomberman and Spyro? That's quite a departure.
Knightkirby
04/17/13
but i like magic. magic is awesome.
Mint612
04/17/13
hmmm...
SCIENCE LOVERS UNITE!
BattleStarX
04/17/13
Good ol' magic, where would we be without it?
And yay for a Bomberman Let's Play! Shirobon really doesn't get a lot of game time these days, does he? Pity. We could do with another game along the lines of 64 and 64: The Second Attack
guestuser
04/17/13
Indubitably, these two rather spiffy clones seem to be in quite an agreement, unlike those other tenacious clones.
*sips tea* I SAY!
Alienoid
04/17/13
Huzzah, my favourite character gets along with sciency stuff with his clone.
HUZZEH!
The Bomb Master
04/17/13
stupid magic. it defies science, so it's unexplainable, so we can't figure out what's going on.
Plazem
04/17/13
Mint612: FOR SCIENCE!!!!
guestuser
04/18/13
I watched more often I want a account I love the comics I also love Kirby how did you ultimate yoshi think of master of the puppets
DarkNut255
04/18/13
Magii~iic!!
DarkMario1000
04/19/13
…
F*CK YEA…
Part 10
Original Author's Comment:
04/18/13
Don't ask where he got it from, either. Just accept it and move on.
I'm not only starting Bomberman 64 and Spyro LPs, but I'm also doing two others at the same time! First up is a race of Super Mario 64 between me and Torkirby: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MDlATfalw60
Next is a return to Yoshi's Island gameplay with the sequel, Yoshi's Island DS: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MQG5zXZxl2A
Don't ask where he got it from, either. Just accept it and move on.
I'm not only starting Bomberman 64 and Spyro LPs, but I'm also doing two others at the same time! First up is a race of Super Mario 64 between me and Torkirby: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MDlATfalw60
Next is a return to Yoshi's Island gameplay with the sequel, Yoshi's Island DS: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MQG5zXZxl2A
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
04/18/13
Lol.
Djoing
04/18/13
What a dumb question.
He got it from his pants, of course.
keeby rulez
04/18/13
Djoing: Kirby's don't wear pants. he pulled it out of hammerspace, and if it was pants, it would have to have BIG pockets
MecanicalCH
04/18/13
keeby rulez: his hammer space is where his pants are! and yes some Kirbies do use Pants not often but we do use them!
The Bomb Master
04/18/13
keeby rulez: I think that's the point. and besides, don't question kirby comics. most don't follow the rules of logic.
Luigi_96
04/18/13
Battleship... I have bad memories with that game...
DarkNut255
04/18/13
Battle of the intellectuals!
...Sorta
Air Man1 21
04/18/13
I am great at Battleship.
Also, Kaxo's moral code might not have been violated due to to excessive violence. It might include one or more of the following: Kaxo doesn't hit girls; Kaxo only hurts those who can fight back; or Kaxo is culturally sensitive, and wouldn't want to offend anybody with a Raven piñata.
DarkMario1000
04/19/13
isn't half-bad. Or quarter-bad. Or eighth…he's much lower.
I wonder if 'Master' saw this coming: the clone intellectually reasoning his way to still fight Raize but not physically.
guestuser
04/19/13
If they both think the same way, won't all of their shipe end up in the same spot?
They would pick the same spaces too.
How could one fairly win?
Princess_Eevee9
04/19/13
I support this playing of Battleship if it's played the Michael Bay way.
Syogren
04/19/13
This is brilliant. That is all.
Knightkirby
04/19/13
...it came from his mouth?
guestuser
04/20/13
It was obviously magic.
(previous comic...)
Koopa1018
05/21/13
"Successus Ex Machina:
Sort of like a reverse of Murphy's Law. Simply put, it states that if somebody in a certain situation suggests a good idea, one or more of the other people present will be able to pull said idea off."
-Excerpt from Deus Ex Machina: A Simplified Study On Bizzare Twists.
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
gotta love the loopholes!
guestuser
03/22/14
Princess_Eevee9: What's the Michael Bay way?
04/18/13
Lol.
Djoing
04/18/13
What a dumb question.
He got it from his pants, of course.
keeby rulez
04/18/13
Djoing: Kirby's don't wear pants. he pulled it out of hammerspace, and if it was pants, it would have to have BIG pockets
MecanicalCH
04/18/13
keeby rulez: his hammer space is where his pants are! and yes some Kirbies do use Pants not often but we do use them!
The Bomb Master
04/18/13
keeby rulez: I think that's the point. and besides, don't question kirby comics. most don't follow the rules of logic.
Luigi_96
04/18/13
Battleship... I have bad memories with that game...
DarkNut255
04/18/13
Battle of the intellectuals!
...Sorta
Air Man1 21
04/18/13
I am great at Battleship.
Also, Kaxo's moral code might not have been violated due to to excessive violence. It might include one or more of the following: Kaxo doesn't hit girls; Kaxo only hurts those who can fight back; or Kaxo is culturally sensitive, and wouldn't want to offend anybody with a Raven piñata.
DarkMario1000
04/19/13
isn't half-bad. Or quarter-bad. Or eighth…he's much lower.
I wonder if 'Master' saw this coming: the clone intellectually reasoning his way to still fight Raize but not physically.
guestuser
04/19/13
If they both think the same way, won't all of their shipe end up in the same spot?
They would pick the same spaces too.
How could one fairly win?
Princess_Eevee9
04/19/13
I support this playing of Battleship if it's played the Michael Bay way.
Syogren
04/19/13
This is brilliant. That is all.
Knightkirby
04/19/13
...it came from his mouth?
guestuser
04/20/13
It was obviously magic.
(previous comic...)
Koopa1018
05/21/13
"Successus Ex Machina:
Sort of like a reverse of Murphy's Law. Simply put, it states that if somebody in a certain situation suggests a good idea, one or more of the other people present will be able to pull said idea off."
-Excerpt from Deus Ex Machina: A Simplified Study On Bizzare Twists.
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
gotta love the loopholes!
guestuser
03/22/14
Princess_Eevee9: What's the Michael Bay way?
Part 11
Ulti's Notes:
This cube guy is known as a Blucko, and comes from Kirby Mass Attack. It's just a living block enemy meant to be destroyed, and it makes a bit of a noise that I attempted to turn into an onotomopoeia here with 'meerrrpp'.
Original Author's Comment:
04/20/13
Don't you just hate being crushed?
Don't you just hate being crushed?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
MarioKong
04/20/13
Ultimate Yoshi: I LOVE your new avatar!(I am a HUUUUUGE video game geek)
Gigi19972010
04/20/13
...?
Luigi_96
04/20/13
Merrrp indeed.
BattleStarX
04/20/13
Nothin' like a trap to get someone to go into the original trap.
Light/Pokemon the hedgehog
04/20/13
Stupid...Living......Star block......Things! Ohey chapter button thingy.
Princess_Eevee9
04/21/13
Outsmarted by the countermeasure.
lstaff4
04/21/13
Funny, I saw these videos already while i was on youtube
meta-eggplant
04/21/13
...where did that come from?
DarkMario1000
04/22/13
Just in case a block out of NOVA-knows-where fall out of the sky and hit him.
Oh wait…
ZeypherComix
04/22/14
Mmmmmeeeeerrrrrppppp
04/20/13
Ultimate Yoshi: I LOVE your new avatar!(I am a HUUUUUGE video game geek)
Gigi19972010
04/20/13
...?
Luigi_96
04/20/13
Merrrp indeed.
BattleStarX
04/20/13
Nothin' like a trap to get someone to go into the original trap.
Light/Pokemon the hedgehog
04/20/13
Stupid...Living......Star block......Things! Ohey chapter button thingy.
Princess_Eevee9
04/21/13
Outsmarted by the countermeasure.
lstaff4
04/21/13
Funny, I saw these videos already while i was on youtube
meta-eggplant
04/21/13
...where did that come from?
DarkMario1000
04/22/13
Just in case a block out of NOVA-knows-where fall out of the sky and hit him.
Oh wait…
ZeypherComix
04/22/14
Mmmmmeeeeerrrrrppppp
Part 12
Ulti's Notes:
Both in-comic and in various comments early on, there was a lot of degradation and mockery of the idea of an evil clone sequence. The idea was derided, lampshaded (as seen here), and all-in-all didn't start out too popular.
In retrospect, now that I'm more experienced as a writer, I can't help but be amused by how disliked the idea was, as if a cliché was some sort of dirty word or concept. Anything that's seen as "I know this from someplace" is, like, immediately declared unoriginal and thus not worth one's time. Meanwhile, I'm just sitting here going "yes, good, use a common trope and utilize it to explore your characters, Past Ulti. this is effective and you're starting to get how to write better, finally."
Like, I understand the wariness of a common idea, but clichés are clichés for a reason. Tried-and-true storytelling methods and ideas and premises are effective, and they help the more original parts of a story stand out more. A basic idea like this isn't a detriment when it's being used to explore the cast and how some of them tick, while being an otherwise simple and fun adventure to go on.
Some of the capitulation and degradation seen in my 2013 self, and the various annoyed people in the early parts' comments, is just kinda embarrassing and disappointing to see, nowadays. Don't let the haters get to you, Past Ulti, some of them really had no idea what they wanted out of writing.
In retrospect, now that I'm more experienced as a writer, I can't help but be amused by how disliked the idea was, as if a cliché was some sort of dirty word or concept. Anything that's seen as "I know this from someplace" is, like, immediately declared unoriginal and thus not worth one's time. Meanwhile, I'm just sitting here going "yes, good, use a common trope and utilize it to explore your characters, Past Ulti. this is effective and you're starting to get how to write better, finally."
Like, I understand the wariness of a common idea, but clichés are clichés for a reason. Tried-and-true storytelling methods and ideas and premises are effective, and they help the more original parts of a story stand out more. A basic idea like this isn't a detriment when it's being used to explore the cast and how some of them tick, while being an otherwise simple and fun adventure to go on.
Some of the capitulation and degradation seen in my 2013 self, and the various annoyed people in the early parts' comments, is just kinda embarrassing and disappointing to see, nowadays. Don't let the haters get to you, Past Ulti, some of them really had no idea what they wanted out of writing.
Original Author's Comment:
04/22/13
Vezo's using the tools at his disposal to achieve his victory.
Vezo's using the tools at his disposal to achieve his victory.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
04/22/13
Wheeee, the clones are aware of my opinions!
contradiction123
04/22/13
Never knew Vezo was genre saavy.
MecanicalCH
04/22/13
Vezo archived new leve....*Bricked by Vezo*
Luigi_96
04/22/13
Merrrp!
BattleStarX
04/22/13
*ahem* Squish.
Tygah
04/23/13
I can't wait to see Saia's evil clone! :D
Blue Kirby the l33t
04/23/13
Ultimate Yoshi: LOL. LOL I SAY. LOL.
Knightkirby
04/23/13
vezo means it literally, evil vezo.
guestuser
04/23/13
Jarkes: Well, now that you've said that, she must be evil. But now that I've said this, she probably won't be, so she is. Or is she?
I broke my brain again!
guestuser
04/23/13
Jarkes: I know. When was the last time he kicked that much @$$?!
guestuser
04/23/13
I'm really excited to see Shat'l's clone!
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
the original and the copies have to be squished by a living block.
04/22/13
Wheeee, the clones are aware of my opinions!
contradiction123
04/22/13
Never knew Vezo was genre saavy.
MecanicalCH
04/22/13
Vezo archived new leve....*Bricked by Vezo*
Luigi_96
04/22/13
Merrrp!
BattleStarX
04/22/13
*ahem* Squish.
Tygah
04/23/13
I can't wait to see Saia's evil clone! :D
Blue Kirby the l33t
04/23/13
Ultimate Yoshi: LOL. LOL I SAY. LOL.
Knightkirby
04/23/13
vezo means it literally, evil vezo.
guestuser
04/23/13
Jarkes: Well, now that you've said that, she must be evil. But now that I've said this, she probably won't be, so she is. Or is she?
I broke my brain again!
guestuser
04/23/13
Jarkes: I know. When was the last time he kicked that much @$$?!
guestuser
04/23/13
I'm really excited to see Shat'l's clone!
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
the original and the copies have to be squished by a living block.
Part 13
Ulti's Notes:
Because the background here was already white by default, I had no idea how to handle it cloning Shat'l. Thus, I came up with a dumb idea of a 'dreamscape' for them to fight, where they basically have fallen asleep and are duking it out in a shared dream where they can make anything happen.
I pretty quickly stopped showing these two fighting because I had less than zero ideas of how to actually represent that, and so Shat'l once again becomes a big detriment to the storytelling and one of the less-good aspects of this particular segment.
I pretty quickly stopped showing these two fighting because I had less than zero ideas of how to actually represent that, and so Shat'l once again becomes a big detriment to the storytelling and one of the less-good aspects of this particular segment.
Original Author's Comment:
04/24/13
That last panel is what happens when one too many filters is applied to this background.
That last panel is what happens when one too many filters is applied to this background.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkMario1000
04/24/13
Shat'l, swim away from the…
That's quite the shade of white…ironically…
SkyyKirby44
04/24/13
DarkMario1000: That it is...
guestuser
04/24/13
Shat'l freaking out? That's new.
Luigi_96
04/24/13
This is the most dull, uncolorful page you've ever made... the only real color is blue!
guestuser
04/24/13
Luigi_96: Black and white aren't even colors; They are shades.
Gigi19972010
04/24/13
I would think he would know that future predictions aren't always the actual future that ends up coming...
BattleStarX
04/24/13
I love this page, so few colors hanging around to mess with my eyes.
lstaff4
04/24/13
DISTORTION
MecanicalCH
04/24/13
alright who was the funny that put my screen in white and black!?
guestuser
04/25/13
Um... UY?
I mean... if it isn't too much trouble... could you maybe... update Yoshi and Kirby, please?
I mean, I don't want to be a burden... But it HAS been about half a year...
And that's longer than the usual cliffhanger... I just wanna see your next comic. I like your comics.
meta-eggplant
04/25/13
@NuclearKitten:
I agree! I really liked the comic until it stopped updating.
Omega Kirby
04/26/13
@Stardust: Oh really? Because I was under the impression grey was a shade of white and black, so therefore grey is a shade of a shade!
Koopa1018
05/21/13
What are white and black shades of, then?
guestuser
05/02/19
Meerp
04/24/13
Shat'l, swim away from the…
That's quite the shade of white…ironically…
SkyyKirby44
04/24/13
DarkMario1000: That it is...
guestuser
04/24/13
Shat'l freaking out? That's new.
Luigi_96
04/24/13
This is the most dull, uncolorful page you've ever made... the only real color is blue!
guestuser
04/24/13
Luigi_96: Black and white aren't even colors; They are shades.
Gigi19972010
04/24/13
I would think he would know that future predictions aren't always the actual future that ends up coming...
BattleStarX
04/24/13
I love this page, so few colors hanging around to mess with my eyes.
lstaff4
04/24/13
DISTORTION
MecanicalCH
04/24/13
alright who was the funny that put my screen in white and black!?
guestuser
04/25/13
Um... UY?
I mean... if it isn't too much trouble... could you maybe... update Yoshi and Kirby, please?
I mean, I don't want to be a burden... But it HAS been about half a year...
And that's longer than the usual cliffhanger... I just wanna see your next comic. I like your comics.
meta-eggplant
04/25/13
@NuclearKitten:
I agree! I really liked the comic until it stopped updating.
Omega Kirby
04/26/13
@Stardust: Oh really? Because I was under the impression grey was a shade of white and black, so therefore grey is a shade of a shade!
Koopa1018
05/21/13
What are white and black shades of, then?
guestuser
05/02/19
Meerp
Part 14
Original Author's Comment:
04/26/13
In the words of Keito, darn psychics.
Shat'l's only able to do that Kabuki beam because he is in a dreamscape currently. Will explain what the dreamscape is more in the future when Shat'l isn't talking to himself and thus can read his own mind and have the conversation in pieces.
In the words of Keito, darn psychics.
Shat'l's only able to do that Kabuki beam because he is in a dreamscape currently. Will explain what the dreamscape is more in the future when Shat'l isn't talking to himself and thus can read his own mind and have the conversation in pieces.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
04/26/13
Guess my own guesses were quite right~
Mint612
04/26/13
Dang it clone!Stop interrupting!
MecanicalCH
04/26/13
who turned my Screen to white and black...its not funny...
Tygah
04/26/13
The evil clone should have seen that blast coming, haha
guestuser
04/26/13
Ultimate Yoshi: ...CAN WE PLEASE JUST HAVE THE REVEAL FOR THE VILLIAN, NOW?! Honestly, if this arsewipe is going to all this trouble just to separate them, he should've just sent Talzo and his merry band of morons after 'em! ...Sorry 'bout that...angst got the better of me. Continue testing! *Poker face*
The Bomb Master
04/26/13
I'M A FIRIN MAH LAZOR,BAH!
Ultimate Yoshi
04/26/13
Trevor the Hedgehog:
Jarkes:
Wow, I had no idea you guys wanted the comic to end so soon.
Gigi19972010
04/27/13
Ultimate Yoshi:
...How does wanting to know who a unrevealed villain is automatically makes you wanting the comic to end soon?
And if you are going to hold a mystery for so long, its revelation is going to lose its impact on the readers. Mainly because I know this comic won't end soon, and this villain is just so... How can I say... You don't think of him as important, you forget about him then you go "Hey, he exists." then he isn't revealed and you forget about him again. That's how I see it, at least.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/27/13
Gigi19972010: The villain known colloquially to the fans as "mysterious shadow guy" is, as most people guessed already, the main bad guy of the comic. His reveal is SUPPOSED to be secret, he's not going to be revealed anytime soon, heck, to be honest, I only showed him this early because I needed an explanation for how Talzo's gang escaped in Jetting Across The Ice. The villain is supposed to be a surprise when he does show up, the reason I haven't really brought him up since JATI is BECAUSE he's supposed to only be a presence right now, only influencing certain plot elements, and not being an active character. Obviously he's important, he's the freaking main bad guy. And holding off on the answer to a mystery doesn't make it lose its impact, if anything it gains it. Like, compare it to way back when, when Talzo's name was a mystery. Everybody wanted to figure out his name, and the more I held off on it, the more people wanted it. The same logic would apply to this situation.
Jarkes: There are going to be 10 chapters in all. Currently we're almost at the end of chapter 3.
Also, if you prefer those kinds of stories, suffice it to say that Kirby Adventure is not that kind of story. But hey, you can just pretend Talzo is the main villain for now, its not as if the red-eyes villain is doing all that much right now.
Omega Kirby
04/27/13
How do you post huge comics and fairly decent avatars? Because whenever I try to post something halfway decent, it rejects it because the file size is too big!
Gigi19972010
04/27/13
Ultimate Yoshi:
See, you compared two different situations, the only common thing between them is the fact that both were mysteries. The Talzo name thing was about revealing a name, of a character who as on-screen during all the mystery and during only less than one month. The shadow guy is about revealing the whole identity of the main villain of the comic, who is almost never mentioned and during years and years. See the difference? I just don't see the point of holding a mystery for so long, mainly when the character is at least supposed to be very important. Holding the mystery for too long doesn't help with the suspense, it kinda makes the mystery annoying. Note the "too", since I agree that holding the mystery for some time helps with the suspense positively. However, it must be also continuous, something that the fans are ALWAYS wondering about, and since your intention is to not "overuse" the mysterious villain, even though he is the main villain of the comic, the suspense will become annoying for the fans and also kinda pointless, since he isn't mentioned often when I think he should, isn't he the main villain? So, my point is, suspense is good, indeed, but too much suspense, held for so long and not continuously is bad. That's what I tried to say in my last comment.
Omega Kirby:
Host the image on another website, like imageshack.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/27/13
Gigi19972010: Alright, I think I'm understanding your point here. But the thing is, honestly what I've got planned just probably hasn't had the fan reactions that I was thinking of. The mystery villain was supposed to be introduced early on, people would notice him, but then the mystery villain wouldn't show up for a while and the fans would forget about him, which would make his (obviously planned-in-advance) reveal all the more surprising. I think the solution here would just to give the mystery villain a bit more screen time to remind viewers that he exists, and maybe drop a bit of intrigue to keep the mystery fresh.
Fighter Dee
04/27/13
@Trevor the Hedgeog
Gigi19972010
Jarkes
Why do you keep complaining, the comic is his and he seems to already have some parts figured out, revealing the villain would speed it too much, and trust me when a comic goes too fast it end up being boring instead of intriguing, so I recommend, not order, to just enjoy the pages and not think about the MSG right now.
Gigi19972010
04/27/13
Ultimate Yoshi:
Bingo. That's where I was getting at.
Fighter Dee:
Huh, when did I complain? Now criticism means complaining? I'm not like "REVEAL IT ALREADY BECAUSE I WANT AND JUST THAT SINCE I LACK REASONS AND I'M JUST COMPLAINING BECAUSE WHY NOT HEY.". I don't understand your logic.
Luigi_96
04/27/13
Fighter Dee: While it IS his comic, he doesn't make it just so HE can enjoy it. How illogical would that be?
I'm mainly guessing here, but I'm pretty sure he makes it part because he wants to, and part so his fans can enjoy the story. So if the fans dislike something, they have every right to make a suggestion to him.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/27/13
Fighter Dee: The only one who was complaining at all was Trevor The Hedgehog, and he's been acting that way towards the 'mysterious shadow guy' ever since he was introduced. I'm used to it by now.
Omega Kirby
04/28/13
Gigi19972010: Then What do I do?
Gigi19972010
04/29/13
Omega Kirby:
...
You copy and paste the link of the image when you are posting it on SJ, almost like what you do when you are posting something from your own computer?
guestuser
04/29/13
Kabuki Shat'l returns!
Ulti:Also fan art by PurpleChickenPineapple that you probly missed: http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/pb/6/6Np1KSmfIEGE9kHdX7tY2E.gif
Fighter Dee
05/04/13
Gigi19972010: Sorry, I somnetimes skip words when I talk, but all this criticism sometimes get a little boring so I ended up complaining sorry again, but logic is a meaningless word for me.
Luigi_96: Sorry, but I never said it was for himself and I'm almost sure (because being sure for me it seems for the know-it-all) that is part for us, but sometimes keep repeating the same suggestion gets annoying.
Ultimate Yoshi: I will never stop thinking he's annoying. I even remember about him saying that the Helping Hand segment was pointless and for you to go the rest of the plot.
guestuser
11/27/13
Alright evil clone, if this is some fantasy landscape, then can I blast your guts away with a laser? Sweet. Hey, we should do this more often!
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
yay! more battles that no one gets hurt!
guestuser
02/07/16
Isn't that the same blast he used against Etam...?
04/26/13
Guess my own guesses were quite right~
Mint612
04/26/13
Dang it clone!Stop interrupting!
MecanicalCH
04/26/13
who turned my Screen to white and black...its not funny...
Tygah
04/26/13
The evil clone should have seen that blast coming, haha
guestuser
04/26/13
Ultimate Yoshi: ...CAN WE PLEASE JUST HAVE THE REVEAL FOR THE VILLIAN, NOW?! Honestly, if this arsewipe is going to all this trouble just to separate them, he should've just sent Talzo and his merry band of morons after 'em! ...Sorry 'bout that...angst got the better of me. Continue testing! *Poker face*
The Bomb Master
04/26/13
I'M A FIRIN MAH LAZOR,BAH!
Ultimate Yoshi
04/26/13
Trevor the Hedgehog:
Jarkes:
Wow, I had no idea you guys wanted the comic to end so soon.
Gigi19972010
04/27/13
Ultimate Yoshi:
...How does wanting to know who a unrevealed villain is automatically makes you wanting the comic to end soon?
And if you are going to hold a mystery for so long, its revelation is going to lose its impact on the readers. Mainly because I know this comic won't end soon, and this villain is just so... How can I say... You don't think of him as important, you forget about him then you go "Hey, he exists." then he isn't revealed and you forget about him again. That's how I see it, at least.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/27/13
Gigi19972010: The villain known colloquially to the fans as "mysterious shadow guy" is, as most people guessed already, the main bad guy of the comic. His reveal is SUPPOSED to be secret, he's not going to be revealed anytime soon, heck, to be honest, I only showed him this early because I needed an explanation for how Talzo's gang escaped in Jetting Across The Ice. The villain is supposed to be a surprise when he does show up, the reason I haven't really brought him up since JATI is BECAUSE he's supposed to only be a presence right now, only influencing certain plot elements, and not being an active character. Obviously he's important, he's the freaking main bad guy. And holding off on the answer to a mystery doesn't make it lose its impact, if anything it gains it. Like, compare it to way back when, when Talzo's name was a mystery. Everybody wanted to figure out his name, and the more I held off on it, the more people wanted it. The same logic would apply to this situation.
Jarkes: There are going to be 10 chapters in all. Currently we're almost at the end of chapter 3.
Also, if you prefer those kinds of stories, suffice it to say that Kirby Adventure is not that kind of story. But hey, you can just pretend Talzo is the main villain for now, its not as if the red-eyes villain is doing all that much right now.
Omega Kirby
04/27/13
How do you post huge comics and fairly decent avatars? Because whenever I try to post something halfway decent, it rejects it because the file size is too big!
Gigi19972010
04/27/13
Ultimate Yoshi:
See, you compared two different situations, the only common thing between them is the fact that both were mysteries. The Talzo name thing was about revealing a name, of a character who as on-screen during all the mystery and during only less than one month. The shadow guy is about revealing the whole identity of the main villain of the comic, who is almost never mentioned and during years and years. See the difference? I just don't see the point of holding a mystery for so long, mainly when the character is at least supposed to be very important. Holding the mystery for too long doesn't help with the suspense, it kinda makes the mystery annoying. Note the "too", since I agree that holding the mystery for some time helps with the suspense positively. However, it must be also continuous, something that the fans are ALWAYS wondering about, and since your intention is to not "overuse" the mysterious villain, even though he is the main villain of the comic, the suspense will become annoying for the fans and also kinda pointless, since he isn't mentioned often when I think he should, isn't he the main villain? So, my point is, suspense is good, indeed, but too much suspense, held for so long and not continuously is bad. That's what I tried to say in my last comment.
Omega Kirby:
Host the image on another website, like imageshack.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/27/13
Gigi19972010: Alright, I think I'm understanding your point here. But the thing is, honestly what I've got planned just probably hasn't had the fan reactions that I was thinking of. The mystery villain was supposed to be introduced early on, people would notice him, but then the mystery villain wouldn't show up for a while and the fans would forget about him, which would make his (obviously planned-in-advance) reveal all the more surprising. I think the solution here would just to give the mystery villain a bit more screen time to remind viewers that he exists, and maybe drop a bit of intrigue to keep the mystery fresh.
Fighter Dee
04/27/13
@Trevor the Hedgeog
Gigi19972010
Jarkes
Why do you keep complaining, the comic is his and he seems to already have some parts figured out, revealing the villain would speed it too much, and trust me when a comic goes too fast it end up being boring instead of intriguing, so I recommend, not order, to just enjoy the pages and not think about the MSG right now.
Gigi19972010
04/27/13
Ultimate Yoshi:
Bingo. That's where I was getting at.
Fighter Dee:
Huh, when did I complain? Now criticism means complaining? I'm not like "REVEAL IT ALREADY BECAUSE I WANT AND JUST THAT SINCE I LACK REASONS AND I'M JUST COMPLAINING BECAUSE WHY NOT HEY.". I don't understand your logic.
Luigi_96
04/27/13
Fighter Dee: While it IS his comic, he doesn't make it just so HE can enjoy it. How illogical would that be?
I'm mainly guessing here, but I'm pretty sure he makes it part because he wants to, and part so his fans can enjoy the story. So if the fans dislike something, they have every right to make a suggestion to him.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/27/13
Fighter Dee: The only one who was complaining at all was Trevor The Hedgehog, and he's been acting that way towards the 'mysterious shadow guy' ever since he was introduced. I'm used to it by now.
Omega Kirby
04/28/13
Gigi19972010: Then What do I do?
Gigi19972010
04/29/13
Omega Kirby:
...
You copy and paste the link of the image when you are posting it on SJ, almost like what you do when you are posting something from your own computer?
guestuser
04/29/13
Kabuki Shat'l returns!
Ulti:Also fan art by PurpleChickenPineapple that you probly missed: http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/pb/6/6Np1KSmfIEGE9kHdX7tY2E.gif
Fighter Dee
05/04/13
Gigi19972010: Sorry, I somnetimes skip words when I talk, but all this criticism sometimes get a little boring so I ended up complaining sorry again, but logic is a meaningless word for me.
Luigi_96: Sorry, but I never said it was for himself and I'm almost sure (because being sure for me it seems for the know-it-all) that is part for us, but sometimes keep repeating the same suggestion gets annoying.
Ultimate Yoshi: I will never stop thinking he's annoying. I even remember about him saying that the Helping Hand segment was pointless and for you to go the rest of the plot.
guestuser
11/27/13
Alright evil clone, if this is some fantasy landscape, then can I blast your guts away with a laser? Sweet. Hey, we should do this more often!
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
yay! more battles that no one gets hurt!
guestuser
02/07/16
Isn't that the same blast he used against Etam...?
Part 15
Original Author's Comment:
04/27/13
Saia seems to have a good memory, since she can remember what Kibby's coloration was since the first crossover way back when. Though, I haven't exactly mentioned how much time passes between segments.
Saia seems to have a good memory, since she can remember what Kibby's coloration was since the first crossover way back when. Though, I haven't exactly mentioned how much time passes between segments.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
04/27/13
Last panel's dialogue.
What.
BattleStarX
04/27/13
Jarkes: Yup, Kibby's a proper darker purple now-a-days, rather than a more magenta color like he was back in the beginning.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/27/13
BattleStarX: Y'know, I just had a thought.
When my Kirbies are cloned, their clones are a darker coloration, and retain their personality and memories.
What if the reason Kibby's colors became darker was because he was cloned?!?
...Nah, that'd be silly.
Tygah
04/28/13
Questioning whether or not it's healthy? Ooh Saia, you're my favourite! Haha
guestuser
04/28/13
*Patiently waits for the day Shadik is cloned*
DarkMario1000
04/28/13
I wonder how THAT will be pulled off…
Then again, I already have an idea how that'll be pulled off, but it could be the wrong idea anyways!
04/27/13
Last panel's dialogue.
What.
BattleStarX
04/27/13
Jarkes: Yup, Kibby's a proper darker purple now-a-days, rather than a more magenta color like he was back in the beginning.
Ultimate Yoshi
04/27/13
BattleStarX: Y'know, I just had a thought.
When my Kirbies are cloned, their clones are a darker coloration, and retain their personality and memories.
What if the reason Kibby's colors became darker was because he was cloned?!?
...Nah, that'd be silly.
Tygah
04/28/13
Questioning whether or not it's healthy? Ooh Saia, you're my favourite! Haha
guestuser
04/28/13
*Patiently waits for the day Shadik is cloned*
DarkMario1000
04/28/13
I wonder how THAT will be pulled off…
Then again, I already have an idea how that'll be pulled off, but it could be the wrong idea anyways!
Part 16
Ulti's Notes:
This is another enemy from Kirby Mass Attack, since it seems I was on a bit hooked on throwing in references to Mass Attack wherever I could afford to. That game really is getting set up in advance, huh.
It's a Jellifrizz, and it floats around in either water or space and occasionally zaps with electricity, and when destroyed initially, it splits up into smaller Jellifrizz. It's a neat enemy and I enjoyed using one here to punish the two Saias.
It's a Jellifrizz, and it floats around in either water or space and occasionally zaps with electricity, and when destroyed initially, it splits up into smaller Jellifrizz. It's a neat enemy and I enjoyed using one here to punish the two Saias.
Original Author's Comment:
04/28/13
Seems that Not-Saia didn't know that there would be a punishment for dissent like Not-Raize did.
If anyone should learn a lesson from the Kirby series, it should be that if its adorable, its therefore highly dangerous and shouldn't ever be touched. This includes Kirby himself.
Seems that Not-Saia didn't know that there would be a punishment for dissent like Not-Raize did.
If anyone should learn a lesson from the Kirby series, it should be that if its adorable, its therefore highly dangerous and shouldn't ever be touched. This includes Kirby himself.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
04/28/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Unless it's a Waddle Dee. Also Mass Attack sprites much?
Luigi_96
04/28/13
Never trust cuteness.
Djoing
04/28/13
Prediction!
Some of these evil copies will; become regular (maybe even non-evil) characters in the comic!
MecanicalCH
04/28/13
unless you have the powers of Luffy and are a puff ball so electricity does not affect me so WHEEEEEEE i got a mascot! >:D
BattleStarX
04/28/13
Cuteness will get you every time.
If you don't believe me, get a kitten, and just wait...
DarkMario1000
04/28/13
had more of an advantage than Saia.
Omega Kirby
04/29/13
Uuuuurgh! I've made the perfect banner for my new comic, but it's too tall, shrinking it makes it look horrible, any ideas, I already tried hosting it somewhere else, I don't want to scrap it...please help me someone!
EDIT: Oh, and Saia doesn't seem to have been ridded of her benevolence, does she?
guestuser
04/29/13
is there going to be more of the comic??
guestuser
04/30/13
Don't trust cuteness. Not even I can trust my cuteness.
guestuser
04/30/13
You know, I take for granted that this comic still updates...
You have no idea how many comics I've read that stop halfway through with no end, the Ultimate Cliffhanger...
Also, I'm reading Gigi's comic, Kirby times 20, for the first time!
I would say it's pretty low quality, but I have just started it.
Anyway, I hope to someday get a profile and become a regular here!
I love your comic, UY! Keep comicking for everlasting peace!
WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000
05/01/13
Bad squishy! D:
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
zap!
04/28/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Unless it's a Waddle Dee. Also Mass Attack sprites much?
Luigi_96
04/28/13
Never trust cuteness.
Djoing
04/28/13
Prediction!
Some of these evil copies will; become regular (maybe even non-evil) characters in the comic!
MecanicalCH
04/28/13
unless you have the powers of Luffy and are a puff ball so electricity does not affect me so WHEEEEEEE i got a mascot! >:D
BattleStarX
04/28/13
Cuteness will get you every time.
If you don't believe me, get a kitten, and just wait...
DarkMario1000
04/28/13
had more of an advantage than Saia.
Omega Kirby
04/29/13
Uuuuurgh! I've made the perfect banner for my new comic, but it's too tall, shrinking it makes it look horrible, any ideas, I already tried hosting it somewhere else, I don't want to scrap it...please help me someone!
EDIT: Oh, and Saia doesn't seem to have been ridded of her benevolence, does she?
guestuser
04/29/13
is there going to be more of the comic??
guestuser
04/30/13
Don't trust cuteness. Not even I can trust my cuteness.
guestuser
04/30/13
You know, I take for granted that this comic still updates...
You have no idea how many comics I've read that stop halfway through with no end, the Ultimate Cliffhanger...
Also, I'm reading Gigi's comic, Kirby times 20, for the first time!
I would say it's pretty low quality, but I have just started it.
Anyway, I hope to someday get a profile and become a regular here!
I love your comic, UY! Keep comicking for everlasting peace!
WiiKirbyYoshiToast4000
05/01/13
Bad squishy! D:
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
zap!
Part 17
Ulti's Notes:
I really liked the Ninth Doctor era of Doctor Who.
(This is a quote from that show, used for the second time by Keito after first referencing it in Jetting Across the Ice.)
(This is a quote from that show, used for the second time by Keito after first referencing it in Jetting Across the Ice.)
Original Author's Comment:
04/30/13
And you all thought it was just a one-time mention, didn't you?
Don't ask where the bananas came from, cause I wouldn't have an answer for you.
And you all thought it was just a one-time mention, didn't you?
Don't ask where the bananas came from, cause I wouldn't have an answer for you.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
04/30/13
:D YAY! I love this. keep up the good work!
omg bananas :D
Banana + donut = awesomeness
Djoing
04/30/13
Where did the bananas come from?
MecanicalCH
05/01/13
*starts to inhale the comic trying to eat the bananas!*
Luigi_96
05/01/13
Of all the random...
What is this even referring to?
Fusion Kirby
05/01/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Remember, it's a Dreamscape! He could have dreamed them up.
Ultimate Yoshi
05/01/13
Fusion Kirby: Seems there's been a misinterpretation here. Currently, Shat'l's the only one in a dreamscape, the others are just in this unknown landscape right now.
Luigi_96: http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1327180/jetting-across-the-ice-part-39/
BattleStarX
05/01/13
I agree, bananas are very good.
After all, if a Doctor says so, then they MUST be good, right?
Gigi19972010
05/01/13
Ultimate Yoshi:
You never made that clear. I think everyone thought they were all on dreamscape. Also that I never remembered this banana thing.
BTW, rushed page so that all the repetitive cloning of the kirbies can happen before the 400th comic which is also going to be the third anniversary special, or what? :P
Luigi_96
05/01/13
Ultimate Yoshi: I did NOT remember that... I think I need to read through the archive again sometime...
Gigi19972010
05/01/13
Jarkes:
But who would miss the chance to make a milestone comic at the day of an anniversary, mainly when it's purely not planned?
Alienoid
05/01/13
BANANA.
Knightkirby
05/01/13
I was eating a banana when I read this. TRUE STORY.
DarkMario1000
05/01/13
Knightkirby
:P
guestuser
05/01/13
We've been missing him for quite a while now. I wonder how he's doing...
Omega Kirby
05/01/13
The 'unknown bad guy' is almost definitely Wiz, Talzo, or the 'Master' that Talzo was speaking with, as Master told him to get the kirbies on their own, and defeat them individually,
castleofwarriors
05/03/13
"There's a banana grove growing there now. I like bananas. Bananas are good."
"Always take a banana to a party, Rose. Bananas are good."
Omega Kirby
05/04/13
Why???
castleofwarriors
05/23/13
Omega Kirby: !!! It's The Master... You know, from Doctor Who...
guestuser
11/29/13
Doctor Who... Kirbies... Bananas... My brain just fizzled out
1ce_k1d
01/18/14
Knightkirby: It must be a sign!
guestuser
01/19/14
Gigi19972010: Actually I did know it was only Shat'l. But I'm probably not a good example for everybody, cause I tend to see details like that. I believe (I may be wrong) that Not Shat'l mentioned him and Shat'l being in a dreamscape he created.
guestuser
03/22/14
Since no one's going to do it, I will. The shit is bananas: BFLQUSP
ZeypherComix
04/22/14
Eat more bannanas!
guestuser
02/07/16
Maybe the bananas are this room's version of the block and jellyfish? xD
pixlyJolt
09/11/18
Lol?
pixlyJolt
09/11/18
WAIT WTF WHY DID IT PUT LOL
04/30/13
:D YAY! I love this. keep up the good work!
omg bananas :D
Banana + donut = awesomeness
Djoing
04/30/13
Where did the bananas come from?
MecanicalCH
05/01/13
*starts to inhale the comic trying to eat the bananas!*
Luigi_96
05/01/13
Of all the random...
What is this even referring to?
Fusion Kirby
05/01/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Remember, it's a Dreamscape! He could have dreamed them up.
Ultimate Yoshi
05/01/13
Fusion Kirby: Seems there's been a misinterpretation here. Currently, Shat'l's the only one in a dreamscape, the others are just in this unknown landscape right now.
Luigi_96: http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1327180/jetting-across-the-ice-part-39/
BattleStarX
05/01/13
I agree, bananas are very good.
After all, if a Doctor says so, then they MUST be good, right?
Gigi19972010
05/01/13
Ultimate Yoshi:
You never made that clear. I think everyone thought they were all on dreamscape. Also that I never remembered this banana thing.
BTW, rushed page so that all the repetitive cloning of the kirbies can happen before the 400th comic which is also going to be the third anniversary special, or what? :P
Luigi_96
05/01/13
Ultimate Yoshi: I did NOT remember that... I think I need to read through the archive again sometime...
Gigi19972010
05/01/13
Jarkes:
But who would miss the chance to make a milestone comic at the day of an anniversary, mainly when it's purely not planned?
Alienoid
05/01/13
BANANA.
Knightkirby
05/01/13
I was eating a banana when I read this. TRUE STORY.
DarkMario1000
05/01/13
Knightkirby
:P
guestuser
05/01/13
We've been missing him for quite a while now. I wonder how he's doing...
Omega Kirby
05/01/13
The 'unknown bad guy' is almost definitely Wiz, Talzo, or the 'Master' that Talzo was speaking with, as Master told him to get the kirbies on their own, and defeat them individually,
castleofwarriors
05/03/13
"There's a banana grove growing there now. I like bananas. Bananas are good."
"Always take a banana to a party, Rose. Bananas are good."
Omega Kirby
05/04/13
Why???
castleofwarriors
05/23/13
Omega Kirby: !!! It's The Master... You know, from Doctor Who...
guestuser
11/29/13
Doctor Who... Kirbies... Bananas... My brain just fizzled out
1ce_k1d
01/18/14
Knightkirby: It must be a sign!
guestuser
01/19/14
Gigi19972010: Actually I did know it was only Shat'l. But I'm probably not a good example for everybody, cause I tend to see details like that. I believe (I may be wrong) that Not Shat'l mentioned him and Shat'l being in a dreamscape he created.
guestuser
03/22/14
Since no one's going to do it, I will. The shit is bananas: BFLQUSP
ZeypherComix
04/22/14
Eat more bannanas!
guestuser
02/07/16
Maybe the bananas are this room's version of the block and jellyfish? xD
pixlyJolt
09/11/18
Lol?
pixlyJolt
09/11/18
WAIT WTF WHY DID IT PUT LOL
Part 18
Original Author's Comment:
05/01/13
I got this joke after rewatching the asdfmovies.
I got this joke after rewatching the asdfmovies.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Fighter Dee
05/01/13
Yeah perfect ditraction ¬¬
MecanicalCH
05/01/13
my bananas... T.T
guestuser
05/02/13
Um... they just ate, dont they need to wait for there food to digest before fighting? Otherwise, those bananas are coming back the way they'd entered...
Alienoid
05/02/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Oh, so you diaaww you stole my lungs.
Knightkirby
05/02/13
HOW HE DO SNEAK ATTACK!? HE NOT NINJA.
BattleStarX
05/02/13
See, it's there I would've pulled a reverse and actually have something fall on top of the copy, but that's just me. I like messin' with peoples' (and kirbies') minds.
Luigi_96
05/02/13
Jarkes: That's NOT a Squeak Squad sprite... Those are exactly like the GBA games' style. That's definitely a KSSU sprite.
Ultimate Yoshi
05/02/13
Jarkes: You definitely need your eyes checked. As the author, I can 100% confirm that you're wrong. Not-Keito is KSSU styled. The only Squeak Squad sprites I've used in this comic are the Squeaker in Such An Odd Eight, Prism Plains in Tear In The Fabric, and Gao Gao in To The Tower. If you count him, Ignus Unis as well, though Burning wasn't in Squeak Squad, it was still the same style.
Luigi_96
05/02/13
Jarkes: How can you say that with the 5th panel existing? Zoom in and compare them.
guestuser
05/02/13
The next comic will be 400!
I`m shocked no one pointed that out before me.
Stardustdragon
05/02/13
I finally got around to making a Smack Jeeves account!
Expect comments more often!
DarkMario1000
05/03/13
@Guest Well, a kirby's stomach is just a void…an endless void…With how much Kirby swallows in the game, you'd think he'd get tired and become lethargic due to consumption. *shrugs*
Actually, @Shy Hacks™, somebody DID already point it out.
SkyraTwilight812
05/05/13
I have an idea for what to call the clones. In order of appearance:
Oxak
Ybrik
Ayiac
Ezier
Ozev
L'tahs
Aias
Otiek
I know... not very creative. Oh well. QUICK, SOMEONE GET MOAR BANNANAS!
Sapar
05/25/13
SkyraTwilight812: Ezier is incorrect, it should be Eziar.
Otherwise, good idea.
05/01/13
Yeah perfect ditraction ¬¬
MecanicalCH
05/01/13
my bananas... T.T
guestuser
05/02/13
Um... they just ate, dont they need to wait for there food to digest before fighting? Otherwise, those bananas are coming back the way they'd entered...
Alienoid
05/02/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Oh, so you diaaww you stole my lungs.
Knightkirby
05/02/13
HOW HE DO SNEAK ATTACK!? HE NOT NINJA.
BattleStarX
05/02/13
See, it's there I would've pulled a reverse and actually have something fall on top of the copy, but that's just me. I like messin' with peoples' (and kirbies') minds.
Luigi_96
05/02/13
Jarkes: That's NOT a Squeak Squad sprite... Those are exactly like the GBA games' style. That's definitely a KSSU sprite.
Ultimate Yoshi
05/02/13
Jarkes: You definitely need your eyes checked. As the author, I can 100% confirm that you're wrong. Not-Keito is KSSU styled. The only Squeak Squad sprites I've used in this comic are the Squeaker in Such An Odd Eight, Prism Plains in Tear In The Fabric, and Gao Gao in To The Tower. If you count him, Ignus Unis as well, though Burning wasn't in Squeak Squad, it was still the same style.
Luigi_96
05/02/13
Jarkes: How can you say that with the 5th panel existing? Zoom in and compare them.
guestuser
05/02/13
The next comic will be 400!
I`m shocked no one pointed that out before me.
Stardustdragon
05/02/13
I finally got around to making a Smack Jeeves account!
Expect comments more often!
DarkMario1000
05/03/13
@Guest Well, a kirby's stomach is just a void…an endless void…With how much Kirby swallows in the game, you'd think he'd get tired and become lethargic due to consumption. *shrugs*
Actually, @Shy Hacks™, somebody DID already point it out.
SkyraTwilight812
05/05/13
I have an idea for what to call the clones. In order of appearance:
Oxak
Ybrik
Ayiac
Ezier
Ozev
L'tahs
Aias
Otiek
I know... not very creative. Oh well. QUICK, SOMEONE GET MOAR BANNANAS!
Sapar
05/25/13
SkyraTwilight812: Ezier is incorrect, it should be Eziar.
Otherwise, good idea.
3-Year Anniversary Bonus
Ulti's Notes:
One last interruption for Master of Puppets, and then we'll get back on track for the story. The 2-pages-per-Squadmember set-up I had been going with actually lined up pretty nicely to reach the 400th page like this.
Original Author's Comment:
05/02/13
Nothing to be said here that hasn't already been said up above.
Nothing to be said here that hasn't already been said up above.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
meta-eggplant
05/03/13
This is officially the biggest milestone in the comic so far.
MecanicalCH
05/03/13
Ultimate Yoshi: HAPPY 400th and 3 year comic! :D :D :D :D!!!
1ce_k1d
05/03/13
I love Caiya's one.
Alienoid
05/03/13
Good job, Ulti.
Keep up the good work.
DarkNut255
05/03/13
Shadik's awesome. The rest are funny too. However, if I was Caiya, I'd make sure to eat the planet (from April Foolery) is smaller bites. :P
Luigi_96
05/03/13
Wow, that's incredible, Ulti. I was amazed when The Dee Army reached 1 year, and 50 comics on Monday's update... I can't imagine this feeling. ^_^
Knightkirby
05/03/13
Congrats Ulti!
lstaff4
05/03/13
Saia: BORING
Raize: Epicness!!!
Vezo: Bahaha
Caiya: I'm hungry now
Shadik: DO IT, DO IT NAO.
Kaxo: YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Keito: FACE SQUISH!
Shat'll: Me wanty.
Kirby: Messing With Time?
Ulti: Happy Anniversary Kirby Adventure!
Tygah
05/03/13
*holds up a cake with a 300 on it* Enjoy ^^
BattleStarX
05/03/13
I will remember not to tell Kaaby about that, Keito. I can't guarantee that she wouldn't make a Universe-Crossing device and come over to kick your sorry hide.
After all, I'm not evil like that.
Gigi19972010
05/03/13
ZAN COME BACK HERE NAO.
And looks like Shadik and Grace will be best friends forever.
Well, anyway, Happy 3rd anniversary and 400 comics!
Falcon_Pawnch75
05/03/13
Jarkes I'm only giving you one warning
GET OFF MY HEAD
Fusion Kirby
05/03/13
JET GET OFF OF MAH HEAD OR YOU FACE MULTIPLE STABBINGS.
paddyb02
05/03/13
Perhaps you could do this with some more characters for your 4th anniversary?
DarkMario1000
05/04/13
And I've been here since the beginning. Amazing the nostalgia I got from #400.
Keep on, UY…keep on…
Another note, I see Kirby, Kaxo, and Shadik as, physically, the stronger members members of the KAS…
Of course, IMO
Divine Knight
05/04/13
Happy Anniversary!
Omega Kirby
05/06/13
I thought that most of them were really quite funny I thought Saia's was the funniest, but for some reason, most of the kirbies didn't really take the one wish thing seriously!
Omega Kirby
05/06/13
...
Omega Kirby
05/06/13
Come on Ulti! If you're not going to recolour my sprite sheet, could you AT LEAST tell me what website you use to recolour your sprites?!?!
guestuser
05/07/13
Oh, foo! I missed the party. By the way, Gigi, neat new avatar.
Fusion Kirby
05/14/13
Omega Kirby: He probably recolors them himself, using Microsoft Paint/ Paint.Net/ whatever the heck program he uses.
Omega Kirby
05/18/13
Never mind, I have found an awesome on now which recolors every sprite on the sheets! All I have to do, is put the palette and sheet in, all the same, the palette on the spriters' resource has got a few holes in it, I'd like to know how he can recolor the misc sprites on the Kirby sprites sheet!
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
the best way to defeat your opponent is to have Shadik eat it. (unless it is bad for his health...)
guestuser
01/04/14
20 times kirby it's there and the dream adventure.
161616
01/27/14
That last panel has too many things. This deserves a counting.
8 clones
1 boss from another game
17 helpers
3 authors(Unless you count Gigi)
11 cameos
2 contest winners
2 gordos
15 villains
1 food item
15 green characters
7 red characters
10 blue characters
13 orange/yellow characters
15 purple/pink characters
and that's all I want to count now.
Ultizeta
07/27/17
The problem with revamping old pages is that it also requires revamping pages that reuse old pages' assets. I had to re-recolor the KDA cast and fix up the pages that reference Shadik's thoughts in Average Days.
05/03/13
This is officially the biggest milestone in the comic so far.
MecanicalCH
05/03/13
Ultimate Yoshi: HAPPY 400th and 3 year comic! :D :D :D :D!!!
1ce_k1d
05/03/13
I love Caiya's one.
Alienoid
05/03/13
Good job, Ulti.
Keep up the good work.
DarkNut255
05/03/13
Shadik's awesome. The rest are funny too. However, if I was Caiya, I'd make sure to eat the planet (from April Foolery) is smaller bites. :P
Luigi_96
05/03/13
Wow, that's incredible, Ulti. I was amazed when The Dee Army reached 1 year, and 50 comics on Monday's update... I can't imagine this feeling. ^_^
Knightkirby
05/03/13
Congrats Ulti!
lstaff4
05/03/13
Saia: BORING
Raize: Epicness!!!
Vezo: Bahaha
Caiya: I'm hungry now
Shadik: DO IT, DO IT NAO.
Kaxo: YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Keito: FACE SQUISH!
Shat'll: Me wanty.
Kirby: Messing With Time?
Ulti: Happy Anniversary Kirby Adventure!
Tygah
05/03/13
*holds up a cake with a 300 on it* Enjoy ^^
BattleStarX
05/03/13
I will remember not to tell Kaaby about that, Keito. I can't guarantee that she wouldn't make a Universe-Crossing device and come over to kick your sorry hide.
After all, I'm not evil like that.
Gigi19972010
05/03/13
ZAN COME BACK HERE NAO.
And looks like Shadik and Grace will be best friends forever.
Well, anyway, Happy 3rd anniversary and 400 comics!
Falcon_Pawnch75
05/03/13
Jarkes I'm only giving you one warning
GET OFF MY HEAD
Fusion Kirby
05/03/13
JET GET OFF OF MAH HEAD OR YOU FACE MULTIPLE STABBINGS.
paddyb02
05/03/13
Perhaps you could do this with some more characters for your 4th anniversary?
DarkMario1000
05/04/13
And I've been here since the beginning. Amazing the nostalgia I got from #400.
Keep on, UY…keep on…
Another note, I see Kirby, Kaxo, and Shadik as, physically, the stronger members members of the KAS…
Of course, IMO
Divine Knight
05/04/13
Happy Anniversary!
Omega Kirby
05/06/13
I thought that most of them were really quite funny I thought Saia's was the funniest, but for some reason, most of the kirbies didn't really take the one wish thing seriously!
Omega Kirby
05/06/13
...
Omega Kirby
05/06/13
Come on Ulti! If you're not going to recolour my sprite sheet, could you AT LEAST tell me what website you use to recolour your sprites?!?!
guestuser
05/07/13
Oh, foo! I missed the party. By the way, Gigi, neat new avatar.
Fusion Kirby
05/14/13
Omega Kirby: He probably recolors them himself, using Microsoft Paint/ Paint.Net/ whatever the heck program he uses.
Omega Kirby
05/18/13
Never mind, I have found an awesome on now which recolors every sprite on the sheets! All I have to do, is put the palette and sheet in, all the same, the palette on the spriters' resource has got a few holes in it, I'd like to know how he can recolor the misc sprites on the Kirby sprites sheet!
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
the best way to defeat your opponent is to have Shadik eat it. (unless it is bad for his health...)
guestuser
01/04/14
20 times kirby it's there and the dream adventure.
161616
01/27/14
That last panel has too many things. This deserves a counting.
8 clones
1 boss from another game
17 helpers
3 authors(Unless you count Gigi)
11 cameos
2 contest winners
2 gordos
15 villains
1 food item
15 green characters
7 red characters
10 blue characters
13 orange/yellow characters
15 purple/pink characters
and that's all I want to count now.
Ultizeta
07/27/17
The problem with revamping old pages is that it also requires revamping pages that reuse old pages' assets. I had to re-recolor the KDA cast and fix up the pages that reference Shadik's thoughts in Average Days.
Part 19
Ulti's Notes:
One could, if they desired, split Master of Puppets up into 4 main sections. If the first 18 parts were one section, introducing all of the clones in their own pages, this next section is the clone battles and interactions. I didn't always have the best attention span in terms of showcasing the clones with an equal amount of screentime, but I think some clones just lent themselves better to interactions than others.
Original Author's Comment:
05/06/13
Not-Caiya's theory is my only explanation I'll ever give for this.
Not-Caiya's theory is my only explanation I'll ever give for this.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Plazem
05/06/13
I was right! :D
guestuser
05/07/13
Jarkes: What does that have to do with the comic?
BattleStarX
05/07/13
The color should've given it away? You color-blind hating copy cat. >:O
I should sic Kexas on you.
Luigi_96
05/07/13
And suddenly an ice kirby can use spark.
Ninnco
05/07/13
Caiya's face last panel xD
guestuser
05/07/13
OMG, i love these comics :D I NEED THE NEXT PART...
Omega Kirby
05/07/13
BattleStarX: You're colour-blind? How do you do all the different colour kirbies in your comic?
Knightkirby
05/07/13
Sooooooooo... If Caiya gets that orb, will there be 2 spark orbs?
guestuser
05/08/13
Knightkirby
My theory is that the spark orb was stolen from a nearby area, meaning there is only one spark orb.
For your theory to work, the orb would have to be a copy of the spark orb, which it was just stated that it could not copy.
guestuser
05/09/13
Why is it green when the spark ability in RTD is BLUE!?
(nooffenseplazy)
guestuser
05/09/13
Y U NO DO SHADIK
Koopa1018
05/21/13
That's just one game. In all/most of the rest, it's green.
161616
12/17/13
I thought it was the life orb...
Syogren
03/05/14
It's not a dead giveaway if you're using Pokemon logic instead of Kirby logic! Then it would be grass. But why would you be using Pokemon logic in a Kirby comic? That wouldn't make sense...
If you're using Kirby logic, then yeah, dead giveaway.
Extremmefan
07/27/14
So, if Spark (thunder-type) is green, than sky is yellow! and life is......?
guestuser
05/21/16
Extremmefan:BLACKISH BLACKY BLACK BLACK.
05/06/13
I was right! :D
guestuser
05/07/13
Jarkes: What does that have to do with the comic?
BattleStarX
05/07/13
The color should've given it away? You color-blind hating copy cat. >:O
I should sic Kexas on you.
Luigi_96
05/07/13
And suddenly an ice kirby can use spark.
Ninnco
05/07/13
Caiya's face last panel xD
guestuser
05/07/13
OMG, i love these comics :D I NEED THE NEXT PART...
Omega Kirby
05/07/13
BattleStarX: You're colour-blind? How do you do all the different colour kirbies in your comic?
Knightkirby
05/07/13
Sooooooooo... If Caiya gets that orb, will there be 2 spark orbs?
guestuser
05/08/13
Knightkirby
My theory is that the spark orb was stolen from a nearby area, meaning there is only one spark orb.
For your theory to work, the orb would have to be a copy of the spark orb, which it was just stated that it could not copy.
guestuser
05/09/13
Why is it green when the spark ability in RTD is BLUE!?
(nooffenseplazy)
guestuser
05/09/13
Y U NO DO SHADIK
Koopa1018
05/21/13
That's just one game. In all/most of the rest, it's green.
161616
12/17/13
I thought it was the life orb...
Syogren
03/05/14
It's not a dead giveaway if you're using Pokemon logic instead of Kirby logic! Then it would be grass. But why would you be using Pokemon logic in a Kirby comic? That wouldn't make sense...
If you're using Kirby logic, then yeah, dead giveaway.
Extremmefan
07/27/14
So, if Spark (thunder-type) is green, than sky is yellow! and life is......?
guestuser
05/21/16
Extremmefan:BLACKISH BLACKY BLACK BLACK.
Part 20
Ulti's Notes:
Honestly, I've always wondered what it would be like to play a competitive game against myself. I've thought about it a lot before in video game contexts, and Raize here let me live a bit through himself.
Original Author's Comment:
05/08/13
This is a very Irish colored comic.
This is a very Irish colored comic.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
DarkNut255
05/08/13
Vezo, MMPHHH is a common language. Everyone can understand it.
Gigi19972010
05/08/13
They play without looking at the game...?
Luigi_96
05/08/13
Luck of the Irish, perhaps? .3.
contradiction123
05/08/13
Gigi19972010: Maybe it's because since they share memories, they can't look at the board otherwise it wou--
wait that wouldn't work nvm
guestuser
05/09/13
What, then, after the puppet loses Battleship? What then!?
WHAT!?
THEN?!
guestuser
05/09/13
@Kirbylubber well it could be checkers or tic tac toe
guestuser
05/10/13
They could play a round of monopoly.
By the time someone wins they will be way too old to fight.
guestuser
05/10/13
ORANGE IS PYRO.
Wacko79
05/10/13
Where did you get the sprites? I want to make a Kirby comic.
DarkMario1000
05/11/13
Wacko79
Google® works wonders.
Omega Kirby
05/11/13
Can I please not have Kaxo sprites!!! I'm making a comic, and I don't have a kirby character with the exact same look,
guestuser
05/13/13
Omega Kirby: Why do you need the exact Kaxo sprites? Just take Kirby, turn him red, and call it original.
Omega Kirby
05/13/13
@Stardust: Fine! I've already recoloured a kirby to look almost the same as Kaxo anyway!
Koopa1018
05/21/13
Vezo is awesome now.
guestuser
05/05/14
Ultimate Yoshi: XD IRISH COLOURED
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Raize likes to fight peacefully, apparently.
05/08/13
Vezo, MMPHHH is a common language. Everyone can understand it.
Gigi19972010
05/08/13
They play without looking at the game...?
Luigi_96
05/08/13
Luck of the Irish, perhaps? .3.
contradiction123
05/08/13
Gigi19972010: Maybe it's because since they share memories, they can't look at the board otherwise it wou--
wait that wouldn't work nvm
guestuser
05/09/13
What, then, after the puppet loses Battleship? What then!?
WHAT!?
THEN?!
guestuser
05/09/13
@Kirbylubber well it could be checkers or tic tac toe
guestuser
05/10/13
They could play a round of monopoly.
By the time someone wins they will be way too old to fight.
guestuser
05/10/13
ORANGE IS PYRO.
Wacko79
05/10/13
Where did you get the sprites? I want to make a Kirby comic.
DarkMario1000
05/11/13
Wacko79
Google® works wonders.
Omega Kirby
05/11/13
Can I please not have Kaxo sprites!!! I'm making a comic, and I don't have a kirby character with the exact same look,
guestuser
05/13/13
Omega Kirby: Why do you need the exact Kaxo sprites? Just take Kirby, turn him red, and call it original.
Omega Kirby
05/13/13
@Stardust: Fine! I've already recoloured a kirby to look almost the same as Kaxo anyway!
Koopa1018
05/21/13
Vezo is awesome now.
guestuser
05/05/14
Ultimate Yoshi: XD IRISH COLOURED
TheJGamer
01/28/17
Raize likes to fight peacefully, apparently.
Part 21
Ulti's Notes:
"hey let me infodump onto you about stuff you already know about yourself"
My solution to trying to get information about Kaxo into the field was so rushed and awkward, I really didn't have any better ideas than having Kaxo's clone just monologue about Kaxo TO Kaxo. It's kind of embarrassing, really.
Looking back, this would've at least been a better infodump had it been told by Not-Kaxo to the other Squadmembers, thus revealing to them Kaxo's justifications about how and why he picks on people like Vezo. But alas, hindsight truly is 20/20.
The actual justification itself, though, is one that I do like a lot. Kaxo being a dick to others wasn't particularly consistent, so to me it called into question what the difference was, and the answer I came up with was a matter of respect. As a result, I liked the idea that the reason why he bullies others, particularly Vezo, is out of an unspoken hidden desire to see weaklings prove themselves and become more capable. A form of tough love, if you will.
Obviously, that idea was completely incompatible with the Kaxo that Gigi wrote in the crossover, but instead of this dumb clone justification, I should've probably tried to come up with some other way Kaxo wouldn't have liked Raven. Maybe having him think Larry wasn't serious about killing Raven, and also feeling like Raven needed to be pushed into standing up for herself (or maybe I could've just said he really didn't like artists, "they need to get a real job" or something silly like that).
I don't think I was even remotely entertaining that train of thought, so caught up in the idea of "this is wrong" that I just couldn't fathom a way I could justify it, instead of... actually trying to properly justify it. The clone route was the easy way out, and I massively regret not trying harder, and not just because of the debacle it created in the comments and how I upset Gigi.
My solution to trying to get information about Kaxo into the field was so rushed and awkward, I really didn't have any better ideas than having Kaxo's clone just monologue about Kaxo TO Kaxo. It's kind of embarrassing, really.
Looking back, this would've at least been a better infodump had it been told by Not-Kaxo to the other Squadmembers, thus revealing to them Kaxo's justifications about how and why he picks on people like Vezo. But alas, hindsight truly is 20/20.
The actual justification itself, though, is one that I do like a lot. Kaxo being a dick to others wasn't particularly consistent, so to me it called into question what the difference was, and the answer I came up with was a matter of respect. As a result, I liked the idea that the reason why he bullies others, particularly Vezo, is out of an unspoken hidden desire to see weaklings prove themselves and become more capable. A form of tough love, if you will.
Obviously, that idea was completely incompatible with the Kaxo that Gigi wrote in the crossover, but instead of this dumb clone justification, I should've probably tried to come up with some other way Kaxo wouldn't have liked Raven. Maybe having him think Larry wasn't serious about killing Raven, and also feeling like Raven needed to be pushed into standing up for herself (or maybe I could've just said he really didn't like artists, "they need to get a real job" or something silly like that).
I don't think I was even remotely entertaining that train of thought, so caught up in the idea of "this is wrong" that I just couldn't fathom a way I could justify it, instead of... actually trying to properly justify it. The clone route was the easy way out, and I massively regret not trying harder, and not just because of the debacle it created in the comments and how I upset Gigi.
Original Author's Comment:
05/20/13
If this doesn't clear up why Kaxo had characterization issues in the crossover, then I honestly don't know what ever will.
I'm contemplating starting a new 'comic' on Smack Jeeves where I do in-depth reviews of comics that you guys want me to take a look at. What do you guys think of this idea?
If this doesn't clear up why Kaxo had characterization issues in the crossover, then I honestly don't know what ever will.
I'm contemplating starting a new 'comic' on Smack Jeeves where I do in-depth reviews of comics that you guys want me to take a look at. What do you guys think of this idea?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Gigi19972010
05/20/13
Why no flashbacky-greyness on panel 2, I wonder?
And I'm looking forward to see how your new comic turns out.
Luigi_96
05/20/13
Whatta Moron.
Also, it's up to you of course. I'm picturing very harsh reviews though.
Ultimate Yoshi
05/20/13
Gigi19972010: When I recreate crossover panels for use on my side, I generally don't grayscale them, even if they're flashbacks. This happened in From Dream Adventures as well, in two different comics.
BattleStarX
05/20/13
I generally think it's not a smart idea to turn one's back on a pyromaniac.
Dare I ask you to review my comic? Not that I'll likely change much outside of the changes I'm already making, but hey, I ask my good friend about her opinion of my art, so asking a fellow sprite-comic author who I hold in high regard seems to be along those lines.
Syogren
05/20/13
Oh. I suddenly respect Kaxo now.
DarkMario1000
05/21/13
will never die!!! MWEHEHEHEHEHEHEHAAHAHAHAHA!
Koopa1018
05/21/13
Sounds good.
05/20/13
Why no flashbacky-greyness on panel 2, I wonder?
And I'm looking forward to see how your new comic turns out.
Luigi_96
05/20/13
Whatta Moron.
Also, it's up to you of course. I'm picturing very harsh reviews though.
Ultimate Yoshi
05/20/13
Gigi19972010: When I recreate crossover panels for use on my side, I generally don't grayscale them, even if they're flashbacks. This happened in From Dream Adventures as well, in two different comics.
BattleStarX
05/20/13
I generally think it's not a smart idea to turn one's back on a pyromaniac.
Dare I ask you to review my comic? Not that I'll likely change much outside of the changes I'm already making, but hey, I ask my good friend about her opinion of my art, so asking a fellow sprite-comic author who I hold in high regard seems to be along those lines.
Syogren
05/20/13
Oh. I suddenly respect Kaxo now.
DarkMario1000
05/21/13
will never die!!! MWEHEHEHEHEHEHEHAAHAHAHAHA!
Koopa1018
05/21/13
Sounds good.
Part 22
Ulti's Notes:
The darker Not-Shadik is nearly indiscernable from just a black silhouette, it's a bit awkward. It might've been funny if I made Shadik's clone lighter-colored instead, but I didn't ever think of that until just now writing this in 2024, so... oops lol
Original Author's Comment:
05/23/13
Keito sure is crafty.
Keito sure is crafty.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
05/23/13
YEEEEAAAH FIRST COMMENT!!!
... also, that was unexpected.
Djoing
05/23/13
I bet that Keito planned that.
MecanicalCH
05/23/13
Shadik fight! can we see it complete!? PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE??????? :D
Knightkirby
05/23/13
Watch shadik and his clone hit fake keito from behind.
Sapar
05/23/13
Yeah.. now that I think about it, I never really thought about Shadik's encounter.
Guess dialogue would be pretty useless in that situation.
DarkNut255
05/23/13
Ulti, you forgot a word after sneak attack! And you read Order of the Stick! (To be honest, your comic is probably too family-friendly (outside of a few swears, one in this very comic) to say it.)
guestuser
05/23/13
that when you say what you think should happen next, it makes Ulti less likely to use it?
Omega Kirby
05/23/13
Ulti appeared in the comic and a clone of him appeared
Syogren
05/23/13
The humor in this comic is unmatched.
And by that I mean it's on par with most of the comics I have on fav--*bricked*
guestuser
05/24/13
Yeah, but what if Etam comes back?
Sapar
05/24/13
@Hi(:: Etam wouldn't come back in this situation, because he isn't truly evil. Sure, he's a troublemaker, but he did all that stuff to improve the comic. Ulti actually says that at the end of the segment. Trying to fight, maybe even KILL, Ulti is just not in his personality.
DarkMario1000
05/24/13
Jarkes
Not-Keito surely isn't crafty…
Good thing he's not second-in-command.
Side note: 1st panel has a mistake.
guestuser
05/25/13
An extra comma here or there isn't THAT bad. It's still a little hard to see the problem, even though I know what it is.
Also: He could be the second-in-command of the clone's "KAS," If this becomes a lasting thing.
guestuser
11/29/13
DarkNut255: Whoah yeah! OOTS!!! ...though it really has nothing to do with Kirbies...
05/23/13
YEEEEAAAH FIRST COMMENT!!!
... also, that was unexpected.
Djoing
05/23/13
I bet that Keito planned that.
MecanicalCH
05/23/13
Shadik fight! can we see it complete!? PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE??????? :D
Knightkirby
05/23/13
Watch shadik and his clone hit fake keito from behind.
Sapar
05/23/13
Yeah.. now that I think about it, I never really thought about Shadik's encounter.
Guess dialogue would be pretty useless in that situation.
DarkNut255
05/23/13
Ulti, you forgot a word after sneak attack! And you read Order of the Stick! (To be honest, your comic is probably too family-friendly (outside of a few swears, one in this very comic) to say it.)
guestuser
05/23/13
that when you say what you think should happen next, it makes Ulti less likely to use it?
Omega Kirby
05/23/13
Ulti appeared in the comic and a clone of him appeared
Syogren
05/23/13
The humor in this comic is unmatched.
And by that I mean it's on par with most of the comics I have on fav--*bricked*
guestuser
05/24/13
Yeah, but what if Etam comes back?
Sapar
05/24/13
@Hi(:: Etam wouldn't come back in this situation, because he isn't truly evil. Sure, he's a troublemaker, but he did all that stuff to improve the comic. Ulti actually says that at the end of the segment. Trying to fight, maybe even KILL, Ulti is just not in his personality.
DarkMario1000
05/24/13
Jarkes
Not-Keito surely isn't crafty…
Good thing he's not second-in-command.
Side note: 1st panel has a mistake.
guestuser
05/25/13
An extra comma here or there isn't THAT bad. It's still a little hard to see the problem, even though I know what it is.
Also: He could be the second-in-command of the clone's "KAS," If this becomes a lasting thing.
guestuser
11/29/13
DarkNut255: Whoah yeah! OOTS!!! ...though it really has nothing to do with Kirbies...
Part 23
Ulti's Notes:
I watched one mental health video in 10th Grade of school and immediately decided to try to channel some similar real-life emotions into Caiya's fictional personality disorder. Seeing actual people affected by actual illnesses and how they felt about that sort of thing was a pretty powerful moment at the time, unexpectedly so for a boring health class, so it stuck with me.
Having been made to think about Caiya, it had me realize that at no point did I ever have her acknowledge her split personality, and how the sheer difference between the two might make her feel. Thus, it was an interesting result to try to channel that rough emotion into the character and break her down a bit.
Really, the only problem is that it's once again a solo experience, where it doesn't really impact her standing among the other squadmembers. Especially since two of her memories come from fellow squadmembers, it's a bit of a missed opportunity.
While the development is strong in this segment, my critical side just keeps making me think of where I could've improved, and the answer to me here is to have involved more of the characters at the same time such that they can be privy to each others' quirks and hidden depths. Creating stronger bonds as a result of the explained development, y'know?
Having been made to think about Caiya, it had me realize that at no point did I ever have her acknowledge her split personality, and how the sheer difference between the two might make her feel. Thus, it was an interesting result to try to channel that rough emotion into the character and break her down a bit.
Really, the only problem is that it's once again a solo experience, where it doesn't really impact her standing among the other squadmembers. Especially since two of her memories come from fellow squadmembers, it's a bit of a missed opportunity.
While the development is strong in this segment, my critical side just keeps making me think of where I could've improved, and the answer to me here is to have involved more of the characters at the same time such that they can be privy to each others' quirks and hidden depths. Creating stronger bonds as a result of the explained development, y'know?
Original Author's Comment:
05/25/13
We all sit back and laugh at Caiya's antics when she's being silly, but nobody's ever really considered how the smarter Caiya felt about that.
On a lighter note, I've decided that I am indeed going to do that review comic thingamajig. If any of you guys has a comic that they'd want to be reviewed by yours truly, just send me a comment or private message! For a first comic to review, I'd prefer something of a lesser magnitude, so BSX, even though you've already given me a request, I'm gonna hold off on Kirby's Dream Adventure and its 900+ pages for a bit.
We all sit back and laugh at Caiya's antics when she's being silly, but nobody's ever really considered how the smarter Caiya felt about that.
On a lighter note, I've decided that I am indeed going to do that review comic thingamajig. If any of you guys has a comic that they'd want to be reviewed by yours truly, just send me a comment or private message! For a first comic to review, I'd prefer something of a lesser magnitude, so BSX, even though you've already given me a request, I'm gonna hold off on Kirby's Dream Adventure and its 900+ pages for a bit.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Alienoid
05/25/13
Review requests, huh?
...
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=123259
There. Gweeheehee.
Luigi_96
05/25/13
Aww, Poor Caiya. '^'
Also... Ah, what the heck. http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=124522 You've never stated you opinion on it anyways.
BattleStarX
05/25/13
No worries, UY. It is a bit daunting, especially since I'm in the middle of a 600+ page redo. Well, I say the middle, more like the beginning, hehehe.
Ah, KDA Keeby, you're such a jerk that your jerkiness still manages to show up in this comic, despite never coming over here.
MecanicalCH
05/25/13
Caiya is makinga a tantrum....*cries*
Sapar
05/25/13
That's actually a pretty deep subject for a webcomic, Ulti. I commend you.
contradiction123
05/25/13
ha ha ha ha clone-Caiya just don't give no carps
Also if you're reviewing, eh why not: http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=117115 review request '-'
guestuser
05/25/13
Poor Caiya... I'm also... super random at times and can't control it... D:
DarkMario1000
05/25/13
never struck me before.
Poor Caiya…
Ultimate Yoshi
05/25/13
For those interested, the new review comic is out, with its first review: http://ultireviews.smackjeeves.com/
guestuser
05/25/13
Why does this remind me so much of Flowers for Algernon? :(
MixMagi365
05/25/13
Poor Caiya, I guess none of us really thought about it that way
Sapar
05/25/13
It kinda makes you wonder about the other characters and what they have to hide.
Alexini0699
05/26/13
I know how Caiya feels for some reason...
guestuser
05/26/13
Alexini0699: Me, too. but why?
Sapar
05/26/13
Because the author told you in a webcomic, silly :)
At this rate, this segment may become one of the most intimate in the history of the KAS. Keep it up, Ulti!
Sapar
05/26/13
When are we gonna see kirby again?
guestuser
05/27/13
Sapar: I was GOING to respond in a better way instead of nothing, but I have no idea how to respond... so my response is a blank..
Sapar
05/27/13
is a perfect demonstration of my stupefying power. your will now belongs to me. Gwehehehehe.
I command you to stew on that >:)
guestuser
05/27/13
Nope.
guestuser
05/27/13
...ok, that's cool.
Sapar
05/28/13
I HATE it when I post as a guest!
guestuser
11/24/13
........not funny anymore
guestuser
11/27/13
Like people have said, that's some deep stuff. I feel so sorry for Caiya. I wonder if she ever gets any credit for when she does something when she's smart?
05/25/13
Review requests, huh?
...
http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=123259
There. Gweeheehee.
Luigi_96
05/25/13
Aww, Poor Caiya. '^'
Also... Ah, what the heck. http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=124522 You've never stated you opinion on it anyways.
BattleStarX
05/25/13
No worries, UY. It is a bit daunting, especially since I'm in the middle of a 600+ page redo. Well, I say the middle, more like the beginning, hehehe.
Ah, KDA Keeby, you're such a jerk that your jerkiness still manages to show up in this comic, despite never coming over here.
MecanicalCH
05/25/13
Caiya is makinga a tantrum....*cries*
Sapar
05/25/13
That's actually a pretty deep subject for a webcomic, Ulti. I commend you.
contradiction123
05/25/13
ha ha ha ha clone-Caiya just don't give no carps
Also if you're reviewing, eh why not: http://www.smackjeeves.com/comicprofile.php?id=117115 review request '-'
guestuser
05/25/13
Poor Caiya... I'm also... super random at times and can't control it... D:
DarkMario1000
05/25/13
never struck me before.
Poor Caiya…
Ultimate Yoshi
05/25/13
For those interested, the new review comic is out, with its first review: http://ultireviews.smackjeeves.com/
guestuser
05/25/13
Why does this remind me so much of Flowers for Algernon? :(
MixMagi365
05/25/13
Poor Caiya, I guess none of us really thought about it that way
Sapar
05/25/13
It kinda makes you wonder about the other characters and what they have to hide.
Alexini0699
05/26/13
I know how Caiya feels for some reason...
guestuser
05/26/13
Alexini0699: Me, too. but why?
Sapar
05/26/13
Because the author told you in a webcomic, silly :)
At this rate, this segment may become one of the most intimate in the history of the KAS. Keep it up, Ulti!
Sapar
05/26/13
When are we gonna see kirby again?
guestuser
05/27/13
Sapar: I was GOING to respond in a better way instead of nothing, but I have no idea how to respond... so my response is a blank..
Sapar
05/27/13
is a perfect demonstration of my stupefying power. your will now belongs to me. Gwehehehehe.
I command you to stew on that >:)
guestuser
05/27/13
Nope.
guestuser
05/27/13
...ok, that's cool.
Sapar
05/28/13
I HATE it when I post as a guest!
guestuser
11/24/13
........not funny anymore
guestuser
11/27/13
Like people have said, that's some deep stuff. I feel so sorry for Caiya. I wonder if she ever gets any credit for when she does something when she's smart?
Part 24
Original Author's Comment:
05/28/13
First rule: don't touch the tentacles, only the tops.
Saia and Not-Saia are channeling their inner Dana.
In case you're confused, the big jelly's call in panel 3 summoned the little jelly army in panel 4.
In case you missed it, check out my new review comic here: http://ultireviews.smackjeeves.com/
First rule: don't touch the tentacles, only the tops.
Saia and Not-Saia are channeling their inner Dana.
In case you're confused, the big jelly's call in panel 3 summoned the little jelly army in panel 4.
In case you missed it, check out my new review comic here: http://ultireviews.smackjeeves.com/
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
05/28/13
So much squishy cuteness in that last panel!
MecanicalCH
05/28/13
now thats a "shocking" but cute experience! XD
Sapar
05/29/13
How odd that two kirbies that are supposed to hate each other can work together and be friendly towards each other.
Although, it reveals nothing about their personalities :(
guestuser
05/29/13
It looks like Saia and Not-Saia are *puts on sunglasses* really shocked. YEAH!!!
Sapar
05/29/13
Seems those jellies are putting on a MASS ATTA- *bricked*
DarkMario1000
05/29/13
Instead, panel 4 immediately made me think of this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MswapyPhIOY
Sapar
05/31/13
I guess that makes sense. But it still doesn't explain the relation between Raize and not-Raize.
"Sapar used 'verbal counterattack'!"
DarkMario1000
06/11/13
Seen as how Raize's character is quite sensible…not-Raize should be too…
Sapar
05/28/13
So much squishy cuteness in that last panel!
MecanicalCH
05/28/13
now thats a "shocking" but cute experience! XD
Sapar
05/29/13
How odd that two kirbies that are supposed to hate each other can work together and be friendly towards each other.
Although, it reveals nothing about their personalities :(
guestuser
05/29/13
It looks like Saia and Not-Saia are *puts on sunglasses* really shocked. YEAH!!!
Sapar
05/29/13
Seems those jellies are putting on a MASS ATTA- *bricked*
DarkMario1000
05/29/13
Instead, panel 4 immediately made me think of this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MswapyPhIOY
Sapar
05/31/13
I guess that makes sense. But it still doesn't explain the relation between Raize and not-Raize.
"Sapar used 'verbal counterattack'!"
DarkMario1000
06/11/13
Seen as how Raize's character is quite sensible…not-Raize should be too…
Sapar
Part 25
Ulti's Notes:
Raize was a character I enjoyed to write for, since he was a level-headed background-type character who tended to speak up mostly when he needed to. I could write him when relevant, and otherwise accept him being in a scene without worrying about him interacting with much.
This led to a lot of people in the comments having absolutely no clue what he was about, since his traits weren't very clearly spoken. They're absolutely there if you look for them with this understanding in mind, but the key thing is that you have to look for them.
Because of that, I wanted to give Raize this kind of conversation with his clone so that I could have something to point to for those who still didn't understand that Raize had these personality traits. It was a bit on-the-nose, but if I've learned anything from writing over the years, it's that sometimes even when you're as on-the-nose as possible, people will still not remember or understand what you're saying.
I mean, I've had a lesbian dragon in the Leo comics who's stated multiple times that she isn't into guys, and yet people still constantly ask why she doesn't want to fuck any of the boys in the comic. It's embarrassing.
This led to a lot of people in the comments having absolutely no clue what he was about, since his traits weren't very clearly spoken. They're absolutely there if you look for them with this understanding in mind, but the key thing is that you have to look for them.
Because of that, I wanted to give Raize this kind of conversation with his clone so that I could have something to point to for those who still didn't understand that Raize had these personality traits. It was a bit on-the-nose, but if I've learned anything from writing over the years, it's that sometimes even when you're as on-the-nose as possible, people will still not remember or understand what you're saying.
I mean, I've had a lesbian dragon in the Leo comics who's stated multiple times that she isn't into guys, and yet people still constantly ask why she doesn't want to fuck any of the boys in the comic. It's embarrassing.
Original Author's Comment:
06/03/13
I bet Jarkes will be surprised I brought up the Pep Brew thing again.
I bet Jarkes will be surprised I brought up the Pep Brew thing again.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
06/03/13
"the keyboard is try." ne? I think we goofed there, or there's a punny I'm missing. Who knows.
If you're the only sane man in an insane world, is it really you who's sane?
Sapar
06/03/13
Also, I have a question for BattleStarX: Why don't you and Gigi do a crossover? You both have done one with KA, but never have you collaborated with the two of you.
Thanks for listening, and see ya Author Doo.
Luigi_96
06/03/13
Lol what pep brew thing? :|
MecanicalCH
06/04/13
so...can we sneak peek the board to see who is winning? :D
BattleStarX
06/04/13
Sapar: Gigi just got out of her crossover, and I'm hip-deep in the middle of a very important segment on my side right now. We might once I'm out of it, but for now, we both have our own thing to do.
Though it would complete the triangle, now wouldn't it?
Sapar
06/04/13
I know you're busy (and the dark matter segment is coming along great, by the way), and it's a bit early for Gigi to do another crossover. But like you said, it would connect the three comics nicely.
And Luigi_96, the "Pep Brew" thing is in the last two parts of Average Days. It's pretty comical, actually...
guestuser
06/04/13
Wait, there's no L in Battleship!
Sapar
06/04/13
By the way, I forgot to mention this before, but nice new cover picture, BattleStarX.
guestuser
06/04/13
Merp merp. Raize and his clone aren't even REALLY fighting, while Vezo is maybe still bricking HIS clone. MERRRRRP.
DarkNut255
06/04/13
The closest thing the the Pep Brew joke I can think of is this: http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1052196/average-days-for-unaverage-puffs-part-13/
(Or maybe it's a joke about Pep from the original Yoshi and Kirby, I think Raize appeared with Saia once in the grayspace. I dunno.)
Sapar
06/04/13
That IS the Pep Brew joke! look at the comic before that one, silly!
Sapar
06/05/13
Have you read my cameo questions yet? I know I have a lot, but if I'm going to send one in, there are things that I just have to know.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/05/13
Sapar: What cameo questions? I honestly haven't seen any.
Sapar
06/06/13
Like I said before, there's a lot I need to know before I'm able to even consider a cameo.
I'm also REALLY bad at spriting, so if there are any tips you could offer, I would really appreciate it. Most of my cameo ideas are customized, so I'm sure you would want a sprite sheet.
DarkMario1000
06/11/13
I'm bad at remembering references to older comic pages…
But it's nice to have that nostalgia!
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
if you can multi-task, you are awesome.
ebuko
07/20/14
You sunk my battlesh00p!
06/03/13
"the keyboard is try." ne? I think we goofed there, or there's a punny I'm missing. Who knows.
If you're the only sane man in an insane world, is it really you who's sane?
Sapar
06/03/13
Also, I have a question for BattleStarX: Why don't you and Gigi do a crossover? You both have done one with KA, but never have you collaborated with the two of you.
Thanks for listening, and see ya Author Doo.
Luigi_96
06/03/13
Lol what pep brew thing? :|
MecanicalCH
06/04/13
so...can we sneak peek the board to see who is winning? :D
BattleStarX
06/04/13
Sapar: Gigi just got out of her crossover, and I'm hip-deep in the middle of a very important segment on my side right now. We might once I'm out of it, but for now, we both have our own thing to do.
Though it would complete the triangle, now wouldn't it?
Sapar
06/04/13
I know you're busy (and the dark matter segment is coming along great, by the way), and it's a bit early for Gigi to do another crossover. But like you said, it would connect the three comics nicely.
And Luigi_96, the "Pep Brew" thing is in the last two parts of Average Days. It's pretty comical, actually...
guestuser
06/04/13
Wait, there's no L in Battleship!
Sapar
06/04/13
By the way, I forgot to mention this before, but nice new cover picture, BattleStarX.
guestuser
06/04/13
Merp merp. Raize and his clone aren't even REALLY fighting, while Vezo is maybe still bricking HIS clone. MERRRRRP.
DarkNut255
06/04/13
The closest thing the the Pep Brew joke I can think of is this: http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1052196/average-days-for-unaverage-puffs-part-13/
(Or maybe it's a joke about Pep from the original Yoshi and Kirby, I think Raize appeared with Saia once in the grayspace. I dunno.)
Sapar
06/04/13
That IS the Pep Brew joke! look at the comic before that one, silly!
Sapar
06/05/13
Have you read my cameo questions yet? I know I have a lot, but if I'm going to send one in, there are things that I just have to know.
Ultimate Yoshi
06/05/13
Sapar: What cameo questions? I honestly haven't seen any.
Sapar
06/06/13
Like I said before, there's a lot I need to know before I'm able to even consider a cameo.
I'm also REALLY bad at spriting, so if there are any tips you could offer, I would really appreciate it. Most of my cameo ideas are customized, so I'm sure you would want a sprite sheet.
DarkMario1000
06/11/13
I'm bad at remembering references to older comic pages…
But it's nice to have that nostalgia!
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
if you can multi-task, you are awesome.
ebuko
07/20/14
You sunk my battlesh00p!
Part 26
Ulti's Notes:
I don't actually remember who the original "Master of Puppets" was meant to be. I called them the Puppetmaster in my notes, and maybe they were an entirely original creation at the time, but the end result didn't turn out that way at all, as you'll find out.
Sometimes, plans can change for the better, mid-project. I'm certainly happy with this particular change, since it wound up being pretty fun to write for.
The awkward thing is that I do have pages like these, though, that tease a mystery for the identity of the Master, but it's... such an unguessable idea because of a few particular aspects about the mystery that provide false clues and red herrings. It's annoyingly nonfunctional as a mystery, or at least, a satisfying mystery.
Sometimes, plans can change for the better, mid-project. I'm certainly happy with this particular change, since it wound up being pretty fun to write for.
The awkward thing is that I do have pages like these, though, that tease a mystery for the identity of the Master, but it's... such an unguessable idea because of a few particular aspects about the mystery that provide false clues and red herrings. It's annoyingly nonfunctional as a mystery, or at least, a satisfying mystery.
Original Author's Comment:
06/06/13
Hey there Kirby and Not-Kirby, it's been a good 22 comics since we last saw you!
Hey there Kirby and Not-Kirby, it's been a good 22 comics since we last saw you!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Sapar
06/06/13
Was that from my question 3 comics ago, or was that planned?
*coughcoughdarkmindcough*
BattleStarX
06/06/13
Death is but a temporary setback, Kirby.
Unless, of course, it's a plot death, then you're SoL.
Omega Kirby
06/06/13
Marx?
Ackirby
06/06/13
Marx from 20TK!
MarioKong
06/06/13
Drawcia.
Luigi_96
06/06/13
Dedede. :B
guestuser
06/06/13
*GASP!!* what if it was KEEBY?! *dun dun dun!!*
But that doesn't sound possible so...
A kirby enemy!! maybe ZERO TWO.
(and yes, I'm saying random things, kinda)
guestuser
06/06/13
Galacta Knight, it fits almost perfectly.
Sapar
06/07/13
@RedKirby: Galacta Knight got A SWORD SHOVED INTO HIS BACK. He isn't coming back. Ever.
*coughcoughit'sdarkmindcough* Sorry, I've got Bronchitis.
guestuser
06/07/13
"At least, nobody who's still alive."
That makes Kirby sound like a murderer.
Just sayin'
Terry93
06/07/13
Sapar: hey maybe its Dark mind Seeking his Revenge :3
guestuser
06/07/13
Sapar: Ahh... But as BattleStarX said, "death is but a temporary setback" Or maybe it's 02.
Or Dark Mind. Who knows?
guestuser
06/07/13
Dark Mind sounds likely. After all, he DOES make clones of others. That's his signature power it seems.
And Mirror Kirby said he was guarding the mirror world in case he came back which means he likely isn't fully dead.
Sapar
06/07/13
When Kirby fought Wiz in "Tree to Tree," he said that he survived the battle in the Old Tower because he was "an entity of the Mirror world, which, after all, is very prone to shattering." The same logic would apply to Dark Mind, since he's from the Mirror World as well. Although, Dark Matter could work, considering that it comes back, like, 14 BILLION TIMES. Plus it can already transform, so making clones isn't too far-fetched.
Coincidentally, my "Bronchitis" is magically gone. Hmmm...
Omega Kirby
06/08/13
I've had a thought, what if the place where they are, is inside each of their minds, and at the same time, they're lying asleep in the floor of headquarters, and the 'clones' are just the evil part of each of them (or as evil as they can get) and whoever wins the fight gets control of their bodies!
guestuser
06/08/13
Mr. DarkMindactuallycreatedShadowKirbyandDarkMKsoIsupportJarkes.
Sapar
06/08/13
Jarkes: Wow, you actually have a good point. Can't believe I missed something like that.Although you do have to admit, Dark Mind would fit the bill nicely.
It's gonna be hard for Ulti to make a sprite for that, though.
Sapar
06/08/13
Hey, I wonder how Shat'l is doing.
guestuser
06/08/13
Wait. What if where they are is actually the KAS headquarters and Hali is the "master" person.
Sapar
06/08/13
@RedKirby: What makes you say that? Do tell.
guestuser
06/08/13
Sapar
1: The KAS Headquarters location is unknown by everyone EXCEPT Hali.
2: Talzo has a base who's location is also unknown.
3: Talzo's master, who is very likely the same person who behind the creation of the clones, has the eyes of a kirby.
That's pretty much all I can think of right now.
Sapar
06/09/13
Ultimate Yoshi: I have a question that I know will probably get a no, but what the heck. If you don't really know how to make sprites, and take WAAAAY too long on it to finish a sheet, can you draw it out? I could ask you to do the recoloring, and I could attempt the extra stuff on my own.
lstaff4
06/09/13
MSG
guestuser
06/10/13
if they were more crayon or paint looking i would say roller painter or ado because roller painter has drawn a kirby clone in one of the games
guestuser
06/10/13
I got some dark mind sprites from spriters resource! it also has the attacks and stuff. (And now, I shall go make an account for this awesome site :D)
Little Leaf
06/10/13
@Titanic98810: BTW this is Titanic98810 as a member. should I send the sprites?
Sapar
06/10/13
Why not just name yourself Titanic98810? That's what Jarkes did.
Also, it's Paint Roller, not Roller Painter.
Little Leaf
06/10/13
Sapar: I just didn't feel like it.
Sapar
06/10/13
you know what Ulti,I don't think I'll make you do that. I'll check with Kirby Sprite Requests first.
Koopa1018
06/16/13
Same reason JosephX named himself JosephX instead of...whatever he was called before JosephX. I forget.
guestuser
05/24/18
BOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII ITS DA BLUE KIRBY >:C
06/06/13
Was that from my question 3 comics ago, or was that planned?
*coughcoughdarkmindcough*
BattleStarX
06/06/13
Death is but a temporary setback, Kirby.
Unless, of course, it's a plot death, then you're SoL.
Omega Kirby
06/06/13
Marx?
Ackirby
06/06/13
Marx from 20TK!
MarioKong
06/06/13
Drawcia.
Luigi_96
06/06/13
Dedede. :B
guestuser
06/06/13
*GASP!!* what if it was KEEBY?! *dun dun dun!!*
But that doesn't sound possible so...
A kirby enemy!! maybe ZERO TWO.
(and yes, I'm saying random things, kinda)
guestuser
06/06/13
Galacta Knight, it fits almost perfectly.
Sapar
06/07/13
@RedKirby: Galacta Knight got A SWORD SHOVED INTO HIS BACK. He isn't coming back. Ever.
*coughcoughit'sdarkmindcough* Sorry, I've got Bronchitis.
guestuser
06/07/13
"At least, nobody who's still alive."
That makes Kirby sound like a murderer.
Just sayin'
Terry93
06/07/13
Sapar: hey maybe its Dark mind Seeking his Revenge :3
guestuser
06/07/13
Sapar: Ahh... But as BattleStarX said, "death is but a temporary setback" Or maybe it's 02.
Or Dark Mind. Who knows?
guestuser
06/07/13
Dark Mind sounds likely. After all, he DOES make clones of others. That's his signature power it seems.
And Mirror Kirby said he was guarding the mirror world in case he came back which means he likely isn't fully dead.
Sapar
06/07/13
When Kirby fought Wiz in "Tree to Tree," he said that he survived the battle in the Old Tower because he was "an entity of the Mirror world, which, after all, is very prone to shattering." The same logic would apply to Dark Mind, since he's from the Mirror World as well. Although, Dark Matter could work, considering that it comes back, like, 14 BILLION TIMES. Plus it can already transform, so making clones isn't too far-fetched.
Coincidentally, my "Bronchitis" is magically gone. Hmmm...
Omega Kirby
06/08/13
I've had a thought, what if the place where they are, is inside each of their minds, and at the same time, they're lying asleep in the floor of headquarters, and the 'clones' are just the evil part of each of them (or as evil as they can get) and whoever wins the fight gets control of their bodies!
guestuser
06/08/13
Mr. DarkMindactuallycreatedShadowKirbyandDarkMKsoIsupportJarkes.
Sapar
06/08/13
Jarkes: Wow, you actually have a good point. Can't believe I missed something like that.Although you do have to admit, Dark Mind would fit the bill nicely.
It's gonna be hard for Ulti to make a sprite for that, though.
Sapar
06/08/13
Hey, I wonder how Shat'l is doing.
guestuser
06/08/13
Wait. What if where they are is actually the KAS headquarters and Hali is the "master" person.
Sapar
06/08/13
@RedKirby: What makes you say that? Do tell.
guestuser
06/08/13
Sapar
1: The KAS Headquarters location is unknown by everyone EXCEPT Hali.
2: Talzo has a base who's location is also unknown.
3: Talzo's master, who is very likely the same person who behind the creation of the clones, has the eyes of a kirby.
That's pretty much all I can think of right now.
Sapar
06/09/13
Ultimate Yoshi: I have a question that I know will probably get a no, but what the heck. If you don't really know how to make sprites, and take WAAAAY too long on it to finish a sheet, can you draw it out? I could ask you to do the recoloring, and I could attempt the extra stuff on my own.
lstaff4
06/09/13
MSG
guestuser
06/10/13
if they were more crayon or paint looking i would say roller painter or ado because roller painter has drawn a kirby clone in one of the games
guestuser
06/10/13
I got some dark mind sprites from spriters resource! it also has the attacks and stuff. (And now, I shall go make an account for this awesome site :D)
Little Leaf
06/10/13
@Titanic98810: BTW this is Titanic98810 as a member. should I send the sprites?
Sapar
06/10/13
Why not just name yourself Titanic98810? That's what Jarkes did.
Also, it's Paint Roller, not Roller Painter.
Little Leaf
06/10/13
Sapar: I just didn't feel like it.
Sapar
06/10/13
you know what Ulti,I don't think I'll make you do that. I'll check with Kirby Sprite Requests first.
Koopa1018
06/16/13
Same reason JosephX named himself JosephX instead of...whatever he was called before JosephX. I forget.
guestuser
05/24/18
BOIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII ITS DA BLUE KIRBY >:C
Part 27
Original Author's Comment:
06/11/13
Looks like they're getting the Squad(s) back together.
Looks like they're getting the Squad(s) back together.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
06/11/13
Nope, totally not gonna fall for that. XD
Little Leaf
06/11/13
Awesome! But when are we going to see Shat'l again? :/
MixMagi365
06/11/13
Vezo's Fight. BWA HAHA HAHAHAHA
BattleStarX
06/11/13
Why does nobody ever listen when you warn them of incoming danger?
After all, Evil Overlord Rule #178 says: If I have the hero cornered and am about to finish him off and he says "Look out behind you!!" I will not laugh and say "You don't expect me to fall for that old trick, do you?" Instead I will take a step to the side and half turn. That way I can still keep my weapon trained on the hero, I can scan the area behind me, and if anything was heading for me it will now be heading for him.
DarkMario1000
06/11/13
Will the shadow jumping STILL persist?
And the stereotypical villain doesn't use that logic…EVEN THOUGH IT'D HELP.
BattleStarX
Sapar
06/11/13
No fair Little Leaf! I already asked that!
Syogren
06/11/13
BattleStarX: You'd think people would listen to that.
Little Leaf
06/11/13
Sapar: I just reasked for you? :)?
Sapar
06/12/13
Not-Shadik seems to be winning in this particular brawl.
That can't be good...
guestuser
06/30/13
Vezo is still sitting on the darker vezo!?! I've got to say, i like his aggravation. ( or something like that. ) :P
guestuser
05/05/14
Too...many...twists... (head explodes)
06/11/13
Nope, totally not gonna fall for that. XD
Little Leaf
06/11/13
Awesome! But when are we going to see Shat'l again? :/
MixMagi365
06/11/13
Vezo's Fight. BWA HAHA HAHAHAHA
BattleStarX
06/11/13
Why does nobody ever listen when you warn them of incoming danger?
After all, Evil Overlord Rule #178 says: If I have the hero cornered and am about to finish him off and he says "Look out behind you!!" I will not laugh and say "You don't expect me to fall for that old trick, do you?" Instead I will take a step to the side and half turn. That way I can still keep my weapon trained on the hero, I can scan the area behind me, and if anything was heading for me it will now be heading for him.
DarkMario1000
06/11/13
Will the shadow jumping STILL persist?
And the stereotypical villain doesn't use that logic…EVEN THOUGH IT'D HELP.
BattleStarX
Sapar
06/11/13
No fair Little Leaf! I already asked that!
Syogren
06/11/13
BattleStarX: You'd think people would listen to that.
Little Leaf
06/11/13
Sapar: I just reasked for you? :)?
Sapar
06/12/13
Not-Shadik seems to be winning in this particular brawl.
That can't be good...
guestuser
06/30/13
Vezo is still sitting on the darker vezo!?! I've got to say, i like his aggravation. ( or something like that. ) :P
guestuser
05/05/14
Too...many...twists... (head explodes)
Part 28
Original Author's Comment:
06/12/13
The gang's not all here yet, but now there's a new danger present to the rest of them. ATTACK OF THE KILLER JELLIES.
How would you react if someone just ran up to you screaming that the Jellies were attacking?
The gang's not all here yet, but now there's a new danger present to the rest of them. ATTACK OF THE KILLER JELLIES.
How would you react if someone just ran up to you screaming that the Jellies were attacking?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Alienoid
06/12/13
I would trip them.
1ce_k1d
06/12/13
I'd try to eat them.
The jelly, not the scream'n'run person.
Djoing
06/12/13
If I lived in the Kirby world, and someone would tell me to run from the jellies, I would probably listen.
MarioKong
06/12/13
I think they are trying to gather everyone.
BattleStarX
06/12/13
Where's the Peanut Butter when you need it?
Luigi_96
06/12/13
Merrrrrrrp
Sapar
06/13/13
If they're gathering the others, then why are they fighting?
Whatever they're doing, though, it's sure happening fast...
Mister T
06/13/13
BattleStarX: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3ZAGBL6UBA
1997Cjones
06/13/13
The Saias look a lot like 20TK´s Dana
DarkMario1000
06/13/13
The problem is…if Not-Shadik is also wanting to gather the clones together to team up on the good guys, the clones would be outnumbered.
Well, given that Raize and Saia don't stand down…which they probably will along with the clones…thereby making the outnumbering negated…
Sapar
And LOL Alienoid
Omega Kirby
06/14/13
How do they even know where to go?
Sapar
06/14/13
'Cause they picture the places in their minds, that's how.
ZeypherComix
04/22/14
That last panel is perfect!
guestuser
07/17/14
SGEE!
06/12/13
I would trip them.
1ce_k1d
06/12/13
I'd try to eat them.
The jelly, not the scream'n'run person.
Djoing
06/12/13
If I lived in the Kirby world, and someone would tell me to run from the jellies, I would probably listen.
MarioKong
06/12/13
I think they are trying to gather everyone.
BattleStarX
06/12/13
Where's the Peanut Butter when you need it?
Luigi_96
06/12/13
Merrrrrrrp
Sapar
06/13/13
If they're gathering the others, then why are they fighting?
Whatever they're doing, though, it's sure happening fast...
Mister T
06/13/13
BattleStarX: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3ZAGBL6UBA
1997Cjones
06/13/13
The Saias look a lot like 20TK´s Dana
DarkMario1000
06/13/13
The problem is…if Not-Shadik is also wanting to gather the clones together to team up on the good guys, the clones would be outnumbered.
Well, given that Raize and Saia don't stand down…which they probably will along with the clones…thereby making the outnumbering negated…
Sapar
And LOL Alienoid
Omega Kirby
06/14/13
How do they even know where to go?
Sapar
06/14/13
'Cause they picture the places in their minds, that's how.
ZeypherComix
04/22/14
That last panel is perfect!
guestuser
07/17/14
SGEE!
Part 29
Original Author's Comment:
06/15/13
Slowly and slowly this is proceeding to get more and more chaotic.
That poor, poor Blucko.
Slowly and slowly this is proceeding to get more and more chaotic.
That poor, poor Blucko.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
06/15/13
Nuuuu the merrrp is gone! T-T
PurpleChickenPineapple
06/15/13
Well that's certainly a game changer...
Mint612
06/15/13
Well they're bouncing around a lot.
DarkMario1000
06/15/13
Not-Raize STILL managed to get the upper hand? Ha!!!
Oh goodness, what'll happen when they shadow jump to Kaxo's area? Those two fuses…in that battle…Uh oh!
guestuser
06/16/13
i love you're comics
Sapar
06/16/13
Wonder what'll happen when they get to Shat'l.
Or Kirby, for that matter.
Ecaroh914
06/17/13
Never interrupt a game of battleship. I had to learn that the hard way...D':
Guest
07/01/13
Ecaroh914: oopsee.
06/15/13
Nuuuu the merrrp is gone! T-T
PurpleChickenPineapple
06/15/13
Well that's certainly a game changer...
Mint612
06/15/13
Well they're bouncing around a lot.
DarkMario1000
06/15/13
Not-Raize STILL managed to get the upper hand? Ha!!!
Oh goodness, what'll happen when they shadow jump to Kaxo's area? Those two fuses…in that battle…Uh oh!
guestuser
06/16/13
i love you're comics
Sapar
06/16/13
Wonder what'll happen when they get to Shat'l.
Or Kirby, for that matter.
Ecaroh914
06/17/13
Never interrupt a game of battleship. I had to learn that the hard way...D':
Guest
07/01/13
Ecaroh914: oopsee.
Part 30
Ulti's Notes:
Raize being good at strategy and being level-headed means that when nobody else is stepping up, he's able to take charge effectively. I've always thought it was interesting, having a strategist and planner like him who would be a very effective leader in terms of ideas and getting things done, but doesn't actively want to lead either.
It's an interesting concept, one that I think I'd want to take further if I could take another crack at it. Perhaps going with low charisma, or someone who's not actually able to put their foot down and lead properly, just come up with the necessary ideas for it, that sort of thing. Really emphasize that preference on being in the background.
It's an interesting concept, one that I think I'd want to take further if I could take another crack at it. Perhaps going with low charisma, or someone who's not actually able to put their foot down and lead properly, just come up with the necessary ideas for it, that sort of thing. Really emphasize that preference on being in the background.
Original Author's Comment:
06/17/13
Raize and Not-Raize have taken control of this situation effectively. Who knows how long that will last?
Raize and Not-Raize have taken control of this situation effectively. Who knows how long that will last?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
MecanicalCH
06/17/13
this does not foreshadow well...T.T
BattleStarX
06/17/13
Keito or Not-Keito, it doesn't matter, the Squishing God hates you both.
Luigi_96
06/18/13
I'd say Shat'l and Not-Shat'l had their own little quarrel.
Alienoid
06/18/13
Why are both Saias the same colour in the last panel?
Divine Knight
06/18/13
I give them five minutes before they start arguing, again.
guestuser
06/18/13
Only Sane Man.
Ecaroh914
06/18/13
Hmmm, this should be interesting. After all, it was to be expected to have both Shat'ls to faint due to their conditions, but to be perfectly unscathed? Welp, Raize, way to go to keep them under "control" and stating the obvious
Sapar
06/19/13
Well, they WERE in a dreamscape...
Ecaroh914
06/19/13
True. True...
guestuser
06/19/13
Niether look how I remember them....
Tygah
06/20/13
Poor Saia and Not-Saia, feeling left out...I still think they're my favourites!
DarkMario1000
06/21/13
I didn't catch that! =p
Alienoid.
Omega Kirby
06/22/13
Ulti, where did you get that white and black background (from the HQ.) You know, the one that was painted blue, and when inverted looked like a bumblebee color?
Sapar
06/22/13
From the great Sugar Noddy, of course!
Ultimate Yoshi
06/27/13
Jarkes: Yesterday's episode, Part 20.
06/17/13
this does not foreshadow well...T.T
BattleStarX
06/17/13
Keito or Not-Keito, it doesn't matter, the Squishing God hates you both.
Luigi_96
06/18/13
I'd say Shat'l and Not-Shat'l had their own little quarrel.
Alienoid
06/18/13
Why are both Saias the same colour in the last panel?
Divine Knight
06/18/13
I give them five minutes before they start arguing, again.
guestuser
06/18/13
Only Sane Man.
Ecaroh914
06/18/13
Hmmm, this should be interesting. After all, it was to be expected to have both Shat'ls to faint due to their conditions, but to be perfectly unscathed? Welp, Raize, way to go to keep them under "control" and stating the obvious
Sapar
06/19/13
Well, they WERE in a dreamscape...
Ecaroh914
06/19/13
True. True...
guestuser
06/19/13
Niether look how I remember them....
Tygah
06/20/13
Poor Saia and Not-Saia, feeling left out...I still think they're my favourites!
DarkMario1000
06/21/13
I didn't catch that! =p
Alienoid.
Omega Kirby
06/22/13
Ulti, where did you get that white and black background (from the HQ.) You know, the one that was painted blue, and when inverted looked like a bumblebee color?
Sapar
06/22/13
From the great Sugar Noddy, of course!
Ultimate Yoshi
06/27/13
Jarkes: Yesterday's episode, Part 20.
Part 31
Original Author's Comment:
06/27/13
Shat'l sure issued out commands quickly.
This will be the last update for a while, as I'm heading out to some sort of camp thingy to learn how to make video games tomorrow. This will last two weeks, and during this time I most likely won't be able to update this comic. If you still want some Ultimate Yoshi randomness, however, feel free to stalk my YouTube channel, for I'll still try and keep up daily uploads there. The past few days, I've been editing up a video buffer for these next two weeks so that I can keep up my daily schedule. I'm sure you guys know how to get to my YouTube channel by now, so feel free to check that out while I'm gone.
I may be able to comment, however, so don't be surprised if you see me say anything on Smack Jeeves, even if I haven't updated.
Shat'l sure issued out commands quickly.
This will be the last update for a while, as I'm heading out to some sort of camp thingy to learn how to make video games tomorrow. This will last two weeks, and during this time I most likely won't be able to update this comic. If you still want some Ultimate Yoshi randomness, however, feel free to stalk my YouTube channel, for I'll still try and keep up daily uploads there. The past few days, I've been editing up a video buffer for these next two weeks so that I can keep up my daily schedule. I'm sure you guys know how to get to my YouTube channel by now, so feel free to check that out while I'm gone.
I may be able to comment, however, so don't be surprised if you see me say anything on Smack Jeeves, even if I haven't updated.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
06/27/13
The fact that their dream selves go into their mouths is a bit creepy. O_o
SkyyKirby44
06/27/13
Luigi_96: Agreed. >_>
BattleStarX
06/27/13
Luigi_96: And now you know why most people sleep with their mouth at least some-what open.
Ecaroh914
06/27/13
BattleStarX: Precisely.
DarkNut255
06/27/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Hmm, well the camp thingy sounds interesting. Have fun!
DarkMario1000
06/28/13
This is no time for getting squished down there!! XD
guestuser
06/28/13
I look forward to Kirby and Not-Kirby. NOT-KIRBY IS AWESOME. That's a nice sword you have there... It's be a shame if anything happened to it... XD
Sapar
06/28/13
...
Oh, screw it. TAKE ME WITH YOUPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE WAAAAAAH!!!
Omega Kirby
06/29/13
But...why would the Not-kirbies bring a kirby with them? Why not just leave it behind and take the Not-kirby with them.
Likewise with the kirbies and the not-kirby
Sapar
06/29/13
Omega Kirby: Teamwork and cooperation.
Omega Kirby
06/30/13
Why would Not-kirbies co-operate with kirbies?
Sapar
06/30/13
Omega Kirby: Because the great Sugar Noddy has blessed Raize with the superpower of leadership.
guestuser
07/04/13
In Torkirby's Super Mario Galaxy 2 LP, you repeatedly called him Kake whenever you guest commentated. Why the-*EXTREME CENSORSHIP* ?! *BORINGLY LONG LECTURE ABOUT EMBARRASING NAMES AND SAYING THAT SOMEONE SUCKS AT MARIO GAMES EVEN THOUGH THEY'RE DOING A BLIND LP*
Sapar
07/12/13
Welcome to SJ, Yoshi700!
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
not-Shat'l is not evil
ZeypherComix
04/22/14
Its getting pretty crowded...
06/27/13
The fact that their dream selves go into their mouths is a bit creepy. O_o
SkyyKirby44
06/27/13
Luigi_96: Agreed. >_>
BattleStarX
06/27/13
Luigi_96: And now you know why most people sleep with their mouth at least some-what open.
Ecaroh914
06/27/13
BattleStarX: Precisely.
DarkNut255
06/27/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Hmm, well the camp thingy sounds interesting. Have fun!
DarkMario1000
06/28/13
This is no time for getting squished down there!! XD
guestuser
06/28/13
I look forward to Kirby and Not-Kirby. NOT-KIRBY IS AWESOME. That's a nice sword you have there... It's be a shame if anything happened to it... XD
Sapar
06/28/13
...
Oh, screw it. TAKE ME WITH YOUPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE WAAAAAAH!!!
Omega Kirby
06/29/13
But...why would the Not-kirbies bring a kirby with them? Why not just leave it behind and take the Not-kirby with them.
Likewise with the kirbies and the not-kirby
Sapar
06/29/13
Omega Kirby: Teamwork and cooperation.
Omega Kirby
06/30/13
Why would Not-kirbies co-operate with kirbies?
Sapar
06/30/13
Omega Kirby: Because the great Sugar Noddy has blessed Raize with the superpower of leadership.
guestuser
07/04/13
In Torkirby's Super Mario Galaxy 2 LP, you repeatedly called him Kake whenever you guest commentated. Why the-*EXTREME CENSORSHIP* ?! *BORINGLY LONG LECTURE ABOUT EMBARRASING NAMES AND SAYING THAT SOMEONE SUCKS AT MARIO GAMES EVEN THOUGH THEY'RE DOING A BLIND LP*
Sapar
07/12/13
Welcome to SJ, Yoshi700!
littlekirby61524
12/19/13
not-Shat'l is not evil
ZeypherComix
04/22/14
Its getting pretty crowded...
Part 32
Ulti's Notes:
Not-Kaxo having nothing to say here is a bit of a disappointment.
Original Author's Comment:
07/15/13
Hey, look, I'm back. Didja miss me?
Saia apparently is a force to be reckoned with, as long as she's got that Parasol out.
Hey, look, I'm back. Didja miss me?
Saia apparently is a force to be reckoned with, as long as she's got that Parasol out.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
MecanicalCH
07/15/13
Ultimate Yoshi: since when Saia is brave?
Luigi_96
07/15/13
SH-THWACK!
Omega Kirby
07/15/13
That's one strong weapon....considering, it's an umbrella
guestuser
07/15/13
UmmmumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumUMBRELLA
Tygah
07/16/13
Heh, and I just thought Talzo was really weak, or perhaps unprepared when attacking that first time. I didn't even think about the parasol being strong
Sapar
07/16/13
I just thought he was pretending to be weak...
Syogren
07/17/13
I'm kinda starting to feel bad for Kaxo...
guestuser
07/17/13
The Kaxo Kavern.
Ecaroh914
07/18/13
Yaaaaay! you're back!
07/15/13
Ultimate Yoshi: since when Saia is brave?
Luigi_96
07/15/13
SH-THWACK!
Omega Kirby
07/15/13
That's one strong weapon....considering, it's an umbrella
guestuser
07/15/13
UmmmumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumumUMBRELLA
Tygah
07/16/13
Heh, and I just thought Talzo was really weak, or perhaps unprepared when attacking that first time. I didn't even think about the parasol being strong
Sapar
07/16/13
I just thought he was pretending to be weak...
Syogren
07/17/13
I'm kinda starting to feel bad for Kaxo...
guestuser
07/17/13
The Kaxo Kavern.
Ecaroh914
07/18/13
Yaaaaay! you're back!
Part 33
Ulti's Notes:
Even as an author of characters who are round orbs, I wasn't immune to the tantalizing siren song of shipping. While I was never planning any actual romance, I did want to lean into it a little bit, with some friendships that may be particularly closer than others.
Keito X Caiya was one such tease in this vein.
Keito X Caiya was one such tease in this vein.
Original Author's Comment:
07/18/13
That was interesting.
Had fun with some of the expressions on this one.
That was interesting.
Had fun with some of the expressions on this one.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
contradiction123
07/18/13
Smarter Caiya x Keito
Luigi_96
07/18/13
That was... unexpected.
Ultimate Yoshi: You weren't kidding when you said mass. Holy cow.
Ecaroh914
07/18/13
D'aaaaw, willing to injure someone else to help her, how precious!
That is a lot of vids you have there it be such a shame if~
guestuser
07/18/13
Ecaroh914: DON'T DO A CREEPER REFERENCE. That's a nice relationship you have there, it would be a shame if it got broken...
Sapar
07/18/13
This storyline is getting pretty good right about now...
Also, that was a fast update, Ulti.
guestuser
07/20/13
I just noticed to orb sprites are the same sprites from pokemon mystery dungeon 8l
guestuser
01/19/14
contradiction123: YES.
lunerkirby
03/31/14
oooooooooooooo Ketio likes Caiya l o v e I smell love
guestuser
05/24/18
SPAM SHIP I SHIP THEM :OOOOOOOOOOOOO
07/18/13
Smarter Caiya x Keito
Luigi_96
07/18/13
That was... unexpected.
Ultimate Yoshi: You weren't kidding when you said mass. Holy cow.
Ecaroh914
07/18/13
D'aaaaw, willing to injure someone else to help her, how precious!
That is a lot of vids you have there it be such a shame if~
guestuser
07/18/13
Ecaroh914: DON'T DO A CREEPER REFERENCE. That's a nice relationship you have there, it would be a shame if it got broken...
Sapar
07/18/13
This storyline is getting pretty good right about now...
Also, that was a fast update, Ulti.
guestuser
07/20/13
I just noticed to orb sprites are the same sprites from pokemon mystery dungeon 8l
guestuser
01/19/14
contradiction123: YES.
lunerkirby
03/31/14
oooooooooooooo Ketio likes Caiya l o v e I smell love
guestuser
05/24/18
SPAM SHIP I SHIP THEM :OOOOOOOOOOOOO
Part 34
Ulti's Notes:
These are all the various final boss encounters from various Kirby games that I've already annotated previously. If you want a refresher, go check out Jetting Across the Ice, or just google them or something.
Original Author's Comment:
07/21/13
There are a few instances of what Caiya mentions in the last panel:
http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1075301/to-the-tower-part-3/
http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1269387/from-dream-adventures-part-37/
There are more instances of Keito getting crushed or being stood on in the comic, but these are the only 3 times he's forced the character off of him.
Poor Nightmare, not even the two Kirbies remember his existance. Also, they didn't bring up Yin-Yarn because, while the Epic Yarn storyline happened, they barely came into contact with Yin-Yarn cause Kaxo burned him to death. Therefore, they don't really remember him. Plus, none of this is Yarn based, so the same problem that the suggestion of Drawcia caused is evident here as well.
Also, Mass Attack and Return To Dream Land haven't happened yet.
There are a few instances of what Caiya mentions in the last panel:
http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1075301/to-the-tower-part-3/
http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1269387/from-dream-adventures-part-37/
There are more instances of Keito getting crushed or being stood on in the comic, but these are the only 3 times he's forced the character off of him.
Poor Nightmare, not even the two Kirbies remember his existance. Also, they didn't bring up Yin-Yarn because, while the Epic Yarn storyline happened, they barely came into contact with Yin-Yarn cause Kaxo burned him to death. Therefore, they don't really remember him. Plus, none of this is Yarn based, so the same problem that the suggestion of Drawcia caused is evident here as well.
Also, Mass Attack and Return To Dream Land haven't happened yet.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Alienoid
07/21/13
SO MANY ENEMIES
IT'S MARIO ALL OVER AGAIN
Luigi_96
07/21/13
Ooh, walls of text.
Also, he's dead.
1ce_k1d
07/21/13
Maybe all of them combined?
Knightkirby
07/21/13
How are you going to put text in those boxes. Also, what would happen to the clones if their boss was gone? GAAAAAAAAHHHINEEDTOKNOWSOMANYQUESTIONS
guestuser
07/21/13
IT'S TEELZY'S EVIL REIGN OF TERROR! (From battlestarx's comic) Who else would make Kirby clones? And besides, the dimensions have already crossed once right?
Also Teelzy was the villain going clone crazy once before. Maybe again?
Ecaroh914
07/22/13
but what about Marx? oh wait...
He's dead. For good.
Omega Kirby
07/22/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Kirby said Zero died TWICE, since he came back to life once, he might come back again, the same goes with Marx, and since pure hearts have been tricked into summoning NOVA before, it might have happened again. Also, as many enemies come back to life, the dead ones might as well
Omega Kirby
07/22/13
Heh, all those enemies dead, makes kirby sound like a murderer!
guestuser
01/19/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Actually, he was who I guesses first when speculating. Can't believe you guys forgot about him shame on you Kirby.
07/21/13
SO MANY ENEMIES
IT'S MARIO ALL OVER AGAIN
Luigi_96
07/21/13
Ooh, walls of text.
Also, he's dead.
1ce_k1d
07/21/13
Maybe all of them combined?
Knightkirby
07/21/13
How are you going to put text in those boxes. Also, what would happen to the clones if their boss was gone? GAAAAAAAAHHHINEEDTOKNOWSOMANYQUESTIONS
guestuser
07/21/13
IT'S TEELZY'S EVIL REIGN OF TERROR! (From battlestarx's comic) Who else would make Kirby clones? And besides, the dimensions have already crossed once right?
Also Teelzy was the villain going clone crazy once before. Maybe again?
Ecaroh914
07/22/13
but what about Marx? oh wait...
He's dead. For good.
Omega Kirby
07/22/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Kirby said Zero died TWICE, since he came back to life once, he might come back again, the same goes with Marx, and since pure hearts have been tricked into summoning NOVA before, it might have happened again. Also, as many enemies come back to life, the dead ones might as well
Omega Kirby
07/22/13
Heh, all those enemies dead, makes kirby sound like a murderer!
guestuser
01/19/14
Ultimate Yoshi: Actually, he was who I guesses first when speculating. Can't believe you guys forgot about him shame on you Kirby.
Part 35
Ulti's Notes:
This is the point where any illusion of the clones being evil is just gone now. While a couple of them, like Caiya and Vezo, kept up being a bit mean and fighting for a while, the others just kinda started cooperating. I do wish that I had been a bit more consistent with these guys, or at least had better justifications for why they switched sides.
Original Author's Comment:
07/22/13
This is quite an array of colors I've got going on here.
I think this may be the first page I've ever done where none of the panels are at 100% zoom.
This is quite an array of colors I've got going on here.
I think this may be the first page I've ever done where none of the panels are at 100% zoom.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
MecanicalCH
07/22/13
that umbrella in panel 2 made the speech bubble seem like a sign! XD
1ce_k1d
07/22/13
Talzo. He did it.
Alienoid
07/23/13
Because squad reunions are so heart-warming even villains can't help it.
Luigi_96
07/23/13
1ce_k1d: No way it's Talzo. How cliche would that be?
I actually have a theory, but I'm saying NOTHING in case I'm actually right.
EDIT (May 30, 2014): I don't remember what my theory was. :/
Ecaroh914
07/23/13
Alienoid: THAT, sir, is the best reason why.
Little Leaf
07/23/13
Luigi_96: say it... SAY IT... SAY IT SAY IT SAY IT!!! *goes insane trying to figure out the theory*
Jerdude14487
07/23/13
The "master" most likely didn't prevent them from reuniting because he either wanted them to reunite or he just didn't have the power to do so.
Sapar
07/24/13
I'ts Talzo's master from the end of "Jetting Across the Ice!"
guestuser
07/24/13
It's a conspiracy.
ASDFGHJKL
BolticBoom
07/24/13
did anyone look at dark kaxo because he looks suspicious
Sapar
07/24/13
Meh, I'm not worried about him.
Talzo
07/25/13
1ce_k1d: Why does everyone always blame me? And *heh, heh* even if I DID do it, it's because Master told me to get the kirbies on their own.
Luigi_96: How would it be cliche if I did it?
Jerdude14487: Of course Master has the power, how would he be able to bring me back, if he couldn't keep a couple of kirbies on one dimension!?!
Sapar: That's already been suggested.
07/22/13
that umbrella in panel 2 made the speech bubble seem like a sign! XD
1ce_k1d
07/22/13
Talzo. He did it.
Alienoid
07/23/13
Because squad reunions are so heart-warming even villains can't help it.
Luigi_96
07/23/13
1ce_k1d: No way it's Talzo. How cliche would that be?
I actually have a theory, but I'm saying NOTHING in case I'm actually right.
EDIT (May 30, 2014): I don't remember what my theory was. :/
Ecaroh914
07/23/13
Alienoid: THAT, sir, is the best reason why.
Little Leaf
07/23/13
Luigi_96: say it... SAY IT... SAY IT SAY IT SAY IT!!! *goes insane trying to figure out the theory*
Jerdude14487
07/23/13
The "master" most likely didn't prevent them from reuniting because he either wanted them to reunite or he just didn't have the power to do so.
Sapar
07/24/13
I'ts Talzo's master from the end of "Jetting Across the Ice!"
guestuser
07/24/13
It's a conspiracy.
ASDFGHJKL
BolticBoom
07/24/13
did anyone look at dark kaxo because he looks suspicious
Sapar
07/24/13
Meh, I'm not worried about him.
Talzo
07/25/13
1ce_k1d: Why does everyone always blame me? And *heh, heh* even if I DID do it, it's because Master told me to get the kirbies on their own.
Luigi_96: How would it be cliche if I did it?
Jerdude14487: Of course Master has the power, how would he be able to bring me back, if he couldn't keep a couple of kirbies on one dimension!?!
Sapar: That's already been suggested.
Part 36
Original Author's Comment:
07/24/13
Prepare to be underwhelmed.
Prepare to be underwhelmed.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/24/13
LOL. LOL I SAY LOL.
BattleStarX
07/24/13
Priorities.
MecanicalCH
07/24/13
XD first time i see a comic character goes to the bathroom!
Alienoid
07/24/13
Wat. I don't even-
WAT.
Sapar
07/24/13
Huh. Odd.
Sapar
07/25/13
Has any one noticed that the place the boss guy is in is similar to the place the kirbies are in now? OR that you can see the various areas in those bubbles?
MixMagi365
07/25/13
I think it's Wiz, he seems like the Person to do this, he's Magical, he has a Grudge against Kirby, and he definetly has the Power to Do this, Also, it could also be Dark Meta/Nightmare cuz they were able to Split kirby into Four different Beings
guestuser
07/25/13
i spy jellies attacking a living block.
PurpleChickenPineapple
07/25/13
Maybe... It's Ultimate Yoshi using magical author power- *shot*
Luigi_96
07/25/13
*hoping my theory is right*
Ecaroh914
07/25/13
Focus, evil guy, FOCUS!
LinkKirbyMario
07/25/13
Do you mind if I fall on the floor laughing?
*ROFL*
Sapar
07/25/13
LinkKirbyMario: YES. BY THE GREAT SUGAR NODDY, YES.
Syogren
07/25/13
Oh wow...brb dying of laughter.
Little Leaf
07/25/13
I hope this doesn't sound unrelated, but would any of you mind helping me with an audiobook I'm making for Kirby Adventure? I made a forum off of it so we can stay organized.
www.voiceactingkirbies.proboards.com (Yes, weird name O.o)
SkyyKirby44
07/26/13
Little Leaf: Sounds interesting....I wonder if I sound like Keito, Talzo, or Kaxo?
Fighter Dee
07/26/13
MixMagi365: When did Nightmare split Kirby in four?
DarkMario1000
07/26/13
Well, THAT HAPPENED!
guestuser
05/05/14
I'm amuse and depressed both at once the
Only word I can say is lol
pixlyJolt
09/11/18
What i was thinking
07/24/13
LOL. LOL I SAY LOL.
BattleStarX
07/24/13
Priorities.
MecanicalCH
07/24/13
XD first time i see a comic character goes to the bathroom!
Alienoid
07/24/13
Wat. I don't even-
WAT.
Sapar
07/24/13
Huh. Odd.
Sapar
07/25/13
Has any one noticed that the place the boss guy is in is similar to the place the kirbies are in now? OR that you can see the various areas in those bubbles?
MixMagi365
07/25/13
I think it's Wiz, he seems like the Person to do this, he's Magical, he has a Grudge against Kirby, and he definetly has the Power to Do this, Also, it could also be Dark Meta/Nightmare cuz they were able to Split kirby into Four different Beings
guestuser
07/25/13
i spy jellies attacking a living block.
PurpleChickenPineapple
07/25/13
Maybe... It's Ultimate Yoshi using magical author power- *shot*
Luigi_96
07/25/13
*hoping my theory is right*
Ecaroh914
07/25/13
Focus, evil guy, FOCUS!
LinkKirbyMario
07/25/13
Do you mind if I fall on the floor laughing?
*ROFL*
Sapar
07/25/13
LinkKirbyMario: YES. BY THE GREAT SUGAR NODDY, YES.
Syogren
07/25/13
Oh wow...brb dying of laughter.
Little Leaf
07/25/13
I hope this doesn't sound unrelated, but would any of you mind helping me with an audiobook I'm making for Kirby Adventure? I made a forum off of it so we can stay organized.
www.voiceactingkirbies.proboards.com (Yes, weird name O.o)
SkyyKirby44
07/26/13
Little Leaf: Sounds interesting....I wonder if I sound like Keito, Talzo, or Kaxo?
Fighter Dee
07/26/13
MixMagi365: When did Nightmare split Kirby in four?
DarkMario1000
07/26/13
Well, THAT HAPPENED!
guestuser
05/05/14
I'm amuse and depressed both at once the
Only word I can say is lol
pixlyJolt
09/11/18
What i was thinking
Part 37
Ulti's Notes:
And this is why the identity of the Master was nearly unguessable: because this is Master Green, an entirely non-magical fellow, despite one of the few hints for the Master's identity being that they had magic powers. Oops.
Anyways, Master Green is a jellyfish miniboss from exclusively Kirby's Dream Land 2 on the Game Boy, who gives the Spark ability when defeated. He's an extremely minor antagonist enemy with no clear story purpose or charaterization, he just exists as an obstacle in that game and nothing more.
Bringing him in here basically let me turn him into anything I wanted to, so the route I went was a disgruntled ex-minion type of character who really wanted to be above his level and go hard at something he wasn't cut out for. Master Green is essentially above his pay grade here, despite trying his best with a borrowed magical rod, which led to a sympathetically and comedically pathetic villain here.
Anyways, Master Green is a jellyfish miniboss from exclusively Kirby's Dream Land 2 on the Game Boy, who gives the Spark ability when defeated. He's an extremely minor antagonist enemy with no clear story purpose or charaterization, he just exists as an obstacle in that game and nothing more.
Bringing him in here basically let me turn him into anything I wanted to, so the route I went was a disgruntled ex-minion type of character who really wanted to be above his level and go hard at something he wasn't cut out for. Master Green is essentially above his pay grade here, despite trying his best with a borrowed magical rod, which led to a sympathetically and comedically pathetic villain here.
Original Author's Comment:
07/26/13
I have absolutely no idea what to say about this.
I'll just sit back and watch for any reactions that I receive.
The real question is: how exactly does he use the bathroom?
Also, the KA fan known as Little Leaf is creating an audiobook for Kirby Adventure, and needs some voice actors to play the characters in the comic. If you're interested, she made a forum about it all here: http://www.voiceactingkirbies.proboards.com/
I have absolutely no idea what to say about this.
I'll just sit back and watch for any reactions that I receive.
The real question is: how exactly does he use the bathroom?
Also, the KA fan known as Little Leaf is creating an audiobook for Kirby Adventure, and needs some voice actors to play the characters in the comic. If you're interested, she made a forum about it all here: http://www.voiceactingkirbies.proboards.com/
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
SkyyKirby44
07/26/13
.....Unexpected to say the least.....
1ce_k1d
07/26/13
That explains the jellyfish.
Djoing
07/26/13
WHOOOOOOOOOAAAAAA, IT'S JELLYFISH THING.
THE GREATEST OF ALL EVIL DUDES.
guestuser
07/26/13
....... wow....
MecanicalCH
07/26/13
0.o OMG! IS...who is he/she?
PurpleChickenPineapple
07/26/13
IT'S MASTER GREEN!
HAHAHAHA!
DarkMario1000
07/26/13
He's the "Master?"
Er, who is he?
Oh, a Master Green (according to commenters)? Awesome…I don't know what species that is! Unless 'Master Green' is the name of the species.
That still doesn't give me an idea what it is, so it looks like I've got some research to be (not) doin'!
Luigi_96
07/26/13
...that was...
Extremely unexpected.
guestuser
07/26/13
...
guestuser
07/26/13
What's an audio book?
MagicalMario
07/26/13
Am I the only one who remembers that "jellyfish thing" being UltimateYoshi's icon once?
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/26/13
Master Green was a mini boss in Kirby Dream Land 2 who gave the Spark Ability. I never expected him to be the villain of the arc! This plot twist reminds me why I love this comic!
MixMagi365
07/26/13
Magi: Wai- Wha? i coulda swo- you woulda- tha-
*BOOM*
Jack: Oh man, i think his brain just Exploded
guestuser
07/27/13
Nice job! Was not expecting a mini boss to steal the show! Looks like he has a little trinket to help boost his abilities.
Little Leaf
07/27/13
@Hi(:: An audiobook is basically reading a book in recording... You can either read everything alone, or team up with others :) Hope my comment helped.
Ecaroh914
07/27/13
Hm...Master Green...I see your reasoning...
Also, yay! Audio!
=D
Ultimate Yoshi
07/28/13
Jarkes: I just kind of... made the sprite? I don't really know what answer you're looking for.
DarkMario1000
07/28/13
Jarkes
Oh, LOL! Nostalgia hit me with that profile pic of yours, UY… =3
Ultimate Yoshi
07/28/13
Jarkes: I used my KDL2 drawing as a base.
guestuser
07/28/13
He looks a little more... cute than I'd think, but FANTASTICALNESS otherwise!
Sapar
07/29/13
Wow, he fits RedKirby's/my bill almost perfectly. it's original, it's unexpected, and he has kirby-esque eyes, so he could be Talzo's master as well. This, my friends, is da BIG BOSS!
BWT, RedKirby's conditions are on Part 26, originally hypothesizing about Hali being da big boss...
guestuser
07/29/13
Hmmmmm......I wonder what electric calamari tastes like............
guestuser
08/15/13
Sapar: I actually don't think he's Talzo's Master. How do explain the glowing red eyes he had? Or the fact that he was able to block out "certain aspects of Gigi's memory" as Shat'l put it. While he may be affiliated with Talzo's Gang I still think we have yet to see who the real Big Boss is.
Sapar
08/15/13
@RedKirby: the glowing eyes could have been an exaggeration, or his eyes could actually glow in the dark:) He also gots his awesome wand to block Shat'l from Gigi's memory.
pixlyJolt
09/11/18
What?
07/26/13
.....Unexpected to say the least.....
1ce_k1d
07/26/13
That explains the jellyfish.
Djoing
07/26/13
WHOOOOOOOOOAAAAAA, IT'S JELLYFISH THING.
THE GREATEST OF ALL EVIL DUDES.
guestuser
07/26/13
....... wow....
MecanicalCH
07/26/13
0.o OMG! IS...who is he/she?
PurpleChickenPineapple
07/26/13
IT'S MASTER GREEN!
HAHAHAHA!
DarkMario1000
07/26/13
He's the "Master?"
Er, who is he?
Oh, a Master Green (according to commenters)? Awesome…I don't know what species that is! Unless 'Master Green' is the name of the species.
That still doesn't give me an idea what it is, so it looks like I've got some research to be (not) doin'!
Luigi_96
07/26/13
...that was...
Extremely unexpected.
guestuser
07/26/13
...
guestuser
07/26/13
What's an audio book?
MagicalMario
07/26/13
Am I the only one who remembers that "jellyfish thing" being UltimateYoshi's icon once?
Blue Kirby the l33t
07/26/13
Master Green was a mini boss in Kirby Dream Land 2 who gave the Spark Ability. I never expected him to be the villain of the arc! This plot twist reminds me why I love this comic!
MixMagi365
07/26/13
Magi: Wai- Wha? i coulda swo- you woulda- tha-
*BOOM*
Jack: Oh man, i think his brain just Exploded
guestuser
07/27/13
Nice job! Was not expecting a mini boss to steal the show! Looks like he has a little trinket to help boost his abilities.
Little Leaf
07/27/13
@Hi(:: An audiobook is basically reading a book in recording... You can either read everything alone, or team up with others :) Hope my comment helped.
Ecaroh914
07/27/13
Hm...Master Green...I see your reasoning...
Also, yay! Audio!
=D
Ultimate Yoshi
07/28/13
Jarkes: I just kind of... made the sprite? I don't really know what answer you're looking for.
DarkMario1000
07/28/13
Jarkes
Oh, LOL! Nostalgia hit me with that profile pic of yours, UY… =3
Ultimate Yoshi
07/28/13
Jarkes: I used my KDL2 drawing as a base.
guestuser
07/28/13
He looks a little more... cute than I'd think, but FANTASTICALNESS otherwise!
Sapar
07/29/13
Wow, he fits RedKirby's/my bill almost perfectly. it's original, it's unexpected, and he has kirby-esque eyes, so he could be Talzo's master as well. This, my friends, is da BIG BOSS!
BWT, RedKirby's conditions are on Part 26, originally hypothesizing about Hali being da big boss...
guestuser
07/29/13
Hmmmmm......I wonder what electric calamari tastes like............
guestuser
08/15/13
Sapar: I actually don't think he's Talzo's Master. How do explain the glowing red eyes he had? Or the fact that he was able to block out "certain aspects of Gigi's memory" as Shat'l put it. While he may be affiliated with Talzo's Gang I still think we have yet to see who the real Big Boss is.
Sapar
08/15/13
@RedKirby: the glowing eyes could have been an exaggeration, or his eyes could actually glow in the dark:) He also gots his awesome wand to block Shat'l from Gigi's memory.
pixlyJolt
09/11/18
What?
Part 38
Ulti's Notes:
This was one of the few times in the entire history of my writing any comic, at all, where I actively scripted out the entire page in advance of making the page. I feel like it's a bit noticeable considering how many text bubbles I had to shrink the dialogue of in order to get them to fit within the panel: I didn't write any of the lines with panel consideration in mind.
Original Author's Comment:
07/30/13
This comic was a pain to make. It's probably my longest non-milestone comic.
The reason why it's so long is because there was a lot of talking that needed to be done before the upcoming battle (which I'm pretty certain you all knew was coming) and I didn't want to drag on with a bunch of comics with them talking even more, I've already got like three in a row earlier.
Plus, now you need to scroll down a bit before you get to see Not-Shat'l struck in the face with MG's magic blast, making it more of a shock.
This comic was a pain to make. It's probably my longest non-milestone comic.
The reason why it's so long is because there was a lot of talking that needed to be done before the upcoming battle (which I'm pretty certain you all knew was coming) and I didn't want to drag on with a bunch of comics with them talking even more, I've already got like three in a row earlier.
Plus, now you need to scroll down a bit before you get to see Not-Shat'l struck in the face with MG's magic blast, making it more of a shock.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
07/30/13
Nooooo! Not-Shat'l is dead, and a jellyfish killed him!
DarkNut255
07/30/13
I guess it's time to go jellyfishing.
Luigi_96
07/30/13
I was laughing through about half this page. XD
Ecaroh914
07/30/13
Master Green; a pushover since kdl2
(right)
that guy you know
07/30/13
That's clearly clone shat'l
guestuser
07/30/13
Umm.. Did any one realizes that the beam attack sprite looks like wave beam sprite from metroid fusion?
Anyway, great comic!
PurpleChickenPineapple
07/30/13
The wrath of a jellyfish is not something to be taken lightly.
Fighter Dee
07/30/13
The perfect time to destroy him is... ... ... ... ... NOW!
kplaylist22
07/30/13
SHAT'L!
Sapar
07/30/13
that guy you know: Given their current state of freaked-out-ness over a friend's death, it would be pretty easy for them to forget that it was Not-Shat'l who died instead of the real one. Although, If he was created by that thing once, it could be done again..
Also: Master Green, creating Kirby clones for evil purposes isn't exactly original, you know...
guestuser
07/30/13
*jumps out of nowhere and kicks Master Green in the face* Also, this is my first comment on the website. Ever.
MixMagi365
08/02/13
Why Didn't Not-Shat'l Bother to Duck?
DarkMario1000
08/06/13
Jarkes
07/30/13
Nooooo! Not-Shat'l is dead, and a jellyfish killed him!
DarkNut255
07/30/13
I guess it's time to go jellyfishing.
Luigi_96
07/30/13
I was laughing through about half this page. XD
Ecaroh914
07/30/13
Master Green; a pushover since kdl2
(right)
that guy you know
07/30/13
That's clearly clone shat'l
guestuser
07/30/13
Umm.. Did any one realizes that the beam attack sprite looks like wave beam sprite from metroid fusion?
Anyway, great comic!
PurpleChickenPineapple
07/30/13
The wrath of a jellyfish is not something to be taken lightly.
Fighter Dee
07/30/13
The perfect time to destroy him is... ... ... ... ... NOW!
kplaylist22
07/30/13
SHAT'L!
Sapar
07/30/13
that guy you know: Given their current state of freaked-out-ness over a friend's death, it would be pretty easy for them to forget that it was Not-Shat'l who died instead of the real one. Although, If he was created by that thing once, it could be done again..
Also: Master Green, creating Kirby clones for evil purposes isn't exactly original, you know...
guestuser
07/30/13
*jumps out of nowhere and kicks Master Green in the face* Also, this is my first comment on the website. Ever.
MixMagi365
08/02/13
Why Didn't Not-Shat'l Bother to Duck?
DarkMario1000
08/06/13
Jarkes
Part 39
Ulti's Notes:
And now, the third of the four ways you can sorta consider splitting up this segment. We got through the introduction, and through the clone battles, so now we're at the fight with Master Green, and he's evened the odds with some mind control.
We all know how much I love mind control, don't we?
We all know how much I love mind control, don't we?
Original Author's Comment:
08/01/13
The tables have been turned now that Master Green actually made a competent move.
Gonna link the Kirby Adventure voice acting forums again in case some of you missed it: http://www.voiceactingkirbies.proboards.com/
The tables have been turned now that Master Green actually made a competent move.
Gonna link the Kirby Adventure voice acting forums again in case some of you missed it: http://www.voiceactingkirbies.proboards.com/
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
08/01/13
Well now, that's an interesting effect.
sesareee
08/01/13
Jarkes: It seems like he wasnt affected
Luigi_96
08/01/13
Jarkes: It's not just you... I just noticed that now that you said it.
MixMagi365
08/02/13
Unless Master Green is-
Wait, why is Not-Kaxo not Hypnotized
I Was Going to Say, Unless Master Green joins the Fight (Which i doubt he will), Master Green is at a Disadvantage, Not-Shat'l Destroyed, and Not-Kaxo still having an Independent Mind
Ecaroh914
08/02/13
I wish I can audition :'c
Hey, wanna see if Destruction Series can animate this? I could ask if you want...
guestuser
08/02/13
Ecaroh914: ...Imagine Not-Aege.
guestuser
08/02/13
The answer to your predicament is simple.
We kill the Master Gree-(shot)
guestuser
08/02/13
Wahaha, what about me? Just so happened to see the comment when I was browsing through. LOL.
Sapar
08/02/13
Master Green probably has his reasons, but it's still gonna come back to bite him...
PurpleChickenPineapple
08/02/13
Well that certainly turned the tables.
guestuser
08/02/13
Lol shat'ls face is weird
Neon-J
08/08/13
To be fair, Not-Kaxo would probably want to fight anyway, being a clone of Kaxo. Probably.
08/01/13
Well now, that's an interesting effect.
sesareee
08/01/13
Jarkes: It seems like he wasnt affected
Luigi_96
08/01/13
Jarkes: It's not just you... I just noticed that now that you said it.
MixMagi365
08/02/13
Unless Master Green is-
Wait, why is Not-Kaxo not Hypnotized
I Was Going to Say, Unless Master Green joins the Fight (Which i doubt he will), Master Green is at a Disadvantage, Not-Shat'l Destroyed, and Not-Kaxo still having an Independent Mind
Ecaroh914
08/02/13
I wish I can audition :'c
Hey, wanna see if Destruction Series can animate this? I could ask if you want...
guestuser
08/02/13
Ecaroh914: ...Imagine Not-Aege.
guestuser
08/02/13
The answer to your predicament is simple.
We kill the Master Gree-(shot)
guestuser
08/02/13
Wahaha, what about me? Just so happened to see the comment when I was browsing through. LOL.
Sapar
08/02/13
Master Green probably has his reasons, but it's still gonna come back to bite him...
PurpleChickenPineapple
08/02/13
Well that certainly turned the tables.
guestuser
08/02/13
Lol shat'ls face is weird
Neon-J
08/08/13
To be fair, Not-Kaxo would probably want to fight anyway, being a clone of Kaxo. Probably.
Part 40
Ulti's Notes:
Mind control effects, aka using Photoshop to put a bevel and drop shadow effect on the characters. That's so weird in retrospect, honestly.
Original Author's Comment:
08/03/13
Not-Kaxo actually doesn't be a jerk!
Not-Kaxo actually doesn't be a jerk!
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Alienoid
08/03/13
Well that was a twist.
SkyyKirby44
08/03/13
Alienoid: Eh, kinda saw it coming.
Knightkirby
08/03/13
If real Kaxo knew that move in the real world... *shiver*
Ecaroh914
08/03/13
Nice, UY, nice spritin'.
Luigi_96
08/03/13
EPIC.
(Also Ulti I sent you a PM with some fan art. Did you see it?)
guestuser
08/03/13
Is it just me or did kirby and not-kirby switch places between panel 5 and 6?
Sapar
08/04/13
I knew that Master Green had a reason for leaving Not-Kaxo alone!(though it's not actually confirmed yet...) AND Not-Kaxo's still going to help!
I'm a Psychic Sugarman!
DarkMario1000
08/06/13
So…that is still over his head, ya know.
guestuser
08/07/13
@Vanilla milkshake: Not-Kirby was walking to the left in Panel 6.
161616
11/25/13
HOLY GOD HOW DID YOU CREATE THAT EFFECT ON THE CLONES?
guestuser
01/01/16
Fireball barrage... I. WANT. THAT.
08/03/13
Well that was a twist.
SkyyKirby44
08/03/13
Alienoid: Eh, kinda saw it coming.
Knightkirby
08/03/13
If real Kaxo knew that move in the real world... *shiver*
Ecaroh914
08/03/13
Nice, UY, nice spritin'.
Luigi_96
08/03/13
EPIC.
(Also Ulti I sent you a PM with some fan art. Did you see it?)
guestuser
08/03/13
Is it just me or did kirby and not-kirby switch places between panel 5 and 6?
Sapar
08/04/13
I knew that Master Green had a reason for leaving Not-Kaxo alone!(though it's not actually confirmed yet...) AND Not-Kaxo's still going to help!
I'm a Psychic Sugarman!
DarkMario1000
08/06/13
So…that is still over his head, ya know.
guestuser
08/07/13
@Vanilla milkshake: Not-Kirby was walking to the left in Panel 6.
161616
11/25/13
HOLY GOD HOW DID YOU CREATE THAT EFFECT ON THE CLONES?
guestuser
01/01/16
Fireball barrage... I. WANT. THAT.
Part 41
Original Author's Comment:
08/08/13
Not-Saia sure is doing a good job fighting them.
Vezo and Keito's lines in panel 1 were the original lines of Raize and Kirby in Part 39, respectively. Well, of course with a little bit changed in Keito's line.
Not-Saia sure is doing a good job fighting them.
Vezo and Keito's lines in panel 1 were the original lines of Raize and Kirby in Part 39, respectively. Well, of course with a little bit changed in Keito's line.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Knightkirby
08/08/13
How to fight like Saia: Jump, block, float. Repeat.
Luigi_96
08/08/13
Are Caiya and Saia the same pronunciation?
Ultimate Yoshi
08/08/13
Luigi_96: No, Caiya is with a hard 'k' sound whereas Saia is obviously with the softer 's' sound. The 'aia/aiya' part sounds the same, though, despite the spelling difference.
PurpleChickenPineapple
08/08/13
Just USE it!
Also landing on copy Caiya looks like it'd be both cold and painful.
Ecaroh914
08/08/13
That's gotta hurt for Vezo...landing on some spikey ice there....
Sapar
08/08/13
Heh, Not-Saia's just floating around, hardly fighting at all. Even when under mind control, she's a pacifist...ish.
Also, random Not-Kaxo in panel 7. Am I the only one to notice this?
Luigi_96
08/08/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Good GRAVY! I've been pronouncing Caiya wrong all these years!! Dx
Ultimate Yoshi
08/08/13
Luigi_96: While we're on the subject of pronunciation...
Keito is pronounced kite-oh, not kay-toh or key-toh.
Raize is pronounced like the word raise.
Shat'l is pronounced like the word shatter, only with the letter R replaced with the letter L.
Shadik is pronounced like shay-dick.
Vezo is pronounced vee-zoh, not veh-zoh.
and Kaxo is pronounced kacks-oh.
BattleStarX
08/08/13
Oooh... butt squish on pointy, spiky ice. Painful.
Ultimate Yoshi: Maybe you should consider pronunciation guides on the characters' pages.
Sapar
08/08/13
That would be very helpful.
Luigi_96
08/08/13
Ultimate Yoshi: O_o
I... I've been pronouncing Keito and Shadik wrong too! *sobs*
DarkMario1000
08/08/13
But, um, how did Not-Keito turn into Keito after panel three? Or Keito transform into Not-Keito before panel three? Or…
Ultimate Yoshi
08/08/13
DarkMario1000: I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about.
DarkMario1000
08/08/13
My eyes deceived me (again)…
From looking at the top portion vs. the bottom portion, it looked like Keito's darker portions of his sprite were darker and lighter respectively (I forgot what the technical term/phrase for that is). But they're the same colours.
guestuser
08/09/13
I always thought Vezo was pronounced "vay-zo."
08/08/13
How to fight like Saia: Jump, block, float. Repeat.
Luigi_96
08/08/13
Are Caiya and Saia the same pronunciation?
Ultimate Yoshi
08/08/13
Luigi_96: No, Caiya is with a hard 'k' sound whereas Saia is obviously with the softer 's' sound. The 'aia/aiya' part sounds the same, though, despite the spelling difference.
PurpleChickenPineapple
08/08/13
Just USE it!
Also landing on copy Caiya looks like it'd be both cold and painful.
Ecaroh914
08/08/13
That's gotta hurt for Vezo...landing on some spikey ice there....
Sapar
08/08/13
Heh, Not-Saia's just floating around, hardly fighting at all. Even when under mind control, she's a pacifist...ish.
Also, random Not-Kaxo in panel 7. Am I the only one to notice this?
Luigi_96
08/08/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Good GRAVY! I've been pronouncing Caiya wrong all these years!! Dx
Ultimate Yoshi
08/08/13
Luigi_96: While we're on the subject of pronunciation...
Keito is pronounced kite-oh, not kay-toh or key-toh.
Raize is pronounced like the word raise.
Shat'l is pronounced like the word shatter, only with the letter R replaced with the letter L.
Shadik is pronounced like shay-dick.
Vezo is pronounced vee-zoh, not veh-zoh.
and Kaxo is pronounced kacks-oh.
BattleStarX
08/08/13
Oooh... butt squish on pointy, spiky ice. Painful.
Ultimate Yoshi: Maybe you should consider pronunciation guides on the characters' pages.
Sapar
08/08/13
That would be very helpful.
Luigi_96
08/08/13
Ultimate Yoshi: O_o
I... I've been pronouncing Keito and Shadik wrong too! *sobs*
DarkMario1000
08/08/13
But, um, how did Not-Keito turn into Keito after panel three? Or Keito transform into Not-Keito before panel three? Or…
Ultimate Yoshi
08/08/13
DarkMario1000: I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about.
DarkMario1000
08/08/13
My eyes deceived me (again)…
From looking at the top portion vs. the bottom portion, it looked like Keito's darker portions of his sprite were darker and lighter respectively (I forgot what the technical term/phrase for that is). But they're the same colours.
guestuser
08/09/13
I always thought Vezo was pronounced "vay-zo."
Part 42
Original Author's Comment:
08/08/13
Shat'l has trouble learning general information about what's going on around him when his psychic abilities are being blocked.
Shat'l has trouble learning general information about what's going on around him when his psychic abilities are being blocked.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
LinkKirbyMario
08/08/13
Shat'l, this is why few Puffballs give long speechs during fights. HEY! You got +10 experience in the art of battle talk.
Luigi_96
08/08/13
Pfft. Fail. xD
BattleStarX
08/08/13
So much burninating, so little time.
DarkMario1000
08/08/13
Oh…wait…
Sapar
08/08/13
Saia's... actually pretty good at combat...
Ecaroh914
08/09/13
:T k, den...
Fighter Dee
08/09/13
Shat'l, I think you have to learn a little. Come on, not knowing when the battle is ending?
Sapar
08/10/13
Fighter Dee: Well, he's helpless without his psychic sight...
08/08/13
Shat'l, this is why few Puffballs give long speechs during fights. HEY! You got +10 experience in the art of battle talk.
Luigi_96
08/08/13
Pfft. Fail. xD
BattleStarX
08/08/13
So much burninating, so little time.
DarkMario1000
08/08/13
Oh…wait…
Sapar
08/08/13
Saia's... actually pretty good at combat...
Ecaroh914
08/09/13
:T k, den...
Fighter Dee
08/09/13
Shat'l, I think you have to learn a little. Come on, not knowing when the battle is ending?
Sapar
08/10/13
Fighter Dee: Well, he's helpless without his psychic sight...
Part 43
Original Author's Comment:
08/11/13
I developed this idea immediately after the previous comic with this group, but wanted to cut away to the other group of fighters before returning to this one to do the joke. I admittedly got a little antsy waiting even a little bit to do it, cause I liked the joke so much.
Both the fan art page and the links page have been updated recently! The fan art page has two new pictures, one by PurpleChickenPineapple and the other by Luigi_96! Speaking of the fan art page, DarkNut255, some of your submissions' links are no longer working, so if you could give me new links to those pictures, I would appreciate it.
As far as the Links page goes, I've updated a lot of the descriptions of the comics there, as well as re-adding Kirby: The Dee Army and removing My Game: Play and Kirby Blast, for those two comics no longer update. I also changed the order around a bit, for no real reason.
I developed this idea immediately after the previous comic with this group, but wanted to cut away to the other group of fighters before returning to this one to do the joke. I admittedly got a little antsy waiting even a little bit to do it, cause I liked the joke so much.
Both the fan art page and the links page have been updated recently! The fan art page has two new pictures, one by PurpleChickenPineapple and the other by Luigi_96! Speaking of the fan art page, DarkNut255, some of your submissions' links are no longer working, so if you could give me new links to those pictures, I would appreciate it.
As far as the Links page goes, I've updated a lot of the descriptions of the comics there, as well as re-adding Kirby: The Dee Army and removing My Game: Play and Kirby Blast, for those two comics no longer update. I also changed the order around a bit, for no real reason.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
08/11/13
Problem-solving like a pro. Haha
Sapar
08/11/13
Even Saia stopped a second to be surprised...
Ecaroh914
08/11/13
Yes, Keito, THAT'S how you use it.
DarkNut255
08/11/13
Poor Vezo.
Oh, and I sent you a PM about the fan art linking problem.
Fighter Dee
08/11/13
Thats an effective way of using something like that.
Tygah
08/11/13
That's exactly what I would have done! Haha
DarkMario1000
08/12/13
Sapar
Sapar
08/12/13
Him too, but no, I meant Saia.
08/11/13
Problem-solving like a pro. Haha
Sapar
08/11/13
Even Saia stopped a second to be surprised...
Ecaroh914
08/11/13
Yes, Keito, THAT'S how you use it.
DarkNut255
08/11/13
Poor Vezo.
Oh, and I sent you a PM about the fan art linking problem.
Fighter Dee
08/11/13
Thats an effective way of using something like that.
Tygah
08/11/13
That's exactly what I would have done! Haha
DarkMario1000
08/12/13
Sapar
Sapar
08/12/13
Him too, but no, I meant Saia.
Part 44
Ulti's Notes:
Since the clones existed, one of my goals with the fight sequence was to have them get erased from existence, since I didn't want a permanent addition of several character copies to the cast. Not-Shat'l's destruction was the instigator behind this fight scene, and now Not-Shadik has gone the same way.
Original Author's Comment:
08/14/13
Master Green's kind of a non-threatening villain, if you ask me.
I almost feel bad for the guy.
For some reason, I couldn't get the 'unmaking' effect to work as good with Not-Shadik as I did with Not-Shat'l. Oh well.
Master Green's kind of a non-threatening villain, if you ask me.
I almost feel bad for the guy.
For some reason, I couldn't get the 'unmaking' effect to work as good with Not-Shadik as I did with Not-Shat'l. Oh well.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Ecaroh914
08/14/13
O.O He's starting to get positive! Everyone run!
MecanicalCH
08/14/13
Ecaroh914: i got a side dish for him of Negative batteries! >:D *his guns make a characteristic click sound*
Luigi_96
08/14/13
This happens in video games.
"Hey, I haven't died yet!"
*die*
guestuser
08/15/13
Luigi_96:
I was playing kirby today and it happened to me!
Sapar
08/15/13
Shadik... is... TICKED.
Also, Not-Kaxo, you are so ASKING for it.
PurpleChickenPineapple
08/15/13
Not-Kaxo plays by his OWN rules!
Also yes Master Green. That's what they all say.
guestuser
08/15/13
I think that it would be cool if Shat't had an ability but didn't know about it, or gained an ability somehow. Unless Shat'l can eat enemies to copy their abilities... Or what if Shat'l's ability was Copy?
...I'll shut up now
Omega Kirby
08/16/13
@Stardust: No way, it should be ghost.
DarkMario1000
08/25/13
Let the insanity commence.
08/14/13
O.O He's starting to get positive! Everyone run!
MecanicalCH
08/14/13
Ecaroh914: i got a side dish for him of Negative batteries! >:D *his guns make a characteristic click sound*
Luigi_96
08/14/13
This happens in video games.
"Hey, I haven't died yet!"
*die*
guestuser
08/15/13
Luigi_96:
I was playing kirby today and it happened to me!
Sapar
08/15/13
Shadik... is... TICKED.
Also, Not-Kaxo, you are so ASKING for it.
PurpleChickenPineapple
08/15/13
Not-Kaxo plays by his OWN rules!
Also yes Master Green. That's what they all say.
guestuser
08/15/13
I think that it would be cool if Shat't had an ability but didn't know about it, or gained an ability somehow. Unless Shat'l can eat enemies to copy their abilities... Or what if Shat'l's ability was Copy?
...I'll shut up now
Omega Kirby
08/16/13
@Stardust: No way, it should be ghost.
DarkMario1000
08/25/13
Let the insanity commence.
Part 45
Original Author's Comment:
08/20/13
This comic was weird, because I knew what needed to happen (Master Green unmakes Not-Caiya) but not how it WOULD happen. Eventually, I created this.
This comic was weird, because I knew what needed to happen (Master Green unmakes Not-Caiya) but not how it WOULD happen. Eventually, I created this.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
08/20/13
Aaaaaaaand you fail!
Edit: Regarding the new LP, I've never beaten Pikmin. I got stuck in the lake of whatever area.
PurpleChickenPineapple
08/20/13
The tougher a battle gets the harder it is to tell who's on your side...
Especially when they look the same as your enemies.
guestuser
08/20/13
PurpleChickenPineapple: Iknowright
BattleStarX
08/20/13
Aaaaand that's why my "evil kirbies" were all inverted, much easier for the players to tell who's who and what's what.
I wonder where poor Shadik landed after that whap. Such an insult to his pride bein' whapped like that.
MixMagi365
08/20/13
My opinion on Master Green: Complete idiot
Sapar
08/20/13
Master Green, all it takes is a chop to the face to send you flying? You suck as an evil mastermind...
guestuser
08/21/13
Luigi_96: Is that a reference to asdf movie 6?
Luigi_96
08/21/13
@Over 9000: Yes. Yes it is.
guestuser
08/23/13
for a whap, shadik was flying pretty far...
guestuser
08/27/13
Luigi_96: ...
...EVERYBODY DO THE--*shot*
08/20/13
Aaaaaaaand you fail!
Edit: Regarding the new LP, I've never beaten Pikmin. I got stuck in the lake of whatever area.
PurpleChickenPineapple
08/20/13
The tougher a battle gets the harder it is to tell who's on your side...
Especially when they look the same as your enemies.
guestuser
08/20/13
PurpleChickenPineapple: Iknowright
BattleStarX
08/20/13
Aaaaand that's why my "evil kirbies" were all inverted, much easier for the players to tell who's who and what's what.
I wonder where poor Shadik landed after that whap. Such an insult to his pride bein' whapped like that.
MixMagi365
08/20/13
My opinion on Master Green: Complete idiot
Sapar
08/20/13
Master Green, all it takes is a chop to the face to send you flying? You suck as an evil mastermind...
guestuser
08/21/13
Luigi_96: Is that a reference to asdf movie 6?
Luigi_96
08/21/13
@Over 9000: Yes. Yes it is.
guestuser
08/23/13
for a whap, shadik was flying pretty far...
guestuser
08/27/13
Luigi_96: ...
...EVERYBODY DO THE--*shot*
Part 46
Ulti's Notes:
The first two panels and Not-Raize's subsequent deadpan stare still highly amuse me.
Original Author's Comment:
08/22/13
Shadik sure was sent flying.
Shadik sure was sent flying.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
08/23/13
Two-for-one squish. Well done, Shadik, I am so proud of you.
Sure, they were already KO'd, but that's beside the point!
Also nice to see a reference to the crossover.
Luigi_96
08/23/13
I like that Shadik sprite in the last panel. :B
Sapar
08/23/13
The clones are gonna be ticked when they find out what happened to Not-Caiya,Not-Shadik, and Not-Shat'l.
There are not a lot of nots in this post.
Alienoid
08/23/13
Sapar: Coincidence? I think not.
LinkKirbyMario
08/23/13
Ask for Shadik, and he shall be thrown into not-vezo. ... ^0-0^ *woreship*
guestuser
08/23/13
Convenient plot device, go!
Sapar
08/23/13
Alienoid: You're post did it too!
Coincidence? I THINK SO!
meta-eggplant
08/23/13
Is that Shadik sprite in the last panel custom?
08/23/13
Two-for-one squish. Well done, Shadik, I am so proud of you.
Sure, they were already KO'd, but that's beside the point!
Also nice to see a reference to the crossover.
Luigi_96
08/23/13
I like that Shadik sprite in the last panel. :B
Sapar
08/23/13
The clones are gonna be ticked when they find out what happened to Not-Caiya,Not-Shadik, and Not-Shat'l.
There are not a lot of nots in this post.
Alienoid
08/23/13
Sapar: Coincidence? I think not.
LinkKirbyMario
08/23/13
Ask for Shadik, and he shall be thrown into not-vezo. ... ^0-0^ *woreship*
guestuser
08/23/13
Convenient plot device, go!
Sapar
08/23/13
Alienoid: You're post did it too!
Coincidence? I THINK SO!
meta-eggplant
08/23/13
Is that Shadik sprite in the last panel custom?
Part 47
Original Author's Comment:
08/24/13
Master Green's kind of a pushover.
Oh yeah, Not-Kirby just got killed, maybe I should mention that.
Master Green's kind of a pushover.
Oh yeah, Not-Kirby just got killed, maybe I should mention that.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
08/24/13
I get the feeling this arc is almost over...
Djoing
08/24/13
Gonna predict all copies dissapear now.
PurpleChickenPineapple
08/24/13
It looks like Kirby wins with...
Smashing success!
Sapar
08/24/13
Djoing: That, or they just come out of Master Green's control. After all they are independent of him, even though he created them. He's not constantly using magic to keep them alive, whereas he IS to keep them under his control.
Now that that's over, time for WALLS OF TEXT!!
...Wait.
guestuser
08/24/13
I think that the clones will start going bananas.
Fusion Kirby
08/24/13
Or maybe even the place they are in starts to tear apart?
guestuser
08/25/13
@Guest:
I wonder how Keito will react to bananas...
DarkMario1000
08/25/13
Huh…his colours seem darker than before…
Most likely because that's Not-Raize…
Sapar
08/25/13
DarkMario1000: No, it's bacon-Raize.
RAIZIN.
Bwarrrrrr.
08/24/13
I get the feeling this arc is almost over...
Djoing
08/24/13
Gonna predict all copies dissapear now.
PurpleChickenPineapple
08/24/13
It looks like Kirby wins with...
Smashing success!
Sapar
08/24/13
Djoing: That, or they just come out of Master Green's control. After all they are independent of him, even though he created them. He's not constantly using magic to keep them alive, whereas he IS to keep them under his control.
Now that that's over, time for WALLS OF TEXT!!
...Wait.
guestuser
08/24/13
I think that the clones will start going bananas.
Fusion Kirby
08/24/13
Or maybe even the place they are in starts to tear apart?
guestuser
08/25/13
@Guest:
I wonder how Keito will react to bananas...
DarkMario1000
08/25/13
Huh…his colours seem darker than before…
Most likely because that's Not-Raize…
Sapar
08/25/13
DarkMario1000: No, it's bacon-Raize.
RAIZIN.
Bwarrrrrr.
Part 48
Original Author's Comment:
08/27/13
...
...
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
08/27/13
There is now a definite difference between Kaxo and Not-Kaxo.
Poor Green. ;n;
MecanicalCH
08/27/13
i am surprised Kaxo wanted to save not-kaxo and Green...
contradiction123
08/27/13
Do ho ho ho ho
Sapar
08/28/13
MecanicalCH: Because he's not a monster, he just likes to fight, and test people. Even he couldn't just let someone be left to a lifetime of loneliness.
Though it doesn't matter much, cause Greenie's still stuck.
DarkMario1000
08/31/13
Sapar
Kirbysmith [DJ]
09/03/13
Didn't you say you saw a door over here?
Koopa1018
09/13/13
I suspect that was a Sonic Generations reference. Was that a Sonic Generations reference?
08/27/13
There is now a definite difference between Kaxo and Not-Kaxo.
Poor Green. ;n;
MecanicalCH
08/27/13
i am surprised Kaxo wanted to save not-kaxo and Green...
contradiction123
08/27/13
Do ho ho ho ho
Sapar
08/28/13
MecanicalCH: Because he's not a monster, he just likes to fight, and test people. Even he couldn't just let someone be left to a lifetime of loneliness.
Though it doesn't matter much, cause Greenie's still stuck.
DarkMario1000
08/31/13
Sapar
Kirbysmith [DJ]
09/03/13
Didn't you say you saw a door over here?
Koopa1018
09/13/13
I suspect that was a Sonic Generations reference. Was that a Sonic Generations reference?
Part 49
Ulti's Notes:
And that wraps up that.
Original Author's Comment:
08/30/13
Not-Kaxo has a knack for attracting parasols to the back of his head.
Not-Kaxo has a knack for attracting parasols to the back of his head.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Fusion Kirby
08/30/13
When suddenly you're in a new place but it's not new in the slightest.
Luigi_96
08/30/13
So there are... 4 clones left, right?
contradiction123
08/30/13
ha ha ha bad things happen to bad people
you know what they say
nobody likes a karma Houdini
wait
Ecaroh914
08/30/13
Not-Kaxo doesn't have any morals.
HMM, I WONDER WHY.
Omega Kirby
08/30/13
Ecaroh914: WHat do you mean?? Why??
Syogren
08/30/13
And so Not-Kaxo has been punished, and Gigi will never screw up your characters' personalities again--wait what?
Sapar
08/30/13
Honestly, I expected Kaxo to burn him.
Or give him a giant slap across the face.
DarkMario1000
09/01/13
Now I have to go back page by page of this segment to see if Master of Puppets was due to Gigi slightly not accurately pinpointing character personalities.
Then again, that probably isn't how Master of Puppets came to be; rather, she was how it made the segment work…
UNLESS I COULD BE WRONG, IN WHICH CASE *goes page by page back*
DarkMario1000
09/01/13
Well, it CLEARED it up, but that doesn't necessarily mean that Master of Puppets happened because of the 2nd crossover.
guestuser
01/20/14
Wait Vezo, you're right...
Syogren
03/06/14
DarkMario1000: That was a joke.
DarkMario1000
03/10/14
Syogren
Thank you for waking me up from my slumber. I almost had forgotten that I existed on here.
08/30/13
When suddenly you're in a new place but it's not new in the slightest.
Luigi_96
08/30/13
So there are... 4 clones left, right?
contradiction123
08/30/13
ha ha ha bad things happen to bad people
you know what they say
nobody likes a karma Houdini
wait
Ecaroh914
08/30/13
Not-Kaxo doesn't have any morals.
HMM, I WONDER WHY.
Omega Kirby
08/30/13
Ecaroh914: WHat do you mean?? Why??
Syogren
08/30/13
And so Not-Kaxo has been punished, and Gigi will never screw up your characters' personalities again--wait what?
Sapar
08/30/13
Honestly, I expected Kaxo to burn him.
Or give him a giant slap across the face.
DarkMario1000
09/01/13
Now I have to go back page by page of this segment to see if Master of Puppets was due to Gigi slightly not accurately pinpointing character personalities.
Then again, that probably isn't how Master of Puppets came to be; rather, she was how it made the segment work…
UNLESS I COULD BE WRONG, IN WHICH CASE *goes page by page back*
DarkMario1000
09/01/13
Well, it CLEARED it up, but that doesn't necessarily mean that Master of Puppets happened because of the 2nd crossover.
guestuser
01/20/14
Wait Vezo, you're right...
Syogren
03/06/14
DarkMario1000: That was a joke.
DarkMario1000
03/10/14
Syogren
Thank you for waking me up from my slumber. I almost had forgotten that I existed on here.
Part 50
Ulti's Notes:
And now for the fourth section of this segment, the epilogue. I've already done epilogues for other longer segments before, but none were quite as substantial as this. Being able to wrap up a story effectively is sometimes as important as the rest of the story.
Original Author's Comment:
08/31/13
Not-Keito isn't going to stay on the Squad. I actually really couldn't think of what he's going to do now. So I basically wrote him in the same predicament I was in.
Not-Keito isn't going to stay on the Squad. I actually really couldn't think of what he's going to do now. So I basically wrote him in the same predicament I was in.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
08/31/13
Not-Keito shall be a member of a traveling circus in my world.
Omega Kirby
08/31/13
That...is...not...what I expected to happen...
Luigi_96
08/31/13
Heh, how nice of not-Vezo to want to fix Kiina!
Sapar
08/31/13
I actually didn't expect the clones to be a permanent plot point, much less them staying on the Squad.
*clears throat* WHAT A TWIST!
Koopa1018
09/13/13
Because that's always how it goes. You only see the last of a villain when they get killed off, and even that isn't always permanent.
08/31/13
Not-Keito shall be a member of a traveling circus in my world.
Omega Kirby
08/31/13
That...is...not...what I expected to happen...
Luigi_96
08/31/13
Heh, how nice of not-Vezo to want to fix Kiina!
Sapar
08/31/13
I actually didn't expect the clones to be a permanent plot point, much less them staying on the Squad.
*clears throat* WHAT A TWIST!
Koopa1018
09/13/13
Because that's always how it goes. You only see the last of a villain when they get killed off, and even that isn't always permanent.
Part 51
Ulti's Notes:
Since some of the clones survived the ordeal, I still didn't really want them all to stick around, so I sent them off on their various directions instead of killing them off.
With Vezo, I was able to take the opportunity to do more teasing about his mysterious past. Not that it really amounted to much in the end, but I intended it to originally matter, so... yeah.
With Vezo, I was able to take the opportunity to do more teasing about his mysterious past. Not that it really amounted to much in the end, but I intended it to originally matter, so... yeah.
Original Author's Comment:
09/01/13
In other news, Master Of Puppets has now tied with Jetting Across The Ice for longest segment.
In other news, Master Of Puppets has now tied with Jetting Across The Ice for longest segment.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
09/01/13
Must be weird to talk to a clone of yourself...
Sapar
09/01/13
I suspect that there is still moar to come, so...
JETTING ACROSS TE ICE IS RUNNER-UP!
DarkMario1000
09/01/13
In terms of the clones were speaking as if they lived the lives of the originals—sure, they share the same memories, but still…then again, it was also kind of *ahem* comical.
Luigi_96
guestuser
11/29/13
I was just defrosted by Kazo, and Shat'l told me that you were leaving!
...Is that Kaxo being nice, or being a pyromaniac?
09/01/13
Must be weird to talk to a clone of yourself...
Sapar
09/01/13
I suspect that there is still moar to come, so...
JETTING ACROSS TE ICE IS RUNNER-UP!
DarkMario1000
09/01/13
In terms of the clones were speaking as if they lived the lives of the originals—sure, they share the same memories, but still…then again, it was also kind of *ahem* comical.
Luigi_96
guestuser
11/29/13
I was just defrosted by Kazo, and Shat'l told me that you were leaving!
...Is that Kaxo being nice, or being a pyromaniac?
Part 52
Original Author's Comment:
09/01/13
I wonder who that letter could be for.
Except I really don't because I know who it's for.
I wonder who that letter could be for.
Except I really don't because I know who it's for.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
09/01/13
Just as long as I don't suddenly find a certain dark pyromaniac poppin' up in my kirby-verse (without warning, at least,) I can simply be curious as to who it's for.
Sapar
09/01/13
Wow. That was a fast update.
Ecaroh914
09/02/13
The letter's either for Raven or Green.
I JUST KNOW IT! |:T
Luigi_96
09/02/13
Hmmm. Mysterious.
DarkMario1000
09/02/13
Well, Kaxo? What have you in store for us?
1ce_k1d
09/02/13
Why does Shat'l have to ask what's on Kaxo's mind? Wasn't he psychic?
Omega Kirby
09/02/13
1ce_k1d: He used up most of his energy...
Knightkirby
09/05/13
he looks epic in the last panel saying, "I have a letter to write." BUMBUMBUM
09/01/13
Just as long as I don't suddenly find a certain dark pyromaniac poppin' up in my kirby-verse (without warning, at least,) I can simply be curious as to who it's for.
Sapar
09/01/13
Wow. That was a fast update.
Ecaroh914
09/02/13
The letter's either for Raven or Green.
I JUST KNOW IT! |:T
Luigi_96
09/02/13
Hmmm. Mysterious.
DarkMario1000
09/02/13
Well, Kaxo? What have you in store for us?
1ce_k1d
09/02/13
Why does Shat'l have to ask what's on Kaxo's mind? Wasn't he psychic?
Omega Kirby
09/02/13
1ce_k1d: He used up most of his energy...
Knightkirby
09/05/13
he looks epic in the last panel saying, "I have a letter to write." BUMBUMBUM
Part 53
Ulti's Notes:
The Mirror World is the setting of Kirby & The Amazing Mirror on the GBA, which I've mentioned before. The Rainbow Islands, meanwhile, are the setting of Kirby's Dream Land 2 on the Game Boy, which was potentially implied based on the combination of Kirby's explanation of who Master Green was in-comic as well as my explanation in these annotations. There's nothing significant about the islands aside from the fact that they're connected via rainbow bridges, and are a locale on Planet Popstar.
Original Author's Comment:
09/02/13
They never DID find out a winner for their first match.
They never DID find out a winner for their first match.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
guestuser
09/02/13
oh god, that's just hilarious...
Ninnco
09/02/13
I bet Not-Raize wins.
MecanicalCH
09/02/13
Ultimate Yoshi: will they find now?
DarkMario1000
09/02/13
Gotta enjoy the gags in this comic.
Luigi_96
09/02/13
Defeat your clone, Raize! >:D
Sapar
09/02/13
DarkMario1000: At least they didn't break out the Pep brews...
guestuser
03/20/14
I was voting on Raize the entire time, you?
guestuser
04/03/16
I hope the clones that are leaving return sometime
09/02/13
oh god, that's just hilarious...
Ninnco
09/02/13
I bet Not-Raize wins.
MecanicalCH
09/02/13
Ultimate Yoshi: will they find now?
DarkMario1000
09/02/13
Gotta enjoy the gags in this comic.
Luigi_96
09/02/13
Defeat your clone, Raize! >:D
Sapar
09/02/13
DarkMario1000: At least they didn't break out the Pep brews...
guestuser
03/20/14
I was voting on Raize the entire time, you?
guestuser
04/03/16
I hope the clones that are leaving return sometime
Part 54
Original Author's Comment:
09/03/13
I miss the bumblebee coloration of this place.
If anybody wants to use Master Green in anything KSSU styled, the sprites that I made for him can now be found at the Smack Jeeves comic "Kirby's Spriters Resort".
I miss the bumblebee coloration of this place.
If anybody wants to use Master Green in anything KSSU styled, the sprites that I made for him can now be found at the Smack Jeeves comic "Kirby's Spriters Resort".
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
09/03/13
They need to remove that soda machine.
BattleStarX
09/03/13
Mmm... soda...
MecanicalCH
09/03/13
all this time...so much soda would had been bad isnt? O.o
Sapar
09/03/13
Silly Ryka, why u so silly? *U*
Luigi_96
09/03/13
Jarkes: Ulti already answered the question of why we don't see the other divisions here: http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1707175/a-different-type-of-comic/
Panel 13, to be specific.
castleofwarriors
09/04/13
Jarkes: That's Meliai.
Koopa1018
09/13/13
Barely able to walk, let alone do anything remotely similar to helpful for the KAS.
guestuser
10/04/13
If Meliai doesn't like Ryka drinking soda in the infirmary, why doesn't she just remove the vending machine?
guestuser
01/20/14
Ah Ryka, haven't seen you in a while. I see you're inhaling a soda.
09/03/13
They need to remove that soda machine.
BattleStarX
09/03/13
Mmm... soda...
MecanicalCH
09/03/13
all this time...so much soda would had been bad isnt? O.o
Sapar
09/03/13
Silly Ryka, why u so silly? *U*
Luigi_96
09/03/13
Jarkes: Ulti already answered the question of why we don't see the other divisions here: http://kirbysadventure.smackjeeves.com/comics/1707175/a-different-type-of-comic/
Panel 13, to be specific.
castleofwarriors
09/04/13
Jarkes: That's Meliai.
Koopa1018
09/13/13
Barely able to walk, let alone do anything remotely similar to helpful for the KAS.
guestuser
10/04/13
If Meliai doesn't like Ryka drinking soda in the infirmary, why doesn't she just remove the vending machine?
guestuser
01/20/14
Ah Ryka, haven't seen you in a while. I see you're inhaling a soda.
Part 55
Ulti's Notes:
Everyone was concerned about Master Green being stuck in a void, but nobody batted an eye about the Jellifrizz horde.
This was a page that I wasn't originally going to do, but then I had an idea and sent out a private message to a certain BattleStarX a few pages earlier. Since he was pretty flexible, I had the thought of giving Green a second chance, and letting him escape the void into the dimension of Kirby's Dream Adventure.
Only, of course, if BSX accepted him, but BSX welcomed the idea with open arms and happily took on the new character. So, while this was the last time I used Master Green, the character's story didn't end here and he got sent to the comic of KDA for a second chance on life and redemption arc.
I don't have any of those pages, though, because Green got pretty integrated into the world of KDA. As a result, it was less of a crossover and more just... a new character, so sharing what happened with Green would've just basically been posting KDA pages as one might normally expect.
BSX also admittedly somewhat unceremoniously introduced Green into his comic, without much focus or attention. A lot of Greens' story took place amidst other events, so there was never one single chapter I could consider "the Master Green arc" that would be postable anyway.
So yeah, unfortunately it's a bit of a shame to not have the exact specifics of what happened with Master Green anymore, but at least leaving it ambiguous is still somewhat satisfying in its own way. It didn't end in a confusing note for him here, it's just left up to interpretation what happened next for him now.
This was a page that I wasn't originally going to do, but then I had an idea and sent out a private message to a certain BattleStarX a few pages earlier. Since he was pretty flexible, I had the thought of giving Green a second chance, and letting him escape the void into the dimension of Kirby's Dream Adventure.
Only, of course, if BSX accepted him, but BSX welcomed the idea with open arms and happily took on the new character. So, while this was the last time I used Master Green, the character's story didn't end here and he got sent to the comic of KDA for a second chance on life and redemption arc.
I don't have any of those pages, though, because Green got pretty integrated into the world of KDA. As a result, it was less of a crossover and more just... a new character, so sharing what happened with Green would've just basically been posting KDA pages as one might normally expect.
BSX also admittedly somewhat unceremoniously introduced Green into his comic, without much focus or attention. A lot of Greens' story took place amidst other events, so there was never one single chapter I could consider "the Master Green arc" that would be postable anyway.
So yeah, unfortunately it's a bit of a shame to not have the exact specifics of what happened with Master Green anymore, but at least leaving it ambiguous is still somewhat satisfying in its own way. It didn't end in a confusing note for him here, it's just left up to interpretation what happened next for him now.
Original Author's Comment:
09/04/13
Is it just me, or is the Sprite Comic section of the Smack Jeeves awards biased towards Mega Man comics?
Is it just me, or is the Sprite Comic section of the Smack Jeeves awards biased towards Mega Man comics?
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
1ce_k1d
09/04/13
Smack jeeves awards?
Djoing
09/04/13
Noooo, only 7 of the 15 are megaman comics.
Just a little less than half of them.
...
Luigi_96
09/04/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Maybe a little. Which is sad, cuz there are a bunch of good Kirby ones.
MecanicalCH
09/04/13
why suddenly theres a green jellyfish on my desk?
BattleStarX
09/04/13
That's what I thought too, UY. Not a single Kirby comic on the listing. How rude.
that guy you know
09/04/13
7 megaman comics seems like a little too much to me.
Sapar
09/05/13
How shame.
At least Master Green's starting to get a new philosophy...
guestuser
09/05/13
*cough20tkcough*
44Cinder44
09/05/13
@Over 9000: *looks for like button, then remembers this isn't facebook*
Oh yeah.
*likes anyways*
guestuser
09/05/13
$50 says that the portal takes him straight towards the Big Bad. $10 more says that he will force Master Green to become his underling so he can help him teabag Kirby and pals and FUCK YOU SNAFU COMICS *GJKF;NRWAOGFRFJA*-- *CONNECTION TERMINATED*
guestuser
09/05/13
I smell a villain team-up...
44Cinder44
09/06/13
I have a feeling this is going to result in a crossover.
DarkMario1000
09/14/13
GOOD THING IT'S TYPED! XD
09/04/13
Smack jeeves awards?
Djoing
09/04/13
Noooo, only 7 of the 15 are megaman comics.
Just a little less than half of them.
...
Luigi_96
09/04/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Maybe a little. Which is sad, cuz there are a bunch of good Kirby ones.
MecanicalCH
09/04/13
why suddenly theres a green jellyfish on my desk?
BattleStarX
09/04/13
That's what I thought too, UY. Not a single Kirby comic on the listing. How rude.
that guy you know
09/04/13
7 megaman comics seems like a little too much to me.
Sapar
09/05/13
How shame.
At least Master Green's starting to get a new philosophy...
guestuser
09/05/13
*cough20tkcough*
44Cinder44
09/05/13
@Over 9000: *looks for like button, then remembers this isn't facebook*
Oh yeah.
*likes anyways*
guestuser
09/05/13
$50 says that the portal takes him straight towards the Big Bad. $10 more says that he will force Master Green to become his underling so he can help him teabag Kirby and pals and FUCK YOU SNAFU COMICS *GJKF;NRWAOGFRFJA*-- *CONNECTION TERMINATED*
guestuser
09/05/13
I smell a villain team-up...
44Cinder44
09/06/13
I have a feeling this is going to result in a crossover.
DarkMario1000
09/14/13
GOOD THING IT'S TYPED! XD
Part 56
Ulti's Notes:
And here's me, finally, FINALLY, addressing the Kirby-shaped elephant in the room. It was a bit forced into here, but at this point, I really needed some drastic measures to properly course-correct him. Now that I've pointed it out and addressed his grumpiness, I was able to try and fix it properly going forward as well.
Original Author's Comment:
09/05/13
Kirby never did get to rest and think about this thing until now, considering the crossover immediately led into Master of Puppets. So this little epilogue section is moreso for the last few segments of Chapter 3 rather than simply Master of Puppets.
Kirby never did get to rest and think about this thing until now, considering the crossover immediately led into Master of Puppets. So this little epilogue section is moreso for the last few segments of Chapter 3 rather than simply Master of Puppets.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
BattleStarX
09/05/13
Ya know, KA-Kirby, it's not bad to be energetic and happy, but don't over-do it. The kirby-multiverse needs a nice balance of their Kirby characters.
Luigi_96
09/05/13
But don't go overboard on the cheerfulness... Then you'll just be annoying.
that guy you know
09/05/13
too much optimism is not a good thing.
Sapar
09/05/13
Pessimism is funny and delicious.
Ecaroh914
09/06/13
It's good to be happy, as you'll live a bit longer, k, KA-Kirby?
1ce_k1d
09/06/13
Sometimes, to see a rainbow, you must look past the rain.
Also look away from the sun.
Little Leaf
09/06/13
Sapar: It tastes like ice cream!! *licks the pessimism on the comics*
Sapar
09/06/13
Little Leaf: That's MY pessimism! *cooks Little Leaf and seasons with pessimism*
kirby knight 1000
09/06/13
should i go to the beginning and read everything? are you an evil dictator that answers yes? the world will never know.
Little Leaf
09/07/13
Sapar: *escapes out of wherever I'm being cooked and sprays sapar with pessimism spray (Like pepper spray)* TAKE THAT!
Sapar
09/07/13
Little Leaf: *eats pessimism spray and vomits it up on Little Leaf* MWAHAHAHAHA!!!
guestuser
01/20/14
😄
Syogren
03/06/14
@Toolazytogetanaccount: ^^^ THIS
09/05/13
Ya know, KA-Kirby, it's not bad to be energetic and happy, but don't over-do it. The kirby-multiverse needs a nice balance of their Kirby characters.
Luigi_96
09/05/13
But don't go overboard on the cheerfulness... Then you'll just be annoying.
that guy you know
09/05/13
too much optimism is not a good thing.
Sapar
09/05/13
Pessimism is funny and delicious.
Ecaroh914
09/06/13
It's good to be happy, as you'll live a bit longer, k, KA-Kirby?
1ce_k1d
09/06/13
Sometimes, to see a rainbow, you must look past the rain.
Also look away from the sun.
Little Leaf
09/06/13
Sapar: It tastes like ice cream!! *licks the pessimism on the comics*
Sapar
09/06/13
Little Leaf: That's MY pessimism! *cooks Little Leaf and seasons with pessimism*
kirby knight 1000
09/06/13
should i go to the beginning and read everything? are you an evil dictator that answers yes? the world will never know.
Little Leaf
09/07/13
Sapar: *escapes out of wherever I'm being cooked and sprays sapar with pessimism spray (Like pepper spray)* TAKE THAT!
Sapar
09/07/13
Little Leaf: *eats pessimism spray and vomits it up on Little Leaf* MWAHAHAHAHA!!!
guestuser
01/20/14
😄
Syogren
03/06/14
@Toolazytogetanaccount: ^^^ THIS
Part 57
Ulti's Notes:
I would later use the 'mlgafrgn' groan in a page of Yoshi & Kirby.
Original Author's Comment:
09/07/13
Looks like Not-Keito wasn't quite over his first encounter with regular Keito.
Fun fact: Keito has the most appearances in the entirety of Kirby Adventure, with 172 appearances. He even has more than Kirby himself (who has the next highest at 159).
Looks like Not-Keito wasn't quite over his first encounter with regular Keito.
Fun fact: Keito has the most appearances in the entirety of Kirby Adventure, with 172 appearances. He even has more than Kirby himself (who has the next highest at 159).
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Luigi_96
09/07/13
Ouch...
BTW, loving this daily update schedule.
kirby knight 1000
09/07/13
mlgafrgn?
best word ever
BattleStarX
09/07/13
Same thing's happened on my comic. Despite his name being in the title, our Kirbies do seem to follow someone else's shadow.
DarkNut255
09/07/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Eh, it's probably From Dream Adventures and Such An Odd Eight that give Keito an edge.
guestuser
09/07/13
that was some payback...
DarkMario1000
09/14/13
Keito Adventure. XD
Sapar
09/17/13
*deep breath* HOW DID I MISS THIS COMIC!?!?
guestuser
10/04/13
Return of the mlgafrgn!
guestuser
01/04/14
Payback
pixlyJolt
09/12/18
Kieto is awesome
09/07/13
Ouch...
BTW, loving this daily update schedule.
kirby knight 1000
09/07/13
mlgafrgn?
best word ever
BattleStarX
09/07/13
Same thing's happened on my comic. Despite his name being in the title, our Kirbies do seem to follow someone else's shadow.
DarkNut255
09/07/13
Ultimate Yoshi: Eh, it's probably From Dream Adventures and Such An Odd Eight that give Keito an edge.
guestuser
09/07/13
that was some payback...
DarkMario1000
09/14/13
Keito Adventure. XD
Sapar
09/17/13
*deep breath* HOW DID I MISS THIS COMIC!?!?
guestuser
10/04/13
Return of the mlgafrgn!
guestuser
01/04/14
Payback
pixlyJolt
09/12/18
Kieto is awesome
Part 58
Ulti's Notes:
One of the things that rubs me the wrong way about how I handled Caiya is that even when I tried to focus on her smarter personality, and make her feel like a bit more of a single-package character than one single solitary character... she's still a bit sided towards the intelligent personality.
It gets considered the 'main' personality, and her dumber side is treated more as an obstacle and comic relief than anything pleasant. At least when written by me, it was never quite fleshed out properly, and I don't think pages like this were enough.
Really, it's just that her dumb personality was a mistake to begin with, being too one-note and too little of a character.
It gets considered the 'main' personality, and her dumber side is treated more as an obstacle and comic relief than anything pleasant. At least when written by me, it was never quite fleshed out properly, and I don't think pages like this were enough.
Really, it's just that her dumb personality was a mistake to begin with, being too one-note and too little of a character.
Original Author's Comment:
09/07/13
Writing the dialogue for this one was hard because it was hard to give Kirby lines that didn't make him sound like a jerk to Caiya's sillier personality.
I'm still not completely sure I managed that. Oh well.
Writing the dialogue for this one was hard because it was hard to give Kirby lines that didn't make him sound like a jerk to Caiya's sillier personality.
I'm still not completely sure I managed that. Oh well.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Blue Kirby the l33t
09/07/13
Ultimate Yoshi: CAIYA X KIRBY OTP
Ecaroh914
09/07/13
Ultimate Yoshi: TEH HA!
Adorable, dude! I didn't see this heart-touching moment coming up! :D And the dialouge is great!
Edit: Cool background bro. Did you recolor that yourself?
BattleStarX
09/07/13
Aww, how cute.
44Cinder44
09/07/13
Blue Kirby the l33t: Indeed.
Alienoid
09/07/13
Blue Kirby the l33t: Dangit I wanted to say that.
Fusion Kirby
09/07/13
Blue Kirby the l33t: You quote thief.
I was going to say that there could be a romance popping up, but you sir, have stolen the opportunity.
Sapar
09/07/13
I doubt that it's romance, but rather more of a closer companionship forming...
I've been waiting for a while to have this be addressed, actually. After what happened with Not-Caiya, it was sorta inevitable.
Luigi_96
09/08/13
D'aww. :B
Syogren
09/08/13
Blue Kirby the l33t: I SHIP IT.
Alexini0699
09/08/13
Ship all Shipppssss!!!
guestuser
09/08/13
aw... that's cute...
guestuser
09/08/13
And let the shipping begin.
guestuser
09/08/13
Blue Kirby the l33t: SUPPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORT
Jerdude14487
09/08/13
SHIP IT LIKE IT'S FEDEX!
SHIP EET!
Omega Kirby
09/08/13
And it can't have been easy on Caiya, having the one person that understands you, being murdered by Green, I'm sure!
44Cinder44
09/09/13
Jerdude14487: SHIPPED LIKE FEDEX
DarkMario1000
09/14/13
SO THAT MEANS I SHOULD ADD TO IT!!!
Well, I didn't expect this FEEL in this comic page.
guestuser
01/20/14
So touching. Caiya x Kirby FTW!
guestuser
01/20/14
@Kirbylubber: Yes, yes indeed.
guestuser
02/02/14
Dose this means that Caiya likes Kirby
SilverIke
08/04/15
44Cinder44: Caiya + Kirby = Sooo cute
09/07/13
Ultimate Yoshi: CAIYA X KIRBY OTP
Ecaroh914
09/07/13
Ultimate Yoshi: TEH HA!
Adorable, dude! I didn't see this heart-touching moment coming up! :D And the dialouge is great!
Edit: Cool background bro. Did you recolor that yourself?
BattleStarX
09/07/13
Aww, how cute.
44Cinder44
09/07/13
Blue Kirby the l33t: Indeed.
Alienoid
09/07/13
Blue Kirby the l33t: Dangit I wanted to say that.
Fusion Kirby
09/07/13
Blue Kirby the l33t: You quote thief.
I was going to say that there could be a romance popping up, but you sir, have stolen the opportunity.
Sapar
09/07/13
I doubt that it's romance, but rather more of a closer companionship forming...
I've been waiting for a while to have this be addressed, actually. After what happened with Not-Caiya, it was sorta inevitable.
Luigi_96
09/08/13
D'aww. :B
Syogren
09/08/13
Blue Kirby the l33t: I SHIP IT.
Alexini0699
09/08/13
Ship all Shipppssss!!!
guestuser
09/08/13
aw... that's cute...
guestuser
09/08/13
And let the shipping begin.
guestuser
09/08/13
Blue Kirby the l33t: SUPPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORT
Jerdude14487
09/08/13
SHIP IT LIKE IT'S FEDEX!
SHIP EET!
Omega Kirby
09/08/13
And it can't have been easy on Caiya, having the one person that understands you, being murdered by Green, I'm sure!
44Cinder44
09/09/13
Jerdude14487: SHIPPED LIKE FEDEX
DarkMario1000
09/14/13
SO THAT MEANS I SHOULD ADD TO IT!!!
Well, I didn't expect this FEEL in this comic page.
guestuser
01/20/14
So touching. Caiya x Kirby FTW!
guestuser
01/20/14
@Kirbylubber: Yes, yes indeed.
guestuser
02/02/14
Dose this means that Caiya likes Kirby
SilverIke
08/04/15
44Cinder44: Caiya + Kirby = Sooo cute
Part 59
Ulti's Notes:
I don't think I ever fully revealed the letter that Kaxo wrote to Raven, but I did write it out in full, and sent it to Gigi. This whole idea was concepted by me, but I did actually ask Gigi first before putting any of it into the comic, and she accepted the idea of Raven getting an interdimensional apology letter from Kaxo.
I wrote out the whole thing with the thought that Gigi would actually have Raven receive the letter on-screen and react to it that way, but Gigi elected to instead have Raven get it off-screen. Raven did eventually bring up the letter during a scene reprimanding Larry, giving him a speech about how much he sucked and comparing him to Kaxo, whom she received an apology from when technically he didn't even do anything to her because of the clone thing.
So while Raven did react to the letter a bit, and quoted a couple smaller parts of it, I don't think the actual full letter ever got shown off. BUT I checked my logs, and guess what, I still have the whole letter saved! So as newly revealed bonus content, here it is:
I wrote out the whole thing with the thought that Gigi would actually have Raven receive the letter on-screen and react to it that way, but Gigi elected to instead have Raven get it off-screen. Raven did eventually bring up the letter during a scene reprimanding Larry, giving him a speech about how much he sucked and comparing him to Kaxo, whom she received an apology from when technically he didn't even do anything to her because of the clone thing.
So while Raven did react to the letter a bit, and quoted a couple smaller parts of it, I don't think the actual full letter ever got shown off. BUT I checked my logs, and guess what, I still have the whole letter saved! So as newly revealed bonus content, here it is:
"To Raven –
Alright, before this begins, I just want to say that I have no real idea what I’m trying to say with this letter. Now that that’s been said… you probably don’t even remember me, at least if this time difference thing is true. I know for a fact that I’ve never even met you. Well, technically, I have. It’s complicated.
However long ago for you that it may be, you might remember that there were some dimensional travelers who accidentally ended up inside your home due to some sort of machine thing. I think that’s what happened. I’m sure you remember this because one of them helped tie you up and cover you in paint, dangling you upside-down with a taped mouth. The one I’m referring to was red-colored with darker red shoes, and was constantly grumpy and liked causing pain. Am I correct in this summary? Well, that Kirby was me.
Before you stop reading out of anger or whatever, you need the full story. See, technically, that Kirby was me. Only technically, though. The part of the story that you don’t know is that before that dimensional excursion, I was ambushed and captured by some random evil guy from Kirby’s past. I was cloned and that clone replaced me for a brief span of time. Said clone was much more brutal and cruel than I am. He’s been taken care of and locked up by now, but during the time that he was replacing me, he got sent to your dimension along with the others.
I’m not asking for your forgiveness or anything, heck, I don’t even know if any of this is really my fault. Even so, I feel like I needed to at least let you know about this, and let you know that I do apologize. While what that clone did wasn’t really my fault, I guess I kinda feel like it was anyway. He had tried to kill you (at least from what I heard) in what I must imagine was an incredibly uncomfortable and unfortunate manner, though my clone probably wasn’t your biggest concern considering according to the story I’ve been told, the one who had the idea to do that to you in the first place was a friend of yours. Whatever. Not even sure what I’m trying to say at this point. Here I am attempting to be all formal and stuff. That’s not really me. But the one you met who claimed to be me, that’s not really me either.
I don’t know if we ever will legitimately meet, though it certainly is possible if you still have that machine or if in my dimension we get our psychic to construct a portal there. If we do ever meet, though, at least I’ll be able to apologize to your face rather than through this.
However long ago for you that it may be, you might remember that there were some dimensional travelers who accidentally ended up inside your home due to some sort of machine thing. I think that’s what happened. I’m sure you remember this because one of them helped tie you up and cover you in paint, dangling you upside-down with a taped mouth. The one I’m referring to was red-colored with darker red shoes, and was constantly grumpy and liked causing pain. Am I correct in this summary? Well, that Kirby was me.
Before you stop reading out of anger or whatever, you need the full story. See, technically, that Kirby was me. Only technically, though. The part of the story that you don’t know is that before that dimensional excursion, I was ambushed and captured by some random evil guy from Kirby’s past. I was cloned and that clone replaced me for a brief span of time. Said clone was much more brutal and cruel than I am. He’s been taken care of and locked up by now, but during the time that he was replacing me, he got sent to your dimension along with the others.
I’m not asking for your forgiveness or anything, heck, I don’t even know if any of this is really my fault. Even so, I feel like I needed to at least let you know about this, and let you know that I do apologize. While what that clone did wasn’t really my fault, I guess I kinda feel like it was anyway. He had tried to kill you (at least from what I heard) in what I must imagine was an incredibly uncomfortable and unfortunate manner, though my clone probably wasn’t your biggest concern considering according to the story I’ve been told, the one who had the idea to do that to you in the first place was a friend of yours. Whatever. Not even sure what I’m trying to say at this point. Here I am attempting to be all formal and stuff. That’s not really me. But the one you met who claimed to be me, that’s not really me either.
I don’t know if we ever will legitimately meet, though it certainly is possible if you still have that machine or if in my dimension we get our psychic to construct a portal there. If we do ever meet, though, at least I’ll be able to apologize to your face rather than through this.
- Kaxo"
Original Author's Comment:
09/08/13
So that's a thing that's happened.
So that's a thing that's happened.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
meta-eggplant
09/09/13
Green Kirby the Leaft:
Like Sapar said last comic, this is just a bond(or, most likely an apology.).
Luigi_96
09/09/13
But now because of stuff happening in 20TK Raven no longer exists or something, so... :T
Sapar
09/09/13
Luigi_96: Meh, she'll probably get it right when they think all the crazy stuff's over.
Although, Ulti, unless she changed her policy and I just missed it, Gigi doesn't actually read comics anymore. So you should probably inform her in some way.
guestuser
09/09/13
HOLYCRAPRAVEN
PurpleChickenPineapple
09/09/13
You should always be prepared for a portal appearing in front of you in this universe.
44Cinder44
09/09/13
Luigi_96: She still exists, she's just evil now.
DarkMario1000
09/14/13
Raven isn't Dana.
09/09/13
Green Kirby the Leaft:
Like Sapar said last comic, this is just a bond(or, most likely an apology.).
Luigi_96
09/09/13
But now because of stuff happening in 20TK Raven no longer exists or something, so... :T
Sapar
09/09/13
Luigi_96: Meh, she'll probably get it right when they think all the crazy stuff's over.
Although, Ulti, unless she changed her policy and I just missed it, Gigi doesn't actually read comics anymore. So you should probably inform her in some way.
guestuser
09/09/13
HOLYCRAPRAVEN
PurpleChickenPineapple
09/09/13
You should always be prepared for a portal appearing in front of you in this universe.
44Cinder44
09/09/13
Luigi_96: She still exists, she's just evil now.
DarkMario1000
09/14/13
Raven isn't Dana.
Part 60
Ulti's Notes:
Chapter 3 is concluded now, and so too is what I've been calling the Dark Age of Kirby Adventure writing. From here on, it gets much better, which is a huge relief to me.
And as if to hammer it home that a new era is dawning, Kirby finally didn't end a segment with a grumpy quip. Instead, he can just relax and look forward to the future with optimism. And as he should, because the next segment to open Chapter 4 is one of my favorites from my memory.
And as if to hammer it home that a new era is dawning, Kirby finally didn't end a segment with a grumpy quip. Instead, he can just relax and look forward to the future with optimism. And as he should, because the next segment to open Chapter 4 is one of my favorites from my memory.
Original Author's Comment:
09/09/13
And with that, the longest segment of KA history that spanned a total of just under six months is now completed! I've got a lot to talk about here, so prepare yourselves for a long author comment.
The idea for Master of Puppets, at its most basic, was conceptualized somewhere between Helping Hand and Tear In The Fabric. The basic idea was that the nine main characters of Kirby Adventure would face off against themselves, and each one would individually defeat the other by exploiting their weaknesses and using that as an advantage. It was conceived as a character-building segment, since the characters would need to learn more about themselves in order to defeat their mirror-image and escape insert-location-here. This was not really what happened in the final product.
Master of Puppets was originally planned to happen after Division Addition, but Gigi's insistence caused Such An Odd Eight to be wedged in between. This actually provided me with an opportunity to tie the two segments together, as originally, there wasn't even going to be a clone who started the whole scenario, the Squad would just suddenly wake up in the realm area thing. With Kaxo's characterization mishaps in the crossover, though, plus the fact that I needed to have something to do after I sent the 20TK characters back, I decided to introduce one of the clones early and have the two segments tie in together.
Not-Kaxo's introduction wasn't exactly executed perfectly, though. As some of you pointed out, the plot twist that Kaxo wasn't actually Kaxo was somewhat rushed and didn't have any build-up. The reason for that is because, well, it WAS kind of rushed. I shoved it in near the end because I needed something to fill up 4 comics at the end of Such An Odd Eight, and Kaxo already had some characterization issues when Gigi used him. That's why in the beginning of Such An Odd Eight, Kaxo pretty much acts normally. I hadn't developed the idea of Not-Kaxo until very late into Such An Odd Eight.
Creating the realms was interesting, because I really had no idea what they were going to look like. Basically, I just made an incredibly blocky undetailed black-gray-and-white area in Photoshop, and added filter unto filter unto filter until I achieved the result that was seen in the comic. In the end, I think the realms worked out okay, though I really wish that I had a better name to call them than simply 'realms' or 'areas'. Heck, their Photoshop names were called 'Puppetmaster Realms', so they really don't have much of a name.
When the time came to actually use the clones idea, though, the original plan of each Kirby fighting against their own clone and utilizing a weakness, that's when that original idea began to falter. While Not-Kirby started off a bit evil-ish, and Not-Caiya sort of followed suit, everyone else after Not-Kaxo's reappearance was hard to get the way I originally intended. The reason being was that trying to make some of them evil, especially Raize or Saia, just would not have worked and kept them in character as well. The clones couldn't act the same way of the original plan because they wouldn't be acting like the character they're a clone of. Thus, I began to change my plans a bit.
Raize and Saia's encounters were where I began to really change things, since the two groups didn't fight (well, technically Raize did, but in a game). Vezo's and Keito's encounters were done alright, but Shat'l's was probably the weirdest.
When it came to using Shat'l, the first thing I needed to do was establish why he didn't forsee Not-Kaxo showing up: his future sight was being blocked, and couldn't see anything with it at the moment. However, since I've previously established that Shat'l is physically weak, I didn't know what to do with him. I gave him that little dreamscape off-screen fight because, for one thing, it would allow him to fight with his clone, but for another, I couldn't really do a color change of the realm like I did with the other encounters. However, the dreamscape provided a new problem: lack of creativity. It was a dreamscape, where literally anything could be possible, but due to struggles to balance out all the other encounters, and a limitation because of sprites, I barely even showed anything in that, so that was a bit of a disappointment.
The original plan for Master of Puppets was always a character-development segment, and while parts of the original idea didn't come through well, the characterization definitely did. Four characters who I feel got some new depth to them were Kaxo (by far), Caiya, Raize, and Kirby. So, let's talk about that, starting from reverse order just because.
Kirby's the one main character I've always had a problem with. Ever since writing The Beginning... back in mid-2011, I started to remove the silly-side from his personality and replace it with a more angry, serious side to him. This was especially evident in Jetting Across The Ice and Tree To Tree, to me. However, as good friend Torkirby pointed out to me, that's not really what any Kirby personality should act like. It's hard to really conceive a completely serious Kirby, so I knew then that I needed to work on him a bit. This was where, unlike with Kaxo's case, the crossover definitely helped his character. The way Gigi wrote my Kirby was honestly a better job than the way I had been writing him in segments prior. While I couldn't exactly have him completely be unserious now that I had given him that character trait, I definitely could tone it down more. Thus, his thinking of Gigi's Kirby at the end of Master of Puppets was used an excuse to get Kirby to act more like, well, how Kirby should act. Originally, I was going to use the excuse that Master Green acted serious but nobody took him seriously, so Kirby had the idea that since he was acting so serious too, he should tone it down before nobody takes him seriously. I'm glad I didn't use it though because it just sounded stupid writing that out.
With Raize, I honestly didn't feel like I did anything new with him, however I had been receiving complaints (looking at you, Jarkers. "Ulti has trouble working with Raize as well, and Raize is his character" indeed.) about how Raize had been used in the comic. Apparently I hadn't been making his personality clear enough, so I tried to do it better during the Battleship scene. Hopefully it worked.
Caiya's little breakdown scene was actually the one good thing I can say that came out of my 10th grade Health class. During one period of Health the day before that comic, the class watched a video about people with multiple personalities, and how some of their lives were. After one scene where a woman had a mental breakdown, all I could think about was Caiya and her split personality disorder thing (I still haven't really settled on what disorder it actually is, since I've said its three different things over the course of Kirby Adventure.) Thus, that comic was born, where Caiya is shown to have an extreme sensitivity to those kinds of condescending comments about her in her dumb side. She felt very vulnerable to me while writing that, and I knew that afterwards I needed to have the reconciliation scenes in the epilogue where Kirby (originally Keito) would reassure her that he doesn't think of her as an spastic idiot just because of an admittedly rather hyperactive personality of hers. Overall, I think that all worked very well.
And now, the doozy. The big one. It's time to talk about Kaxo.
I wish I could say the development I gave to Kaxo during this segment was planned from the very beginning, but in all honesty, it wasn't. I don't exactly remember when I came up with the idea, but it must have been around Jetting Across The Ice or so. The reason I say that is because, in all honesty, Kaxo's characterization in the Kirby's Dream Adventure crossover is almost equally as bad as his characterization in 20 Times Kirby, and yet I never had any qualms about Kaxo back when BSX was writing him, as is evident in my comments back then.
The reason I developed Kaxo's personality with the whole "trying to get them to prove themselves" thing was because I needed Kaxo to not simply be a single-minded bully character. He needed development, otherwise he would simply continue to be a complete jerk and only escalate from there.
The problem with the new personality development, though, was that I couldn't ever find a good place to fit it into. Tree to Tree wouldn't have made sense, since Kaxo was adventuring with Shadik and also hated acknowledging FP, Jetting Across The Ice had him fight against Zykan, Tear In The Fabric had him say 'bwop' and that's about it, and Division Addition didn't feature him. Thus, when the crossover happened, Gigi had no way of knowing Kaxo's underlying development which I had been unable to insert into the comic pages yet.
When Gigi wrote Kaxo as focusing only on bullying, I really only have myself to blame. Yes, the characterization was off, but Gigi really couldn't help that fact. But now that you can see WHY Kaxo does his pushing around of weaker Kirbies, I really hope you can realize why exactly Kaxo wouldn't help Larry tie up Raven as a pinata, cover her with paint, tape her mouth shut, and have the intent of beating her to death with a baseball bat. That line about being upset that Raven wasn't killed was really the nail in the coffin, though. That was clearly not anything Kaxo would do. If that line hadn't been said, I suppose I could've just wrote it off as Kaxo being stressed out or something, but Kaxo would NEVER want to kill another Kirby. Yes, he killed Mirror Kirby's pet in the other crossover, but we have no idea what it looks like. It could've been (and probably was) a giant, evil-looking, monstrous creature that Kaxo perceived as an enemy or a challenge. Raven, though, there's no excuse I could have ever pulled. Thus, that inspired Kaxo's line about how he doesn't kill Kirbies, not even wanting to do so with Talzo.
Working with the background and development was actually really convenient, in a way. A LOT of early stuff such as Kaxo hating Fanhal, Fanhal going to Hali about Kaxo's bullying and getting his promotion, Kaxo and Saia meeting in The True Arena, all of this was entirely coincidental that it worked out so well. I was able to establish that Saia is closer to Kaxo than any of the other Squad members, and gave Kaxo a real reason for hating Fanhal.
Kaxo writing the letter to Raven was an idea that I had mid-Master of Puppets, because it felt like it would be something that Kaxo would do. You can expect to see the arrival of that letter sometime after these crazy time travel shenanigans are done in 20 Times Kirby.
I suppose all that's left to talk about is Master Green, and how that idea came to be.
Originally, the Master of Puppets was some weird OC character called Puppetmaster (hence the title of the segment as well as the earlier sprite sheet name I mentioned, 'Puppetmaster Realms'). The Puppetmaster would basically look a lot like Wiz only slightly thinner and with a feathered cap. At some point, sometime after I used the Jellicents in Saia's encounter, I somehow had Master Green pop into my head. I might have been thinking if any Kirby characters already had 'Master' in their name, and Green showed up first. I tried inserting him in the role, and if I gave him some form of magical control, I honestly saw it working well. The Jellicents would be related to him since they're both jellyfish-like creatures with electrical powers, and Master Green would be a hopeful surprise to the readers. Originally, he would just be dressed in the thin cloak and feathered hat that the original Puppetmaster idea had, but I ended up completely doing away with that idea and just using Master Green in general.
One thing I have to say about the climax of the story, where Not-Kaxo prevents Master Green from escaping, is this: The whole set-up was intended to really showcase the difference between Not-Kaxo and Kaxo. Most likely due to Not-Kaxo's prolonged contact with Master Green, what with him being first and all, Not-Kaxo was a lot more cruel than actual Kaxo was. In my head, I was writing Not-Kaxo the way a lot of readers considered Kaxo: a cruel jerk who only cares about himself. I've seen a lot of comments over time about Kaxo's personality, such as in Tree To Tree ("Wait, KAXO is advocating coordination and teamwork?") and A Different Type Of Comic ("Kaxo wasn't any more violent than ever before. He acted normally, as a matter of a fact, he acted NICER than usual!"). Even in Master of Puppets I got some comments like that ("The more people he kills, the less people left to pick on."). So, I took some of those examples and basically took away from what makes Kaxo act the way he actually does: I took away any sense of compassion or empathy from his clone. This made Not-Kaxo act like a complete jerk, even to Master Green, the one who created him. Thus, the climax I wrote was used to emphasize the difference between what readers thought of Kaxo beforehand (Not-Kaxo) and what Kaxo was actually like (Kaxo). Kaxo does the morally right thing and warns Not-Kaxo and Master Green about the closing portal and the fading world while they're distracted, whereas Not-Kaxo decides to do whatever he wants and prevent Master Green from escaping too. I feel like when I made Kaxo hesitate before warning the pair, he was contemplating doing exactly what Not-Kaxo did (intentionally preventing them from escaping by not saying anything) or doing the right thing. Obviously, he chose the right thing, but the idea was still there. Not-Kaxo simply acted on it, and in the end, he crossed too many lines and is now in prison.
So, yeah. That's Master of Puppets. Funnily enough, despite making a few changes mid-way through, the segment lasted exactly how long I estimated: 60 parts. Right from its very conceptualization, I intended for it to have around 60 parts, and I ended up with exactly that. Go figure.
The big question is, what now? Master of Puppets is done, thus finally completing Chapter 3 of Kirby Adventure. There's a few things that are gonna change now. First off, once the next segment and chapter begin, the archive will be updated to group by Chapter rather than by segment. This will affect the drop-down menu as well, but the segment select buttons on the normal comic pages will still be around to select specific segments. This will simply make Chapter beginning and end more clear for readers, since I've gotten quite a few questions about it, and now that there are going to be 4 chapters to choose from, I feel like that's a good number to make the switch.
As for updates: you may have noticed that I've been updating daily for about a week. However, today was my first day of school, and so I'm going to be a bit too busy with schoolwork and upcoming Let's Plays, so daily updates aren't going to be a thing for now.
However, Kirby Adventure as a whole will be updating less from now on. Instead of around three comics a week that has been going on ever since adopting Gigi's schedule for the crossover, you're gonna get around 1 to 2 comics a week. Why? Well, I'm sure there's gonna be a lot of rejoicing for the reason.
I'm gonna be going back to Yoshi & Kirby again.
I hope to have 2 updates for both Y&K and KA a week, starting this week, and was planning on doing as soon as Master of Puppets, and subsequently Chapter 3, were completed. I'll be continuing Yoshi & Kirby right off from where it's been on technical hiatus since October 2012, and Kirby Adventure will have a bit of a relaxed, calmer segment following, to start off Chapter 4. Hopefully this gets some of you guys to shut up about Y&K updates.
However, if I start to slack off on Yoshi & Kirby now, for once I'll actually encourage those kinds of "you need to update" comments. I don't intend on slacking off, but unless I provide a schoolwork-related reason, then feel free to (politely) make sure to tell me that I should update the comic. This is only after at least one week has passed without an update, though, got it?
Anyways... now that that's all said and done... see you guys next time for the next Kirby Adventure segment.
Actually, one last thing. What did you guys think of this segment? Considering all the flak it got when it first started, I'd like to see overall opinions now that it's finished.
And with that, the longest segment of KA history that spanned a total of just under six months is now completed! I've got a lot to talk about here, so prepare yourselves for a long author comment.
The idea for Master of Puppets, at its most basic, was conceptualized somewhere between Helping Hand and Tear In The Fabric. The basic idea was that the nine main characters of Kirby Adventure would face off against themselves, and each one would individually defeat the other by exploiting their weaknesses and using that as an advantage. It was conceived as a character-building segment, since the characters would need to learn more about themselves in order to defeat their mirror-image and escape insert-location-here. This was not really what happened in the final product.
Master of Puppets was originally planned to happen after Division Addition, but Gigi's insistence caused Such An Odd Eight to be wedged in between. This actually provided me with an opportunity to tie the two segments together, as originally, there wasn't even going to be a clone who started the whole scenario, the Squad would just suddenly wake up in the realm area thing. With Kaxo's characterization mishaps in the crossover, though, plus the fact that I needed to have something to do after I sent the 20TK characters back, I decided to introduce one of the clones early and have the two segments tie in together.
Not-Kaxo's introduction wasn't exactly executed perfectly, though. As some of you pointed out, the plot twist that Kaxo wasn't actually Kaxo was somewhat rushed and didn't have any build-up. The reason for that is because, well, it WAS kind of rushed. I shoved it in near the end because I needed something to fill up 4 comics at the end of Such An Odd Eight, and Kaxo already had some characterization issues when Gigi used him. That's why in the beginning of Such An Odd Eight, Kaxo pretty much acts normally. I hadn't developed the idea of Not-Kaxo until very late into Such An Odd Eight.
Creating the realms was interesting, because I really had no idea what they were going to look like. Basically, I just made an incredibly blocky undetailed black-gray-and-white area in Photoshop, and added filter unto filter unto filter until I achieved the result that was seen in the comic. In the end, I think the realms worked out okay, though I really wish that I had a better name to call them than simply 'realms' or 'areas'. Heck, their Photoshop names were called 'Puppetmaster Realms', so they really don't have much of a name.
When the time came to actually use the clones idea, though, the original plan of each Kirby fighting against their own clone and utilizing a weakness, that's when that original idea began to falter. While Not-Kirby started off a bit evil-ish, and Not-Caiya sort of followed suit, everyone else after Not-Kaxo's reappearance was hard to get the way I originally intended. The reason being was that trying to make some of them evil, especially Raize or Saia, just would not have worked and kept them in character as well. The clones couldn't act the same way of the original plan because they wouldn't be acting like the character they're a clone of. Thus, I began to change my plans a bit.
Raize and Saia's encounters were where I began to really change things, since the two groups didn't fight (well, technically Raize did, but in a game). Vezo's and Keito's encounters were done alright, but Shat'l's was probably the weirdest.
When it came to using Shat'l, the first thing I needed to do was establish why he didn't forsee Not-Kaxo showing up: his future sight was being blocked, and couldn't see anything with it at the moment. However, since I've previously established that Shat'l is physically weak, I didn't know what to do with him. I gave him that little dreamscape off-screen fight because, for one thing, it would allow him to fight with his clone, but for another, I couldn't really do a color change of the realm like I did with the other encounters. However, the dreamscape provided a new problem: lack of creativity. It was a dreamscape, where literally anything could be possible, but due to struggles to balance out all the other encounters, and a limitation because of sprites, I barely even showed anything in that, so that was a bit of a disappointment.
The original plan for Master of Puppets was always a character-development segment, and while parts of the original idea didn't come through well, the characterization definitely did. Four characters who I feel got some new depth to them were Kaxo (by far), Caiya, Raize, and Kirby. So, let's talk about that, starting from reverse order just because.
Kirby's the one main character I've always had a problem with. Ever since writing The Beginning... back in mid-2011, I started to remove the silly-side from his personality and replace it with a more angry, serious side to him. This was especially evident in Jetting Across The Ice and Tree To Tree, to me. However, as good friend Torkirby pointed out to me, that's not really what any Kirby personality should act like. It's hard to really conceive a completely serious Kirby, so I knew then that I needed to work on him a bit. This was where, unlike with Kaxo's case, the crossover definitely helped his character. The way Gigi wrote my Kirby was honestly a better job than the way I had been writing him in segments prior. While I couldn't exactly have him completely be unserious now that I had given him that character trait, I definitely could tone it down more. Thus, his thinking of Gigi's Kirby at the end of Master of Puppets was used an excuse to get Kirby to act more like, well, how Kirby should act. Originally, I was going to use the excuse that Master Green acted serious but nobody took him seriously, so Kirby had the idea that since he was acting so serious too, he should tone it down before nobody takes him seriously. I'm glad I didn't use it though because it just sounded stupid writing that out.
With Raize, I honestly didn't feel like I did anything new with him, however I had been receiving complaints (looking at you, Jarkers. "Ulti has trouble working with Raize as well, and Raize is his character" indeed.) about how Raize had been used in the comic. Apparently I hadn't been making his personality clear enough, so I tried to do it better during the Battleship scene. Hopefully it worked.
Caiya's little breakdown scene was actually the one good thing I can say that came out of my 10th grade Health class. During one period of Health the day before that comic, the class watched a video about people with multiple personalities, and how some of their lives were. After one scene where a woman had a mental breakdown, all I could think about was Caiya and her split personality disorder thing (I still haven't really settled on what disorder it actually is, since I've said its three different things over the course of Kirby Adventure.) Thus, that comic was born, where Caiya is shown to have an extreme sensitivity to those kinds of condescending comments about her in her dumb side. She felt very vulnerable to me while writing that, and I knew that afterwards I needed to have the reconciliation scenes in the epilogue where Kirby (originally Keito) would reassure her that he doesn't think of her as an spastic idiot just because of an admittedly rather hyperactive personality of hers. Overall, I think that all worked very well.
And now, the doozy. The big one. It's time to talk about Kaxo.
I wish I could say the development I gave to Kaxo during this segment was planned from the very beginning, but in all honesty, it wasn't. I don't exactly remember when I came up with the idea, but it must have been around Jetting Across The Ice or so. The reason I say that is because, in all honesty, Kaxo's characterization in the Kirby's Dream Adventure crossover is almost equally as bad as his characterization in 20 Times Kirby, and yet I never had any qualms about Kaxo back when BSX was writing him, as is evident in my comments back then.
The reason I developed Kaxo's personality with the whole "trying to get them to prove themselves" thing was because I needed Kaxo to not simply be a single-minded bully character. He needed development, otherwise he would simply continue to be a complete jerk and only escalate from there.
The problem with the new personality development, though, was that I couldn't ever find a good place to fit it into. Tree to Tree wouldn't have made sense, since Kaxo was adventuring with Shadik and also hated acknowledging FP, Jetting Across The Ice had him fight against Zykan, Tear In The Fabric had him say 'bwop' and that's about it, and Division Addition didn't feature him. Thus, when the crossover happened, Gigi had no way of knowing Kaxo's underlying development which I had been unable to insert into the comic pages yet.
When Gigi wrote Kaxo as focusing only on bullying, I really only have myself to blame. Yes, the characterization was off, but Gigi really couldn't help that fact. But now that you can see WHY Kaxo does his pushing around of weaker Kirbies, I really hope you can realize why exactly Kaxo wouldn't help Larry tie up Raven as a pinata, cover her with paint, tape her mouth shut, and have the intent of beating her to death with a baseball bat. That line about being upset that Raven wasn't killed was really the nail in the coffin, though. That was clearly not anything Kaxo would do. If that line hadn't been said, I suppose I could've just wrote it off as Kaxo being stressed out or something, but Kaxo would NEVER want to kill another Kirby. Yes, he killed Mirror Kirby's pet in the other crossover, but we have no idea what it looks like. It could've been (and probably was) a giant, evil-looking, monstrous creature that Kaxo perceived as an enemy or a challenge. Raven, though, there's no excuse I could have ever pulled. Thus, that inspired Kaxo's line about how he doesn't kill Kirbies, not even wanting to do so with Talzo.
Working with the background and development was actually really convenient, in a way. A LOT of early stuff such as Kaxo hating Fanhal, Fanhal going to Hali about Kaxo's bullying and getting his promotion, Kaxo and Saia meeting in The True Arena, all of this was entirely coincidental that it worked out so well. I was able to establish that Saia is closer to Kaxo than any of the other Squad members, and gave Kaxo a real reason for hating Fanhal.
Kaxo writing the letter to Raven was an idea that I had mid-Master of Puppets, because it felt like it would be something that Kaxo would do. You can expect to see the arrival of that letter sometime after these crazy time travel shenanigans are done in 20 Times Kirby.
I suppose all that's left to talk about is Master Green, and how that idea came to be.
Originally, the Master of Puppets was some weird OC character called Puppetmaster (hence the title of the segment as well as the earlier sprite sheet name I mentioned, 'Puppetmaster Realms'). The Puppetmaster would basically look a lot like Wiz only slightly thinner and with a feathered cap. At some point, sometime after I used the Jellicents in Saia's encounter, I somehow had Master Green pop into my head. I might have been thinking if any Kirby characters already had 'Master' in their name, and Green showed up first. I tried inserting him in the role, and if I gave him some form of magical control, I honestly saw it working well. The Jellicents would be related to him since they're both jellyfish-like creatures with electrical powers, and Master Green would be a hopeful surprise to the readers. Originally, he would just be dressed in the thin cloak and feathered hat that the original Puppetmaster idea had, but I ended up completely doing away with that idea and just using Master Green in general.
One thing I have to say about the climax of the story, where Not-Kaxo prevents Master Green from escaping, is this: The whole set-up was intended to really showcase the difference between Not-Kaxo and Kaxo. Most likely due to Not-Kaxo's prolonged contact with Master Green, what with him being first and all, Not-Kaxo was a lot more cruel than actual Kaxo was. In my head, I was writing Not-Kaxo the way a lot of readers considered Kaxo: a cruel jerk who only cares about himself. I've seen a lot of comments over time about Kaxo's personality, such as in Tree To Tree ("Wait, KAXO is advocating coordination and teamwork?") and A Different Type Of Comic ("Kaxo wasn't any more violent than ever before. He acted normally, as a matter of a fact, he acted NICER than usual!"). Even in Master of Puppets I got some comments like that ("The more people he kills, the less people left to pick on."). So, I took some of those examples and basically took away from what makes Kaxo act the way he actually does: I took away any sense of compassion or empathy from his clone. This made Not-Kaxo act like a complete jerk, even to Master Green, the one who created him. Thus, the climax I wrote was used to emphasize the difference between what readers thought of Kaxo beforehand (Not-Kaxo) and what Kaxo was actually like (Kaxo). Kaxo does the morally right thing and warns Not-Kaxo and Master Green about the closing portal and the fading world while they're distracted, whereas Not-Kaxo decides to do whatever he wants and prevent Master Green from escaping too. I feel like when I made Kaxo hesitate before warning the pair, he was contemplating doing exactly what Not-Kaxo did (intentionally preventing them from escaping by not saying anything) or doing the right thing. Obviously, he chose the right thing, but the idea was still there. Not-Kaxo simply acted on it, and in the end, he crossed too many lines and is now in prison.
So, yeah. That's Master of Puppets. Funnily enough, despite making a few changes mid-way through, the segment lasted exactly how long I estimated: 60 parts. Right from its very conceptualization, I intended for it to have around 60 parts, and I ended up with exactly that. Go figure.
The big question is, what now? Master of Puppets is done, thus finally completing Chapter 3 of Kirby Adventure. There's a few things that are gonna change now. First off, once the next segment and chapter begin, the archive will be updated to group by Chapter rather than by segment. This will affect the drop-down menu as well, but the segment select buttons on the normal comic pages will still be around to select specific segments. This will simply make Chapter beginning and end more clear for readers, since I've gotten quite a few questions about it, and now that there are going to be 4 chapters to choose from, I feel like that's a good number to make the switch.
As for updates: you may have noticed that I've been updating daily for about a week. However, today was my first day of school, and so I'm going to be a bit too busy with schoolwork and upcoming Let's Plays, so daily updates aren't going to be a thing for now.
However, Kirby Adventure as a whole will be updating less from now on. Instead of around three comics a week that has been going on ever since adopting Gigi's schedule for the crossover, you're gonna get around 1 to 2 comics a week. Why? Well, I'm sure there's gonna be a lot of rejoicing for the reason.
I'm gonna be going back to Yoshi & Kirby again.
I hope to have 2 updates for both Y&K and KA a week, starting this week, and was planning on doing as soon as Master of Puppets, and subsequently Chapter 3, were completed. I'll be continuing Yoshi & Kirby right off from where it's been on technical hiatus since October 2012, and Kirby Adventure will have a bit of a relaxed, calmer segment following, to start off Chapter 4. Hopefully this gets some of you guys to shut up about Y&K updates.
However, if I start to slack off on Yoshi & Kirby now, for once I'll actually encourage those kinds of "you need to update" comments. I don't intend on slacking off, but unless I provide a schoolwork-related reason, then feel free to (politely) make sure to tell me that I should update the comic. This is only after at least one week has passed without an update, though, got it?
Anyways... now that that's all said and done... see you guys next time for the next Kirby Adventure segment.
Actually, one last thing. What did you guys think of this segment? Considering all the flak it got when it first started, I'd like to see overall opinions now that it's finished.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
Super Froakie 64 DS
09/10/13
It was a good segment. Also, I can't wait until chapter 4 starts.
BattleStarX
09/10/13
Very, very good character development, UY, that's what I thought of this. And since Sprite Comics lack a lot in the artistic end (if you listen to some,) character development is what it needs to fuel the comic.
And it showed me how I did things wrong with certain characters while I was holding on to them for the KDA/KA crossover. And when I make it up to them for their remakes, they are changes I intend to fix now.
Not to mention I also have a certain *something* now for the end of my current dual-segment.
Very well done, UY, very well done indeed.
MecanicalCH
09/10/13
*from reading author text-wall he has grown a mustache and a beard...and it turned white...*
meta-eggplant
09/10/13
Yay! Yoshi and Kirby is finally updating again! :D
Sapar
09/10/13
I mean a WHOLE lot. When I was surfing the web one day, I found this comic. Master of Puppets part 1, to be exact. I read through the archives in a day, and hung around to see the updates. Eventually, I worked up the courage to make an account and actually post something here.
You see what I'm getting at? This comic, this SEGMENT, is the whole reason I'm on SmackJeeves in the first place. Obviously that means something is good about this segment, and your writing in general, or I would have lost interest halfway through Chapter 1 and passed up a chance to get in on all of this shebang.
So yeah, I think this was a great segment. In fact, I think this was an amazing segment, definitely worth waiting six months for the end. Keep it up, Ulti.
And congrats for finally finding time for Yoshi & Kirby. Trust me, you won't regret it.
Luigi_96
09/10/13
" I'm gonna be going back to Yoshi & Kirby again."
And with those words, there was dancing in the streets. YESSSSS! :D
As for the segment, I liked it, but I'm not the type to notice flaws in anything except my own stuff and stuff that's really bad.
DarkNut255
09/10/13
I personally enjoyed this segment, and all the development.
Kirby did feel like a too serious stick in the mud at times, especially in Tree to Tree (although I probably noticed it more than Jetting Across the Ice since Kiblar was my cameo), and it's good that he's changing.
Raize didn't get too many lines, so I never really knew his personality much, and I do really like it.
Caiya might be my favorite, mostly because she rarely acknowleged the personality thing.
Kaxo worked well, yet I never really noticed his jerkiness in 20 Times Kirby, mostly because I was shocked that Larry would be that harsh.
Green was a character I never expected (mostly because I never played Kirby's Dream Land 2, I dunno why, I have Dream Collection, and it's on there), but I enjoyed it, and his character.
I definitely saw Not-Kaxo as being far more of a jerk than Not-Not-Kaxo (or just Kaxo), and again, I liked that.
Overall, this might be my favorite segment, even better than Escape! or Meet the KAS.
Oh, and I'm REALLY exited for Yoshi & Kirby. REALLY REALLY exited.
Sapar
09/10/13
Jarkes: Actually, I technically HAVEN'T been around that long. I didn't actually make my existence known until the 21st comic or so.
Ultimate Yoshi
09/10/13
Jarkes: That line was moreso to semi-explain the oddity of that incident and how it sort of fits into his character now. But I was thinking of you when I put it in, as evidence by my author comment on that page.
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: Without this chapter, you wouldnt exist. i only existed because of marios day job
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: Yahrlly
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: *hugs* thank you UY
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: *hugs*
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: i existed since 2010. i have seen kirby strike force, the lost kirby comic
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: Lost? You mean it's... DEAD? *n*
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: yeah
but it was AWESOME
heck my friend, Yoshi700, made an over 100 page hand drawn tribute to it and
HE NEVER POSTED THEM ONLINE
i am one of the two who read it.
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: So kruel *n*
IT WAS SO YUNG ;n;
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: ikr.
I remember one of the comments i made...
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: Do tell
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: it went something like this:
"LAWLAWLAWLROFLMAOLOL
Apology!
Apology declined!
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL"
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: BRILLIANT
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: yes, i had quite the vocabulary
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: UV KORSE
guestuser
09/10/13
...you still need to update the Mokees.
Also, I began to notice Kirby's grouchiness during the Ignus fight (and that he did not apologize after Talzo and his crew retreated.)
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: are you my swiss stepbrother?
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: Nah, I am a fetus.
Tygah
09/10/13
Finally caught up on this!
Remember me, Ulty, A long time fan? :D
Well this was an interesting segment. I really did enjoy it a lot! Can't wait for the next segment, good sir!
Omega Kirby
09/10/13
WHAT ABOUT THE MOKEES!?!?! WHAT ABOUT THEM!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?
Everyone, post I'm a mokee if you want the mokees back!!!
Omega Kirby
09/10/13
I'm a mokee
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: *puts in water filled jar*
there now you can grow
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000:*becomes flower*
I'm a Sugarman, but I'd marry a Mokee O.o
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: can i be the wedding planner!?
Sapar
09/11/13
kirby knight 1000: Why would I plan anything? *spontaneous marriage*
guestuser
09/11/13
I'm a mokee!
Super Froakie 64 DS
09/12/13
I'm a mokee!
TaterOfTheTot: Maybe they draw exactly like UY? Nah, they stole it.
SkyraTwilight812
09/12/13
I've been reading this comic since somewhere around A Tear in the Fabric, and I have to say that this is my favorite part yet. the character development in Caiya and Kaxo was very well done, and it's nice to see Raize get some more personality to him. I never really understood Caiya's serious side that well, or how she felt about her other personality. I might be wrong, but it doesn't seem like her intelligent side has appeared much. I hope it shows up more often. Though I still won't be able to take her childish side seriously. It was interesting to see Kaxo's true personality, and hear his reasons for being like he is. I never really saw him as a jerk as much as a powerful fighter who sometimes got a little carried away. That would explain why the kirbies he's defeated are still alive.
As for you restarting Yoshi & Kirby, I'll have to check it out soon, as I never really read it.
And as a random note, I can't believe no one mentioned the song "Brother my Brother" during this segment. It fits the whole thing so well! Well, kind of.
DarkMario1000
09/14/13
Too bad I'm not going to make such a long one.
But at least it explains more how Master of Puppets and its pages came to be.
I enjoyed this last segment of this chapter though…to at least answer the question. =p
Nekotive
05/27/14
09/10/13
It was a good segment. Also, I can't wait until chapter 4 starts.
BattleStarX
09/10/13
Very, very good character development, UY, that's what I thought of this. And since Sprite Comics lack a lot in the artistic end (if you listen to some,) character development is what it needs to fuel the comic.
And it showed me how I did things wrong with certain characters while I was holding on to them for the KDA/KA crossover. And when I make it up to them for their remakes, they are changes I intend to fix now.
Not to mention I also have a certain *something* now for the end of my current dual-segment.
Very well done, UY, very well done indeed.
MecanicalCH
09/10/13
*from reading author text-wall he has grown a mustache and a beard...and it turned white...*
meta-eggplant
09/10/13
Yay! Yoshi and Kirby is finally updating again! :D
Sapar
09/10/13
I mean a WHOLE lot. When I was surfing the web one day, I found this comic. Master of Puppets part 1, to be exact. I read through the archives in a day, and hung around to see the updates. Eventually, I worked up the courage to make an account and actually post something here.
You see what I'm getting at? This comic, this SEGMENT, is the whole reason I'm on SmackJeeves in the first place. Obviously that means something is good about this segment, and your writing in general, or I would have lost interest halfway through Chapter 1 and passed up a chance to get in on all of this shebang.
So yeah, I think this was a great segment. In fact, I think this was an amazing segment, definitely worth waiting six months for the end. Keep it up, Ulti.
And congrats for finally finding time for Yoshi & Kirby. Trust me, you won't regret it.
Luigi_96
09/10/13
" I'm gonna be going back to Yoshi & Kirby again."
And with those words, there was dancing in the streets. YESSSSS! :D
As for the segment, I liked it, but I'm not the type to notice flaws in anything except my own stuff and stuff that's really bad.
DarkNut255
09/10/13
I personally enjoyed this segment, and all the development.
Kirby did feel like a too serious stick in the mud at times, especially in Tree to Tree (although I probably noticed it more than Jetting Across the Ice since Kiblar was my cameo), and it's good that he's changing.
Raize didn't get too many lines, so I never really knew his personality much, and I do really like it.
Caiya might be my favorite, mostly because she rarely acknowleged the personality thing.
Kaxo worked well, yet I never really noticed his jerkiness in 20 Times Kirby, mostly because I was shocked that Larry would be that harsh.
Green was a character I never expected (mostly because I never played Kirby's Dream Land 2, I dunno why, I have Dream Collection, and it's on there), but I enjoyed it, and his character.
I definitely saw Not-Kaxo as being far more of a jerk than Not-Not-Kaxo (or just Kaxo), and again, I liked that.
Overall, this might be my favorite segment, even better than Escape! or Meet the KAS.
Oh, and I'm REALLY exited for Yoshi & Kirby. REALLY REALLY exited.
Sapar
09/10/13
Jarkes: Actually, I technically HAVEN'T been around that long. I didn't actually make my existence known until the 21st comic or so.
Ultimate Yoshi
09/10/13
Jarkes: That line was moreso to semi-explain the oddity of that incident and how it sort of fits into his character now. But I was thinking of you when I put it in, as evidence by my author comment on that page.
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: Without this chapter, you wouldnt exist. i only existed because of marios day job
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: Yahrlly
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: *hugs* thank you UY
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: *hugs*
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: i existed since 2010. i have seen kirby strike force, the lost kirby comic
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: Lost? You mean it's... DEAD? *n*
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: yeah
but it was AWESOME
heck my friend, Yoshi700, made an over 100 page hand drawn tribute to it and
HE NEVER POSTED THEM ONLINE
i am one of the two who read it.
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: So kruel *n*
IT WAS SO YUNG ;n;
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: ikr.
I remember one of the comments i made...
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: Do tell
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: it went something like this:
"LAWLAWLAWLROFLMAOLOL
Apology!
Apology declined!
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL"
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: BRILLIANT
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: yes, i had quite the vocabulary
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: UV KORSE
guestuser
09/10/13
...you still need to update the Mokees.
Also, I began to notice Kirby's grouchiness during the Ignus fight (and that he did not apologize after Talzo and his crew retreated.)
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: are you my swiss stepbrother?
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000: Nah, I am a fetus.
Tygah
09/10/13
Finally caught up on this!
Remember me, Ulty, A long time fan? :D
Well this was an interesting segment. I really did enjoy it a lot! Can't wait for the next segment, good sir!
Omega Kirby
09/10/13
WHAT ABOUT THE MOKEES!?!?! WHAT ABOUT THEM!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?
Everyone, post I'm a mokee if you want the mokees back!!!
Omega Kirby
09/10/13
I'm a mokee
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: *puts in water filled jar*
there now you can grow
Sapar
09/10/13
kirby knight 1000:*becomes flower*
I'm a Sugarman, but I'd marry a Mokee O.o
kirby knight 1000
09/10/13
Sapar: can i be the wedding planner!?
Sapar
09/11/13
kirby knight 1000: Why would I plan anything? *spontaneous marriage*
guestuser
09/11/13
I'm a mokee!
Super Froakie 64 DS
09/12/13
I'm a mokee!
TaterOfTheTot: Maybe they draw exactly like UY? Nah, they stole it.
SkyraTwilight812
09/12/13
I've been reading this comic since somewhere around A Tear in the Fabric, and I have to say that this is my favorite part yet. the character development in Caiya and Kaxo was very well done, and it's nice to see Raize get some more personality to him. I never really understood Caiya's serious side that well, or how she felt about her other personality. I might be wrong, but it doesn't seem like her intelligent side has appeared much. I hope it shows up more often. Though I still won't be able to take her childish side seriously. It was interesting to see Kaxo's true personality, and hear his reasons for being like he is. I never really saw him as a jerk as much as a powerful fighter who sometimes got a little carried away. That would explain why the kirbies he's defeated are still alive.
As for you restarting Yoshi & Kirby, I'll have to check it out soon, as I never really read it.
And as a random note, I can't believe no one mentioned the song "Brother my Brother" during this segment. It fits the whole thing so well! Well, kind of.
DarkMario1000
09/14/13
Too bad I'm not going to make such a long one.
But at least it explains more how Master of Puppets and its pages came to be.
I enjoyed this last segment of this chapter though…to at least answer the question. =p
Nekotive
05/27/14
Ulti's Notes:
Original Author's Comment:
And thus begins the new segment. It's very pink so far.
Smack Jeeves Comments Section:
03/23/13
It's not pink. It's light-ish red.
Luigi_96
03/23/13
BattleStarX: That's what pink IS... or was that the point? *facepalm*
DarkMario1000
03/23/13
So, he is this puppeteer? Hmmmmmmmm…
DarkNut255
03/24/13
It's not just pink, it's carnation pink!
…With a small hint of lavender and magenta.
GummyBears101
03/24/13
...What.
BlackHeart the Unbelievable
03/24/13
@People saying pink or light red: To me, it's a bit bright light purple.
Jerdude14487
03/24/13
I love it went from a discussion of what's happening to what the color pink is.
Fighter Dee
03/24/13
OH NO! ANOTHER KIRBY NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO0OOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OOOOOOO...
*has a heart attack.
guestuser
03/24/13
to everyone who didn't catch it the lightish red comment was most likely a red vs blue reference
MecanicalCH
03/24/13
someone keeps making Kirby Clones!
guestuser
03/25/13
AT THIS RATE, KMA WILL MAKE A COMEBACK! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *blacks out*
plasma_knight303
03/25/13
Two words.
Copy. Robot.
Koopa1018
03/26/13
WOW. Just...wow. What filter(s) did you use for the background? (If any?)
Extremmefan
07/27/14
plasma_knight303: Copy Robot? From the first Megaman game?
How did you get the reference? (also, Project X Zone's portalstone's impostor creation: "fake people for a fake world, huh?" - T-elos, in Project X Zone's final chapter, The Winged Wanderers)
plasma_knight303
07/30/14
BattleStarX: Donut, I know you're trying to protect your masculinity here, but can you please just accept the fact that your armor's pink?!
Yoskichu
03/05/17
This is my favourite area, cause it's original!